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Opening Sequence Genre: Drama Ina Bayson- Blue Carolle Mafuta- Nkalu- Green Everyone- White Part A Draft 4 of the Opening Sequence Unrevealed Secret
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Opening SequenceGenre: Drama

Ina Bayson- BlueCarolle Mafuta-Nkalu- GreenEveryone- White

Part A Draft 4 of the Opening Sequence

Unrevealed Secret

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Carolle’s Brainstorms

• The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying• *flashback*• Girl and boy kissing while watching TV• Her phone rings and boy takes it off her• Tries to hit her• *flash forward*• Shows her trying to cut herself again

Part B

WWWThere’s flashbacks and flash-forwardsShowing what happened beforeThe start and the finish is the same (making audience know it about the girl)

EBINot unique- make it more uniqueShowing too much- only pieces of puzzle

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Ina’s Brainstorm

• Girlfriend+Boyfriend

• Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe)• She accepts• Then, flash-forward:• of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding

hands)• Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl

Part B

WWWExplains what will happen in itIt have flash forward

EBITo add more details

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Strongest Idea

Ina’s Idea• It have suspicions

– Drama films can have suspicions between characters

• Have transitions– Flash-forward to show what happened afterwards

Part B

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Final Idea Draft 1

• Used Ramina and Ina’s Idea together:

• Girlfriend + Boyfriend• Having a date, then he proposes to her• Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily• He putting the ring in her finger

*Flash forward*• The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl talking

and play fighting• She calls him, he look at his phone and put it on silent

Part B

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Final Idea Draft 2Our new idea from making our opening sequence better.

Girlfriend and Boyfriend Relationship• [Showing the day and time] Meeting up in a park (Roundwood Park), he

(John) will say that he have a surprise for her• He takes out the ring and proposed to her (Lily) and she accepted his

proposal.

• [Next day, showing the day and time] John and another girl (Nevaeh/close friend) are in the same park, talking and playing around.

• Lily saw John and Nevaeh and was shocked, thinking why he would do this.

Part B

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Genre: Drama

Drama

Dealing with emotional themes

Real life situations

Consists of conflict in some scenes between characters

ThemesAddictionPovertyViolenceetc

Sub genreRomanceTragedyCrimeDocudrama (when a character act an event and exaggerates it a bit)

Part C

Fictional Stories

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Why did we chose this genre,example

• Happens in real life– Shows that not all situations are perfect

• Affects young married couples (not all)– Showing that they are still too young

Part C

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Conventions of Drama

Conventions

Love

Conflict between characters

Emotional scenes

Deep emotions

Can have violence

Struggling (pain)

Part C

Arguments

Can be based in real life

Audiences can/might relate to it

Moral Lessons

Misunderstanding

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Inspirational filmsMy Amnesia Girl

• Director: – Cathy Garcia-Molina

• Casts:– John Lloyd Cruz– Tony Gonzaga– Carlos Agassi– Etc.

• Distributed by:– Star Cinema Magic

• Released Date:– 24th November 2010

• Language:– Tagalog– English

Genre: Drama, Romance, and Comedy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmkYM1gFI

Part D

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Inspirational SceneWhen she’s recalling her memory when her Fiancée didn’t come to their wedding day

She and her old Boyfriend (must be husband) saw each other again

She told him that she didn’t lost her memory at all

She acts like she don't know him (lost her memory)

Shocked that she doesn't remember him

Long shot of her waiting for her Groom

Mid shot of her heartbroken

She told him the truth

He is shocked that she lied to her

Part D

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Why is this film inspiring?

• This film is inspiring for me, because…– Involves a relationship– Some scenes are very dramatic• When he found out that she was lying to him that she

lost her memories.• She gets heartbroken when he runaway from their

wedding day.• Leaving her at the altar.

– Involves love, but she don’t want to get hurt by the same guy.

Part D

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I Love You To Death

• Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to extremes when she finds he has been cheating.

Long shot of Rosalee enter the library

Mid shot of her with books

Two shot of Rosalee and the librarian

Mid shot of Rosalee point of view shot as she see’s her husband kissing another women

Mid shot of her looking at books to borrow from the library

Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheating

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Vp-Z0u4Rhs&feature=related

Time- 7:51/8:55

Part D

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Character Representation

Mid shot of her smiling and she seems very happy

Two shot, Serving her husband a drink

Two shot, they are having conversation

Two shot, she loves being next to her husband (protection)

Two shot, kissing her husband

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Vp-Z0u4Rhs&feature=related

Good/happy wife

Part D

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Rosalee hatred towards her husband because he cheated on her, she and her mother planning to kill her husband by over dose the food with sleeping pills, and different ingredient.

Character Representation

Angry housewife

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=related

Time- 00:00/00:53

Part D

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Why is this film inspiring?

• Its inspiring because…– At first everything was lovely– There are deep emotions• When she found out that he’s cheating

– Very dramatic, revenge• Revenge to her husband

Part D


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