The double page spread does not look musical. The reader wouldn’t know that they were band and wouldn’t think it had to do with music.

The picture and the writing doesn’t stand out so the readers will not be attracted to the page and will not want to read it

There is not page number or the date at the bottom corner of the page.

The writing is hard to read. Make sure that it doesn’t go over to the brick wall and on to the paint splat brush.

The brush paint splat does not going with theme or with the rest of the page, it looks out of place.