USING CONCEPT MAP
(An Experimental Research at Baiturrahman
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the RequirBachelor in English Language Education
WALISONGO STATE INSTITUTE FOR ISLAMIC STUDIES
USING CONCEPT MAP TO IMPROVE STUDENTS' WRITING ABILITYIN TEACHING RECOUNT TEXTS
(An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade of SMP H. Isri
Baiturrahman Semarang in the Academic Year of 2011/2012)
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirement for Gaining the Degree of Bachelor in English Language Education
By: MUHYIDIN
Student number: 073411090
EDUCATION FACULTY WALISONGO STATE INSTITUTE FOR ISLAMIC STUDIES
SEMARANG 2012
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WRITING ABILITY
the Eighth Grade of SMP H. Isriati in the Academic Year of 2011/2012)
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in Teaching Recount Texts (An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade of SMP H. Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang in the Academic Year of 2011/2012)
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ABSTRACT
Title : Using Concept Map to Improve Students’ Writing Ability in Teaching Recount Texts (An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade Students of SMP H. Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang in the Academic Year of 2011/2012)
Writer : Muhyidin Student Number : 073411090
The Background of this study is focused on the effective method to teach English especially writing on recount texts. The students who study English as second language still get difficulty in writing because writing is more complex if it is compared with the other skill. So the researcher thought that there should be a solution to solve that problem. The researcher tried to use concept map as a method solve the problem and to improve students’ writing ability especially on recount texts.
This research is about the use of concept map as method to help and to improve students’ writing ability on recount texts of the Eight Grade Students of SMP H. Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang in the Academic Year of 2011/2012. Concept maps are tools for organizing and representing knowledge. They include concepts, usually enclosed in circles or boxes of some type, and relationships between concepts or propositions, indicated by a connecting line between two concepts. This research is aimed to find the answer to the following research questions:how is the use of using concept map to improve students' writing ability in teaching recount texts? And the objective of research is to find out the use of using concept map to improve students' writing ability in teaching recount texts.
The population of the research was the eight grade students of SMP H Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang. The research method was an experimental research, which conducted in two classes; the experimental group (VIII A) and control group (VIII C) as sample. The VIII A was taught by using concept map, while the VIII C was taught without concept map (conventional method). The writer gave listening test to gather the data. The test had been tried out to find out the validity, reliability, difficulty level, and discriminating power before it was used to gather the data. The data were obtained by employing the relevant with pre test and post test. The formula that used to analyze the data was t-test. It was used to determine whether or not there was a significance difference between students’ score in experimental group and students’ score in control group.
In the result of post test of experiment class was 75.58 which where higher than the control class 70.73. It means that writing a recount text by concept map was better than the writing recount text without concept map. The result of the calculation using the t-test showed that t value : 3. 446 and t table for α: 5% was 1.68. It means that t value was higher than t table {3.446> 1.68}. It can be concluded that there is a significant difference in the student writing score of the eighth year students of SMP H. Isriati in academic year of 2011/2012 between students who have been taught writing a recount text by using concept map and those who have been taught by using a conventional learning or lecturing.
MOTTO
“The impossible thing will be possible if we involve the God in our life. Trying to effort and praying are good way to be successful in our life”
(Mario Teguh : Golden Ways)
ACKNOWLEDGMENT
First and foremost, I would like to express gratitude to Allah SWT, the
Almighty God for the blessing, kindness, and inspiration in lending me to
accomplish the final project. Without Him, I couldn’t stay patient and in control in
writing this final project from the first page to the last page.
Second, Shalawat and Salam always dedicated to our beloved prophet
Muhammad SAW, the last prophet and the prophet who had brought us from the
darkness to the brightness.
I realize that I cannot complete this final project without the help of others. Many
people have helped me during the writing this final project and it would be
impossible to mention of all them. I wish, however, to give my sincerest gratitude
and appreciation to all persons until this thesis can be completely finished. Using
Concept Map to Improve Students' Writing Ability in Teaching Recount Texts
(An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade of SMP H. Isriati
Baiturrahman Semarang in the Academic Year of 2011/2012) is a thesis for
readers who want to know the use of concept map to improve the students’
writing ability. Therefore, I would like to extend my appreciation to all of them,
especially to:
1. DR. Suja’i, M.Ag. as the Dean of Tarbiyah Faculty
2. Siti Tarwiyah, M.Hum. as the Head of English Department
3. Daviq Rizal, M.Pd. as the first thesis advisor and H. Mursid M.Ag. as the
second thesis advisor who both had the responsibility for their patience in
providing careful guidance, helpful corrections, very good advice as well as
suggestion and encouragement during the consultation. There is no single
word that I can say except, “Thank you very much for guiding me as good as
my parent. You are nice lecturers.”
4. All lecturers in English Department of Tarbiyah Faculty for valuable
knowledge, and advice during the years of my study.
5. Library official who always gives good service related with the references in
this thesis so that the writer could done this thesis well.
6. Sri Tantowiyah, M.Pd. as the head of SMP H. Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang
who has given permission for doing the research and Sri Hardjati, S. Pd. as the
teacher of the eight grade students of SMPN 31 Semarang. And my spiritual
teachers are Mr. KH. Drs. Hasbullah, K. Ansori, S. Ag, K. Abdurrohim, KH.
Abdul Karim, Syekh Ahmad Cilacap etc.
7. The deepest gratitude for lovely parents (Mr. Moh. Syu’eb and Mrs. Siti
Aminah), my sweet younger sisters ( Nelatun Najiah, Tazkia An-Nafsi, Nur
Aida, Maulia Al-Mukarromah), my younger brother (Muhammad Muslim
Tamimi and Muhammad Faizin) who always give big inspiration and
motivation to me. My uncles are Mr. Nasir, Mr. Abdul, Mr. Ozat, and the big
family of Mr. Rosyidi and Mr. Rosyidin I Love You So Much.
8. Dearest friends; all members of D’Kancute and D’Kancute Wati, all members
of TBI ’07, all members of Harvest Club, all members of IPPMT, all members
of FC Club, all members of Wisata Hati Semarang, for sweet moments.
9. Dearest my rose, Rina Wahyuningrum thanks for your support and sweet
moments.
10. Dearest friends of KKN posko 40 Ds. Sidomukti Bandungan; Mas Tukin,
Mang Rohman, Erin, Masruroh, Fatimah, Miftahurrohmah, Mang Thoriq, Pak
Dhe Syafiq, Dhe Gaplex, and Dhe Zaini, thanks for your support and sweet
moments for 45 days.
11. All students of Tarbiyah Faculty. Especially, English department of TBI C in
2007 thanks for great inspirations. And whoever helped and supported the
writer in completing this research. Thanks a lot for cooperation.
Finally, the writer realizes that this thesis is still far from being perfect;
therefore, the writer will happily accept constructive criticism in order to make it
better. The writer hopes that this thesis would be beneficial to everyone. Amin
Semarang, May 31st 2012
The writer,
Muhyidin SN. 073411090
TABLE OF CONTENT
TITLE .................................................................................................................... i
A THESIS STATEMENT .................................................................................... ii
RATIFICATION NOTE ....................................................................................... iii
ADVISOR NOTE ................................................................................................. iv
ABSTRACT .......................................................................................................... vi
MOTTO ............................................................................................................... vii
ACKNOWLEDGMENT ....................................................................................... viii
TABLE OF CONTENT ........................................................................................ x
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the Study ......................................................... 1
B. Question of The Research ....................................................... 5
C. Objectives and Benefits of The Research ............................... 5
CHAPTER II IMPROVING STUDENTS’ WRITING ABILITY IN TEACHING
RECOUNT TEXTS BY USING CONCEPT MAP
A. Previous Research ................................................................... 6
B. Theoretical Framework ........................................................... 8
1. Writing Skills .................................................................... 8
a. Writing Process ........................................................... 10
b. Teaching Writing ........................................................ 11
2. Recount text ...................................................................... 14
3. Concept Map ..................................................................... 16
a. Teaching Recount Text By Using Concept Map ........ 18
b. The Advantages of Concept map ................................ 20
c. Psychological Foundations of Concept Map .............. 21
C. Hypothesis ............................................................................... 22
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design ...................................................................... 23
B. Research Setting ...................................................................... 24
C. Population and Sample ............................................................ 25
D. Research Variable ................................................................... 25
E. Data Collection Technique ...................................................... 26
F. Data Analysis Technique ........................................................ 27
CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSIONS
A. Description of Research Findings ........................................... 35
B. Data Analysis And hypothesis Test ........................................ 41
C. Discussion of The Research Findings ..................................... 47
D. Limitation of The Research ..................................................... 48
CHAPTER V CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion .............................................................................. 49
B. Suggestions ............................................................................. 49
BIBLIOGRAPHY APPENDICES TABLES CHARTS CURRICULUM VITAE
CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the Study
Teaching and learning activity in writing need some skills for the
students to master. Writing is the difficult skill in language because in writing
the students must generate and organize their ideas to solve the difficulties in
writing. The difficulty of writing includes spelling, punctuation, word
choices, and so on. It must be the higher level skills if the students’ language
proficiency is not weak. This is one of the difficulties in writing as well.
