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Pfdd, tbat igeidumfs gur praitliad aem stratf`li stumy
go
tbf LFD]Y Aiamfjli Prltle` ]asc Gef.
At tbls pglet, L wgudm dlcf tg jfetlge a`ale a igjjfet orgj tbf Ahgut ]bls Hggc sfitlge tbat
tbfrf arf
eg ja`li aeswfrs
tg ghtalele` bl`bfr haem sigrfs le tbf LFD]Y tfst. Lt ls a tfst
go
Fe`dlsb dae`ua`f ahldlty, sg, go igursf, ygu ghtale bl`bfr sigrfs hy bavle` bl`bfr ahldlty.
Ifrtaledy, hy ogddgwle` tbfsf tlps aem blets igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy ygu iae lemffm ljprgvf
ygur ibaeifs `rfatdy, hut ygu
just
ogddgw tbfj igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy.
o
ygu mg egt mg
tbls, ygu wldd try tg usf tbf tlps le tbls hggc, hut jacf jlstacfs, jlx up tbf stratf`lfs, ogr`ft
tbf ljpgrtaet amvlif, aem
egt
prgmuif a hfttfr plfif go wrltle` at add. ]lps gedy wgrc wbfe usfm
adge`slmf sgdlm Fe`dlsb scldds. Bgw iae wrltle` tlps bfdp lo ygu stldd iaeegt wrltf7
Yg, tg amvaeif ygur wrltle` sl`eloliaetdy hfygem tbf sigrf go ygur prfsfet ahldlty, ygu wldd effm
tg cffp wgrcle` ge ygur Fe`dlsb scldds; wrltle`, `rajjar, aem vgiahudary. \gu adsg effm tg cffp
fxpfrlfeile` tbf wgrdm tg bfdp wltb lemfpfemfet tblecle` scldds. Hy mgle` tbls, tg`ftbfr wltb
iarfoud stumy
go
tbls hggc, ygu wldd hf`le
tg
usf tbf tlps aem blets igrrfitdy aem apprgprlatfdy,
rfaible` ygur `gads, aem `gle` hfygem.
g bfdp wltb tbls, ygu arf egw amvlsfm tg iarfouddy aem jftbgmliaddy wgrc tbrgu`b tbf gtbfr
hggcs
go
tbls sfrlfs
lo
ygu bavf egt mgef sg adrfamy). ]bfsf hggcs arf;
Hggc ; Xfamle`
Hggc
8;
Ypfacle`
Hggc =; Prltle` ]asc ]wg SAiamfjli JgmudfZ
Hggc 6; LFD]Y ]fst ^raitlif Hggc
]bf dast go tbfsf bas slx praitlif tfsts, igjpdftf wltb sajpdf aeswfrs aem aeadysls, addgwle` ygu
tg igesgdlmatf add ygur scldds. @ggm duic, aem tbaec ygu ogr travfddle` tbls rgam wltb jf.
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Appfemlx
_giahudary Fxfrilsf
1 prgoldf ?. irgss sfitlge 11 . trfem
8 oraitlge 0. prgpgrtlge 18. fxpgrtfm
9 igrrfdatlge 2. mftalds 19. igbfrfet
=. oduoo
. sl`epgsts
16. rfdfvaet
Appfemlx 8
]lp
=
Fxfrilsf 9 ^art ]wg; Ogrjad Fe`dlsb
1?. iatf`grlfs
81
. avglm
10. apprgprlatf 88. dlst
12. jaturf 89. ltadlis
1. apprgaib
86. lmfetloy
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gtfs
8. B avf `gt' jfaes tbf sajf as 'bavf', hut tbfy bavf mloofrfet `rajjar. Igjparf 'Pbat bavf ygu
`gt7' tg 'Pbat mg ygu bavf7' ]bfy adsg bavf mloofrfet dfvfds go ogrjadlty. 'Bavf `gt' ls usfm jgrf
le spgcfe Fe`d lsb, wbfrfas 'bavf' ls usfm jgrf le wrlttfe Fe`dlsb3 tbus, lt ls hfttfr tg usf 'bavf' le
LFD]Y wrltle`.
=. 'Dlcf' bfrf ls usfm as a prfpgsltlge. 'Dlcf' as a vfrh ls apprgprlatf S'^fgpdf dlcf iars.'Z, hut 'dlcf' as a
prfpgsltlge S'Bf sguemfm dlcf a prgofsslgead sle`fr. Z sbgudm
hf
avglmfm le ogrjad wrltle`.
6. Mg egt usf tbf olrst-pfrsge prgegues {'L ' aem 'wf') gr tbf sfigem-pfrsge prgegue ('ygu'). LFD]Y ]asc
Gef ls a ogrjad sujjary go oaits, sg pfrsgead prgegues arf egt apprgprlatf.
]bfrf ls a dgt go 'oduoo' le hggcs, `lvle` sfetfeifs suib as 'Pf iae sff orgj tbf ibart tbat.
..
' ]bls ls
hfttfr wrlttfe le tbf passlvf vglif as 'Lt iae
hf
sffe orgj tbf ibart tbat.. .', hut, as ]lp ? fxpdales, lt
ls gedy oduoo aeyway, aem sg wby wrltf lt7
g
slec dlcf a rgic' ls cegwe as
ae
lmlgj. Lmlgjs arf egt ogrjad, aem ygu sbgudm
hf
iarfoud ahgut
usle` tbfj le ]asc Gef wrltle` .
?. ]bf prghdfj bfrf ls tbf usf go a sle`df ml`lt, gr eujhfr, '' ls igrrfit, as
le
'elef jfe aem 1> wgjfe' . Yle`df ml`lts arf, bgwfvfr, aiifptahdf lo tbfy
igjf wltb gtbfr syjhgds, ogr fxajpdf ' 9' gr '9%', sleif tbls 'mguhdfs' tbflr dfe`tb, jacle` tbfj dggc
dfss 'harf', jgrf 'wgrm-dlcf', aem idfarfr. Lo tbf ol`urfs ge tbf tasc arf 'mfiljads', suib as 8.=, 9., ?.>, aem =.> rfspfitlvfdy.
0. 62 ls twg ml`lts, hut tbf jfssa`f ls jgrf idfardy `lvfe wltb rguem ol`urfs - tbat ls, judtlpdfs go 1>.
]bus, 62 ls hfttfr wrlttfe as 'adjgst ?> , wbldf < le tbf prfvlgus sfetfeif ls hfttfr wrlttfe as 'kust
uemfr 1G gr 'dfss tbae 1G .
2. =< ls a`ale twg ml`lts, hut wbfe jacle` igjparlsges (wblib ygu sbgudm ifrtaledy mg - sff ]lp 19),
tbf jfssa`f ls oar hfttfr `lvfe wbfe sbgwe as a or itlge gr prgpgrtlge go gef ol`urf a`alest tbf
gtbfr.
As ]lp 18, ^art Ylx fxpdales, ygu iae usf tbf `rajjar;
S Z ls SRZ tljfs bl`bfr tbae) SHZ.
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19. Ghvlgusdy ls egt apprgprlatf sleif wbat ygu olem ghvlgus ls egt adways sg tg gtbfrs . Lt ls hfttfr tg
usf idfardy
gr
idfar .
Judtlpdf-wgrm vfrhs iae usuaddy hf rfpdaifm hy jgrf ogrjad sle`df-wgrm vfrhs . ]bus, `g up ls hfttfr
wrlttfe as leirfasf gr rlsf.
1=. Mg egt hf`le sfetfeifs wltb Aem ... . Vsf Adsg, ...
gr
Le
ammltlge, ...
gr,
lo
sfqufe le`
fvfets adge`
tbf R axls, usf ]bfe , .. .
,
Efxt, ... , Aotfr tbat, . .. aem gtbfr sfqufeile` pbrasfs SYff ]lp ; Yajpdf Ogrfst-_lfws
c A
Gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm , ahsfetfflsj at Ytratbhure rfjales dgw aem hasliaddy ueibae`fm, wbfrfas
Jfdslmf bgdms tbf muhlgus* mlstleitlge* go egt gedy a hl``fr prghdfj, hut adsg a wgrsfele` gef , sffle` a
`rgw
le
` hgmy
go
stumfets egt attfemle` sibggd.
sc H
@fefraddy spfacle` , tbls fstahdlsbjfet ls huslfst at twg mlstleit* tljfs ; fardy
le
tbf jgrele` aem datf
le
tbf aotfregge, wltb tbfsf pfrlgms dg`liaddy igrrfspgemle`* tg tbf jgrele` aem aotfregge rusb bgurs ,
wbfe jgst igjjutle` giiurs.
c I
]bf jale jfssa`f ls tbat Yeazzdf rfjalefm, hy oar, tbf jgst igesujfm seaic har, adtbgu`b tbls
pgp udar lty mlm mfid lef sgjfwbat wltb tbf passle` go tljf, pfrbaps igrrfdatle`* tg tbf stfamy yft
sl`eloliaet asifet go Yeltib .
l p 2 Fxfrilsf 18; Jgrf Yajpdf Ogrfst-_lfws
sc
A
Gvfradd , le add yfars apart orgj gef le tbf jlm-pfrlgm , @J] Velvfrslty fjpdgyfm sl`eloliaetdy jgrf
wgjfe tbae jfe, as wfdd as bavle` sljldar ajguets aem ratlgs* go staoole`. Le tbat jlm-pfrlgm , bgwfvfr,
tbf eujhfr
go
jadf staoo was fxtragrmlearldy bl`b, jgrf tbae mguhdle` tbat
go
tbf gtbfr `femfr, jacle`
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]asc H
Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf a`feiy grl`leaddy oguem fjpdgyjfet jgstdy ogr tfaibfrs, wbfrfas tbrff yfars
datfr, tbls idlfetfdf* hfiajf gedy a jlegr part
go
tbf igjpaeys huslefss, wltb tbf fjpbasls bavle`
sblotfm tg tbf twg jfmliad prgofsslges (mgitgrs aem eursfs), wblib, hy `arefrle`* jgrf tbae gef tblrm
faib
go
tbf tgtad turegvfr, mgjleatf rfirultjfet eujhfrs.
]asc
Ge tbf wbgdf, tgurlsts ljprfsslges
go
_litgrla wfrf qultf oavgurahdf lemffm, wltb gedy a sjadd jlegrlty
fxprfssle` ef`atlvf sfetljfets.* ^frbaps igesfqufetdy tg tbls, apart orgj gef jlm-pfrlgm mgweture ,
tbls statf hfiajf leirfasle`dy pgpudar as a pdaif ogr tgurlsts tg spfem tbflr bgdlmays.
]asc M
Gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm, ^ftfrs`dfe Velvfrslty udtljatfdy prgvfm hy oar tbf jgst pgpudar, wltb lts stumfet
hgmy fxp emle`
sg oast aem igeslstfetdy tbat, hy tbf olead yf r, lt bam hffe jgrf tbae
twlif
tbf
mfjg`rapbli* slzf
go
tbf gtbfr lestltutfs.
e
ammltlge, add tbfsf pdaifs fxpfrlfeifm `rgwtbs, apart orgj
IJ], wbfrf tbf eujhfr mfsifemfm as tljf wfet hy, udtljatfdy sffle` lt hfigjf tbf dfast-attfemfm
ifetrf go dfarele`.
]asc F
@fefraddy spfacle`, tbfrf arf twg mlstleit* trfems. Olrstdy, tbf bfavy-muty arjs (rlodfs aem sbgt`ues)
wfrf adways oar jgrf igstdy tbae tbf dl`btfr wfapgery, hfle` ge avfra`f twg tg tbrff tljfs tbf prlif .
]bf sfigem trfem ls tbat add tbfsf mfvlifs hfiajf leirfasle`dy fxpfeslvf , olelsble` wltb tbflr bl`bfst
ajguets, apart orgj sdu` `ues, wblib , sgjfwbat strae`fdy, mfolfm tbls leodatlgeary* prfssurf, rfjalele`
adjgst tgta ddy statli* gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm .
]asc O
e
`fefrad , tbf jgrf sfmatf* aem statli* jusfujs aem art `addfrlfs arf pgpudar wltb tbf gdmfr `fefratlge,
wbfrfas hfaibfs aem hars, sgjfwbat prfmlitahdy, arf orfqufetfm* jgrf hy tbf ygue`fr irgwm, wbldf
ilefjas rfjale dlcfm hy add a`fs . Ammltlgeaddy, tbfsf trfems hfigjf jgst apparfet at fltbfr fem
go
tbf
a`f spfitruj* , jfaele` tbat add tbfsf rfirfatlgead ifetrfs rfiflvf qultf rfspfitahdf eujhfrs
go
jlmmdf
a`fm patrges*.
Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot
(*
le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
muhlgus (amk) tg hf tbf sajf as
gr
jatib sgjftble`
8 mlstleitlge (e) go mguhtoud quadlty gr wgrtb
9 mlstleit (amk) a idfar mloofrfeif gr igetrast
= tg igrrfspgem (v) rfdatle` tg mloofrfeif orgj wbat ls egrjad
gr
fxpfitfm
6 tg igrrfdatf
(v) a rfdatlgesblp hftwffe twg tble`s rfprfsfetfm hy twg eujhfrs
? ratlg (e) tg hf idgsfdy igeefitfm aem aoofit
gr
mfpfem
ge
faib gtbfr
0
aegjadgusdy (amv) a offdle`
gr
ae gplelge, fsp. gef hasfm ge fjgtlges
2
idlfetfdf (e) tg ghtale gr igddfit stb., suib as leogrjatlge gr suppgrt
-
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sfetljfet
e)
idfar, pdale, gr uejlstacfahdf3 hfle` egt tbf sajf as gtbfrs
mfjg`rapbli (amk) add tbf iustgjfrs gr idlfets go a sbgp gr gr`aelsatlge
18
leodatlgeary (amk) tg vlslt a partliudar pdaif gotfe
19 statli
(amk) sdgw, iadj, aem rfdaxfm3 daicle` fxiltfjfet
1=
sfmatf
(amk) a igjpdftf gr wlmf rae`f go stb.
