Tendai

Jules didn't like this quote so lets say something like "There is nothing as rewarding as making our clients the centre of the Googleverse."

Tendai

Here we should just say, "R.O.I. Media's Paid Search Advertising department has become on of South Africa's top contending specialists.

Tendai

Hi Kaya, this should change to be "We are 1 in 6 companies in South Africa, and 1 out of 2 in Cape Town, recommended by Google to clients for Paid Search Advertising.

Tendai

lets swtich this quote to say, "Just like how the earth uses less than a fraction of the sun's energy to thrive, we used a budget of R3,400 to achieve an Advertising Value Equivalent (A.V.E.) of R100,000 for one of our clients"

Tendai

Lets change the ending to say, "As our services continue to revolve around your brand, we will commit ourselves to turning your planet of investments into a galaxy of returns."