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This is what I have done after I received my feedback to improve my magazine.

7th January 201

!ront cover

I have added a drop shadow

e"ect to the main cover #ine

so that it is bo#der than the

rest of the te$t therefore it

wi## be eye catching.

I have now added an outer g#ow to

the rest of the main cover #ine% I&ve

done this so it is sti## c#ear what

the te$t says on the background

but a#so so it is eye catching.

I have nowadded a star with te$t saying 'posters( to indicate

what the images above it are.

I have now added a red drop

shadow to one of the cover #ines%

the co#our sticks to the co#our

scheme but it a#so makes the te$t

stand out from the image that it&s

on.

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I have now added a

strobe e"ect to the

other cover #ine so you

can make out what itsays.

I have now changed the font of most

the te$t so the same font isn&t used too

much.

This is how my front cover #ooks #ike

now that I have )na#ised it with the

feedback I received.

*th January 201

+ontents ,age

I have changed the font of the masthead of the

page so that the font isn&t the same a## the way

through.

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I have changed the font of certain words within the

contents% these words being music artists- therefore

the reader knows who is being featured throughout.

#so the page numbers have been changed in font so

that they stand out from the rest of the font.

I have #ined the images up so that it #ooks professiona#.

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I have moved some of the te$t so that the te$t over the top image isn&t out

of p#ace% so I move the te$t on the third image to be simi#ar.

/oub#e ,age pread

!or the te$t on the doub#e page spread I have

went through checking the spe##ing and

grammar% a#so I have changed some of the

font within the te$t such as the name of the

band in the opening sentence and the names

of the peop#e I am interviewing.

I have changed the font of the te$t of

the doub#e page spread to match the

main cover #ine font as it is about the

same topic.

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I&ve changed the positioning of the pu## uote so that the

right side of the doub#e page spread wasn&t b#ank.

I have added the magazine masthead to the top #eft hand

corner so that it is sti## #inked into the magazine and so it

is sti## advertising that it is this magazine with a## the

e$c#usives.

1th January 201

I have added an outer g#ow to a## the captions on the pictures so

that the te$t is more visib#e. The on#y image I didn&t added an

e"ect to was the third one down as the e"ect didn&t seem to work

on this te$t.

I have added a drop

shadow to the tit#e of

the page 3ust so that

it isn&t p#ain and so

that it has some sort of appea# to this page.

I added an outer g#ow

to the tit#e on the

doub#e page spread%

this is so it stands out a

bit but a#so so it 3umps

out s#ight#y at the viewer.

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I have added a green outer g#ow to

the pu## uote so that it stands out

from the background image- a#so I

have moved the pu## uote so that it

doesn&t cover anyone&s face on the background image.

I have added an outer g#ow to the

captions of the images on the doub#e

page spread so they are c#ear#y

readab#e over the images% a#so the

co#our of the outer g#ow matches the

co#our scheme throughout.