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1. Do you have any hobbies?1. Do you have any hobbies?

A) Yes. I have many interests, like A) Yes. I have many interests, like drawing and singing.drawing and singing.

B) No. My parents think studying is B) No. My parents think studying is the only thing that is important.the only thing that is important.

1. Do you have any hobbies?1. Do you have any hobbies?

A) Yes. I have many interests, like A) Yes. I have many interests, like drawing and singing.drawing and singing.

B) No. My parents think studying is B) No. My parents think studying is the only thing that is important.the only thing that is important.

2. Do you know your neighbors well?2. Do you know your neighbors well?

A) Yes. We often have a chat.A) Yes. We often have a chat.

B) No. We’re too busy to get to know B) No. We’re too busy to get to know each other.each other.

2. Do you know your neighbors well?2. Do you know your neighbors well?

A) Yes. We often have a chat.A) Yes. We often have a chat.

B) No. We’re too busy to get to know B) No. We’re too busy to get to know each other.each other.

Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?

3. Do you like your school?3. Do you like your school?

A) Yes. I have many friends and I like A) Yes. I have many friends and I like learning.learning.

B) No. My teachers are strict and B) No. My teachers are strict and some subjects are too difficult.some subjects are too difficult.

3. Do you like your school?3. Do you like your school?

A) Yes. I have many friends and I like A) Yes. I have many friends and I like learning.learning.

B) No. My teachers are strict and B) No. My teachers are strict and some subjects are too difficult.some subjects are too difficult.

4. Do you feel close to your family?4. Do you feel close to your family?

A) Yes. My parents understand me A) Yes. My parents understand me well.well.

B) No. My parents are too busy to talk B) No. My parents are too busy to talk with me.with me.

4. Do you feel close to your family?4. Do you feel close to your family?

A) Yes. My parents understand me A) Yes. My parents understand me well.well.

B) No. My parents are too busy to talk B) No. My parents are too busy to talk with me.with me.

Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?

5. Do you think you are healthy?5. Do you think you are healthy?

A) Yes. I’m strong.A) Yes. I’m strong.

B) No. I often get sick.B) No. I often get sick.

5. Do you think you are healthy?5. Do you think you are healthy?

A) Yes. I’m strong.A) Yes. I’m strong.

B) No. I often get sick.B) No. I often get sick.

6. Do you have friends you can depend 6. Do you have friends you can depend on?on?

A) Yes. I have some true friends.A) Yes. I have some true friends.

B) No. I have no one to share my B) No. I have no one to share my secrets.secrets.

6. Do you have friends you can depend 6. Do you have friends you can depend on?on?

A) Yes. I have some true friends.A) Yes. I have some true friends.

B) No. I have no one to share my B) No. I have no one to share my secrets.secrets.

7. Do you often help others?7. Do you often help others?

A) Yes. I’m happy to lend a hand.A) Yes. I’m happy to lend a hand.

B) No. I often mess things up and B) No. I often mess things up and need help.need help.

7. Do you often help others?7. Do you often help others?

A) Yes. I’m happy to lend a hand.A) Yes. I’m happy to lend a hand.

B) No. I often mess things up and B) No. I often mess things up and need help.need help.

Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?

You are smart but unhappy. You don’t talk much because you think nobody understands you.

You are an happy child. People like you because you always wear a big smile. You have lots of friends.

Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?

You always think twice before making a decision. It makes you feel unhappy sometimes.

Hi, I’m Hi, I’m Kathy, a junior Kathy, a junior studentstudent

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

At school, I At school, I

have eight have eight

lessons lessons

every day. every day.

I have so I have so

many many

subjects to subjects to

learn.learn.

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

This is my This is my school life.school life.

I’m always I’m always busy.busy.

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

After school, I

After school, I have much have much homework to do.

homework to do.I almost have no

I almost have no time to do time to do something else.

something else.

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

At weekends, I At weekends, I am asked to am asked to finish my finish my homework first.homework first.

I still spend I still spend much time much time watching TV.watching TV.

I can get I can get something that I something that I can’t learn in can’t learn in class.class.

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

Among them, I Among them, I like the P.E. like the P.E. lesson best.lesson best.

I can be I can be relaxed in P.E. relaxed in P.E. lessons.lessons.

What do you do every day?What do you do every day?

At school, I At school, I have eight have eight lessons lessons every day. every day.

I have so I have so many many subjects to subjects to learn.learn.

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At school, I have eight lessons At school, I have eight lessons every day every day andand so many subjects so many subjects to learn.to learn.

andand

I’m studying .I’m studying .

I’m always busy.I’m always busy.

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I’I’mm always always busy withbusy with my my study.study.

be busy with

After school, I have After school, I have much homework to much homework to do.do.

I almost have no I almost have no time to do time to do something else.something else.

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After school, I have After school, I have soso much much homework to do homework to do thatthat I almost have I almost have no time to do something else.no time to do something else.

so…that…

At weekends, I am At weekends, I am often asked to finish often asked to finish my homework first.my homework first.

I still spend much I still spend much time watching TV.time watching TV.

I can get something I can get something that I can’t learn in that I can’t learn in class.class.

