Complexities of Language

Diction and Imagery

Literary Artists (the good ones at least) choose their words carefully…

It is helpful to consider the things they could’ve done, but chose NOT to…

…and then ask yourself why…

EXAMPLE:Quote: “Baby, baby, baby…oooohhhh” (J. Bieber)

C but D: the “artist” could’ve said “darling, darling, darling”…

Could've but Didn't…

Even the most basic elements of language are in fact very complex.

Diction (word choice) is one of these basic ingredients.

Reasons for employing different types of diction:To communicate with denotative accuracyTo evoke emotionsTo suggest connections

Complexities of Language

High or Formal DictionNeutral DictionInformal or Low Diction

Levels of Diction

Creates an elevated toneFree from slang, idioms, colloquialisms, and

contractionsOften features polysyllabic words,

sophisticated syntax, and elegant word choice

High / Formal Diction

“Discerning the impracticable state of the poor culprit’s mind, the elder clergyman, who had carefully prepared himself for the occasion, addressed to the multitude a discourse on sin, in all its branches, but with continual reference to the ignominious letter. So forcibly did he dwell upon this symbol, for the hour or more during which his periods were rolling over the people’s heads, that it assumed new terrors in their imagination, and seemed to derive its scarlet hue from the flames of the infernal pit.”

Nathaniel Hawthorne – The Scarlet Letter

High / Formal Diction

Uses standard language and vocabularyWithout elaborate wordsMay include contractions

Neutral Diction

“The shark swung over and the old man saw his eye was not alive and then he swung over once again, wrapping himself in two loops of the rope. The old man knew that he was dead but the shark would not accept it. Then on his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plowed over the water as a speedboat does. The water was white where his tail beat it and three-quarters of his body was clear above the water when the rope came taut, shivered, and then snapped. The shark lay quietly for a little while on the surface and the old man watched him. Then he went down very slowly.”

Ernest Hemingway – The Old Man and the Sea

Neutral Diction

The language of everyday useRelaxed and conversationalIncludes simple and common words, idioms,

slang, jargon, and contractions.

Low / Informal Diction

“Three quarts of milk. That’s what was in the icebox yesterday. Three whole quarts. Now they ain’t none. Not a drop. I don’t mind folks coming in and getting what they want, but three quarts of milk! What the devil does anybody need with three quarts of milk?”

Toni Morrison – The Bluest Eye

Low / Informal Diction

SlangColloquial ExpressionsJargonDialectConcrete DictionAbstract DictionDenotationConnotation

Types of Diction

Slang Colloquial Expressions

Jargon Dialect

Key features:

•Recently coined•Informal•ephemeral

•non-standard•Regional•Informal / conversational

•Common to a particular trade, profession, or pursuit

•Non-standard•Subgroup of a language•unique vocabulary and grammar

Examples OMG(Oh my God)

LOL(Laughing out loud)

Noob(New person)

“Y’all” (southern U.S.)

“Rubbish”(UK)

Nautical Terms

“cuddy” – a cabin on a ship

“taffrail” – one of a ship’s railings

“mizzen” – a mast

Newfie English

What are ye at?: or "Wadda ya'at b'y?" 

("What are you doing?“)

Low / Informal Diction

Concrete DictionSpecific words that describe physical qualities

or conditions“Something soft and furry moved around her

ankles”“He was black all over, deep silky black, and his

eyes, pointing down toward his nose were bluish green.”

Abstract DictionDenotes ideas, emotions, conditions, or

concepts that are intangibleimpenetrable / incredible / inscrutable /

inconceivable / unfathomable

Concrete vs. Abstract Diction

DenotationThe exact, literal definition of a word Independent of any emotional association or

secondary meaningConnotation

The implicit, rather than explicit meaning of a word

Suggestions, associations, and emotional overtones attached to a word

HOUSE HOME

Denotation vs. Connotation

We often think of imagery in writing as something you can SEE.

But in actuality, it must be considered as anything you can IMAGINE.

IMAGERY: concrete / abstract

Concrete Imagery: The 5 Senses

Abstract Imagery: The intangible

BEAUTY JUSTICE FAITH DOUBTGUILT CONFIDENCE PARANOIAVIOLENCE NOSTALGIA

FREEDOMCOMPASSION EPHEMERALITY

Concreteit was a summer night with a billion

sparkling stars above,and crickets and frogs singing in the damp marshes beyond my back porch.__________________________

it was a dark night deep in winter when a three-foot blanket of snow covered everything like a heavy white comforter, and the stillness was broken only by the clanging church bells echoing off the still brick buildings and filling the street.

the night was beautiful

Which type of Imagery is more effective?

Abstract

Lay your sleeping head, my love, Human on my faithless arm; Time and fevers burn away Individual beauty from Thoughtful children, and the grave Proves the child ephemeral: But in my arms till break of day Let the living creature lie, Mortal, guilty, but to me The entirely beautiful.

So is ABSTRACT always bad?