16
tg orfqufet v)
rfdatle` tg a `fefrad rlsf
le
tbf prlifs go `ggms aem sfrvlifs
1?
spfitruj
e)
a pfrsge wbg usfs a partliudar sbgp, stgrf, rfstauraet fti.
10 patrge
e)
rfdatle`
tg
tbf pgpudatlge aem tbf `rgups
wltble
lt
Egtf tbat add tbfsf ogrfst-vlfws ...
1
try tg
igvfr
tbf wbgdf tasc (tbf ogrfst),
aem
egt kust bl`bdl`bt sle`df spfiloli pglets.
8. . . . try tg usf
sgjf
rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb as apprgprlatf ('fjpdgyfm', 'pgpudar', h
uslfst',
rfirult-
jfet', 'fxpfeslvf',
'idlfetfdf', 'leodatlgeary',
aem gtbfrs).
9. . . . mg egt `lvf gplelges. ]bfrf arf gedy sgjf bgefst eaturad rfaitlges as apprgprlatf ( fxtragrml
earldy ,
'aegjadgus
d
y', 'sgjfwbat
strae`fd
y',
'prfmlitah
d
y',
aem sg ge).
=. ... mg egt usf ol`urfs,
gr
fvfe
matfs. ]bfsf arf `fefraddy rfofrrfm tg ('jlm-pfrlgm', 'grl`leaddy',
'tbrff
yfars
datfr', 'olelsble`',
fti.). Ypfiloli ol`urfs aem matfs
iae
appfar le tbf trff-vlfws.
Appfemlx =
]lp
Fxfrilsf 11> sadfs pfrogrjaeifs
go
Yeazzdf , Yjggtbdgw, aem Yeltib ibgig-
datf hars, add tbrff hfle` prgmuits
go
tbf Ibuecy Ibgigdatf igjpaey.
Egt Jfetlgele` tbf ]asc
A. Pbat ogddgws ls a sujjary
go
tbf varlatlges le ahsfetfflsj at Jfdslmf aem Ytratbhure Bl`b Yibggds
tbrgu`bgut a yfar.
H. ]bf oduituatlges
le
tbf passfe`fr usa`f go Eghdf ^arc statlge tbrgu`bgut tbf may iae hf suj-
jarlsfm as ogddgws.
I. ]bf ogddgwle` sujjarlsfs tbf 8>1> sadfs pfrogrjaeifs
go
Ibuecy Ibgigdatf Hars wltb rfspfit tg
Yeazzdf, Yjggtbdgw, aem Yeltib.
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Appfemlx 6
]lp 11 Fxfrilsf
81
; Dfxliad _arlfty
^art Gef; Dfxliad Ibales
Ibale Gef Ibale ]wg Ibale ]brff Ibale Ogur Ibale Olvf
Orgj SR1) tg SR8Z,
@ffdge` s
prgolt
leirfasfs
a `rfat mfad.
Le tbf pfrlgm SR1Z-SR8Z,
tbls iduh s ol`urf rlsfs
`rfatdy.
Le
tbf efxt yfar, tbf tfaj s eujhfr* `rgws
sl`eloliaetdy.
Le tbf efxVogddgwle`
tbf/lts farele`s idljh
egtlifahdy.
SR8-R1) yfars,
ajguet* hfigjfs `rfatfr.
Eujhfr ls gt usfm wltb ueiguetahdf egues. Mg egt say;
]bf eujhfr
g
orult/watfr/gld . e tbfsf iasfs, usf ol`urf ge lts gwe gr ajguet .
Ge tbf igetrary, ajguet
ls gt
usfm wltb iguetahdf egues. Mg egt say;
]bf ajguet g appdfs/iars/pfgpdf . e tbfsf iasfs, usf ol`urf ge lts gwe gr eujhfr .
Ibale Ylx
]bfe, orgj SR9Z
tg SR=Z,
@ffdge`s
prgol t
Le
tbf efxt mfiamf (ifetury/
bado yfar/quartfr/ ..)/de tbf
olrst bado
g
tbf pfrlgm/Le tbf
sfigem bado ./Le tbf dast SRZ
yfars/ ... ,
Ibale Yfvfe Ibale Fl`bt
mfirfasfs sdl`btdy.
mfidlefs
a dlttdf.
oadds jar`leaddy.
mrgps
, hut egt sl`eloliaetdy.
hfigjfs
sjaddfr.
Ibale Elef
stays tbf sajf.
rfjales dfvfd.
. cffps stahdf .
.
mgfs egt ibae`f.
. bas dlttdf ibae`f.
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^art ]wg Yyegeyjs aem ^arapbrasfs
arfa
rf`lge
igjpaey
gr`aelsatlge
fxpgrts
prgmuits
prgmuitlge
gutput
iustgjfrs idlfetfdf
fdfitrlilty mfjaem
pgwfr effms
dfvfd go fmuiatlge
mf`rff go stumy
letfreatlgead tgurlsts ogrfl`e travfdfrs
uefjpdgyjfet ratf mf`rff go kghdfssefss
(sbarf) prlif . vaduf
tgurlst mfstleatlges pdaifs vlsltfm
traespgrt jfaes go travfd
olrle` go staoo
mlsjlssad
blrle` go staoo rfirultjfet
bavle` ibldmrfe prgmuile` goosprle`
Kapae mfvfdgpfm iguetry
pftrgd oufd
jfmliad igjpdalets
bfadtb lssufs
ibae`le` aiigjjgmatlge
jgvle` gef s bgusf
dflsurf tljf tljf goo
bgusfbgdm `ggms mgjfstli appdlaeifs
vlslts ahrgam gvfrsfas travfd
ljprlsgejfet leiarifratlge
rfasges ogr igjpdalet
iausfs go `rlfvaeif
sibggd suhkfits aiamfjli arfas
tbf VYA aem Furgpf
hgtb rf`lges
jaea`fjfet stydfs ways go jaea`le`
stumy bgurs tljf levfstfm
jl`ratlge
jgvfjfet
g
pgpudatlge
ibgrfs bgusfbgdm tascs
mlstrlit
huslefss/fetfrprlsf
igjjgmltlfs
ylfdm
pfgpdf sfrvfm
fefr`y igesujfm
sibgdastli aiblfvfjfet
tbgsf `gle` ahrgam
tbgsf wltbgut kghs
wgrtb
oavgurfm dgiatlges
jftbgms
g
jgvle` arguem
tfrjleatlge
g
fjpdgyjfet
olemle` go fjpdgyffs
prgirfatlge
Aslae eatlge
sgurif go pgwfr
hgmldy aldjfets
rfslmfetlad rfdgiatlge
gppgrtueltlfs ogr rfdaxatlge
jaiblefs ogr bgjf usf
ogrfl`e kgurefys
mftfetlge
sgurifs go mlsigetfet
olfdms go stumy
tbfsf twg parts go tbf wgrdm
jftbgms go baemdle` staoo
bgurs ahsgrhfm
rfdgiatlge tg gtbfr iguetrlfs
mgjfstli mutlfs
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Appfemlx ?
]lp 18 Fxfrilsf 89; _frh aem Egue @rajjar
_frh @rajjar
_frh
Amvfrh
1. leirfasfs
mrajatliaddy
S\Z
8.
`rgws
raplmdy
9. rlsfs
sbarpdy
=. idljhs
jgmfratfdy
]bf eujhfr
6
asifems
jar`leaddy
?
Saey
go
tbf ahgvf
ogurogdm
1
olvf vfrhsZ
0.
L
oadds
stffpdy
2 .
suhstaetladdy
]bf ol`urf
]bf ajguet
.
mfsifems
`ramuaddy
11 . mrgps sdgwdy
Lt
18
.
mfidlefs sdl`btdy
Egue @rajjar
Amkfitlvf
Egue
1.
mrajatli
leirfasf
]bfrf ls
8. raplm
`rgwtb
S]ljf
sffs
8
9. sbarp rlsf
pfrlgmZ
wltefssfs
8
=.
jgmfratf
idljh
bas
9
6
jar`lead
asifet
tg
hy
?>
orgj
sbgws
?.
ogurogdm
1
Saey
go
tbf ahgvf
a
olvf egues
uemfr`gfs
0. stffp
oadd
S\Z
fxpfrlfeifs
2 . suhstaetlad
. `ramuad
mfsifet
11. sdgw
mrgp
18. sdl`bt
mfidlef
Velts
2>
8
8 6
8 1
- orgj...
tg ...
- le tbf pfrlgm >6-1>.
- le gvfr/tbrgu`bgut/ogr/
murle`) tbf olvf-yfar
pfrlgm./tbfsf olvf yfars./
tbf pfrlgm le qufstlge.
- wltb tbf passle` go tljf.
- as t ljf `gfs hy
Velts
~ ; ? L
2>
orgj
8
8 6
8 1
1
]bls clem
go
amvfrh/amkfitlvf hf`les orgj twgogdm gewarms; tbrffogdm , ogurogdm , olvfogdm , aem sg ge.
8
]bfsf vfrhs iae hf hfttfr uemfrstggm hy lja`lele` tbf tljf pfrlgm as ae ghkfit wltb ae fyf , dggcle` at tbf
ibae`fs giiurrle`. ]bus, tbls pfrlgm mgfs lemffm sff aem wltefss .
9
Xfjfjhfr tbat tbls vfrh ls hfst usfm wltb S\Zs wblib iae sbgw pgssfsslge - ogr fxajpdf, iguetrlfs ( Kapae ),
gr`aelsatlges ( Ibuecy Ibgigdatf ), ratbfr tbae igeifpts ( eujhfr , prgolt , aem gtbfrs).
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8. Pbfe mfsirlhle` tbls `rapb dlef, tg avglm gvfrwrltle` (tbat ls, tg avglm leidumle` tgg juib jlegr mftald
aem rfpftltlvf sfetfeif struiturfs), ygu sbgu
dm
plic tbf jakgr trfems, prghahdy mfsirlhle` tbf `rapb
le
tbf tljf ibuecs S>1 tg >8 Z, S>9 tg jl m->=Z, Sjlm->= tg fem->?Z, aem S>0Z. \gu igudm adsg igjhlef tbf
olrst twg tljf pfrlgms tbus startle` wltb S>1 tg jl m->=Z, mfsirlhle` lt as mfidlele` wltb oduituatlges tg
a dgw pglet go ahgut => .
]lp
18, Fxfrilsf 86
Yaj pdf ]asc I Aeswfr orgj ]lp 0, Fxfrilsf 1>)
Vsle` gedy vfrh `rajjar
Ye azzdf hf`les tbf yfar at a bl`b
pg
let go ?> . ]bfe , gvfr tb f ol rs t tb rff quartfrs, lt mfirfasfs stfamldy tg
=6, aotfr wblib lt asifems, hut gedy sdl`btdy. Le igetrast, Yeltib starts at a dgw pglet go 8> hut `rgws wltb
fquad stfam
le
fss
le tb
gsf sajf tbrff quartf
rs
, rfaible` a pfac go 96, aotfr wblib lt mfirfasfs. As ogr
Yjggt
bd
gw, lt jfrfdy od uituatfs
tb
rgu`bgut tbf yfar at arguem 8>.
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Le
tbf olrst ofw jgetbs, Eghdf ^arc, adtbgu`b igeslstfetdy mfirfasle` tbrgu`bgut tbf yfar, ls sgjfwbat
lrgeliaddy, tbf bl`bfst go tbf tbrff iduhs .
Le
igetrast tg Maemfege` aem Eghdf ^arc, @ffdge` ls tbf gedy iduh wblib fxpfrlfeifs oduituatlges .
^glets
g
gjparlsge
Maemfege` rfaibfs tbf bl`bfst prgolt, at 1>> uelts, wblib ls ahgut 9> uelts bl`bfr tbae tbf sfigem
bl`bfst, @ffdge` (adsg at tbat sajf pglet
le
tljf).
Dlef @rapb (orgj ]lp < Fxfrilsf 1=)
Bl`bs aem Dgws
Yjggtbdgw mfsifems tg tbf dgwfst eujhfr gvfradd (le tbf jlmmdf
go
tbf sfigem quartfr), as wfdd as
rfaible` tbf bl`bfst gvfradd (le tbf dast quartfr) , aem tbus iae ifrtaledy hf salm tg oduituatf tbf jgst.
Yljldar Ofaturfs
Yeazzdf aem Yeltib arf suhstaetladdy igestaet ogr tbf olrst tbrff quartfrs .
Yeazzdf aem Yjggtbdgw start at ahgut tbf sajf dfvfd, hut olelsb wltb wlmfdy mlvfr`fet eujhfrs.
Letfrfstle` ^glets
At tbf fem
go
tbf tblrm quartfr, add tbrff dlefs fxpfrlfeif a summfe ibae`f, pfrbaps lemliatle` sgjf
fxtfread leodufeif aoofitle` add go tbfj at tbf sajf tljf.
Yjggtbdgw starts aem olelsbfs wltb tbf bl`bfst dfvfd go tbf tbrff.
Yeazzdf rfjales bl`bfr tbae Yeltib at add tljfs apart orgj tbf dast ofw jgetbs.
^glets g gjparlsge
Yjggtbdgw aiblfvfs tbf bl`bfst ajguet gvfradd, go ahgut 1>>, le tbf dast quartfr, 8> uelts bl`bfr tbae
Yeazzdf s bl`bfst dfvfd, aiblfvfm le tbf 8em aem 9rm quartfrs.
ppfemlx
)
Egtfs
1.
L, tbf autbgr, iae fasldy wrltf a ]asc Gef go gvfr 86> wgrms le tbf 8> jleutfs. ]g prgvlmf a jgrf
rfadlstli fxajpdf ogr stumfets go Fe`dlsb , L rfmuifm tbf dfe`tb go tbf sajpdf ]asc Gefs le tbls
hggc SAppfemlx < tg 18, 1= tg 1?
10>
, aem 8>) tg ahgut 8>> wgrms, adtbgu`b tbls dfe`tb varlfs
mfpfemle` ge tbf eaturf aem igjpdfxlty
go
tbf tasc.
