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Fragments & Comma Splices
Sentence FragmentsComplete sentences consist of an independent clause
(can stand alone) that includes a subject and a verb.
A sentence fragment is missing a subject, a complete verb (verb + helping verb), or necessary articles, or begins with a conjunction.
Test for a fragmentStep 1: Does the clause have a subject?
No: it is a fragmentYes: Go to step 2
Step 2: Does the clause have a verb?No: it is a fragmentYes: Go to step 3
Step 3: Does the clause begin with a subordinating conjunction or preposition?
No: You have a complete sentence.Yes: The clause is a fragment.
Examples:
I fell off the curb. On my way to the store.
Student falls off ladder.
Although he fell off the ladder.
Repair fragments by
Attaching the fragment to a nearby sentence or making the fragment a complete sentence.
I fell off the curb on my way to the store. I fell off the curb. I was on my way to the store.
OR Adding whatever the phrase/clause is missing.
Student falls off ladder = A student fell of a ladder.Although he fell off the ladder = Although he fell off
the ladder, he didn’t get hurt.
Comma SpliceA comma splice occurs when two or more independent
clauses (can stand alone) are incorrectly joined by a comma.
Splice:We have a code orange smog alert today, the air is
unhealthy for sensitive groups.
Repair comma splices by Adding a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, for, etc.)
We have a code orange smog alert today, so the air is unhealthy for sensitive groups.
OR Using a semicolon or period to make the clauses separate
sentences.
We have a code orange smog alert today; the air is unhealthy for sensitive groups.
We have a code orange smog alert today. The air is unhealthy for sensitive groups.
Be careful with however, therefore, thus, hence, etc.; these are not coordinating conjunctions.
We have a code orange smog alert today,therefore the air is unhealthy for sensitive groups. (comma splice)
We have a code orange smog alert today, however, healthy people are not at risk. (comma splice)
Fused Sentence
A fused sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses (can stand alone) are joined by NO punctuation.
Fused:We have a code orange smog alert today the air is
unhealthy for sensitive groups.
Fix a fused sentence using the same techniques used to fix comma splices.
Practice
We went to the mall however we didn’t buy anything.
John built a shed out back he did it by himself.