Crowdfunding Campaign Write-

Up AnalysisBy:Kim Russell Comenta

Desirable Write-Up Campaigns

Upon examining their content, they have lesser paragraph and sentence. But they have more pictures and videos.

Most of what they have in their kickstarter page are photos of their company. They only have few words and I think viewers are more entertained while learning about their project.

Undesirable Write-Up

Crowdfunding Campaigns

The owner is asking to drink red bull in every state and post in social

media. It was not indicated very well why

they need to do this. Content wasn’t very

detailed.

Content didn’t connect to

audience why they need to fund their

project.

Topic Resourcehttps://www.kickstarter.com/projects/getpebble/pebble-time-awesome-smartwatch-no-compromises?ref=most_funded

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ryangrepper/coolest-cooler-21st-century-cooler-thats-actually

https://www.digitaltrends.com/cool-tech/worst-kickstarter-projects/

Image Resourcehttps://jncahill.wordpress.com/2013/05/15/writing-dos-and-donts-first-person-pov/http://www.nixx-media.com/our-strategy/social-media-campaign-creation/http://www.starkinsider.com/2015/07/pebble-time-smartwatch-review.htmlhttps://leanarch.eu/2014/04/26/the-dutch-government-massively-failed-it-projects-openly-discussed/