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News Writing Invitational A Meet • 2016 You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu- dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state- ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state- ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number on your paper. Leaguetown High School, located in West Texas, has 400 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Last month producers from Dakota, a small Hollywood film company, met with Superintendent Fiona Winters to sign a contract to rent the school for the weekends in March and April. The company is filming a movie about a high school math wiz from a small Texas town. The director grew up near Leaguetown and attended several events at the school. He thought the school would be the perfect setting for the movie. Several teachers are concerned because they will not have access to the school on the weekends during those months. In addition to renting the facilities, the film company needs three students for small speaking parts and about 20 students to play extras for the movie. Students who are interested can audition with the film directors on Feb. 20 at the high school. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Wednesday, Feb. 3. FIONA WINTERS, superintendent “This is a unique opportunity for Leaguetown. A small town doesn’t get too many opportunities like this. I understand that not all of our teachers are thrilled about losing their access to the school on the weekends, but it’s a small price to pay. The filming at the high school will not only put Leaguetown on the map, but it also will be a financial gain for both the district and town. The company plans to bring at least 20 people in for the filming. That’s a nice economic boost for our town.” SHAY RENNERS, sophomore “I am definitely trying out for one of those speaking parts. I have been involved in theater since I was in junior high, and I love it. Maybe this could be my big break. I read the book that the film is based on, and it was fascinating. It was written from the kid’s perspective and focuses on what it’s like to grow up so different from your peers.” ALICE SHAFER, English teacher “The spring is a busy time for me, and I often spend either Saturday or Sunday at the school preparing for the upcoming week. I can do some of my planning at home, but I can not make copies, work on my school computer or set up things in the classroom from home. Also, March is when my seniors turn in their big spring projects which include visual aids and additional materials. Those projects are too large to transport to and from school to grade. Now I will have to spend late nights at the school to grade the projects so that this film company can have the luxury of filming without interruption.”
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News WritingInvitational A Meet • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number on your paper.

Leaguetown High School, located in West Texas, has 400 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Last month producers from Dakota, a small Hollywood film company, met with Superintendent Fiona Winters to sign a contract to rent the school for the weekends in March and April. The company is filming a movie about a high school math wiz from a small Texas town. The director grew up near Leaguetown and attended several events at the school. He thought the school would be the perfect setting for the movie.

Several teachers are concerned because they will not have access to the school on the weekends during those months.

In addition to renting the facilities, the film company needs three students for small speaking parts and about 20 students to play extras for the movie. Students who are interested can audition with the film directors on Feb. 20 at the high school. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Wednesday, Feb. 3.

■ FIONA WINTERS, superintendent“This is a unique opportunity for Leaguetown. A small town doesn’t get

too many opportunities like this. I understand that not all of our teachers are thrilled about losing their access to the school on the weekends, but it’s a small price to pay. The filming at the high school will not only put Leaguetown on the map, but it also will be a financial gain for both the district and town. The company plans to bring at least 20 people in for the filming. That’s a nice economic boost for our town.”

■ SHAY RENNERS, sophomore“I am definitely trying out for one of those speaking parts. I have been

involved in theater since I was in junior high, and I love it. Maybe this could be my big break. I read the book that the film is based on, and it was fascinating. It was written from the kid’s perspective and focuses on what it’s like to grow up so different from your peers.”

■ ALICE SHAFER, English teacher“The spring is a busy time for me, and I often spend either Saturday or

Sunday at the school preparing for the upcoming week. I can do some of my planning at home, but I can not make copies, work on my school computer or set up things in the classroom from home. Also, March is when my seniors turn in their big spring projects which include visual aids and additional materials. Those projects are too large to transport to and from school to grade. Now I will have to spend late nights at the school to grade the projects so that this film company can have the luxury of filming without interruption.”

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■ HAMILTON GRAVES, director“I grew up in Lubbock, and I came to Leaguetown for a speech contest when I was in high school. The

town fascinated me. It was small, but it was different, modern. Even back then the high school was cutting-edge. It’s the perfect setting for the movie. The plot of the movie is one a lot of students will be able to relate to, and Ty has spent the last six weeks perfecting his Texan accent. We anticipate the filming to wrap up in six weeks, but we rented the facility eight weeks for a little insurance.

“The three speaking parts will be offered only to Leaguetown high school students. We are happy to cast students from other towns as extras, but the speaking parts will go to local students. Right now, we are looking for two females and one male. To audition, the student will read lines with the cast involved in that scene. We are going to give out the scripts the day before so students will have time to practice.”

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION:The name of the film is “Infinite” and the company hopes to release it in May 2017. Ty Simpkins, who

was in “Iron Man 3” and “Jurassic World,” plays the main character, Dusty, in the movie.

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INVITATIONAL A • 2016NEWS WRITING CONTEST TIPS AND SAMPLE STORY

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the con-test and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with a future lead under the present circumstances. In this instance, the rental doesn’t start until March and the film company will be auditioning students.

A small Hollywood film company, Dakota, starting in March will be renting the school to film a movie, and the company needs three students for small speaking parts and about 20 students to play extras. Auditions will be on Feb. 20.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes early in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transi-tion/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Winters said,” not “said Winters.”) Avoid stacking quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes from different people together without placing a transition between them. Also, make sure transitions provide information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat information revealed in the transition.

transitionThe film, “Infinite,” stars Ty Simpkins from “Jurassic World” and is about a high school

math wiz from a small Texas town.

direct quote“The plot of the movie is one a lot of students will be able to relate to, and Ty has spent

the last six weeks perfecting his Texan accent,” Director Hamilton Graves said.

transitionBecause of filming, faculty will not have access to the school on weekends through April.

English teacher Alice Shafer said spring is a busy time for her, and she usually works at the school on the weekends.

direct quote“March is when my seniors turn in their big spring projects which include visual aids and

additional materials,” Shafer said. “Those projects are too large to transport to and from school to grade. Now I will have to spend late nights at the school to grade the projects so that this film company can have the luxury of filming without interruption.”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our students” or “Our superintendent Fiona Winters” or “Some of our stu-dents...” Also, do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “The teachers are upset...” without attrib-uting that quote to someone or “The school should ...” These statements are personal opinions and cannot be made in a news story.

4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote, each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be fright-ened from using one and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one and two-sen-tence paragraphs.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!2016 INVITATIONAL A MEET • KEY PAGE 1

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SAMPLE STORYA small Hollywood film company, Dakota, starting in March will be renting the school to film a

movie, and the company needs three students for small speaking parts and about 20 students to play extras. Auditions will be on Feb. 20.

“I am definitely trying out for one of those speaking parts,” sophomore Shay Renners said. “I have been involved in theater since I was in junior high, and I love it. Maybe this could be my big break.”

The film, “Infinite,” stars Ty Simpkins from “Jurassic World” and is about a high school math wiz from a small Texas town.

“The plot of the movie is one a lot of students will be able to relate to, and Ty has spent the last six weeks perfecting his Texan accent,” Director Hamilton Graves said.

Because of filming, faculty will not have access to the school on weekends through April. English teacher Alice Shafer said spring is a busy time for her, and she usually works at the school on the weekends.

“March is when my seniors turn in their big spring projects which include visual aids and ad-ditional materials,” Shafer said. “Those projects are too large to transport to and from school to grade. Now I will have to spend late nights at the school to grade the projects so that this film com-pany can have the luxury of filming without interruption.”

Superintendent Fiona Winters said she understands that teachers are upset about losing week-end access, but “it is a small price to pay.”

“A small town doesn’t get too many opportunities like this,” she said. “The filming at the high school will not only put Leaguetown on the map, but it also will be a financial gain for both the dis-trict and town.”

Graves, who grew up in Lubbock, came to Leaguetown for a speech competition when he was in high school.

