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    Pfdd, tbat igeidumfs gur praitliad aem stratf`li stumy

    go

    tbf LFD]Y Aiamfjli Prltle` ]asc Gef.

    At tbls pglet, L wgudm dlcf tg jfetlge a`ale a igjjfet orgj tbf Ahgut ]bls Hggc sfitlge tbat

    tbfrf arf

    eg ja`li aeswfrs

    tg ghtalele` bl`bfr haem sigrfs le tbf LFD]Y tfst. Lt ls a tfst

    go

    Fe`dlsb dae`ua`f ahldlty, sg, go igursf, ygu ghtale bl`bfr sigrfs hy bavle` bl`bfr ahldlty.

    Ifrtaledy, hy ogddgwle` tbfsf tlps aem blets igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy ygu iae lemffm ljprgvf

    ygur ibaeifs `rfatdy, hut ygu

    just

    ogddgw tbfj igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy.

    o

    ygu mg egt mg

    tbls, ygu wldd try tg usf tbf tlps le tbls hggc, hut jacf jlstacfs, jlx up tbf stratf`lfs, ogr`ft

    tbf ljpgrtaet amvlif, aem

    egt

    prgmuif a hfttfr plfif go wrltle` at add. ]lps gedy wgrc wbfe usfm

    adge`slmf sgdlm Fe`dlsb scldds. Bgw iae wrltle` tlps bfdp lo ygu stldd iaeegt wrltf7

    Yg, tg amvaeif ygur wrltle` sl`eloliaetdy hfygem tbf sigrf go ygur prfsfet ahldlty, ygu wldd effm

    tg cffp wgrcle` ge ygur Fe`dlsb scldds; wrltle`, `rajjar, aem vgiahudary. \gu adsg effm tg cffp

    fxpfrlfeile` tbf wgrdm tg bfdp wltb lemfpfemfet tblecle` scldds. Hy mgle` tbls, tg`ftbfr wltb

    iarfoud stumy

    go

    tbls hggc, ygu wldd hf`le

    tg

    usf tbf tlps aem blets igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy,

    rfaible` ygur `gads, aem `gle` hfygem.

    g bfdp wltb tbls, ygu arf egw amvlsfm tg iarfouddy aem jftbgmliaddy wgrc tbrgu`b tbf gtbfr

    hggcs

    go

    tbls sfrlfs

    lo

    ygu bavf egt mgef sg adrfamy). ]bfsf hggcs arf;

    Hggc ; Xfamle`

    Hggc

    8;

    Ypfacle`

    Hggc =; Prltle` ]asc ]wg SAiamfjli JgmudfZ

    Hggc 6; LFD]Y ]fst ^raitlif Hggc

    ]bf dast go tbfsf bas slx praitlif tfsts, igjpdftf wltb sajpdf aeswfrs aem aeadysls, addgwle` ygu

    tg igesgdlmatf add ygur scldds. @ggm duic, aem tbaec ygu ogr travfddle` tbls rgam wltb jf.

    F

    >

    u

    QK

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    Appfemlx

    _giahudary Fxfrilsf

    1 prgoldf ?. irgss sfitlge 11 . trfem

    8 oraitlge 0. prgpgrtlge 18. fxpgrtfm

    9 igrrfdatlge 2. mftalds 19. igbfrfet

    =. oduoo

    . sl`epgsts

    16. rfdfvaet

    Appfemlx 8

    ]lp

    =

    Fxfrilsf 9 ^art ]wg; Ogrjad Fe`dlsb

    1?. iatf`grlfs

    81

    . avglm

    10. apprgprlatf 88. dlst

    12. jaturf 89. ltadlis

    1. apprgaib

    86. lmfetloy

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    gtfs

    8. B avf `gt' jfaes tbf sajf as 'bavf', hut tbfy bavf mloofrfet `rajjar. Igjparf 'Pbat bavf ygu

    `gt7' tg 'Pbat mg ygu bavf7' ]bfy adsg bavf mloofrfet dfvfds go ogrjadlty. 'Bavf `gt' ls usfm jgrf

    le spgcfe Fe`d lsb, wbfrfas 'bavf' ls usfm jgrf le wrlttfe Fe`dlsb3 tbus, lt ls hfttfr tg usf 'bavf' le

    LFD]Y wrltle`.

    =. 'Dlcf' bfrf ls usfm as a prfpgsltlge. 'Dlcf' as a vfrh ls apprgprlatf S'^fgpdf dlcf iars.'Z, hut 'dlcf' as a

    prfpgsltlge S'Bf sguemfm dlcf a prgofsslgead sle`fr. Z sbgudm

    hf

    avglmfm le ogrjad wrltle`.

    6. Mg egt usf tbf olrst-pfrsge prgegues {'L ' aem 'wf') gr tbf sfigem-pfrsge prgegue ('ygu'). LFD]Y ]asc

    Gef ls a ogrjad sujjary go oaits, sg pfrsgead prgegues arf egt apprgprlatf.

    ]bfrf ls a dgt go 'oduoo' le hggcs, `lvle` sfetfeifs suib as 'Pf iae sff orgj tbf ibart tbat.

    ..

    ' ]bls ls

    hfttfr wrlttfe le tbf passlvf vglif as 'Lt iae

    hf

    sffe orgj tbf ibart tbat.. .', hut, as ]lp ? fxpdales, lt

    ls gedy oduoo aeyway, aem sg wby wrltf lt7

    g

    slec dlcf a rgic' ls cegwe as

    ae

    lmlgj. Lmlgjs arf egt ogrjad, aem ygu sbgudm

    hf

    iarfoud ahgut

    usle` tbfj le ]asc Gef wrltle` .

    ?. ]bf prghdfj bfrf ls tbf usf go a sle`df ml`lt, gr eujhfr, '' ls igrrfit, as

    le

    'elef jfe aem 1> wgjfe' . Yle`df ml`lts arf, bgwfvfr, aiifptahdf lo tbfy

    igjf wltb gtbfr syjhgds, ogr fxajpdf ' 9' gr '9%', sleif tbls 'mguhdfs' tbflr dfe`tb, jacle` tbfj dggc

    dfss 'harf', jgrf 'wgrm-dlcf', aem idfarfr. Lo tbf ol`urfs ge tbf tasc arf 'mfiljads', suib as 8.=, 9., ?.>, aem =.> rfspfitlvfdy.

    0. 62 ls twg ml`lts, hut tbf jfssa`f ls jgrf idfardy `lvfe wltb rguem ol`urfs - tbat ls, judtlpdfs go 1>.

    ]bus, 62 ls hfttfr wrlttfe as 'adjgst ?> , wbldf < le tbf prfvlgus sfetfeif ls hfttfr wrlttfe as 'kust

    uemfr 1G gr 'dfss tbae 1G .

    2. =< ls a`ale twg ml`lts, hut wbfe jacle` igjparlsges (wblib ygu sbgudm ifrtaledy mg - sff ]lp 19),

    tbf jfssa`f ls oar hfttfr `lvfe wbfe sbgwe as a or itlge gr prgpgrtlge go gef ol`urf a`alest tbf

    gtbfr.

    As ]lp 18, ^art Ylx fxpdales, ygu iae usf tbf `rajjar;

    S Z ls SRZ tljfs bl`bfr tbae) SHZ.

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    19. Ghvlgusdy ls egt apprgprlatf sleif wbat ygu olem ghvlgus ls egt adways sg tg gtbfrs . Lt ls hfttfr tg

    usf idfardy

    gr

    idfar .

    Judtlpdf-wgrm vfrhs iae usuaddy hf rfpdaifm hy jgrf ogrjad sle`df-wgrm vfrhs . ]bus, `g up ls hfttfr

    wrlttfe as leirfasf gr rlsf.

    1=. Mg egt hf`le sfetfeifs wltb Aem ... . Vsf Adsg, ...

    gr

    Le

    ammltlge, ...

    gr,

    lo

    sfqufe le`

    fvfets adge`

    tbf R axls, usf ]bfe , .. .

    ,

    Efxt, ... , Aotfr tbat, . .. aem gtbfr sfqufeile` pbrasfs SYff ]lp ; Yajpdf Ogrfst-_lfws

    c A

    Gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm , ahsfetfflsj at Ytratbhure rfjales dgw aem hasliaddy ueibae`fm, wbfrfas

    Jfdslmf bgdms tbf muhlgus* mlstleitlge* go egt gedy a hl``fr prghdfj, hut adsg a wgrsfele` gef , sffle` a

    `rgw

    le

    ` hgmy

    go

    stumfets egt attfemle` sibggd.

    sc H

    @fefraddy spfacle` , tbls fstahdlsbjfet ls huslfst at twg mlstleit* tljfs ; fardy

    le

    tbf jgrele` aem datf

    le

    tbf aotfregge, wltb tbfsf pfrlgms dg`liaddy igrrfspgemle`* tg tbf jgrele` aem aotfregge rusb bgurs ,

    wbfe jgst igjjutle` giiurs.

    c I

    ]bf jale jfssa`f ls tbat Yeazzdf rfjalefm, hy oar, tbf jgst igesujfm seaic har, adtbgu`b tbls

    pgp udar lty mlm mfid lef sgjfwbat wltb tbf passle` go tljf, pfrbaps igrrfdatle`* tg tbf stfamy yft

    sl`eloliaet asifet go Yeltib .

    l p 2 Fxfrilsf 18; Jgrf Yajpdf Ogrfst-_lfws

    sc

    A

    Gvfradd , le add yfars apart orgj gef le tbf jlm-pfrlgm , @J] Velvfrslty fjpdgyfm sl`eloliaetdy jgrf

    wgjfe tbae jfe, as wfdd as bavle` sljldar ajguets aem ratlgs* go staoole`. Le tbat jlm-pfrlgm , bgwfvfr,

    tbf eujhfr

    go

    jadf staoo was fxtragrmlearldy bl`b, jgrf tbae mguhdle` tbat

    go

    tbf gtbfr `femfr, jacle`

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    ]asc H

    Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf a`feiy grl`leaddy oguem fjpdgyjfet jgstdy ogr tfaibfrs, wbfrfas tbrff yfars

    datfr, tbls idlfetfdf* hfiajf gedy a jlegr part

    go

    tbf igjpaeys huslefss, wltb tbf fjpbasls bavle`

    sblotfm tg tbf twg jfmliad prgofsslges (mgitgrs aem eursfs), wblib, hy `arefrle`* jgrf tbae gef tblrm

    faib

    go

    tbf tgtad turegvfr, mgjleatf rfirultjfet eujhfrs.

    ]asc

    Ge tbf wbgdf, tgurlsts ljprfsslges

    go

    _litgrla wfrf qultf oavgurahdf lemffm, wltb gedy a sjadd jlegrlty

    fxprfssle` ef`atlvf sfetljfets.* ^frbaps igesfqufetdy tg tbls, apart orgj gef jlm-pfrlgm mgweture ,

    tbls statf hfiajf leirfasle`dy pgpudar as a pdaif ogr tgurlsts tg spfem tbflr bgdlmays.

    ]asc M

    Gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm, ^ftfrs`dfe Velvfrslty udtljatfdy prgvfm hy oar tbf jgst pgpudar, wltb lts stumfet

    hgmy fxp emle`

    sg oast aem igeslstfetdy tbat, hy tbf olead yf r, lt bam hffe jgrf tbae

    twlif

    tbf

    mfjg`rapbli* slzf

    go

    tbf gtbfr lestltutfs.

    e

    ammltlge, add tbfsf pdaifs fxpfrlfeifm `rgwtbs, apart orgj

    IJ], wbfrf tbf eujhfr mfsifemfm as tljf wfet hy, udtljatfdy sffle` lt hfigjf tbf dfast-attfemfm

    ifetrf go dfarele`.

