255098083 Afl Cwork Yr12 Word Version 3

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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print

AFL

Evaluating PeerWork

AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded


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Name



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Activity 1

Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples

and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!

NON STOP POP

Minimal Level

110 23 marks

Basic Level 22435 marks

Procienc!Level 33"4# marks

E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks

framing a sot!

incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

$ tin% te

maga&ine is at

a 'asic level!

'eca"se of te

images! wicave 'een

"sed( )e main

image itself is

angled very

di*erently!

wic doesn+t

ma%e it seem

very ,attering(

)e

'ac%gro"nds of

te sots are

di*erent and

clas a 'it wit

te pin%( Yo"

wo"ld e#pect

most

'ac%gro"nds to

s"it te colo"r

pin% d"e to te

colo"r sceme

'eing pin%(

"sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

$ tin% te

potos are

more 'asic

level! 'eca"se

tere is a lac%

of di*erent

potos( )ere

are a lot of

di*erent potos

'"t te one on

te 'ottom left

seems as if it

tey aren+t erown potos(



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Some potos

don+t seem

appropriate

also as tere

are some

-sel.es+(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e

'ac%gro"nds in

some images

are s"ita'le as

some are pin%(

/"t in some

cases tere are

yellow and one

'ac%gro"nd is

in a room!

wic seems as

if te'ac%gro"nd

clases wit

te pin%s(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ects

and setting

)e ligting in

some images is

not appropriate

and loo%s very

d"ll( )e potos

so"ld ave

'een ta%en in a

'etter room

wit 'etterligting for a

'etter e*ect

li%e te medi"m

to long sot on

te do"'le

page spread! as

it loo%s very

vivid( No

o'ects or props

ave 'een "sed

in any of te

maga&ines( )esetting seems a

'it plain in

some cases li%e

te yellows!

wic clas a

lot wit te

pin%s(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!

incl"ding cropping

)e potos are

s"ita'le in

some cases!

'"t some

potos come

across as



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and resi&ing stretced( )e

do"'le page

spread image

comes across

as s"ita'le(acc"rately "sing

lang"age and

register

)e lang"age

and register is

"sed

appropriately if

it was aimed at

yo"ng

teenagers( /"t

it ma%es te

maga&ine in

general loo%

really cild li%e(appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

)e te#t seems

really immat"re

and ma%es it

seem as if te

target a"dience

is for yo"ng

teenagers( )ey

ave

e#perimented

wit a lot of

fonts! wic is

good '"t ma%es

it loo% a 'it

messy(sowing

"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e layo"t of

te maga&ine

itself is

represented as

really messy

'eca"se of te

e#tremely '"sy

front cover!

contents page

and do"'le

page spread(

sowingawareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)e te#t si&ingis very large on

te front! wic

stands o"t! '"t

on te oters

tey seem

really small(

)e contents

page doesn+t

ave a good

'alance of

images and

fonts! and

sows too



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m"c fonts("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

$t is o'vio"s

tey wo"ld "se

$3) to create

te maga&ine

in general(

S"mmary 3omment

4verall! $ decided tis maga&ine is more minimal level( $t is a good maga&ine '"t it seems

really immat"re and cild li%e( $t is o'vio"s te target a"dience is for teenage girls '"t

'eca"se it is pin% it sows it is aimed at yo"ng teenage girls( )e front cover loo%s e#tremely

'"sy! wic ma%es it seem really messy( )e variety of fonts ma%es it seem conf"sing as it

may come across as separate categories( )e contents page seems "n"s"al! wit te lac% of

images tat ave 'een "sed( $t is independent wit te way it as ta%en te front cover and

p"t it on te contents page to allocate wat eac section refers too( /"t $ tin% it loo%s

"n.nised 'eca"se of te lac% of images! it co"ld add more images and less te#t( )e do"'le

page spread is act"ally really good5 it as a 'alanced amo"nt of 'ot images and te#t! wit

one0side images and te oter te#t( $ tin% tat tey co"ld of ta%en 'etter potos! as somepotos were close "ps of sel.es(

