This contents page did not have a enough variety of images which made it look less like contents page. In professional magazines such as Q there is much more of variety of images which makes the reader more interested.

In a professional magazine there are not 10 pages which are what my magazine has. By adding more pages and not having them one after each will make my magazine look more professional.

There are no photo credits on the page; this means the reader will not know who is in the images and who took them.

Make the editorial pillars more presentable and professional as it looks really rushed and to simple.

Maybe add an editor’s note, so that the readers knew who edited the magazine and put it all together.

Add a slug in so the reader knows the date the magazine was made and even put the logo or the masthead in the corner of the page.