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+
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8. ]ascs A aem H arf sljpdf hy usuad LFD]Y staemarms, sg tbflr aeswfrs arf sbgrtfr. Lt ls letfrfstle`
tg egtf tbat, mfspltf tbls sljpdlilty, tbf jleljuj wgrm dfe`tb go 16> ls fasldy surpassfm, sbgwle`
kust bgw juib leogrjatlge a ]asc Gef aituaddy igetales. ]bls jacfs lt vfry idfar tbat oduoo (as a
jfaes go `alele` wgrms) ls egt efifssary at add (hfslmfs hfle` ham wrltle`) .
]asc A
]bf `rapb rfvfads bgw ratfs go ahsfetfflsj* vary ajge` twg
bl`b sibggds, Jfdslmf aem Ytratbhure, tbrgu`bgut ae aiamfjli
yfar.
Gvfr tbls wbgdf pfrlgm, Ytratbhure fekgys wbat iae hf assujfm
tg hf
1
a dgw, aem, ifrtaledy fssfetladdy ueibae`le`, mf`rff go
truaeiy*, wbfrfas lts iguetfrpart* bgdms tbf muhlgus* mlstleitlge*
go
egt gedy a hl``fr prghdfj, hut adsg a wgrsfele` gef, sffle` a
`rgwle` hgmy go stumfets uewlddle` tg attfem sibggd.
Dggcle` at Ytratbhure le mftald, at tbf hf`leele`, tbf ratf ls kust
uemfr 1
,
aem hasliaddy rfjales tbfrf wltb apparfetdy
8
egtble`
uetgwarm* bappfele` gvfr tbf yfar. ]bf gedy aegjady* ls tbf
tblrm tfrj, wblib sffs sgjf jlegr oduituatlges, le tbf jlmst go
wblib tbf ratf mlps tg lts dgwfst pglet.
Jgvle` ge tg Jfdslmf, tbflr dfvfd hf`les jar`leaddy bl`bfr, hut
tbfe starts a stfamy, aem, gef wgudm tblec, wgrryle` rlsf tg
adjgst 8 hy jlm-pfrlgm. At tbls pglet, tbf `ramlfet aribfs* fvfe
jgrf sbarpdy upwarms, hf`leele` wltb a sjadd rlppdf*, pfrbaps
sljld rdy
oofitfm
hy
tbf
s jf fxtfre d o itgrs
wblib sff
Ytratbhure's igeiurrfet* trfjgurs. Hut wbldf tbf dattfr stahldlsfs,
Jfdslmf igetleufs lts mlvfr`fet* igursf sg tbat at yfar-fem, tbls
ifetrf
go
dfarele` suoofrs orgj = truaeiy*, wblib
ls
tbf bl`bfst
gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm.
(8>> wgrms)
]bf letrgmuitlge. Egtlif tbat tbf
'`rapb' ls efvfr jfetlgefm a`ale.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw, wltb sgjf stydlstli
pbrasle` aem rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb.
A tgpli pbrasf. ]bf tasc bas twg
dlefs, `lvle` a idfar mlvlslge. SYff
]lp
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]asc H
]bf oduituatlges
le
tbf iustgjfr usa`f go Eghdf ^arc trale sta
tlge
gvfr
lts
maytljf
gpfratle` bgurs
?aj-> passfe
`frs fetfr tbf prfjlsfs*. ]bf
efxt
twg bgurs sff tbls ol`urf
jgrf tbae mguhdf, rfaible` tbf olrst aem bl`bfst) pfac
go
adjgst
9>>, aotfr wblib tbf eujhfr oadds wltb tbf sajf stffp `ramlfet tg
16>, rfjalele` tbfrf orgj aj tg 9pj - tbf gedy pfrlgm go
rfdatlvf stahldlty le tbf may.
As ogr tbf rfjalele` tljf, tbf efxt bgur sffs ae aiifdfratle`
rlsf tg tbf sfigem pfac
go
8>>, wblib ls jaletalefm ogr ae bgur
ahgut 6aj tg ?pj) hfogrf a jgrf sfmatf* oadd
le
tbf ogddgwle`
ofw
bgurs.
Hy
pfrlgm-fem, tbf
eujhfr
bas sbruec* tg 1>>,
wblib, igleilmfetaddy*, ls tbf sajf as tbf fardy jgrele`, wbfe
tbf
statlge
`atfs*
olrst gpfe,
hgtb tljfs hfle` tbf
qulftfst
pfrlgms.
(8>1 wgrms)
]bf letrgmuitlge, tbls tljf egt
jfetlgele` tbf `rapb.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw. Egtlif
tbat
tbf
tljfs go tbf rusb bgurs) arf egt
jfetlgefm . @fefraddy, try tg dft
ygur wgrms `lvf tbf jfssa`f bfrf.
A tgpli pbrasf. ]bf tasc bas gef
dlef, sg tbf tljf axls
ls
mlvlmfm letg
twg. SYff ]lp < ^art Gef; ]ry tg
Mlvlmf Z .
]bf sfigem tgpli pbrasf, igvfrle`
tbf sfigem part go tbf wbgdf pfrlgm.
Ae letfrfstle` pglet ls bl`bdl`btfm.
A cfy ofaturf ls bl`bdl`btfm .
Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms
ge
tbf
dfot *
le tbf tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
ahsfetfflsj e) tg hfigjf sjaddfr
8 truaeiy e) a idfar mloofrfeif
gr
igetrast
9 iguetfrpart e) tbf praitlif
go
hfle` ahsfet gr away orgj wgrc gr sibggd
=
muhlgus
amk)
a pfrsge
gr tble` wblib bas tbf sajf pgsltlge gr oueitlge
6
mlstleitlge
e) tg rlsf le tbf ogrj go ae arib gr iurvf
? uetgwarm {amk) tbf ait gr statf go hfle` away orgj sibggd wltbgut pfrjlsslge
0
aegjady
e) a tble` tbat dggcs
gr
jgvfs dlcf a wavf
2
tg arib v) tg travfd rf`udardy gvfr sgjf mlstaeif
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igeiurrfet amk)
ae gmm gr strae`f sltuatlge gr igemltlge
mlvfr`fet amk)
sdgw, iadj , aem rfdaxfm3 daicle` le fxiltfjfet
18 tg igjjutf
v) a huldmle` tg`ftbfr wltb lts `rguems
19 sur`f e)
go mguhtoud quadlty gr wgrtb
1= tg sustale
v) ueusuad aem uefxpfitfm, aem usuaddy uepdfasaet
16 prfjlsfs
e) bappfele` gr giiurrle` at tbf sajf tljf
1? sfmatf amk)
a summfe leirfasf le tbf ajguet gr eujhfr go sgjftble`
10
tg
sbrlec v)
a harrlfr dlcf a mggr usfm tg idgsf
ae
fetraeif gr fxlt
12 igleilmfetaddy amv) tg suppgrt, cffp, gr bgdm stb. stfamy
1< `atf e) giiurrle` gr fxlstle` at tbf sajf tljf
Appfemlx 1>
Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf Oggthadd Iduhs Dlef @rapb (orgj ]lp =)
]bf `rapb jacfs a igjparlsge g tbf prgolt `alefm ogr
Eghdf ^arc, Maemfege`, aem @ffdge` oggthadd iduhs gvfr
a iadfemar yfar.
]bf letrgmuitlge sbgrt aem tg tbf pglet aem usle`
mloofrfet `rajjar aem tfrjs orgj tbf tasc qufs
tlge. Egtlif tbat tbf `rapb s efvfr jfetlgefm
a`ale le tbf aeswfr.
Dggcle` olrst as a wbgdf, apart orgj a sbgrt leltlad* letfrvad, Maemf-
ege` ls idfardy jgrf prgoltahdf tbae lts twg rlvads*, aem, ammltlgeaddy,
`fefratfs leirfasle`dy bl`bfr farele`s gvfr tbls tljf wbfrfas tbf
gppgsltlge suoofr jlxfm ogrtuefs) , jacle` tbls fstahdlsbjfet. hy oar,
tbf jgst oleaeiladdy suiifssoud.
Egw igeslmfrle` Maemfege` le jgrf mftald
1
, lt hf`les at =6 tbgu-
saem mgddars)
8
, wblib ls sdl`btdy dgwfr tbae Eghdf ^arc. Bgwfvfr, hy
tbf fem go tbf olrst quartfr, lt bas rlsfe tg ?>, adrfamy surpassle`* tbf
gtbfrs. ]bls asifet igetleufs le a jaeefr wblib wgudm pdfasf aey
stacfbgdmfr*,
udtljatfdy* rfaible` 1>>, tbf bl`bfst ol`urf gvfradd hy
oar, => ahgvf tbf efarfst igjpftltgr*, @ffdge`.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw
wltb sgjf
rfad
wgrdm Fe`dlsb.
Egtlif tbat tbfrf arf eg ol`urfs bfrf.
A tgpli pbrasf letrgmuile` tbf trff
vlfw hf`leele` wltb Maemfege` .
Yl`eloliaet ol`urfs arf wrlttfe bfrf.
]bfrf
s
adsg sgjf bgefst eaturad
rfaitlges/stydlstli pbrasle`.
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As ogr Eghdf ^arc, lts prgoldf* ls ae apprgxljatf jlrrgr lja`f
go
Mae
mfege`, mfsifemle` tbrgu`bgut. Lt starts prgjlsle`dy at kust gvfr 6>,
jacle` lt, sgjfwbat lrgeliaddy*, tbf hfst-pfrogrjle` iduh at tbat tljf,
gedy tg olelsb at tbf mguhtdfssdy mlsappgletle` dfvfd go 1>, tbfe hfle`
tbf dgwfst ol`urf
go
add, yft at dfast rfjalele` le tbf hdaic .
A tgpli pbrasf, letrgmuile` Eghdf
^arc.
Ygjf eaturad rfaitlges.
]bf lmlgjatli pbrasf sbgwe le
levfrtfm igjjas.
Jgvle` tg @ffdge`, lt ibarts* ae frratli* igursf, oduituatle` ka``fmdy*
hftwffe lts igjpftltgrs*, hut femle` rfspfitahdy
ge
a bl`b pglet go
?>, lts sawtggtb* gutdlef igetrastle` wltb tbf sjggtb igetgurs* go tbf
gtbfrs , wbg rfjale ljjuef* tg wbatfvfr iausfs tbls lestahldlty.
A tgpli pbrasf, letrgmuile` @ff-
dge`.
]bf trfem
ls
sujjarlsfm wltbgut
`lvle` ueefifssary ol`urfs.
(88= wgrms)
1
As ]lp tg ibart (v) bavle` a zl`za``fm fm`f, sljldar tg tbf iuttle` fm`f go a saw
frratli
(amk) ae gutdlef go ae ghkfit, fsp. adge` a irgss-sfitlgead pdaef
18
ka``fmdy (amv} egt aoofitfm hy sgjftble`
19 sawtggtb (amk) egt ogddgwle` aey pdae gr rf`udar pattfre
1= igetgur (e) a pfrsge, tfaj, gr igjpaey wblib igjpftfs a`alest gtbfrs
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^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts
Yff Appfemlx 12 (16 fxtra wgrms)
Appfemlx
]lp 1= Fxfrilsf 99; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf ^lf Ibart
]bf plf ibarts jacf a igjparlsge hftwffe tbf prgpgrtlges go
prgmuits fxpgrtfm orgj Austradla
le 8>>6
aem 8>1>.
]bf jale jfssa`f ls tbat,
le
hgtb yfars, igad aem lrge arf tbf
dar`fst aem sfigem dar`fst rfspfitlvfdy. Ammltlgeaddy, hy tbf sfi-
gem yfar,
igad, tbat sgdlm ogssld oufd, bas rfaibfm adjgst bado go
tbf tgtad, igjpdftfdy mgjleatle`* tbf olfdm , lddustratle` tbat jlele`
tacfs ae gvfrwbfdjle`* olrst pdaif gvfr tbf gtbfr prljary* lemus-
trlfs (a`rliudturf aem jaeuoaiturle`)
le
tbf igetrlhutlge tg tbls
eatlge s ogrfl`e tramf.
Xf`armle` tbf olrst yfar, igad aem lrge arf 98 aem 80 rfspfi-
tlvfdy, tacle` tgp pgsltlges , ogddgwfm hy wbfat
(1? )
aem jfat
11 ), wltb add tbf gtbfr igjjgmltlfs* hfle` jgrf gr dfss lesl`-
eloliaet.
Olsb ,
sgjfwbat surprlsle`dy
`lvfe tbf
fxtfet
go
igastdlef avaldahdf), sbarfs tbf dgwfst rue`* wltb vfblidfs at 8 .
Jgvle` ogrwarm bado a mfiamf, wltb igad bavle` rlsfe tg suib a
mgjleaet pgsltlge go
=9 ,
tbfrf just efifssarldy hf igrrfs-
pgemle`* mfirfasfs le gtbfr prgmuits mfstlefm tg `g ahrgam.
]bls ls qultf sl`eloliaet
le
wbfat, wblib bas mfidlefm orgj 1? tg
1> . Adtbgu`b lrge, orgj
80
tg 8> , adsg sbrlecs* igeslmfrahdy,
lt bas
egt
dgst lts
sfigemary
status. Olsb a`ale rfjales tbf
dgwfst at 1
,
egw bavle` tbf uefevlahdf* mlstleitlge go hfle`
tbfrf adgef.
(8>= wgrms)
Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot
(* le
tbf tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
]bf letrgmuitlge, jfetlgele` tbf ibarts,
hut egtlif tbat tbfy arf efvfr jfetlgefm
a`ale.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw, egtle` twg jale pglets,
aem kglele` tbfj tg`ftbfr le a hrgamfr
'rfad-wgrdm' ghsfrvatlge.
Egtlif tbat tbfrf arf eg ol`urfs gr matfs.
Yl`eloliaet ofaturfs (bl`bs aem dgws) le
8>>6.
Egtlif tbat tbls aeswfr usfs tbf 'spgrts
igjjfetatgr's tfesf'.
Ygjf rfad wgrdm cegwdfm`f.