    ]asc F

    @fefraddy spfacle`, tbfrf arf twg mlstleit* trfems. Olrstdy, tbf bfavy-muty arjs (rlodfs aem sbgt`ues)

    wfrf adways oar jgrf igstdy tbae tbf dl`btfr wfapgery, hfle` ge avfra`f twg tg tbrff tljfs tbf prlif .

    ]bf sfigem trfem ls tbat add tbfsf mfvlifs hfiajf leirfasle`dy fxpfeslvf , olelsble` wltb tbflr bl`bfst

    ajguets, apart orgj sdu` `ues, wblib , sgjfwbat strae`fdy, mfolfm tbls leodatlgeary* prfssurf, rfjalele`

    adjgst tgta ddy statli* gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm .

    ]asc O

    e

    `fefrad , tbf jgrf sfmatf* aem statli* jusfujs aem art `addfrlfs arf pgpudar wltb tbf gdmfr `fefratlge,

    wbfrfas hfaibfs aem hars, sgjfwbat prfmlitahdy, arf orfqufetfm* jgrf hy tbf ygue`fr irgwm, wbldf

    ilefjas rfjale dlcfm hy add a`fs . Ammltlgeaddy, tbfsf trfems hfigjf jgst apparfet at fltbfr fem

    go

    tbf

    a`f spfitruj* , jfaele` tbat add tbfsf rfirfatlgead ifetrfs rfiflvf qultf rfspfitahdf eujhfrs

    go

    jlmmdf

    a`fm patrges*.

    Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot

    (*

    le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    muhlgus (amk) tg hf tbf sajf as

    gr

    jatib sgjftble`

    8 mlstleitlge (e) go mguhtoud quadlty gr wgrtb

    9 mlstleit (amk) a idfar mloofrfeif gr igetrast

    = tg igrrfspgem (v) rfdatle` tg mloofrfeif orgj wbat ls egrjad

    gr

    fxpfitfm

    6 tg igrrfdatf

    (v) a rfdatlgesblp hftwffe twg tble`s rfprfsfetfm hy twg eujhfrs

    ? ratlg (e) tg hf idgsfdy igeefitfm aem aoofit

    gr

    mfpfem

    ge

    faib gtbfr

    0

    aegjadgusdy (amv) a offdle`

    gr

    ae gplelge, fsp. gef hasfm ge fjgtlges

    2

    idlfetfdf (e) tg ghtale gr igddfit stb., suib as leogrjatlge gr suppgrt

    -

    +

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    sfetljfet

    e)

    idfar, pdale, gr uejlstacfahdf3 hfle` egt tbf sajf as gtbfrs

    mfjg`rapbli (amk) add tbf iustgjfrs gr idlfets go a sbgp gr gr`aelsatlge

    18

    leodatlgeary (amk) tg vlslt a partliudar pdaif gotfe

    19 statli

    (amk) sdgw, iadj, aem rfdaxfm3 daicle` fxiltfjfet

    1=

    sfmatf

    (amk) a igjpdftf gr wlmf rae`f go stb.

    16

    tg orfqufet v)

    rfdatle` tg a `fefrad rlsf

    le

    tbf prlifs go `ggms aem sfrvlifs

    1?

    spfitruj

    e)

    a pfrsge wbg usfs a partliudar sbgp, stgrf, rfstauraet fti.

    10 patrge

    e)

    rfdatle`

    tg

    tbf pgpudatlge aem tbf `rgups

    wltble

    lt

    Egtf tbat add tbfsf ogrfst-vlfws ...

    1

    try tg

    igvfr

    tbf wbgdf tasc (tbf ogrfst),

    aem

    egt kust bl`bdl`bt sle`df spfiloli pglets.

    8. . . . try tg usf

    sgjf

    rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb as apprgprlatf ('fjpdgyfm', 'pgpudar', h

    uslfst',

    rfirult-

    jfet', 'fxpfeslvf',

    'idlfetfdf', 'leodatlgeary',

    aem gtbfrs).

    9. . . . mg egt `lvf gplelges. ]bfrf arf gedy sgjf bgefst eaturad rfaitlges as apprgprlatf ( fxtragrml

    earldy ,

    'aegjadgus

    d

    y', 'sgjfwbat

    strae`fd

    y',

    'prfmlitah

    d

    y',

    aem sg ge).

    =. ... mg egt usf ol`urfs,

    gr

    fvfe

    matfs. ]bfsf arf `fefraddy rfofrrfm tg ('jlm-pfrlgm', 'grl`leaddy',

    'tbrff

    yfars

    datfr', 'olelsble`',

    fti.). Ypfiloli ol`urfs aem matfs

    iae

    appfar le tbf trff-vlfws.

    Appfemlx =

    ]lp

    Fxfrilsf 11> sadfs pfrogrjaeifs

    go

    Yeazzdf , Yjggtbdgw, aem Yeltib ibgig-

    datf hars, add tbrff hfle` prgmuits

    go

    tbf Ibuecy Ibgigdatf igjpaey.

    Egt Jfetlgele` tbf ]asc

    A. Pbat ogddgws ls a sujjary

    go

    tbf varlatlges le ahsfetfflsj at Jfdslmf aem Ytratbhure Bl`b Yibggds

    tbrgu`bgut a yfar.

    H. ]bf oduituatlges

    le

    tbf passfe`fr usa`f go Eghdf ^arc statlge tbrgu`bgut tbf may iae hf suj-

    jarlsfm as ogddgws.

    I. ]bf ogddgwle` sujjarlsfs tbf 8>1> sadfs pfrogrjaeifs

    go

    Ibuecy Ibgigdatf Hars wltb rfspfit tg

    Yeazzdf, Yjggtbdgw, aem Yeltib.

    F

    >

    u

    V

    5

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    Appfemlx 6

    ]lp 11 Fxfrilsf

    81

    ; Dfxliad _arlfty

    ^art Gef; Dfxliad Ibales

    Ibale Gef Ibale ]wg Ibale ]brff Ibale Ogur Ibale Olvf

    Orgj SR1) tg SR8Z,

    @ffdge` s

    prgolt

    leirfasfs

    a `rfat mfad.

    Le tbf pfrlgm SR1Z-SR8Z,

    tbls iduh s ol`urf rlsfs

    `rfatdy.

    Le

    tbf efxt yfar, tbf tfaj s eujhfr* `rgws

    sl`eloliaetdy.

    Le tbf efxVogddgwle`

    tbf/lts farele`s idljh

    egtlifahdy.

    SR8-R1) yfars,

    ajguet* hfigjfs `rfatfr.

    Eujhfr ls gt usfm wltb ueiguetahdf egues. Mg egt say;

    ]bf eujhfr

    g

    orult/watfr/gld . e tbfsf iasfs, usf ol`urf ge lts gwe gr ajguet .

    Ge tbf igetrary, ajguet

    ls gt

    usfm wltb iguetahdf egues. Mg egt say;

    ]bf ajguet g appdfs/iars/pfgpdf . e tbfsf iasfs, usf ol`urf ge lts gwe gr eujhfr .

    Ibale Ylx

    ]bfe, orgj SR9Z

    tg SR=Z,

    @ffdge`s

    prgol t

    Le

    tbf efxt mfiamf (ifetury/

    bado yfar/quartfr/ ..)/de tbf

    olrst bado

    g

    tbf pfrlgm/Le tbf

    sfigem bado ./Le tbf dast SRZ

    yfars/ ... ,

    Ibale Yfvfe Ibale Fl`bt

    mfirfasfs sdl`btdy.

    mfidlefs

    a dlttdf.

    oadds jar`leaddy.

    mrgps

    , hut egt sl`eloliaetdy.

    hfigjfs

    sjaddfr.

    Ibale Elef

    stays tbf sajf.

    rfjales dfvfd.

    . cffps stahdf .

    .

    mgfs egt ibae`f.

    . bas dlttdf ibae`f.

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    ^art ]wg Yyegeyjs aem ^arapbrasfs

    arfa

    rf`lge

    igjpaey

    gr`aelsatlge

    fxpgrts

    prgmuits

    prgmuitlge

    gutput

    iustgjfrs idlfetfdf

    fdfitrlilty mfjaem

    pgwfr effms

    dfvfd go fmuiatlge

    mf`rff go stumy

    letfreatlgead tgurlsts ogrfl`e travfdfrs

    uefjpdgyjfet ratf mf`rff go kghdfssefss

    (sbarf) prlif . vaduf

    tgurlst mfstleatlges pdaifs vlsltfm

    traespgrt jfaes go travfd

    olrle` go staoo

    mlsjlssad

    blrle` go staoo rfirultjfet

    bavle` ibldmrfe prgmuile` goosprle`

    Kapae mfvfdgpfm iguetry

    pftrgd oufd

    jfmliad igjpdalets

    bfadtb lssufs

    ibae`le` aiigjjgmatlge

    jgvle` gef s bgusf

    dflsurf tljf tljf goo

    bgusfbgdm `ggms mgjfstli appdlaeifs

    vlslts ahrgam gvfrsfas travfd

    ljprlsgejfet leiarifratlge

    rfasges ogr igjpdalet

    iausfs go `rlfvaeif

    sibggd suhkfits aiamfjli arfas

    tbf VYA aem Furgpf

    hgtb rf`lges

    jaea`fjfet stydfs ways go jaea`le`

    stumy bgurs tljf levfstfm

    jl`ratlge

    jgvfjfet

    g

    pgpudatlge

    ibgrfs bgusfbgdm tascs

    mlstrlit

    huslefss/fetfrprlsf

    igjjgmltlfs

    ylfdm

    pfgpdf sfrvfm

    fefr`y igesujfm

    sibgdastli aiblfvfjfet

    tbgsf `gle` ahrgam

    tbgsf wltbgut kghs

    wgrtb

    oavgurfm dgiatlges

    jftbgms

    g

    jgvle` arguem

    tfrjleatlge

    g

    fjpdgyjfet

    olemle` go fjpdgyffs

    prgirfatlge

    Aslae eatlge

    sgurif go pgwfr

    hgmldy aldjfets

    rfslmfetlad rfdgiatlge

    gppgrtueltlfs ogr rfdaxatlge

    jaiblefs ogr bgjf usf

    ogrfl`e kgurefys

    mftfetlge

    sgurifs go mlsigetfet

    olfdms go stumy

    tbfsf twg parts go tbf wgrdm

    jftbgms go baemdle` staoo

    bgurs ahsgrhfm

    rfdgiatlge tg gtbfr iguetrlfs

    mgjfstli mutlfs

    F

    u

    Z)

    5

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    Appfemlx ?

    ]lp 18 Fxfrilsf 89; _frh aem Egue @rajjar

    _frh @rajjar

    _frh

    Amvfrh

    1. leirfasfs

    mrajatliaddy

    S\Z

    8.

    `rgws

    raplmdy

    9. rlsfs

    sbarpdy

    =. idljhs

    jgmfratfdy

    ]bf eujhfr

    6

    asifems

    jar`leaddy

    ?

    Saey

    go

    tbf ahgvf

    ogurogdm

    1

    olvf vfrhsZ

    0.

    L

    oadds

    stffpdy

    2 .

    suhstaetladdy

    ]bf ol`urf

    ]bf ajguet

    .

    mfsifems

    `ramuaddy

    11 . mrgps sdgwdy

    Lt

    18

    .

    mfidlefs sdl`btdy

    Egue @rajjar

    Amkfitlvf

    Egue

    1.

    mrajatli

    leirfasf

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    Le

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    8. ]ascs A aem H arf sljpdf hy usuad LFD]Y staemarms, sg tbflr aeswfrs arf sbgrtfr. Lt ls letfrfstle`

    tg egtf tbat, mfspltf tbls sljpdlilty, tbf jleljuj wgrm dfe`tb go 16> ls fasldy surpassfm, sbgwle`

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    wblib tbf ratf mlps tg lts dgwfst pglet.

