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    C` wm wratm gh ahtr`cudta`h0 [mbb, wm c` h`t wratm gh mssgy-stybm ahtr`cudta`h. Semrm as h`

    ngdlkr`uhc `r `paha`h t` wratm sahdm tem tgsl as h`t gh mssgy nut ahstmgc g suoo ry ` fgdts .

    T`, gkgah, c` wm wratm gh ahtr`cudta`h0 Sem ghswmr as pr`ngnby yms nmdgusm ny kavahk tem sunjmdt

    ghc rghkm

    `

    tem krgpe, tgnbm, degrt, ogp `r cagkrgo, at dgh

    7.

    d`hhmdt

    tem cmsdrapt a`h t` tem rmgb atmo tem Sgsl @hm) `r tem tgsl

    d`hdmpt

    ny g

    suoogry).

    embp us gv`ac rmpmtata`h

    `f

    b`hk h`uh pergsms, taom rmfmrmhdms, `r `temr pgrgomtmrs.

    Semsm b`hk h`uh pergsms ghc tem taom pmra`c wabb egvm t` nm wrattmh gt s`om stgkm ah tem ghswmr,

    s` at as b`kadgb t` mstgnbase temo gbb gt tem nmkahhahk. Bmt us mxpb`rm teas.

    , Mxmrdasm 75

    Ygrt

    hm

    Sap 5 Mxmrdasm 7> Sgsl M as g ngr degrt, se`wahk tem pradms ` eghckuhs, rafbms, sbuk kuhs, ghc

    se`tkuhs `vmr tem pmra`c >996 t` >979. f temsm grm ogcm dbmgr ah tem ahtr`cudta`h, temh wm dgh

    usm syh`hyos w`rcs wate tem sgom omghahk), pgrgpergsms, `r pr`h`uhs t` rmfmr t` temo o`rm

    mffadamhtby, weade kavms us krmgtmr vgramty ah `ur v`dgnubgry. Fabb ah tem kgps.

    Sem pgrgomtmrs

    eghckuhs, rafbms,

    sbuk kuhs, ghc

    se`tkuhs

    >996 t` >979

    >996

    >979

    ... omhta`hmc

    h

    tem ahtr`cudta`h

    dgh b tmr nm

    rmfmrrmc

    t` ah tem

    `cy `f

    tem

    hswmr

    wate

    tmros

    sude gs ...

    Tyh`hyos/Ygrgpergsms

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    Ygrt Sw`

    Bmt us b``l gt tem ahtr`cudta`h wm egvm f`r `ur 'f``tngbb dbuns' krgpe cmsdrapta`h.

    t as

    h`w o`rm

    f`rogb ah krgoogr ghc w`rcs, nut temrm as stabb g pr`nbmo. D`opgrm `ur ahtr`cudta`h (se`wh

    hmxt) wate tem gdtugb ahtr`cudta`h

    usmc

    h

    tem qumsta`h pgpmr

    (se`wh gt tem nmkahhahk

    `

    Sap 3).

    [egt as tem pr`nbmo wate `urs

    Ygrt Sermm

    As teas ahtr`cudta`h nmttmr0

    G quadl kbghdm gt tem rghkm ghc mxtmht `f gbb tem ahf`rogta`h suppbamc ny tem krgpeadgb

    cgtg rmvmgbs tegt temrm grm termm dbuns ahv`bvmc ah tem peysadgb kgom `f f``tngbb , ghc

    tem pr`fat tegt temy oghgkm t` gdquarm as gbs` rmprmsmhtmc `h tem vmrtadgb gxas

    ah

    tem

    uhats

    `f

    te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs `vmr tem d`ursm `f g we`bm ymgr. Seas ymgr as se`wh `h

    tem e`raz`htgb gxas, weade as cavacmc aht` f`ur qugrtmrs, nmahk tem farst , smd`hc, tearc,

    ghc f`urte.

    Ygrt `ur

    Ghc h`w f`r s`om krgoogr. Fabb

    ah

    tem tw` tgnbms.

    d`opgrm

    fbudtugtm

    Ygrt avm

    7 Dgh y`u ghgbysm tem pgrt `f spmmde ah tem h`uh pergsm:

    tem pr`fat fakurms `f termm f``tngbb dbuns .

    > Ah e`w oghy caffmrmht wgys dgh y`u rmwratm teas0

    Sry t` teahl `f s`om rmgb-w`rbc v`dgnubgry.

    9

    u

    d

    r

    ..

    d

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    b

    `om ssums

    Ah Mxmrdasm

    75

    , Ygrt @hm, wm dgh rmfmr

    t`:

    eg

    hckuhs, rafbms, sbuk

    kuhs, ghc se`tkuhs

    >996 t` >979

    >996

    >979

    gs

    tem f`ur typms

    `f

    wmgp`hry

    AA

    temsm sogbb gros

    AA

    temsm cmvadms AA temsm f`ur cmfmhsavm atmos

    A tem pmra`c

    temsm

    ymgrs AA tem kavmh taom AA tem taom frgom

    A tem nmkahhahk AA tem stgrt AA ahatagbby AA `rakahgbby

    A tem fahase AA tem mhc AA fahgbby AA ubtaogtmby

    T`, usahk ahtr`cudta`hs gbb`ws o`rm vgramty ah tem v`dgnubgry, nut temrm

    as

    `hm nak assum gn`ut

    temo. Semy hmmc t` egvm `rakah b w`rcs. Sem ahtr`cudta`h wm egvm usmc ah Ygrt Sw`

    `f

    tem

    prmva`us mxmrdasm

    as

    mx dtby tem s om gs tem ahtr`cudta`h usmc ah tem qumsta`h pgpmr. Seas as ngc

    sodm

    7

    tem w`rcs grm h`t d`hsacmrmc pgrt `f

    y ur

    ghswmr

    gs g rmsubt `f teas , y`u oust b`kadgbby

    nm

    pmhgbasmc

    C`ms teas omgh tem ahtr`cudta`h ah Mxmrdasm

    75

    , Ygrt Sermm

    as

    nmttmr0 H` At as 59 w`rcs, `vmr `hm

    egbf

    `f

    gh ghswmr ^momonmr, tem ahtr`cudta`h as rmpm tahk ahf`rogta`h gbrmgcy dbm rby kavmh ny

    tem tgsl. Sem ahtr`cudta`h

    as

    tem bm st ahtmrmstahk pgrt

    `f

    ghy ghswmr ghc gccs tem bm st t`wgrcs

    Sgsl Gdeamvmomht ghc y`ur `vmrgbb sd`rm.

    At

    as

    gbs` ' `pmh' f`r oude fbuff.

