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OLDFIRST DRAFT

CHANGESTo start with, Helen decided the image looked amateur so I decided to scrap the image and focus on having more stories inside my magazine. I then aligned all the text and made the artist names all of a similar size to make the page look more professional.

I then decided to change the right hand corner of the page. I figured that the album covers looked very childish and took away that element of professionalism from the page therefore I decided to remove this part and cerate a competitions section followed by a subscription box which is a common convention on magazines, specifically music.

Finally, I added a reviews section in place of the lost album cover section. By doing this I ensured m magazine still had a vital convention and page within it but with the loss of the CD covers I helped make the page look more professional.