Loo%ing at wat grades te maga&ines act"ally got! $ now "nderstand wy $ went wrong and

wy tis maga&ine got Level 6( $ was soc%ed wen $ .rst fo"nd o"t tis 'eca"se it seems as

if it did not .t in wit te Level 6 category( $ "nderstand wy it is Level 6 now as it contains all

te feat"res for a do"'le page spread! '"t te front page and contents are 7"ite limited '"t

contain all feat"res for tem(



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FLAW&

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!

incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e images tat

ave 'een "sed

are 7"ite good(

)ey ave

positioned tem

well 'y p"tting

tem on one

side( )e

potos are also

di*erent! as

tey ave

positioned onepoto 'eind

anoter( )e

e#tra potos

tat ave 'een

"sed are

s"ita'le as it

sows wo te

person is for

tat speci.c

category("sing a variety of

sot distances asappropriate

)ese are o%ay

'eca"se of teway tey are

medi"m sots

and ten some

are medi"m

long sots( )e

main poto is

positioned as a

more medi"m

sot! and ten

te one 'eind

tis poto is

positioned in amedi"m long

sot! to ma%e

im appear

smaller to .t in

te gap(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e

'ac%gro"nd of

te main image

is wite wic

will ena'le all

images to .t

togeter as

tey won+t



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clas( )e

pict"re in te

'ottom left

corner as a

'l"e

'ac%gro"nd

tat matces!

as it is a plain

wite 'lac%!

wit aspects of

red and yellow

te#t tat ties all

colo"rs

togeter(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ectsand setting

)e ligting is

good and

seems

interesting( )e'ac%gro"nds of

potos tie

togeter really

well and do not

clas as m"c(

)o improve it

to"g! tey

co"ld ave a

di*erent colo"r

instead of te

'l"e

'ac%gro"nd soit doesn+t seem

te odd one

o"t( 4n te

do"'le page

spread it is

o'vio"s of wat

te genre is 'y

te prop tat

as 'een "sed

wic is a

g"itar(

manip"latingpotograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!

incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

)e si&ing ofte two main

images is really

good as ow

tey ave 'een

laid o"t( )e

way tey ave

resi&ed te

images

represents te

s%ills tey ave(

)e top rigt

image is

"n"s"al wit



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te way tey

ave positioned

te model and

te way tey

ave angled it

is interesting(

)e 'ottom left

image is simple

and it allows "s

to follow te

models eyes to

te te#t ne#t to

im on te

rigt( )is is

d"e to te way

e is positioned(acc"rately "sing

lang"age andregister

)e lang"age is

"sed in a m"cmat"re way 'y

ow te font is

all te same

wic ma%es it

easier to

"nderstand( $t is

'old and large

so it is noticed!

stands o"t and

attracts teir

target

a"dience(appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

D"e to te fonts

tat ave 'een

"sed it ma%es

te maga&ine

more simple

and easier to

"nderstand( )e

di*erence in

si&ing of all te

te#t ma%es te

maga&ine loo%

sopisticatedand mat"re tat

represents teir

target

a"dience(sowing

"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e layo"t of

te front cover

and contents is

very

sopisticated

and mat"re(

8owever! te

do"'le page

spread seems



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"n.nised wit

te 'lan%

'ac%gro"nd( $

tin% te title

itself is very

interesting 'y

ow it is laid

o"t! '"t $ tin%

tey co"ld of

made te 7"ote

larger so tat it

wo"ld stand o"t

more(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)e variety of

te#t si&es is

really

interesting and

good( )emastead is

very

independent

wit ow it as

'een designed

tat is really

e*ective for te

maga&ine!