Yl`eloliaet ofaturfs (bl`bs aem dgws) le
8>1>.
Ygjf stydlstli pbrasle`.
tg mgjleatf (v)
gef go tbf bgrlzgetad parts go a dammfr3 (ol`.) a pgsltlge gr raec
8 gvfrwbfdjle`
(amk)
assgilatfm gr igeefitfm wltb stb. tbat ygu bavf kust
jfetlgefm
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9 prljary
(amk)
sg `rfat as tg jacf rfslstaeif gr gppgsltlge usfdfss
= igjjgmlty
(e)
ae artlidf go tramf gr igjjfrif, fsp. a prgmuit
6 rue`
(e)
egt hfle` wgrtby go fevy gr mfslrf tg
hf
tbat way
?
igrrfspgemle`
(amk)
tg dfssfe le slzf3 tg hfigjf sjaddfr
0
tg sbrlec (v)
go tbf `rfatfst
rfdfvaeif, sl`eloliaeif, gr ljpgrtaeif
2 uefev lahdf
(amk)
tg igetrgd wltb tbf bl`bfst, jgst mftfrjlele` leodufeif
^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`b
t
Yff Appfemlx
12
(9= fxtra wgrms)
Appfemlx 18
]lp 16 Fxfrilsf 9=; Yajpdf Aeswfrs tg ]wg ]ahdfs go Ol`urfs
1. Ogrfst _lfw
8. Oudd Aeswfr
]bf ogddgwle` sujjarlsfs tbf varlatlges
le
lrge prgmuitlge (le
jlddlges go tges) le olvf Austradlae statfs gvfr a 96-yfar pfrlgm;
11>.
Gvfradd, tbfrf arf tbrff trfems. Olrstdy, EYP prgmuifm tbf jgst
go
tbls jftad le add yfars fxifpt tbf dast. Yfigemdy, tbfrf wfrf le
irfasle` ylfdms* le add statfs, fxifpt _li
.3
bgwfvfr, tbf olead trfem
ls
tbat prgmuitlge mfvfdgpfm partliudardy oast
le
Qdm., tg tbf fxtfet
tbat lt gvfrtggc* EYP le tbf dast yfar, lddustratle` tbat tbfsf twg
egrtb-fastfre statfs tg`ftbfr prgmuifm, gvfrwbfdjle`dy*, jgst
go Austradlas lrge, rfemfrle`* tbf rfst go tbf eatlge vlrtuaddy*
lesl`eloliaet.
Dggcle` at _li., YA, aem PA tbf olrst bam tbf dgwfst gutput go
8.= (jlddlge), sbgwle` eg igeslstfet* `rgwtb, aem tbf gtbfr twg
statfs, startle` at sljldar dfvfds, gedy jaea`fm jlegr `ales , tg
=.1
aem 6.0 rfspfitlvfdy - ifrtaledy qultf uelesplrle`* foogrts ,
fspfiladdy `lvfe tbf igeslmfrahdf* tljf orajf levgdvfm.
]bls letrgmuitlge ibggsfs egt tg
jfetlge tbf tasc, hut lt mgfs jfe
tlge jlddlges go tges tg avglm rf
pfatle` lt tbrgu`bgut tbf tasc.
Yleif tbrff trfems bavf hffe
ibgsfe, tbf aeswfr gr`aelsfs tbfj
wltb olrstdy , sfigemdy , aem
olead . ]wg go tbf trfems arf kglefm
tg`ftbfr ogr a hrgamfr rfad-wgrdm
ghsfrvatlge.
]bf vfrh lddustratf (gr lemliatf )
ls gotfe usfm ogr mrawle`
igeiduslges.
A tgpli pbrasf, `rguple` _li., YA,
aem
P
tg`ftbfr ogr igjparlsge.
Jlddlges ls rfpfatfm geif,
le
hraicfts,
tg
rfjlem tbf rfamfr go
tbf uelt usfm.
Ygjf eaturad rfaitlges.
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As ogr EYP aem Qdm., le tbf olrst, prgmuitlge hf`ae at 11.9. ]bls
`rfw stfamldy, aem hy pfrlgm-fem bam rfaibfm lts bl`bfst pglet
go
00. Lts egrtbfre efl`bhgur, le igetrast, startfm juib dgwfr at 8.?,
fm`le`* upwarms tg gedy =.?
le
1 igeslstfet
amk)
uelesplrle`
amk)
8
igeslmfrahdf
amk)
19 tg fm`f
v)
1= fxpgefetlad amk)
16
gutput
e)
?
rlvad
e)
^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts
tbf rgdf aem rfspgeslhldltlfs
go
ae ljpgrtaet kgh gr pgsltlge
igjpdftfdy daicle`
le
sgjftble`
uemfr tbf `rguem
tbf jale part
go
sgjftble`
tg jgvf abfam
le
aiblfvfjfet, prgmuitlge, gr sigrf
adjgst gr vfry efardy
tg jgvf sdgwdy
le
a partliudar mlrfitlge
mfprfssle`3 egt iausle` `ggm offdle`
tbf tgtad ajguet
go
irgps, prgolt, fti. prgmuifm
ratbfr dar`f
le
slzf, mlstaeif,
gr
fxtfet, fti.
tg iausf stb./sh. tg hf
le
a partliudar statf gr igemltlge
tbf ajguet
go
sgjftble` prgmuifm
igestaetdy ogddgwle` tbf sajf igursf
vfry `rfat aem pgwfroud, jacle` rfslstaeif gr gppgsltlge
usfdfss
a pfrsge, igjpaey, gr tble`, tbat igjpftfs wltb aegtbfr
`rgwle` hy leirfasle`dy `rfatfr mf`rffs
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Appfemlx 19
]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art Gef; ]brff Yajpdf Mla`raj Ogrfst-_lfws
1 Vsle` Ytfps/Yta`fs
Gvfradd, tbfrf arf tbrff sta`fs
le
tbls traesogrjatlge* prgifss, tbf olrst hfle` tbf pbysliad irusble`* aem
oldtfrle`
go
tbf leput grf*, wblib adsg addgws a offmhaic aem rf-irusble` . ]bfe ogddgws tbf dlqulm-hasfm
sta`f, levgdvle` ml`fstle` * aem prfilpltatle`* gut tbf rfqulrfm prgmuit, dfamle` tg tbf mry olead sta`f; tbf
tbfrjad* hacle`* aem stgra`f, tbus igjpdftle` tbf prgifss.
8 Vsle` Eaturad Ogrifs SYff adsg Appfemlx 1?Z
Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf systfjatli aem stfamy rfmuitlge go dar`f, sgdlm, aem ljpurf
rgic tg a rfolefm* pgwmfr tbrgu`b tbf utldlsatlge
go
pbysliad, ibfjliad, aem tbfrjad* jfaes.
S,
hfle`
pudvfrlsatlge , ailmli aitlge, aem bfat, rfspfitlvfdy. (pgsslhdf fxtra part)Z
9 Vsle` ^bysliad ^arts
@fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss ls a oaitgry-hasfm aem fssfetladdy dlefar* systfj
go
igevfygrs aem
igetalefrs*, letfrigeefitfm ogr tbf purpgsf go igevfrtle`* hauxltf grf (at tbf leput) tg rfolefm* adujlea (at
tbf gutput), wbldf apprgprlatfdy rfjgvle` tbf watfr aem rfslmuf wastf prgmuit
le
tbf jlm-prgifss.
Egtlif tbat tbfsf ogrfst-vlfws avglm mlrfitdy eajle` parts gr `lvle` spfiloli mftalds. ]bfy arf lemffm ogrfst-vlfws ,
tryle`
tg
hrgamdy sujjarlsf tbf prgifss wblib ls sbgwe.
Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb
tb
flr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
traesogrjatlge (e)
tg prfss gr squffzf stb. wltb a ogrif tbat hrfacs gr mfogrjs lt
8 tg irusb
(v) jftad-hfarle` jlefrad gr rgic
9
grf (e)
tg sfparatf as a sgdlm orgj tbf dlqulm
gr
`as ogrj
= tg ml`fst (v)
le a olef gr purf statf, orff orgj ljpurltlfs
6 tg prfilpltatf
(v)
tbf ait
gr
prgifss go traesogrjle`
gr
ibae`le` stb.
?
tbfrjad (amk)
tg igevfrt stb., fsp. oggm , letg usfahdf ogrj
0 tg hacf (v)
tg pbysliaddy hrfac sgjftble` letg olef pgwmfr
2
rfolefm (amk)
fxtfemfm, arrae`fm le, gr ogddgwle` a dlef
dlef r (amk)
tg ibae`f gr jacf stb. ibae`f orgj gef ogrj tg aegtbfr
igetalefr (e)
igeefitfm wltb bfat
18
tg igevfrt (v) aeytble` tbat igetales
gr
bgdms sgjftble`
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Appfemlx 1=
]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art ]wg; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf Fyf Mla`raj
]bf jaeefr le wblib tbf letfread* igjpgefets go tbf bujae fyf
igddfitlvfdy oueitlge iae
hf
sujjarlsfm as ogddgws.
Gvfradd
tbfrf arf
tbrff
sta`fs
tbf
olrst hfle`
tbf lja`f
rfifptlge, le wblib tbf dl`bt rays orgj a vlfwfm ghkfit pass
tbrgu`b tbf idujp* go orget dayfrs. ]bfe tbfrf ls tbf ogiussle`*
sta`f, wblib sffs tbfsf rays pass tbrgu`b tbf jale hgmy go tbf
fyf tg strlcf* tbf rfar, at wblib pglet hf`les tbf fdfitrli-pudsf
sta`f, as tbf fyf rfspgems* hy sfemle` sl`eads tg tbf hrale tg
hf
letfrprftfm* as vlslge.
@fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf dlefar prgpa`atlge*
go dl`bt tbrgu`b tbf fyf, aem, prljarldy* hy jusiudar odfxle`*, tbf
ogiussle` go tbls dl`bt sg tbat tbf rfsudtaet* fdfitrliad sl`eads iae
travfd tg tbf hrale ogr tbf ogrjudatlge* go
ae
lja`f.
Dggcle` olrst as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf sgot, dlefar*,
aem mguhtdfssdy vfry letrliatf igeefitlge go traesparfet* hlgdg`l
iad* dayfrs, efvfrtbfdfss hfle` mlrfitdy igjparahdf tg a jfibae
liad iajfra le hgtb tbf tbrgu`b
traesjlsslge
go
dl`bt, aem,
udtljatfdy*, tbf igevfrslge
go
dl`bt letg lja`f.
Dggcle` at tbf gutfr dayfrs, dl`bt orgj a vlfwfm ghkfit passfs
tbrgu`b tbf igekueitlva, a prgtfitlvf jfjhraef* gvfr tbf fyf.
]bls dl`bt tbfe jffts tbf aqufgus bujgur, wblib, as tbf eajf
su``fsts, ls cfpt olddfm wltb odulm, sfrvle` tg prgtfit tbf `dghudar*
dfes wltble . ]bf dl`bt jffts tbls igjpgefet, wbgsf purpgsf, as
wltb aey dfes, ls tg ogius* tbf rays tg ogrj a sbarp lja`f.
As ogr tbf letfrlgr, tbls egw ogiussfm dl`bt passfs tbrgu`b tbf kfd
dy-dlcf* vltrfgus bujgur, wblib
ls
hy oar, tbf dar`fst part go tbf
fyf, jaletalele` tbf sbapf aem prgtfitle` tbf apparfetdy* vfry
mfdliatf* rftlea, dlele`* tbf rfar. ]bls, upge hfle` struic, sfems
fdfitrliad ljpudsfs tg tbf hrale vla* tbf gptli efrvf ogr tbf ogrju
datlge* go vlsuad* lja`fs.
Jgvle` tg ege-gptliad* igjpgefets, tbfrf fxlst rfitus jusidfs
ogr tbf fyf tg swlvfd* tbf fyfhadd ltsfdo, aem hdggm vfssfds ogr tbf
prgvlslge go gxy`fe tg tbf rftlea aem ljjfmlatf surrguems.
Ae letrgmuitlge egt jfetlgele`
tbf tasc.
Egtlif tbat add
tbrff ogrfst-
A ogrfst-vlfw
vlfws bfrf
usle` tbf sta`fs.
avglm spfilol-
iaddy eajle`
parts gr plfifs.
A ogrfst-vlfw
usle` tbf
eaturad ogrifs.
A ogrfst-vlfw
usle`
tbf pbysliad
parts.
]bls ogrfst-vlfw wldd hf usfm le
tbls aeswfr.
Ogddgwle` tbf mla`raj dg`liaddy
orgj tbf rl`bt tg tbf dfot.
Ygjf fxtfread cegwdfm`f.
Aotfr a dg`liad para`rapb hrfac, tbf
mfsirlptlge igetleufs.
Aotfr aegtbfr dg`liad para`rapb
hrfac, sgjf olead mftalds arf `lvfe.
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Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot(* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb t flr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
letfread
(amk) a sjadd, idgsf `rgup3 a dujp gr jass
8 idujp
(e) tbat iae
hf
sffe tbrgu`b 3 addgwle` ygu tg sff tbrgu`b lt
9
tg ogius (v)
tg rfam gr hrle` gut tbf jfaele` go sgjftble`
= tg strlcf (v)
a jgvfjfet tbrgu`b spaif gr gtbfr suhstaeifs
6
tg
rfspgem
(v) iausfm hy tbf tble` tbat bas kust hffe jfetlgefm
? tg letfrprft (v) sbapfm dlcf a `dghf3 spbfrliad gr hadd-sbapfm
0 prgpa`atlge (e) a tble sbfft gr dayfr go tlssuf
2
prljarl dy (amv) fxtfemfm , arrae`fm
le
gr ogddgwle` a dlef
rfsudtaet (amk)
irfatlge gr prfparatlge levgdvle` iarf aem mftald
11
ogrjudatlge
(e)
rfdatle` tg dlof, dlvle` tble`s, gr dlvle` gr`aelsjs
18
dlefar (amk) tg blt gr hae` letg stb.
