Daniel Chen

Deqing No.3 High School

Title:

To ________ her father

My Father’s Hands

Purpose:

Father’s hands were_______ thread a needle sew on a button trim nails tie sashes play the guitar make a meal……

Para 2

His hands were _____ and _____. tenderly and untiringly cared for his children accompanied his wife when she was ill looked after the author when she was ill

They seemed to speak and understand. They had the strength to move mountains. They made the impossible possible .

Father’s hands

capable

warm

His hands conveyed a message.

father’s love for a daughter

powerful

(Para 6-8)where daughter father

in his lap

in hospital

room

• study the shape• trace lines• feel spots

• hold his hands• feel crevice • lift and place • kiss brown spots

• reach up to feel• wipe away

Love and to be loved

Father’s hands were the most lovable and beautiful in her eyes.

Cinquain (五行诗 )

---one word

---two adjs

---three verbs with –ing

---four words

---one word

Brother

Beautiful, athletic

Teasing, shouting, laughing

Friend and enemy too

Mine

Father

Capable, considerate

Caring, untiring, loving

Friend and provider too

Mine

Introduce a person who cares for you most in your life. hands?

back?

eyes?

hair?

or …?

Assignment

Write about a person who cares for you most in your life.