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Advanced writing
Dr. Fatemeh Alipanahi
English Language Department
Islamic Azad University, Znajan BranchZanjan Iran
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Features of the course
Name: Advanced Writing
Number of modules: 2
A Prerequisite course for MA students
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Books assigned
There are two books assigned for the course:
1. Paragraph Development
Martin L. Arnaudet
Mary Ellen Barrett
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Books assigned
2. Let’s Write English, Book 2
For the students of English as a secondlanguage
George E. Wishon
Julia M. Burks
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The aims of the course
The aims of the course are:
Familiarizing the student's with features andcomponents of a good paragraph.
Learning how to develop a paragraph andfamiliarizing with different styles ofparagraph development.
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The aims of the course
Learning to expand a paragraph to be ableto move on to writing compositions.
Familiarizing with different prose forms(narration, description, argumentation, andexplanation) through practice.
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The design of the course
The design of the first book is based on thetheory that if a student is able to write aunified, coherent paragraph, transferringthis skill to writing a full composition willnot be difficult. Accordingly, the content ofthe book is as follows:
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The design of the course
The topic sentence
Supporting topic sentences
Enumeration
Types of enumeration
Cause and effect
Comparison and contrast
Definition
From paragraph to composition
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The design of the course
The second book examines characteristicsof the major prose forms and givesexamples of each for the purpose ofdemonstrating the techniques used inwriting them.
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Paragraphs
In written form, English is divided intoparagraphs to distinguish one main ideafrom other main ideas.
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The topic sentence
The paragraph is the basic unit ofcomposition consisting of sentences thatdevelop one central idea.
The central idea is usually stated in a topicsentence.
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The topic sentence
Where does it appear?
In most cases, the topic sentence is the firstsentence of the paragraph.
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The topic sentence
However, it is possible to place the topicsentence at the end (as a kind of conclusion)or in the middle (as a link between the twoparts) of a paragraph.
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The topic sentence
It is even possible to write the paragraph in away that the topic sentence is implied orsuggested.
Remember that a topic sentence placed at thebeginning of a paragraph is the clearestkind of paragraph organization.
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The topic sentence
It is possible to have a paragraph withdouble topic sentences. That is, the firstsentence may introduce the idea in a generalway or in a question form and the secondsentence mentions the specific points.
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The topic sentence
What makes a good topic sentence?
A topic sentence always tries to make astatement about the topic which limits it toa certain extent.
Topic sentence = topic + limiting statement
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The topic sentence
In other words, a topic is more generalthan a topic sentence. Or a topic sentence ismore limited than a topic.
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Limiting your topic sentence
One good way to limit your topic is to placekey words or phrases in the topic sentence.
These words or phrases are sometimes calledcontrolling words or phrases.
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Limiting your topic sentence
Consider ‘soccer’ as your topic.
There are too many things to put in oneparagraph about ‘soccer’; therefore, youneed to limit it.
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Limiting your topic sentence
There are many ways to limit your topic in atopic sentence.
you can limit your topic by:
1. Place:
Soccer is now played in the United States.
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Limiting your topic sentence
2. Time or period of time:Soccer has become more popular within thelast five years.
3. QualitySoccer is a physically demanding sport.
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Limiting your topic sentence
4. Showing similarities:
Soccer and football have a great deal incommon.
5. Showing differences:
Soccer is more dangerous than tennis.
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Limiting your topic sentence
6. A number of things; a list:A soccer player can receive various kindsof penalties.
7. Cause; reason:
Soccer is dangerous for several reasons.
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Limiting your topic sentence
8. Effect:The World Cup Soccer ChampionshipGames create interest from soccer fans allover the world.
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Limiting your topic sentence
Remember that it is possible to have morethan one of the above mentioned categoriesin your topic sentence:
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Limiting your topic sentence
Soccer has become increasingly popular
quality
in the United States in the last ten years.
place time
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Paragraph, Indentation
The first sentence of a paragraph is alwaysindented so the reader will know that a newsubject- or a different aspect of the samesubject- is being dealt with.