19 traesparfet (amk) jgstdy3 iblfody3 ogr tbf jgst part
1= hlgdg`liad (amk) tg rfait hy sgjf aitlge
16 udtljatfdy (amv) a sgot, fdastli, aem gotfe traesparfet jatfrlad
1?
jfjhraef
(e)
tg ture arguem as lo
ge
a swlvfd gr turele` mfvlif
10
`dghudar
(amk)
hy way go3 tbrgu`b a pdaif
12 kfddy (e)
sffjle` tg
hf
sg aiigrmle` tg appfaraeif gr leltla d fvlmfeif
1< apparfetdy (amv) rfdatle` tg dl`bt aem vlslge
8>
mfdliatf
(amk)
leslmf go sgjftble`3 rfdatle` tg tbf leefr part
81
tg dlef (v)
tg hfem eaturaddy wltbgut hrfacle`
88 vla (prfp) tg hrle` stb . letg ogius3 tg ait tg prgmuif a sbarp, idfar lja`f
89 vlsuad (amk)
tg igvfr tbf leslmf go stb . wltb a dayfr
8= gptliad (amk)
ora`ldf, fasldy maja`fm gr burt
86 tg swlvfd (v)
rfdatle` tg vlslge, sl`bt, aem sffle`
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>
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(Z.)
^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts
Yff Appfemlx 12
81
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tNdl,S. NYJ
Appfemlx 16
]lp 1? Fxfrilsf 9? ^art ]wg; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf @advaegjftfr Mla`raj
]bf mla`raj sbgws bgw a `advaegjftfr oueitlges tg aiiuratfdy
jfasurf tbf ajguet go ae fdfitrli iurrfet passle` tbrgu`b lt.
Gvfra dd tbfrf arf twg prgifssfs at wgrc , tbf olrst hfle` fdfitrl
iad , levgdvle` tbf
iurrfet
passle` tbrgu`b a wlrf-igldfm aem
plvgtfm* letfrlgr. Yfigemdy, tbfrf giiurs tbf sljudtaefgus* pbysl
iad* foofit, wblib mfodfits* tbf ifetrfplfif aem attaibfm pgletfr
prgpgrtlgeaddy tg tbf ajguet go tbf iurrfet hfle` jfasurfm .
Dggcle`
t
tbf ifetrad igjpgefets, tbf aituad pgletfr bas a
iguetfrwfl`bt ge gef fem , kust hfygem tbf splemdf* gvfr wblib
tbf ifetrad lrge iydlemfr rgtatfs* .
Le
ammltlge, tbfrf ls a ifetra ddy
attaibfm rfture sprle` tg apprgprlatfdy iguetfrait tbf pbysliad
Dgrfetz ogrif prgmuifm (orgj tbf letfraitlge* go tbf ja`eftli
aem fdfitrli olfdms}, addgwle` tbf pgletfr tg stgp, as wfdd as rfture
le` lt tg zfrg
le
tbf ahsfeif go leput.
Xf`armle` tbf vlsuad rfamle` go tbls iurrfet , tbf siadf ls ari*
sbapfm , wltb `ramuatlges aem eujfrliad jarcle`s apprgprlatfdy
i
ad
lhratfm* tg tbf rae`f tbf mfvlif* bas hffe mfsl`efm tg jfa
surf. ]bls just hf mlrfit (as gppgsfm tg adtfreatle`), aem ls
le
uelts go ajpfrfs gr 'ajps' , gotfe as dgw as jlirg-ajps wbfe le
vgdvle` fdfitrliad ilriultry. Add tbls `lvfs tbf jftfr ae aiiuraiy go
pdus gr jleus 1.6 .
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2 ari
stb. sbapfm dlcf a ple gr sbaot ge wblib stb. fdsf tures
< tg iadlhratf
(e)
(v)
(e)
rfdatle` tg aituad fxlstfeif aem jgvfjfet
1>
mfvlif
tg mftfrjlef, olx, gr jarc tbf `ramuatlges
^gsslhdf Ole ad ]bgu`bts
Yff Appfemlx 12 1 8 gr 10 fxtra wgrms)
Appfemlx ?
lp ?; Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf ^rgifss Mla`raj
Bfrf
ls
a sujjary
go
bgw tbf grf, hauxltf,
ls
igevfrtfm letg
aduj
le
a.
Dggcle` as a wbgdf, tbf prgifss levgdvfs tbf systfjatli aem
stfamy rfmuitlge go dar`f, sgdlm, aem ljpurf rgic tg a rfolefm
pgwmfr tbrgu`b tbf utldlsatlge go pbysliad, ibfjliad , aem tbfrjad
jfaes, hfle` pudvfrlsatlge, ailmli aitlge, aem bfat, rfspfitlvfdy.
Xf`armle` tbf leltlad* pbasf, aotfr hfle` mfdlvfrfm, tbf grf ls
passfm tbrgu`b a rgtary irusbfr. ]bf rfsudt et plfifs arf
mfpgsltfm* le a Ml`fstfr , wbfrf prfdljleary oldtfrle` fxidumfs
jatfrlad lesuoolilfetdy rfmuifm. ]bls ls rfturefm tg tbf grl`lead le
put igevfygrs* tg hf rf-ofm tbrgu`b tbf irusbfr, fstahdlsble` a
offmhaic dggp* fesurle` gedy apprgprlatfdy sjadd partlidfs arf
igevfyfm* gewarms.
Jgvle` ge tg tbf ibfjliad pbasf, tbf Ml`fstfr mlssgdvfs* tbls
jftad-hfarle` rgic
le ae
ailm hatb, tbfrfhy irfatle`
ae
ljpurf
adujlea sgdutlge*. ]bls ls oldtfrfm a`ale tg rfjgvf wastf rfslmuf*
(wblib ls truicfm tg daemoldds), dfavle` tbf egw purfr adujlea
dlqulm tg hf plpfm,
le
tbf efxt stfp, tg a ^rfilpltatgr , wbfrf tbf
fxifss watfr ls rfjgvfm, aem tbf adujlea, dg`liaddy fegu`b, ls
prfilpltatfm letg a sfmljfetary sdum`f*.
As ogr tbf olead pbasf, tbls rfolefm jatfrlad ls mfdlvfrfm tg a rgta
ry
clde wblib, tbrgu`b tbf appdliatlge go bl`b tfjpfraturf, hacfs*
gut tbf rfslmuad jglsturf, ljprgvle` tbf tfxturf* tg irfatf tbf
fem adujlea pgwmfr.
]bf letrgmuitlge, egt jfetlgele`
tbf mla`raj.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw, usle` tbf 'eaturad
ogrifs' apprgaib.
Egtf tbf sfqufeifrs 'aotfr aem
'prfdljleary'.
Egtf tbf passlvf vglif 'ShfZ
passfm /mfpgsltfm /rfturefm / .. ' ...
. .. hut egtf tbf aitlvf vglif
'mlssgdvfs', sleif wf bavf a eajfm
suhkfit 'Ml`fstfr ', aem lt ls `ggm tg
vary tbf `rajjar.
Ygjf fxtfread cegwdfm`f.
Aotfr a dg`liad para`rapb hrfac, tbf
olead part go tbf prgifss ls
mfsirlhfm.
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Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
SYff Appfemlx
19
ogr ogrfst-vlfw vgiahudaryZ
leltlad (amk) tbf iurvle`
go
a dlef
gr
patb haic tgwarms ltsfdo
8 tg mfpgslt (v) tg tacf, iarry,
gr
traespgrt stb. orgj gef pdaif tg aegtbfr
9
igevfygr
(e) tg day stb. mgwe gr dft oadd
= dggp (e) a dlqulm wltb sgdlms mlssgdvfm leslmf lt
6
tg
igevfy
(v) a jummy
gr
sdusby jass gr mfpgslt
?
tg mlssgdvf (v) tg mry gr barmfe stb. hy bfatle`
0 sgdutlge (e) tbf suroaif ibaraitfrlstlis
go
stb.,
le
lts dggcs aem offd
2
rfslmuf (e) sgjftble` tbat rfjales aotfr a part ls tacfe
< sdum`f (e)
go gr
rfdatle` tg tbf hf`leele`
1> tg hacf (v) tg iausf stb. tg hfigjf part
go
a dlqulm
11
tfxturf
(e) stb. tbat traespgrts a prgmuit, gotfe usle` a jgvle` hfdt
^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts
L Yff Appfemlx 12
81
fxtra wgrms) L
Appfemlx 10
]lp 10 Fxfrilsf 90; _giahudary aem Yajpdf
eswfr
tg tbf Japs
A Mlrfitlges
]bf igjpass pglets arf; Egrtb, Ygutb, Fast, Pfst, Egrtbfast, Ygutbfast, Egrtbwfst, aem Ygutbwfst.
]g
ogrj amkfitlvfs, put -fre
t
tbf fem
go
tbfsf wgrms; Egrtbfre , Ygutbfastfre aem sg ge. ]bfy arf
iapltadlsfm ge a jap tg sbgw mlrfitlges, hut egt le a tfxt.
H _giahudary go Ibae`f
_frh Egue
_frh
Egue
(rf)igestruit (rf )igestruitlge
fxpaem fxpaeslge
mfjgdlsb
mfjgdltlge igetrait igetraitlge
(rf)mfvfdgp (rf)mfvfdgpjfet fvgdvf fvgdutlge
rfpdaif rfpdaifjfet traesogrj traesogrjatlge
jgmloy jgmloliatlge
`rgw
`rgwtb
rfhuldm rfhuldmle`
igevfrt
igevfrslge
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I Jap _giahudary
@fe ofaturfs
igestruitlge
sfrvlifs
oaildltlfs
ajfeltlfs
traespgrt a ge)
vaiaet daem
Eaturad ofaturfs
dacf
ogrfst
jguetale
frgslge
rlvfr
pasturf
Amk s/egues g
@fe egues g
lemustrlfs
arfas
a`rliudturad rf`lge
rftald mlstrlit
tgurlsj zgef
jaeuoaiturle` prgvleif
rfirfatlgead part s)
tfibegdg`y
sfitlge
Egues g spfi arfas
gutsclrts
suhurh
sfaslmf
igast
hgrmfr
ifetrf
M
Yajpdf Aeswfr tg tbf Japs
Amk s go arfas
rurad
urhae
lemustrlad
rfslmfetlad
igjjfrilad
igastad
Amk s rfofrrle` haic
grl`lead
geif
ogrjfr
prfvlgus
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r
mDfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot
*
le tbf prfvlgus tfxt wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
fxifsslvfdy amv) tg prgvlmf tble`s tbat a partliudar pfrsge gr sltuatlge effms
8
igjpdfx e) igeefitfm wltb watfr
9
tg iatfr v)
tbf prgifss go ibae`le` stb. tg sult a efw sltuatlge
= figdg`liad amk) ae arfa go daem gr watfr, fsp. a dge` gef
6
amaptatlge e) tg arrae`f gr mfsl`e stb. le rfdatlge tg gtbfr ofaturfs
? aquatli amk)
le a way tbat ls `rfatfr tbae wbat ls rfasgeahdf gr apprgprlatf
0 tfrrale e)
sffjle` tg hf sg aiigrmle` tg appfaraeif gr leltlad fvlmfeif
2 tg
adl`e
v) igvfrle` a dar`f arfa3 `rfat
le
ajguet
tg igjprlsf
v) tbf parts go ae arfa tbat arf a dge` way orgj tbf ifetrf
swajp e) rfdatle` tg tbf gutfr fm`f go a partliudar arfa
18 rfaibfs e)
ae
arfa go dgw daem tbat ls adways sgot aem wft
19
fxtfeslvf
amk)
a sjadd dlvle` irfaturf tbat igeslsts go gedy gef ifdd
1= jarsbdaem e) igjpdftfdy mfvfdgpfm3 wltb add tbf quadloliatlges effmfm ogr stb.
16 apparfetdy amv) tg hfigjf dge`fr3 tg dfe`tbfe stb.
1? tg
fdge`atf
v)
ae arfa go `rguem tbat ls vfry wft gr igvfrfm wltb watfr
10 ajgfha e) daemsiapf3 tbf typf, sbapf, aem eaturf go a daemogrj
12
pfrlpbfrad
amk)
tg bavf stb./sh. as parts gr jfjhfrs
1< uttfrdy amv) aey ofaturf tbat prgvlmfs igjogrt, igevfelfeif, gr pdfasurf
8>
ajfelty e)
tg strftib rl`bt airgss stb.
8
ouddy odfm`fm
amk) fjpbaslsle` bgw igjpdftf stb. ls
88 strlcle` amk) a `rgup go huldmle`s go a sljldar typf tg`ftbfr le gef pdaif
89
vlsta e) letfrfstle` aem ueusuad sg tbat lt attraits attfet l
ge
8= tg spae v) a hfautloud vlfw go tbf iguetryslmf, a ilty, fti.
^gsslhdf Olead ]bgu`bts
Yff Appfemlx 12 86 fxtra wgrms)
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Appfemlx 12
]lp 12, Fxfrilsf 9), add tbf sajpdf olead tbgu`bts bavf hffe put sfparatfdy le tbls appfemlx. ]bfrf
arf tbrff rfasges ogr tbls .
Olrstdy, lt sbgws tbat olead tbgu`bts arf
sfparatf
orgj ae aeswfr, aem egt efifssary tg tbf ]asc
Aiblfvfjfet ' iatf`gry. ]bf tasc
ls
ouddy aiblfvfm wltbgut tbfj. Olead tbgu`bts amm egtble` tg tbls
iatf`gry. Le tbls sfesf, tbfy arf egt efifssary, aem L mlm egt wlsb tg sbgw tbat tbfy hfdge` tg tbf igrf
aeswfr.
Bgwfvfr, olead tbgu`bts iae amm tg tbf ' Dfxl
ia
d
Xfsgurif
aem
@rajjatliad
Xae`f Aiiuraiy '
iatf`grlfs, as
wfdd
as
`lvf a stydf aem odfxlhldlty tbat
fttfr
wrltfrs jl`bt gtbfrwlsf egt
hf
ahdf tg leidumf.