“The town fascinated me,” he said. “It was small, but it was different, modern. Even back then the high school was cutting-edge. It’s the perfect setting for the movie.”

The film is set to be released in May 2017.

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News WritingInvitational B Meet • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number on your paper.

Leaguetown High School, located in West Texas, has 1,700 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Since the late 1980s, the school district has followed a plan to eradicate asbestos from all of its buildings. Starting March 1, the district will close the high school library to clear asbestos from the ceiling. The library is the final place where asbestos remains in district buildings. Principal Yvette Walsh said she anticipates that the library will be closed until mid-April. Until that time, librarian Adrienne Garza will work out of Room 204. The library computers and some resource material will be moved into the room for student use.

Teachers were notified of the closure this week. The library was scheduled for asbestos cleaning in the summer, but the superintendent moved the project so the construction crew could focus solely on the new elementary school this summer.

Several teachers have voiced concern over the last-minute change and said the closure will impact their classes. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Monday, Feb. 29.

■ CHASE SLOCUM, superintendent“We desperately need that new elementary school finished this summer,

and I wanted to free up the entire construction crew so that can happen. This move is inconvenient for our teachers and students, but I have faith in our staff. They are creative problem-solvers. They will find solutions to help the teachers and students.”

■ YVETTE WALSH, principal“This isn’t perfect timing, but it’s what is best for our district. We have to

make a small sacrifice so that our elementary students are not overcrowded in the elementary schools. Ms. Garza is doing her best to create a useful workspace for students and teachers. Room 204 is not as large as the library, and it obviously won’t have all of the books, but it’s a good-sized space. One to two small classes would fit easily into the space, and we moved all 36 library computers into the room.”

■ JEFF GROFF, history teacher“March is when my students do their big research project. That’s kind

of hard to do without a library. I guess I am frustrated with the last-minute announcement. Why couldn’t the construction crew just start on the elementary and then take a break in the summer to do our library?”

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■ TRINITY AQUILAR, sophomore“Mr. Groff said we are going to have to use the public library for our research project on a historical

figure from the World War II era. We are supposed to read one biography and then find additional resources. I am not sure when I will find time to go to the public library. I have athletics after school until 6:30 p.m. and on Saturdays, I work at my uncle’s car repair garage. I will figure it out, but it’s just a pain. Plus, I used the library during my off period to study and do homework. I don’t have a car so I can’t leave campus. Ms. Garza said she’s not sure if I can do that in Room 204. She said it may change daily depending on what classes will be using the makeshift library.”

■ TOM RICON, English teacher“I don’t like the last-minute notice. My students use the library weekly, and now we may not have that

option starting March 1. This school has had asbestos for a long time. A few more months won’t really make a difference. I don’t want to revamp my lesson plans because the superintendent decided to close the library.”

■ ADRIENNE GARZA, librarian“This definitely isn’t convenient, but I support the superintendent’s decision. The faster we can get all

of the asbestos out of our schools, the better. I am happy to be in Room 204 if it means no more asbestos. By the end of the week, I will have an electronic calendar sent to teachers so they can sign up for library use.”

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION:Asbestos is the name given to a group of minerals that occur naturally in the environment as bundles

of fibers that can be separated into thin, durable threads. These fibers are resistant to heat, fire, and chemi-cals and do not conduct electricity. For these reasons, asbestos has been used widely in many industries for insulation purposes.

Asbestos has been classified as a known human carcinogen (a substance that causes cancer) by the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. Studies have shown that exposure to asbestos may increase the risk of lung cancer and mesothelioma (a relatively rare cancer of the thin membranes that line the chest and abdomen).

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INVITATIONAL B • 2016NEWS WRITING CONTEST TIPS AND SAMPLE STORY

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the con-test and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with a future lead under the present circumstances. In this instance, the library has yet to close.

Teachers were told this week that the the high school library will close March 1 due to asbestos removal. Since 1980, the district has been working to remove asbestos from all district buildings, and the library is the final place where asbestos remains.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes high in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transition/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Slocum said,” not “said Slocum.”) Avoid stacking quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes from different people together without placing a transition between them. Also, make sure tran-sitions provide information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat information revealed in the transition.

transitionThe library computers and some resource material will be moved into the makeshift

library in Room 204 for students to use, but not all the books are making the transfer.

direct quote“March is when my students do their big research project,” history teacher Jeff Groff

said. “That’s kind of hard to do without a library. I guess I am frustrated with the last-minute annoucement. Why couldn’t the construction crew just start on the elementary and then take a break in the summer to do our library?”

transitionThe library was originally scheduled for asbestos cleaning this summer, but the

superintendent moved the project so the construction crew could focus on completing the new elementary school.

direct quote“We have to make a small sacrifice so that our elementary students are not overcrowded

in the elementary schools,” Principal Yvette Walsh said. “This isn’t perfect timing, but it’s what is best for our district.”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our students” or “Mr. Slocum our superintendent” or “Some of our stu-dents...” Also, do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “The students are upset...” without attrib-uting that quote to someone or “The school should ...” These statements are personal opinions and cannot be made in a news story.

4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote, each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be frightened from using one and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one and two-sentence paragraphs.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!2016 INVITATIONAL B MEET • KEY PAGE 1

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SAMPLE STORY

Teachers were told this week that the the high school library will close March 1 due to asbestos removal. Since 1980, the district has been working to remove asbestos from all district buildings, and the library is the final place where asbestos remains.

“This move is inconvenient for our teachers and students, but I have faith in our staff,” Superintendent Chase Slocum said. “They are creative problem-solvers. I know they will find solutions to help the teachers and students.”

The library computers and some resource material will be moved into the makeshift library in Room 204 for students to use, but not all the books are making the transfer.

“March is when my students do their big research project,” history teacher Jeff Groff said. “That’s kind of hard to do without a library. I guess I am frustrated with the last-minute annoucement. Why couldn’t the construction crew just start on the elementary and then take a break in the summer to do our library?”

The library was originally scheduled for asbestos cleaning this summer, but the superintendent moved the project so the construction crew could focus on completing the new elementary school.

“We have to make a small sacrifice so that our elementary students are not overcrowded in the elementary schools,” Principal Yvette Walsh said. “This isn’t perfect timing, but it’s what is best for our district.”

Sophomore Trinity Aguilar said Groff told his class that they would need to use the public library for the project.

“I am not sure when I will find time to go to the public library,” Aguilar said. “I have athletics after school until 6:30 p.m. and on Saturdays, I work at my uncle’ car repair garage. I will figure it out, but it’s just a pain.”

Aguilar also uses the library during his off period.“I don’t have a car so I can’t leave campus,” he said. “Ms. Garza said she’s not sure if I can do

that in Room 204.”Asbestos has been identified as a known human carcinogen. Studies have shown that exposure

to asbestos may increase the risk of lung cancer and mesothelioma.“The faster we can get all of the asbestos out of our schools, the better,” librarian Adrienne

Garza said. “This definitely isn’t convenient, but I support the superintendent’s decision. By the end of the week, I will have an electronic calendar sent to teachers so they can sign up for library use.”

2016 INVITATIONAL B MEET NEWS• KEY PAGE 2

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News WritingDistrict 1 Meet • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number NOT YOUR NAME on your paper.

Leaguetown High School, located in South Texas, has 1,200 students enrolled in grades 9-12. At the Feb. 19 boys’ varsity basketball game, the 25-member dance team performed during halftime to a recent Drake song. The song was edited to omit profanity. During the performance, a group of students sang some of the words as the dance team performed. One week after the performance, Principal Heath Dover and Superintendent Connie Lipo met with dance teacher Tara Wilcox and suspended her from her duties as the dance team coach. Superintendent Lipo, who attended the performance, said numerous parents and community members complained that the music as well as some of the dance moves were inappropriate.