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    adjgst 8 hy jlm-pfrlgm. At tbls pglet, tbf `ramlfet aribfs* fvfe

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    oofitfm

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    wblib sff

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    tbf bl`bfst

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    ]lp

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    ]asc H

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    go

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    le

    tbf ogddgwle`

    ofw

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    eujhfr

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    statlge

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    olrst gpfe,

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    qulftfst

    pfrlgms.

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    jfetlgele` tbf `rapb.

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    tbat

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    igeiurrfet amk)

    ae gmm gr strae`f sltuatlge gr igemltlge

    mlvfr`fet amk)

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    gppgsltlge suoofr jlxfm ogrtuefs) , jacle` tbls fstahdlsbjfet. hy oar,

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    wltb sgjf

    rfad

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    As ogr Eghdf ^arc, lts prgoldf* ls ae apprgxljatf jlrrgr lja`f

    go

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    go

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    ge

    a bl`b pglet go

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    gtbfrs , wbg rfjale ljjuef* tg wbatfvfr iausfs tbls lestahldlty.

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    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts

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    le

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    gem yfar,

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    le

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    tlvfdy, tacle` tgp pgsltlges , ogddgwfm hy wbfat

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    mgjleaet pgsltlge go

    =9 ,

    tbfrf just efifssarldy hf igrrfs-

    pgemle`* mfirfasfs le gtbfr prgmuits mfstlefm tg `g ahrgam.

    ]bls ls qultf sl`eloliaet

    le

    wbfat, wblib bas mfidlefm orgj 1? tg

    1> . Adtbgu`b lrge, orgj

    80

    tg 8> , adsg sbrlecs* igeslmfrahdy,

    lt bas

    egt

    dgst lts

    sfigemary

    status. Olsb a`ale rfjales tbf

    dgwfst at 1

    ,

    egw bavle` tbf uefevlahdf* mlstleitlge go hfle`

    tbfrf adgef.

    (8>= wgrms)

    Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot

    (* le

    tbf tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    ]bf letrgmuitlge, jfetlgele` tbf ibarts,

    hut egtlif tbat tbfy arf efvfr jfetlgefm

    a`ale.

    ]bf ogrfst-vlfw, egtle` twg jale pglets,

    aem kglele` tbfj tg`ftbfr le a hrgamfr

    'rfad-wgrdm' ghsfrvatlge.

    Egtlif tbat tbfrf arf eg ol`urfs gr matfs.

    Yl`eloliaet ofaturfs (bl`bs aem dgws) le

    8>>6.

    Egtlif tbat tbls aeswfr usfs tbf 'spgrts

    igjjfetatgr's tfesf'.

    Ygjf rfad wgrdm cegwdfm`f.

    Yl`eloliaet ofaturfs (bl`bs aem dgws) le

    8>1>.

    Ygjf stydlstli pbrasle`.

    tg mgjleatf (v)

    gef go tbf bgrlzgetad parts go a dammfr3 (ol`.) a pgsltlge gr raec

    8 gvfrwbfdjle`

    (amk)

    assgilatfm gr igeefitfm wltb stb. tbat ygu bavf kust

    jfetlgefm

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    9 prljary

    (amk)

    sg `rfat as tg jacf rfslstaeif gr gppgsltlge usfdfss

    = igjjgmlty

    (e)

    ae artlidf go tramf gr igjjfrif, fsp. a prgmuit

    6 rue`

    (e)

    egt hfle` wgrtby go fevy gr mfslrf tg

    hf

    tbat way

    ?

    igrrfspgemle`

    (amk)

    tg dfssfe le slzf3 tg hfigjf sjaddfr

    0

    tg sbrlec (v)

    go tbf `rfatfst

    rfdfvaeif, sl`eloliaeif, gr ljpgrtaeif

    2 uefev lahdf

    (amk)

    tg igetrgd wltb tbf bl`bfst, jgst mftfrjlele` leodufeif

    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`b

    t

    Yff Appfemlx

    12

    (9= fxtra wgrms)

    Appfemlx 18

    ]lp 16 Fxfrilsf 9=; Yajpdf Aeswfrs tg ]wg ]ahdfs go Ol`urfs

    1. Ogrfst _lfw

    8. Oudd Aeswfr

    ]bf ogddgwle` sujjarlsfs tbf varlatlges

    le

    lrge prgmuitlge (le

    jlddlges go tges) le olvf Austradlae statfs gvfr a 96-yfar pfrlgm;

    11>.

    Gvfradd, tbfrf arf tbrff trfems. Olrstdy, EYP prgmuifm tbf jgst

    go

    tbls jftad le add yfars fxifpt tbf dast. Yfigemdy, tbfrf wfrf le

    irfasle` ylfdms* le add statfs, fxifpt _li

    .3

    bgwfvfr, tbf olead trfem

    ls

    tbat prgmuitlge mfvfdgpfm partliudardy oast

    le

    Qdm., tg tbf fxtfet

    tbat lt gvfrtggc* EYP le tbf dast yfar, lddustratle` tbat tbfsf twg

    egrtb-fastfre statfs tg`ftbfr prgmuifm, gvfrwbfdjle`dy*, jgst

    go Austradlas lrge, rfemfrle`* tbf rfst go tbf eatlge vlrtuaddy*

    lesl`eloliaet.

    Dggcle` at _li., YA, aem PA tbf olrst bam tbf dgwfst gutput go

    8.= (jlddlge), sbgwle` eg igeslstfet* `rgwtb, aem tbf gtbfr twg

    statfs, startle` at sljldar dfvfds, gedy jaea`fm jlegr `ales , tg

    =.1

    aem 6.0 rfspfitlvfdy - ifrtaledy qultf uelesplrle`* foogrts ,

    fspfiladdy `lvfe tbf igeslmfrahdf* tljf orajf levgdvfm.

    ]bls letrgmuitlge ibggsfs egt tg

    jfetlge tbf tasc, hut lt mgfs jfe

    tlge jlddlges go tges tg avglm rf

    pfatle` lt tbrgu`bgut tbf tasc.

    Yleif tbrff trfems bavf hffe

    ibgsfe, tbf aeswfr gr`aelsfs tbfj

    wltb olrstdy , sfigemdy , aem

    olead . ]wg go tbf trfems arf kglefm

    tg`ftbfr ogr a hrgamfr rfad-wgrdm

    ghsfrvatlge.

    ]bf vfrh lddustratf (gr lemliatf )

    ls gotfe usfm ogr mrawle`

    igeiduslges.

    A tgpli pbrasf, `rguple` _li., YA,

    aem

    P

    tg`ftbfr ogr igjparlsge.

    Jlddlges ls rfpfatfm geif,

    le

    hraicfts,

    tg

    rfjlem tbf rfamfr go

    tbf uelt usfm.

    Ygjf eaturad rfaitlges.

    F

    >

    u

    Z)

    5

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    As ogr EYP aem Qdm., le tbf olrst, prgmuitlge hf`ae at 11.9. ]bls

    `rfw stfamldy, aem hy pfrlgm-fem bam rfaibfm lts bl`bfst pglet

    go

    00. Lts egrtbfre efl`bhgur, le igetrast, startfm juib dgwfr at 8.?,

    fm`le`* upwarms tg gedy =.?

    le

    1 igeslstfet

    amk)

    uelesplrle`

    amk)

    8

    igeslmfrahdf

    amk)

    19 tg fm`f

    v)

    1= fxpgefetlad amk)

    16

    gutput

    e)

    ?

    rlvad

    e)

    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts

    tbf rgdf aem rfspgeslhldltlfs

    go

    ae ljpgrtaet kgh gr pgsltlge

    igjpdftfdy daicle`

    le

    sgjftble`

    uemfr tbf `rguem

    tbf jale part

    go

    sgjftble`

    tg jgvf abfam

    le

    aiblfvfjfet, prgmuitlge, gr sigrf

    adjgst gr vfry efardy

    tg jgvf sdgwdy

    le

    a partliudar mlrfitlge

    mfprfssle`3 egt iausle` `ggm offdle`

    tbf tgtad ajguet

    go

    irgps, prgolt, fti. prgmuifm

    ratbfr dar`f

    le

    slzf, mlstaeif,

    gr

    fxtfet, fti.

    tg iausf stb./sh. tg hf

    le

    a partliudar statf gr igemltlge

    tbf ajguet

    go

    sgjftble` prgmuifm

    igestaetdy ogddgwle` tbf sajf igursf

    vfry `rfat aem pgwfroud, jacle` rfslstaeif gr gppgsltlge

    usfdfss

    a pfrsge, igjpaey, gr tble`, tbat igjpftfs wltb aegtbfr

    `rgwle` hy leirfasle`dy `rfatfr mf`rffs

    Yff Appfemlx 12 8= fxtra wgrms)

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    Appfemlx 19

    ]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art Gef; ]brff Yajpdf Mla`raj Ogrfst-_lfws

    1 Vsle` Ytfps/Yta`fs

    Gvfradd, tbfrf arf tbrff sta`fs

    le

    tbls traesogrjatlge* prgifss, tbf olrst hfle` tbf pbysliad irusble`* aem

    oldtfrle`

    go

    tbf leput grf*, wblib adsg addgws a offmhaic aem rf-irusble` . ]bfe ogddgws tbf dlqulm-hasfm

    sta`f, levgdvle` ml`fstle` * aem prfilpltatle`* gut tbf rfqulrfm prgmuit, dfamle` tg tbf mry olead sta`f; tbf

    tbfrjad* hacle`* aem stgra`f, tbus igjpdftle` tbf prgifss.

    8 Vsle` Eaturad Ogrifs SYff adsg Appfemlx 1?Z

    Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf systfjatli aem stfamy rfmuitlge go dar`f, sgdlm, aem ljpurf

    rgic tg a rfolefm* pgwmfr tbrgu`b tbf utldlsatlge

    go

    pbysliad, ibfjliad, aem tbfrjad* jfaes.

    S,

    hfle`

    pudvfrlsatlge , ailmli aitlge, aem bfat, rfspfitlvfdy. (pgsslhdf fxtra part)Z

    9 Vsle` ^bysliad ^arts

    @fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss ls a oaitgry-hasfm aem fssfetladdy dlefar* systfj

    go

    igevfygrs aem

    igetalefrs*, letfrigeefitfm ogr tbf purpgsf go igevfrtle`* hauxltf grf (at tbf leput) tg rfolefm* adujlea (at

    tbf gutput), wbldf apprgprlatfdy rfjgvle` tbf watfr aem rfslmuf wastf prgmuit

    le

    tbf jlm-prgifss.

    Egtlif tbat tbfsf ogrfst-vlfws avglm mlrfitdy eajle` parts gr `lvle` spfiloli mftalds. ]bfy arf lemffm ogrfst-vlfws ,

    tryle`

    tg

    hrgamdy sujjarlsf tbf prgifss wblib ls sbgwe.

    Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb

    tb

    flr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    traesogrjatlge (e)

    tg prfss gr squffzf stb. wltb a ogrif tbat hrfacs gr mfogrjs lt

    8 tg irusb

    (v) jftad-hfarle` jlefrad gr rgic

    9

    grf (e)

    tg sfparatf as a sgdlm orgj tbf dlqulm

    gr

    `as ogrj

    = tg ml`fst (v)

    le a olef gr purf statf, orff orgj ljpurltlfs

    6 tg prfilpltatf

    (v)

    tbf ait

    gr

    prgifss go traesogrjle`

    gr

    ibae`le` stb.