Ogr tbls rfasge,
L
tbf autbgr go tbls hggc,
mg
wlsb tg `lvf ygu sajpdfs gowbat igudm hf wrlttfe.
]bf tblrm rfasge ogr puttle` add tbfsf olead tbgu`bts le a sfparatf appfemlx ls tbat lt addgws jf tg rfpfat tbf
warele`s `lvfe at tbf fem go]lp
12.
1
]blec ahgut
wbftbfr ygu bavf tbf tljf tg wrltf tbfj.
8. Hf bgefst Mg ygu aituaddy sff aeytble`7 Olead tbgu`bts rfqulrf 'tbgu`bts' - tbat
ls, tblecle`
fvfr
try tg wrltf olead tbgu`bts wbfe ygu iaeegt tblec go aeytble`.
9. Lt ogddgws tbfe tbat ygu sbgudm efvfr jfjgrlsf aeytble` tg hf usfm .
=. Oleaddy, olead tbgu`bts sbgudm egt hf tgg dge`.
Pfdd, L bavf tbf tljf SParele` dZ, aem L aj a eatlvf wrltfr go Fe`dlsb wltb a oalr fxpfrlfeif go tbf wgrdm,
jfaele` tbat L iae bgefstdy sff gppgrtueltlfs ogr olead tbgu`bts SParele` 8Z. Ghvlgusdy L wldd egt usf
aeytble` jfjgrlsfm SParele` 9Z, aem L wldd cffp tbf olead tbgu`bts sbgrt SParele` =Z. Bfrf tbfy arf.
1.
]ascs
A H
aem I orgj ]lp 12, Fxfrilsf 9s ls adjgst ifrtaledy
igesfqufet tg Pgrdm Par ]wg.
Lt ls pgsslhdf tg fxtrapgdatf* orgj tbfsf trfems tbat igjputfrs bavf
egw adjgst tgtaddy supfrsfmfm* tbf gtbfr twg jftbgms.
Lt ls dg`liad aem dlcfdy tbat tbfrf fxlsts ae levfrsf igrrfdatlge hftwffe
tbfsf twg oaitgrs.
Vsle` a dlec tg a wfdd-cegwe
fxtfread oait.
Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.
Vsle` a iausf-aem-foofit
rfdatlgesblp, gr igrrfdatlge/
levfrsf igrrfdatlge.
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8. Oggthadd Iduhs Dlef @rapb (orgj tbf hf`leele`
g
]lp =)
]bf stfamlefss go Maemfege` s `rgwtb su``fsts tbat tbls rlsf igetleufs
hfygem tbf `lvfe tljf orajf.
9. ^lf Ibart (orgj ]lp 1=)
Jaeuoaiturle` ls gedy rfprfsfetfm hy igjputfrs aem vfblidfs, tg`ftbfr
ajguetle` tg a rfdatlvfdy jlegr ? aem < le tbfsf yfars rfspfitlvfdy, ifr
taledy sbgwle` tbat tbf daem rfjales jgst ljpgrtaet le tbf prgmuitlge go
fxpgrts.
]ahdf go Ol`urfs (orgj ]lp 16)
]bf raplm `rgwtb le Qdm. su``fsts lt wldd igetleuf hfygem tbf `lvfe tljf
orajf, jacle` tbls egrtbfastfre statf, hy oar, tbf prfjlfr lrge prgmuifr.
=. ^rgifss Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?)
]bf adujlea ls tbus rfamy ogr tbf efxt sta`f le tbf prgmuitlge prgifss;
hfle` rfolefm at a sjfdtfr* letg purf adujleluj.
Fyf Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?, Fxfrilsf
9?)
Gef ljjfmlatfdy offds tbat, mfspltf lts apparfet sljpdlilty, tbf bujae fyf
ls a jarvfdgusdy olef-tuefm aem igjpdliatfm part go tbf hgmy.
@advaegjftfr Mla`raj (orgj ]lp 1?, Fxfrilsf 9?)
1.
8.
Gef suspfits tbat tbls mfvlif bas egw hffe supfrsfmfm* hy ml`ltad
tfibegdg`y.
]bf mfvlif ls tbus vfry letrliatfdy assfjhdfm tg utldlsf fdfitrgja`
eftli aem pbysliad ogrifs tg aiblfvf lts purpgsf.
Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.
Vsle` tbf stratf`y
go
`rgup
le` parts letg jgrf `fefrad
statfjfets.
]bls ls dge`fr
tbae jgst olead tbgu`bts sleif
lt mgfs, aituaddy, hasf ltsfdo
ge ourtbfr oaituad mfsirlptlge
go
tbf tasc.
Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem.
Vsle` a dlec
tg
a wfdd-cegwe
fxtfread oait, gr wbat ]lp ?
iadds a oaituad ammltlge .
Vsle` a eaturad rfaitlge, aem
gef tbat L bgefstdy ofdt wbfe
stumyle` tbls mla`raj.
Vsle` a dg`liad outurf trfem gr
igesfqufeif. Egtlif tbat L usf
tbf iarfoud wgrm suspfits ,
sleif ygu iaeegt hf surf.
Vsle` tbf stratf`y go `rgup
le` parts letg jgrf `fefrad
statfjfets.
Le tbls sfigem fxajpdf, L aj usle` gef
go
tbf ogrfst-vlfw apprgaibfs, wrltle` ahgut tbf eaturad ogrifs
levgdvfm. L iae mg tbls sleif tbf aituad ogrfst-vlfw usfs tbf
stfps
gr
sta`fs
apprgaib, sg L aj egt
rfpfatle` leogrjatlge.
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6
Japs (orgj ]lp 10)
]bls `gdo igursf, hy hfle` puhdli aem efstdfm* idgsfdy wltble tbf sgutbfre
arjs
go
rfslmfetlad mfvfdgpjfet, sffjs aooldlatfm* jgrf
wltb
tbf tgwe tbae
tbf rfsgrts .
Pgrm-Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot(*
le
tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
Vsle` a eaturad (dg`liad)
rfaitlge/ghsfrvatlge.
tg fxtrapgdatf
v) tg tacf tbf pdaif go stb. igeslmfrfm gdm-oasblgefm
8
tg
supfrsfmf
v)
tg
ogrj
ae gplelge ahgut tbf outurf
orgj
tbf prfsfet oaits
9
sjfdtfr
e)
tg hf le a pgsltlge tbat
ls
prgtfitfm, sbfdtfrfm, gr partdy blmmfe
tg efstdf
v)
, idgsfdy dlecfm wltb aegtbfr
6
aooldlatfm
(amk) tbf pdaif wbfrf grf ls jfdtfm tg fxtrait jftad
Hfogrf olelsble` wltb olead tbgu`bts, L waet tg jacf tbf usuad warele` L bavf `lvfe jaey tljfs
egw
tbat
ygu sbgudm egt try wrltle` olead tbgu`bts uedfss ygu bavf tbf;
1. bgefst awarfefss
8. Fe`dlsb scldds aem ahldlty
9. tljf
... tg mg sg. Ygjf stumfets jay bavf add tbls3 jgst wldd egt. Ogddgw ygur lestleits aem tbf tljle` murle`
tbf tfst, aem adways tblec
Appfemlx 1>
]bf prgolt ol`urf oadds fvfedy orgj 6> tg ahgut 16
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etfeifs usf tbf
pgsltlge
wgrms ahgvf , hfdgw , dfot , aem tgp . ]bf wrltfr ls rfofrrle`
ddy tg tbf ]asc Gef pa`f. Lt ls hfttfr egt tg mg tbls. As ]lp ? says, tbf hfst aeswfr sbgudm hf ahdf
hf uemfrstggm wltbgut dggcle` at tbf aituad ]asc Gef, fspfiladdy sleif tbf pgsltlge iae ibae`f. Ogr
df , gotfe tbfrf ls egtble` ahgvf at add - kust tbf tgp go tbf pa`f.
0
og rjfr aem dattfr rfofrfeif pattfre iae hf usfm, hut le Yfetfeif a lt ls usfm leigrrfitdy sleif tbfrf ls
gef ltfj le tbf sfetfeif. ]bfrf effms tg hf twg. Yfetfeif a igudm hf wrlttfe as ;
Eghdf ^arc em @ffdge`s prgolts wfrf hgtb dgw le tbls
quartfr, hut wltb tbf dattfr sbgwle` ae leirfasle` trfem .
husfs
rfspfitlvfdy , hut tbls iae gedy hf usfm wltb a spfiloli eujhfr
g
ltfjs wblib arf dlecfm
tbf sajf eujhfr g
gtbfr ltfjs as le;
]bf prgolt ogr
a e m f e g ~ G
aem 2> rfspfitlvfdy.
-
tbf aeswfr tg Yfetfeifs = ogr aegtbfr usf go rfspfitlvfdy .
i usfs sleif , wblib ls a mae`frgus wgrm hfiausf lt jfaes orgj tbat pglet uetld egw . ]bf tljf
go
LFD]Y `rapbs vfry rarfdy `g tg tbf prfsfet . ]bfy usuaddy olelsb sgjf tljf le tbf past, jfaele`
wldd hf uedlcfdy tg effm tbf prfpgsltlge sleif .
m igjhlefs a pfrlgm (orgj 1 tg 1.
- lt rgsf aem fvfetuaddy pfacfm at 6>.
2
Yfetfeif a
lt
iae hf dlecfm tg tbf Pf iae sff orgj tbf ibart prghdfj, wblib wf dggcfm at le
?.
]bf sfetfeif
ls
sljldardy strae`f, sleif lt assujfs wf arf sff le` tbf ibart, yft tbf ibart jay hf ge
plfif go papfr. Hut dft us igeslmfr aegtbfr mae`fr go irystad idfar/ghvlgus/fasldy sffe/fvlmfet .
prghdfj ls tbat wbat ygu aeegueif as irystad idfar jay hf egt sg idfar tg gtbfrs. Ytumfet A tblecs
ls
idfardy ghvlgus tbat tbfrf arf ogur sta`fs le tbf mla`raj, wbldf Ytumfet H tblecs tbfrf arf olvf .
tumyle` tbf mla`raj, fvfrygef le tbf idass hfigjfs uesurf. ]bf amvlif ls tg hf vfry iarfoud ahgut
e` leogrjatlge
ls
irystad idfar , ghvlgus , fasldy sffegr fvlmfet.
o
lt ls egt, tbfe ygur wgrms
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Adsg, mg egt usf uehfdlfvahdy
as
Yfetfeif h mgfs. ]lp 6 says tbat eaturad rfaitlges arf pgsslhdf, hut ygu
just egt usf fxtrfjf gr leapprgprlatf amkfitlvfs SYff tbf aeswfr tg ]lp =, Fxfrilsf
9
^art ]wg, Ltfj
18Z. ]frrlhdf , awoud
,
aem oaetast li arf leapprgprlatf ogr tbf sajf rfasge. Hf ogrjad aem aiamfjli
sleif tbls ls ogrjad wrltle`.
Ge tbf suhkfit
go
jfjgrlsfm sfetfeifs, mg egt usf i as ae letrgmuitlge. Lt ls egt a qulic `daeif tbat
wgudm sbgw tbf mftalds wblib ogddgw, hut lestfam a iarfoud stumy . Eg gef ls `daeile` at aeytble`,
fspfiladdy egt ygu, sg wby ls tbls slddy sfetfeif hfle` usfm7
Yfetfeifs , wbfrf L wrgtf;
S]bf ol`urf leirfasfs) tg ae apparfetdy jasslvf => hlddlge le kust 1> yfars.
egt usf
a
pparfetdy ogr barm oaits. Yljldardy, mg egt usf bfm`fs suib as sgrt
go
gr clem go as `
]bfsf arf usfm le spgcfe Fe`dlsb, gotfe ogr sgotfele` a jfssa`f - ogr fxajpdf, Bf was
clem
g
Le LFD]Y wrltle`,
lo
ygu waet bl`bfr jarcs
le
tbf Dfxliad Xfsgurif iatf`gry, ygu effm tg igevfy
jfaele`s .
t tbrff sfetfeifs letrgmuif igekueitlges aem a prfpgsltlge go iausf aem foofit. ]bfy arf mae`frgus
hfiau
sf tb
fy gotfe letrgmuif gplelges aem gutslmf spfiudatlge, wblib ygu sbgudm egt `lvf. Iausf
foofit iae gedy hf usfm
le
a iarfoud aem dljltfm way lo mfmuile` a igrrfdatlge. SYff ]lp
12Z
m usfs sg tg amm fjpbasls, hut tbls
ls
ae fjgtlgead fjpbasls. ]bls
ls
egt
apprgprlatf tg ]asc
e`.
a usfs aegtbfr igekueitlge, wbfrfas , tg sfqufeif twg statfjfets, hut tbls hrfacs sgjf rudfs
usle` tbls igekueitlge. Pbfrfas ls usfm tg ;
1 sbgw a tgtad igetrast
SIdausf Gef
:
_frh3 Idausf ]wg
:
Gppgsltf _frhEfrh Lmfa)
8 usuaddy hftwffe twg mloofrfet suhkfits
9 usuaddy at tbf sajf tljf
= wltb wbfrfas usuaddy hftwffe twg idausfs.
fxajpdf ;
Le 8>>1 , Iblea s @M^ leirfasfs, wbfrfas Austradla s rfjales igestaet.
sfetfeif sbgws
1.
a tgtad igetrast (tbf olrst leirfasfs3 tbf sfigem mgfs egt 8. hftwffe twg mloofrfet
ts (Iblea aem Austradla s @M^s) 9. at tbf sajf tljf (8>>1), =. wltb wbfrfas le tbf jlmmdf. ]bf
tlge tg Yfetfeifs
1?
i tg f usfs wbfrfas SuemfrdlefmZ, ogddgwle` add tbfsf rudfs.
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]asc Gef usuaddy levgdvfs jaey mloofrfet suhkfits, aem tbfy add sbgw mloofrfet trfems
gvfr
tbf sajf
pfrlgm, jfaele` tbat wbfrfas iae lemffm hf a vfry usfoud ]asc Gef igekueitlge, aem ygu wldd egtlif lt
ls usfm gotfe le jy sajpdf aeswfrs.
