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2013-2014 Common Essay Prompts
O Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
O Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?
O Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?
O Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
O Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.
http://thechoice.blogs.nytimes.com/2013/02/05/common-application-releases-new-essay-prompts/
“The Common App will still be a stickler for essay lengths, as we reported in October. However, the maximum has increased to 650 words. (The previous limit was 500 words.) The Web-only application will not accept essays with fewer than 250 words.”
http://thechoice.blogs.nytimes.com/2013/02/05/common-application-releases-new-essay-prompts/
Other Essay Prompts"How do you feel about Wednesday?“
"You have just completed your 300-page autobiography. Please submit page 217.“
Tufts University: "Are We Alone?”
HOW CAN I MAKE MY ESSAY STAND OUT?
O 1. Be concise. Even though the Common Application main essay has only a suggested minimum of 250 words, and no upper limit, every admissions officer has a big stack to read every day; he or she expects to spend only a couple of minutes on the essay. If you go over 700 words, you are straining their patience, which no one should want to do.
O 2. Be honest. Don't embellish your achievements, titles, and offices. It's just fine to be the copy editor of the newspaper or the treasurer of the Green Club, instead of the president. Not everyone has to be the star at everything. You will feel better if you don't strain to inflate yourself.
O 3. Be an individual. In writing the essay, ask yourself, "How can I distinguish myself from those thousands of others applying to College X whom I don't know—and even the ones I do know?" It's not in your activities or interests. If you're going straight from high school to college, you're just a teenager, doing teenage things. It is your mind and how it works that are distinctive. How do you think? Sure, that's hard to explain, but that's the key to the whole exercise.
O 4. Be coherent. Obviously, you don't want to babble, but I mean write about just one subject at a time. Don't try to cover everything in an essay. Doing so can make you sound busy, but at the same time, scattered and superficial. The whole application is a series of snapshots of what you do. It is inevitably incomplete. The colleges expect this. Go along with them.
O 5. Be accurate. I don't mean just use spell check (that goes without saying). Attend to the other mechanics of good writing, including conventional punctuation in the use of commas, semi-colons, etc. If you are writing about Dickens, don't say he wrote Wuthering Heights. If you write about Nietzsche, spell his name right.
… CONTINUEDO 6. Be vivid. A good essay is often compared to a story: In many cases it's an anecdote of an
important moment. Provide some details to help the reader see the setting. Use the names (or invent them) for the other people in the story, including your brother, teacher, or coach. This makes it all more human and humane. It also shows the reader that you are thinking about his or her appreciation of your writing, which is something you'll surely want to do.
O 7. Be likable. Colleges see themselves as communities, where people have to get along with others, in dorms, classes, etc. Are you someone they would like to have dinner with, hang out with, have in a discussion section? Think, "How can I communicate this without just standing up and saying it, which is corny." Subtlety is good.
O 8. Be cautious in your use of humor. You never know how someone you don't know is going to respond to you, especially if you offer something humorous. Humor is always in the eye of the beholder. Be funny only if you think you have to. Then think again.
O 9. Be controversial (if you can). So many kids write bland essays that don't take a stand on anything. It is fine to write about politics, religion, something serious, as long as you are balanced and thoughtful. Don't pretend you have the final truth. And don't just get up on your soapbox and spout off on a sensitive subject; instead, give reasons and arguments for your view and consider other perspectives (if appropriate). Colleges are places for the discussion of ideas, and admissions officers look for diversity of mind.
O 10. Be smart. Colleges are intellectual places, a fact they almost always keep a secret when they talk about their dorms, climbing walls, and how many sports you can play. It is helpful to show your intellectual vitality. What turns your mind on? This is not the same thing as declaring an intended major; what matters is why that subject interests you.
http://www.usnews.com/education/blogs/professors-guide/2010/09/15/10-tips-for-writing-the-college-application-essay
Speed DatingYou have 5 minutes to tell your partner something interesting about you. It must stand out and be interesting enough to make this person want to pursue another date with you.
*Remember*Similarly, you are a number on a piece of paper. You have a limited amount of time and space to get a member of the Admissions Committee to think you’re interesting/unique enough to pursue.
What would you tell them?
Try it! Brainstorm the Following Topics
1. What was the most difficult time in your life and why? How did your perspective on life change as a result of the difficulty?
2. Of everything in the world, what would you most like to be doing right now? Where would you like to be? Who, or everyone living or dead, would you like to be with?
3. What are your dreams for the future? What would it take for you to consider your life successful?
Brainstorm the Following Themes…
O An Article of ClothingO Many people have an item such as a favorite sweater, a beloved T-shirt, or a well-worn pair of shoes.
It is often possible to spin stories around an item that has been with you through many experiences, or that can be made to represent truths in your life.
O The Groups in Your School and Where You Fit inO Every school has groups of people who associate together based on common interests or traits—
jocks, musicians, Goths, skaters, cheerleaders, "smart" kids, and everything in between. Not that you want to reduce anyone to a stereotype, but some perceptive comments about social life at your school can be very effective. Have you tried to bridge the groups? Ever gotten caught in a test of loyalty between them?
O A Family Gathering or TraditionO You could pick anything from your family at the dinner table to an annual trip to the beach. You may
decide to write about an extended family gathering, and thereby give yourself more characters and interactions to describe.