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Paragraph, Indentation
The following figure shows two indentationsat the beginning of two paragraphs:Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxxxx.
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Paragraph, length
A paragraph may vary in length. Some arequite short, others are extremely long. Mostparagraphs have more than three sentencesin them and usually have between 100 and200 words.
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Paragraph, Unity
In addition to the topic sentence, aparagraph includes several other sentenceswhich in some way contribute to orsupport the idea in the topic sentence.
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Paragraph, Unity
In other words, all the other sentences inthe paragraph must be related to the topicand must therefore refer back to the topicsentence.
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Paragraph, Unity
It is possible that some sentences may bedirectly related to the preceding supportingsentences (that is, they provide examples,details, or further explanation.) thefollowing diagram shows the relationship:
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Paragraph, Unity
Topic Sentence
Supporting sentence
Supporting sentence
Supporting sentence
Supporting sentence
And so forth
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Paragraph, Unity
If a paragraph announces its main idea inthe topic sentence, and if all the supportingsentences contribute to the reader’sunderstanding of the main idea,
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Paragraph, Unity
we say that the paragraph is unified or that ithas unity.
If the paragraph fails to do so, we say that itlacks unity.
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Supporting Topic Sentences
There are many ways in which you candevelop and clarify a topic sentence. Fourof such ways are:
1. Examples2. Details3. Anecdotes4. Facts and statistics
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Examples
An example is a specific instance thatexplains a more general idea. Becauseexamples are smaller, more limited, andoften more concrete, they are easier tounderstand.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Examples
If writers wish to provide examples, theycan remind their readers by using signalwords or phrases.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Examples
structures of exemplificationThere are three groups of signals used in the
structure of examples:
Noun and verb signalsSentence connectorsPhrase signals
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Supporting Topic Sentences, examples
An example of noun signals:
Some words in English represent people’snames. A good example of this is the wordlynch. illustration
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Supporting Topic Sentences, examples
An example of verb signals:
Some words in English represent people’snames. This can be illustrated by the wordboycott.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, examples
An example of sentence connectors:
Some English words represent proper names.For instance, the word quisling originatedwith Vidkun Quisling.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, examples
An example of phrase signals:
Words such as lynch and quisling representproper names.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Details
A detail is a particular part or characteristicof a whole thing or a whole idea. Details arefrequently used in a description.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Details
Consider the following topic sentence:
Landlords usually require a renter to sign avery complicated contract called a lease.
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Supporting Topic Sentences, Details
The supporting sentences of this topicsentence have to go through the details ofthe contract. They may include: the lengthof time, the amount of rent, the number ofpeople living in the house,…
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Supporting topic sentences, Anecdotes
An anecdote is a short, entertainingaccount of some happening. It is usuallypersonal and may be thought of as alengthy example.
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Supporting topic Sentences, Facts andStatistics
A fact is something which is objectivelyverifiable.
A statistic is a numerical fact which presentssignificant information about a givensubject.
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Arranging your Supporting Sentences
There are several ways to arrange yoursupporting sentences logically andcohesively.
The most common method of paragraphdevelopment in English is enumeration.
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Paragraph Development, Enumeration
In this type of paragraph development, awriter starts with a general class, thenproceeds to break it down by listing someor all of its members or parts.
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Paragraph development, enumeration
General Class
Memberor part
Memberor part
Memberor part
Memberor part
Memberor part
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Paragraph development, enumeration
Consider this sentence:
There are three different kinds of materialsthat can be found in any library.
The word ‘kinds’ is an enumerator becauseit shows exactly what we are listing orenumerating.
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Paragraph development, enumeration
Enumerators are valuable key words.
They help you to organize your paragraphmore clearly.
They help your reader to follow your train ofthought more easily.
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Paragraph development, enumeration
When making lists, we use listing signals toindicate the various items in the list.
Examples are: first, second, last, finally,…
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Paragraph development, enumeration
Remember that different listing signals mightrequire different sentence structures.