wic will

attract teir

target

a"dience( )efront cover is

interesting wit

te variety of

si&ing of te

te#t tat is very

e*ective also(

)e content is

very good as

well wit te

detailed

synopsis of

wat tecategory is

a'o"t( )e "se

of imagery is

interesting as

well and

s"ita'le( )e

te#t for te

do"'le page

spread is

interesting wit

te mastead

'eing laid o"t

di*erent( )e



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interview itself

is easy to follow

and

"nderstand("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

$t is o'vio"s

tat $3) as

'een "sed for

tis tas% as

Potosop m"st

ave 'een

"sed( )e way

tey aver laid

o"t all of teir

images! fonts

and te#ts and

te way tey

ave edited

potos arereally to"gt

o"t and done

e#tremely well(

S"mmary 3omment

From loo%ing at te wole maga&ine itself! it is very interesting wic p"ts it into tepro.ciency level( )e maga&ine is represented very well and is laid o"t very well wicma%es it "nderstanda'le( )e front cover is very sopisticated wit ow te font is laido"t and si&ed! and it is also easy to "nderstand 'y ow te categories are descri'ed li%eon te contents page( )e images tat were "sed were s"ita'le for teir genre tatstrengtens te "nderstanding of wat te genre may 'e( )e contents page loo%s very

'"sy '"t very precise and organised! wic ma%es te maga&ine come across assopisticated( )e images "sed for te contents page are s"ita'le and it is interestingwit ow te layo"t is( )e do"'le page spread loo%s plain and simple '"t te masteadis very interesting( )o improve te maga&ine itself! tey co"ld add tings to get rid of teplain wite 'ac%gro"nd(



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STACK

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e sots arevery good! wit

te e*ects tat

ave 'een "sed

to ma%e tem

seem as if tey

ave 'een

ta%en from a

concert( )ey .t

in well wit

teir m"sic

maga&ine

genre("sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

)ey ave "sed

close "ps!

medi"m sots

and medi"m0

long sots( All

of tese give

e*ect and sow

wat te

fasion style

was for tis

maga&ine(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e

'ac%gro"nds for

all images are

s"ita'le for te

genre( )ey

represent

concerts and

roc% tat may

come across as

teir genre( All

images tie

togeter and alls"it and .t

togeter(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ects

and setting

)e props tat

ave 'een "sed

are e#tremely

s"ita'le for te

genre! wit

micropones

and stands!

g"itars and

tattoos and

parlo"rs( )ecolo"r sceme



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is good wit

monocrome

and 'l"rred

e*ects to

represent a

concert( )e

ligting on te

do"'le page

spread on te

'ottom sows a

spotligt tat

'rings e*ect for

te model(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

)e cropping

and resi&ing of

images are

s"ita'le as tey

a e %ept temost important

potos or

images( All te

potos are

s"ita'le for te

genre and it

allows te

a"dience to see

te style of te

models( )e

way tey are all

cropped andresi&ed is

e*ective and

tey all .t in

perfectly witin

te maga&ines

layo"t and te

genre(acc"rately "sing

lang"age and

register

)e lang"age is

very mat"re

and s"ita'le for

te genre in

wic itportrays( )e

lang"age tat is

"sed is s"ita'le

also wit te

aggressive

words wic

represent te

genre and

wom it wo"ld

'e s"ita'le for(appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

)e te#t as a

good 'alance!

as tere is



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te#t always

someting to

read and every

title as a

synopsis to

sow wat te

sector wo"ld 'e

a'o"t( )e

mastead is

very

independent

and di*erent

wit ow it is

designed(sowing

"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and pagedesign

)e layo"t of

te front cover!

contents page

and do"'lepage spread is

very interesting

and laid o"t

really well( )e

front cover is

laid o"t very

well wit ow

te te#t

overlaps te

model and ow

tey ave

positioned tete#t on te side(

)e interesting

part of it is te

circle tat

s"ggests an

important part

of te

maga&ine( )e

contents page

is laid o"t very

well also wit

ow everytingis positioned(

)e do"'le

page spread

as a good

variety of

images tat

portrays te

genre of te

maga&ine wit

te lang"age

and images(sowing

awareness of te

)e font si&ing

is very



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need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