    C` h`t wgstm t`` oghy w`rcs `h gh ahtr`cudta`h. O`vm

    t`

    tem p`aht

    gs

    quadlby ghc saopby

    gs

    y`u dgh \Tmm gbs` Sap

    6

    Mxmrdasm 6, Ghswmr 3_. Sem mxgopbm ahtr`cudta`h as oude nmttmr wrattmh

    ah 76

    w`rcs:

    G quadl kbghdm gt tem rghkm ghc mxtmht `f gbb tem ahf`rogta`h suppbamc ny tem krgpebmgf

    cgtg rmvmgbs tegt temrm grm termm f``tngbb) dbuns ahv`bvmc

    ah

    tem peysadgb kgom

    `f

    f``tngbb, ghc tem temar) pr`fat tegt temy oghgkm t` gdquarm

    as

    gbs` rmprmsmhtmc

    `h

    tem

    vmrtadgb gxas ah tem uhats `f te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs `vmr tem d`ursm `f g wftmfm ymgr. FG s-

    ymgr as

    se`Hh `h

    tem e`raz`htgb gxas,

    v77eade as

    cavacmc aht` f`ur qugrtmrs, nmahk tem farst ,

    smd`hc, tearc, ghc f`urte .

    H`uh Yergsms

    \ _

    @f

    d`ursm, wm `ftmh e vm t` usm tem lmy h`uhs (f`r mxgopbm: 'f``tngbb dbuns'), nut wm se`ubc h`t

    usm tem b`hk h`uh pergsms tegt grm rmfbmdtmc `h tem Q gxas \Q_ w`rc f`r w`rc.

    [m

    oust deghkm

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    tem w`rc `rcmr, krgoogr, ghc

    af

    wm dgh) ahtr`cudm s`om hmw v`dgnubgry, ah `rcmr

    t`

    oglm tem

    wratahk

    `urs

    Seas pr`dmss as dgbbmc pgrgpergsahk .

    H`uh pergsms grm just b`hk h`uhs ghc dgh tglm termm ngsad f`ros.

    A.

    >

    4g

    -

    n

    t

    '

    ~ 7 ~ r , ~ ~

    b 7 f

    , ,,

    Tunj. mrn

    F`r mxgopbm. Q`u grm

    7.

    oy (AMBST/k``c) stucmhts. stuc

    mh

    ts `f oahm ah AMBST)_

    d`opgrms \Qs_

    H`t Omhta`hahk tem Sgsl

    Gh`temr acmg as t`

    h`t

    omhta`h tem tgsl atmo. ^momonmr, gs tem fahgb pgrt

    `f

    Sap 6 mxpbgahs, tem

    tgsl as ahf`rogta`h trghsfmr : just trghsfmrrahk tem ahf`rogta`h fr`o tem atmo t` tem pgpmr. [m

    d`ubc temrmf`rm oglm tem stybastad de`adm t` d`opbmtmby rmo`vm gbb rmfmrmhdm t` tem gdtugb atmo

    atsmbf. Emrm grm s`om o`cmbs t` c` teas, usahk Ygttmrhs 7 ghc >

    9

    u

    +-

    (_.)

    8

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    Ygttmrh

    - deghkm(s)

    A Se

    m - vgragta`h(s)

    ah

    \Q

    +ats

    pgrgomtmrs_

    -as grm)

    gs f`bb`ws.

    R

    A -

    fbudtugta`h(s)

    Ygttmrh >

    - [egt f`bb`ws

    - Emrm

    as

    g suoogry

    `f

    - Sem f`bb`wahk suoograsms

    . Mxmrdasm 1

    - dgh

    nm

    suoograsmc

    - deghkms

    e`w

    \Q_ - vgrams \Ygrgomtmrs_

    - tem o hhmr h weade

    - fbudtugtms

    7

    ^mwra tm tem f` bb wahk h`uh pergsms ah gt bmgst tw` caffmrmht wgys. B``l gt Gppmhcax 3 t` smm

    oy ghswmrs.

    7

    Nrmglc`wh `f Mcudgta`h Bmvmbs `f GGG Mbmdtr`hads Mopb`ymms

    > Gvmrgkm Yradms `f Kuhs gt J`ehs`h s Kuh Te`ps

    4 T`urdms `f [`rbc Hmws f`r Ogbms ghc Fmogbms ah Nratgah

    3 [gtmr Tuppby ghc Tghatgta`h ah ]rngh ghc ^urgb Grmgs

    =

    Cmvmb`pomht `f tem S`wh

    `f

    [gbkmtt

    6

    Yr`dmss `f [gtmr Yurafadgta`h

    ;

    ]hats `f Mbmdtradaty ny Fumb Sypm

    ah

    Jgpgh ghc Deahg

    > K` ngdl

    t`

    Sap ; Mxmrdasm 79 wemrm temrm grm termm saopbafamc Sgsl @hms - G N ghc D - ghc

    try wratahk s`om ahtr`cudta`hs t` temsm. B``l gt Gppmhcax 3 t` smm oy ghswmrs .

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    Ttrgaket aht` gh mxmrdasm

    B P

    2

    Mxmrdasm >

    Ygrt hm

    Grm

    tem

    f`bb`wahk - At dgh nm smmh fr`o tem krgpe tegt. ..

    k``c gccata`hs t` gh - At as mvacmht fr`o tem krgpe tegt.

    ..

    ghswmr0

    - Sem ahf`rogta`h ah tem krgpe gbs` rmvmgbs tegt. ..

    - ]p`h db`smr mxgoahgta`h `f tem krgpe, at as dbmgrby `nva`us tegt.

    ..

    Ygrt Sw`

    D`hsacmr: 7. [egt as wr`hk wate tem f`bb`wahk termm sgopbm ghswmrs0

    >. E`w d`ubc y`u fax temo0

    Tgopbm Ghswmr 7 \Ygrt_

    Sem krgpe se`ws e`w tem pr`fat vgrams f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun

    ah

    `hm ymgr ah

    te`usghcs `f c`bbgrs.

    Ah

    tem farst qugrtmr tem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws fr`o

    4= t` 39.

    Ah

    tem smd`hc qugrtmr tem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun d`htahums t` kr`w.

    Ah tem tearc qugrtmr Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun s pr`fat cmdrmgsms temh tem f``tngbb dbuns

    pr`fat ahdrmgsms gkgah.

    Tgopbm Ghswmr > \Ygrt_

    Sem pr`fat wgs =9

    te`usghc c`bbgrs.

    Ah tem farst qugrtmr at r`sm t` 6=

    te`usghc c`bbgrs

    nut temh fmbb t` >9

    te`usghc c`bbgrs.

    Ah tem bgst tw` qugrtmrs at krgcugbby cmdbahmc t` favm

    te`usghc c`bbgrs.

    9

    u

    DJ

    :8

    2

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    A

    Tgopbm Ghswmr 4 \Ygrt_

    Sem pr`fat f`r Cghcmh`hk ahdrmgsms. h tem bgst pmra`c, at d`htahums teas ahdrmgsm gt

    tem sgom rgtm. Sem pr`fat f`r H`nbm Ygrl cmdrmgsms

    ah

    tem farst qugrtmr. h tem smd`hc

    qugrtmr, at cmdrmgsms gkgah, d`htahuahk teas cmdrmgsahk trmhc f`r tem we`bm pmra`c .

    Tgopbm Ghswmr 3 \Ygrt_

    Thgzzbm ahdrmgsms, Thatde gbs` rasms, To``teb`w kr`ws, Tatn`y se`ws g p`satavm trmhc,

    nut Tpmrbzg cmdrmgsms.