Group 1: first, second, third,…Group 2: the first, the second,…
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Paragraph development, enumeration
After the listing signals of group 1, you willneed a full sentence. However, the ones ingroup 2 together with the enumerator arethe subject of the sentence.
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Arranging the supporting sentences
The arrangement of the supporting sentencesof an enumerative paragraph can be one ofthe following three orders:
1. Equal importance2. Ascending order3. Descending order
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Arranging the supporting sentences
If all of the supporting sentences of aparagraph receive equal attention, they allhave equal importance and there is nospecific order in presenting them.
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Arranging the supporting sentences
If a writer lists the most important pointfirst, then goes on to speak of the otherpoints, descending order has been used.
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Arranging the supporting sentences
Descending order is indicated by a specialgroup of listing signals:
most essential
most important kind
The primary reason is….largest etc.
chief
etc.
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Arranging the supporting sentences
A triangle can be used to show how descendingorder works:
MORE IMPORTANT
Less important
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Arranging the supporting sentences
Ascending order is exactly the opposite ofdescending order. In ascending order, thewriter lists the minor points first, savingthe most important for last. So, theparagraph ascends to a climax.
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Arranging the supporting sentences
A triangle can be used to show how ascendingorder works:
Lessimportant
MORE IMPORTANT
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Arranging the supporting sentences
The listing signals used for ascending orderare really the same as those used fordescending order. However, the mostimportant one goes to the end.
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Types of enumeration; process
Process is a specialized type of enumerativeparagraph in which supporting sentences arearranged in a step-by-step sequence andtell how something is made or done.
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Types of enumeration; process
Whereas other enumerative paragraphs usemany enumerators, Process paragraphsmost commonly use three enumerators:
Step Stage Phase
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Types of enumeration; process
In addition to sequence signals, there areother indicators which a writer can use todevelop a process paragraph. They are:Time cluesRepetitionPronoun reference.
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Types of enumeration; process
Time clues include the choice of verb andtense.
Verbs like ‘begin’, ‘start’, continue’,…indicate steps or stages.
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Types of enumeration; process
Time clauses and phrases such as ‘while’,‘as’, ‘after’, …also help show the continuityof development in a process.
Sometimes time clauses may be reduced toparticipial phrases. Consider the followingexample:
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Types of enumeration; process
Clause: when you have beaten the eggs, pourthem into the pan.
Phrase: having beaten the eggs, pour theminto the pan.
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Types of enumeration; process
Sometimes, instead of making one of thesentences into a time clause, the twosentences can be joined by a sentenceconnector:
Beat the eggs well; after that pour them intothe pan.
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Types of enumeration; process
Repetition and pronoun reference are twoother indicators that help a processparagraph to develop.
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Types of enumeration; process
Words are often repeated to add continuityto a paragraph. They are repeated either intheir original form or in pronoun form.
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Types of enumeration; process
All in all, sequence signals, repetition andpronoun reference add continuity andcohesiveness to a paragraph developmentand are particularly important in a processparagraph.
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Types of enumeration; chronologicalorder
When the order in which things happen, or atime sequence, is used to develop aparagraph, this is called chronologicalorder. Like process, this is a special formof enumeration.
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Types of enumeration; chronologicalorder
Enumerators are rarely used inchronological order. Because readersusually do not need these signals tounderstand what is being discussed. Instead,time clues are very important.
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Types of enumeration; chronologicalorder
Time clues of all kinds are used inchronological order. However, the forms ofverbs generally are not present forms, butrather past forms. In addition, prepositionalphrases of time often appear.
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Types of enumeration; cause andeffect
In a cause-effect development, there isalways a causal relationship between thetopic sentence and the supporting sentences,or even between major supporting sentencesand minor ones.
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Types of enumeration; cause andeffect
The supporting sentences in such paragraphsbecome a list of either effects or causes.