Beside that, in writing skills become highly complex. The students must plan
and organize as well as possible for the spelling, word choice and punctuation
to make a good writing.1 Whereas the ability or skills to write well is a close
relationship to academic and professional success. It is stated by Grabowski
(1996). He states that:
“Writing, as compared to speaking, can be seen as a more standardized system which must be acquired through special intruction. Mastery of this standard system is an important prerequisite of cultural and educational participation and the maintenance of one’s rights and duties. . . The fact that writing is more standardized than speaking allows for a higher degree of sanctions when people deviate from that standard.” (Grabowski,1996:75)2
Writing allows the students to share their communication with the
contemporaries and future generation. Writing is considered as student
failures to get success in learning process. Even the teacher uses the writing
as punishment for students. However the students must learn the proper
spelling and grammar in order that they can make a good writing. So they
aren’t considered as poor students in English writing.3
1 Jack C. Richards and Willy A. Renandya, Methodology in Language Teaching, An
Anthology of Current Practice, (Cambridge University Press, 2000 ), p.303
2 Sara Chushing Wigle, Assessing Writing, (UK:Cambridge University Press,2002),p.4
3 Robert Todd Carroll, Students Success Guide Writing Skills, (US:Robert T Carroll,1990), p.1
Then, the students will be able to write a good writing if the teacher
give some approaches to them. There are three approaches to writing. The
first approach is products of writing through texts examination, discourse
structure, and surface elements. The second approach focuses on the writer
and process concluding expressivist, cognitivist, and situated strands. And the
third approach is how the writer engages with the audience or students in
creating coherent texts.4
After the students are able to be creative in writing and they have
approaches in writing, the teacher must have style in teaching writing
especially in recount text. Mary Lynn Crow notes that:
“In the main, a person’s values, beliefs, and philosophy can easily be ascertained by the way he or she teaches. The instructional strategies and techniques that are adopted by a teacher bespeak his attitudes about himself, his students, and their respective roles in the teaching and learning process.”
In this case, the style in teaching is important for the teacher. But it is
difficult to have the elements of styles. To understand the teaching style, the
teachers use the basis and must examine themselves because it is systematic
manner. They must know the personal qualities and behaviors. So it can
affect the students to learn the ability especially in writing.5
In understanding recount text, the students also encounters problem in
implementing the structure of recount text. The students feel confused to
differenciate it such as orientation, events, and reorientation. The are also
still confused how to make or write recount text correctly.6 In order to
understand a good recount text, they can learn some examples of recount text
4 Ken Hyland, Teaching and Researching writing, (Longman:Pearson Education,2002),
p.5
5 Anthony F Grasha, Teaching with Style: A Practical Guide to Enhancing Learning by Understanding Teaching and Learning Styles, (San Bernadino: Alliance Publishers, 2002), p.1
6 Observation at eighth grade of SMP H. Isriati Semarang, March 13th 2012
types such as newspaper reports, conversations, speeches, television
interviews, eyewitness accounts, and letters.7
It is important how people or students write, beacuse writing has
many examples and a wide variety. It can produce in different form that has
many types of writing. So they need a preparation to write. There are process,
content, and medium in writing. In this case, the students or people need
suggestions in the writing process that has four elements. They are planning,
drafting, editing, and final version.8
From this point of view, to improve students writing abilty, of course
there must be an effective method or technique to students should be creative.
Traditionally, concepts maps have been used as a technique to engage
students in learning content knowledge. However, concepts maps can also be
used as a method in teaching writing exactly in recount text. Concepts map
appear to facilitate learning and how to process information and transform it
in to expository writing. Concepts map provide students the freedom to
express their knowledge on a given topic and present insights into the way
they organize knowledge or as a tool to help students and teachers visualize
the direction or focus of a research paper. 9
In other word, concept mapping can be mentioned as semantic
networking is a process used to create the representations of ideas and the
relationships between them. It means that the concept maps or semantic
networks contain ideas and labelled lines which describe the relationships
between them in the graphs. The purpose of the maps is to help the students
show their ideas. The students will be able to open the idea with their
7 Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Text Type in English (Macmillan:Mark Anderson
and Kathy Anderson,1997), p.49
8 Jeremy Harmer, How to Teach Writing,(Longman:Pearson Education Limited,2004),p.4-5
9 John W Santrock, Educational Psychology (Classroom Update: Preparing for PRAXISTM and Practice, p. 284
thinking. So students can connect the knowledge between the idea and
graphs. Furthermore, they will easily understand it.10
At this point, to understand a concept map as a method or technique in
learning and teaching activity, the students must know how to construct it. It
is one of the techniques that can be used for organizing and representing
knowledge that include concepts, which are usually enclosed in circles or
squares, and lines connecting the concepts. Concepts maps are graphics
organizers that are structured hierarchically, presented in a two dimension
diagrams, and shows relationships between concepts indicated by linking
words. Many research links concepts maps for instructional purposes.11
In teaching writing especially recount text, concept map can construct
the teaching class. There are procedures to construct it. It is adapted from
Novak and Gowin (1984), White and Gunstone (1992) and Birbili (2007).
Firstly, the teacher announces the topic of the lesson. Because of the writer
conduct recount text as a lesson, so the topic is experience in holiday as a
sample. The teacher can use drawing image, photos and picture. Secondly, the
learners or students are asked to think ideas, words, and example as with the
topic. So students relate the sub concept into other concept that they can
brainstorme in the previous step into categories.12
Consequently, a concept map may be use as an aid in helping students
structure a well organized paper. This is important to see the variety of ways
the students used concept maps and how it could improve writing ability
especially in recount text. So the researcher is interested to research more
about using concept map to improve student’s writing ability in teaching
10 NCCA, Assessment in the Primary School Curriculum:Guidelines for Schools, (Dublin:
National Council for Curriculum and Assessment, 2007),p.36 11 John W. Coffey, Summary to Literature Pertaining to the Use of Concept Map
Technique and Technologies for Education and Performance Support,(Pensacola:IHMC,2003), p. 5
12 Luu Trong Tuan and Le Thi Bich Thuan, The Linkages Between Concept Map and Language Learning,(Ho Chi Minh City:Studies in Literature and Language, 2011), p.136
recount texts (An experimental research at the eighth grade of SMP H. Isriati
Baiturrahman Semarang in the academic year of 2011/2012).
B. Question of The Research
This research is aimed to find the answer to the following research
questions
1. How is the use of using concept map to improve students' writing ability
in teaching recount texts?
2. How effective is using concept map to improve students' writing ability in
teaching recount texts?
C. Objectives and Benefits of The Research
The objectives of research are as follows:
1. To find out the use of using concept map to improve students' writing
ability in teaching recount texts.
2. To investigate the effectiveness of using concept map to improve students'
writing ability in teaching recount texts.
After doing research, the writer hopes that the result of the study will
be useful for:
1. For students, concept map may motivate and stimulate students to
improve their interest on recount text when they will find the difficulties
in learning it by using interesting method.
2. For teacher, the result of the study will be hopefully usual for English
teacher of Junior High School in teaching recount texts as a new method.
Concept map can help teacher in providing active learning, creative,
effective, and fun for students according to learning style. Moreover it can
increase awareness of teacher on students’ learning difficulties and efforts
to overcome and improve teacher performance to improve
professionalism.
3. For writer and reader, concept map method will give some experiences or
knowledge to do an interesting observation and it can be a reference to the
next researcher.
CHAPTER II
IMPROVING STUDENTS’ WRITING ABILITY IN TEACHING RECOUNT TEXTS BY USING CONCEPT MAP
A. Previous Research
1. Siti Zuhriyah (Student’s Number: 3104357). The Use of Story Pyramid
Technique to Improve Student’s Comprehension on Narrative Text (A
Classroom Action Research at the Eleventh Grade Students of MA NU
Mifathul Falah Kudus). Thesis, Semarang: Bachelor program of English
Language Education of Tarbiyah Faculty of Walisongo State Institute for
Islamic Studies, 2009. The background of study is based on the students’
difficulties in comprehending narrative text. To develop teaching reading
comprehension, teacher must have a technique in teaching reading to
help students understand the meaning of the text easily in reading
activity. Story pyramid technique aims to help students comprehend text
easily and improve their reading comprehension. Then for the research
question involved how is the use of Story Pyramid Technique in teaching
reading narrative text at eleventh grade students of MA NU Miftahul
Falah Kudus? This study is classroom action research that was done in
three cycles. To analyze the data, the researcher used descriptive
quantitative. The data from the observation that had done in every cycle
analyzed in descriptive explanation while the data from test explained in
quantitative. The data collection was done using observation and test as
instrument. The implementation of story pyramid technique in teaching
reading narrative text at MA NU Miftahul Falah Kudus was conducted in
three cycles with five activities including pre cycle and post cycle. The
participant of this study is 36 students in class A. The result of study
shows that using story pyramid technique can improve students’
comprehension in reading narrative text. The result of this study is
proved by students’ comprehension test that improved in every cycle. In
the first cycle, the average of students’ score was 66. 7. In the second
cycle, the students got 73. 9 and in the third cycle students got 78. 5.
Result of the study shows that students improve their reading effectively
by using story pyramid technique.