    ?

    tbfrjad (amk)

    tg igevfrt stb., fsp. oggm , letg usfahdf ogrj

    0 tg hacf (v)

    tg pbysliaddy hrfac sgjftble` letg olef pgwmfr

    2

    rfolefm (amk)

    fxtfemfm, arrae`fm le, gr ogddgwle` a dlef

    dlef r (amk)

    tg ibae`f gr jacf stb. ibae`f orgj gef ogrj tg aegtbfr

    igetalefr (e)

    igeefitfm wltb bfat

    18

    tg igevfrt (v) aeytble` tbat igetales

    gr

    bgdms sgjftble`

    F

    >

    QK

    5

    3;3

    i;

    ;

    s;3;

    i;

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    Appfemlx 1=

    ]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art ]wg; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf Fyf Mla`raj

    ]bf jaeefr le wblib tbf letfread* igjpgefets go tbf bujae fyf

    igddfitlvfdy oueitlge iae

    hf

    sujjarlsfm as ogddgws.

    Gvfradd

    tbfrf arf

    tbrff

    sta`fs

    tbf

    olrst hfle`

    tbf lja`f

    rfifptlge, le wblib tbf dl`bt rays orgj a vlfwfm ghkfit pass

    tbrgu`b tbf idujp* go orget dayfrs. ]bfe tbfrf ls tbf ogiussle`*

    sta`f, wblib sffs tbfsf rays pass tbrgu`b tbf jale hgmy go tbf

    fyf tg strlcf* tbf rfar, at wblib pglet hf`les tbf fdfitrli-pudsf

    sta`f, as tbf fyf rfspgems* hy sfemle` sl`eads tg tbf hrale tg

    hf

    letfrprftfm* as vlslge.

    @fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf dlefar prgpa`atlge*

    go dl`bt tbrgu`b tbf fyf, aem, prljarldy* hy jusiudar odfxle`*, tbf

    ogiussle` go tbls dl`bt sg tbat tbf rfsudtaet* fdfitrliad sl`eads iae

    travfd tg tbf hrale ogr tbf ogrjudatlge* go

    ae

    lja`f.

    Dggcle` olrst as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf sgot, dlefar*,

    aem mguhtdfssdy vfry letrliatf igeefitlge go traesparfet* hlgdg`l

    iad* dayfrs, efvfrtbfdfss hfle` mlrfitdy igjparahdf tg a jfibae

    liad iajfra le hgtb tbf tbrgu`b

    traesjlsslge

    go

    dl`bt, aem,

    udtljatfdy*, tbf igevfrslge

    go

    dl`bt letg lja`f.

    Dggcle` at tbf gutfr dayfrs, dl`bt orgj a vlfwfm ghkfit passfs

    tbrgu`b tbf igekueitlva, a prgtfitlvf jfjhraef* gvfr tbf fyf.

    ]bls dl`bt tbfe jffts tbf aqufgus bujgur, wblib, as tbf eajf

    su``fsts, ls cfpt olddfm wltb odulm, sfrvle` tg prgtfit tbf `dghudar*

    dfes wltble . ]bf dl`bt jffts tbls igjpgefet, wbgsf purpgsf, as

    wltb aey dfes, ls tg ogius* tbf rays tg ogrj a sbarp lja`f.

    As ogr tbf letfrlgr, tbls egw ogiussfm dl`bt passfs tbrgu`b tbf kfd

    dy-dlcf* vltrfgus bujgur, wblib

    ls

    hy oar, tbf dar`fst part go tbf

    fyf, jaletalele` tbf sbapf aem prgtfitle` tbf apparfetdy* vfry

    mfdliatf* rftlea, dlele`* tbf rfar. ]bls, upge hfle` struic, sfems

    fdfitrliad ljpudsfs tg tbf hrale vla* tbf gptli efrvf ogr tbf ogrju

    datlge* go vlsuad* lja`fs.

    Jgvle` tg ege-gptliad* igjpgefets, tbfrf fxlst rfitus jusidfs

    ogr tbf fyf tg swlvfd* tbf fyfhadd ltsfdo, aem hdggm vfssfds ogr tbf

    prgvlslge go gxy`fe tg tbf rftlea aem ljjfmlatf surrguems.

    Ae letrgmuitlge egt jfetlgele`

    tbf tasc.

    Egtlif tbat add

    tbrff ogrfst-

    A ogrfst-vlfw

    vlfws bfrf

    usle` tbf sta`fs.

    avglm spfilol-

    iaddy eajle`

    parts gr plfifs.

    A ogrfst-vlfw

    usle` tbf

    eaturad ogrifs.

    A ogrfst-vlfw

    usle`

    tbf pbysliad

    parts.

    ]bls ogrfst-vlfw wldd hf usfm le

    tbls aeswfr.

    Ogddgwle` tbf mla`raj dg`liaddy

    orgj tbf rl`bt tg tbf dfot.

    Ygjf fxtfread cegwdfm`f.

    Aotfr a dg`liad para`rapb hrfac, tbf

    mfsirlptlge igetleufs.

    Aotfr aegtbfr dg`liad para`rapb

    hrfac, sgjf olead mftalds arf `lvfe.

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    Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot(* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb t flr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    letfread

    (amk) a sjadd, idgsf `rgup3 a dujp gr jass

    8 idujp

    (e) tbat iae

    hf

    sffe tbrgu`b 3 addgwle` ygu tg sff tbrgu`b lt

    9

    tg ogius (v)

    tg rfam gr hrle` gut tbf jfaele` go sgjftble`

    = tg strlcf (v)

    a jgvfjfet tbrgu`b spaif gr gtbfr suhstaeifs

    6

    tg

    rfspgem

    (v) iausfm hy tbf tble` tbat bas kust hffe jfetlgefm

    ? tg letfrprft (v) sbapfm dlcf a `dghf3 spbfrliad gr hadd-sbapfm

    0 prgpa`atlge (e) a tble sbfft gr dayfr go tlssuf

    2

    prljarl dy (amv) fxtfemfm , arrae`fm

    le

    gr ogddgwle` a dlef

    rfsudtaet (amk)

    irfatlge gr prfparatlge levgdvle` iarf aem mftald

    11

    ogrjudatlge

    (e)

    rfdatle` tg dlof, dlvle` tble`s, gr dlvle` gr`aelsjs

    18

    dlefar (amk) tg blt gr hae` letg stb.

    19 traesparfet (amk) jgstdy3 iblfody3 ogr tbf jgst part

    1= hlgdg`liad (amk) tg rfait hy sgjf aitlge

    16 udtljatfdy (amv) a sgot, fdastli, aem gotfe traesparfet jatfrlad

    1?

    jfjhraef

    (e)

    tg ture arguem as lo

    ge

    a swlvfd gr turele` mfvlif

    10

    `dghudar

    (amk)

    hy way go3 tbrgu`b a pdaif

    12 kfddy (e)

    sffjle` tg

    hf

    sg aiigrmle` tg appfaraeif gr leltla d fvlmfeif

    1< apparfetdy (amv) rfdatle` tg dl`bt aem vlslge

    8>

    mfdliatf

    (amk)

    leslmf go sgjftble`3 rfdatle` tg tbf leefr part

    81

    tg dlef (v)

    tg hfem eaturaddy wltbgut hrfacle`

    88 vla (prfp) tg hrle` stb . letg ogius3 tg ait tg prgmuif a sbarp, idfar lja`f

    89 vlsuad (amk)

    tg igvfr tbf leslmf go stb . wltb a dayfr

    8= gptliad (amk)

    ora`ldf, fasldy maja`fm gr burt

    86 tg swlvfd (v)

    rfdatle` tg vlslge, sl`bt, aem sffle`

    F

    >

    u

    +-

    (Z.)

    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts

    Yff Appfemlx 12

    81

    fxtra wgrms)

    5

    ,W

    +-

    i

    ru

    .. ;;

    ;..

    :

    :

    :

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    6

    tNdl,S. NYJ

    Appfemlx 16

    ]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art ]wg; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf @advaegjftfr Mla`raj

    ]bf mla`raj sbgws bgw a `advaegjftfr oueitlges tg aiiuratfdy

    jfasurf tbf ajguet go ae fdfitrli iurrfet passle` tbrgu`b lt.

    Gvfra dd tbfrf arf twg prgifssfs at wgrc , tbf olrst hfle` fdfitrl

    iad , levgdvle` tbf

    iurrfet

    passle` tbrgu`b a wlrf-igldfm aem

    plvgtfm* letfrlgr. Yfigemdy, tbfrf giiurs tbf sljudtaefgus* pbysl

    iad* foofit, wblib mfodfits* tbf ifetrfplfif aem attaibfm pgletfr

    prgpgrtlgeaddy tg tbf ajguet go tbf iurrfet hfle` jfasurfm .

    Dggcle`

    t

    tbf ifetrad igjpgefets, tbf aituad pgletfr bas a

    iguetfrwfl`bt ge gef fem , kust hfygem tbf splemdf* gvfr wblib

    tbf ifetrad lrge iydlemfr rgtatfs* .

    Le

    ammltlge, tbfrf ls a ifetra ddy

    attaibfm rfture sprle` tg apprgprlatfdy iguetfrait tbf pbysliad

    Dgrfetz ogrif prgmuifm (orgj tbf letfraitlge* go tbf ja`eftli

    aem fdfitrli olfdms}, addgwle` tbf pgletfr tg stgp, as wfdd as rfture

    le` lt tg zfrg

    le

    tbf ahsfeif go leput.

    Xf`armle` tbf vlsuad rfamle` go tbls iurrfet , tbf siadf ls ari*

    sbapfm , wltb `ramuatlges aem eujfrliad jarcle`s apprgprlatfdy

    i

    ad

    lhratfm* tg tbf rae`f tbf mfvlif* bas hffe mfsl`efm tg jfa

    surf. ]bls just hf mlrfit (as gppgsfm tg adtfreatle`), aem ls

    le

    uelts go ajpfrfs gr 'ajps' , gotfe as dgw as jlirg-ajps wbfe le

    vgdvle` fdfitrliad ilriultry. Add tbls `lvfs tbf jftfr ae aiiuraiy go

    pdus gr jleus 1.6 .

    ( 1

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    2 ari

    stb. sbapfm dlcf a ple gr sbaot ge wblib stb. fdsf tures

    < tg iadlhratf

    (e)

    (v)

    (e)

    rfdatle` tg aituad fxlstfeif aem jgvfjfet

    1>

    mfvlif

    tg mftfrjlef, olx, gr jarc tbf `ramuatlges

    ^gsslhdf Ole ad ]bgu`bts

    Yff Appfemlx 12 1 8 gr 10 fxtra wgrms)

    Appfemlx ?

    lp ?; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf ^rgifss Mla`raj

    Bfrf

    ls

    a sujjary

    go

    bgw tbf grf, hauxltf,

    ls

    igevfrtfm letg

    aduj

    le

    a.

    Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf systfjatli aem

    stfamy rfmuitlge go dar`f, sgdlm, aem ljpurf rgic tg a rfolefm

    pgwmfr tbrgu`b tbf utldlsatlge go pbysliad, ibfjliad , aem tbfrjad

    jfaes, hfle` pudvfrlsatlge, ailmli aitlge, aem bfat, rfspfitlvfdy.

    Xf`armle` tbf leltlad* pbasf, aotfr hfle` mfdlvfrfm, tbf grf ls

    passfm tbrgu`b a rgtary irusbfr. ]bf rfsudt et plfifs arf

    mfpgsltfm* le a Ml`fstfr , wbfrf prfdljleary oldtfrle` fxidumfs

    jatfrlad lesuoolilfetdy rfmuifm. ]bls ls rfturefm tg tbf grl`lead le

    put igevfygrs* tg hf rf-ofm tbrgu`b tbf irusbfr, fstahdlsble` a

    offmhaic dggp* fesurle` gedy apprgprlatfdy sjadd partlidfs arf

    igevfyfm* gewarms.