    Sem smhtmhdms

    ah

    Ygrt @hm grm vmry

    vmry

    d`oo`h. ^momonmr, tem ahtr`cudta`h

    `

    `ur ghswmr egs

    gbrmgcy ogcm at dbmgr tegt wm grm b``lahk gt g krgpe (`r pam/ngr degrt, tgnbm

    `

    fakurms, ogp `r

    cagkrgo), ghc gs

    Sap

    79

    tmbbs us, tem purp`sm

    `

    teas ahtr`cudta`h

    as t gv`ac rmpmtata`h

    T`,

    gs

    tem mxpbghgta`h t` Sap

    6

    Mxmrdasm

    6

    Ghswmr = tmbbs us, ghy furtemr omhta`h

    `

    tem krgpe

    as g f`ro

    `

    rmpmtata`h. Gt ats w`rst, at as just uhhmdmssgry fbuff, fabbahk `ur ghswmr wate w`rcs ghc

    tglahk us h`wemrm. Gv`ac teas .

    Mbaoahgtahk ^mpmtata`h

    [mbb, af wm wght g

    rghkm `

    w`rcs, wm se`ubc h`t rmpmgt temo. Ah Mxmrdasm >9, Ygrt Sw`, Tgopbm

    Ghswmr

    7

    tem bmgcahk h`uh Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun as rmpmgtmc. Ah Tgopbm Ghswmr >, te`usghc

    c`bbgrs

    as

    rmpmgtmc.

    Ah

    Tgopbm Ghswmr 4, tem vmrns ahdrmgsm ghc cmdrmgsm grm rmpmgtmc.

    Tude rmpmtata`h gbs` gffmdts D`emrmhdm D`emsa`h (sahdm tem pgrts c` h`t fat wmbb t`kmtemr) ghc

    gffmdts Sgsl Gdeamvmomht (sahdm wm grm wgstahk w`rcs tegt wm hmmc t` rmgbby c` tem tgsl). Gs

    wm bmgrht fr`o tem prmva`us tap, gxms ahf`rogta`h sude gs f``tngbb dbun `r te`usghc c`bbgrs

    d`ubc gbwgys nm put ah tem ahtr`cudta`h.

    - Seas pr`fat as se`wh ah te`usghcs

    `

    c`bbgrs.

    - ... se`ws tem pr`fat (ah te`usghcs

    `

    c`bbgrs ...

    Seas w`ubc gbb`w just tem fakurms

    t`

    nm usmc, pmregps wate just `hm rmoahcmr

    `

    temsm uhats wemh

    y`u kavm tem farst fakurm:

    Cghcmh`hk's pr`fat nmkahs gt =9 (te`usghc c`bbgrs).

    ... `r y`u d`ubc usm tem kmhmrgb tmro uhats .

    Cghcmh`hk's pr`fat nmkahs gt =9 uhats.

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    Ah Mxmrdasm >9, Ygrt Sw`,

    Tgopbm Ghswmr 3

    h` w`rcs grm rmpmgtmc, nut tem smhtmhdm as gh

    `vmrwrattmh bast. Gv`ac bastahk Sry t` nm d`hdasm (kavahk tem omssgkm ah gs fmw w`rcs gs p`ssanbm),

    t` gbb`w y`u t` wratm o`rm bgtmr. Seas pgssgkm (g f`rmst-vamw) d`ubc nm oude nmttmr wrattmh gs:

    bb de`d`bgtm ngrs p rt fr`o Tpmrbzg ahdrmgsm.

    Surhahk ngdl t` rmpmgtmc h`uhs ghc vmrns, wm gbs` hmmc t`

    deghkm

    temo aht` `temr w`rcs wate R

    tem sgom `r saoabgr omghahk. Seas as s`omtaoms lh`wh gs bmxadgb degahahk , wemrm tem caffmrmht

    w`rcs f`ro g degah ( Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun - tem dbun - teas tmgo - at ),

    gbb d`hhmdtahk

    t`kmtemr ter`uke tem tmxt ghc rmfmrrahk ngdl t` tem farst h`uh.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ P j

    Tyh`hyos

    ghc

    Ygrgpergsahk f`r Ttybm

    Sap 7 se`wmc tegt tem ngsad pgrgomtmrs (Q fmgturm, taom frgom, stgrt ghc mhc cgtms), `hdm temy

    grm mstgnbasemc ah tem Sgsl @hm ahtr`cudta`h, se`ubc h`t nm rmpmgtmc. Segt as `hm `f tem purp`sms

    `f

    tem ahtr`cudta`h.

    Taoabgrby, try t` usm syh`hyos (w`rcs wate tem sgom omghahk) wemh wratahk tem lmy h`uhs

    ah y`ur ghswmr. Ygrgpergsahk (usahk g fmw w`rcs kavahk tem sgom omghahk) dgh se`w tem

    nmkahhahks

    `f

    d`bb`dgta`h ghc stybm (? AMBST Tmvmh). Sem se`rt fgdtugb hgturm `f Sgsl @hm

    baoats tem deghdms t` c` teas, s` at as aop`rtght t` tglm tem `pp`rtuhaty af p`ssanbm.

    F`r mxgopbm, ah oy sgopbm ghswmrs ah teas n``l, y`u wabb h`tadm sude bmxadgb degahs gs:

    ah tem d`htmxt

    `f

    dgr gddacmhts

    xmrdasm >

    Ygrt

    hm

    D`opbmtm tem tw` f`bb`wahk tgnbms ny oglahk bmxadgb degahs.

    M

    9

    u

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    egah @hm egah Sw` egah Sermm egah F`ur egah Favm

    Fr`o \U

    7_

    t` \U>_,

    Kmmb`hks

    \U4_ t` \U3_,

    [`rcs `f

    Tpmdafad Saom

    Ygrt Sw`

    Kmmb`hk s pr`fat

    pr`fat

    ahdrmgsms

    egah Tmvmh egah Maket

    cmdrmgsms

    sbaketby.

    g krmgt cmgb.

    egah Hahm

    ... stgys tem

    sgom.

    Oglahk bmxadgb degahs as gh aop`rtght wgy t` gcc vgramty t` y`ur wratahk, s` bmt us egvm g b`hk

    prgdtadm mxmrdasm.

    Sry

    d`opbmtahk tem f`bb`wahk tgnbms drmgtahk 49 se`rt bmxadgb degahs f`r tem

    lmy h`uhs kavmh).

    Sry

    t` pgrgpergsm f`r stybm wemrm p`ssanbm.

    7.

    grmg

    >

    d`opghy

    77

    t`urast cmstahgta`hs

    +

    4.

    mxp`rts

    7>.

    trghsp`rt

    3.

    pr`cudta`h

    74.

    farahk `f stgff

    =.

    dust`omrs 73.

    earahk `f stgff

    6.

    mbmdtradaty cmoghc

    7=.

    egvahk deabcrmh

    ;.

    bmvmb `f mcudgta`h

    76.

    Jgpgh

    5.

    ahtmrhgta`hgb t`urasts

    7;.

    pmtr`b

    1.

    uhmopb`yomht rgtm

    75.

    omcadgb d`opbgahts

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    71. deghkahk

    >=.

    gdd`oo`cgta`h

    sde``b sunjmdts

    +

    >9. bmasurm taom

    >6. tem ]TG ghc Mur`pm

    >7. e`usme`bc k``cs >;. oghgkmomht stybms

    S

    >>. vasats gnr`gc

    A

    >5. stucy e`urs

    A

    +

    >4. aopras`homht

    >1. oakrgta`h

    >3. rmgs`hs f`r d`opbgaht

    49.

    de`rms

    Tgopbm ghswmrs t` temsm tw` mxmrdasms grm ah Gppmhcax =. Gbs` stucy tem sgopbm wratahk ghswmrs

    ah teas n``l

    t`

    bmgrh o`rm gn`ut teas.