2. Rika Ismawati (Student Number: 3105265). Using Suggestopedia
Method to Improve Students’ Writing Ability in Recount Text (A
Classroom Action Research at Eight Grade Students of SMPN 02
Juwana-Pati in Academic Year of 2009/2010). Final Project: Bachelor
Program of English Language Education of Tarbiyah Faculty of
Walisongo State Institute for Islamic Studies (IAIN Walisongo Semarang
2009). The background of study is the abilities of English communication
in language both spoken and written are listening, speaking, reading, and
writing. Knowing that English is needed for Indonesia in the future, the
government always makes efforts to improve the quality of English
teaching, such as making a new curriculum. The research question is how
effective using suggestopedia method to improve students’ writing ability
in recount text? In this final project, the writer uses suggestopedia
method as an alternative in teaching recount. The writer wants to know
the influence of suggestopedia method for helping students produce an
effective recount text and the students ‘response to the use of
suggestopedia method in writing class. For the instrument uses test. This
research is quantitative research using classroom action research. The
result of this research showed the improvement of the students’ ability in
writing recount. It can be seen from their score. The average on pre-test
was 57.65 and post test was 73.78. Based on the result of the research,
suggestopedia method is effective in improving English writing
especially in recount text.
3. Abdul Mufid (Student Number: 3105266). In his thesis entitled: The
effectiveness of using pictures in teaching of narrative text writing to
improve students’ achievement (An experimental study at the eight grade
students of MTs Nurul Huda Banyuputih Batang in academic year of
2008/2009). Final Project: Bachelor Program of English Language
Education of Tarbiyah Faculty of Walisongo State Institute for Islamic
Studies (IAIN Walisongo Semarang 2009) The background of study is
many English teachers face crucial problem to choose the suitable
technique of teaching writing, especially narrative text. Sometimes the
teachers still use the conventional method that makes the students bored.
Using pictures can be one of media to cope with that problem. The
research question in this research is what the extent is the use of pictures
in teaching narrative text effective? This research is quantitative research
using experimental method. The writer collected the data using test and
observation. The data was analyzed by using descriptive statistical
analysis technique and the hypothesis used t test. The result of test score
shows that the experimental class got higher that is 76.41 compared with
the control class got 69.95. Based on the t test there is real difference
between the results of study of learning using pictures as media and
learning that is not using pictures media. Consequently, learning writing
narrative text using pictures as media is more effective when it is applied
in the process of learning English than the conventional learning (a class
which is not given the same treatment).
In this research, the writer conducts the research dealing with using
concept map to improve students’ writing ability in teaching recount text
for the eight grade of junior high school in SMP H. Isriati Semarang.
B. Theoretical Framework
1. Writing Skills
Writing skills is a program of comprehensive writing that
performed for beginning, struggling, at-risk for the writers. Writing skills
can help the students to become a good writer. The students have to know
and understand the essential foundation of writing skills such as strategy,
technique, and opportunity. Writing skills also give the special instruction
in spelling, handwriting, and key boarding. Beside that, writing skills can
build the fluency and confidence for students and provide the variety of
strategy and opportunity to apply it. In writing skills, the students are
expected to understand the instruction involving grammar, usage,
paragraph composition, and sentence structure.13
According to Tony Silva and Paul Kei Matsuda writing is part of
lingustics aplication. Writing is considered as a mere representation of
speech. It means that writing is a way to monitor the language production
of students.14 Writing is one of the skill connecting emotions, feeling,
language thoughts, experience, mechanical action and different
strategies.15 Writing is explicit that has an elaborate context. It takes into
account as the interpretation context, beliefs, and knowledge. Nystrand,
Doyle and Himley state that:
”A text is explicit not because it says everything all by itself but rather because it strikes careful balance between what needs to be said and what may be assumed. The writer’s problem is not just being explicit; the writer’s problem is knowing what to be explicit about.” (Nystrand, Doyle and Himley:1986:81)16
Then, Steve Graham and Dolores Peri stated that writing skill is a
basic requirement to participate in civic life and in the global economy as
academic success. In addition, many of students lack in basic writing in
curriculum causing the poor writing. To get an ease in writing, students
must read book more. Because the definition of literacy including reading
and writing skills. In this case, if the students seldom read book, it will be
a literacy crisis.17 Writing skills can develop across three stages. It can
13 Diana Hanbury King, Writing Skills 2nd Edition,Comprehensive Instruction for
Struggling Writers.( Educators Publishing Service,2002), p.2
14 Norbert Schmitt, An Introduction to Applied Linguistics.(Arnold:London,2002),p.251 15 Anne Uuse, Writing Skills of 1st and 2nd Stage Students. (Tallin University:Estonia,
2006), p.7 16 Ken Hyland, Teaching and Researching Writing, p.8
17 Steve Graham and Dolores Perin, Writing Next Effective Strategies to Improve Writing of Adolescents in Middle and High Schools, (New York:Alliance for excellent education,2007), p.3
learn the craft of composition. Beside that, it can transfer knowledge and
knowledge crafting to understand the expert levels of writing skills.18
In order to write interesting writing to the readers, there are some
steps that can be used by students or writer. Firstly, the students or writer
can address the reader directly. Then, they can use direct speech and use
rhetorical question. Moreover, they can use the variety of adjective, verb,
and adverb to make the composition more attractive to the readers.19
c. Writing Process
To make a good writing, the writer must understand the writing
process. Because it is important to be implemented so that when the
students do writing, they get a way to solve the problem in writing.
There are some steps in writing as writing process. They are planning,
translating and reviewing. The first step is planning that students are
able to generate their ideas, they know how the goals is, and they need
procedures to make a good writing. The second step is translating that
students are able to express their ideas and understand the goals in
verbal forms. The last step is reviewing that students are able to
evaluate and revise the writing correctly.20
On the other hand, a good writing can be done by students if
their grammar is good. In fact, grammar and spelling are important in
writing, because it is the purposes in the condition of writing to be
correct word and grammar. In short, to get a good writing, students
must know the construction of sentence. They must know the subjects
and verbs such as singular subject requires singular verb. Besides that,
they must know the preferences of pronouns and they can use the
appropriate pronouns in order that the sentences will not be ambiguous.
Then, the students must have a consistency in writing especially in a
18 Ronald T. Kellogg, Training Writing Skills: A Cognitive Developmental Perspective, (Saint Louis University | USA,2008), p.3
19 Virginia Evans, Successful Writing Intermediate. (Express publishin: 2000), p. 11
20 Ulla Cannor, Contrastive Rhetoric Cross- Cultural Aspect of Second Language Writing. ( UK:Cambridge University Press,1996) p.75
tense. Finally, students must use a correct spelling, punctuation,
capitalization, and usage word as requirements.21
After the students know the correct grammar, appropriate word,
spelling, and punctuation there is an important thing to remember to
write a good writing. It is an element of satisfactory writing. The
elements of satisfactory writing are clarity, coherence and focus. Clarity
involves the ambiguity, vagueness, and obscurity. An important thing in
clarity is if the students can use the appropriate word to be good
sentences in order that the readers can understand what the writer
means. Then, there must be a connection between ideas, sentences, and
paragraph in coherence. Moreover there is focus containing the reason
why the students write. They often fail in writing because there is no
focus. So, without focus the sentences will not be coherent.22
Thus, according to the theories, writing is one of four language
skills. It is considered to be a difficult skill for students or learners
because it requires efforts in the process of thinking to produce not only
context but also symbols. Producing context in a written form is
required for delivering the messages to the readers. Furthermore, the
students write correct paragraph format based on the result of the
revising step.
d. Teaching Writing
In teaching writing skill, the teacher must explain the
organization of various sections and essay to students to develop
writing at the paragraph level. Stephen Bailey stated that there are four
parts to develop writing to students. Firstly, it can guide the students to
understand essay title through reading and note-making. It can be
mentioned as a writing process. Secondly, it needs type of assignment,
making definition and giving references. It is organized alphabetically.
21 Robert Todd Carroll, Students Success Guide Writing Skills,(US: Sacramento City
College,1990),p.1
22 Robert Todd Carroll, Students Success Guide Writing Skills, p, 4-7
And it can be mentioned as elements of writing. Thirdly, the teacher
gives remedial to students. It is accuracy in writing. And the last, the
teacher must give examples the type of writing to students including
letters and survey reports.23
To create a good teaching in writing, there are several strategies
that can do by teacher. The first strategy is prewriting guide; it gives
students questions to start their discovery. Besides that, it can response
to questions. Moreover, prewriting can really encourage writing for the
young writers. Then, how to use prewriting? To use prewriting it should
determine to change writing assignment needed. At this point, the
students can prefer the questions to answer in discussion as a benefit
from it. The second strategy is prewriting think sheet. The importance
of prewriting is the function of writing process. This strategy can help
students to find a particular topic and connect within knowledge. The
third strategy is semantic features analysis. By using this strategy,
students can connect the logical connection with their ideas.24
There are additional and very crucial reasons of teaching
writing. Firstly, reinforcement means that writing reinforces students in
understanding grammatical structure, They often find it useful to write
sentences using new language shortly after they have studied it. By
mastering grammar, teaching writing will be to be implemented.25 And
secondly, paragraph development means that it is true where students
improve their writing mainly through writing itself after getting
information to develop the topic and idea. When students write, they
23 Stephen Bailey, Academic Writing: A Practical Guide for Students, (New York:Nelson
Thornes,2003), p.6 24 Vicki Urquhart and Monette Mclver,Teaching Writing in the Content Areas
(Alexanderia: McREL. All rights reserved, 2005), p.76-80
25 Victoria Fromkin.et al, An Introduction to Language.(Thomson:Heinle,2003) 3rd Ed,p. 344
also have a chance to be adventurous with the language by giving
details, giving an explanation and giving examples.26
The writing skills are complex and difficult to teach. According
to Thomas S Kane, writing involves the following rules. Firstly,
grammatical rules means that the ability to write correct sentences.