    Jgvle` ge tg tbf ibfjliad pbasf, tbf Ml`fstfr mlssgdvfs* tbls

    jftad-hfarle` rgic

    le ae

    ailm hatb, tbfrfhy irfatle`

    ae

    ljpurf

    adujlea sgdutlge*. ]bls ls oldtfrfm a`ale tg rfjgvf wastf rfslmuf*

    (wblib ls truicfm tg daemoldds), dfavle` tbf egw purfr adujlea

    dlqulm tg hf plpfm,

    le

    tbf efxt stfp, tg a ^rfilpltatgr , wbfrf tbf

    fxifss watfr ls rfjgvfm, aem tbf adujlea, dg`liaddy fegu`b, ls

    prfilpltatfm letg a sfmljfetary sdum`f*.

    As ogr tbf olead pbasf, tbls rfolefm jatfrlad ls mfdlvfrfm tg a rgta

    ry

    clde wblib, tbrgu`b tbf appdliatlge go bl`b tfjpfraturf, hacfs*

    gut tbf rfslmuad jglsturf, ljprgvle` tbf tfxturf* tg irfatf tbf

    fem adujlea pgwmfr.

    ]bf letrgmuitlge, egt jfetlgele`

    tbf mla`raj.

    ]bf ogrfst-vlfw, usle` tbf 'eaturad

    ogrifs' apprgaib.

    Egtf tbf sfqufeifrs 'aotfr aem

    'prfdljleary'.

    Egtf tbf passlvf vglif 'ShfZ

    passfm /mfpgsltfm /rfturefm / .. ' ...

    . .. hut egtf tbf aitlvf vglif

    'mlssgdvfs', sleif wf bavf a eajfm

    suhkfit 'Ml`fstfr ', aem lt ls `ggm tg

    vary tbf `rajjar.

    Ygjf fxtfread cegwdfm`f.

    Aotfr a dg`liad para`rapb hrfac, tbf

    olead part go tbf prgifss ls

    mfsirlhfm.

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    Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    SYff Appfemlx

    19

    ogr ogrfst-vlfw vgiahudaryZ

    leltlad (amk) tbf iurvle`

    go

    a dlef

    gr

    patb haic tgwarms ltsfdo

    8 tg mfpgslt (v) tg tacf, iarry,

    gr

    traespgrt stb. orgj gef pdaif tg aegtbfr

    9

    igevfygr

    (e) tg day stb. mgwe gr dft oadd

    = dggp (e) a dlqulm wltb sgdlms mlssgdvfm leslmf lt

    6

    tg

    igevfy

    (v) a jummy

    gr

    sdusby jass gr mfpgslt

    ?

    tg mlssgdvf (v) tg mry gr barmfe stb. hy bfatle`

    0 sgdutlge (e) tbf suroaif ibaraitfrlstlis

    go

    stb.,

    le

    lts dggcs aem offd

    2

    rfslmuf (e) sgjftble` tbat rfjales aotfr a part ls tacfe

    < sdum`f (e)

    go gr

    rfdatle` tg tbf hf`leele`

    1> tg hacf (v) tg iausf stb. tg hfigjf part

    go

    a dlqulm

    11

    tfxturf

    (e) stb. tbat traespgrts a prgmuit, gotfe usle` a jgvle` hfdt

    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts

    L Yff Appfemlx 12

    81

    fxtra wgrms) L

    Appfemlx 10

    ]lp 10 Fxfrilsf 90; _giahudary aem Yajpdf

    eswfr

    tg tbf Japs

    A Mlrfitlges

    ]bf igjpass pglets arf; Egrtb, Ygutb, Fast, Pfst, Egrtbfast, Ygutbfast, Egrtbwfst, aem Ygutbwfst.

    ]g

    ogrj amkfitlvfs, put -fre

    t

    tbf fem

    go

    tbfsf wgrms; Egrtbfre , Ygutbfastfre aem sg ge. ]bfy arf

    iapltadlsfm ge a jap tg sbgw mlrfitlges, hut egt le a tfxt.

    H _giahudary go Ibae`f

    _frh Egue

    _frh

    Egue

    (rf)igestruit (rf )igestruitlge

    fxpaem fxpaeslge

    mfjgdlsb

    mfjgdltlge igetrait igetraitlge

    (rf)mfvfdgp (rf)mfvfdgpjfet fvgdvf fvgdutlge

    rfpdaif rfpdaifjfet traesogrj traesogrjatlge

    jgmloy jgmloliatlge

    `rgw

    `rgwtb

    rfhuldm rfhuldmle`

    igevfrt

    igevfrslge

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    I Jap _giahudary

    @fe ofaturfs

    igestruitlge

    sfrvlifs

    oaildltlfs

    ajfeltlfs

    traespgrt a ge)

    vaiaet daem

    Eaturad ofaturfs

    dacf

    ogrfst

    jguetale

    frgslge

    rlvfr

    pasturf

    Amk s/egues g

    @fe egues g

    lemustrlfs

    arfas

    a`rliudturad rf`lge

    rftald mlstrlit

    tgurlsj zgef

    jaeuoaiturle` prgvleif

    rfirfatlgead part s)

    tfibegdg`y

    sfitlge

    Egues g spfi arfas

    gutsclrts

    suhurh

    sfaslmf

    igast

    hgrmfr

    ifetrf

    M

    Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf Japs

    Amk s go arfas

    rurad

    urhae

    lemustrlad

    rfslmfetlad

    igjjfrilad

    igastad

    Amk s rfofrrle` haic

    grl`lead

    geif

    ogrjfr

    prfvlgus

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    r

    mDfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot

    *

    le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    fxifsslvfdy amv) tg prgvlmf tble`s tbat a partliudar pfrsge gr sltuatlge effms

    8

    igjpdfx e) igeefitfm wltb watfr

    9

    tg iatfr v)

    tbf prgifss go ibae`le` stb. tg sult a efw sltuatlge

    = figdg`liad amk) ae arfa go daem gr watfr, fsp. a dge` gef

    6

    amaptatlge e) tg arrae`f gr mfsl`e stb. le rfdatlge tg gtbfr ofaturfs

    ? aquatli amk)

    le a way tbat ls `rfatfr tbae wbat ls rfasgeahdf gr apprgprlatf

    0 tfrrale e)

    sffjle` tg hf sg aiigrmle` tg appfaraeif gr leltlad fvlmfeif

    2 tg

    adl`e

    v) igvfrle` a dar`f arfa3 `rfat

    le

    ajguet

    tg igjprlsf

    v) tbf parts go ae arfa tbat arf a dge` way orgj tbf ifetrf

    swajp e) rfdatle` tg tbf gutfr fm`f go a partliudar arfa

    18 rfaibfs e)

    ae

    arfa go dgw daem tbat ls adways sgot aem wft

    19

    fxtfeslvf

    amk)

    a sjadd dlvle` irfaturf tbat igeslsts go gedy gef ifdd

    1= jarsbdaem e) igjpdftfdy mfvfdgpfm3 wltb add tbf quadloliatlges effmfm ogr stb.

    16 apparfetdy amv) tg hfigjf dge`fr3 tg dfe`tbfe stb.

    1? tg

    fdge`atf

    v)

    ae arfa go `rguem tbat ls vfry wft gr igvfrfm wltb watfr

    10 ajgfha e) daemsiapf3 tbf typf, sbapf, aem eaturf go a daemogrj

    12

    pfrlpbfrad

    amk)

    tg bavf stb./sh. as parts gr jfjhfrs

    1< uttfrdy amv) aey ofaturf tbat prgvlmfs igjogrt, igevfelfeif, gr pdfasurf

    8>

    ajfelty e)

    tg strftib rl`bt airgss stb.

    8

    ouddy odfm`fm

    amk) fjpbaslsle` bgw igjpdftf stb. ls

    88 strlcle` amk) a `rgup go huldmle`s go a sljldar typf tg`ftbfr le gef pdaif

    89

    vlsta e) letfrfstle` aem ueusuad sg tbat lt attraits attfet l

    ge

    8= tg spae v) a hfautloud vlfw go tbf iguetryslmf, a ilty, fti.

    ^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts

    Yff Appfemlx 12 86 fxtra wgrms)

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    Appfemlx 12

    ]lp 12, Fxfrilsf 9), add tbf sajpdf olead tbgu`bts bavf hffe put sfparatfdy le tbls appfemlx. ]bfrf

    arf tbrff rfasges ogr tbls .

    Olrstdy, lt sbgws tbat olead tbgu`bts arf

    sfparatf

    orgj ae aeswfr, aem egt efifssary tg tbf ]asc

    Aiblfvfjfet ' iatf`gry. ]bf tasc

    ls

    ouddy aiblfvfm wltbgut tbfj. Olead tbgu`bts amm egtble` tg tbls

    iatf`gry. Le tbls sfesf, tbfy arf egt efifssary, aem L mlm egt wlsb tg sbgw tbat tbfy hfdge` tg tbf igrf

    aeswfr.

    Bgwfvfr, olead tbgu`bts iae amm tg tbf ' Dfxl

    ia

    d

    Xfsgurif

    aem

    @rajjatliad

    Xae`f Aiiuraiy '

    iatf`grlfs, as

    wfdd

    as

    `lvf a stydf aem odfxlhldlty tbat

    fttfr

    wrltfrs jl`bt gtbfrwlsf egt

    hf

    ahdf tg leidumf.

    Ogr tbls rfasge,

    L

    tbf autbgr go tbls hggc,

    mg

    wlsb tg `lvf ygu sajpdfs gowbat igudm hf wrlttfe.

    ]bf tblrm rfasge ogr puttle` add tbfsf olead tbgu`bts le a sfparatf appfemlx ls tbat lt addgws jf tg rfpfat tbf

    warele`s `lvfe at tbf fem go]lp

    12.

    1

    ]blec ahgut

    wbftbfr ygu bavf tbf tljf tg wrltf tbfj.

    8. Hf bgefst Mg ygu aituaddy sff aeytble`7 Olead tbgu`bts rfqulrf 'tbgu`bts' - tbat

    ls, tblecle`

    fvfr

    try tg wrltf olead tbgu`bts wbfe ygu iaeegt tblec go aeytble`.

    9. Lt ogddgws tbfe tbat ygu sbgudm efvfr jfjgrlsf aeytble` tg hf usfm .

    =. Oleaddy, olead tbgu`bts sbgudm egt hf tgg dge`.

    Pfdd, L bavf tbf tljf SParele` dZ, aem L aj a eatlvf wrltfr go Fe`dlsb wltb a oalr fxpfrlfeif go tbf wgrdm,

    jfaele` tbat L iae bgefstdy sff gppgrtueltlfs ogr olead tbgu`bts SParele` 8Z. Ghvlgusdy L wldd egt usf

    aeytble` jfjgrlsfm SParele` 9Z, aem L wldd cffp tbf olead tbgu`bts sbgrt SParele` =Z. Bfrf tbfy arf.

    1.

    ]ascs

    A H

    aem I orgj ]lp 12, Fxfrilsf 9s ls adjgst ifrtaledy

    igesfqufet tg Pgrdm Par ]wg.

    Lt ls pgsslhdf tg fxtrapgdatf* orgj tbfsf trfems tbat igjputfrs bavf

    egw adjgst tgtaddy supfrsfmfm* tbf gtbfr twg jftbgms.

    Lt ls dg`liad aem dlcfdy tbat tbfrf fxlsts ae levfrsf igrrfdatlge hftwffe

    tbfsf twg oaitgrs.

    Vsle` a dlec tg a wfdd-cegwe

    fxtfread oait.

    Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.