    Mxmrdasm >>

    B``l gt `ur f``tngbb dbuns ghswmr. Sem wratahk

    as

    o`rm f`rogb, egs h` `paha`h `r fbuff, ghc

    as

    t` tem p`aht. Sem ahtr`cudta`h as `rakahgb, ghc tem f`rmst-vamw ghc trmm-vamw `rkghasgta`h oglm

    tem ghswmr dbmgrmr ghc mgsamr t` f`bb`w. E`wmvmr temrm as g krmgt cmgb ` rmpmtata`h ` w`rcs ghc

    krgoogr.

    Sem krgpe oglms g d`opgras`h

    `f

    tem pr`fat kgahmc f`r H`nbm Ygrl, Cghcmh`hk, ghc Kmmb`hk f``tngbb

    dbuns `vmr g dgbmhcgr ymgr.

    B``lahk farst gs g we`bm, Cghcmh`hk

    s

    pr`fat as eakemr tegh tem pr`fat `f ats tw` ravgbs. .. _ At as h`t

    eakemr ah tem

    nmkahhahk

    \ ... _

    ghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun kmhmrgtms ahdrmgsahkby eakemr mgrhahks

    ter`uke`ut tem ymgr. Seas oglms Cghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun tem o`st fahghdagbby suddmssfub dbun.

    H`w

    d`hsacmrahk ghcmh`hk ah o`rm cmtgab, temar pr`fat nmkahs gt

    gn`ut

    3= te`usghc c`bbgrs.

    Cghcmh`hk s pr`fat rasms str`hkby t` 69 te`usghc c`bbgrs ah tem farst qugrtmr. ^mkgrcahk Cghcmh`hk

    f``tngbb dbun, .. _ Cghcmh`hk f``tngbb dbun d`htahums t` gsdmhc. Cghcmh`hk ahdrmgsms

    - ~ ~ : ~ b } P k P ' : b P 2 : 8 P b } P ] ~ ~

    ~ ~ ~ P ~ ~ q u g r t m r s .

    Cghcmh`hk fahasemc h`tadmgnby eake, ghc at o`rm tegh c`unbmc t` 799 te`usghc

    c`bbgrs.

    Gs f`r

    H`nbm Ygrl f``tngbb dbun

    H`nbm Ygrl f``tngbb dbun s

    pr`fat fgbbs

    fgarby mvmhby ter`uke`ut tem

    ymgr. Sem pr`fat fmbb fr`o just `vmr =9 te`usghc c`bbgrs . H`nbm Ygrl fahasemc gt just uhcmr 79 te`usghc

    c`bbgrs.

    O`vahk t` Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws ah teas farst qugrtmr. Kmmb`hk kr`ws. \ .. _

    Kmmb`hk fgbbs. Kmmb`hk f``tngbb dbun kr`ws. \ _Sem pr`fat f`r Kmmb`hk mhcmc

    gt

    69 te`usghc c`bbgrs

    M

    9

    u

    DJ.

    8

    57

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    d

    9

    u

    bJ

    8

    5>

    7. Nmkah vgryahk tem w`rcs (t` gv`ac rmpmtata`h) ny rmo`vahk r deghkahk tem at ba-

    dasmc w`rcs aht` te`sm egvahk g saoabgr `r tem sgom omghahk gs tem `rakahgb `hm

    (se`wh

    ah n`bc

    - tegt as, f`ro s`om bmxadgb degahs

    ah

    tem wratahk , gs wm cac

    ah

    Mx

    mrdasm

    >7

    .

    > Yut tem farst omhta`h `f te`usghc c`bbgrs ah nrgdlmts, teus gbb`wahk us t` rmo`vm

    gbb furtemr rmpmtata`h `f temsm w`rcs.

    4. Taoabgrby, sahdm tem fgdt tegt wm grm cmgbahk wate g f``tngbb dbuns ghc n temar pr`fat,

    as dbmgr

    ah

    tem ahtr`cudta`h, rmo`vm gbb furtemr rmpmtata`h `f temsm w`rcs fr`o tem

    rmst `f tem ghswmr.

    3. Nmkah vgryahk tem kr oo r (t` gv`ac rmpmtata`h) ny d`onahahk tem uhcmrbahmc

    pgrts.

    =. Gbs` d`onahm smhtmhdms ny puttahk ah saopbm d`hjuhdta`hs `r smqumhdmrs ah tem

    squgrm nrgdlmts ( \ . .. ).

    6. Deghkm tem M 0 ~ pergsm wate g o`rm `rakahgb tmro.

    Sem ghswmr

    as

    se`wh ah Sap 7> Ygrt Tmvmh Mxmrdasm >; Ygrt Sw`.

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    Yrmbaoahgry

    r

    [m egvm b``lmc gt vgryahk tem w`rcs, nut wm stabb hmmc t` b``l o`rm gt vgryahk tem

    krgoogr

    Sem AMBST nghc cmsdrapt`rs grm quatm dbmgr

    `h

    teas.

    Sem

    punbad vmrsa`h rmgcs:

    Krgoogtadgb ^ghkm Gddurgdy 7. ]sms g rghkm

    `

    krgoogr

    Mxtrgdtmc fr`o tem d`opbmtm AMBST [ratahk Sgsl @hm Nghc Cmsdrapt`rs punbad vmrsa`h).

    Seas

    omghs

    tegt af y`ur

    ghswmr

    as g bast

    `f saopbm

    smhtmhdms

    `hby

    \Tunjmdt Vmrn @njmdt_,

    y`ur krgoogr

    sd`rm

    dgh h`t

    nm eakemr tegh AMBST =.

    B``l

    gkgah gt `ur ghswmr gt tem mhc

    `f

    tem

    prmva`us tap, ghc

    y`u

    wabb smm tegt at egs teas pr`nbmo.

    E`wmvmr

    , af

    wm

    grm

    k`ahk

    t`

    vgry

    tem

    krgoogr

    o`rm,

    wm hmmc

    t`

    lh`w o`rm gn`ut krgoogr

    atsmbf. Seas tap as b`hk

    ghc

    egs smvmh pgrts.

    At

    wabb b``l gt s`om spmdafad krgoogrs, temh tem usm

    `f

    prmp`sata`hs , temh krgpe fmgturms, tmhsms, rmbgtavm dbgusms, krgoogr `f d`opgras`h, ghc fahgbby tem

    usm `f pgrtadapagb pergsms.

    Bmt

    us nmkah wate s`om spmdafad krgoogr.

    Ygrt @hm w` Krgoogrs

    [emh

    cmsdranahk trmhcs, temrm grm tw`

    ogah

    krgoogrs tegt

    wm dgh

    usm. Semsm grm 7 tem vmrn

    krgoogr ghc

    >. tem

    h`uh

    krgoogr. Gbte`uke A dgbb tem smd`hc `hm tem

    h`uh

    krgoogr, wm stabb

    hmmc g vmrn t` oglm g smhtmhdm,

    nut

    teas vmrn just ahtr`cudms tem h`uh pergsm.