Secondly, usage rules means that the ability manipulate sentence and
use language effectively. It is less basic than grammatical ones. Thirdly,
mechanical rules means that the ability to use correctly those
conventions peculiar to written language. E.g., punctuation and
spelling. 27
In teaching writing, the teacher needs writing instruction to
engage the students in purposeful writing task. Then, writing instruction
can give feedback and students’ choices in all stages of writing to
achieve a particular writing. Moreover, by giving instruction the teacher
can guide the students in demonstrating the purpose of writing. In fact,
the goal of teaching writing is to become independent writers for
students. Furthermore, the explicit teaching and guidance are needed in
the goal of writing itself. From the explanation, the teacher and students
can see that there are several features of exemplary writing instruction.
According to Harris and Larsen, the features of writing instruction such
as literate classroom environment where students can get the room with
the material. It means that the material is writing and reading on the
wall, so students can see it. Then, this feature involves the students to
make daily writing on a wide range of writing task. Beside that,
students must choose the topic and the teachers must allow them to
modify their assignment for students. So they can develop the topic that
has been selected. For students, writing activities must follow the
26 Dorothy E Zemach and Lisa A Rumisek, Academic Writing from Paragraph to Essay,
(Macmillan:Universidad De Sevila,2005), p.17
27 Thomas S Kane, The Oxford: Essential Guide to Writing, (New York:Barkley Books, 2000), p.13-15
curriculum in order that they can use the reading to support writing
development. Finally, to get students interesting in writing, the teacher
must recognize value and build on the different culture.28
On the contrary, after the teacher gives writing instruction to
students, the teaching writing actually needs some strategies to engage
them. Those strategies are modeled writing, think aloud writing, and
guide writing. To organize the strategy, the teacher and students need
some points. They are purposes, description, preparation, and
implementation.29
So, the most important factor in teaching writing is that students
need to be personally involved in order to make the learning experience
of lasting value. Encouraging student participation in the exercise or
testing, while at the same time refining and expanding writing skills,
requires a certain pragmatic approach. Furthermore, for purpose of
testing, grammatical skills can be measured by an objective test of
grammar. It is possible to construct grammar items of this nature by
drawing on the errors made by students in their free written work. The
students can write a good writing if they follow the writing instruction.
2. Recount text.
In English language, there are two texts that can be mentioned as a
genre. The first genre is story genre that contains narrative, news story,
exemplum, anecdote and recount. The second genre is factual genre
containing procedure, explanation, report, exposition, and discussion.
Recount text is one of genre stories.30
28 NSW State Literacy and Numeracy Plan, Writing and Spelling Strategies: Assisting
Students who Have Additional Learning Supports Need,(New South Wales:NSW Department of Education and Training, 2007),p.25-26
29 NSW State Literacy and Numeracy Plan, Writing and Spelling Strategies: Assisting students who have additional learning supports need, p.27-34
30 KJ Eltis, Book1: An Introduction to Genre-Based Writing, (Australia:NSW Departement of school education 1990),p. 13
A recount is a text that contains retelling events that happened in
the past. A recount text usually uses the past tense and past continuous
tense in its content and its sequence of events told.31 Its generic structure is
the orientation, series of events, and re-orientation. The orientation is a
part of recount text that tells the introduction of the interesting event being
told. The series of event is the sequence of things that happen from the
beginning until the end. Lastly, a re-orientation is the feeling and
impression after doing the events.32 According to Artono Wardiman et al,
recount text is a text telling for the readers. It contains story, action, or
people activity that purpose to entertain and inform the readers.33 Recount
text has some examples such as newspaper reports, conversations,
speeches, television interviews, eyewitness accounts, and letters.34
This session elaborates some characteristics of recount text the
called as language features. Language features or significant grammatical
patterns of recount text as Jenny Hammond states as follows, firstly, it is
introducing personal participant, for example; i , my group. Secondly,
chronological connection is used to link between paragraphs or sentences
as then, first, next, after that, and finally. Thirdly, it contains linking verb
such as, was, were, saw and heard. Fourthly, it exerts action verb, for
example; look, go and change. And the last, it applies simple past tense
and be written in the first or third person.35
To construct a recount text, the students must know the scaffold.
The scaffold itself is a guide to construct a piece of the text. It can help
them to plan a recount because there are several recounts that do not have
31 Gerrot, L. and P. Wignell, Making Sense of Functional Grammar, (Sidney: Antepodean
Educational Enterprises, 1995), p.190
32 Jenny Hammond, et al, English for Social Purposes, (Sydney: Macquarie University Press, 1992), p. 89
33 Artono Wardiman et al. English in Focus for grade VIII Junior high school, (Depdiknas: Pusat Perbukuan, 2008), p.61
34 Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Text type in English, p.49
35 Jenny Hammond, et.al, English for Social Purposes, p. 88
a conclusion. In other word, the students must see the models of recount
text that have three main parts of paragraph. The first paragraph contains
the background information; the second one is a series of paragraph that
can be said as events; the third one is a concluding paragraph that may
contain a personal comment. In fact, in recount text doesn’t always have a
conclusion. It is needed if necessary.36
From those explanation, recount text is important to the readers
that want to know the people experience. It is also an expression of people
that can be made with written form. To make a good recount text, we must
know the generic structure and language features of recount text. Finally,
the students can write a good recount text if they understand the steps of
writing recount text. So, they can share with their friends by using it.
3. Concept Map
Concept maps are tools for organizing and representing
knowledge. They include concepts, usually enclosed in circles or boxes of
some type, and relationships between concepts or propositions, indicated
by a connecting line between two concepts. Words on these lines can be
used to specify the nature of the relationships between different concepts.
The concept mapping technique was originally developed by Prof. Joseph
D. Novak at Cornell University in the 1960s.37 Khincin said that concept
map can help students to organize and learn the concept through creating a
map that has some features and characteristics of concept.38
According to Carol Johnston concept mapping can be a technique
that allows students to understand the relationships between ideas by
creating a visual map of the connections. Concept map can make students
to connect their ideas in studying. Besides that, students get easily to
organize in arrangement of knowledge especially in English language
36 Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Text type in English, p.53-54 37 John W. Coffey, Summary to Literature Pertaining to the Use of Concept Map
Technique and Technologies for Education and Performance Support, p. 5-6 38 John W Santrock, Educational Psychology (Classroom Update: Preparing for
PRAXISTM and Practice,p. 284
teaching and learning. And moreover it can organize students’ ideas to
absorb and adapt the information that will be organized in learning as new
information. 39
Furthermore, concept map can be used many uses in education,
business and government. In education, it is one of uses for the assessment
of what a learner knows. It can be used to externalize and make explicit
the conceptual knowledge both correct and erroneous that students hold in
a knowledge. The educational purposes can foster the learning of a good
structural knowledge by using the process of concept map.40
The process of actually constructing concept map is a powerful
learning strategy that is graphic in nature and forces the learner to think
about the relationships between terms. This latter aspect makes concept
mapping especially suited to the English learning. By drawing a concept
map of a lecture or a chapter in a textbook, for example, students can
identify the key concepts and show the relationships between them,
helping them to understand more clearly the meaning of the material.
Concept maps have a number of very practical applications for students.
They are a handy way to take notes during lectures and are excellent aids
to group brainstorming. They assist in planning of students and also
provide useful graphics for students’ presentations and written
assignments. They also help students to refine their creative and critical
thinking.41
From the explanation above the writer can divide how to construct
the concept map. Firstly, students can construct their brain related to
memory. It means that students memorize the topic in learning by
constructing concept map. It can be called as brainstorming phase.
Secondly, organizing phase is to spread out students’ concepts on a flat
39 Carol Johnston, Concept Mapping, The University of Melbourne, p. 1
40 John W. Coffey, Summary to Literature Pertaining to the Use of Concept Map Technique and Technologies for Education and Performance Support, p. 7
41 Yue yin.et al, Comparison of Two Concept-Mapping Techniques: Implications for Scoring, Interpretation, and Use (California:2003) p.167-169
surface so that all can be read easily and, together, create groups and sub-
groups of related items. In constructing concept maps try to group items to
emphasize hierarchies and identify terms that represent those higher
categories. Thirdly, Layout phase is on a large sheet of paper try to come
up with an arrangement that best represents students’ collective
understanding of the interrelationships and connections among groupings.