Wilcox continues to teach her five dance classes. The dance team, however, now meets with the cheerleaders and cheerleader coach Penya Stiles. During the dance team class period, Wilcox works in the In-School Suspension room.

The dance team is registered to compete in the regional contest in San Antonio in mid-April. Last year, the team swept regionals and won a spot at the national competition in Nashville, Tenn. Wilcox was hired in 2013 as the dance teacher and coach. Before she was hired, the dance team had only five members and did not perform in public or competitions.

This week Kelly Ly, the dance team captain, drafted a petition asking for the district to reinstate Wilcox. All dance team members and their parents signed the petition. Ly will present the petition to the school board at its next meeting, Tuesday, March 29. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Monday, March 28.

■ CONNIE LIPO, superintendent“The dance team has every right to present its petition to the school board,

but those girls do not know the whole story. Ms. Wilcox’s suspension as the dance coach was appropriate and consistent with all district protocols. We will continue to investigate the situation.”

■ TARA WILCOX, former dance coach“Both the superintendent and principal asked me not to discuss this matter

with students or parents, but that seems absurd. I did nothing wrong. I have no idea how many parents or community members complained. I don’t know what moves they are upset about or what lyrics angered the parents and community. I don’t even know how long I am suspended for. Is it a month? A year? Forever?

“If the administration is upset about the students who sang the words, then they should deal with them. Suspend them. Not me.

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■ TARA WILCOX, (continued)“When I started at Leaguetown, the dance program was in shambles. I have built a first-class program,

and in two years we placed third at a national competition. I want my job back as the dance coach. I hope the school board listens to the girls. Our regional competition is only a few weeks away.”

■ KELLY LY, senior and captain of the dance team“We were shocked when Mr. Dover told us that Ms. Wilcox wasn’t going to be our coach anymore. She’s

incredible. We have a legitimate dance program, a winning dance team, because of her. I know Mr. Dover is upset about those girls singing during the performance, but we didn’t have anything to do with that. Neither did Ms. Wilcox.

“Ms. Wilcox lets us choose the music, and then she is very, very careful about editing it. She is a real stickler o n that. As far as inappropriate dance moves, that is bull. We are so much more conservative than any other dance team. Heck, the cheerleaders are more risque than us. Ms. Wilcox always preaches to us about being ‘ladies’ and presenting ourselves as real dancers and not street tramps.

“I hope the school board listens to us. We love Ms. Wilcox, and we need her. We have a competition in just a few weeks, and without her guidance we don’t stand a chance at advancing to nationals.”

■ CATHY HUFFHOUSER, parent of dance team sophomore Cindi Huffhouser“Ms. Wilcox is a positive role model for our girls. She sets incredibly high standards, and the girls rise to

meet those challenges. My daughter loves dance team, and it’s because of Ms. Wilcox. I was at the so-called controversial performance, as was the superintendent and principal. The performance was stellar. The song was edited. Most of the time, it was just instrumental. The girls did nothing inappropriate. I would have been proud to have my preacher watch that performance. I don’t know what is really going on here, but I support Ms. Wilcox 100 percent.”

■ LESLIE WILSON, parent“I saw the half-time show, and I didn’t care for it. It’s true that the music was edited, but it didn’t matter.

There was a big group of girls sitting behind me, and they sang out all of the edited words really loudly. That dance coach had no business allowing that song for young ladies. She should have known the kids would sing the missing words. She was irresponsible, and she has no business leading our students.”

■ PATRICK PARKER, senior basketball player“The basketball team missed most of the dance because we went to the locker room to talk. The dance

team helps us. They pumped up the crowd. We won that game by three points, and the crowd cheering for us made the difference.”

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DISTRICT 1 • 2016NEWS WRITING CONTEST TIPS AND SAMPLE STORY

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the contest and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with the newest information. In this instance, the dance team is presenting a petition to the school board tomorrow asking for their coach to be reinstated.

The dance team will present a petition signed by every team member and all of their parents to the school board tomorrow night requesting Tara Wilcox be reinstated as the dance coach. Wilcox was suspended after complaints about the dance team performance to a Drake song during a Feb. 19 basketball game.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes high in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transi-tion/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote or at least after the first sentence. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Wilcox said,” not “said Wilcox.”) Avoid stacking quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes together without placing a transition between them. Also, make sure transitions tell information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat informa-tion revealed in the transition.

transitionSuperintendent Connie Lipo received complaints about the music choice and inappropriate

dance moves. Wilcox’s suspension was “appropriate” and followed district protocol, she added.

direct quote“We are continuing to investigate the situation,” said Lipo, who attended the performance.

transitionFor the basketball half-time show, Wilcox edited all profanity from the Drake song, but

students in the crowd sang the deleted lyrics.

direct quote“If the administration is upset about the students who sang the words, then they should

deal with them,” Wilcox said. “Suspend them. Not me. I want my job as the dance coach back. ”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our student” or “Connie Lipo, our superintendent” or “Some of our stu-dents...” Also, do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “Wilcox is awful...” without attributing that quote to someone. These statements are personal opinion and cannot be made in a news story.

4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be fright-ened away from using one- and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one- and two-sentence paragraphs.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!

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SAMPLE STORY

The dance team will present a petition signed by every team member and all of their parents to the school board tomorrow night requesting Tara Wilcox be reinstated as their coach. Wilcox was suspended after complaints about the dance team performance to a Drake song during a Feb. 19 basketball game.

“I hope the school board listens to us,” said Kelly Ly, senior and captain of the dance team. “We love Ms. Wilcox, and we need her. We have a competition in just a few weeks, and without her guidance we don’t stand a chance at advancing to nationals.”

Superintendent Connie Lipo received complaints about the music choice and inappropriate dance moves. Wilcox’s suspension was “appropriate” and followed district protocol, she added.

“We are continuing to investigate the situation,” said Lipo, who attended the performance. For the basketball half-time show, Wilcox edited all profanity from the Drake song, but students in

the crowd sang the deleted lyrics.“If the administation is upset about the students who sang the words, then they should deal with

them,” Wilcox said. “Suspend them. Not me.”Wilcox said the adminstration asked her not to discuss this matter, but she finds that request

“absurd.”“I did nothing wrong,” said Wilcox, who still teaches her dance classes. Ly said Wilcox constantly preaches to the team about being ladies and presenting themselves as

“real dancers and not street tramps.”“We are so much more conservative than any other dance team,” she said. “Heck, the cheerleaders

are more risque than us.”Since Wilcox was hired in 2013, the team has grown from five to 25 members. Last year, it swept

regionals and won a spot at the national competition. “Ms. Wilcox is a positive role model for our girls,” dance parent Cathy Huffhouser said. “She sets

incredibly high standards, and the girls rise to meet those challenges. I was at the so-called controversial performance. The performance was stellar. I would have been proud to have my preacher watch that performance.”

But not every parent is as proud of the performance. Parent Leslie Wilson said the dance team should have never performed to that song.

“It’s true that the music was edited, but it didn’t matter,” Wilson said. “There was a big group of girls sitting behind me, and they sang all of the edited words really loudly. That dance coach had no business allowing that song for young ladies. She should have known the kids would sing out the missing words.”

With the regional competition just weeks away, Wilcox said she wants her job back. “I hope the school board listens to the girls,” she said.

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News WritingDistrict 2 Meet • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number NOT YOUR NAME on your paper.