important and

tis maga&ine

portrays it

really well wit

te si&ing( )ey

ena'le te

readers to

"nderstand

wat te titles

are and wat

te synopsis is("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

Potosop9any

oter $3) as

'een "sed

appropriately as

tey ave

made9created a

very goodmaga&ine(

S"mmary 3omment

)e maga&ine overall .ts in te e#cellence level! 'eca"se of te perfect 'alance ofimagery and te#t( )e front cover is "ni7"e and laid o"t very well wit te 'alance of tete#t and te overlapping of te#t and te main image( )e mastead is "ni7"e and teimage as 'een edited to represent a concert! as te model as 'een faded( )e contentspage is intrig"ing wit te "se of images and te#t( $t allows te reader to "nderstand tetitles of speci.c articles or sections( )e layo"t is interesting and is "nderstanda'le andeasy to follow( All images .t togeter and portray te maga&ines genre 'y te 'ac%gro"ndand te mise0en0scene( )e do"'le page spread is very interesting and portrays temaga&ine genre 'y te "se of imagery and te lang"age tat as 'een "sed( )ey ave"sed a variety of 7"otes and te#t to ena'le te a"dience to ave an insigt into temodel9singer( )e tattoo tat is 'eing drawn on someone 'rings e*ect for te maga&ineitself( )e 'o#es tat s"rro"nd te do"'le page spread are interesting and di*erent wicallows te maga&ine to stand o"t(

)is maga&ine is at level 6 also! '"t at a ig mar% 'and of level 6( )is maga&ine wasde.nitely te 'est and $ "nderstand now wy it got level 6 for tis maga&ine( /y"nderstanding tis it as allowed me to "nderstand wat a ig level 6 wo"ld or will loo%li%e(

DUBZONE

Minimal Level Basic Level 2 Procienc! E$cellence



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110 23 marks

2435 marks Level 33"4# marks

Level 44%"0 marks

framing a sot!

incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e sot on te

front cover as

'een p"t on an

angle to sow

e*ect tat $tin% is

s"ita'le( )e

contents page

"ses an image

tat consists of

te model

'eing

positioned in a

certain way(

)is will allow

"s to follow is

eyes to te

te#t( )e

images on te

do"'le page

spread seem

identical wic

doesn+t ma%e it

seem e*ective("sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

)e sots are

eiter close "ps

or medi"m

sots( /"t onte do"'le

page spread all

te sots are

te same as te

models are all

positioned in

te same way

'y loo%ing

down(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e

'ac%gro"nds

don+t representte genre! as

yo" wo"ld

e#pect te

'ac%gro"nd to

'e 'rigt to

stand o"t! '"t

it+s "st a

simple mint

green tat

won+t attract

readers! as it is

7"ite a ligtcolo"r(



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selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ects

and setting

)e mise0en0

scene is "st a

simple green

wall tat is not

very e*ective

for tis

maga&ine

genre( )e

ligting is

'rigt wic

allows te

models to stand

o"t and sows

wat tey loo%

li%e and wat

tey are

wearing( )e

props tat ave'een "sed are a

g"itar tat is

s"ita'le for

teir genre! and

also

eadpones

tat is a m"st

for a D:(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t forpresentation!

incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

)e

potograps!