    Vsle` a iausf-aem-foofit

    rfdatlgesblp, gr igrrfdatlge/

    levfrsf igrrfdatlge.

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    8. Oggthadd Iduhs Dlef @rapb (orgj tbf hf`leele`

    g

    ]lp =)

    ]bf stfamlefss go Maemfege` s `rgwtb su``fsts tbat tbls rlsf igetleufs

    hfygem tbf `lvfe tljf orajf.

    9. ^lf Ibart (orgj ]lp 1=)

    Jaeuoaiturle` ls gedy rfprfsfetfm hy igjputfrs aem vfblidfs, tg`ftbfr

    ajguetle` tg a rfdatlvfdy jlegr ? aem < le tbfsf yfars rfspfitlvfdy, ifr

    taledy sbgwle` tbat tbf daem rfjales jgst ljpgrtaet le tbf prgmuitlge go

    fxpgrts.

    ]ahdf go Ol`urfs (orgj ]lp 16)

    ]bf raplm `rgwtb le Qdm. su``fsts lt wldd igetleuf hfygem tbf `lvfe tljf

    orajf, jacle` tbls egrtbfastfre statf, hy oar, tbf prfjlfr lrge prgmuifr.

    =. ^rgifss Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?)

    ]bf adujlea ls tbus rfamy ogr tbf efxt sta`f le tbf prgmuitlge prgifss;

    hfle` rfolefm at a sjfdtfr* letg purf adujleluj.

    Fyf Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?, Fxfrilsf

    9?)

    Gef ljjfmlatfdy offds tbat, mfspltf lts apparfet sljpdlilty, tbf bujae fyf

    ls a jarvfdgusdy olef-tuefm aem igjpdliatfm part go tbf hgmy.

    @advaegjftfr Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?, Fxfrilsf 9?)

    1.

    8.

    Gef suspfits tbat tbls mfvlif bas egw hffe supfrsfmfm* hy ml`ltad

    tfibegdg`y.

    ]bf mfvlif ls tbus vfry letrliatfdy assfjhdfm tg utldlsf fdfitrgja`

    eftli aem pbysliad ogrifs tg aiblfvf lts purpgsf.

    Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.

    Vsle` tbf stratf`y

    go

    `rgup

    le` parts letg jgrf `fefrad

    statfjfets.

    ]bls ls dge`fr

    tbae jgst olead tbgu`bts sleif

    lt mgfs, aituaddy, hasf ltsfdo

    ge ourtbfr oaituad mfsirlptlge

    go

    tbf tasc.

    Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.

    Vsle` a dlec

    tg

    a wfdd-cegwe

    fxtfread oait, gr wbat ]lp ?

    iadds a oaituad ammltlge .

    Vsle` a eaturad rfaitlge, aem

    gef tbat L bgefstdy ofdt wbfe

    stumyle` tbls mla`raj.

    Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem gr

    igesfqufeif. Egtlif tbat L usf

    tbf iarfoud wgrm suspfits ,

    sleif ygu iaeegt hf surf.

    Vsle` tbf stratf`y go `rgup

    le` parts letg jgrf `fefrad

    statfjfets.

    Le tbls sfigem fxajpdf, L aj usle` gef

    go

    tbf ogrfst-vlfw apprgaibfs, wrltle` ahgut tbf eaturad ogrifs

    levgdvfm. L iae mg tbls sleif tbf aituad ogrfst-vlfw usfs tbf

    stfps

    gr

    sta`fs

    apprgaib, sg L aj egt

    rfpfatle` leogrjatlge.

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    6

    Japs (orgj ]lp 10)

    ]bls `gdo igursf, hy hfle` puhdli aem efstdfm* idgsfdy wltble tbf sgutbfre

    arjs

    go

    rfslmfetlad mfvfdgpjfet, sffjs aooldlatfm* jgrf

    wltb

    tbf tgwe tbae

    tbf rfsgrts .

    Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot(*

    le

    tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    Vsle` a eaturad (dg`liad)

    rfaitlge/ghsfrvatlge.

    tg fxtrapgdatf

    v) tg tacf tbf pdaif go stb. igeslmfrfm gdm-oasblgefm

    8

    tg

    supfrsfmf

    v)

    tg

    ogrj

    ae gplelge ahgut tbf outurf

    orgj

    tbf prfsfet oaits

    9

    sjfdtfr

    e)

    tg hf le a pgsltlge tbat

    ls

    prgtfitfm, sbfdtfrfm, gr partdy blmmfe

    tg efstdf

    v)

    , idgsfdy dlecfm wltb aegtbfr

    6

    aooldlatfm

    (amk) tbf pdaif wbfrf grf ls jfdtfm tg fxtrait jftad

    Hfogrf olelsble` wltb olead tbgu`bts, L waet tg jacf tbf usuad warele` L bavf `lvfe jaey tljfs

    egw

    tbat

    ygu sbgudm egt try wrltle` olead tbgu`bts uedfss ygu bavf tbf;

    1. bgefst awarfefss

    8. Fe`dlsb scldds aem ahldlty

    9. tljf

    ... tg mg sg. Ygjf stumfets jay bavf add tbls3 jgst wldd egt. Ogddgw ygur lestleits aem tbf tljle` murle`

    tbf tfst, aem adways tblec

    Appfemlx 1>

    ]bf prgolt ol`urf oadds fvfedy orgj 6> tg ahgut 16

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    etfeifs usf tbf

    pgsltlge

    wgrms ahgvf , hfdgw , dfot , aem tgp . ]bf wrltfr ls rfofrrle`

    ddy tg tbf ]asc Gef pa`f. Lt ls hfttfr egt tg mg tbls. As ]lp ? says, tbf hfst aeswfr sbgudm hf ahdf

    hf uemfrstggm wltbgut dggcle` at tbf aituad ]asc Gef, fspfiladdy sleif tbf pgsltlge iae ibae`f. Ogr

    df , gotfe tbfrf ls egtble` ahgvf at add - kust tbf tgp go tbf pa`f.

    0

    og rjfr aem dattfr rfofrfeif pattfre iae hf usfm, hut le Yfetfeif a lt ls usfm leigrrfitdy sleif tbfrf ls

    gef ltfj le tbf sfetfeif. ]bfrf effms tg hf twg. Yfetfeif a igudm hf wrlttfe as ;

    Eghdf ^arc em @ffdge`s prgolts wfrf hgtb dgw le tbls

    quartfr, hut wltb tbf dattfr sbgwle` ae leirfasle` trfem .

    husfs

    rfspfitlvfdy , hut tbls iae gedy hf usfm wltb a spfiloli eujhfr

    g

    ltfjs wblib arf dlecfm

    tbf sajf eujhfr g

    gtbfr ltfjs as le;

    ]bf prgolt ogr

    a e m f e g ~ G

    aem 2> rfspfitlvfdy.

    -

    tbf aeswfr tg Yfetfeifs = ogr aegtbfr usf go rfspfitlvfdy .

    i usfs sleif , wblib ls a mae`frgus wgrm hfiausf lt jfaes orgj tbat pglet uetld egw . ]bf tljf

    go

    LFD]Y `rapbs vfry rarfdy `g tg tbf prfsfet . ]bfy usuaddy olelsb sgjf tljf le tbf past, jfaele`

    wldd hf uedlcfdy tg effm tbf prfpgsltlge sleif .

    m igjhlefs a pfrlgm (orgj 1 tg 1.

    - lt rgsf aem fvfetuaddy pfacfm at 6>.

    2

    Yfetfeif a

    lt

    iae hf dlecfm tg tbf Pf iae sff orgj tbf ibart prghdfj, wblib wf dggcfm at le

    ?.

    ]bf sfetfeif

    ls

    sljldardy strae`f, sleif lt assujfs wf arf sff le` tbf ibart, yft tbf ibart jay hf ge

    plfif go papfr. Hut dft us igeslmfr aegtbfr mae`fr go irystad idfar/ghvlgus/fasldy sffe/fvlmfet .

    prghdfj ls tbat wbat ygu aeegueif as irystad idfar jay hf egt sg idfar tg gtbfrs. Ytumfet A tblecs

    ls

    idfardy ghvlgus tbat tbfrf arf ogur sta`fs le tbf mla`raj, wbldf Ytumfet H tblecs tbfrf arf olvf .

    tumyle` tbf mla`raj, fvfrygef le tbf idass hfigjfs uesurf. ]bf amvlif ls tg hf vfry iarfoud ahgut

    e` leogrjatlge

    ls

    irystad idfar , ghvlgus , fasldy sffegr fvlmfet.

    o

    lt ls egt, tbfe ygur wgrms

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    Adsg, mg egt usf uehfdlfvahdy

    as

    Yfetfeif h mgfs. ]lp 6 says tbat eaturad rfaitlges arf pgsslhdf, hut ygu

    just egt usf fxtrfjf gr leapprgprlatf amkfitlvfs SYff tbf aeswfr tg ]lp =, Fxfrilsf

    9

    ^art ]wg, Ltfj

    18Z. ]frrlhdf , awoud

    ,

    aem oaetast li arf leapprgprlatf ogr tbf sajf rfasge. Hf ogrjad aem aiamfjli

    sleif tbls ls ogrjad wrltle`.

    Ge tbf suhkfit

    go

    jfjgrlsfm sfetfeifs, mg egt usf i as ae letrgmuitlge. Lt ls egt a qulic `daeif tbat

    wgudm sbgw tbf mftalds wblib ogddgw, hut lestfam a iarfoud stumy . Eg gef ls `daeile` at aeytble`,

    fspfiladdy egt ygu, sg wby ls tbls slddy sfetfeif hfle` usfm7

    Yfetfeifs , wbfrf L wrgtf;

    S]bf ol`urf leirfasfs) tg ae apparfetdy jasslvf => hlddlge le kust 1> yfars.

    egt usf

    a

    pparfetdy ogr barm oaits. Yljldardy, mg egt usf bfm`fs suib as sgrt

    go

    gr clem go as `

    ]bfsf arf usfm le spgcfe Fe`dlsb, gotfe ogr sgotfele` a jfssa`f - ogr fxajpdf, Bf was

    clem

    g

    Le LFD]Y wrltle`,

    lo

    ygu waet bl`bfr jarcs

    le

    tbf Dfxliad Xfsgurif iatf`gry, ygu effm tg igevfy

    jfaele`s .

    t tbrff sfetfeifs letrgmuif igekueitlges aem a prfpgsltlge go iausf aem foofit. ]bfy arf mae`frgus

    hfiau

    sf tb

    fy gotfe letrgmuif gplelges aem gutslmf spfiudatlge, wblib ygu sbgudm egt `lvf. Iausf

    foofit iae gedy hf usfm

    le

    a iarfoud aem dljltfm way lo mfmuile` a igrrfdatlge. SYff ]lp

    12Z

    m usfs sg tg amm fjpbasls, hut tbls

    ls

    ae fjgtlgead fjpbasls. ]bls

    ls

    egt

    apprgprlatf tg ]asc

    e`.

    a usfs aegtbfr igekueitlge, wbfrfas , tg sfqufeif twg statfjfets, hut tbls hrfacs sgjf rudfs

    usle` tbls igekueitlge. Pbfrfas ls usfm tg ;

    1 sbgw a tgtad igetrast

    SIdausf Gef

    :

    _frh3 Idausf ]wg

    :

    Gppgsltf _frhEfrh Lmfa)

    8 usuaddy hftwffe twg mloofrfet suhkfits

    9 usuaddy at tbf sajf tljf

    = wltb wbfrfas usuaddy hftwffe twg idausfs.

    fxajpdf ;

    Le 8>>1 , Iblea s @M^ leirfasfs, wbfrfas Austradla s rfjales igestaet.

    sfetfeif sbgws

    1.

    a tgtad igetrast (tbf olrst leirfasfs3 tbf sfigem mgfs egt 8. hftwffe twg mloofrfet

    ts (Iblea aem Austradla s @M^s) 9. at tbf sajf tljf (8>>1), =. wltb wbfrfas le tbf jlmmdf. ]bf

    tlge tg Yfetfeifs

    1?

    i tg f usfs wbfrfas SuemfrdlefmZ, ogddgwle` add tbfsf rudfs.

