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1. A supermarket chain is planning to build a new store on land which is currently used by local youngsters to play sport, and has a children’s playground.

The supermarket chain says that it will create up to 60 jobs and will give shoppers more choices. Those opposing the plan believe it will put local shops out of business and destroy a valuable amenity for youngsters.

The newspaper has invited readers to give their views on the plan.

Write your letter, giving reasons why you support or oppose the plan. You may wish to develop the arguments above, but can also give other views as well. [20]

2. Many older people don’t use computers or the internet, either because they don’t see any value in them or because they are afraid of modern technology.

You have been asked to give a talk to a group of older people to persuade them to use computers and the internet.

Some of the benefits of the computer and the internet that your talk might include are: • keeping in touch with distant relatives and friends; • getting information on hobbies or interests.

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After many thousands of years without tablet

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Learn how to start with an action (–ing) word: Adapting, considering, featuring, bearing in mind

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I am interested in the position of extra summer staff, as listed on your website. I am currently in Year 11 at Uplands College and am looking for an exciting job for the summer before I begin at sixth form. I have some experience of working with younger children as I babysit regularly and also buddy one of the Year 7 forms every week in my school, so I would be eager to contribute my skills to your company.

Most recently, I have been helping an eleven year old girl, who is struggling with reading: I listen to her read each week and help her with the words she doesn’t understand. Supporting people who are younger than me is certainly a rewarding experience, and I would love to continue with this type of work in the summer.

Furthermore, I have experience working with adults as I have a part-time job at Sainsbury’s. My responsibilities include operating the tills, as well as dealing with customers’ questions. Consequently, I have developed a strong sense of patience and awareness about how to interact with the general public, two skills that will be important in this position. During my time at work, I am part of a team of adults, working closely with a team manager and my colleagues. This experience has taught me how to be cooperative and responsible.

In addition to working with students in the year 7 tutor group, I have taught horse-riding lessons and barn safety to children at my local stables. Through this experience, I have developed an understanding of how to help children to follow instructions and have fun, while staying safe.

Last but not least, I love outdoor activities and regularly participate in several clubs including horse riding, swimming, and tennis. I also have experience of canoeing and rock-climbing. Although I might need some training in the activities you offer, I can assure you that I will bring plenty of enthusiasm.

The position sounds like a wonderful opportunity that I am eager to be involved in. I absolutely love working with children, and also have a passion for activities, so it’s certainly a job I would be very excited to have. Thank you so much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Staying Safe on the Internet

Can’t live without Facebook and MSN? Love reading celebrity blogs? How would you do your homework without researching on the internet? There are so many benefits to using the internet, but an equal number of dangers. Do you know how to stay safe on the internet?

Beware of the information you give about yourself

Don't give out any personal information online as people may use it to contact you when you don't want them to.

Unless you have an adult's permission, never give out:

• Your real name or your friends' names • Your home, school or email address • Your home or mobile phone numbers • A photo of yourself • Your parents' bank or credit card details

Stranger Danger

Don't arrange to meet anyone you've met online, no matter how well you think you know them, without your parent’s permission. Remember that meeting someone you've only been in touch with online can be dangerous as they may have been lying about who they are and how old they are. Of course this works both ways. You also always need to tell the truth. Claiming to be 18 when you are only 14 could lead to tricky situations.

Privacy

Don’t let the ghost of internet past come back to haunt you. Remember that what you post on the internet may seem funny and amusing at the time, but a few weeks down the line you may wish to forget about “that photo”. Let’s be honest, some things are best kept private.

Beware what you download

If there is one thing to avoid it’s a cross parent whose computer now has a virus because you decided to download something dodgy. No one in this situation is a winner. You are probably grounded and you can’t even use the computer to share the misery with your friends.

Remember the internet is great, but only if you stay safe whilst using it.

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Have a go at one of these: Many older people don’t use computers or the internet, either because they don’t see any value in

them or because they are afraid of modern technology. You have been asked to give a talk to a group of older people to persuade them to use computers

and the internet. Some of the benefits of the computer and the internet that your talk might include are: • keeping in touch with distant relatives and friends; • getting information on hobbies or interests. Write what you would say.

Students from your school/college have been selected to join an expedition to a remote part of the world. Your year group is debating whether to raise money to support this. Some students believe the expedition should be supported because of the opportunities it offers all those involved. Others disagree, saying that there are more deserving local charities. You take part in the debate. Write the speech you would make to your year group.

Your school or college has agreed to raise money for a charity. You decide that you will give a talk to your fellow students to persuade them to agree to raise money for the charity of your choice. Write what you will say to them, explaining why your choice of charity is a good one, and giving suggestions about the fund-raising events that could be held. You have to give a talk to your class with the title ‘Mobile phones: a blessing or a curse?’ Write what you would say.

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B2. The Rough Guide is a guide-book for tourists which prides itself on giving frank and honest opinions about places, both the positive and the negative.

Write an entry about a place you know well for The Rough Guide, including details the tourist board would like visitors to see, but also providing an insider’s view of any less attractive features.

Once a popular spa resort, Royal Tunbridge Wells lies 30 miles south of London in Kent. You can explore the beautiful architecture of The Pantiles and wander round the independent shops, cafés and restaurants. Unless you’re prepared to return on a summer evening for the Jazz Festival, The Pantiles can seem quiet. The High Street boasts boutiques and jewellery shops, but you can also find second-hand bookshops and cafés.

Since it is hilly, expect a long walk up along the High Street, past the railway station. At the top of the hill is the modern shopping centre with all the usual chain-stores. Next to the indoor shopping centre is a pedestrian street where people can sit outside at a café. While there are lots of restaurants, some are expensive.

On a less positive note, the town, outside the Pantiles, is much like any other, with the normal selection of chain stores, £1 stores and sports shops. The out- of- town shopping centre is one to be avoided and traffic can be a real headache around rush hour. For cheap parking, use one of the supermarkets and walk into the centre. Just don’t forget to buy something in store or you may find yourself clamped! Parking in the centre is almost impossible and we would advise not even to try during business hours.

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