wic got

ta%en! aree*ective 'y

ow tey ave

'een cropped

and resi&ed(

)ey allow "s

to see te

models facial

e#pressions(

8owever! tey

aren+t very

e*ective(

acc"rately "singlang"age and

register

)e lang"age iss"ita'le for te

maga&ine wit

te speci.c

words tat

ave 'een "sed

as it portrays

teir maga&ine

genre(appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

)ere is a

'alance in

imagery and

te#t! '"t tey

co"ld of "sed a



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variety of fonts

'"t only a

co"ple of fonts

got "sed! '"t

tey don+t

matc as m"c(sowing

"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e layo"t of

te wole

maga&ine

seems

"n.nised wit

te way

everyting is

positioned and

te te#t seems

"n"s"al(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)ey aven+t

portrayed tis

very well as te

fonts are simple

and don+t stand

o"t as m"c

'eca"se of te

simple colo"rs(

)e te#t si&e

co"ld 'e a little

'it larger for

te mastead

to ma%e s"re it

stands o"tmore to attract

te readers("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

$3)9Potosop

as 'een "sed

'"t it doesn+t

come across as

if it as 'een

"sed very well

'eca"se it

seems

"n.nised(

S"mmary 3omment

)is maga&ine portrays a 'asic level 'eca"se of te maga&ine loo%ing "n.nised 'eca"seof te fonts tat seem simple and te colo"rs tat ave 'een "sed aren+t very s"ita'le forte genre( )e images tat ave 'een "sed are e*ective wit te props '"t te'ac%gro"nd isn+t very e*ective 'eca"se of te green( Yo" wo"ld e#pect tis %ind ofmaga&ine genre to 'e more 'rigt and 'old to attract te readers! '"t tis maga&ineseems as if it wo"ldn+t acieve tis( )o improve tey co"ld cange te colo"r sceme!coice a variety of te#t tat are s"ita'le and cange te font( )ey so"ld improve teimages tat ave 'een "sed and coose a s"ita'le 'ac%gro"nd for all images(



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Task 2

"ow using the skills youve ac*uired in task + evaluate yo! o"# "o!k a#$ t%e#

t"o pieces of "o!k f!om classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.

&a'a(i#e title) P%oe#ix

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!

incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e framing of

my sots

di*erent

tro"go"t as $

tried to do a

variety of

di*erent waysof framing

tem( 8owever!

te last two of

te 'and co"ld

ave 'een

canged( $

co"ld of done

one landscape

and portrait to

give an e*ect("sing a variety of

sot distances asappropriate

)e sot

distances weresimilar as $

mainly did

close "ps and

medi"m sots( $

tin% $ co"ld

ave added

more long

sots to sow

o* te fasion

ideas from te

'and(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

My potos

seem

appropriate for

te tas% as $

tried to ens"re

my potos were

clear! '"t for

te f"t"re $ will

ta%e 'etter

ones(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"dingcolo"r! .g"re!

)e colo"r on

te front cover $tin% loo%s



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ligting! o'ects

and setting

s"ita'le for

wat $ wanted

my front cover

to loo% li%e( )e

ligting for te

rest of my

potos was not

very good as

tey were

'l"rry5 for

f"t"re

references $ will

ens"re to "se

te camera

tat will 'e

provided( $

tin% for te

f"t"re $ co"ld"se some

props(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!

incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

)e resi&ing of

my potos is

good $ tin%! as

$ ens"red to not

stretc tem

and $ li%e ow

my front cover

image is

positioned(

acc"rately "singlang"age and

register

)e lang"age $"sed is s"ita'le

for my genre as

$ ens"red to

ma%e it come

across as

;slang


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layo"t m"c

'etter 'y

ma%ing it more

sopisticated(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

$ made s"re my

mastead was

large to attract

my target

a"dience and

readers( $ also

made s"re my

interview and

tag lines and

contents were

te same font

si&e("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

$ "sed $3) and

Potosop for

my maga&ine

appropriately(

/"t $ wis $

didn+t end "p

copying and

pasting te

interview(

S"mmary 3omment4verall! my maga&ine is at level 2 'eca"se of te tings $ added and te tings $ "sed( )oimprove my maga&ine $ so"ld redo my contents page and "se a di*erent design as $tin% tis one didn+t wor% o"t very well! $ so"ld ta%e 'etter potos so tey don+t loo%

'l"rred and lastly! $ will "se a variety of camera angles and sots for my maga&ine(



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&a'a(i#e title) A*Native +C%a!lotte Cliffo!$,

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!incl"ding and

e#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e framing ofte potos tat

ave 'een

cosen are very

good and are

appropriate for

te maga&ine

genre("sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

A variety of

sots ave

'een "sed li%e

close "ps!

medi"m sotsand medi"m0

long sots( A

variety of tese

are e*ective as

it represents

te 'ands style(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e images

"sed are

sopisticated

for te

maga&ine to

s"it te genre

and all potos

are clear!

e#cept te front

cover poto(

8owever! tis

'rings a lot of

e*ect and

ma%es te

maga&ine seem

edgy(

selecting mise0en0scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ects

and setting

)e colo"rsceme of te

maga&ine is

monocrome

and is very

e*ective( )e

mise0en0scene

is plain wite

wic 'rings

e*ect and

ma%es te

maga&ine seem

sopisticated(manip"lating )e cropping



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potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!

incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

and resi&ing of

images is very

good! as potos

ave 'een

positioned to

di*erent si&es!