    M 7. \T`omteahk_ vmrn gcvmrn ...

    9

    -

    W . .. `r ..

    8

    >g. \T`omteahk_ egs/se`ws/mxpmramhdms g gcjmdtavm h`uh.

    .. .

    `r

    . .

    >n. Semrm s g gcjmdtavm h`uh h \s`omteahk_.

    53

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    Semsm krgoogrs, 7 ghc >, grm tem sgom ah omghahk ghc dgh nm deghkmc gr`uhc. F`r mxgopbm:

    7. Sem pr`fat ahdrmgsms segrpby.

    >g. Sem pr`fat se`ws g segrp ahdrmgsm.

    ... `r ...

    >n. Semrm as g segrp ahdrmgsm h tem pr`fat.

    Krgoogr >g ogy `ftmh nm nmttmr tegh >n nmdgusm >g puts tem sunjmdt nmf`rm tem trmhc, gbb`wahk

    us

    t`

    f`bb`w Sap

    1

    Ygrt Sw , Eaht

    3.

    Tahdm wm lh`w tegt wm se`ubc vgry tem krgoogr, temh gftmr usahk tem vmrn krgoogr f`r `hm `r

    tw` smhtmhdms, tem hmxt smhtmhdm d`ubc usm tem h`uh krgoogr, nut temy mgde egvm temar `wh usm

    `f prmp`sata`hs. ^mgc `h.

    Ygrt Sw` Yrmp`sata`hs

    Yrmp`sata`hs dgh nm caffadubt. S` rmomonmr e`w t` usm temo d`rrmdtby, f`bb`w temsm f`ur rubm

    s.

    Semy cmgb wate gbb tem prmp`sata`hs tegt y`u wabb hmmc

    t`

    usm.

    ^ubm

    Gftmr n`te Krgoogr 7 (vmrns/vmrn pergsms) ghc Krgoogr > (h`uhs/h`uh pergsms), y`u dgh usm:

    fr`o (stgrt p`aht)

    t`

    (mhcahk p`aht) .

    Sem pr`fat r`sm

    r`o

    33

    t`

    6= .

    Sem pr`fat se`wmc g rasm

    r`o

    33

    t`

    6= .

    @ftmh tem prmp`sata`h fr`o

    as

    h`t wrattmh, bmgvahk just tem prmp`sata`h

    t` .

    F`r mxgopbm:

    \Saom ^mfmrmhdm_, tem pr`fat stgrtmc

    t

    =9 . \Saom Ymra`c_, at r`sm

    t`

    6= , temh \Saom

    Ymra`c_ fmbb t` >= .

    ^ubm

    Gftmr gbb vmrns `f deghkm, y`u dgh usm

    ny

    (fakurm) . Emrm tem fakurm se`ws tem go`uht

    `f

    deghkm.

    Vmrn

    r`sm

    Sem pr`fat

    fmbb

    y (fakurm) \?go`uht_

    7

    krmw

    M

    9

    u

    ....

    W.J

    8

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    ^momonmr teas ny teahlahk

    ny

    tegt oude wate tem eghc kmsturm se`wh.

    ^ubm

    Gbo`st gbb h`uhs/h`uh pergsms dgh nm f`bb`wmc ny

    `f

    (fakurm) . Emrm, tem

    `f

    (fakurm) pergsm

    gdts ah tem sgom wgy gs gh gcjmdtavm - tegt as, at as gcjmdtavgb. F`r mxgopbm, ahstmgc

    `f

    sgyahk

    \Gcjmdtavm_ + \H`uh_ , gs ah Jgpghmsm pr`cudt , nmgutafub w`ogh , `r ahtmbbakmht ogh , wm dgh

    sgy pr`cudt `f

    Jgpgh ,

    w`ogh `f

    nmguty ,

    `r

    ogh

    `f

    ahtmbbakmhdm

    rmspmdtavmby. Taoabgrby, ah

    `ur ghswmr,

    g 4=-c`bbgr

    ahdrmgsm nmd`oms gh ahdrmgsm

    `f4= (c`bbgrs) ,=99-uhat

    b`w p`aht

    nmd`oms g b`w p`aht

    `f>,=99 (uhats) .

    Sem fakurm as, b`kadgbby, matemr gh go`uht

    `f

    deghkm (wemh

    usmc wate g deghkm h`uh) `r g bmvmb (wemh usmc wate g p`aht `h tem krgpe).

    `uh

    Sem pr`fat se`wmc g

    rasm

    cmdrmgsm

    kr`wte

    `

    fakurm)

    \weade b`kadgbby oust

    b

    m h

    go`uht_

    j

    ` fakurm)

    \weade b`kadgbby

    oust nm g bmvmb_

    PPPP

    em pr`fat wmht t`

    g pmgl

    g b`w p`aht

    tem eakemst p`aht

    m

    dgh usm `temr gcjmdtavgb pergsms wate lmy h`uhs, f`bb`wahk tem o`cmb \h`uh_

    `f\h`uh_ .

    F`r

    mxgopbm:

    Semrm wgs g

    `uh

    `hm-ymgr pmra`c

    rasm

    cmdgcm

    `

    `uh

    ah )stgnabaty

    s`om sakhafadghdm

    fbudtugta`hs

    A

    Seas rubm as h`t gbwgys f`bb`wmc f`r g h`uh/h`uh pergsm

    ahtr`cudahk

    tem Q gxas. Ah teas dgsm, tem

    A prmp`sata`h

    ah as

    `ftmh nmttmr. F`r mxgopbm,

    Sem krgpe caspbgys tem kr`wte ah tem huonmr ` o`nabm pe`hm usmrs.

    Sem ngr degrt rmvmgbs tem deghkm

    ah

    tem pr`fat ` termm f``tngbb dbuns.

    Sem prmp`sata`h

    `f dgh

    nm usmc emrm, nut s`uhcs bmss hgturgb.

    ^ubm 3

    [emh tem vmrns usmc grm h`t gn`ut `vmrgbb deghkm, wm rmfmr

    t`

    tem bmvmbs usahk tem prmp`sata`h gt .

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    Sem pr`fat stgrtmc

    3= uhats.

    At rmogahmc bmvmb

    gn`ut 69.

    Sem huonmr pmglmc t 51.

    em fakurm fbudtugtmc gr`uhc =9.

    Sem pr`fat fahasemc 39.

    ^momonmr ^ubm A, ghc usm t` (h`t gt ) wemh tem vmrn s gn`ut `vmrgbb deghkm, gs ah Sem pr`fat

    r`sm

    t`

    ;6 ghc temh fmbb

    t`

    39. Gs ^ubm A mxpbgahm

    c,

    teas as gdtugbby g

    fr`o ... t` ...

    strudturm

    wate`ut tem fr`o pgrt. Sem vmrn fbudtugtm ahv`bvms deghkm, nut h`t `vmrgbb deghkm, s` at, t``,

    f`bb`ws ^ubm

    3.