Leaguetown High School, located in Texas, has 900 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Principal Alex Grey recently completed the requirements for his doctoral degree at Texas State University. He wrote his dissertation on four-day school weeks. For the paper, he studied five school districts in Wyoming and Minnesota and found several benefits to the four-day week concept:

• The costs for substitutes decreased 50 percent. • Transportation costs decreased 20 percent.• Utility costs decreased 10 percent.• Student attendance increased 4 percent.• Student discipline incidents decreased 40 percent.Grey proposed the school district should investigate moving to a four-day week

for the high school. He proposed changing school hours from 8:30 a.m. to 3:30 p.m. to 7:30 a.m. to 4:30 p.m. so that no class time is lost.

Grey polled the faculty, and 90 percent of them support the concept. Athletic director Rodd Rooster and several coaches oppose the proposal. Rooster said the four-day week would hurt athletics because of the longer school day and transportation issues for students on Fridays.

Superintendent Dawna Falkenburg and the school board discussed the proposal at the last board meeting and agreed to let parents vote on the idea. If the vote favors a four-day week, then Falkenburg will move forward to devise a plan for the 2017-18 school year.

The school district will post an online voting portal on the district website Monday, April 11. Parents will have three days to cast their vote. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Friday, April 8.

■ DAWNA FALKENBURG, superintendent“A four-day week has not been on my radar, but after reading Dr. Grey’s

dissertation, I think it’s something we should investigate. If parents approve the idea, then the district will move forward. We won’t make changes for next year because we would need at least a year to plan a new schedule. If the proposal fails to gain approval, then we will not address this issue again.”

■ ALEX GREY, principal“When I started researching the four-day high school week, I had no intention

of bringing the idea to Leaguetown. But then I recognized all of the advantages of a four-day week, and I am not talking about just the money-saving part. That’s great, but it was the positive impact on students that most impressed me. I visited two school districts in Wyoming so I could interview staff and students about the schedule. Not a single student said anything negative about the schedule.

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They loved the three-day weekends. Most said the longer weekend made it easier to finish homework, work,

volunteer or relax. They loved the freedom on Friday.

“I understand why the athletic department opposes the proposal. It would make athletics a little more

complicated, but I am not sure if that is a big enough reason to oppose the proposal.”

■ RODD ROOSTER, athletic director“Our coaches do not support the shift to a four-day week. It would definitely hurt athletics. First, after-

school practices would have to run until 6:30 p.m. And, while a four-day week would give us flexibility on the

time of Friday practices, that wouldn’t help some of our athletes because they have transportation problems.

More than 80 percent of our athletes are bus riders. They don’t own cars, and their parents can’t take them

to school in the middle of the day. I am urging every parent to vote no to this proposal.”

■ LEESA PERKINS, sophomore“I love the idea of a four-day school week. I am telling my mom to vote for it. I usually spend about six to

eight hours on weekends working on homework, doing required reading or studying for tests. Having Friday

off would allow me to get everything done in one day. Then, I would have Saturday and Sunday for myself.

A four-day week would make my life much less stressful.”

■ MICHAEL REYNOSA, sophomore athlete (football and baseball)“I have heard so many students say a four-day week would be great. I am not sure they will be saying that

when they have to get up an hour and a half earlier for school. I hate the mornings, and I definitely don’t

want to get up earlier than I do now. The four-day school week would hurt our athletic program. When we

have a Saturday practice, only half of the team shows up. Either they don’t have rides, or they forget about

practice. Friday practices would be the same. Students should really look at the cons before they tell their

parents to support this new schedule.”

■ PATSY PATEL, parent“I oppose the new plan. I don’t want my kids unsupervised at home all day every Friday. Both my husband

and I work, so we can’t be there. I have spoken to several parents, and they agree. I appreciate the school

board allowing parents to voice their opinion, and I hope every parent takes the time to do so.”

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DISTRICT 2 • 2016NEWS WRITING CONTEST TIPS AND SAMPLE STORY

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the contest and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with the newest information. In this instance, the voting portal for parents and students will open

Monday.

If parents approve Principal Alex Grey’s four-day school week proposal, the high school

will move to the shortened week schedule for the 2017-18 school year. Online voting begins

Monday and continues through Wednesday.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes high in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transi-

tion/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote or at least after the first sentence. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Grey said,” not “said Grey.”) Avoid stack-

ing quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes together without placing a transition between them. Also, make

sure transitions tell information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat information

revealed in the transition.

transitionThe superintendent and the majority of the faculty support the proposal, which would

change school hours to 7:30 a.m. until 4:30 p.m., Monday through Thursday.

direct quote“A four-day week has not been on my radar, but after reading Dr. Grey’s dissertation, I think

it’s something we should investigate,” Superintendent Dawna Falkenburg said.

transitionWhile the concept has strong support in the district, the athletic staff is urging parents to

vote against the proposal.

direct quote“Our coaches oppose the shift to a four-day week,” athletic director Rodd Rooster said.

“First, after-school practices would have to run until 6:30 p.m. And, while a four-day week

would give us flexibility on the time of Friday practices, that wouldn’t help some of our ath-

letes because they have transportation problems.”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our student” or “Alex Grey our principal” or “Some of our students...” Also,

do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “Falkenburg is awful...” without attributing that quote to

someone. These statements are personal opinion and cannot be made in a news story.

4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote, each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be fright-

ened away from using one- and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one- and

two-sentence paragraphs.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!

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SAMPLE STORY

If parents approve Principal Alex Grey’s four-day school week proposal, the high school will move to the shortened week schedule for the 2017-18 school year. Online voting begins Monday and continues through Wednesday.

The superintendent and the majority of the faculty support the proposal, which would change school hours to 7:30 a.m. until 4:30 p.m., Monday through Thursday.

“A four-day week has not been on my radar, but after reading Dr. Grey’s dissertation, I think it’s something we should investigate,” Superintendent Dawna Falkenburg said.

While the concept has strong support in the district, the athletic staff is urging parents to vote against the proposal.

“Our coaches oppose the shift to a four-day week,” athletic director Rodd Rooster said. “First, after-school practices would have to run until 6:30 p.m. And, while a four-day week would give us flexibility on the time of Friday practices, that wouldn’t help some of our athletes because they have transportation problems.”

Grey’s proposal stemmed from his dissertation on the alternative schedule. For the paper, he visited schools in Wyoming and Minnesota to study the four-day school week and found that student attendance improved and student discipline incidents decreased by 40 percent.

“When I started researching the four-day high school week, I had no intention of bringing the idea to Leaguetown,” Grey said. “But then, I recognized all of the advantages of a four-day week, and I am not talking about just the money-saving part. It was the positive impact on students that most impressed me.”

The students Grey interviewed for his paper supported the four-day week, saying the schedule made it easier to complete homework.

“Not a single student said anything negative about the schedule,” Grey said. Sophomore Leesa Perkins said she “loves” the idea and will tell her mom to vote for it.“I usually spend about six to eight hours on weekends working on homework, doing required

reading or studying for tests,” she said. “Having Friday off would allow me to get everything done in one day.”

But sophomore Michael Reynosa disagrees.“The four-day week would hurt our athletic program,” Reynosa said. “When we have a Saturday

practice, only half of the team shows up. Either they don’t have rides or they forget about practice. Friday practices would be the same.”

Parent Patsy Patel also opposes the proposal because she doesn’t want her children unsuper-vised at home every Friday.

“Both my husband and I work, so we can’t be there,” she said. “I have spoken to several par-ents, and they agree.”

If the poll favors the proposal, Superintendent Dawna Falkenburg will move forward to devise a plan for the 2017-18 school year.

“If the proposal fails to gain approval, then we will not address this issue again,” she said.

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News WritingRegional • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number NOT YOUR NAME on your paper.

Leaguetown High School has 150 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Each year the junior class chooses a project for the spring semester to fulfill the project-based learning requirement. In January, the students overwhelmingly selected global warming as their topic this year.