And the last, linking phase uses lines with arrows to connect and show the
relationship between connected items. In this phase, students write a word
or short phrase by each arrow to specify the relationship. Many arrows can
originate or terminate on particularly important concepts.42
Furthermore, the students can generate their ideas in writing
especially in recount text by using concept map. Not only they can
generate it but also they can organize the concept map to be an effective
method in learning process to solve the problem of study. The important
thing of concept map itself is to create the students make a good writing
easily.
d. Teaching Recount Text By Using Concept Map
To teach recount text by using concept map needs some
procedures to do it. The writer knows that concept map is an effective
teaching tool. So there are some models to construct in teaching
practices. The models of construction in concept map can be applied in
the class by the teacher. It can give a way to explain the subject matter
especially recount text. Beside that, the students can explore their brain
to remember what the teacher explains, because they are directly
involved to connect the knowledge that is presented. On the contrary,
the teacher gives feedback to students to their knowledge in teaching
and learning activities.43
42Joseph D. Novak & Alberto J.Cañas http : //cmap.ihmc.us /Publications/
ResearchPapers/TheoryCmaps/TheoryUnderlyingConceptMaps.htm. accessed, march 7th 2012 43 Luu Trong Tuan and Le Thi Bich Thuan, The Linkage between Concept Map and
Language Learning, (Ho Chi Minh City: Studies In Literature and Language, 2011), p.136
According to Novak and Gowin et al, concept map can be
effectively constructed through some procedures involving three steps
that teacher can apply it. The first step is teacher’s preparation. It
means that the teacher selects the topic of the lesson. Then, the teacher
must prepare the paper to write key concept of the topic especially
recount text as example. The teacher also can use the picture, photos,
or drawing image related to concept map. The second step is students’
idea. In this step, students are required to think the words, ideas, and
specific examples. The specific example in this research is recount
text. So, students must relate the generic structure of recount text and
its language features. Besides that, the teacher invites the students to
share the topic of the lesson. Then, the teacher writes the example of
recount text on the board with different colored chalks for links and
circles to help the students see the information in recount text
especially. The third step is students group. The students can
brainstorm in the previous step into categories. The teacher asks
students to identify the relationship among concepts. In addition, the
students must discuss the topic of the lesson to tell the reason in
student’s idea with sub concept to another sub concept. The students’
idea can connect concept by using concept map with lines, links, box,
and circle.44
The implementation of concept map activity in English
teaching especially recount text must have the steps to find the
connection between idea and knowledge. The first step is the teacher
must train the students. The teacher must make the type of concept
map and prepare for the familiar topic. It can be found with their
experience in daily activity. The second steps the teacher creates an
individual maps first. Then the teacher asks students to create
individual maps. This is a reflection for students because it is crucial. It
44 Luu Trong Tuan and Le Thi Bich Thuan, The Linkage Between Concept Map and
Language Learning, p.136
will help students to understand the concept map. The third step is the
teacher asks students to review with their group. After finishing the
individual concept map, the students must organize in small group to
discuss what they create in concept map. Beside that, the creation of
concept map must be shared with their partners. Furthermore, they can
find the heterogeneous concept map each other. The last step is the
teacher asks each group to present their important propositions in front
of the class. They must explain what the students choose.45
At this point of view, the teacher must evaluate the concept
map that has been created by the students. The evaluation itself can be
managed through formal grading or scoring. Even though it doesn’t
use grading and scoring, the teacher and students will get that concept
map is so informative. Then, the teacher can use a quick scan of the
map to evaluate the students’ taught to help them in generating ideas in
order to be understood. In addition, the teacher can select the
curriculum and make a consistent scoring process as activity in
concept map that can be an assessment instrument.46
In short, the concept map can be used as a method in teaching
and learning activity especially in recount text. So, this method will
give a way to the teacher in implementing the teaching class.
e. The Advantages of Concept map
The use of concept map can give a way to students in
representing knowledge especially in language. Not only students can
get an ease in study but also the teacher will be easily to explain the
subject or material. There are main advantages that can be used to
provide the powerful representation. Firstly, this concept can help the
teacher to explain the topic and picture in some subject. When the
teacher presents it, the students can compare what the relationship
between topics to them. So, it can be called as teaching and revision
45 Jim Vanides, Using Concept Maps in The Science Classroom, p.29 46 Jim Vanides, Using Concept Maps in The Science Classroom, p.29-31
topic. Secondly, the teacher needs to effort that students must be
interesting in teaching and learning activity. By using concept map, the
students can reinforce their memory in understanding the subject.
Thirdly, the teacher and students sometimes get misconception in
learning and teaching activity. One of the ways is using concept map
as problem-solving or alternative solutions and options to solve the
problem take place in learning. Because of this, the students can make
a small group to identify misconceptions. And the last, concept map
can give the students to assess their achievement. It means how long
the student’s ability in learning activity.47
And the other advantages of using concept map are students
can begin on a cognitive process to develop their knowledge. They are
actually helped bay concept map through their new ideas connecting
the relationship between them and teacher. Beside that, the students
can organize and connect the information. It means that they can
explore their brain to get understanding in learning and teaching
activity. Because of this concept map will be able to give something
new to students. On the other hand, concept map can give a chance to
students in connecting the knowledge and they can reflect to
understand how to organize their thoughts in teaching and learning
activity.48
f. Psychological Foundations of Concept Map
For the psychological foundations of concept maps needs the
question to find early learning. This early learning is a discovery
learning process of concept. The patterns or regularities in events show
the individual discerns as the same regularities labeled by older
47 Ioana Stoica1, et. al, Concept Maps, A Must for The Modern Teaching-Learning
Process, (Bucharest University: 2010), p. 571
48 Jim Vanides, Using Concept Maps in The Science Classroom,(Summer:2005) p. 27-28
persons with words or symbols. This is an evolutionary heritage of all
normal human beings as a phenomenal ability.49
After students know the discovery learning they must know the
reception learning process to ask questions and getting clarification of
relationships for new concept and proposition. In addition discovery
learning process and the reception learning process use language and
transmitted to the learner for the important distinction between rote
learning and meaningful learning. The meaningful learning must
require three conditions. First condition is the material of prior
knowledge for the learners conceptually. By using concept maps can
help to this condition for identifying large general concepts. The
second condition is the learner must possess relevant prior knowledge
to build concept frameworks to be specific knowledge. The last
condition is the learner must choose to learn meaningfully. The teacher
or mentor in this condition as a control in the motivation of students.50
Thus, a concept map is as a visual organization and
representation of knowledge can show concepts and ideas and the
relationships among them. The students create a concept map by
writing key words sometimes enclosed in shapes such as circles,
boxes, triangles, etc. and then drawing arrows between the ideas that
are related. Then students add a short explanation by the arrow to
explain how the concepts are related. When new knowledge is
integrated with and connected to existing knowledge that new
knowledge is easier to understand and to remember even in teaching
recount text that is taken by writer as material in English language
learning. In fact, concept map can give advantages to the teacher and
49 Joseph D. Novak & Alberto J. Cañas, The Theory Underlying Concept Maps and How
to Construct and Use Them, (USA:Florida Institute for Human and Machine Cognition, 2008), p.2-3
50 Joseph D. Novak & Alberto J. Cañas, The Theory Underlying Concept Maps and How to Construct and Use Them, p.2-3
students in understanding and organizing the new ideas in teaching and
learning activity. So there is no misconception both of them.
C. Hypothesis
In this research, the hypothesis can be stated as there is a significant
difference in students’ ability in recount text that using concept map as
method in teaching recount text.
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design
In this study, the method used was experiment research. An
experiment is the way to find the causal relationship between two factors
which are raised by the researcher in purpose by reducing or eliminating any
distracting factors.51
The writer used pre test – post test control group design with one
treatment as the design for this study.
This is the scheme:
E = 21 OXO
C = 43 OO
Where:
E: the symbol for experiment class
C: the symbol for control class
1O : pre test for experiment class
2O : post test for experiment class
3O : pre test for control class
4O : post test for control class
There are two groups in this model of experiment research. First is
experiment group and the second is control group. The writer decided to
choose class VIII A as the experiment class and class VIII C as the control
class. The experiment class received a new treatment. It was taught by using
concept map in writing recount text. While, the control class taught by using
conventional learning or lecturing. It was not receive a new treatment.
51 Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedure Penelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, ( Jakarta : PT
Rineka Cipta, 2006), p.3
B. Research Setting
1. Time of the research
This research was implemented on 9 Mei – 23 May 2012, counted
since the proposal was submitted until the end of research.
2. Place of the research
The writer did the research at SMP H.Isriati Baiturrahman. It is
located at Jl. Abdurrahman Saleh No.258
3. Research Procedure
In collecting data, there are some steps was taken by the writer,
they are as follows:
a. Preliminary visit (meet the administration officer)
The writer visited the school to get information about teacher
and students as participants. To gain the information, the writer asked
the administration officer.
b. Contact the headmaster
The writer asked permission to the headmaster of SMP H.
Isriati Baiturrahman Semarang by giving the permission letter.
c. Contact the English teacher
After getting permission from the headmaster, the writer met
the English teacher for asking his help and guidance for the writer
conducted research. And the writer explains about test and material to
students.
d. Give pre test
The writer gave the pre test to experiment and control class.
They asked to write a paragraph based on the pictures and key words
as guide given. The pre test was conducted on May15, 2012 for
experiment class and May 16, 2012 for control class.
e. Give the treatment
The activities of the experiment class were started on May 15,
2012 and end on May 23, 2012. The experiment class was given the
treatment by using concept map as a method in teaching writing
recount text. While the activities of the control class were started on
May 16, 2012 and end on May 21, 2012. The control class only gave a
verbal explanation without using concept map as a media in teaching
recount text.
f. Give post test
The post test was conducted after treatment for three times, it
was given to test their understanding on writing recount text. It was
held on May 22, 2012.
C. Population and Sample
1. Population
Population is all the subject of the research.52 In this study, the
population or the subjects of research are the eighth grade students at SMP
Hj Isriyati Baiturrahman Semarang in the academic year of 2011/2012. The
number of the population is 85 students. They are divided into VIII A, B
and C.
2. Sample
Sample is part of population.53 In this study, there are two classes
as sample. Where class VIII A as the experiment class that consist of 26
students and class VIII C as the control class that consist of 26 students.
3. Sampling
Sampling is a technique to take a sample. In this study, the writer
used cluster sampling technique. Finally, chosen class VIII A as the
experiment class and VIII C as the control class.