Focus on cause focus on effect
Cause # 1
Cause # 2
Cause # 3
situation situation
Effect # 1
Effect # 2
Effect # 3
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Types of enumeration; cause andeffect
In addition to listing signals, there are sixgroups of structural signals used commonlyin cause-effect paragraphs.
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Sentence connectors
Group 1. Sentence connectors
These are words and phrases used to join twocomplete grammatical sentences.
Examples are: as a result, consequently,therefore,…
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Sentence connectors
A semicolon (;) is used before a sentenceconnector and a comma follows it.
If a period is used at the end of the firstsentence, there will be only a comma afterthe connector.
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Sentence connectors
Group 2. Conjunctions
Conjunctions of cause and effect (for, so) arealways preceded by commas, because thesentences generally do not stand alone.
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Sentence connectors
Group 3. Clause structuresThere are two categories of signals in this
group.First, signals whose parts are separated:So…thatSuch …thatSuch a … that
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Sentence connectors
The rise in temperature will dry out so muchland that agricultural patterns will change.
The rise in temperature will cause suchterrible damage that agricultural patternswill change.
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Sentence connectors
Second, signals such as since, because,…
SinceBecause rainfall patterns will change, water
supplies will diminish.
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Sentence connectors
Group 4. Phrase structures
Since a phrase is not a complete sentence, itmust be connected to the main sentence.
Because of the increased heat, agriculturalpatterns will change.
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Sentence connectors
Group 5. Predicate structures
In this group, the cause –effect relationship isindicated either by the verb or the wordsfollowing it.
Changes in water levels will result in changesin living patterns.
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Sentence connectors
Another pattern of the same example ofpredicate structures will be:
Drastic changes in living patterns will resultfrom changes in water levels.
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Sentence connectors
Group 6. Participial phrases
Since a participial phrase has no subject, itmust be connected to the main sentence.The following two examples showparticipial phrases in cause-effectstructures:
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Sentence connectors
Water levels will change, resulting inchanges in living patterns.
Living patterns will change, resulting fromchanges in water levels.
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Cause-effect paragraphs
Remember that in cause-effect paragraphs,you can focus on cause, on effect or on bothof them.
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Cause-effect paragraphs
Chain reaction
In developing a causal relationship, if theeffect of one situation becomes the cause ofthe next, we will have a chain reaction.
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Cause-effect paragraphs
In other words, the first event leads to thesecond, the second to the third, and so on:
Primary cause effect 1 effect 2 effect 3...
cause 2 cause 3 cause 4...
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Comparison and contrast
The topic sentence of a comparison andcontrast paragraph is supported byarranging the supporting sentencesaccording to either the similarities or thedifferences between two things.
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Comparison and contrast
Comparison: pointing out likenesses betweentwo things or two aspects of one thing
Contrast: pointing out differences betweentwo things or two aspects of one thing
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Comparison and contrast
In a paragraph of comparison, thedifferences are often mentioned only brieflyor are even omitted entirely.
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Structures of comparison
In addition to listing signals and theenumerator similarities, six other basicstructures are used commonly in writingparagraphs of comparison.
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Structures of comparison
Group I. Adjective/preposition
The same as
Similar to
Like
Kennedy was killed on exactly the same day
adjective
of the week as Lincoln.
preposition
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Structures of comparison
Group II. Attached statements
And … tooAnd so
And … eitherAnd neither
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Structures of comparison
Kennedy was succeeded by a SouthernDemocrat, and Lincoln was too.
and so was Lincoln.
Kennedy didn’t finish his term of office,and Lincoln didn’t either.and neither did Lincoln.
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Structures of comparison
Group III. Correlative Conjunctions
Both… andAnd … bothNeither … norJust as … so
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Structures of comparison
Both Kennedy and Lincoln had theirKennedy and Lincoln bothelections legally challenged.
Just as Lincoln died in office, so Kennedywas still president when he wasassassinated.
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Structures of comparison
Group IV. Predicate structures
To resemble
To have in common
There are similarities
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Structures of comparison
Kennedy’s popularity greatly resembled Lincoln’s.