With guidance from English teacher Gina Chen and science teacher Dylan Culpepper, the students voted to create a presentation to demonstrate an understanding of global warming. The juniors worked in groups of three to research global warming, then each group was assigned a portion of the presentation. At the beginning of April, the juniors gave the presentation to Chen and Culpepper who suggested improvements.

On April 26 and 27, the juniors are scheduled to make their final presentation at the elementary school, the middle school and at a Parent-Teacher Association meeting. The public is invited to the last presentation with the PTA at 7 p.m. Wednesday at the high school cafeteria.

This week two parents of juniors met with the Principal Sally Butterfield and demanded that she halt all three presentations. The parents said global warming is a hoax and a fabrication of the liberal media. The parents said if Butterfield refused, then their children would not participate. Furthermore, they said they would gather a group to picket the presenations.

As of yet, Butterfield has not asked the juniors to cancel their presentations. You are writing for the issue of the Press to be distributed Monday, April 25.

■ SALLY BUTTERFIELD, principal“I did meet with two parents who oppose our junior project. They did ask that

I cancel the presentations. I will meet with Superintendent Barry Goldberg, and I have no plans to cancel the student presentations. Ms. Chen and Mr. Culpepper said the students spent weeks doing their research, and the presentations are polished and professional.”

■ DAVE GREEN, parent“I am flabbergasted that the school would allow the students to present such

propaganda. The teachers should have instructed the students to choose a topic based on truth, not politics. Global warming, climate change, whatever the liberals are calling it this week is a crock. It’s a hoax. Can someone please tell me how the Earth’s climate is changing? The argument is based on questionable scientific data and erroneous claims about global climate change. They claim the ‘science is settled,’ but it’s not. Scientists do not agree on the cause of climate change, the role of carbon dioxide, the degree to which people contribute to atmospheric CO2 and whether global warming is anything other than a naturally occurring

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phenomenon. Most of the proposed ‘solutions’ are based upon massive government bureaucratic programs that will reduce personal freedoms and cost millions.

“My daughter will not promulgate such lies. I am not alone in my beliefs, either. If Mrs. Butterfield doesn’t cancel those presentations, I guarantee the district will see just how many people I have on my side. We will show up to every presentation and share the truth.”

■ DYLAN CULPEPPER, science teacher“Multiple studies show that 97 percent or more of climate scientists agree: Climate-warming trends over

the past century are very likely due to human activities. In addition, most of the leading scientific organizations worldwide have issued public statements endorsing this position. If that can’t convince someone that climate change is real, then I don’t know what can. Our students have worked hard researching this issue and have developed very real and doable action plans for students and adults in our community to lessen the warming trends.”

■ ALICIA INKS, junior“My group and I spent hours and hours working on this project. It’s been tough, but I’ve learned a lot. I

am proud of our final product. The presentation works for both young kids and adults. As a society, we can have an impact on global warming if we make simple changes. One of the challenges we give the audience is to increase what you recycle. A lot of people recycle paper or alumunim, but what about food and yard waste. Composting your food and yard waste reduces the amount of garbage that you send to landfills and reduces greenhouse gas emissions. That is an example of the concrete solutions we give during our presentation.

“I don’t know why those parents are upset. Maybe they need to hear our presentation. I heard they may picket our presentaton. That might be great. It could cause media to come out, and we could be on the news. Even more people could hear our message.”

■ SHELTON BARNES, PTA president“The parents and PTA are looking forward to this presentation. We expect quite a few community

members also to be present at the meeting. It would be unfortunate if Mr. Green and his friends decided to picket the presentation, but they do have a right to their opinion. We, however, will not allow the picketers, if any show, to enter the board room where the students will be giving their presentation.”

■ ROBBIE BRIONA, junior“My dad wasn’t psyched about me researching global warming. He was on the fence about the whole thing,

but after he heard the presentation, he started to question himself. He didn’t realize that the overwhelming majority of climate scientists support the theory. That really swayed him in his thinking.”

■ ADDITIONAL INFORMATIONMelinda Green, a junior, is the daughter of Dave Green. She declined to give an interview about the

project or her father’s view on the matter.

■ DAVE GREEN, continued

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REGIONAL • 2016NEWS WRITING CONTEST TIPS AND SAMPLE STORY

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the contest and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with the newest information. In this instance, the juniors may face protesters at their global

warming presentaitons.

When the junior class gives its global warming presentations this week, it may be doing

so amid protesters. Two parents have asked Principal Sally Butterfield to cancel the presenta-

tions, but Butterfield said she has no plans to do so.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes high in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transi-

tion/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote or at least after the first sentence. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Butterfield said,” not “said Butterfield.”) Avoid stacking quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes together without placing a transition between them.

Also, make sure transitions tell information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat

information revealed in the transition.

transitionUnder the direction of English teacher Chen and science teacher Culpepper, the juniors

chose global warming for their project-based learning topic. But parent David Green called

global warming a “hoax” and “crock” and said the teachers should have insisted on a differ-ent topic.

direct quote“Can someone please tell me how the Earth’s climate is changing,” Green said. “The

argument is based on questionable scientific data and erroneous claims about global climate change. They claim the ‘science is settled,’ but it’s not.”

transitionThe juniors are scheduled to make their final presentation at the elementary school, the

middle school and at a Parent-Teacher Association meeting on Tuesday and Wednesday.

direct quote“Our students have worked hard researching this issue and have developed very real and

doable action plans for students and adults in our community to lessen the warming trends,” Culpepper said. “Climate-warming trends over the past century are very likely due to human

activities. Most of the leading scientific organizations worldwide have issued public state-

ments endorsing this position.”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our students” or “Sally Butterfield our principal” or “Some of our stu-

dents...” Also, do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “Green is awful...” without attributing that quote to someone. These statements are personal opinion and cannot be made in a news story.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!

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4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote, each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be fright-

ened away from using one- and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one- and

two-sentence paragraphs.

SAMPLE STORY

When the junior class gives its global warming presentations this week, it may be doing so amid

protesters. Two parents have asked Principal Sally Butterfield to cancel the presentations, but But-terfield said she has no plans to do so.

“Ms. [Gina] Chen and Mr. [Dylan] Culpepper said the students spent weeks doing their research,

and the presentations are polished and professional,” Butterfield said.Under the direction of English teacher Chen and science teacher Culpepper, the juniors chose

global warming for their project-based learning topic. But parent David Green called global warming

a “hoax” and “crock” and said the teachers should have insisted on a different topic.“Can someone please tell me how the Earth’s climate is changing?” Green said. “The argument is

based on questionable scientific data and erroneous claims about global climate change. They claim the ‘science is settled,’ but it’s not.”

The juniors are scheduled to make their final presentation at the elementary school, the middle school and at a Parent-Teacher Association meeting on Tuesday and Wednesday.

“Our students have worked hard researching this issue and have developed very real and do-

able action plans for students and adults in our community to lessen the warming trends,” Culpep-

per said. “Climate-warming trends over the past century are very likely due to human activities.

Most of the leading scientific organizations worldwide have issued public statements endorsing this position.”

Junior Alicia Inks said she’s not concerned about possible picketers.

“That might be great,” she said. “It could cause media to come out, and we could be on the news. Even more people could hear our message.”

While researching global warming, Inks said she “learned a lot,” and she is proud of the final product. During the presentation, the juniors will challenge the audience to increase what they recycle, she said.

“A lot of people recycle paper or alumunim, but what about food and yard waste,” Inks said. “Composting your food and yard waste reduces the amount of garbage that you send to landfills and reduces greenhouse gas emissions.”

Junior Robbie Briona said at first his dad wasn’t “psyched” about the topic, but when his dad heard his presentation, his views changed.

“He didn’t realize that most scientists support the theory,” he said.Parent-Teacher Assocation president Shelton Barnes said the public is invited to the presenta-

tion at 7 p.m. Wednesday in the high school cafeteria.