D. Research Variable
Variable is the object of research or something that become the
concern of research.54 In this study there are two variables.
52Suharsimi Arikunto, ProsedurPenelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, p.130 53Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, p.131 54Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, ( Jakarta : PT
Rineka Cipta, 2006), p.118
1. Independent Variable
It is a variable that influences or causes of change or emergence of
the dependent variable.55 Independent variable in this research is the
concept map in teaching writing recount text or the method used in
teaching and learning process.
2. Dependent Variable
It is variable that is affected resulting, because of the existence of
the independent variable.56 Dependent variable in this research is the
achievement of the students of the eighth grade SMP H.Isriati
Baiturrahman Semarang in writing recount text.
E. Data Collection Technique
To get the accurate data, in this study the writer uses two ways in the
collecting the data, they are:
1. Documentation
Documentation method is used to look for the data concerning
matters or the variable that are taken in the form of the note, transcript,
book, newspaper, magazine, inscription, notulen, ledger, agenda, etc.57 it
refers to the archival data that help the writer to collect the needed data. In
this study, this method is used to get the data that related to the object
research such as students name list are included in the population. In this
case, the data was gained by the help of the English teacher.
2. Test
Test is a set of question and exercises used to measure the
achievement or capability of the individual or group.58 This method is used
55 Sugiyono, Statistika Untuk Penelitian, (Bandung : CV Alfabeta, 2005), p.3
56Sugiyono, Statistika Untuk Penelitian, p.3. 57Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, p.158 58Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, ( Jakarta : PT
Rineka Cipta, 2006), p.150
to get data about score of the pre-test and post-test was given for both of
groups. The experiment class and control class.
The test in this study is an essay test or subjective test. In essay
test of writing, the student is given to freedom chance to be thought as
much as possible. They can freely express and organize their ideas in
written form.
a. Pre- test
Before the teacher taught new material by using concept map,
the teacher gave a test to the students. Pre- test were given to the
experiment class and the control class. This test is given before the
experiment was run.
b. Post- test
Post- test was given to the experiment class and the control
class. The test was given in order to know the improvement of
students’ ability in writing recount text. The post- test was given to the
experiment class and control class after received treatment. The
experiment class taught in writing recount text by concept map. And
the control class taught without using concept map.
F. Data Analysis Technique
The writer analysis the data through giving test to the students. It needs
some steps in analyzing of the data. The following are the steps had been
taken by the writer:
1. Technique of scoring test
In measuring the test, a standard technique should be used to
show the result of research were reliable. To measure the writing test
the writer used the analysis method. According to J.B.Heaton analytic
scoring test in writing test, there are five major items or categories.
They are grammar, vocabulary, content, organization and mechanic.59
59J.B.Heaton, Writing English Language Tests, (London : Longman Group, 1975), p.138
To analyze the students’ test in writing recount text, the writer
focused on the items in the elements of writing as states by Heaton.
Theelements of writing are content, organization, vocabulary, grammar
and mechanic.
After classifying the test items, the writer gave score for each
item with focused on organization of the content. Where score’
organization higher than element of writing other. Concept maps help
students to arrange a recount text. The percentage of the elements of
writing can be seen in table 1.
Table 1
Percentage of The element of writing.60
Element of writing Score
1. The content mastery
2. The organization mastery
3. The vocabulary mastery
4. The grammar mastery
5. The mechanic mastery
20%
35%
20%
20%
5%
Total of score 100%
Explanation:
Content : The substance of writing, the ideas expressed.
Organization : The organization of the content
Vocabulary : The choice of idioms, words, and lexical item to
give a particular tone or flavor to writing
Grammar : The employing grammatical and syntactic forms
Mechanic : The use of graphic convention of the language
60 Taken from BurhanNurgiyantoro, PenilaianDalamPengajaranBahasadanSastra(by
Modification), (Yogyakarta:BPFE Yogyakarta, 2001), pp. 307-308
Table 2
Scoring Guidance and The explanation of Criterion.61
Item analysis score Criterion of scoring
content 18-20
14-17
10-13
7-9
Excellent: knowledgeable-subtantive etc
Good: some knowledgeable of subject-adequate range.
Fair: limited knowledgeable of subject-little substance
Very poor: does not show knowledgeable of subject-
non substantive.
Organization 29-35
23-28
17-22
11-16
Excellent: fluent expression-ideas clearly stated.
Good: somewhat choopy-loosely organized but main
ideas stand out
Fair: not fluent-ideas confused or disconnected
Very poor: does not communicate-no organization
vocabulary 18-20
14-17
10-13
7-9
Excellent: sophisticated range-effective word/idiom
choice and usage.
Good: adequate range-occasional of word/idiom form,
choice, usage, but meaning is not obscured
Fair: limited range- frequent errers of word/idiom
form, choice, usage.
Very poor: essentially translation- little knowledge of
english vocabulary.
Grammar 18-20
14-17
10-13
7-9
Excellent: effective complex grammar construction.
Good: effective but simple constructive in grammar.
Fair: .a major problem is simple/complex construction
in grammar.
Very poor: virtually no mastery of sentence
construction rules.
61Taken from BurhanNurgiyantoro, PenilaianDalam Pengajaran Bahasa dan Sastra(by
Modification).pp. 307-308
Item analysis score Criterion of scoring
Mechanic 5
4
3
2
Excellent: demonstrates mastery of construction.
Good: occasional errors of spelling, punctuation,
capitalization.
Fair: frequent errors of spelling, punctuation,
capitalization.
Very poor: no mastery of conventions, dominated by
errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization,
paragraphing.
Total of score 1-100
2. Pre-requisites Test
Before the writer determines the statistical analysis technique used,
the first the writer examined the validity sample. The way that was used
to examine the validity sample was normality and homogeneity test.
a. Normality Test
Normality test used to know the distribution data normal or not.
To find out the distribution data is used normality test with Chi-
square.62
The steps of Chi-square test as follows:
1) Determine of the range (R): the largest data reduced the
smallest data.
2) Determine the many class intervals (K) with the formula:
K= 1+ (3, 3) log n
3) Determine the length of the class, using the formula:
classofnumber
Rrangep =
4) Make a frequency distribution table
5) Determine the class boundaries (bk) of each class interval.
62 Sudjana,Metode Statistika, (Bandung: Tarsito, 2001), p.273.
6) Calculating of the average Xi (x ), with the formula:
∑∑=
i
ii
f
xfX_
7) Calculate variance, with the formula:
)1(
)( 22
2
−−
= ∑ ∑nn
xfxfns iiii
8) Calculate the value of Z, with the formula:
s
xxZ
_
−=
x = Limit class
−x= Average
S = standard deviation
9) Define the board area of each class interval.
10) Calculate of the frequency expository (fh), with the
formula: fh = n x wide area with the n number of sample.
11) Make a list of the frequency of observation (fo), with the
frequency expository as follow:
class bk Z P L Ei
Ei
EiOi 2)( −
12) Calculate the Chi-square (2x ), the formula:
∑−=Ei
EiOX
22 )(
13) Determine the degree of validity (df). In the calculation of
this data is arranged in the list of frequency distribution
consisting of k pieces so that the interval to determine the
criteria test used formula df = k-3, where k is the number of
class intervals and the real extent α = 0.05
14) Determine the value of 2x table.
15) Determine the distribution normality with test criteria:
If countX > tableX so the data is not normal distribution and
other way if the countX < tableX so the data is normal
distribution.
b. Homogeneity Test
Is used to know whether the data are homogeneous or not.
The formula is:63
Vk
VbF =
Where:
Vb: bigger variance
Vk: smaller variance
The hypothesis in homogeneity test are:
Ho: homogeny variance = 22
21 σσ =
Ha: non homogeny variance = 22
21 σσ ≠
If the calculation result of countF is lower that tableF ( countF < tableF
) by 5% degree of significant so Ho is accepted, it means the data is
homogeneous or both of groups have the same variance.
c. Test of the Average
It is used to examine average whether experiment group and
control group that has been decided having significant different
average.
Ho: 21 µµ =
Ha: 21 µµ ≠
The formula that is used in the t-test as follows:64
63 Sudjana, Metode Statistika,(Bandung: Tarsito,2001), p.250
64Sudjana, Metode Statistika, p.239
s
nn
XXt
21
2
11 +
−=
−−
with 2
)1()1(
21
222
211
−+−+−
=nn
snsns
Where:
1X : average of experimental group
2X : average of control group
n1 : number of experiment group
n2 : number of control group
S12 : standard deviation of experiment group
S22 : standard deviation of both groups
Criteria test is Ho is accepted if αα 2
11211 −−
<<− ttt . where α2
11−t
obtained from the distribution list t with df = (n1 + n2 -2) and
opportunities ( α211− ). Values for other t Ho rejected.
3. Analysis Phase End
To examine the hypothesis that have been stated, these following steps
are used.
1) Normality Test
Steps normality second step is the same as the normality test on the
initial data.
2) Homogeneity Test
Steps homogeneity second step is the same as the homogeneity test on
the initial data.
3) Hypothesis Test
Proposed hypothetical test in average similarity with the right test is as
follows:
Ho = µ1 = µ2
Ha = µ1>µ2
µ1 : average data of experiment group
µ2: average data of control group
The t-test formula is used.
