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Opening Sequence Genre: Drama Ina Bayson- Blue Ramina Arlauskaite- Red Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu- Green Everyone- White Part A Quizzical Draft 3 of the Opening Sequence
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Opening SequenceGenre: Drama

Ina Bayson- BlueRamina Arlauskaite- RedCarolle Mafuta-Nkalu- GreenEveryone- White

Part A

Quizzical

Draft 3 of the Opening Sequence

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Ramina’s Brainstorm• A young girl + boyfriend• Go to the same school• Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the boy’s

girlfriend• The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend

• In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on her mouth.

Part B

WWWIts all in short bullet pointsEasy to understand

EBITo put more description

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Carolle’s Brainstorms

• The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying• *flashback*• Girl and boy kissing while watching TV• Her phone rings and boy takes it off her• Tries to hit her• *flash forward*• Shows her trying to cut herself again

Part B

WWWThere’s flashbacks and flash-forwardsShowing what happened beforeThe start and the finish is the same (making audience know it about the girl)

EBINot unique- make it more uniqueShowing too much- only pieces of puzzle

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Ina’s Brainstorm

• Girlfriend+Boyfriend

• Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe)• She accepts• Then, flash-forward:• of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding

hands)• Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl

Part B

WWWExplains what will happen in itIt have flash forward

EBITo add more details

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Strongest Idea

Ramina’s Idea• It have conflict

– Most drama films have conflict

– It have violence

Ina’s Idea• It have suspicions

– Drama films can have suspicions between characters

• Have transitions– Flash-forward to show what

happened afterwards

Part B

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Final Idea Draft 1

• Used Ramina and Ina’s Idea together:

• Girlfriend + Boyfriend• Having a date, then he proposes to her• Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily• He putting the ring in her finger

*Flash forward*• The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl talking

and play fighting• She calls him, he look at his phone and put it on silent

Part B

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Final Idea Draft 2Our new idea from making our opening sequence better.

Girlfriend and Boyfriend Relationship• [Showing the day and time] Meeting up in a park (Roundwood Park), he

(John) will say that he have a surprise for her• He takes out the ring and proposed to her (Lily) and she accepted his

proposal.

• [Next day, showing the day and time] John and another girl (Nevaeh/close friend) are in the same park, talking and playing around.

• Lily saw John and Nevaeh and was shocked, thinking why he would do this.

Part B

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Genre: Drama

Drama

Dealing with emotional themes

Real life situations

Consists of conflict in some scenes between characters

ThemesAddictionPovertyViolenceetc

Sub genreRomanceTragedyCrimeDocudrama (when a character act an event and exaggerates it a bit)

Part C

Fictional Stories

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Why did we chose this genre,example

• Happens in real life– Shows that not all situations are perfect

• Affects young married couples (not all)– Showing that they are still too young

Part C

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Conventions of Drama

Conventions

Love

Conflict between characters

Emotional scenes

Deep emotions

Can have violence

Struggling (pain)

Part C

Arguments

Can be based in real life

Audiences can/might relate to it

Moral Lessons

Misunderstanding

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Inspirational filmsMy Amnesia Girl

• Director: – Cathy Garcia-Molina

• Casts:– John Lloyd Cruz– Tony Gonzaga– Carlos Agassi– Etc.

• Distributed by:– Star Cinema Magic

• Released Date:– 24th November 2010

• Language:– Tagalog– English

Genre: Drama, Romance, and Comedy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmkYM1gFI

Part D

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Inspirational SceneWhen she’s recalling her memory when her Fiancée didn’t come to their wedding day

She and her old Boyfriend (must be husband) saw each other again

She told him that she didn’t lost her memory at all

She acts like she don't know him (lost her memory)

Shocked that she doesn't remember him

Long shot of her waiting for her Groom

Mid shot of her heartbroken

She told him the truth

He is shocked that she lied to her

Part D

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Why is this film inspiring?

