Sonnet Text Work By Larry Gleason. Sonnet XXIX -- 29 When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes, I...

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Sonnet Text Work

By Larry Gleason

Sonnet XXIX -- 29

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,And look upon myself and curse my fate,Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy contented least;Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,Haply I think on thee, and then my state,(Like to the lark at break of day arisingFrom sullen earth) sings hymns at heaven's gate; For thy sweet love rememb’red such wealth brings That then I scorn to change my state with kings.

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men's eyes,

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Quatrains and Couplet

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Are they in perfect form or against form? Note where they are against form.

Quatrains for Sonnet 29

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,And look upon myself and curse my fate,

Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy contented least;

Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,Haply I think on thee, and then my state,(Like to the lark at break of day arisingFrom sullen earth) sings hymns at heaven's gate;

For thy sweet love rememb’red such wealth bringsThat then I scorn to change my state with kings.

Couplet

Sentences

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Sentences for Sonnet 29

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes, I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries, And look upon myself and curse my fate,

Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,

Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy contented least;

sentence

Enjambments for Sonnet 29

Cou-plet

Scanning

• How does it scan?

• Force it into ˘ ˉ ˘ ˉ ˘ ˉ ˘ ˉ ˘ ˉ (short, long, short, long, etc,)

• Is the scan regular (easy to force)? To help it stay regular, can any words elide?

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Scanning for Sonnet 29

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,*And look upon myself and curse my fate,

*a troublesome line that may defy consensus

Elision

Trochee

Feminine ending

Trochee

Feminine ending

No Elision

A Troubling Scan:

• A bastard scan.

• Choosing to force the scan so that deaf is long stressed?And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless

cries.

• The easiest rhythm: -double long stress trouble -elide heaven to heav’n-double short stress with my:

And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries.

Rhyme Scheme

• What is the rhyme scheme?

• Are there visual rhymes as well as aural rhymes?

Couplet

Rhyme Scheme for Sonnet 29

Q1ABAB

Q2CDCD

Q3EFEF

CoupletGG

Repeated Words

• What words are repeated? • Why they have been repeated?

• Make sure you include variants and root forms.

• When you finish you are likely to have found your----

Theme(s)

THEME• Subject

• Meditation• Topic• Idea• Motif

• Subject Matter• Argument• Premise• Thesis

• Sonnet Tie

Finding our ThemeImportant Repeated Words for Sonnet 29

Couplet

These repeat too, but so what?

Antithesis (Compare/Contrasts)

• What words, phrases or images are put into compare/contrasts or Antithesis?

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Antithesis (Compare/Contrast) in Sonnet 29

Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy / contented least;

Compare/ Contrast:

Antithesis:

Antithesis: (Brighting day/gloomy night)

Couplet

Definitions

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Words to look up for Sonnet 29

Beginnings, Middles and Ends

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BProposal or set up

debate

conclusion

Beginnings Middles Ends for Sonnet 29

Relationships

• Who is the Speaker?• Who is the Speaker speaking to?• What is the Relationship?• What’s right in the Relationship? • What’s wrong in the Relationship?• What does the Speaker hope to

accomplish? What does the Speaker need to change?

I to my love, who seems not to be here. I need to move myself to a different psychological plain (social plain to natural or

elemental plain.)

•What is the time frame?

Time: A time of disgrace in the past, present and unforeseeable future, until I dream myself into a

different past to create a different present and perhaps a different future.

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,And look upon myself and curse my fate,Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy contented least;Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,Haply I think on thee, and then my state,(Like to the lark at break of day arisingFrom sullen earth) sings hymns at heaven's gate;

Parentheticals

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and still make sense of the idea at hand?

Parenthetical ideas provided by Shakespeare and by my own marking.

When (in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes),I (all alone) beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven (with my bootless cries),And look upon myself and curse my fate,Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,(Featured like him, like him with friends possessed),(Desiring this man's art and that man's scope) ,With what I most enjoy contented least;Yet in these thoughts (myself almost despising),Haply I think on thee, and then my state,(Like to the lark at break of day arisingFrom sullen earth) sings hymns at heaven's gate;

Major Tonal Shift

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Major Tonal Shift for Sonnet 29

Q3 Major Tonal Shift

Couplet

Imagery

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• Are there lists of images? Are they cumulative—pieces that build to a bigger, more substantive whole? Are they in opposition to each other creating an internal debate?

Images for Sonnet 29

Senses within –eyes, ears, mouth: Q1, Senses looking out: Q2

State- outcast state AND state of acceptance

Heaven and earth: freedom/bird/flight, dawn of new day music, love, wealth

Punning

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Punning in Sonnet 29

Literary Devices

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• Are there internal vowel sounds in close proximity to each other repeated (Assonance)?

• Are there consonant sounds in close proximity to each other repeated (Alliteration)?

• Are there words that are, through imitation of their sound, rhetorically effective? (Onomatopoeia)?

Literary Devices in Sonnet 29

Verb List 1

Verb List 2

Assonance-nothing remarkable here

Alliteration 1 (l, k)

Alliteration 2 (s,h)

Onomatopoeia-nothing remarkable

Syntax

• Is there Old English, Elizabethan or difficult syntax? Mark it.

Difficult Syntax in Sonnet 29

Old English:

Beweep

Bootless

Rememb’red

Caesura: sĭ-zhoo’-rahWhere can we use caesuras to help us phrase things better?

Mark your caesuras. A caesura is:

• A pause in a line of verse dictated by sense or natural speech rhythm rather than by punctuation alone.

• In Latin and Greek prosody, a break in a line caused by the ending of a word within a foot, especially when this coincides with a sense division.

• Music A pause or breathing at a point of rhythmic division in a melody.

Caesuras in Sonnet 29

When //in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,I all alone beweep my outcast stateAnd trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,And look upon myself //and curse my fate,

Wishing me like to one //more rich in hope,Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,Desiring this man's art //and that man's scope,With what I most enjoy //contented least;

Yet in these thoughts //myself almost despising,Haply I think on thee, and then my state,(Like to the lark //at break of day arisingFrom sullen earth) //sings hymns at heaven's gate;

For thy sweet love rememb’red //such wealth bringsThat then I scorn to change my state //with kings.

// marks suggested caesuras,

entered only where punctuation does not already exist

The Moment Before/The Moment After

• Once the sonnet has been thoroughly examined, what is the moment before (30 seconds or less prior to the first spoken word)?

• What happens after the sonnet is through (immediately after the last word)?

Making Sonnet 29 actable

• Create an event that spurs the first line: i. e., the prison doors just slammed.

• Create an event that lingers after: i.e., I curl up in a fetal position and sleep.

Your Sonnet

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Sonnet Text Work

By Larry Gleason

(This is my moment after.

Consider yourself released.)

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