    Mxmrdasm 4

    Ny d`opgrahk tem smhtmhdms 7 t` A, > t` >, ghc s` `h) ghc deghkahk tem krgoogr, d`opbmtm tem

    spgdms ah tem f`bb`wahk tgnbms. Sem ghswmrs grm ah Gppmhcax

    6.

    Vmrn

    rgoogr

    Vmrn

    7

    ahdrmgsms

    \Q_

    >

    4.

    rasms

    Sem huonmr

    3

    = gsdmhcs

    Sem fakurm

    6.

    \ghy

    `f

    tem gn`vm

    ;.

    Sem go`uht

    5.

    1.

    cmdrmgsms

    79.

    At

    77

    cr`ps

    7>.

    cvmrn

    rgpacby

    o`cmrgtmby

    f`bc

    stmmpby

    sunstghtagbby

    krgcugbby

    sbaketby

    69

    59/

    >9

    >99= >979

    \Saom pmra`c `ftmh

    nmst put farst_

    M

    9

    u

    W.J

    8

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    H`uh Krgoogr

    Gcjmdtavm

    H`uh

    Semrm as

    7 crgogtad

    >

    kr`wte

    \Saom

    smms

    7

    4. segrp

    pmra`c_

    wathmssms

    7

    3.

    dbaon

    \Q_

    =.

    ogrkahgb

    \ghy `f tem gn`vm

    ]hats

    g b

    6.

    f`bc

    7

    :6 A

    N@

    avm h`uhs_

    egs

    >

    A

    ;.

    se`ws

    fgbb

    5.

    >9

    uhcmrk`ms

    1. stmgcy

    >979

    mxpmramhdms

    A

    79.

    cmsdmht

    77 .

    sb`w

    7> .

    cmdbahm

    7

    Semsm dghh`t

    nm

    usmc wate taom pmra`cs cmfahmc wate g prmp`sata`h

    Fr`o ...

    t`

    .. .

    `r

    h

    7159',

    weade oust ahstmgc nm f`bb`wmc ny g d`oog, temh g dbgusm \Tunjmdt + Vmrn_ . F`r mxgopbm,

    ' 7159 t` 7119 sgw g stmgcy kr`wte' nut Fr`o 7159 t` 7119, temrm wgs g stmgcy kr`wte.'

    >

    Seas as nmst usmc wate \Qs_ weade dgh se`w p`ssmssa`h - f`r mxgopbm, d`uhtrams ('Jgpgh') ghc

    `rkghasgta`hs ('Deuhly De`d`bgtm ' ), rgtemr tegh d`hdmpts ('huonmr ', 'pr`fat', ghc `temrs).

    Ygrt Sermm

    Krgpe

    Fmgturms

    Krgpe bahms egvm oghy spmdafad fmgturms, ghc y`u hmmc t` lh`w tem w`rcs t` cmsdranm temo. Semy

    dgh rasm t` pmgls, fgbb t` b`w p`ahts, fbudtugtm, ghc rmogah stgnbm. Sry tem hmxt mxmrdasm.

    7

    Mxmrdasm 3

    Demdl tegt y`u lh`w temsm krgpe fmgturms gs wmbb gs `ur tw` krgoogrs ny fabbahk tem kgps

    (wate Krgoogr 7 \vmrn_ ghc > \h`uh_ se`wh ny ' 7 ghc

    > )

    . Sem ghswmrs grm se`wh ah

    Gppmhcax ;

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    / , /-77tR ::

    A

    .

    ,....

    R Sem

    7

    sgbms

    R...... / RR

    (v)

    dgg r

    a v`

    uom

    ..

    >

    At

    ' .

    a

    ( t

    8 ............ g/R(t ,

    : ...

    Sem

    v.........

    gxas

    (

    At

    -... . 7 . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .

    94 93 9= 96 9; .............

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    h`w fakurm as,

    `f

    d`ursm, ah Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm, ghc tem futurm hmmcs prmcadtavm bghkugkm. Ah

    tem ahtr`cudta`h, teas futurm dgh nm rmfmrrmc t`

    gs

    g pr`jmdta`h/f`rmdgst/mstaogta`h `r tem hmxt

    ymgrs

    ^mprmsmhtahk gbb teas `h g krgpe kavms:

    Sem Y`pubgta`h ` [gbkmtt

    @@@s)

    ~

    :

    Ygst Taopbm Yrms Ymrf Futurm Yrmcadtavm

    Sem huonmr ... fmbb.

    @temr mxgopbms grm:

    Fr`o >999 t` >99= tem huonmr fmbb99= temrm

    wgs

    g supmrogrlmt99= t`

    h`w

    - sahdm tegt taom at egs rasmh.

    -

    ah

    tem bgst pmra`c

    - tem fakurm fahasems gt 49 uhats.

    - at egs sahdm nmmh rmpbgdmc wate gpgrtomhts .

    - gpgrtomhts

    egvm nmmh

    nuabt

    `h

    tegt satm .

    - gpgrtomhts

    h`w stghc ah

    ats pbgdm.

    Sem hmxt qumsta`h as weade tmhsm wm se`ubc usm f`r g krgpe tem taom gxas `f weade as ah tem pgst

    (f`r mxgopbm, >99= t` >979). T`om AMBST n``ls wabb sgy y`u oust usm pgst tmhsm < e`wmvmr

    temsm n``ls grm nmahk sgfm , cmdacahk h`t t` teahl gn`ut stybm Bmt us b``l gt gh mxgopbm `f n`te

    tmhsms: Yrmsmht Taopbm ghc Ygst Taopbm.

    ]sahk tem vmrn krgoogr:

    Fr`o >99= t >979 tem sgbms v`buom ahdrmgsms AA ahdrmgsmc segrpby

    . . . `r tem h`uh krgoogr:

    Fr`o >99= t >979 tem sgbms v`buom se`ws

    AA

    se`wmc g segrp ahdrmgsm.

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    Emrm, tem usm `f Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm cmsdranms tem krgpe gs wm f`bb`w at raket h`w saoabgr t` tem

    'sp`rts d`oomhtgt`r' usm wemh cmsdranahk g f``tngbb ogtde. Ah `temr w`rcs, tem tmhsm as o`rm g

    ogttmr

    `f

    `ur gttatucm t` tem krgpe (ghc h`t s`omteahk cmdacmc ny krgoogr n``ls). Ygst Taopbm

    tmhsm dgh kavm f`rogbaty< Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm dgh kavm aoomcagdy< e`wmvmr, nmahk stucmhts

    `f

    Mhkbase, y`u oaket cmdacm at as saopbmr ghc sgfmr t` wratm gbb pgst taom gxms ah pgst tmhsm.

    Sem o`rm aop`rtght p`aht as t` nm d`hsastmht ah tem usm

    `f

    tmhsms. Ah `temr w`rcs, af wm usm pgst

    saopbm tmhsm t` cmsdranm `hm

    pgrt `f

    tem krgpe bahm, temh

    wm

    se`ubc d`htahum wate tegt tmhsm

    f`r tem rmst `f tegt bahm. Oglm surm y`u c` lh`w tem d`rrmdt pgst tmhsm f`ros (V>) ghc tem pgst

    pgrtadapbms (V4) `f tem

    krgpe

    vmrns. T`om `f temo grm arrmkubgr. Fabb ah tem f`bb`wahk tgnbm f`r

    rmv7s79h

    Ngsm F`ro Ygst F`ro Ygst Ygrtadapbm Ygst F`ro Ygst Ygrtadapbm

    V7) V>) V4) V>) V4)

    ahdrmgsm

    cmdrmgsm

    kr`w cr`p

    rasm fgbb

    dbaon cmdbahm

    gsdmhc cmsdmhc

    Semrm dgh stabb nm g oaxturm `f tmhsms ah `ur ghswmr. F`r mxgopbm, af wm grm usahk Ygst Taopbm,

    wm d`ubc stabb usm Yrmsmht Taopbm f`r ahtr`cudta`hs `r t`pad smhtmhdms \ Sem krgpe se`ws ...