'"t tey

aven+t 'een

stretced wic

is good(acc"rately "sing

lang"age and

register

Lang"age is

good also as it

represents te

genre of te

m"sic maga&ine

wic as 'een

cosen( )e

lang"age ise*ective

especially te

7"otes wic

ave 'een "sed

and te

contents(appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

)ere is a

'alance of 'ot

images and

te#t and tis is

strongly sown

in te contents()e content is

'"sy wic is

interesting and

everyting is

e#plained( )e

"se of te#t as

'een to"gt

a'o"t and

acc"rately

descri'ed(sowing

"nderstanding ofconventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e layo"t of

te maga&ineitself is very

good as te

front cover is

independent

wit te

triangle( )e

contents page

as 'een

to"gt o"t

also! and a lot

of e*ort as

'een p"t in as

yo" can tell



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from all te

layers in wic

ave 'een

incorporated(

Lastly! te

do"'le page

spread is

independent

'eca"se of te

large -A+ wic

covers te

models(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)ere is a vast

amo"nt of

di*erent si&ing

in te te#t and

a variety of

fonts ave'een "sed("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

Potosop as

de.nitely 'een

"sed

appropriately

'eca"se of te

faded -A+ and

colo"r sceme

and te

monocrome

alters for te

potos(

S"mmary 3omment4verall! te maga&ine is at a ig level 2 'eca"se of te way everyting is laid o"t and itcontains a variety of te#t si&es and fonts! a variety of images and te maga&ine itself .tsperfectly wit te maga&ine m"sic genre( )o improve tere co"ld 'e a mastead for te'and+s name on te do"'le page spread and te title of yo"r maga&ine on te front coverco"ld 'e 'rigt so it can attract te target a"dience9readers(



25/30


&a'a(i#e title) -i.e!tie +Olivia /'%es,

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!

incl"ding ande#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e framing of

all te sotsare positioned

really well( )e

front cover

image is

positioned in

te middle as it

portrays te

model 'eing

te main

feat"re to foc"s

on( )e

contents page

is di*erent wit

te model

'eing

positioned on

te left side(

)e do"'le

page spread is

interesting wit

te way te

potos are laid

o"t("sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

)ere are a

variety of sots

wic ave

'een "sed li%e

close "ps!

medi"m sots

and a medi"m

long sot(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e images are

s"ita'le and

te ma%e"p on

-Lo"ella+portrays te

maga&ine

genre( )e

ma%e"p loo%s

professional(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ects

and setting

)e mise0en0

scene is simple

wit te wite

'ac%gro"nd!

'"t $ li%e ow

te front cover

'ac%gro"nd issopisticated



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wit te

'ac%gro"nd(

)e ligting is

'rigt '"t

ma%es te

model loo%ed

er loo%

wased o"t(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t for

presentation!

incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

For te front

cover $ tin%

yo" co"ld of

"sed a .lter to

ma%e te model

loo% less

wased o"t(acc"rately "sing

lang"age and

register

)e maga&ine

register is

informal 'y

"sing! -8aa!