Kennedy and Lincoln have many features incommon.
There are many similarities between Kennedy andLincoln.
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Structures of comparison
Group V. sentence connectors
Similarly
Correspondingly
Likewise
In the same way
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Structures of comparison
Lincoln was succeeded by a SouthernDemocrat named Johnson; by the sametoken, Lyndon Johnson, a Democrat fromthe South, succeeded Kennedy.
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Group VI. Punctuation only
Andrew Johnson was born in 1808; LyndonJohnson was born in 1908.
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Structures of contrast
In addition to listing signals andenumerators , seven other structures areused commonly in writing paragraphs ofcontrast.
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Structures of contrast
Group I.
-er … thanMore … thanLess … thanAs … asThe introvert is quieter than the introvert.
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Group II. Prepositions
Contrary to the extrovert, who cravesexcitement, the introvert likes a well-ordered mode of life.
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Structures of contrast
Group III. Adverbial clauses
Whereas the extrovert loses his temperquickly, the introvert seldom does.
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Structures of contrast
Group IV. Verbal structures
The introvert contrasts with the extrovert inregard to his temper.
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Structures of contrast
Group V. sentence connectors
The extrovert loves crowds; however, theintrovert is fond of solitude.
• Pay attention to the punctuation.
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Structures of contrast
Group VI. Conjunctions
The extrovert loves crowds, but the introvertis fond of solitude.
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Structures of contrast
Group VII. Punctuation only
The introvert likes books; the introvert is fondof people.
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Methods of contrast
Two main ways to organize your material in acontrast paragraph:
1. The contrasts are made one at a time, orpoint- by- point.
2. The contrasts are completely described forone side, then for the other side.
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Methods of contrast
Method 1
sociability
Risk-taking
[And so forth]
Extrovert
Extrovert
Introvert
Introvert
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Methods of contrast
Sociability
Risk-taking
Feelings, aggression
Reliability, optimism
Sociability
Risk-taking
Feelings, aggression
Reliability, optimism
Method 2
The Extrovert
The introvert
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Definitions
A paragraph of definition explains what aterm means or how it is used in a particularsituation.
It may be a formal definition or a stipulatedone.
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Definitions
A formal definition explains a meaning asyou might find it in a dictionary.
A stipulated definition explains how aparticular term is used in a specific context.
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The formal definition
A formal definition includes three kinds ofthings:
The term to be defined
The class to which a thing belongs
The features which distinguish it from otherthings in that class
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Structures of definition
The basic structures commonly used inwriting definitions are divided into twobasic groups:
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Structures of definitions
Group I. structures which identifydistinguishing features:
adjectives and adjective clauses
A wristwatch is a mechanical, time-tellingadjectives
device which is worn on a band about thewrist.
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Structures of definitions
Group II. Verbs used in definitions
IsThe term…means, signifies, refers to,Designates Is called, is known asA wristwatch is a mechanical, time-telling,…
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The extended definition
A definition is expanded or extended bygiving additional information about theterm being defined. This might include suchthings as a physical description or a list ofthe advantages of the item.
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Problems in definition
There are three common problems that mightarise in writing definitions:
The circular definition
The overextended definition
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Problems in definition
In circular definition, the term being definedis repeated in the definition:
Economics = the study of the Economy
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Problems in definition
In overextended definition, the definition canbe applied to more things than just the termbeing defined:
Lemonade is a refreshing drink.
The refreshing drink can apply to water, milk,Coke,…
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Problems in definition
An overrestricted definition is one in whichthe term being defined is morecomprehensive than the definition. That is,you restrict the item to only a part of itstotal definition.
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Problems in definition
Example:
A table is a place where one plays games.
The use of table has been restricted to onlyone of many possible uses.
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The stipulated definition
In stipulated definition, you explain howyou are using a term for a particularpurpose, or you explain your particularinterpretation of the term.