With
2
)1()1(
21
222
211
−+−+−
=nn
snsns
Where:
1X : average of experimental group
2X : average of control group
n1 : number of experiment group
n2 : number of control group
S12 : standard deviation of experiment group
S22 : standard deviation of control group
Testing criteria that apply Ho is accepted if tablecount tt > with
determinate df = ( 221 −+ nn ) and the significant α = 5% (1- α).
5
21
21
11
nn
XXt
+
−=
CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSIONS
A. Description of Research Findings
This study was divided in two classes, class VIII A as the experiment
class and class VIII C as control class. Learning writing recount text is in the
experiment class by using concept map as a method. While the control class
by lecturing conventional learning (without using concept map). Before the
analysis is done, the first test given before and after the students follow the
learning process that was provided by the writer (pre-test and post-test). After
the data are collected, the writer was scored the result of data from the test
have been given to the students. The writer gave score for each items of
element of writing. To analysis the data of test result, the first known the
beginning of data from experiment class and control class that is taken from
the pre-test value. And after the control and experiment conduct the learning
process, then both of the class is given a test to obtain the data that will be
analyzed.
The data in this study were gotten from the test result, as follow:
1. Result of research
a. Analysis of scoring test
After collecting the data, the writer analysis the result of data
from the test have been given to both of class. In scoring of writing test,
the writer gave the score for each element of writing as follows.
Table 3 The Lowest Test and the Highest Score of Element of Writing
No Element of Writing The Lowest Score The Highest Score 1 Content 7 20 2 Organization 11 35 3 Vocabulary 7 20 4 Grammar 7 20 5 Mechanic 2 5
The scoring process of pre test and post test of both classes can be seen
in appendix
b. The data of score pre-test of the experiment class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII A before being
taught by using concept map as the method in writing recount text the
highest score achieved is 85 and lowest is 60. It means that the range
(R)= 25, the number of class is 6, and the interval of the class is 4.
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 4. Frequency Distribution of score pre-test of the experiment class
No Interval class Frequency
1 60 – 64 7
2 65 – 69 9
3 70 – 74 2
4 75 – 79 6
5 80 – 84 1
6 85 – 89 1
Sum 26
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score into charts as follows:
Histogram Frequency score of pre
c. The data of score pre
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C before being
taught by using conventional learning (without concept map as media)
in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 79 and lowest score
is 60, range (R)= 19, the number of class is 6, and
class is 3.
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Frequency Distribution of score pre
No
Chart 1. Histogram Frequency score of pre-test of the experiment class
The data of score pre-test of the control class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C before being
taught by using conventional learning (without concept map as media)
in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 79 and lowest score
is 60, range (R)= 19, the number of class is 6, and the interval of the
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 5. Frequency Distribution of score pre-test of the control class
No Interval class Frequency
1 59 – 62 4
2 63 – 66 2
3 67 – 70 7
4 71 – 74 8
5 75 – 78 4
6 79 – 82 1
Sum 26
0
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
60-64 65-69 70-74 75-79 80-84 85-89
test of the experiment class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C before being
taught by using conventional learning (without concept map as media)
in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 79 and lowest score
the interval of the
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
test of the control class
89
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score into charts as follows:
Histogram Frequency score of pre
d. The data of score post
Based on the result of research of Class VIII A after being taught
by using concept map as the method in writing recount text the highest
score achieved is 89 and lowest score is 68, range (R)= 21, the number
of class is 6, and the interval of the class
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 6. Frequency Distribution of score post
No
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score into charts as follows:
Chart 2.
Histogram Frequency score of pre-test of the control class
The data of score post-test of the experiment class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII A after being taught
by using concept map as the method in writing recount text the highest
score achieved is 89 and lowest score is 68, range (R)= 21, the number
of class is 6, and the interval of the class is 4.
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 6. Frequency Distribution of score post-test of the experiment class
No Interval class Frequency
1 68 – 71 5
2 72 – 75 10
3 76 – 79 7
4 80 – 83 2
5 84 – 87 1
6 88 – 91 1
Sum 26
0
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
59-62 63-66 67-70 71-74 75-78 79-82
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
test of the control class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII A after being taught
by using concept map as the method in writing recount text the highest
score achieved is 89 and lowest score is 68, range (R)= 21, the number
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
test of the experiment class
distribution of score into charts as follows:
Chart 3. Histogram Frequency score of post
e. The data of score post
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C after being taught
by using conventional learning (without using concept map as a
method) in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 80 and
lowest score is 62, range (R)= 18, the number of class is
interval of class is 3.
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 7. Frequency Distribution of score post
No
0
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
68
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score into charts as follows:
Chart 3. Histogram Frequency score of post-test of the experiment class
The data of score post-test of the control class.
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C after being taught
by using conventional learning (without using concept map as a
method) in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 80 and
lowest score is 62, range (R)= 18, the number of class is
interval of class is 3.
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
frequency distribution as follow:
Table 7. Frequency Distribution of score post-test of the control class
No Interval class Frequency
1 60 – 63 2
2 64 – 67 6
3 68 – 71 5
4 72 – 75 9
5 76 – 79 3
6 80 – 83 1
Sum 26
68-71 72-75 76-79 80-83 84-87 88-91
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
test of the experiment class
Based on the result of research of Class VIII C after being taught
by using conventional learning (without using concept map as a
method) in writing recount text the highest score achieved is 80 and
lowest score is 62, range (R)= 18, the number of class is 6, and the
The result of the calculation above is, then inputted into the
test of the control class
distribution of score post test into charts as follows
Chart 4. Histogram Frequency score of post
f. The average score of pre test and post test of the experimental class and
control class.
The data were obtained from the s
the writing of recount text. They were pre test and post test scores from
the experimental and control classes. The average score from the
experimental class was 68.46 for the pre test and 75.58 for the post test.
While the a
and 70.73 for the post test. The following was the simple table for the
pre test and post test students’ average scores:
Table 8. The Result Average Score of the Pre test and Post test of
Class
Experimental
Control
The more calculation can be se
Based on the table above, it can be seen that there was an
improvement of the students, achievement in writing a recount text.
0
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score post test into charts as follows
Chart 4. Histogram Frequency score of post-test of the control class
The average score of pre test and post test of the experimental class and
control class.
The data were obtained from the students’ achievement scores of
the writing of recount text. They were pre test and post test scores from
the experimental and control classes. The average score from the
experimental class was 68.46 for the pre test and 75.58 for the post test.
While the average scores for the control class was 69.62 for the pre test
and 70.73 for the post test. The following was the simple table for the
pre test and post test students’ average scores:
Table 8. The Result Average Score of the Pre test and Post test of The Experimental and Control Class
Class The average score of the
pre test
The average score of
the post test
Experimental 68.46
Control 69.62
The more calculation can be seen in appendix
Based on the table above, it can be seen that there was an
improvement of the students, achievement in writing a recount text.
60-63 64-67 68-71 72-75 76-79 80-83
To make easier to understand, the writer applied frequency
distribution of score post test into charts as follows
test of the control class
The average score of pre test and post test of the experimental class and
tudents’ achievement scores of
the writing of recount text. They were pre test and post test scores from
the experimental and control classes. The average score from the
experimental class was 68.46 for the pre test and 75.58 for the post test.
verage scores for the control class was 69.62 for the pre test
and 70.73 for the post test. The following was the simple table for the
Table 8. The Result Average Score of the Pre test and Post test of
The average score of
the post test
75.58
70.73
Based on the table above, it can be seen that there was an
improvement of the students, achievement in writing a recount text.
Each class had different achievement. The achievement of the
experimental class was higher than the control class.
B. Data Analysis And hypothesis Test
1. Analysis Phase First
It was done to know the normality and homogeneity of the initial data
in the experimental class and control class.
Table 9. Score of pre-test experimental and control class.
No Experimental Control
1
2
3
4
5
6
N
Average
Variance
Standard deviation
Maximal score
Minimal score
26
68.46
49.13
7.01
85
60
26
69.62
31.12
5.58
79
60
The more calculations can be seen in appendix.
a. Normality Test.
The normality test is used to know whether the data is normally
distributed or not. Test data of this research used the formula of Chi-
square.
Ho: the data of normal distribution
Ha: the data of un normal distribution
Ho accepted if countX < tableX with α = 5% and df = K-3.
Table 10. The result of normality pre test of experiment and
control class
Class countX tableX Criteria
Experiment 6.626 7.81 Normal
Control 2.704 7.81 Normal
The more calculations can be seen in appendix
Based on analysis above it can be seen that countX both of class
lower that tableX ( countX < tableX ), so Ho accepted. And the conclusion
is the distribution data of experimental and control classes are normal.
b. Homogeneity Test
The homogeneity test is used to know whether the group sample
that was taken from population is homogeneous or not.
Ho: 21σ = 2
2σ (homogeny variance)
Ha: 21σ ≠ 2
2σ (non homogeny variance)
Ho is accepted if countF < tableF
Table 11. The result of homogeneity of pre-test of
experiment and control class
Class Variance ( 2S ) n df countF tableF criteria
Experiment 49.139 26 25 1.579 2.23 homogen
Control 31.126 26 25
The more calculation can be seen in appendix
Based on the formula:
countF= ianceimal
ianceimum
varmin
varmax
countF = 1.579
Based on computation above it is obtained that countF is lower than
tableF , so Ho accepted. It can be concluded that data of pre test from
experimental and control class have the same variance or homogeneous.
c. Testing the similarity of average of the initial data between
experimental and control classes.