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    ]asc Gef usuaddy levgdvfs jaey mloofrfet suhkfits, aem tbfy add sbgw mloofrfet trfems

    gvfr

    tbf sajf

    pfrlgm, jfaele` tbat wbfrfas iae lemffm hf a vfry usfoud ]asc Gef igekueitlge, aem ygu wldd egtlif lt

    ls usfm gotfe le jy sajpdf aeswfrs.

    Pbldf ,

    leilmfetaddy, sbgws a sljldar igetrast, aem iae hf usfm tg rfpdaif

    wbfrfas ,

    hut

    wbfrfas

    ls

    ifrtale dy hfttfr lo tbf igetrast ls idfar. ]bf mlooliudty ls tbat wbldf iae adsg jfae adtbgu`b . Le tbls

    sfigem usa`f, lt hrfacs add tbf ogur rudfs. Ogr fxajpdf,

    Pbldf

    sgjf

    pfgpdf

    tblec stumyle` vfry barm ls

    efifssary,

    tbfy

    gotfe datfr suoofr pfrsgeadlty prghdfjs , (wbfrf tbf vfrhs arf egt igetrastle`, tbf suhkfits

    arf tbf sajf, tbf tljfs arf mloofrfet, aem wbldf hf`les tbf sfetfeif).

    Yfetfeifs haem i adsg usf tbf wrge` sfqufeifrs. As ]lp

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    wf iae adsg mfjgestratf tbf igrrfit usf go rfspfitlvfdy SYfetfeif 0hZ hy `lvle` tbf igrrfit

    go Yfetfeifs 1=. ]bfy sbgw a igjjge aem awcwarm usf go Fe`dlsb. ]bf tbrff sfetfeifs arf

    hfttfr wrlttfe as;

    16

    ]bflr

    prgolt ls tbf bl`bfst.

    Lts eujhfr mfirfasfs suhstaetladdy.

    Lts pfac ls 66%.

    . . ,

    rfspfitlvfdy.

    sbgw jgrf typliad jlstacfs. 'Leidumle`' just letrgmuif part s) go a dar`fr `rgup aem

    fjpbasls (gotfe hfiausf go ae fdfjfet go surprlsf).

    ]bf ibart sbgws

    sfvfe

    iguetrlfs,

    leidumle` sgjf le

    Asla.

    '^artliudardy' (aem 'fspfiladdy' ) adsg letrgmuifs part(s) go a dar`fr `rgup aem `lvfs a strge` fjpbasls, sg lt

    tg hf mlrfitfm at sgjftble` spfiloli.

    ]bf

    prgolt

    rlsfs

    partliudardy

    oast e

    tbf tblrm yfar.

    ]bf euj fr

    go

    tgurlsts orgj Hrltale ls partliudardy bl`b.

    Maemfege`

    le

    partliudar sbgws a strge` `rgwtb.

    Eajf dy' `lvfs fvfrytble` wblib ls prgjlsfm. ]bls jfaes lt effms tg hf usfm wltb a mfoleltf eujhfr.

    ]bfrf arf twg Aslae iguetrlfs, eajfdy Kapae aem Iblea.

    ]bf `rapb sbgws

    tbrff

    clems go seaic oggm

    eajfdy

    euts, ibgigdatf, aem iblps.

    'Yuib as ls ogr `lvle` `fefrad fxajpdfs. \gu jl`bt egtlif tbat suib as ' adjgst efvfr appfars le aey go

    jy sajpdf aeswfrs. ]bf `fefrad eaturf

    go

    suib as (aem

    ogr

    fxajpdf') su``fsts lt ls egt apprgprlatf ogr

    FD]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef, wbfrf spfiloli aem dljltfm leogrjatlge effms tg hf sujjarlsfm.

    Yfetfeifs 1?

    ]bfsf sfetfeifs sbgw prghdfjs wltb egue pbrasfs. Yfetfeifs a aem h arf a rfjlemfr

    go

    ]lp 9. Xfam tbf

    axfs ]bf `rapb sbgws tbf ibae`f le tbf eujhfr g jghldf pbgef gwefrs, aem tbf har ibart sbgws bgw

    tbf eujhfr g bgusfs `rfw.

    Yfetfeifs i tg f sbgw prghdfjs rfdatle` tg iguetahdf aem ueiguetahdf egues tbat wfrf adsg jfetlgefm

    e Appfemlx 6. Ajguet aem 'quaetlty' arf usuaddy ogr ueiguetahdf, wbfrfas eujhfr ls ogr iguetahdf.

    tbf sfetfeifs igudm rfam;

    ]bf

    ajguet

    go

    orult

    leirfasfm.

    Sueiguetahdf egueZ

    ]bf

    quaetlty

    go

    watfr

    mfirfasfm stfamldy. Sueiguetahdf egueZ

    ]bf euj fr go pfgpdf rfjalefm at tbls dfvfd. Siguetahdf egueZ

    s ogr Yfetfeif

    o

    wbldf wf iae wrltf

    tbf

    eujhfr

    go

    (stb.)', wf iaeegt wrltf

    tbf

    ol`urf

    go

    (stb.)' . ]bf

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    Yfetfeifs 0

    ]bfsf sfetfeifs arf a rfjlemfr

    tg

    usf ]asc

    Gef

    dae`ua`f. Ge tbf igetrary aem ge tbf gtbfr baem arf

    egt ]asc Gef pbrasfs. Aituaddy,

    ge

    tbf igetrary ls jgrf ogr spgcfe Fe`dlsb, wbfe igrrfitle` a oadsf

    statfjfet, aem egt fvfe apprgprlatf ogr ]asc

    ]wg

    Yg, ygu tblec L gedy spfac Fe`dlsb7 e tbf igetrary L

    spfac Ypaelsb aem Jaemarle Iblefsf.

    Yfetfeifs i aem m usf jfaewbldf aem mur le` , hut tbfsf wgrms arf usfm jaledy ogr stgry tfddle` gr

    earratlvfs , wbfrf bappfele`s aem fvfets arf put le grmfr gr sfqufeifm. Avglm usle` tbfj le LFD]Y

    wrltle`.

    Yfetfeifs 2

    ]bfrf arf varlgus jlstacfs sbgwe bfrf. ]bf jlstacfs le tbf olrst twg sfetfeifs arf le tbf pdurad s . Pbfe

    wf `lvf ol`urfs, wf mg egt usf tbls. Le Fe`dlsb, wf tadc ahgut fl`bt

    jlddlge

    aem slx

    tbgusaem.

    Bgwfvfr, wf

    igudm say, ]bf prgolt ls `lvfe le jlddlges go mgddars , gr, ]bf sadfs ol`urfs arf `lvfe le tbgusaems.

    ]bf efxt twg frrgrs arf igjjge jlstacfs wbfe igjparle` jgrf tbae twg ltfjs. ]bfy sbgudm rfam;

    Maemfege`s prgolt

    ls

    tbf hl``fst. SgrZ hl``fr tbae tbf gtbfrs.

    Aiamfjli hggcs wfrf tbf sfigem jgst fxpfeslvf.

    Oleaddy, tg aiiguet ogr

    ls

    usfm wltb ol`urfs Sbfeif tbf iguet stfj le tbf vfrhZ. ]bus, tbf dast sfetfeif

    sbgudm rfam;

    ]bf prgolt rgsf tg tbf bl`bfst eujhfr, aiiguetle` ogr 0> .

    Yfetfeifs >6. ]bf prghdfj

    ls

    tbat Yfetfeif a

    su``fsts tbat fvfrytble` bappfefm

    le tbf gef yfar

    8>>6. Yljldardy, Yfetfeif h su``fsts tbat fvfrytble`

    bappfefm le tbf yfar 8>1>.

    Gef way tg sgdvf tbls ls tg egt usf a igjja. ]bls jfaes tbat le 8>>6 igeefits gedy tg tbf dast egue,

    ?>> .

    \gu

    igudm adsg put tbf yfar le hraicfts.

    ]bf eujhfr g pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy orgj 96> tg ?>> le 8>>6.

    ]bf eujhfr

    g

    pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy tg ?>>

    le

    8>>6).

    Bgwfvfr, tbfrf

    ls

    stldd a daic go idarlty bfrf. ]bf hfst jftbgm

    ls

    tg put tbf igjpdftf tljf pfrlgm at tbf

    hf`leele`

    go

    tbf sfetfeif, as ]lp >>

    tg

    8>>6, tbf eujhfr go pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy orgj 96> tg ?>>.

    Orgj 8>>2 tg 8>1>, tbf sadfs ol`urf sbgws a mrajatli oadd tg 89.

    Yfetfeif i ls pgsslhdf, hut puttle` ol`urfs aem yfars efxt tg faib gtbfr iae hf igeousle`, wblib ls gef

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    Appfemlx 8

    LFD]Y Prltl

    e`

    ]asc Gef ^raitlifs; Yajpdf Aeswfrs

    Egtf

    Ogr add tbf ogddgwle` ogur sajpdf aeswfrs, tbf olead tbgu`bts arf sbgwe leslmf a hgx, lemliatle` tbat tbfy

    mg egt hfdge` tg tbf igrf aeswfr aem mg egt amm tg ]asc Aiblfvfjfet (hut mg amm tg Dfxliad Xfsgurif

    aem @rajjatliad Xae`f) . Olead tbgu`bts appfar gedy otfr tbf tasc bas hffe ouddy mfsirlhfm, aem arf

    sbgwe bfrf tg rfprfsfet tbf fgrftli d hfst aeswfr, wblib oastfr aem strge`fr wrltfrs jay aiblfvf.

    ]g rfpfat tb f amvlif `lvfe le ]lp 12 , le tbf pr itli d sltuatlge go ae LFD]Y tfst, jaey stumfets stru``df tg

    wrltf tb f rfqulrfm 16> wgrms le tbf 8> jleutfs , wblib su``fsts tbat ygu sbgudm prghahdy egt attfjpt tg

    wrltf olead tbgu`bts, hut lestfam usf aey fxtra tljf ogr ibficle`, ibae`le` , aem ljprgvle` ygur wrltle`,

    gr jgvle` ge tg ]asc ]wg.

    LFD]Y Prltle` asc Gef ^raitlif L

    ]bf

    ib

    arts igjparf Furgpf wltb Aorlia

    le

    rfdatlge tg tbrff puhdli

    traespgrt lemfxfs; dfe`tb go urhae rald dlefs, eujhfr g o wgrcfrs,

    aem tgtad spfemle` , ogr tbf yfars 8>>> aem 8>1> .

    Gvfradd , tbfrf arf twg

    trfems.

    Ol

    rstdy

    ,

    tbf jgrf amvaeifm

    leorastruiturfs* go Furgpf arf rfodfitfm hy lts igrrfspgemle`dy

    bl

    `bfr status

    le add jfasurfs le hgtb

    yfars

    , partliudardy le

    spfemle` at tbf fem . Yfigemdy, add tbfsf rfofrfeifs , apart

    orgj Aor lia's spfemle` , fxpfrlfeif leirfasfs, adtbgu`b a`ale

    sgjfwbat prfmlitahdy, Furgpf iae idalj a oar `rfatfr suiifss.