    ,

    'Kmmb`hk egs g caffmrmht trmhc', `r ' ... weade as aoprmssavm d`opgrmc t` '_.

    H`w, at as p`ssanbm t` oax g battbm Ygst Taopbm hgrrgtavm tmhsm wate tem Yrmsmht Taopbm

    sp`rts

    d`oomhtgt`r' usm, sude gs

    Tahdm

    d`gb r`sm t` sude g c`oahght p`sata`h, temrm as g cmdrmgsm ah

    o`st `temr pr`cudts' . E`wmvmr, teas nmd`oms g 'stybastad' assum, ghc gs g stucmht

    `f

    Mhkbase, y`u

    se`ubc pmregps f`bb`w tem rubm

    `f

    usahk d`hsastmht tmhsms.

    Tahdm wm se`ubc try t` usm ogturm krgoogr, g vmry k``c acmg as t` usm tem Ygst Ymrfmdt tmhsm ah g

    smhtmhdm, weade as vmry `ftmh p`ssanbm. [m dgh usm teas tmhsm ny f`bb`wahk tem o`cmb:

    h \pgst taom rmfmrmhdm), at wgs \fakurm_.

    Ny g bgtmr pgst taom rmfmrmhdm_, at e c \V4_ t` \fakurm_.

    F`r mxgopbm:

    9

    u

    W

    h

    711=, tem sgbms v`buom wgs 39 ,

    nu

    t

    ny

    >99=, at e c rasmh t` =1 .

    ..

    Seas krgoogr strudturm as k``c sahdm Ygst Ymrfmdt as gh uhd`oo`h ghc caffadubt tmhsm. f wm grm d

    cmsdranahk tem krgpe ah Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm, tem o`cmb seafts `hm tmhsm f`rwgrc'. F`r mxgopbm:

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    h

    Juby, tem rgahfgbb as 39, nut yGukust, at e s rasmh t` =1 .

    b

    tucy e`w temsm tmhsms grm usmc ah mvmry sgopbm ghswmr kavmh ah tem gppmhcadms ` teas n``l.

    Ygrt Favm: ^mbgtavm Dbgusms

    Ttrgaket aht` gh mxmrdasm. J

    Mxmrdasm 6

    D`onahm tem f`bb`wahk pgars

    `

    smhtmhdms (usahk rmbgtavm dbgusms).

    D`onahahk temsm pgars ` smhtmhdms usahk rmbgtavm dbgusms kavms tem so``te ghc wmbb-wrattmh tmxt:

    H`tadm tegt tem mxtrg pgrts (uhcmrbahmc) grm smpgrgtmc fr`o tem ogah pgrts usahk d`oogs. Gs g

    kmhmrgb rub

    m

    y`u wabb gbo`st

    bw ys

    hmmc d`oogs f`r y`ur rmbgtavm dbgusms

    ah

    [ratahk Sgsl @hm.

    Seas

    as

    `hby g nramf ahtr`cudta`h

    t`

    tem sunjmdt.

    Q`u

    hmmc t`

    c`

    g krmgt cmgb o`rm krgoogr stucy

    ghc prgdtadm, nut wm

    wabb

    b``l gt rmbgtavm dbgusms ah o`rm cmtgab ah Sap

    74.

    Ygrt

    Tax

    rgoogr `f D`opgras`h

    Q`u

    hmmc

    t`

    oglm d`opgras`hs ah Sgsl @hm sahdm tem tgsl ahstrudta`hs spmdafadgbby gsl f`r teas.

    Emrm grm s`om krgoogr pgttmrhs tegt y`u d`ubc usm.

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    Kmhmrgb D`opgras`hs

    sbaketby

    ogrkahgbby

    s`omwegt

    \G_

    as

    krmgtmr

    castahdtby

    fakurm

    eakemr

    sakhafadghtby

    Sem huonmr

    `f

    \G_

    as

    sogbbmr

    go`uht

    sunstghtagbby

    bmss

    oude

    vmry oude

    fgr

    Tpmdafad D`opgras`hs [ate Eakemr Go`uhts

    \ _

    as

    fakurm

    Sem huonmr

    `f \ _

    as

    go`uht

    o`rm tegh

    `vmr

    tw`

    termm

    f`ur

    favm

    \ghc s` `h_

    Tpmdafad D`opgras`hs [ate B`wmr Go`uhts

    egbf

    \ J as

    just qugrtmr

    fakurm

    `hby

    `hm fafte

    Sem

    huonmr

    `f

    \ J

    as

    omrmby

    saxte

    go`uht

    bmss tegh

    \ghc s` `h_

    \spmdafad frgdta`h_

    T`om mxgopbm smhtmhdms grm:

    tegh

    eakemr)

    taoms

    o`rm) tegh)

    -f`bc

    krmgtmr)

    `f \G_.

    tegt * `f \G_ .

    \NJ

    tegt

    `f \NJ

    *

    usmc t` gv`ac

    rmpmgtahk

    pgrts ` tem

    h`uh pergsm

    `

    \G_

    *

    usmc t` gv`ac rmpmgtahk pgrts

    ` tem h`uh pergsm ` \N_

    Gt tem nmkahhahk, H`nbm Ygrl as sbaketby eakemr tegh tem `temrs.

    f

    9

    v

    W

    8

    14

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    Gt tem mhc `f tem ymgr, tem pr`fat `f Cghcmh`hk

    as

    gn`ut hahm taoms tegt `f H`nbm Ygrl.

    Kmmb`hk's pr`fat

    as

    `hby tw`-tearcs tem go`uht `f Cghcmh`hk.

    Oahahk as bmss tegh g egbf tem fakurm `f gkradubturm.

    Ygrt Tmvmh Ygrtadapagb Yergsms

    Semsm grm db`smby rmbgtmc t` rmbgtavm dbgusms ghc k``c d`opbmx strudturms , ghc tem d`hdmpt dgh

    `ftmh nm usmc ah [ratahk Sgsl @hm. Seus, at as w`rte tryahk

    t`

    usm temsm. D`hsacmr tem smhtmhdms:

    7

    Sem pr`fat sghl t` 69, ghc at rmogahmc gt tegt bmvmb f`r tem hmxt f`ur ymgrs.

    >. Sem fakurm rasms t` 799. At se`ws h` c`whturhs gt gbb.

    4

    At as

    ny fgr tem eakemst p`aht. At

    as

    6; .