• This film is inspiring for me, because…– Involves a relationship– Some scenes are very dramatic• When he found out that she was lying to him that she

lost her memories.• She gets heartbroken when he runaway from their

wedding day.• Leaving her at the altar.

– Involves love, but she don’t want to get hurt by the same guy.

Part D

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I Love You To Death

• Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to extremes when she finds he has been cheating.

Long shot of Rosalee enter the library

Mid shot of her with books

Two shot of Rosalee and the librarian

Mid shot of Rosalee point of view shot as she see’s her husband kissing another women

Mid shot of her looking at books to borrow from the library

Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheating

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Vp-Z0u4Rhs&feature=related

Time- 7:51/8:55

Part D

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Character Representation

Mid shot of her smiling and she seems very happy

Two shot, Serving her husband a drink

Two shot, they are having conversation

Two shot, she loves being next to her husband (protection)

Two shot, kissing her husband

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Vp-Z0u4Rhs&feature=related

Good/happy wife

Part D

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Rosalee hatred towards her husband because he cheated on her, she and her mother planning to kill her husband by over dose the food with sleeping pills, and different ingredient.

Character Representation

Angry housewife

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=related

Time- 00:00/00:53

Part D

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Why is this film inspiring?

• Its inspiring because…– At first everything was lovely– There are deep emotions• When she found out that he’s cheating

– Very dramatic, revenge• Revenge to her husband

Part D

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Uslovia Kontrakta

This film is a Russian film about two married couple, she lies to her husband she cant afford having babies because she has problems ( the truth is she lies to him because she doesn't wants to ruin her body.)

A girl who gets married her sister accidently falls down on the glass table and has problems with her brainstorm.

She Wants to get money to get the oppression done by her fiancé does not help her so she dumps him. Goes to another city to get a job she finds a job where she gives birth a gives away her baby to another people who cant afford them. So she decided to do it and get the money from the people who wants the baby. Afterwards the man gets into relationship with the girl and gets divorced with his wife finding out she was lying.

Part D

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The Part’s Inspired me...

When her sister falls down on the glass table.

She dumps her boyfriend for being selfish.

Talks to her best friend; decides to movie into a another country to find a job.

The fiancée talks to the girl showing the place she will be living in.

Part D

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When she decides to give away her baby.

He finds out the truth that his fiancée was lying and ends the relationship.

When she gives birth to a baby girl.

The end of them staying together.

Part D

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Why is this film inspiring?

• It’s inspiring because…– There are conflict between characters– Jealousy• Jealous about the other woman as she thinks that the

woman is going to take her fiancée away

– Moral Lesson • Losing her virginity

Part D

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Chosen theme, brainstorm for opening

• Theme: Young Couples

Brainstorm

Flash forwards

Clips of after he proposed to her

Close up

Showing emotions of a character/s

Boyfriend + Girlfriend

Young and became engaged

Cheating in a relationship

Mid-shot

He took his phone out to see who called him

POV

Other girl seeing them together + proposing

Part E

Misunderstanding

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Research about our theme: Young couples Draft 1

• There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their partner.

• So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection wins out.

• Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity.

• In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance that people will later come to realize that they didn’t really know themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have grown apart from their partner.

Part F

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Research about our theme: Young couples Draft 2

• Adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost are either married or living with their partner.

• Many young couples rush to marry because they believe they're ready for the long-term commitment, Later on they face many difficulties like;

Verbal Miscommunication• Usually one partner will interrupt

the other to find fault, debate the truth or side-track to a new topic during the argument.

Nonverbal Communication• Women are often more adept at reading

nonverbal communication• jump to conclusions about what their

partner is thinking about before the partner has a chance to speak.

Incompatible

• teenagers realize they just want different things

Part F

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Research about our theme: young couple Draft 2

Family problems

Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection and to feel loved by someone.

• Favouring or disfavouring family members

• Divorce • Communication problems

In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically

Sleepover with friends and sharing secrets

First love/ relationship Playing ball with friends

School/education Future careers

Part F


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