-should make the tone of the drawing more darker, so that the highlights and the shadows have more contrast

darken shadowed area more, so there is more contrast

too

muc

h lin

es, s

houl

d be

mor

e bl

ocky

and

dar

k..

bette

r ton

e, e

ntire

ly d

arke

r so

the

high

light

s is

see

m m

ore

clea

rly th

an o

ther

s.

shad

owed

are

a co

uld

be m

ore

emph

asize

d

bette

r ton

e an

d co

ntra

st, b

ut s

houl

d be

mor

e da

rker

in a

reas

. wor

k on

fore

-sh

orte

ning

on

foot

good proportion and fore-shortening, make the overall tone darker to have a higher contrast between the dark and the light.

much better contrast and tone, the foreshortening and placing of the legs could have been changed.

portr

ait l

ooki

ng a

bove

. mor

e fo

resh

orte

ning

on

the

uppe

r bod

y an

d th

e fa

ce w

ould

hav

e m

ade

the

“”lo

okin

g ab

ove”

obv

ious

better tonal differences in areas, there can be seen very dark areas. there should have been darker areas adding on to the very dark areas covering the gray paper color (home based work)

Hom

e ba

sed

wor

k 7m

ins.

sho

rt sk

etch

. wor

k on

fore

shor

teni

ng o

f rig

ht fo

ot. o

vera

ll, th

e dr

awin

g is

dar

k, b

ut n

o hi

ghlig

hts

so lo

oks

dull

home based work. short sketch of about 10mins. the shadows and highlights should have made the arms on the body “pop out”. there should have been more of a gradation of shadows, not just one dull black block.