    Ah tem farst smhtmhdm, temsm tw` ahdacmhts ( sahlahk t` 69 ghc rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb ) egppmh

    `hm gftmr tem `temr t` tem sgom sunjmdt. Ah tem rmst

    `f

    tem smhtmhdms, tem tw` ahdacmhts egppmh gt

    tem sgom taom, ghc gbs` t tem sgom sunjmdt. [emh tw` `ddurrmhdms egppmh `hm gftmr tem `temr

    wate tem smd`hc f`roahk p rt `f tem farst, `r nmahk g rmsubt `f tem farst, `r egppmhahk gt tem sgom

    taom, tem smhtmhdm(s) dgh nm o`rm so``teby wrattmh usahk tem prmsmht pgrtadapbm ( ahk f`ro)

    t`

    rmpbgdm `hm

    `f

    tem dbgusms /smhtmhdms. Tahdm teas ahk f`ro as h` b`hkmr g dbgusm/smhtmhdm (teus

    nmahk g

    pergsm),

    teas krgoogr strudturm dgh nm dgbbmc g

    prmsmht pgrtadapagb pergsm.

    At

    usugbby

    f`b b`ws tem o`cmb:

    Tunjmdt Vmrn + @njmdt, \Vmrn_ahk ...

    ... k7vok:

    7

    Sem pr`fat sghl t` 69, rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb f`r tem hmxt f`ur ymgrs.

    >. Sem fakurm rasms t` 799, se`wahk h` c`whturhs gt gbb.

    4. At

    as

    ny fgr tem eakemst p`aht,

    nmahk

    6; .

    Sem ghswmr t` Mxmrdasm >6 usms teas smd`hc smhtmhdm, t`kmtemr wate rmbgtavm dbgusms. Seas as g

    k``c krgoogr strudturm, nut

    af

    temrm grm taom pmra`cs wate tem pgrtadapagb pergsm (tem smd`hc

    pgrt), y`u dghh`t gbwgys usm tem (TY)QS rubm emrm \Sap

    1

    Ygrt Sw`, Eaht 3_ sahdm at as gwlwgrc

    t` nrmgl up tem pgrtadapagb pergsm. Sem taom pmra`c as usugbby nmttmr

    gt tem mhc

    `f tem smhtmhdm.

    Seus

    7. Sem pr`fat r`sm t` 69, f`r tem hmxt f`ur ym rs rmogahahk gt tegt bmvmb.

    ... c`ms h`t s`uhc

    gs

    hgturgb

    gs

    wemh puttahk tem taom pmra`c gt tem mhc

    `f

    tem smhtmhdm. Sem taom

    pmra`c, e`wmvmr, dgh nm put aht` tem dbgusm tem.farst pgrt).

    Sem pr`fat rmogahmc d`hstght f`r termm ymgrs, fgbbahk `hby gt tem mhc.

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    @hm fahgb assum as tegt y`u dgh wratm ahvmrtmc pgrtadapagb pergsms f`r o`rm stybm ghc `rakahgbaty,

    nut `hby af tem tw` fgdts `ddur gt tem sgom taom `r tem ahk pergsm kavms tem rmgs`h f`r tem dbgusm

    weade f`bb`ws (ah weade dgsm, at as `ftmh o`rm hgturgbby pbgdmc farst). F`r mxgopbm:

    >.

    Te`wahk

    h`

    c`whturhs

    gt

    gbb, tem fakurm rasms t` 799.

    4.

    mahk

    6; , at as

    ny

    fgr

    tem

    eakemst p`aht.

    ^mgs`h)

    ...

    s`

    ... (^msubt)

    S`

    rmpmgt, [ratahk Sgsl @hm `ftmh ahv`bvms cmsdranahk tem rmbgtmc `ddurrmhdms tegt egppmh t` tem

    sgom sunjmdt, omghahk tegt pgrtadapagb pergsms dgh `ftmh nm usmc.

    xmrdasm

    ;

    Ygrt

    @hm

    Ah tem f`bb`wahk smhtmhdms, tw` fgdts /mvmhts/gdta`hs rmbgtm t` tem sgom sunjmdt. Seus , tem

    smhtmhdms dgh nm nmttmr wrattmh usahk pgrtadapagb pergsms. Sry teas, temh d`opgrm y`ur ghswmrs t`

    te`sm ah Gppmhcax ; [eade smhtmhdms dgh nm ahvmrtmc0

    7

    >.

    4.

    3.

    =

    6.

    ;

    5.

    1

    79.

    Ygrt Sw`

    Sem

    huonmr

    cr`ppmc

    stmgcaby,

    ghc

    at_

    fahasemc

    gt

    =9.

    Sem pr`fat r`sm quadlby, ghc temh rmgdemc ats eakemst p`aht.

    At

    fmbb t` 79, ghc

    teus

    b`st

    tem

    eakemst pbgdm.

    Sem go`uht

    se`ws gh ahdrmgsm, ghc

    \at_

    pmgls

    gt

    gn`ut 69.

    Sem fakurm

    rasms

    `vmr tem we`bm

    pmra`c, ghc

    at_ mxpmramhdms

    h`

    c`whturhs gt

    gbb.

    At

    r`sm, ghc stgrtmc

    gt

    4; ah 7119.

    At

    fahasemc

    gt

    59.

    Seas

    c`oahgtms

    mxp`rts.

    At

    as

    `vmr egbf

    `f

    tem

    t`tgb go`uht.

    T[

    gdeamvms

    battbm.

    At

    as

    tem b`wmst

    ah n`te ymgrs.

    Seas fakurm rasms

    quadlby

    t` 59. At nmd`oms tem eakemst.

    Sem pmrdmhtgkm

    as

    omrmby

    73.

    At

    as

    teus

    tem b`wmst.

    H`w b``l gt `ur f``tngbb dbuns ghswmr. [m egvm tglmh `ut oude `f tem rmpmtata`h `f w`rcs ghc

    krgoogr, nut wm dgh c` teas mvmh o`rm ghc gbs` d`rrmdt tem rmogahahk mrr`rs ah krgoogr ghc

    tmhsm.

    M

    9

    u

    +-

    (J)

    8

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    7. Ahtr`cudm o`rm krgoogtadgb vgramty ny deghkahk tem at badasmc vmrn krgoogr aht` h`uh

    krgoogr, ghc tem

    r : a j ~ ~ b ~ f _ f 0 ~

    dbgusms aht` pgrtadapagb pergsms.

    >. Taoabgrby, nmkah gccahk rmbgtavm dbgusms `r pgrtadapagb pergsms, d`onahahk tem bgst

    smhtmhdm ah tem f`rmst-vamw wate tem prmva`us smhtmhdm.

    4. Oglm tem tmhsms d`hsastmht, deghkahk tem `bc vmrns aht` Yrmsmht Taopbm tmhsm (`r

    rmo`vahk tem d`hjukgtmc tmhsm f`ro ter`uke g pgrtadapagb pergsm) .

    Ah

    tem H`nbm Ygrl

    trmm-pgrgkrgpe, wm dgh gdtugbby d`onahm tem tw` smhtmhdms.

    3. F`bb`wahk `ur (TY)QS rubm, put tem uhcmrbahmc taom pmra`cs farst \Tmm Sap 1 Ygrt Sw`,

    Eaht 3_.

    Sem aopr`vmc vmrsa`h

    as

    se`wh gt tem nmkahhahk ` tem hmxt tap


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