What I changed

in my third draft

I removed the red box with the

promotion as I thought it didn’t

make the magazine look professional

I changed the background photo because the three

girls looked to edited as bits of the top of

their hair were left out during the editing

process. In my third draft I just edited a

few minor things and placed the image in.

After I removed the red circle I changed the length of the faded rectangle and the font to stretch across the top like a skyline. By

doing this it made it easier to read and a lot more professional looking

which was my aim.

I moved the barcode and prices over to the left hand side of the page. I then moved the

symbols to the right except for the H Magazine logo, I made it bigger and placed

it beside the masthead and the issue number and date was placed at the top

beside the skyline. I think this was a smart move as it makes the front cover more eye-

catching.

I moved the cover line La Cricca across the

page facing diagonally to make it stand out more as it splashes

across the page. I then moved the smaller

cover-lines about and rotated some to make it

different and not too straight as it looks quite

boring like that.