Hamburger Model Lesson.notebook
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The Hamburger Model for Persuasive Writing
**Based on the College of William & Mary's, Lesson 5, Journeys & Destinations, p5561
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Let's discuss hamburgers!
What are the parts of a hamburger?
What are some different ingredients that can be included in a hamburger?
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We can think of the parts of a
hamburger when we're writing a paragraph.
Check it out!
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= Conclusion
= 3 Reasons for your opinion
= Introduction Sentence (State your opinion)
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A hamburger with just a top bun, meat, and a bottom bun would be awfully dry and tasteless, right?
The same's true of a paragraph!
We need details and elaboration to support each of our reasons. We can think of these details/elaboration as the fixings!
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= Conclusion
= 3 Reasons for your opinion
= Introduction Sentence (State your opinion)
Details/Elaboration
Details/Elaboration
Much Better, Huh!?
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We can use a graphic organizer of the Hamburger Model to help us plan our writing:
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Overall, it is not a good idea to give homework on weekends.
1) They have too many other things to do.
2) They have worked hard the other nights of the week and need a break.
3) Most homework is just busy work anyway.
I don't think students should be given homework on the weekends.
Directions:1) Read the paragraph. Underline the introduction in green, the reasons in blue, and the conclusion in red. Pull the parts of the Hamburger Model to see if you're right!
Introduction
Reasons
Conclusion
I don't think students should be given homework on the weekends. They have too many other things to do. They have worked hard the other nights of the week and need a break. Most homework is just busy work anyway. Overall, it is not a good idea to give homework on weekends.
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I don't think students should be given homework on the weekends.
They have too many other things to do.
They have worked hard the other nights of the week and need a break.
Most homework is just busy work anyway.
Elaboration:
Elaboration:
Elaboration:
Elaboration:
Elaboration:
Elaboration:
Overall, it is not a good idea to give homework on weekends.
Help the writer add some details/elaboration for each reason:
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Should schools have soda machines?
Directions: Place the sentences in the right order to form a goodhamburger paragraph.
Jumbled Paragraph
I think schools should not have soda machines available.
First, they could lead to students consuming more sugar.
Kids already eat too much sugar and added sugar would make them hyper.
Second, kids would probably drink soda instead of juice, milk, and water.
Soda machines could also lead to greater messes in the cafeteria.
So you see, having soda machines would be bad more students and schools.
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Should schools have soda machines?
Jumbled Paragraph KEY
I think schools should not have soda machines available.
Kids already eat too much sugar and added sugar would make them hyper.
Second, kids would probably drink soda instead of juice, milk, and water.
Soda machines could also lead to greater messes in the cafeteria.
So you see, having soda machines would be bad more students and schools.
First, they could lead to students consuming more sugar.
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