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• Research skills

• Communication skills

• Helping the legislator meet the legislator’s goals

• Common sense

• Drafting

• Subject research

• Current practice

• Legal issues

• Current state and federal law

• Law in other states

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•Complex Program

•Potential conflicts with private entities

•Fiscal impact

• How did this issue come to the legislator’s attention?

• Is there a group or person the legislator would like you

to work with?

• Explain current regulation

• Make it illegal to dive without certification?

• Only regulate the organizations that certify?

• Make it illegal to provide compressed air

without certification?

• Limit restrictions to juveniles?

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• Make it illegal to dive if not certified

• Make a state agency responsible to

approve certification programs

• Make it illegal to provide compressed

air to an individual who is not

certified

SCUBA diving means . . .

Self

Contained

Underwater

Breathing

Apparatus

SCUBA diving means

descending below the surface of a

body of water while using a

self-contained underwater

breathing apparatus.

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Do we need to define “body of

water?” Body of water means . . .

Body of water means any

natural or manmade

accumulation of water

(1) The department shall make rules

that establish the criteria for designating

an organization as an approved

certification organization.

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Direct the department to ensure that the rules

require the organization to have sufficient

knowledge and expertise and to provide

adequate in-person training.

(2) The rules described in Subsection (1) shall require that the

organization:

(a) have knowledge and expertise in SCUBA diving,

consistent with industry standards; and

(b) provide in-person training to ensure that an individual

to whom the organization grants certification has the

knowledge and skills necessary to safely engage in

SCUBA diving.

NAUI

PADI

(3) In establishing the criteria described

in Subsection (1), the department shall

seek input from at least two nationally

recognized SCUBA certification

organizations.

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(4) The department shall designate an organization as an approved certification organization if the organization:

(a) applies for the designation; and

(b) complies with the requirements established by the department under Subsection (1).

• Make it illegal to dive if not certified

• Make a state agency responsible to approve

certification programs

• Make it illegal to provide compressed air to

an individual who is not certified

• Make it a class B misdemeanor to SCUBA dive if not certified by an approved certification organization

• Make an exception for a trainee

• “Certified Instructor” means an individual designated as a SCUBA instructor by an approvedcertification organization.

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(1) Except as provided in Subsection (2), an individual who engages in SCUBA diving is guilty of a class B misdemeanor if the individual is not certified by an approved certification organization to engage in SCUBA diving.

(2) An individual described in Subsection (1) is not guilty if the individual is SCUBA diving with a certified instructor.

AND

OR

(1) A person may not engage in SCUBA diving if the person:(a) is not certified; ____(b) does not have insurance that

covers treatment in a hyperbaric chamber.

(1) A person may not engage in SCUBA diving if the person:(a) is not certified; or(b) does not have insurance that

covers treatment in a hyperbaric chamber.

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(1) A person may not engage in SCUBA diving unless the person:(a) is certified; ____(b) has insurance that covers

treatment in a hyperbaric chamber.

(1) A person may not engage in SCUBA diving unless the person:(a) is certified; and(b) has insurance that covers

treatment in a hyperbaric chamber.

• Make it illegal to dive if not certified

• Make a state agency responsible to approve

certification programs

• Make it illegal to provide compressed air to

an individual who is not certified

Make it a class B misdemeanor to do either of the following:

• Give a SCUBA cylinder with pressurized air to someone who isn’t certified

• Add pressurized air to a SCUBA cylinder for someone who isn’t certified

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(1) A person is guilty of a class B misdemeanor if the person:

(a) provides a SCUBA cylinder that contains pressurized air to an individual who is not certified; or

(b) adds pressurized air into a SCUBA cylinder for an individual who is not certified.

“Air”

Air

• 78.09% nitrogen• 20.95% oxygen• 0.93% argon • 0.039% CO2

• small amounts of other gases

“Nitrox”

Air

• Oxygen percentage increases (e.g. 32%)

• Nitrogen percentage decreases

Nitrox

“Trimix”

Air Trimix

Contains oxygen, nitrogen, and helium Nitrox

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“Air” means: “Air” means:(a) oxygen; or(b) a combination of gases that

includes oxygen.

Use consistent terms . . .

• Officer/Official

• Implement/Adopt

• Review/Consider

• Factors/Criteria

• Person/Individual

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Boat WatercraftAquatic Equipment

Use correct terms . . . Think about how something could be misread . . .

A “revolting” man . . .

Think about potential loopholes . . .

Think about potential impact . . .

and implementation

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Take a break and come back to it . . .

Have others review your language . . .

Don’t be prideful . . .

Learn from your mistakes –and let them go . . .

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Learn from others’ mistakes . . .. . . Enjoy it!

Thomas R. Vaughn

Office of Legislative Research & General Counsel

W210 House Building

Utah State Capitol Complex

Salt Lake City, Utah 84114

[email protected]

801-538-1032

Thank you!Attributions

1. Cover slide – Underwater Vector Background by webdesignhotVectoropenstock.com; Diver photo courtesy of Thomas R. Vaughn

2. Drafting well – Sea turtle image courtesy of Pixabay3. Educating yourself – Picture courtesy of Pixabay4. Issues – Lionfish image courtesy of Pixabay5. What does the sponsor want? – Shark image courtesy of Pixabay6. Legislator’s Choices – Openclipart7. Diving Accident – Pixabay8. Discussing options – SCUBA mask image courtesy of Openclipart9. SCUBA diving means – Image courtesy of Thomas R. Vaughn10. SCUBA – openclipart.com11. Girl/Puddle – Pixabay12. PADI / NAUI – Image courtesy of Pixabay13. Missing Provisions – Diver image courtesy of openclipart; Underwater Vector

Background by webdesignhot, Vectoropenstock.com; Treasure image courtesy of 14. Stuart Miles at FreeDigitalPhotos.net; Flashlight image courtesy of Thomas R.

Vaughn

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Attributions Cont’d

15. Air, Nitrox, Trimix – SCUBA cylinder images courtesy of Openclipart16. Principles – Image courtesy of Pixabay17. Use correct terms – Images courtesy of Pixabay18. Think about potential loopholes – Buoy image courtesy of Pixabay; Rope images

courtesy of Thomas R. Vaughn19. Think about impact and implementation – Image courtesy of Danilo Rizzuti at

FreeDigitalPhotos.net20. Take a break and come back to it – Image courtesy of fantasista at

FreeDigitalPhotos.net21. Have others review your language – Image courtesy of stockimages at

FreeDigitalPhotos.net22. Don’t be prideful – Image courtesy of Darren Robertson at

FreeDigitalPhotos.net23. Enjoy it! – Image courtesy of Pixabay


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