its great it

gives me a

sense of

acceptance(+appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

)e te#t is

interesting and

$ li%e ow te

7"otes are

positioned on

te do"'le

page spread()e tag lines a

positioned at

one side to

allow tem to

stand o"t! '"t $

tin% tey

so"ld 'e a

di*erent colo"r

so tey are

more visi'le to

see(

sowing"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e layo"t ofte maga&ine is

good and

interesting( )e

do"'le page

spread is

de.nitely my

favo"rite

'eca"se of te

'alance of te#t

and images(

)e front cover

is very nice and

everyting is



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positioned

sopisticatedly(

)e contents

page is good as

well '"t $ tin%

te 'ac%gro"nd

co"ld 'e a

di*erent colo"r

to ma%e it

stand o"t more(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)e variety of

fonts is a 'it

limited! so a

more variety

co"ld 'e added

to improve it( $t

is o'vio"s te

most importantte#ts tat want

to 'e noticed

are te

masteads and

te large te#ts("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

)e "se of $3)

is very good(

Potosop as

'een "sed

appropriately

'y ow

everyting islaid o"t and

ow it is all

positioned(

S"mmary 3omment

4verall! te maga&ine itself was very good and is de.nitely a level 2( =veryting is laid o"twell and is "nderstanda'le and easy to follow( )o improve te maga&ine tey co"ld "se a.lter to ma%e te main model loo% less wased o"t( Also! a variety of fonts co"ld 'e "sed

and te taglines so"ld 'e canged so tey are 'e easier to read(



28/30


&a'a(i#e title) 0actio# +Tom Cooley,

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framing a sot!

incl"ding ande#cl"ding

elements as

appropriate

)e sots are

very good andte framing is

s"ita'le( $t is

good ow te

images are

positioned to

one side( )e

do"'le page

spread is very

independent

wit te way

te colo"rs are

and ow it is

alf and alf("sing a variety of

sot distances as

appropriate

)e sots

consist of

medi"m sots

and medi"m0

long sots( $

tin% more

potos co"ld+ve

'een added(sooting material

appropriate to te

tas% set

)e images are

s"ita'le for te

maga&ine genre

as te .lter of

tem is

monocrome

tat is s"ita'le

for an

indie9alternative

roc% maga&ine(selecting mise0en0

scne incl"ding

colo"r! .g"re!

ligting! o'ectsand setting

)e mise0en0

scene is plain

'"t is e*ective

'y te colo"rsceme( )e

prop is a

->arning+ sign

tat represents

te al'"m( )e

ligting is good

and ma%es te

model visi'le(manip"lating

potograps as

appropriate to te

conte#t forpresentation!

)e

potograps

ave 'een

manip"lated toave a



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incl"ding cropping

and resi&ing

monocrome

colo"r and te

do"'le page

spread is very

interesting wit

te alf and

alf 'lac% and

wite( )e

resi&ing of

potos is good

'y ow tey

ave 'een

positioned to

one side(acc"rately "sing

lang"age and

register

)e register is

informal 'y

"sing! ->e+re

gonna r"le tef"c%ing world(+appropriately

integrating

ill"stration and

te#t

)e layo"t of

te te#t is very

good( 4n te

do"'le page

spread tere is

an opposition

'etween

colo"rs tat

ma%es it stand

o"t( )e 'lac%

and witecolo"rs portray

te maga&ine

genre(sowing

"nderstanding of

conventions of

layo"t and page

design

)e maga&ine

layo"t is

sopisticated

and everyting

is laid o"t

professionally(

)e images are

positioned to

ma%e tereaders follow

te models

eyes to te te#t(sowing

awareness of te

need for variety in

fonts and te#t si&e

)ere is a

variety in te#t

si&es( )e

larger te te#t

si&e! te easier

it is to notice

te te#t( )e

fonts are

simplistic and

sopisticated



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wic ma%e te

maga&ine loo%

professional("sing $3)

appropriately for

te tas% set

Potosop as

'een "sed

appropriately

and portrays a

sopisticated

maga&ine(

S"mmary 3omment

$ tin% tis maga&ine is a ig level 2 s it portrays te maga&ine genre and it loo%ssopisticated and simplistic( )o improve te maga&ine $ tin% some 'rigt colo"rs co"ld 'e"sed to attract te readers( )e positioning of te images are interesting and are alllocated in te tird of te maga&ine wic is important(

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