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HWhole Film (Laura’s life from the beginning)

• Her friends introduce her to the drugs, she likes it and carries on taking it

• Laura takes it daily, gets addicted, party's, stops going school-messes her life up

• She steals, does prostitution to try and get money for LSD

• Her and her friends get into a big fight over money for the drug and she becomes lonely and depresses

• She keeps self harming, taking the drugs and ends up getting so intoxicated she doesn’t know what she's ding and just goes to the forest while hallucination

• He has heart failure and dies alone.

Draft 2 (Drama)

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HOpening SequenceDraft 2 (Drama)

• We follow Laura walking out of her home ( on the way to the forest and cut from different shots of her journey

• Throughout the journey we see short flash backs

• We then show CCTV of her walking into the park/forest gates

• Point of view of what she can see and hear (hallucination) which cuts from real life and her point of view.

• Laura stops quickly holds her chest and falls to the ground breathing slowly

• Front her point of view we see characters dance together

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Idea development

• We took out mental illness schizophrenia and just made her actually be possessed by demons who wanted to let the world know about her cult scaring the world so the demons can possess them too from watching the video.

• Doing deeper research of the reason of possession that demons can be related into the real world and why the certain people get possessed because they’re venerable.

• We also changed the location to somewhere more flexible as the room was small and we couldn’t move things around. Therefore we changed the to one of the group members basement as it is spacious and reliable.

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HHow the idea was improved from draft 1 to draft 2

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Idea development How the idea was improved from draft 2 to draft 3

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• We changed our genre completely from Drama to physiological Thriller.

• We have changed our whole film and only changed the flashback of our opening sequence and the ending.

• We revised a new topic on Schizophrenia and what effect Schizophrenia can have on people.

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HWhole Film

Draft 3 (Psychological Thriller)

• Main girl (Laura) parents die when she’s 2 years old- she gets put in care.

• She gets adopted at 14 by a couple.

• They make her bury the toys she keeps talking to –she carries on doing this they put her back in care

• She obviously emotional so her schizophrenia gets wore and her delusional become more bizarre and dangerous

• She burns the forest where her toys were buried and gets sent to a mental hospital

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Opening Sequence HSanel and Kaya

• Laura walks from her foster home (to the forest) (throughout this journey we see 3 flashbacks)

• FB1- Laura aged 13 blowing candles off her cake (delusional characters behind her) her foster parents discuss her behaviour

• FB2- The foster parents take picture of Laura with a box with the delusional characters next to her

• FB3- Laura looking in the mirror to the reflection of the delusional characters telling her to get them back and talk about her real parents

• When she gets to the forest she will start to dig with her hands and retrieving a box with 2 toys inside and a picture of her (from before), of her real parents, and the doll and clown while it zooms out in shots jumps to them walking up from behind her.

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What went well about the film…• Creative• Interesting• Understandable• Different

Even better if…….• We did either a drama or a thriller• To do either about schizophrenia or about how she feels about

losing her parents.

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HWhole FilmDraft 4 (Thriller)

• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girls

• Her life is disturbed by these two girls and two dolls that don’t go away

• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room

• She tries to free the spirits

• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there

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Draft 4 (Thriller)

• Laura walks into her room and puts 2 dolls into closet

• She calls someone and starts hearing noises from the closet and opens it to nothing inside as something runs behind her

• She runs to the sofa and hides under blanket when closet doors open in a sudden

• She sees the dolls hanging inside and takes them down

• She gets trapped inside the closet and lights a lighter to 2 girls behind her

How we have improved from our last opening sequence to our new one

• We have improved our opening sequence by actually building up tension towards the end and creating a thriller and scary vibe for the audience to make sure they have some kind of reaction and to get them off the edge of their seats.

• We fully researched and revised about spirits and how to thrill people so we improved our understanding and knowledge making sure we make an effective opening sequence.

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How are we contributing?

• We are all contributing by meeting up every Thursday and Friday to discuss our ideas and making sure our idea’s match up and make sense to us and to our target audience so everything won’t be confusing.

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HWhole FilmDraft 4 (Thriller)

• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 maids

• Her life is disturbed by these two girls and two dolls that don’t go away

• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room

• She tries to free the spirits

• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there

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• Laura goes home from shopping where she bought a ghost book

• As she reads the book she finds a note while hearing whispers from the closet

• She goes to check the closet and finds nothing to see 2 ghosts in the reflection of her mirror

• She runs and they scream in her face and run into the closet

• She goes to check the closet and the ghost drops a note when she picks it up to be locked inside with them

Draft 3 (Thriller)

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