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The stipulated definition
The kinds of words which requirestipulated definition are generally abstractideas or qualities such as friendship,poverty, and so on.
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From paragraph to composition
Ordinarily, any writing task will involve aseries of related paragraphs on a giventopic, that is, a composition.
Any composition has to include:
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In the paragraph of introduction, the readeris given certain background informationand the aim of the writer. Furthermore,the controlling idea of the composition isgiven in this paragraph.
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From paragraph to composition
Introduction states the subject or topic of thewhole composition. It limits the subject andtells what aspects of it will be treated. Itmay also explain why these aspects havebeen chosen for treatment.
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From paragraph to composition
The controlling idea which is introduced inthe introduction is very similar to a topicsentence; however, it is more powerful andmore general.
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From paragraph to composition
This is because a controlling idea controlsnot a single paragraph but rather an entirecomposition. It announces the main idea ofthe composition.
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From paragraph to composition
In the body of a composition, the controllingidea will be elaborated on. The body whichis the main part of a composition developsthe main idea in as many paragraphs asthere are main topics to discuss.
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Body
Any paragraph of the body has to have itsown topic sentence and the supportingsentences.
Various methods of arranging supportingsentences can be used in the body of acomposition.
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Body
Good writers frequently make use of all or anumber of methods of paragraphdevelopment to develop their topics. In oneparagraph they may enumerate theirsupporting sentences, in the next, they maymake use of cause-effect and…
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Conclusion
The concluding paragraph of a compositionties together all of the ideas expressed inthe composition. It usually restates indifferent words the main points that havebeen developed in the main paragraphs.
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Conclusion
Remember that this paragraph does notintroduce any new ideas. It should give thefeeling that the composition is completedand that a conclusion has been reached.
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Narration
Narration is telling or relating occurrences orseries of events. It requires the writer to tellwhat happened.
Most fiction is written in narrative form.
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Organization of narrative
In narration, it is useful to organize theevents in chronological order or timesequence.
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Organization of narrative
Time sequence can be indicated by certaintime words (yesterday, next year,…), theuse of verb tenses and transitionalexpressions (meanwhile, at the sametime,…).
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Point of view
In writing narratives, you must decidewhether you will tell the story in the firstperson or in the third person.
If you decide to tell the story in the firstperson, you as the story teller, will beparticipating in the story.
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Point of view
If you use the third person, you are onlyobserving the events and not involved inthe story.
You should be consistent in keeping the samepoint of view throughout your narrative.
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Oral and written narrative
Although oral and written narrative have thesame basic kind of structure, they havedifferences in style, length, and the level offormality of language.
Oral narratives tend to be short, informal andanecdotal.
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Narration, Elements of a good story
Three important points should be consideredin writing a story:
• The first sentence should arouse interest.
• The events should be told in step-by-steporder.
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Narration, Elements of a good story
When the above principles are employed, astory will have these essential qualities:
1. Unity: it is about one subject.2. Coherence: all the details relate to the
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Description
A very basic way to use language is todescribe.
Description gives sense impressions- the feel,sound, taste, smell and look of things.
Also emotions- feelings such as happiness,fear,…may be described.
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Description
Description helps the reader, through hisimagination, to visualize a scene or a personor to understand a sensation or an emotion.
Good description requires careful observationand organization.
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Requirements for good description
Good descriptions have three importantqualities:
Dominant impression
Mood
Logical development
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Requirements for good description,dominant impression
The first sentence of a good description mayestablish the dominant impression. In otherwords, the sentence which establishes thedominant impression serves as the topicsentence of the paragraph.
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Requirements for good description,mood
Moods are feelings and emotions such asjoy, happiness, fear, or anxiety. Evil,sinister, good or bad qualities may also helpform part of the general mood.
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Requirements for good description,logical development
To be effective, written descriptions shouldhave an efficient and logical plan. Thewriter must follow a point of view fromwhich he views the things described.
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Explanations
An important way of presenting informationis explanation.
In the paragraph of explanation (also calledexposition, or expository paragraph) themain purpose is to explain or to interpretsomething.