Pbldf ,
leilmfetaddy, sbgws a sljldar igetrast, aem iae hf usfm tg rfpdaif
wbfrfas ,
hut
wbfrfas
ls
ifrtale dy hfttfr lo tbf igetrast ls idfar. ]bf mlooliudty ls tbat wbldf iae adsg jfae adtbgu`b . Le tbls
sfigem usa`f, lt hrfacs add tbf ogur rudfs. Ogr fxajpdf,
Pbldf
sgjf
pfgpdf
tblec stumyle` vfry barm ls
efifssary,
tbfy
gotfe datfr suoofr pfrsgeadlty prghdfjs , (wbfrf tbf vfrhs arf egt igetrastle`, tbf suhkfits
arf tbf sajf, tbf tljfs arf mloofrfet, aem wbldf hf`les tbf sfetfeif).
Yfetfeifs haem i adsg usf tbf wrge` sfqufeifrs. As ]lp
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wf iae adsg mfjgestratf tbf igrrfit usf go rfspfitlvfdy SYfetfeif 0hZ hy `lvle` tbf igrrfit
go Yfetfeifs 1=. ]bfy sbgw a igjjge aem awcwarm usf go Fe`dlsb. ]bf tbrff sfetfeifs arf
hfttfr wrlttfe as;
16
]bflr
prgolt ls tbf bl`bfst.
Lts eujhfr mfirfasfs suhstaetladdy.
Lts pfac ls 66%.
. . ,
rfspfitlvfdy.
sbgw jgrf typliad jlstacfs. 'Leidumle`' just letrgmuif part s) go a dar`fr `rgup aem
fjpbasls (gotfe hfiausf go ae fdfjfet go surprlsf).
]bf ibart sbgws
sfvfe
iguetrlfs,
leidumle` sgjf le
Asla.
'^artliudardy' (aem 'fspfiladdy' ) adsg letrgmuifs part(s) go a dar`fr `rgup aem `lvfs a strge` fjpbasls, sg lt
tg hf mlrfitfm at sgjftble` spfiloli.
]bf
prgolt
rlsfs
partliudardy
oast e
tbf tblrm yfar.
]bf euj fr
go
tgurlsts orgj Hrltale ls partliudardy bl`b.
Maemfege`
le
partliudar sbgws a strge` `rgwtb.
Eajf dy' `lvfs fvfrytble` wblib ls prgjlsfm. ]bls jfaes lt effms tg hf usfm wltb a mfoleltf eujhfr.
]bfrf arf twg Aslae iguetrlfs, eajfdy Kapae aem Iblea.
]bf `rapb sbgws
tbrff
clems go seaic oggm
eajfdy
euts, ibgigdatf, aem iblps.
'Yuib as ls ogr `lvle` `fefrad fxajpdfs. \gu jl`bt egtlif tbat suib as ' adjgst efvfr appfars le aey go
jy sajpdf aeswfrs. ]bf `fefrad eaturf
go
suib as (aem
ogr
fxajpdf') su``fsts lt ls egt apprgprlatf ogr
FD]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef, wbfrf spfiloli aem dljltfm leogrjatlge effms tg hf sujjarlsfm.
Yfetfeifs 1?
]bfsf sfetfeifs sbgw prghdfjs wltb egue pbrasfs. Yfetfeifs a aem h arf a rfjlemfr
go
]lp 9. Xfam tbf
axfs ]bf `rapb sbgws tbf ibae`f le tbf eujhfr g jghldf pbgef gwefrs, aem tbf har ibart sbgws bgw
tbf eujhfr g bgusfs `rfw.
Yfetfeifs i tg f sbgw prghdfjs rfdatle` tg iguetahdf aem ueiguetahdf egues tbat wfrf adsg jfetlgefm
e Appfemlx 6. Ajguet aem 'quaetlty' arf usuaddy ogr ueiguetahdf, wbfrfas eujhfr ls ogr iguetahdf.
tbf sfetfeifs igudm rfam;
]bf
ajguet
go
orult
leirfasfm.
Sueiguetahdf egueZ
]bf
quaetlty
go
watfr
mfirfasfm stfamldy. Sueiguetahdf egueZ
]bf euj fr go pfgpdf rfjalefm at tbls dfvfd. Siguetahdf egueZ
s ogr Yfetfeif
o
wbldf wf iae wrltf
tbf
eujhfr
go
(stb.)', wf iaeegt wrltf
tbf
ol`urf
go
(stb.)' . ]bf
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Yfetfeifs 0
]bfsf sfetfeifs arf a rfjlemfr
tg
usf ]asc
Gef
dae`ua`f. Ge tbf igetrary aem ge tbf gtbfr baem arf
egt ]asc Gef pbrasfs. Aituaddy,
ge
tbf igetrary ls jgrf ogr spgcfe Fe`dlsb, wbfe igrrfitle` a oadsf
statfjfet, aem egt fvfe apprgprlatf ogr ]asc
]wg
Yg, ygu tblec L gedy spfac Fe`dlsb7 e tbf igetrary L
spfac Ypaelsb aem Jaemarle Iblefsf.
Yfetfeifs i aem m usf jfaewbldf aem mur le` , hut tbfsf wgrms arf usfm jaledy ogr stgry tfddle` gr
earratlvfs , wbfrf bappfele`s aem fvfets arf put le grmfr gr sfqufeifm. Avglm usle` tbfj le LFD]Y
wrltle`.
Yfetfeifs 2
]bfrf arf varlgus jlstacfs sbgwe bfrf. ]bf jlstacfs le tbf olrst twg sfetfeifs arf le tbf pdurad s . Pbfe
wf `lvf ol`urfs, wf mg egt usf tbls. Le Fe`dlsb, wf tadc ahgut fl`bt
jlddlge
aem slx
tbgusaem.
Bgwfvfr, wf
igudm say, ]bf prgolt ls `lvfe le jlddlges go mgddars , gr, ]bf sadfs ol`urfs arf `lvfe le tbgusaems.
]bf efxt twg frrgrs arf igjjge jlstacfs wbfe igjparle` jgrf tbae twg ltfjs. ]bfy sbgudm rfam;
Maemfege`s prgolt
ls
tbf hl``fst. SgrZ hl``fr tbae tbf gtbfrs.
Aiamfjli hggcs wfrf tbf sfigem jgst fxpfeslvf.
Oleaddy, tg aiiguet ogr
ls
usfm wltb ol`urfs Sbfeif tbf iguet stfj le tbf vfrhZ. ]bus, tbf dast sfetfeif
sbgudm rfam;
]bf prgolt rgsf tg tbf bl`bfst eujhfr, aiiguetle` ogr 0> .
Yfetfeifs >6. ]bf prghdfj
ls
tbat Yfetfeif a
su``fsts tbat fvfrytble` bappfefm
le tbf gef yfar
8>>6. Yljldardy, Yfetfeif h su``fsts tbat fvfrytble`
bappfefm le tbf yfar 8>1>.
Gef way tg sgdvf tbls ls tg egt usf a igjja. ]bls jfaes tbat le 8>>6 igeefits gedy tg tbf dast egue,
?>> .
\gu
igudm adsg put tbf yfar le hraicfts.
]bf eujhfr g pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy orgj 96> tg ?>> le 8>>6.
]bf eujhfr
g
pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy tg ?>>
le
8>>6).
Bgwfvfr, tbfrf
ls
stldd a daic go idarlty bfrf. ]bf hfst jftbgm
ls
tg put tbf igjpdftf tljf pfrlgm at tbf
hf`leele`
go
tbf sfetfeif, as ]lp >>
tg
8>>6, tbf eujhfr go pfgpdf `rgws stfamldy orgj 96> tg ?>>.
Orgj 8>>2 tg 8>1>, tbf sadfs ol`urf sbgws a mrajatli oadd tg 89.
Yfetfeif i ls pgsslhdf, hut puttle` ol`urfs aem yfars efxt tg faib gtbfr iae hf igeousle`, wblib ls gef
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Appfemlx 8
LFD]Y Prltl
e`
]asc Gef ^raitlifs; Yajpdf Aeswfrs
Egtf
Ogr add tbf ogddgwle` ogur sajpdf aeswfrs, tbf olead tbgu`bts arf sbgwe leslmf a hgx, lemliatle` tbat tbfy
mg egt hfdge` tg tbf igrf aeswfr aem mg egt amm tg ]asc Aiblfvfjfet (hut mg amm tg Dfxliad Xfsgurif
aem @rajjatliad Xae`f) . Olead tbgu`bts appfar gedy otfr tbf tasc bas hffe ouddy mfsirlhfm, aem arf
sbgwe bfrf tg rfprfsfet tbf fgrftli d hfst aeswfr, wblib oastfr aem strge`fr wrltfrs jay aiblfvf.
]g rfpfat tb f amvlif `lvfe le ]lp 12 , le tbf pr itli d sltuatlge go ae LFD]Y tfst, jaey stumfets stru``df tg
wrltf tb f rfqulrfm 16> wgrms le tbf 8> jleutfs , wblib su``fsts tbat ygu sbgudm prghahdy egt attfjpt tg
wrltf olead tbgu`bts, hut lestfam usf aey fxtra tljf ogr ibficle`, ibae`le` , aem ljprgvle` ygur wrltle`,
gr jgvle` ge tg ]asc ]wg.
LFD]Y Prltle` asc Gef ^raitlif L
]bf
ib
arts igjparf Furgpf wltb Aorlia
le
rfdatlge tg tbrff puhdli
traespgrt lemfxfs; dfe`tb go urhae rald dlefs, eujhfr g o wgrcfrs,
aem tgtad spfemle` , ogr tbf yfars 8>>> aem 8>1> .
Gvfradd , tbfrf arf twg
trfems.
Ol
rstdy
,
tbf jgrf amvaeifm
leorastruiturfs* go Furgpf arf rfodfitfm hy lts igrrfspgemle`dy
bl
`bfr status
le add jfasurfs le hgtb
yfars
, partliudardy le
spfemle` at tbf fem . Yfigemdy, add tbfsf rfofrfeifs , apart
orgj Aor lia's spfemle` , fxpfrlfeif leirfasfs, adtbgu`b a`ale
sgjfwbat prfmlitahdy, Furgpf iae idalj a oar `rfatfr suiifss.
Dg
gcle` at tbls egrtbfre igetlefet gvfr tbf mfiamf , trale dlefs
fxtfem orgj olvf tg 11 (cldgjftfrs), wltb tbf staoo eujhfr sbgwle`
a sljldar hut aiifetuatfm* rlsf , mguhdle` orgj 9> tg ?>
pfr
1,
>>> pfgpdf) . Bgwfvfr, tbf jgst ljprfsslvf* `rgwtb ls
le
tbf
jge ftary spfemle`, orgj 8> (hlddlge) tg
ae
apparfetdy jasslvf
=>, igetrastl
e`
tbf sam mfidlef le Aorlia gvfr
tb
ls sajf pfrlgm.
Jgvle` ge tg lts sgutbfre efl`bhgur, rald mlstaeifs aem staoole`
at dfast sbgw `rgwtbs , hut at rfmuifm dfvfds aem hy sjaddfr
ja
r`
les . ]bf jfasurfs go tbls igetlefet prfsfet a prgegueifm*
ml
spa
rlty* wltb tbflr igetlefetad
fqulvadfets*
,
fspfiladdy
le
jgefy levfstfm , grl`leaddy 1> (hlddlge), gedy tg dae`ulsb* at a
igjparatlvfdy jfa`rf* twg, tgtaddy mwarofm* hy tbf Furgpfae
foogrts.
]bf letrgmuitlge, usle` igjparf .
]bf ogrfst-vlfw, lmfetloyle` twg
trfems aem sl`epgstle` tbfj
dg`lia
dd
y
Lt ls aituaddy mlooliudt tg usf juib
rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb bfrf sleif add
tbrff lemfxfs jfasurf mloofrfet
aspfits.
]bf trff-vlfw, startle` wltb a dg`liad
tgpli pbrasf.
Velts arf letrgmuifm
le
hraicfts gef
tljf gedy.
Ygjf eaturad rfaitlges.
A partlilplad pbrasf.
]bf sfigem tgpli pbrasf, egw
fesurle` tbf wbgdf tasc
ls
sujjarlsfm .
Egw ygu prghahdy egtlif tbat tbls
tasc
was
wrlttfe le
tbf spgrt
s
igjjfetatgrs tfesf - a stydlstli
ibglif.
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Gef wgudm suspfit a igrrfdatlge hftwffe tbf leirfasf go ouems
hfle` levfstfm le rald igestruitlge aem staoo rfirultjfet, a trfem
jgrf apparfet le tbf amvaeifm Furgpfae rf`lge.
8>8 + 80
:
88< wgrms)
]bf olead tbgu`bt
s
mfmuile` a
igrrfdatlge, wltb sgjf fxtfread
cegwdfm`f.
Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot (* le tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
lemfx (e)
ae
fxtra ajguet3 a part egt leidumfm le tbf jale `rgup
8
leorastruiturf (e) sjadd le quaetlty gr pggr le quadlty
9 tg aiifetuatf (v) a mloofrfeif, fsp. gef igeefitfm wltb ueoalr trfatjfet
=
ljprfsslvf
(amk) stb. tbat mlrfits attfetlge tg sgjf oait, statlstli, gr igemltlge
6
jar`le (e) tg jacf stb. sffj sjadd igjparfm wltb stb. fdsf
? prgegueifm (amk) a tble` tbat ls fquad le sgjf way tg stb. fdsf
0
mlsparlty (e) bavle` tbf pgwfr tg ljprfss aem iausle` attfetlge gr amjlratlge
2 fqulvadfet (e) tg hfigjf wfacfr gr oald tg jacf prg`rfss
jfa`rf (amk) vfry egtlifahdf, ghvlgus, gr strge`dy fxprfssfm
tg mwaro (v) tg fjpbaslsf gr jacf stb. jgrf egtlifahdf
LFD]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif
bat ogddgws sujjarlsfs tbf wgrcogrif mlstrlhutlge ajge`
figegjli sfitgrs* le 1 aem 8>1> le Ygutbfast Asla, leidumle`
leogrjatlge igeifrele` lts eujhfrs go leigjle` tgurlsts.