“It would be unfortunate if Mr. Green and his friends decided to picket the presentation, but they

do have a right to their opinion,” he said. “We, however, will not allow the picketers, if any show, to enter the board room where the students will be giving their presentation.”

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News WritingState • 2016

You are a reporter for the Leaguetown Press, the stu-dent newspaper of Leaguetown High School. From the given information, write a news story as you would for the high school newspaper. You may use state-ments attributed to individuals as direct or indirect quotes. You may not change the meaning of a state-ment. You have 45 minutes. Do not write your name or the name of your school on this sheet or your entry. Put your number NOT YOUR NAME on your paper.

Leaguetown High School has 400 students enrolled in grades 9-12. Last Saturday a tornado ripped through the town destroying the football stadium and the bus barn. Four homes located near the stadium also were destroyed. The tornado was an F-4 with wind speeds up to 260 miles per hour. The tornado hit Leaguetown at 8:05 p.m. No deaths were reported, but a family of four is still in the hospital recovering from their injuries.

The superintendent estimates the tornado did about $3 million worth of damage to school property. All six district buses were destroyed, and the football stadium was leveled.

School was cancelled Monday, May 23 so the district could assess the damage. Because so many students live in the rural parts of the county, the district runs six buses covering 200 square miles each day. No bus transportation was provided for students on Tuesday, May 24.

You are writing for the issue of the online edition of the Press to be posted Tuesday, May 24.

■ RICK RANDY, superintendent“The district was hit hard. We are lucky that when the tornado came through,

we didn’t have any staff or students at the stadium or in the bus barn. I don’t know how they would have survived it.

“The community has been great over the past few days. On Sunday the mayor called me and asked what we needed to finish the school year. I told him six buses, thinking he would just laugh at me. He simply said, ‘Let me see what I can do.’ Later, I got a call from the pastor at First Baptist, and he said, ‘We got your bus problem covered.’ I was so touched I almost cried. We had no idea how we were going to get our students who live on bus routes to school until that phone call.

“On Wednesday, the buses will roll out at 6:45 a.m. like they do every day. We will run the same routes. Everything will be the same except our buses will look a little different. Several parents have asked me about next year, and I don’t have an answer for them yet. It’s going to take some time to figure it all out. My immediate goal is to finish this school year and get our 92 seniors graduated.

“The stadium is another issue. We don’t have a quick fix for that. The school board will meet next week to try to devise a plan. The president of the school board already called and told me not to count on having a stadium for the fall. I doubt we can rebuild one that quickly. Perhaps Southside or West high schools can host our junior varsity or freshman games. I am not sure what we will do about varsity games.”

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■ HARRISON HUNTER, athletic director“Coach [Chuck] Slater and I were up at the stadium until about 7 p.m. Saturday night, preparing for

the off-season program. We heard that a bad storm was headed our way, so we thought we better head home before it hit. Lucky we did. I was in my house about 20 minutes when I heard the sirens go off. Our football stadium was one of the oldest in the state, and it’s withstood many a storm in its day. I was shocked to see the devastation. It’s gone — completely gone. I found part of the bleachers about a half of a mile down Springdale Road.

“I don’t know what we are going to do about next year. It’s heart-breaking. Several coaches from surrounding schools have called to say they will support us in any way they can. And I know they will. I don’t know where we will play next year, but I know we will play.”

■ DEVANTE JONES, junior and varsity football player“I was out mowing our backyard when I heard the sirens. I saw the storm coming in, but I thought I

could finish mowing before it started. I was wrong. I had to leave the lawnmower out and make a run for the house. I saw the tornado. It was huge. It sounded like a freight train coming right at me. It didn’t touch down until after it passed over our house. We lost a few trees and some shingles, but most of our property is fine.

“The stadium is unreal. It looks like nothing was ever there. It’s going to be hard not playing my senior year in front of a home crowd. My brother played there. My dad even played there. It’s our home. I don’t know what the district is going to do, but coach has assured us that we will play next year. We just don’t know where yet.”

■ FRANKLIN GUSTNER, principal“On Wednesday, we expect to have a few hiccups on the bus routes. We are still using our regular drivers,

but a few of the church buses are rather old. They run a little slower than our usual buses, and our drivers won’t be accustomed to them. We are asking for a little patience from our students and parents. By Friday we should have everything running smoothly.

“While the stadium took a big hit, we are fortunate our classrooms and administrative buildings went basically unscathed. We had a little damage to the gym roof, but that’s about all.”

■ SHELLIE WINTER, freshman“I was relieved when I heard about the church buses. I live about 12 miles from the school, and my mom

is a nurse at the hospital. Her shift starts at 6 a.m. so she can’t take me to school in the morning. I have no transportation otherwise.

“The strong winds did a little damage to our barn, but the tornado didn’t come our way. My mom and I were watching television when we heard the sirens. My mom grabbed our bicycle helmets, and we ran to our bathroom. We stayed there for about 20 minutes, and then my mom was called to the hospital.”

■ ADDITIONAL INFORMATIONAn F-4 tornado has the power to inflict devastating damage: Well-constructed houses leveled; structures

with weak foundations blown away some distance; and cars thrown.

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State • 2016NewS writiNg CoNteSt tipS aNd Sample Story

Contest Director: Give one copy to each judge to use during critique/judging. Also, staple one copy of the contest and one copy of the contest tips to each student’s returned entry. The purpose of the tips is to provide immediate feedback to students. However, it is not meant to replace written comments from the judge.

1. Open with the newest information. In this instance, a tornado destroyed four school buses and district facilities.

District drivers will resume bus routes tomorrow using six loaned church buses after an F-4 tornado totaled all of the district buses Saturday evening. The tornado leveled the bus barn and the football stadium.

2. Use direct quotes and get those quotes high in the story. After you introduce quotes, use the transi-tion/quote formula. Be sure you attribute after the quote or at least after the first sentence. An attribution should be: subject of attribution followed by the verb of attribution (“Randy said,” not “said Randy.”) Avoid stacking quotes. Avoid putting two or more quotes together without placing a transition between them. Also, make sure transitions tell information to help the action of the story and the quote does not repeat informa-tion revealed in the transition.

transitionEach day the district runs six buses covering 200 square miles. The district provided no

bus transportation today.

direct quote“I got a call from the pastor at First Baptist Church, and he said, ‘We got your bus problem

covered.’ I was so touched I almost cried,” Randy said. “We had no idea how we were going to get our students to school until that phone call.”

transitionPrincipal Franklin Gustner said he expects a “few hiccups” with the new buses but thinks

by Friday everything will be “running smoothly.”

direct quote“We are still using our regular drivers, but a few of the church buses are rather old,” Gust-

ner said. “They run a little slower than our usual buses, and our drivers won’t be accustomed to them. We are asking for a little patience from our students and parents.”

3. Use third person. Don’t say “our students” or “Rick Randy our superintendent” or “Some of our stu-dents...” Also, do not editorialize. For instance, you should not say “Randy is awesome..” without attributing that quote to someone. These statements are personal opinion and cannot be made in a news story.

4. Note how in the earlier example of transition/quote, each quote is its own paragraph. Don’t be fright-ened away from using one- and two-sentence paragraphs. Journalistic writing consists mostly of one- and two-sentence paragraphs.

DO NOT DISTRIBUTE TO STUDENTS BEFORE OR DURING THE CONTEST!

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SAMPLE STORYDistrict drivers will resume bus routes tomorrow using six loaned church buses after an F-4

tornado totaled all of the district buses Saturday evening. The tornado leveled the bus barn and the football stadium.

“The district was hit hard,” Superintendent Rick Randy said. “We are lucky that when the tor-nado came through we didn’t have any staff or students at the stadium or in the bus barn.”

