Initial Screening Feedback

Feedback From Clare aged 17

What Went Well:•Like the performers bright coloured clothing, fits very well with the songs genre!•Lip syncing was good•The performer is confident•I like the close up of the performer in the yellow top best as you can see her emotions and it makes the video more realistic.

Suggestions made for improvement:•Not sure the transition at the start fit the genre?•Not to keen on the mid/ long shot of the performer in the pink top doesn't look professional enough.•Didn't understand the first shot•Maybe include an extreme close up shot as many pop/rock music video included these shots.•The lighting has created a big shadow... Maybe rethink the lighting placement to create a smaller shadow.

Overall I would give this video a high level two

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Feedback From Rebecca aged 18

Went Well:The performer is confident Good choice of clothingLip syncing was goodGood composition and FramingLighting has been thought about, I like the effect the shadow makes

Suggestions made for improvement:•Add narrative•Add an extreme close up and a long shot•Does the transition at the start fit the genre?•Finish editing the whole video

Overall I would give this video a low level two

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Feedback From Karl aged 17

What Went Well:Bright clothing fit the genreGood composition and framing Good shot where the performer is in a yellow topPerformer is confidentThe shot at the start is very effective as you can understand what’s meant to be portrayed even thought the shot isn’t exposing to much of the characters skin.Good use of costume change

Suggestions made for improvement:Add narrativeMaybe thing about a few different shot typesFinish editing the whole video

Overall I would give this video a medium level two

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Feedback From Hannah Aged 17

What Went Well:Like the use of the shadows in the performance shotsThe performer is confident The clothing is very brightly coloured, fits the genre wellLip syncing was goodGood composition and Framing has been thought about •Lighting had been used

Suggestions made for improvement:•Add narrative( Finish?)•Add an extreme close up and a long shot•Does the transition at the start fit the genre?•Finish editing the whole video

Overall I would give this video a low level three

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Feedback From Sarah aged 18

What Went Well:The performer is confident The clothing is very brightly colouredLip syncing was goodGood composition and Framing has been thought about Lighting has been thought about

Suggestions made for improvement:Don't understand the locations for the performance shots? (wall)Add narrative( Finish?)Maybe add more variety of shot typesFinish editing the whole video

Overall I would give this video a high level two

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Feedback From Adz aged 17Could you evaluate my Music video please : )

What Went Well:The performer is confident Artist costumes fit genreLip syncing has been edited wellSome good composition and framing Lighting has been thought about

Suggestions made for improvement:Add narrative(Finish?)Finish editing the whole videoMaybe add more variety of shot types

Overall I would give this video a low level two

Feedback From emily aged18

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What Went Well:performance shotsThe performer is confident The performers costume has been thought about Lip syncing was goodGood composition and Framing•Lighting had been used (like the shadows)

Suggestions made for improvement:•Add narrative( Finish?)•Add an extreme close up and a long shot•Does the transition at the start fit the genre?•Finish editing the whole video

Overall I would give this video a high level 2

From my feedback I have learnt that my partner and I need to add these things so our music video will fit our target audience needs:

More variety of shots types Add narrative Include an extreme close up and long shot to fit the genres

conventions. One of the comment from our feedback said they didn’t understand the

performances shot by the wall. My partner and I did this as it links into our narrative at the end of our video. When we have filmed all our narrative scenes and finished editing them into our video the location of the performance shots should make more sense. Another comment was that “does the transition at the start of the video fit your genre” my partner and I have done research into this and found out that a majority of pop/rock music videos use transition also when we analysed a few of P!NK’S music videos she uses them to create a link between the narrative and the performance shots.

What I have learnt