Combine the sentences Combine the sentences into oneinto one

At weekends, At weekends, althoughalthough I am often asked to I am often asked to finish my homework first, I still spend much finish my homework first, I still spend much time watching TV time watching TV becausebecause I can get I can get something that I can’t learn in class.something that I can’t learn in class.

althoughbecause

Among them, I Among them, I like the P.E. like the P.E. lesson best.lesson best.

I can be relaxed I can be relaxed in the P.E. in the P.E. lesson.lesson.

Combine the sentences Combine the sentences into oneinto one

Among them, I like the P.E. lesson Among them, I like the P.E. lesson best best so thatso that I can be relaxed in I can be relaxed in itit..

so that

What do you do every What do you do every day?day?

a) At school, I have eight lessons every day a) At school, I have eight lessons every day and so many subjects to learn.and so many subjects to learn.a) At school, I have eight lessons every day a) At school, I have eight lessons every day and so many subjects to learn.and so many subjects to learn.

b) I’m always busy with my study.b) I’m always busy with my study.b) I’m always busy with my study.b) I’m always busy with my study.

d) At weekends, Although I am often asked d) At weekends, Although I am often asked to finish my homework first, I still spend to finish my homework first, I still spend much time watching TV. Because I can get much time watching TV. Because I can get something that I can’t learn in class.something that I can’t learn in class.

d) At weekends, Although I am often asked d) At weekends, Although I am often asked to finish my homework first, I still spend to finish my homework first, I still spend much time watching TV. Because I can get much time watching TV. Because I can get something that I can’t learn in class.something that I can’t learn in class.

c) After school, I have so much homework to c) After school, I have so much homework to do that I almost have no time to do do that I almost have no time to do something else.something else.

c) After school, I have so much homework to c) After school, I have so much homework to do that I almost have no time to do do that I almost have no time to do something else.something else.

e) Among them, I like the P.E. lesson best e) Among them, I like the P.E. lesson best so that I can be relaxed in it.so that I can be relaxed in it.e) Among them, I like the P.E. lesson best e) Among them, I like the P.E. lesson best so that I can be relaxed in it.so that I can be relaxed in it.

Suitable connectives( 连接词 ) and the right order will make your writing better.

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How can you make yourself How can you make yourself happy?happy? Be optimisticBe optimistic （乐观的（乐观的））

Stay close to family and Stay close to family and friendsfriends Take interest in your Take interest in your studiesstudiesBe confidentBe confident

SmileSmile

Do good deedsDo good deeds

Play sportsPlay sports

IX. Writing (IX. Writing ( 作文作文 ): (): ( 共共 2020 分分 ))106. Write a passage of at least 60 words a106. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Be Happy Every Day”.(bout the topic “Be Happy Every Day”.( 以以“快乐每一天”为题写一篇不少于“快乐每一天”为题写一篇不少于 6060 字的短字的短文。文。 ))Use the following points as a guide.(Use the following points as a guide.( 短文须短文须包含下列要点包含下列要点 ))● ● Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?● ● What do you do every day?What do you do every day?● ● How can you make yourself happy? (At lHow can you make yourself happy? (At least two ways to be happy)east two ways to be happy)

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Tip 2: The arrangement of the contents ( 内容 )is very important.

Tip 1: Suitable connectives( 连接词 ) and the right order will make your writing better.

IX. Writing (IX. Writing ( 作文作文 ): (): ( 共共 2020 分分 ))106. Write a passage of at least 60 words a106. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Be Happy Every Day”.(bout the topic “Be Happy Every Day”.( 以以“快乐每一天”为题写一篇不少于“快乐每一天”为题写一篇不少于 6060 字的短字的短文。文。 ))Use the following points as a guide.(Use the following points as a guide.( 短文须短文须包含下列要点包含下列要点 ))● ● Are you happy every day?Are you happy every day?● ● What do you do every day?What do you do every day?● ● How can you make yourself happy? (At lHow can you make yourself happy? (At least two ways to be happy)east two ways to be happy)

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Be Happy Every Day As a student of Grade Nine, I’m busy with my studies. At school, I have to attend eight lessons a day, and I almost have no time to have a rest. After school, a huge amount of homework must be finished. Although I feel very tired, I still feel very happy every day because I love learning. Learning is the best way to make me wiser and smarter, I think. Besides, I can make many friends at school. Whenever I feel sad, I will talk with them. Then they will comfort me and give me some advice to make me happy again as well. No matter how terrible your life is, Please be happy every day. As the saying goes, “When you smile, the world smiles with you!”

As a student of Grade Nine, I’m busy with my studies.

No matter how terrible your life is, Please be happy every day. As the saying goes, “When you smile, the world smiles with you!”

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Tip 2: The arrangement of the contents ( 内容 )is very important.

Tip 1: Suitable connectives( 连接词 ) and the right order will make your writing better.

Tip 3: A good beginning and ending will make your writing perfect.

The best way to cheer yourself up is to try to cheer somebody else up. ---- Mark Twain For every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.

One of the greatest pleasure in life is conversation. Joys shared with others are more enjoyed.

The best way to cheer yourself up is to try to cheer somebody else

up. ---- Mark Twain For every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.

One of the greatest pleasure in life is conversation.

Joys shared with others are

more enjoyed.

Further Further correcting and correcting and polishing your polishing your writing after classwriting after class