Each day the district runs six buses covering 200 square miles . The district provided no bus transportation today.

“I got a call from the pastor at First Baptist Church, and he said, ‘We got your bus problem covered.’ I was so touched I almost cried,” Randy said. “We had no idea how we were going to get our students to school until that phone call.”

Principal Franklin Gustner said he expects a “few hiccups” with the church buses but thinks by Friday everything will be “running smoothly.”

“We are still using our regular drivers, but a few of the church buses are rather old,” Gustner said. “They run a little slower than our usual buses, and our drivers won’t be accustomed to them. We are asking for a little patience from our students and parents.”

Freshman Shellie Winters said she was relieved when she heard about the church buses.“I live about 12 miles from the school, and my mom is a nurse at the hospital,” she said. “Her

shift starts at 6 a.m., so she can’t take me to school in the morning. I have no transportation other-wise. ”

The tornado, which had wind speeds of up to 260 miles per hour, caused $3 million worth of damage to the school district, Randy said.

“Our football stadium was one of the oldest in the state, and it’s withstood many a storm in its day,” Athletic Director Harrison Hunter said. “I was shocked to see the devastation. It’s gone -- com-pletely gone.”

Randy said the school board will meet next week to devise a plan for next year. “The president of the school board already called and told me not to count on having a stadium

for the fall,” he said. “I doubt we can rebuild one that quickly.”Several area schools have called Hunter and said they would support the school in the fall.“And I know they will,” he said. “I don’t know where we will play next year, but I know we will play.”Junior Devante Jones said it will be hard to not play in the home stadium.“My brother played there,” Jones said. “My dad even played there. It’s our home. I don’t know what

the district is going to do, but coach has assured us that we will play next year. ”Four homes near the stadium were also destroyed. No deaths were reported, but a family of four

is still in the hospital recovering from injuries.“Several parents have asked me about next year, and I don’t have an answer for them yet,” Randy

said. “It’s going to take some time to figure it all out. My immediate goal is to finish this school year and get our 92 seniors graduated.”

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1A  NEWS  After  a  tornado  destroyed  the  bus  barn  and  the  six  buses  inside  it  and  the  

stadium,  the  pastor  from  First  Baptist  Church  supplied  six  buses  for  the  school,  which  will  allow  the  buses  to  roll  out  at  6:45  a.m.  tomorrow,  and  the  school  board  will  meet  next  week  to  try  to  devise  a  plan  to  fix  the  stadium.    

The  superintendent  estimates  the  tornado  did  about  $3  million  worth  of  damage  to  school  property.  School  was  canceled  on  Monday,  and  bus  transportation  was  not  provided  today.    

“The  community  has  been  great  over  the  past  few  days,”  Superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “I  got  a  call  from  the  pastor  at  First  Baptist,  and  he  said,  ‘We  got  your  bus  problem  covered.’  I  was  so  touched  I  almost  cried.  We  had  no  idea  how  we  were  going  to  get  our  students  who  live  on  bus  routes  to  school  until  that  phone  call.”  

Athletic  director  Harrison  Hunter  said  he  was  shocked  to  see  the  devastation,  and  the  football  field  is  completely  gone.  

“I  don’t  know  what  we  are  going  to  do  about  next  year,”  Hunter  said.  “It’s  heart-­‐breaking.  Several  coaches  from  surrounding  schools  have  called  to  say  they  will  support  us  in  any  way  they  can.”  

Because  so  many  students  live  in  the  rural  parts  of  the  county,  the  district  runs  six  buses  covering  200  square  miles  each  day.  

“I  was  relieved  when  I  heard  about  the  church  buses,”  freshman  Shellie  Winter  said.  “I  live  about  12  miles  from  the  school,  and  my  mom  is  a  nurse  at  the  hospital.  Her  shifts  start  at  6  a.m.  so  she  can’t  take  me  to  school  in  the  morning.  I  have  no  transportation  otherwise.”  

Principal  Franklin  Gustner  said  that  they  are  asking  for  a  little  patience  from  the  students  and  parents.    

“On  Wednesday,  we  expect  to  have  a  few  hiccups  on  the  bus  routes,”  Gustner  said.  “We  are  still  using  our  regular  drivers,  but  a  few  of  the  church  buses  are  rather  old.  They  run  a  little  slower  than  our  usual  buses,  and  our  drivers  won’t  be  accustomed  to  them.  By  Friday  we  should  have  everything  running  smoothly.”  

Randy  said  the  president  of  the  school  board  called  and  told  him  not  to  count  on  having  a  stadium  for  the  fall.  

“The  stadium  is  unreal,”  junior  and  varsity  football  player  Devante  Jones  said.  “It  looks  like  nothing  was  ever  there.  It’s  going  to  be  hard  not  playing  my  senior  year  in  front  of  a  home  crowd.  My  brother  played  there.  My  dad  even  played  there.  It’s  our  home.”  

Randy  said  several  parents  have  asked  him  about  next  year,  and  he  doesn’t  have  an  answer  for  them  yet.    

“It’s  going  to  take  some  time  to  figure  it  all  out,”  Randy  said.  “My  immediate  goal  is  to  finish  the  school  year  and  get  our  92  seniors  graduated.”  

2A  NEWS  Following  the  loss  of  all  six  district  buses  to  last  Saturday’s  tornado,  the  First  

Baptist  Church  offered  their  buses  for  school  use.  Tomorrow,  the  church’s  buses  will  roll  out  at  6:45  a.m.  and  cover  the  same  routes  as  usual.  

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“On  Wednesday,  we  expect  to  have  a  few  hiccups  on  the  bus  routes,”  Principal  Franklin  Gustner  said.  “We  are  asking  for  a  little  patience  from  our  students  and  parents.  By  Friday  we  should  have  everything  running  smoothly.”  

The  district’s  goal  is  to  finish  the  school  year  and  graduate  the  92  seniors,  but  a  plan  for  next  year  is  yet  to  be  determined.  The  school  board  will  meet  next  week  to  discuss  what  to  do  about  the  leveled  stadium.  

“The  president  of  the  school  board  already  called  me  and  told  me  not  to  count  on  having  a  stadium  for  the  fall,”  Superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “I  doubt  we  can  rebuild  on  quickly.  Perhaps  Southside  or  West  high  schools  can  host  our  junior  varsity  or  freshman  games.  I  am  not  sure  what  we  will  do  about  varsity  games.”  

After  assessing  the  damage  yesterday,  the  district  determined  that  the  F-­‐4  tornado  destroyed  about  $3  million  worth  of  school  property;  the  classrooms  and  administrative  buildings,  however,  remained  mostly  unscathed.  

“The  district  was  hit  hard,”  Randy  said.  “We  are  lucky  that  when  the  tornado  came  through,  we  didn’t  have  any  staff  or  students  at  the  stadium  or  in  the  bus  barn.  I  don’t  know  how  they  would’ve  survived  it.”  

Freshman  Shellie  Winter  said  she  was  relieved  to  hear  about  the  church  buses.  

“I  live  about  12  miles  from  school,  and  my  mom  is  a  nurse  at  the  hospital,”  she  said.  “Her  shift  starts  at  6  a.m.  so  she  can’t  take  me  to  school  in  the  morning.  I  have  no  transportation  otherwise.”  

Not  playing  his  senior  year  of  football  for  the  home  crowd  will  be  hard,  junior  Devante  Jones  said.    

“My  brother  played  there,”  he  said.  “My  dad  even  played  there.  It’s  our  home.  I  don’t  know  what  the  district  is  going  to  do,  but  coach  assured  us  we  will  play  next  year.  We  just  don’t  know  where  yet.”  

Support  from  the  community  over  the  past  few  days,  Randy  said,  has  been  great.  