To test the difference of average, used t-test.
Ho: 21 µµ =
Ha: 21 µµ ≠
Where:
µ1 : average data of experimental group
µ2: average data of control group
Table 12. The average similarity test of pre test of
experimental and control classes
Source variance Experimental control criteria
Sum 1780 1810 same
N 26 26
Average (_
X ) 68.46 69.62
Variance ( 2S ) 49.14 31.13
Standard deviation (s) 7.01 5.58
The more calculations can be seen in appendix
2
)1()1(
21
222
211
−+−+−
=nn
snsns
= 5.46452
t = - 0.903
Ho is accepted if Ho is accepted if
( ) )2)(211(2)2
11( 2121 −+−−+−<<−
nnnnttt αα .
Based on the computation above, that by α = 5% and df = 26+26- 2
= 50 is obtained tablet = 1.68 and countt = -0.657. Ho is accepted if
tablecounttable ttt <<− . So, it can be concluded that there is not significant
different of the average pre-test between experimental and control
classes, because t-count at the reception area of Ho.
5
21
21
11
nn
XXt
+
−=
2. Analysis Phase End
It is done to answer hypothesis of this research. The data used are the
result of post tests of both classes. The experiment class taught by using
strip stories as teaching media and the control class taught without strip
stories.
The final analysis contains of normality test, homogeneity test and
the difference average test of post test.
a. Searching for the data normality of the experimental and control
classes.
Table 13. The result of normality test of post-test of
experimental and control classes
The more calculations can be seen in appendix
Based on the computation above it is obtained that countX is lower
than tableX by α = 5%with df = 6-3 = 3. So it can be concluded that the
distribution data of post test of experimental and control class are
normal.
b. Searching for the homogeneity of the experimental and control classes
Table 14. The result of homogeneity test of post-test of
experimental and control class
Class Variance (
2S )
n df countF tableF criteria
Experiment 25.694 26 25 1.0012 2.23 homogen
Control 25.725 26 25
The more calculation can be seen in appendix
Class countX tableX Criteria
Experiment 5.148 7.81 Normal
Control 4.394 7.81 Normal
Based on the formula:
countF = ianceimal
ianceimum
varmin
varmax
countF = 1.085
Based on computation above it is obtained that countF is lower
than tableF , it means Ho accepted. It can be concluded that data of post
test of experimental and control classes have the same variance or
homogeneous.
c. Hypothesis Test
Hypothesis test is used to know whether there is a difference on
post test of experimental class and control classes. The data which is
used to test the hypothesis is score post test both of class. To test the
difference of average used t-test.
Ho: 21 µµ = : it means there is no significant difference between
the writing skill improvement of students who
were taught by using concept map as the method
and who were taught by lecturing (without using
concept map)
Ha: 21 µµ ≠ : it means there is significant difference between the
writing skill improvement of students who were
taught by using concept map and who were taught
by lecturing (without using concept map)
Ha is accepted if )2()1( 21 −+−> nncount tt α
Table 15. The score of post test of experimental and control
classes.
No Experimental Control
1
2
3
4
5
6
N
Average
Variance
Standard deviation
Maximal score
Minimal score
26
75.58
25.69
5.07
89
68
26
70.73
25.72
5.07
80
62
The more calculations can be seen in appendix
Table 16. Result of computation t-test
Class n Averag
e (_
X )
Variance (2S )
Standard
dDeviation (s)
tablet
countt Criteria
Experi
ment
26 75.58 25.69 5.07 1.68 3.446 Ha
accepted
Control 26 70.73 25.72 5.07
The more calculation can be seen in appendix
Based on the computation above, it is obtained that the average of
post test of the experimental class who are taught by using concept
map is 75.39 and standard deviation (s) is 5.07. While the average of
post test of the control class who are taught by lecturing or
conventional learning is 70.73 and standard deviation (s) is 5.07. With
df = 26+26-2 = 50 by α = 5%, so obtained tablet = 1.68. From the
result of calculation t-test countt = 3.446. if compared between tablet and
countt , countt > tablet .it means that Ho is rejected and Ha is accepted.
Because countt > tablet , it can be concluded that there is a significant
difference between experimental and control classes on post test, the
score of the experimental class is higher than the control class.
C. Discussion of The Research Findings
1. The score of initial ability ( Pre test)
Based on the calculations of normality and homogeneity test from
class VIII A as the experiment class and class VIII C as the control class is
normal distribution and homogeneous
2. The score of final ability (Post test)
The result of this research is obtained the average score of experiment
class was 75.58 which were higher that the result of control class 70.73.
The average score of experiment class was 75.58 and standard
deviation (s) was 5.07. Teaching writing in experiment class by using
concept map as a method to teaching recount text can encourage the
students to be more active and motivated. Concept map as a teaching
method that can create situation in teaching writing more interesting and
make the students easier to understand in lesson. It can be seen on average
score of experiment class which better result than control class.
The average score of control class was 70.73 and standard deviation
(s) was 5.07. Teaching writing in control class by using conventional
learning or lecturing to teaching writing recount text make the students
feel saturated with the material that is presented because the method too
monotone. The students still had difficult in transferring their taught and
ideas in writing.
Based on the result of calculation t-test is obtained countt : 3.446 and
tablet : 1.68. This is show that countt > tablet ( countt higher than tablet ). So it
means that there is a significant difference between writing skill
improvement of students taught by concept map and taught by lecturing o
conventional learning in writing recount text.
D. Limitation of The Research
The writer realizes that this research had not been optimally. There were
constrains and obstacles faced during the research process. Some limitations
of this research are:
1. The research is limited at SMP H. Isriati and just used class VIII A and
class VIII C as sample, so that when the same research is conducted in
other school. It is still possible that different result will be gained.
2. Relative of the implementation process of this research have short of time,
makes this research could not be do maximal. But it was enough to fulfill
all requirements for a research.
3. Relative lack of experience and knowledge of the writer, makes
implementation process of this research was less smooth. But the writer
tried as maximal as possible to done this study accordance with guide from
advisors.
Considering all those limitations, there is a need to do more research
about teaching writing recount text using the same or different media. In the
hope there will be more optimal result.
CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion
The conclusion of this research is drawn in accordance with the result
of the data analysis in the previous chapter. There are some significant
differences between experiment and control class. The average score for the
experimental class was 68.46 for the pre test and 75.58 for the post test. While
the average scores for the control class was 69.62 for the pre test and 70.73 for
the post test. It means that there was an improvement of the students’
achievement in writing recount text. Each class had different achievement.
The achievement of the experimental class was higher than the control class.
In the result of post test of experiment class was 75.58 which where
higher than the control class 70.73. It means that writing a recount text by
concept map was better than the writing recount text without concept map.
The result of the calculation using the t-test showed that t value : 3. 446 and
t table for α: 5% was 1.68. It means that t value was higher than t table {3. 446>
1.68}. It can be concluded that there is a significant difference in the student
writing score of the eight year students of SMP H. Isriati in academic year of
2011/ 2012 between students who have been taught writing a recount text by
using concept map and those who have been taught by using a conventional
learning or lecturing.
B. Suggestions
One of the constrains that the teacher may face in her duty was how to
make a students interested in her teaching orang how to promote the students
interest to join the learning process well. If students have high interest in
following the teacher, it would not be so difficult for the teacher to teach the
lesson.
Based on the hold result of the study, the writer had some suggestions for
English teacher, students and next researcher as follow:
1. For the English Teacher
a. Concept map may become alternative technique in teaching writing
especially in a recount text. Using concept map to teach writing is a
good innovation. It can be stimulate the students’ interest in writing. By
looking at some concept maps, the students are able to catch the ideas of
what to write and arranging the sentence in recount more easily. So the
students will not find difficult in getting idea in writing.
b. The teacher should match the concept map with the suitable material for
Junior High school students, so that the goal of the study can be
fulfilled.
c. The teacher can find the references of the concept maps from magazine,
book, newspaper, internet, or make the concept map by themselves
based on their creativities in order to get the students interest in writing
activities.
d. Before teaching and learning process, the teacher should have prepared
the method well. It means that before using the concept map as a
method in teaching writing, it is better if the teacher check whether the
text can be classified as recount text or not, whether the text is
appropriate to their level or not.
2. For the Students
a. The students should pay attention to the teacher when he or she gives
the English lesson.
b. The students encourage themselves to learn English especially writing a
recount text.
c. The students should learn the elements of good writing especially
grammar and its application in the writing process.
d. The students should practice their ability of writing from the simple of
the complex.
3. For the next researcher
They can make this study as their reference to conduct other
researcher on the same field. They are also expected to be able to cover the
limitation about this. They can conduct a research with the same method
but in different genres. The writer hopes that the text researchers can
prepare everything as good as possible in doing research and can follow up
this research.
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CURRICULUM VITAE
A. Self Identity
1. Name : Muhyidin
2. Place and Date of Birth : Brebes, 05 Mei 1987
3. Student’s Number : 073411090
4. Address : Dk. Tanjung RT01/IV Desa Pangebatan
Kec. Bantarkawung Kab. Brebes
Phone Number : 087731171290
E-mail : [email protected]
B. Educational Background
a. SDN Pangebatan 05
b. SMP BU Bantarkawung
c. MA Assalam Assalafiyah Bantarkawung
d. Educational Faculty of Walisongo State Institute for Islamic Studies
Semarang, community 2007
Semarang, May 2012
The Writer
Muhyidin