    Dg

    gcle` at tbls egrtbfre igetlefet gvfr tbf mfiamf , trale dlefs

    fxtfem orgj olvf tg 11 (cldgjftfrs), wltb tbf staoo eujhfr sbgwle`

    a sljldar hut aiifetuatfm* rlsf , mguhdle` orgj 9> tg ?>

    pfr

    1,

    >>> pfgpdf) . Bgwfvfr, tbf jgst ljprfsslvf* `rgwtb ls

    le

    tbf

    jge ftary spfemle`, orgj 8> (hlddlge) tg

    ae

    apparfetdy jasslvf

    =>, igetrastl

    e`

    tbf sam mfidlef le Aorlia gvfr

    tb

    ls sajf pfrlgm.

    Jgvle` ge tg lts sgutbfre efl`bhgur, rald mlstaeifs aem staoole`

    at dfast sbgw `rgwtbs , hut at rfmuifm dfvfds aem hy sjaddfr

    ja

    r`

    les . ]bf jfasurfs go tbls igetlefet prfsfet a prgegueifm*

    ml

    spa

    rlty* wltb tbflr igetlefetad

    fqulvadfets*

    ,

    fspfiladdy

    le

    jgefy levfstfm , grl`leaddy 1> (hlddlge), gedy tg dae`ulsb* at a

    igjparatlvfdy jfa`rf* twg, tgtaddy mwarofm* hy tbf Furgpfae

    foogrts.

    ]bf letrgmuitlge, usle` igjparf .

    ]bf ogrfst-vlfw, lmfetloyle` twg

    trfems aem sl`epgstle` tbfj

    dg`lia

    dd

    y

    Lt ls aituaddy mlooliudt tg usf juib

    rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb bfrf sleif add

    tbrff lemfxfs jfasurf mloofrfet

    aspfits.

    ]bf trff-vlfw, startle` wltb a dg`liad

    tgpli pbrasf.

    Velts arf letrgmuifm

    le

    hraicfts gef

    tljf gedy.

    Ygjf eaturad rfaitlges.

    A partlilplad pbrasf.

    ]bf sfigem tgpli pbrasf, egw

    fesurle` tbf wbgdf tasc

    ls

    sujjarlsfm .

    Egw ygu prghahdy egtlif tbat tbls

    tasc

    was

    wrlttfe le

    tbf spgrt

    s

    igjjfetatgrs tfesf - a stydlstli

    ibglif.

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    Gef wgudm suspfit a igrrfdatlge hftwffe tbf leirfasf go ouems

    hfle` levfstfm le rald igestruitlge aem staoo rfirultjfet, a trfem

    jgrf apparfet le tbf amvaeifm Furgpfae rf`lge.

    8>8 + 80

    :

    88< wgrms)

    ]bf olead tbgu`bt

    s

    mfmuile` a

    igrrfdatlge, wltb sgjf fxtfread

    cegwdfm`f.

    Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf

    Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    lemfx (e)

    ae

    fxtra ajguet3 a part egt leidumfm le tbf jale `rgup

    8

    leorastruiturf (e) sjadd le quaetlty gr pggr le quadlty

    9 tg aiifetuatf (v) a mloofrfeif, fsp. gef igeefitfm wltb ueoalr trfatjfet

    =

    ljprfsslvf

    (amk) stb. tbat mlrfits attfetlge tg sgjf oait, statlstli, gr igemltlge

    6

    jar`le (e) tg jacf stb. sffj sjadd igjparfm wltb stb. fdsf

    ? prgegueifm (amk) a tble` tbat ls fquad le sgjf way tg stb. fdsf

    0

    mlsparlty (e) bavle` tbf pgwfr tg ljprfss aem iausle` attfetlge gr amjlratlge

    2 fqulvadfet (e) tg hfigjf wfacfr gr oald tg jacf prg`rfss

    jfa`rf (amk) vfry egtlifahdf, ghvlgus, gr strge`dy fxprfssfm

    tg mwaro (v) tg fjpbaslsf gr jacf stb. jgrf egtlifahdf

    LFD]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif

    bat ogddgws sujjarlsfs tbf wgrcogrif mlstrlhutlge ajge`

    figegjli sfitgrs* le 1 aem 8>1> le Ygutbfast Asla, leidumle`

    leogrjatlge igeifrele` lts eujhfrs go leigjle` tgurlsts.

    Le

    `fefrad, jgst pfgpdf wgrcfm le tbf a`rliudturad sfitgr*, wblib

    mgjleatfm* hgtb yfars, partliudardy tbf olrst, wbfrf lt igjprlsfm

    gvfr bado go tbf tgtad.

    Le

    ammltlge, jaeuoaiturle` jamf strge`

    `ales, suib tbat hy pfrlgm-fem, lt bam adjgst fquadfm a`rliudturf,

    at ahgut

    gef

    tblrm faib, jacle` hgtb

    go

    tbfj tbf

    dfamle`

    prgvlmfrs

    go

    fjpdgyjfet. Oleaddy, apart orgj gef `darle`* aem

    suhstaetlad jlm-pfrlgm mgweture*, tgurlst eujhfrs sbgwfm vfry

    bfadtby amvaeifs lemffm.

    Dggcle` spfiloliaddy at tbf figegjli mlvlslges, gvfr tbfsf tbrff

    mfiamfs, uefjpdgyjfet pdujjftfm orgj 80 tg 8 - idfardy

    a wfdigjf ibae`f aem ifrtaledy dlecfm* tg tbf `rgwtb le tbf

    sfrvlif lemustry aem jaeuoaiturle`, orgj 8 tg 86 aem orgj 0.>

    ]bf letrgmuitlge, egt jfetlgele`

    tbf tasc aem usle` a partlilplad

    pbrasf.

    ]bf ogrfst-vlfw.

    ]brff trfems arf `lvfe aem

    sl`epgstfm dg`liaddy.

    Ygjf rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb aem

    partlilplad pbrasfs

    ]bf trff-vlfw, dggcle` at tbf p lf

    ibarts aem. ..

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    ]urele` tg tgurlsj ,

    le

    tbf olrst mfiamf, eujhfrs `rfw orgj 88 tg

    adjgst 96 (jlddlge) . Bgwfvfr, suib suiifss was sbgrt-dlvfm, wltb

    a prgegueifm* mfsifet

    go

    1> giiurrle` gvfr tbf efxt olvf yfars.

    Mfspltf tb ls sfthaic*, rfigvfry was raplm, sffle` tbf ol`urf sgge

    rfaib 96 aem fem at adjgst => , `lvle` ae gvfradd mguhdle` go

    pfgpdf travfddle` ogr rfirfatlgead purpgsfs.

    Gef sffs a traesltlge* bfrf, orgj ae a`rliudturad tg a jgmfre

    lemustrlad aem sfrvlifs-hasfm figegjy, paraddfdle`* tbf leodux* go

    tgurlsts , ogr wbgj tbfrf wgudm effm tg hf oaildltlfs.

    (1

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    Gvfradd, tbf prgifss levgdvfs watfr mrlvfe le `asfgus aem dlqulm

    ogrjs hy tbf eaturad ajhlfeif*

    go

    hgtb bl`b aem dgw fdfvatlges*,

    `ravlty aitle` adge` tbf tgpg`rapby* go tbf daem suroaif, aem tbf

    jftfgrgdg`liad* leodufeif

    go

    sue, wlem, aem gifae .

    @fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss ibarts tbf mgwewarm patb go

    dlqulm watfr adge` tbf fartbs suroaif, fvfetuaddy tg tbf sfa, gr

    le

    tbf iasf go bujae-rfdatfm mlvfrslge*, tbrgu`b rfsfrvglrs* aem

    watfrwgrcs, hut sljldardy femle`

    le

    tbf sfa, wbfrf fvapgratlge*

    hf`les tbf prgifss a`ale.

    Pltb rfspfit tg tbf daem-hasfm prgifssfs, lt hf`les wbfe tbf

    alrhgref vapgur, bavle` prfilpltatfm letg ralemrgps, oadds tg tbf

    `rguem. Ammltlgeaddy, fxlstle` lif ge tbf bl`bfr jguetale tgps

    jfdts aem, adge` wltb tbf ralewatfr, kgles tbf suroaif rlvudfts*

    aem strfajs, igjhlele` letg dar`fr rlvfrs as `ravlty mraws tbfj

    ge a mgwewarm wlemle`* igursf, lefvltahdy* tg tbf sfa.

    Igeslmfrle` tbf jae-jamf wgrdm, tbfrf fxlsts a mlvfrslge* orgj

    tbf rlvfrs eaturad odgw letg a stgra`f rfsfrvglr* . Aotfr uemfr`gle`

    purloliatlge at a trfatjfet pdaet, tbls watfr sfrvfs varlgus bujae

    purpgsfs. ]bf rfsudtaet mlsibar`f ls adsg trfatfm tg hf rfdatlvfdy

    orff go pgddutaets, tbfe geif a`ale ibaeefddfm* letg tbf add

    rfiflvle` sfa.

    Jgvle` tg tbf atjgspbfrli pbasf*, tbf sue s rays fvapgratf

    fxpgsfm* dlqulm gr traesplratf lt orgj pdaets, addgwle` tbf vapgur

    tg jl`ratf* upwarms wbfrf lt ls oueefddfm* hy prfvaldle` * wlems

    aem jguetale

    sdgpfs*

    letg

    tbf iggdfr

    igemltlges go

    bl`bfr

    adtltumfs*. ]bls rfsudts le igemfesatlge* aem idgum ogrjatlge ,

    tbus igjpdftle` tbf iyidf.

    ^gddutlge, suib as ailm rale aem watfr hgref ibfjliad wastf,

    ls

    egtlifahdy uerfprfsfetfm.

    (81= + 18 : 88? wgrms)

    A ogrfst-vlfw usle` tbf eaturad

    ogrifs .

    ]bls ogrfst-vlfw wldd hf usfm le tbls

    aeswfr.

    Ae fxajpdf ogrfst-vlfw usle` tbf

    pbysliad parts.

    Faib trff-vlfw para`rapb hf`les

    wltb a tgpli pbrasf aem

    faib g tbfsf tgpli pbrasfs

    dg`liaddy ibggsfs a ibuec gr

    sfitlge, aem

    ... tg`ftbfr tbfy igjpdftfdy igvfr

    tbf mla`raj.

    Olead tbgu`bts, hasfm ge a eaturad

    rfaitlge

    L

    8 wgrms).

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    ]ljf

    wgrms ge tbf dfot *

    le

    tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.

    iyidli

    (amk) tbf ait go ogrjle` a prfilpltatf (dlqulm) orgj vapgur

    8

    hlgspbfrf (e) rfpfatfm jaey tljfs aem bappfele`

    le

    tbf sajf grmfr

    9

    igemfesatlge (e)

    ueahdf tg

    hf

    avglmfm gr fsiapfm

    =

    prfilpltatlge (e) tbf bfl`bt ahgvf tbf dfvfd go tbf sfa

    6

    aiiujudatlge (e)

    tbf pbysliad ofaturfs g e arfa g daem, fsp. tbf pgsltlge go lts

    rlvfrs, jguetales, fti.

    ?

    lefvltahdf (amk)

    rfdatle` tg tbf silfetloli stumy go tbf atjgspbfrf aem wfatbfr

    0

    fvapgratlge

    (e) tbf ibae`le` go a suhstaeif orgj vapgur tg a dlqulm

    2

    ajhlfeif (e)

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    18

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    19

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    e

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    16

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    10 pbasf (e)

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    12 fxpgsfm (amk)

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    1< tg jl`ratf (v)

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    8

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    89

    adtltumf (e)

    tg

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    Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif L_

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    tbf prfsfet.

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    ]bf oduituatlges le tbf usa`f go ogur ogrjs go traespgrt tacfe ogr wffcfem fvfets le Jfdhguref orgj

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    g

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    g

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