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Explanations
The paragraphs of explanation are oftenused to explain a process or a procedure.Therefore, they involve the careful listing ofdetails in a logical sequence.
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Explanations
The paragraph of explanation requires aclear, strong topic sentence which indicateswhat is to be explained. The supportingsentences will give the explanation byproviding the details and examples.
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Explanations
The paragraph of explanation is sometimesused to give definition or directions. Again,it is necessary to list the details and to keepthe sequence.
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Argumentation
Argumentation means the discussion ordebate of a topic. Paragraphs ofargumentation are usually developed bylisting reasons to support the topic sentence.
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Argumentation
Some constructive uses of argument are:
To decide questions
To change viewpoints
To gain practical goals
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Methods of argumentation
There are several basic methods of reasoning:
Inductive reasoning
Deductive reasoning
Comparison or analogy
Cause and effect reasoning
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Argumentation, Inductive Reasoning
Inductive reasoning (also known as thescientific method) proceeds to a generalstatement or a conclusion from specificexamples, facts, or instances.
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Argumentation, Inductive Reasoning
The important thing to remember inemploying inductive reasoning is that youmust consider a sufficient number of cases,because no one case proves or disproves theconclusion.
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Argumentation, Deductive reasoning
Deductive reasoning which is the opposite ofinductive reasoning begins with thegeneral and moves to the specific.
To reason deductively, three steps arerequired:
1. A major premise2. A minor premise3. A conclusion
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Argumentation, Deductive reasoning
Remember that premises must be true andacceptable in relation to each other.
Example:
Major premise: Wood will float in water.
Minor premise: My pencil is made of wood.
Conclusion: My pencil will float in water.
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Argumentation, comparison or analogy
Comparison shows the similarities anddifferences between the subject andsomething well-known.
The comparisons or contrasts must be exactand true under similar conditions.
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Argumentation, cause and effectreasoning
It tells what happened to produce a result, orwhat will result from a certain situation orevent.
Three points need to be considered in cause-effect reasoning:
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Argumentation, cause and effect
1. There must be a strong and trueconnection between the cause and theeffect.
2. The cause must be strong enough toproduce the result.
3. There must be no possibility that someother cause could produce the result.
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Argumentation, argument by authority
Argument by authority uses statements fromexperts to support a line of reasoning.
Authorities must be reputable, recognizedand up to date.
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Argumentation, weak arguments
Weak arguments result from faulty reasoning.
Avoid the following faults in your argument:
Lack of understanding of terms
Misuse of facts and unreliable authority
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Argumentation, weak arguments
Opinion substituted for fact
Hasty generalization (also known asjumping to conclusion)
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The outline
An outline is an arrangement of the topics orideas of a composition in the form of anumbered list. This list shows the order andthe relationship of the ideas.
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The outline
Outlining assures that:
Your composition will be complete and inlogical order.
You eliminate the irrelevant ideas.
You avoid repetition.
You know how many paragraphs you willneed to write.
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The outline
A system of Roman and Arabic numbers aswell as letters of the alphabet are used toform an outline:
I. Main point
A. Important divisions of main point
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Writing letters
There are two types of letters that you will becalled on to write:
Personal (social) letters
Business letters
Friendly letters require the same attention thatyou give to a conversation.
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Social letters
Some points to remember in writing letters tofriends:
Ask about the person you are addressingand keep the tone cheerful and sincere.
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Social letters
Talk about yourself as little as possible.
Write as if you were having a conversationwith your friend.
Be sure your English usage is correct.
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Correct form of personal letters
The form of a letter is important because itmakes it appealing to the eye and easy toread.
The first part of a personal letter is itsheading which gives the writer’s addressand the date.
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Correct form of personal letters
The heading which appears at the upperright-hand corner of the first page may beblocked or indented:
Blocked Indented19 magnolia Street 137 Haynes Avenue
Hayward, Missouri Pocatello, Idaho
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Personal letters, salutation
The salutation is the greeting. It begins at theleft-hand margin of the letter and isfollowed by a comma.