O Your Walk or Ride to SchoolO Any trip that you take on familiar ground, day after day, is a good possibility. A walk through your
neighborhood would allow you to reflect on experiences that you have had at each place you pass.O If you are a runner, you could describe a course that you have run many times, and your thoughts
along the way.O If you've lived in your house a long time, a look around the backyard could bring to mind good times
with family or friends that might come together in an essay.O Your Favorite ThingsO Similar to an article of clothing topic, you can write about some of your favorite things and why
they’re meaningful to you.http://www.collegecountdown.com/applying/essays/how-can-i-brainstorm-essay-topics.html
MAPPING YOUR IDEASDrawing a map of your ideas is helpful in many ways. First, people often find that seeing a visual representation of their thoughts helps them to add more ideas and sort through them. In the center of the map, write your topic and draw a circle around it. When you come up with a new idea, write it down, draw a circle around it, and draw a line to show how it connects to the topic in the center and/or the other ideas you’ve written down. Look at the main ideas you’ve written and see if you can think of other ideas that connect to them. Remember that it is okay—actually, it is great—if you have many ideas right now. You won’t necessarily use all of them in your essay, but all it’s important to collect many ideas right now. The map below uses the sample essay topic from the previous resource to show you what an idea map might look like.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/index.php?
category_id=2&sub_category_id=2&article_id=53
IDEA LISTO This is a fairly straightforward method of brainstorming ideas. Though not
as visual as an idea map, lists are a great way of finding and recording your ideas. Idea lists help you “mine” your ideas so that you have many to choose from and also help you find a main idea and supporting points, which will be useful as you plan your essay.Example Idea List
What is an important goal I have for the next few years?O finishing schoolO getting a better jobO keeping in touch with my friends and familyO learning a new languageO How can I achieve my goal?O to finish school, I can figure out what my goals are for school, find a school
that fits my goals, and apply to schools and for financial aidO to get a better job, I can finish school, learn a new language, search for
jobs, prepare my applications, and make a list of people who will give me a good reference
O to keep in touch with my friends and family, I can make a list of everyone’s contact information, like addresses, phone numbers, and email
O to learn a new language, I can pick what language I want to learn, get a dictionary, and find a class
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/index.php?category_id=2&sub_category_id=2&article_id=53
College Essays that “Worked”
Undecided - Daniel
Undecided—DanielI was born in the wrong century.A combination of an avant-garde homeschooling education and liberal parents produced an inquisitive child who dreamt of versatility. I want to be an Aristotle, a Newton, or, if nothing else, an engineer who can perform titrations and analyze works by Rand or Fitzgerald.Growing up in Miami, Florida, a mecca for diversity, I’ve seen interests and talents splattered across the entire spectrum. Sports coaches who write computer code after practice, cross country runners who dabble in cancer research and community service management, these were the people who influenced my upbringing. From these inspirations, I’ve crafted an ideal for my future, one where I can play a few varied roles, yet play them well. But I am atypical too. A water skier who spends mornings in the Everglades with my camera, and flies remote airplanes on the weekends.I know I’ll have to find the right focus, eventually. But first, I’ll figure out what I love. There will be dozens of internal debates over my interests. I’ll deliberate and dispute, unsure of whether I truly love what I’m doing, hesitant about whether this is what I want to be doing five years from now. But it doesn't matter; it’s part of the process. When I find what I want to study, I’ll know. If I were a wonder of the world, I’d be the Great Pyramid. Starting broad, before refining myself to a point, I think Maslow would’ve approved.
“What stood out to me about Daniel’s major essay was that, while he applied undecided, he still crafted a really well written essay about his interests. Daniel writes about how his upbringing and where he’s from has led him to be inquisitive and explore a range of interests. He does a great job of tying it all into using his academic experience at Hopkins to pinpoint what exactly it is that he wants to study in the future.” —Admissions Counselor Monique Hyppolite
Unathletic Department- Meghan
A blue seventh place athletic ribbon hangs from my mantel. Every day, as I walk into my living room, the award mockingly congratulates me as I smile. Ironically, the blue seventh place ribbon resembles the first place ribbon in color; so, if I just cover up the tip of the seven, I may convince myself that I championed the fourth heat. But, I never dare to wipe away the memory of my seventh place swim; I need that daily reminder of my imperfection. I need that seventh place.Two years ago, I joined the no-cut swim team. That winter, my coach unexpectedly assigned me to swim the 500 freestyle. After stressing for hours about swimming 20 laps in a competition, I mounted the blocks, took my mark, and swam. Around lap 14, I looked around at the other lanes and did not see anyone. “I must be winning!” I thought to myself. However, as I finally completed my race and lifted my arms up in victory to the eager applause of the fans, I looked up at the score board. I had finished my race in last place. In fact, I left the pool two minutes after the second-to-last competitor, who now stood with her friends, wearing all her clothes.The blue for the first loser went to me.However, as I walked back to my team, carrying the seventh place blue, listening to the splash of the new event’s swimmers, I could not help but smile. I could smile because despite my loss, life continued; the next event began. I realized that I could accept this failure, because I should not take everything in life so seriously. Why should I not laugh at the image of myself, raising my arms up in victory only to have finished last? I certainly did not challenge the school record, but that did not mean I could not enjoy the swim.So, the blue seventh place ribbon sits there, on my mantel, for the world to see. I feel no shame in that. In fact, my memorable 20 laps mean more to me than an award because over time, the blue of the seventh place ribbon fades, and I become more colorful by embracing my imperfections and gaining resilience-but not athleticism.“The first thing that stands out about this essay is the catchy title, which effectively sets up an essay that is charmingly self-deprecating. The author goes on to use subtle humor throughout the essay to highlight one of her weaknesses but at the same time reveals how she turned what some might have considered a negative event into a positive learning experience. Not only is this essay well-written and enjoyable to read, but it reveals some important personal qualities about the author that we might not have learned about her through other components of her application. We get a glimpse of how she constructively deals with challenge and failure, which is sure to be a useful life skill she will need in the real world, starting with her four years in college.”—Senior Assistant Director Janice Heitsenrether
Now It’s Your Turn!
TASK: You will write three separate paragraphs. Each
paragraph, containing a different idea for your personal essay.