Le
`fefrad, jgst pfgpdf wgrcfm le tbf a`rliudturad sfitgr*, wblib
mgjleatfm* hgtb yfars, partliudardy tbf olrst, wbfrf lt igjprlsfm
gvfr bado go tbf tgtad.
Le
ammltlge, jaeuoaiturle` jamf strge`
`ales, suib tbat hy pfrlgm-fem, lt bam adjgst fquadfm a`rliudturf,
at ahgut
gef
tblrm faib, jacle` hgtb
go
tbfj tbf
dfamle`
prgvlmfrs
go
fjpdgyjfet. Oleaddy, apart orgj gef `darle`* aem
suhstaetlad jlm-pfrlgm mgweture*, tgurlst eujhfrs sbgwfm vfry
bfadtby amvaeifs lemffm.
Dggcle` spfiloliaddy at tbf figegjli mlvlslges, gvfr tbfsf tbrff
mfiamfs, uefjpdgyjfet pdujjftfm orgj 80 tg 8 - idfardy
a wfdigjf ibae`f aem ifrtaledy dlecfm* tg tbf `rgwtb le tbf
sfrvlif lemustry aem jaeuoaiturle`, orgj 8 tg 86 aem orgj 0.>
]bf letrgmuitlge, egt jfetlgele`
tbf tasc aem usle` a partlilplad
pbrasf.
]bf ogrfst-vlfw.
]brff trfems arf `lvfe aem
sl`epgstfm dg`liaddy.
Ygjf rfad-wgrdm Fe`dlsb aem
partlilplad pbrasfs
]bf trff-vlfw, dggcle` at tbf p lf
ibarts aem. ..
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]urele` tg tgurlsj ,
le
tbf olrst mfiamf, eujhfrs `rfw orgj 88 tg
adjgst 96 (jlddlge) . Bgwfvfr, suib suiifss was sbgrt-dlvfm, wltb
a prgegueifm* mfsifet
go
1> giiurrle` gvfr tbf efxt olvf yfars.
Mfspltf tb ls sfthaic*, rfigvfry was raplm, sffle` tbf ol`urf sgge
rfaib 96 aem fem at adjgst => , `lvle` ae gvfradd mguhdle` go
pfgpdf travfddle` ogr rfirfatlgead purpgsfs.
Gef sffs a traesltlge* bfrf, orgj ae a`rliudturad tg a jgmfre
lemustrlad aem sfrvlifs-hasfm figegjy, paraddfdle`* tbf leodux* go
tgurlsts , ogr wbgj tbfrf wgudm effm tg hf oaildltlfs.
(1
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Gvfradd, tbf prgifss levgdvfs watfr mrlvfe le `asfgus aem dlqulm
ogrjs hy tbf eaturad ajhlfeif*
go
hgtb bl`b aem dgw fdfvatlges*,
`ravlty aitle` adge` tbf tgpg`rapby* go tbf daem suroaif, aem tbf
jftfgrgdg`liad* leodufeif
go
sue, wlem, aem gifae .
@fefraddy spfacle`, tbf prgifss ibarts tbf mgwewarm patb go
dlqulm watfr adge` tbf fartbs suroaif, fvfetuaddy tg tbf sfa, gr
le
tbf iasf go bujae-rfdatfm mlvfrslge*, tbrgu`b rfsfrvglrs* aem
watfrwgrcs, hut sljldardy femle`
le
tbf sfa, wbfrf fvapgratlge*
hf`les tbf prgifss a`ale.
Pltb rfspfit tg tbf daem-hasfm prgifssfs, lt hf`les wbfe tbf
alrhgref vapgur, bavle` prfilpltatfm letg ralemrgps, oadds tg tbf
`rguem. Ammltlgeaddy, fxlstle` lif ge tbf bl`bfr jguetale tgps
jfdts aem, adge` wltb tbf ralewatfr, kgles tbf suroaif rlvudfts*
aem strfajs, igjhlele` letg dar`fr rlvfrs as `ravlty mraws tbfj
ge a mgwewarm wlemle`* igursf, lefvltahdy* tg tbf sfa.
Igeslmfrle` tbf jae-jamf wgrdm, tbfrf fxlsts a mlvfrslge* orgj
tbf rlvfrs eaturad odgw letg a stgra`f rfsfrvglr* . Aotfr uemfr`gle`
purloliatlge at a trfatjfet pdaet, tbls watfr sfrvfs varlgus bujae
purpgsfs. ]bf rfsudtaet mlsibar`f ls adsg trfatfm tg hf rfdatlvfdy
orff go pgddutaets, tbfe geif a`ale ibaeefddfm* letg tbf add
rfiflvle` sfa.
Jgvle` tg tbf atjgspbfrli pbasf*, tbf sue s rays fvapgratf
fxpgsfm* dlqulm gr traesplratf lt orgj pdaets, addgwle` tbf vapgur
tg jl`ratf* upwarms wbfrf lt ls oueefddfm* hy prfvaldle` * wlems
aem jguetale
sdgpfs*
letg
tbf iggdfr
igemltlges go
bl`bfr
adtltumfs*. ]bls rfsudts le igemfesatlge* aem idgum ogrjatlge ,
tbus igjpdftle` tbf iyidf.
^gddutlge, suib as ailm rale aem watfr hgref ibfjliad wastf,
ls
egtlifahdy uerfprfsfetfm.
(81= + 18 : 88? wgrms)
A ogrfst-vlfw usle` tbf eaturad
ogrifs .
]bls ogrfst-vlfw wldd hf usfm le tbls
aeswfr.
Ae fxajpdf ogrfst-vlfw usle` tbf
pbysliad parts.
Faib trff-vlfw para`rapb hf`les
wltb a tgpli pbrasf aem
faib g tbfsf tgpli pbrasfs
dg`liaddy ibggsfs a ibuec gr
sfitlge, aem
... tg`ftbfr tbfy igjpdftfdy igvfr
tbf mla`raj.
Olead tbgu`bts, hasfm ge a eaturad
rfaitlge
L
8 wgrms).
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]ljf
wgrms ge tbf dfot *
le
tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
iyidli
(amk) tbf ait go ogrjle` a prfilpltatf (dlqulm) orgj vapgur
8
hlgspbfrf (e) rfpfatfm jaey tljfs aem bappfele`
le
tbf sajf grmfr
9
igemfesatlge (e)
ueahdf tg
hf
avglmfm gr fsiapfm
=
prfilpltatlge (e) tbf bfl`bt ahgvf tbf dfvfd go tbf sfa
6
aiiujudatlge (e)
tbf pbysliad ofaturfs g e arfa g daem, fsp. tbf pgsltlge go lts
rlvfrs, jguetales, fti.
?
lefvltahdf (amk)
rfdatle` tg tbf silfetloli stumy go tbf atjgspbfrf aem wfatbfr
0
fvapgratlge
(e) tbf ibae`le` go a suhstaeif orgj vapgur tg a dlqulm
2
ajhlfeif (e)
tbf ait go ibae`le` letg vapgur
tgpg`rapby (e)
stb. tbat tures stb. fdsf orgj gef igursf tg aegtbfr
jftfgrgdg`liad (amk) tbf part go tbf fartb s suroaif wblib igetales dlof
18
mlvfrslge
(e) a `rgwtb hy igetleugus ammltlge
19
rfsfrvglr (e)
gpfe tg vlfw3 egt igvfrfm gr prgtfitfm
1=
rlvudft (e)
e
artlolilad dacf wbfrf watfr ls stgrfm ogr usf
16
wlemle`
(amk) tg jgvf orgj gef pdaif tg aegtbfr
1? tg ibaeefd (v)
a sta`f le a prgifss go ibae`f gr mfvfdgpjfet
10 pbasf (e)
tbf suroaif gr plfif go a daem tbat sdgpfs , f.`. a bldd gr jguetale
12 fxpgsfm (amk)
bavle` a iurvle` aem twlstle` sbapf
1< tg jl`ratf (v)
fxlstle` gr igjjge at a partliudar tljf
8
tg oueefd
(v) a vfry sjadd rlvfr3 a sjadd strfaj go watfr gr gtbfr dlqulm
81 prfvald le` (amk) tg igevfy gr sfem stb . tbrgu`b a ibaeefd gr patb
88 sdgpf (e) tbf spfiloli bfl`bt ahgvf sfa dfvfd
89
adtltumf (e)
tg
jgvf gr jacf stb. jgvf letg a earrgwfr spaif
Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif L_
sbgudm hf oajldlar fegu`b wltb jy jftbgm egw egt tg effm aey ourtbfr igjjfets, apart orgj gef
tbat tbrff sajpdf olead tbgu`bts arf `lvfe; gef dggcle` haic, gef dggcle` ogrwarm, aem gef
tbf prfsfet.
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]bf oduituatlges le tbf usa`f go ogur ogrjs go traespgrt tacfe ogr wffcfem fvfets le Jfdhguref orgj
1 tg 8>1> iae hf sujjarlsfm as ogddgws.
Gvfr tbf wbgdf pfrlgm, tbf geif pgpudar pbysliad jfaes leidumle` - fvfetuaddy - husfs levgdvle` , as
tbfy mg, sgjf mf`rff
g
pbysliadlty), wfrf udtljatfdy supfrsfmfm* hy iars, wbgsf pgpudarlty sur`fm at
tbf fxpfesf go tbf gtbfrs tg mgjleatf tbf jftbgms go jgvle` arguem ogr rfirfatlgead purpgsfs.
Fxajlele` jgtgrlsfm traespgrt, iars startfm at ahgut sfvfe uelts) . Gvfr tbf efxt tblrty yfars, tbfy
aiifdfratfm* abfam tg usf ae apt* jftapbgr*) tg 86, sgge gvfrtacle` tbf olfdm. ]bfy olelsbfm at
=>, tbfe bavle` gvfr twgogdm tbf pgpudarlty
g
tbflr efarfst rlvad , husfs. ]bfsf wfrf, le oait, tbf
gedy jftbgm wblib ibaddfe`fm iars, le tbf olrst bado-pfrlgm `alele` oavgur orgj 8> tg 80, hut tbfe
suiiujhle`* tg tbf lefvltahdf* wltb tbf passle` go tljf , bavle` oaddfe tg 1= hy tbf olead yfar.
Xf`armle` tbf bujhdfr* jfaes
g
travfd, wadcle` was leltladdy tbf jgst pgpudar at 96, hfle` sfvfe
ahgvf tbf sfigem-pdaifm hliyidfs. Bgwfvfr, hgtb fxpfrlfeifm a oalrdy iatastrgpbli* mfsifet. Adtbgu`b
tbf jlm-pfrlgm saw a igevfr`feif* g add ogrjs tg ae apprgxljatfdy fvfe mlstrlhutlge*, wadcle` aem
hliyidfs igetleufm tbflr oadd orgj `raif,
hy
pfrlgm-fem hfle` a padtry*
1
aem sfvfe, rfspfitlvfdy, wltb
tbf dattfr rfprfsfetle` tbf dgwfst usa`f go add.
Add tbls igeolrjs tbf wfdd-mgiujfetfm rlsf go tbf autgjghldf le jgmfre tljfs. Olead tbgu`bts L
Fxtrapgdatle`* abfam, tbf `udo* hftwffe iars aem gtbfr traespgrt wldd prghahdy
wlmfe .
Olead tbgu`bts LL
Gef sffs le tbls ae gvfr-rfdlaeif ge jaiblefs, le dlfu* go fxfrilsf.
Olead tbgu`bts LLL
812
+
18 : 89> wgrms)
Pgrm Dfarele` ]ljf
Jatib tbf wgrms ge tbf dfot
*
le tbf prfvlgus tfxt) wltb tbflr jfaele` ge tbf rl`bt.
tg supfrsfmf v) summfe aem iausle` `rfat aem uewfdigjf ibae`f
8
tg aiifdfratf v) tg tacf tbf pdaif g stb. igeslmfrfm gdm-oasblgefm
9 apt amk) hfle` ifrtale tg bappfe at sgjf pglet le tbf outurf
= jftapbgr e) tg bappfe gr jacf stb. bappfe oastfr gr fardlfr
6 tg suiiujh v) tbf way tbat stb. ls sbarfm gr fxlsts le ae arfa gr `rgup
?
lefvltahdf
e) tg surrfemfr, `lvf up , gr hf mfofatfm hy stb.
0
bujhdf amk) sultahdf gr apprgprlatf
le
tbf ilriujstaeifs
2
iatastrgpbli
amk) tgg sjadd tg
hf
igeslmfrfm ljpgrtaet gr usfoud
, 9
]lp 0, ]bf Gvfrvlfw Ogrfst-_lfw) aem Xfad Pgrdm7
9 6, 2 ? 8,
0
1, 11 = 1=, 18, , 19
]lp 10, Ogrfst-_lfw
8 =
1 2
Yujjarlsle` Fxfrilsf, Yajpdf Aeswfr Olead _frslge)
9 ?, 6 1 8 ,
< 2
,
0
=
Appfemlx 9
=, 1, 8
0
?, 6 1> ,
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Appfemlx 18
9,
=
1 ?,
0
1?
,
1=
Appfemlx 19
9 6 2, 1, =, , 0, 18 ?
Appfemlx 1=
19,?, 0,
1>
10 , 1? , 18 ,
16
, ,
1= =
, 2 6 12 ,
86 88
, 1 , 8= 6, 9, 8> 8=, 1< 8 88, 89
Appfemlx 12
1 = 6, 9
Appfemlx 8
LFD]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif L
1>
0,
1
, 2, =, < =
? 1 8, 9
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L D]Y Prltle` ]asc Gef ^raitlif Ldd
=,
1
?,
< gr89
, 1>,
11
9, 0 2
18
8, 6
12 19
,
1, 6, 9,
11
,
19
18,
1=
0,
=