Dear Tom,
Dear Professor Smith,
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Personal letters, body
The body is the composition of the letterand has the same organization as anycomposition. The ideas of the letter shouldbe organized in paragraphs.
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Personal letters, the closing
The closing which usually appears at thebottom right-hand corner may havedifferent forms. Choose one that meanswhat you want to say. The first letter ofthe closing is capitalized and it is followedby a comma:
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Signature
Sign the name you usually use with theperson to whom you are writing. Do notplace any punctuation after your signature.
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The correct placement of the parts of aletter
Heading …………..…………..
Salutation ……..…………………………
Body …………………………..…………………………..
Closing ………signature
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Business letters
There are several types of business letters(letters of order, request, application,…)that you may be called on to write.
The format of business letters is very similarto personal letters except for the insideaddress.
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Business letter, the inside address
The inside address is the name of thecompany you are writing to, followed bythe street address, city, state and country.
It is the same address that appears on theenvelop.
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Business letters, salutation
The salutation of a business letter is moreformal than a personal letter and is usuallyfollowed by a colon.
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Business letters, body and closing
The body of a business letter has to be brief,well stated, and easy to read.
The closing is similar to that of personalletters, but more formal. The first word iscapitalized, and it is followed by a comma.
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Types of business letters, the orderletters
An order letter has to state the exact nameof the merchandise, the price, and theamount of payment you are sending.
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Types of business letters, letters ofrequest
It is necessary that the reader of yourrequest letter has all the necessaryinformation to do what you have asked himto do. Do not forget the date, the completeaddress and a careful description of the itemor service wanted.
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Types of business letters, letters ofapplication
Letters of application are important both tothe sender and the receiver, because,usually, business and professional peopleare hired on the basis of letters ofapplication.
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Types of business letters, letters ofrecommendation
Letters of recommendation are written forstudents and colleagues to recommend themfor a job or education. If you do not knowwho is going to read the letter, write: ‘towhom it may concern’ in place of thesalutation.
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Précis and summary writing
A precise summary from a piece of originalwriting is called a précis.
Guidelines to write a good précis:
Read the original selection carefully. Searchfor the main idea.
Find the meanings of any words you do notknow.
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Précis and summary writing
Read the selection again.
Determine which parts of the selection areessential.
Write down the key words or phrases.
From your notes and your owninterpretation, write your précis.
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Organizing a research paper
The key to success in writing a researchpaper, or any lengthy paper, is organization.
The steps in planning these papers are:
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Search for material
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Organizing a research paper
Organize notes into an outline
Write an outline
Write the first draft
Document statements with footnotes.
Write a bibliography.
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Watch your English
No matter if you are writing one sentence,one paragraph or a whole article, you haveto check it for correct usage. The followingpoints have been mentioned in yourparagraph development book:
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Subject-verb agreement
Usually the presence of a compoundsubject or a modified one may causeconfusion in agreement of subject and verb.The following guides may be helpful:
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Recognize the main subject of the verb:
Other words in this category include lynch,Watt, davenport, and zeppelin.
If the compound subject is connected byand and conveys a plural idea, the pluralform of the verb must be used.
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December and January are the coldestmonths of the year.
The singular form of the verb must be usedif the compound subjects are both singularand are connected by such connectives asor, nor, either…or, neither…nor.
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John or his sister is going to attend the party.
If the compound subject is composed of twonouns differing in number or person, thesubject that is nearer the verb determinesthe verb form.
Either his brothers or Jim is planning toattend.
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Singular-plural agreement
One of the most important resources in thelibrary is the reference room.
Tense
Pay attention to the signals in sentences whichindicate the tense.
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The visitor usually begins his stay in a hoteland meets sympathetic and graciousnational.
Pronoun reference
Find out to what the pronoun refers to and ifthe reference is singular or plural.
Water levels will fall in the great lakes;consequently they will no…