Avoiding Absolute

Words and “I think that”

Absolute Words

Are all inclusive

Claim there are no exceptions

Challenges the reader to find the exceptions—which then weakens your point and raises doubt.

Weaken credibility

What words are absolute?

all

everybody

each

always

no one

nobody

never

none

every

everyone

Revise these sentences—use less

sweeping words

All studies show that video games increase visual ability and motor development.

No one has proven that violent video games can directly cause violent behavior in children.

The media always exaggerates the truth about video games and violence.

What are some less sweeping

words you could use?

most

many

much

fewsome

usually

generally

often

Ways to Avoid “I think that”

Smith supports the idea,

notion,beliefthat

The facts suggest, indicate, show that

It could besuggested,claimed,

proposed that

Ways to avoid “I think that”

Other Tips:

Proponents, advocates, supporters—use these words when referring to people who are on your side.

Opponents and critics—use these words when referring to people who disagree with your side

Revise these “I think” sentences.

I, along with many others, believe that censorship in schools infringes upon our First Amendment rights.

Other people, like Bradley Stephens and Alex Smith, think that when sensitive information is censored, students are protected.

As you continue to draft

First start today’s drafting by rereading what you’ve written.

Check for absolute words—when you locate them—revise use less sweeping words.

Also revise “I think that” statements.