“On  Sunday  the  mayor  called  me  and  asked  what  we  needed  to  finish  the  school  year,”  Randy  said.  “I  told  him  six  buses,  thinking  he  would  laugh  at  me.  He  simply  said,  ‘Let  me  see  what  I  can  do.’  Later,  I  got  a  call  from  the  pastor  at  First  Baptist.  I  was  so  touched  I  almost  cried.”  

3A  NEWS  In  order  to  assess  the  damage  done  to  the  high  school  stadium  and  buses  by  

an  F-­‐4  tornado,  the  school  board  is  holding  a  meeting  to  devise  a  plan  of  action.  Saturday,  a  tornado  destroyed  the  football  stadium,  bus  barn,  and  four  

surrounding  homes.  School  was  cancelled  Monday  and  there  was  no  bus  transportation  provided  today.  However,  the  First  Baptist  church  offered  buses  to  cover  the  kids  living  in  rural  areas  and  finish  the  school  year.  

“On  Wednesday,  the  buses  will  roll  out  at  6:45  a.m.  like  they  do  every  day,”  Superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “The  stadium  is  another  issue.  We  don’t  have  a  quick  fix  for  that.”  

Randy  estimated  the  tornado  did  about  $3  million  worth  of  damage  to  school  property.  The  six  district  buses  were  destroyed  and  the  football  stadium  is  leveled.    

Lydia Alexander, Friona HS

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“The  president  of  the  school  board  already  called  and  told  me  not  to  count  on  having  a  stadium  for  the  fall,”  Randy  said.  “Perhaps  Southside  or  West  high  schools  can  host  our  junior  varsity  or  freshman  games.  I  am  not  sure  what  we  will  do  about  varsity  games.”  

Though  the  stadium  and  bus  barn  were  damaged,  the  classrooms  and  administrative  buildings  were  left  unharmed.  Principal  Franklin  Gustner  asked  for  patience  from  students  and  parents  while  the  district  sorts  out  the  problem.  

“On  Wednesday,  we  expect  to  have  a  few  hiccups  on  the  bus  routes,”  Gustner  said.  “We  are  still  using  our  regular  drivers,  but  a  few  of  the  church  buses  are  rather  old.  They  run  a  little  slower  than  our  usual  buses,  and  our  drivers  won’t  be  accustomed  to  them.  By  Friday  we  should  have  everything  running  smoothly.”  

Junior  and  varsity  football  player  Devante  Jones  said  it  would  be  “hard  not  playing  my  senior  year  in  front  of  a  home  crowd.”  

“My  brother  played  there,”  Jones  said.  “My  dad  even  played  there.  It’s  our  home.  I  don’t  know  what  the  district  is  going  to  do,  but  coach  has  assured  us  that  we  will  play  next  year.  We  just  don’t  know  where  yet.”  

Randy  noted  that  several  parents  have  asked  him  about  next  year,  to  which  he  offered  no  answer  and  said  “it’s  going  to  take  some  time  to  figure  it  all  out.”  

“My  immediate  goal  is  to  finish  this  school  year  and  get  our  ninety-­‐two  seniors  graduated,”  Randy  said.    

4A  NEWS  In  spite  of  an  F-­‐4  tornado  destroying  the  football  stadium  and  the  bus  barn  

last  Saturday,  buses  will  resume  their  routes  tomorrow  with  the  help  of  the  mayor  and  the  pastor  of  the  First  Baptist  Church.  Next  week,  the  school  board  will  try  and  devise  a  plan  in  regards  to  the  stadium.  

At  8:05  p.m.  on  the  21,  a  tornado  ripped  through  the  town,  not  only  destroying  parts  of  the  school,  but  also  four  homes  located  near  the  stadium.  School  was  canceled  yesterday  so  the  district  could  assess  the  damage.  

“The  district  was  hit  hard,”  superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “We  are  lucky  that  when  the  tornado  came  through,  we  didn’t  have  any  staff  or  students  at  the  stadium  or  in  the  bus  barn.”  

Randy  estimates  the  tornado  did  about  $3  million  worth  of  damage  to  school  property,  including  the  destruction  of  all  six  district  buses  which  cover  200  square  miles  each  day.  No  bus  transportation  was  provided  for  students  today;  however,  the  pastor  of  First  Baptist  church  has  lent  their  buses  to  the  school  district  for  the  remainder  of  the  year.  

“The  community  has  been  great  over  the  past  few  days,”  Randy  said.  “On  Sunday  the  mayor  called  me  and  asked  what  I  needed.  I  told  him  six  buses.  Later,  I  got  a  call  from  the  pastor,  and  he  said  ‘We  got  your  bus  problem  covered.’  I  was  so  touched  I  almost  cried.”  

The  president  of  the  school  board  has  already  notified  Randy  to  not  count  on  having  a  stadium  for  the  fall,  but  has  yet  to  meet  to  discuss  the  plan.  

“I  don’t  know  what  we  are  going  to  do  about  next  year,”  athletic  director  Harrison  Hunter  said.  “It’s  heart-­‐breaking.  I  don’t  know  where  we  will  play  next  year,  but  I  know  we  will  play.”  

Ashley Skinner, Bandera HS

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Tomorrow  the  buses  will  resume  their  routes  with  their  regular  drivers,  but  could  be  slightly  delayed.  

“A  few  of  the  church  buses  are  rather  old,”  principal  Franklin  Gustner  said.  “They  run  a  little  slower  than  our  usual  buses,  and  our  drivers  won’t  be  accustomed  to  them.  We  are  asking  for  a  little  patience  from  our  students  and  parents.  By  Friday  we  should  have  everything  running  smoothly.”  

5A  NEWS  A  First  Baptist  Church  donation  means  bus  transportation  will  be  provided  

again  tomorrow  following  the  tornado  from  last  Saturday,  which  destroyed  all  six  district  buses  and  leveled  the  football  stadium.  The  school  board  will  meet  next  week  to  formulate  a  plan  for  the  stadium’s  reconstruction.  

“The  community  has  been  great  over  the  past  few  days,”  Superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “On  Sunday  the  mayor  called  me  and  asked  what  we  needed  to  finish  the  school  year.  Later,  I  got  a  call  from  the  pastor  at  First  Baptist,  and  he  said,  ‘We  got  your  bus  problem  covered.’  I  was  so  touched  I  almost  cried.”  

Randy  estimated  the  tornado’s  damage  to  district  property  amounts  to  about  $3  million.  The  stadium  is  not  expected  to  be  replaced  by  next  fall.  

“I  don’t  know  what  we  are  going  to  do  about  next  year,”  athletic  director  Harrison  Hunter  said.  “Several  coaches  from  surrounding  schools  have  called  to  say  they  will  support  us  in  any  way  they  can.  I  don’t  know  where  we  will  play  next  year,  but  I  know  we  will  play.”  

On  top  of  damage  to  the  school,  the  tornado  damaged  four  homes  near  the  stadium,  and  a  family  of  four  is  still  in  the  hospital.  

“The  district  was  hit  hard,”  Randy  said.  “We  are  lucky  that  when  the  tornado  came  through,  we  didn’t  have  any  staff  or  students  at  the  stadium  or  in  the  bus  barn.  I  don’t  know  how  they  would  have  survived  it.”  

Principal  Franklin  Gustner  said  by  Friday,  the  bus  system  should  be  running  smoothly.  

“On  Wednesday,  we  expect  to  have  a  few  hiccups  on  the  bus  routes,”  Gustner  said.  “We  are  still  using  our  regular  drivers,  but  a  few  of  the  church  buses  are  rather  old.  We  are  asking  for  a  little  patience  from  our  students  and  parents.”  

The  tornado  was  an  F-­‐4,  the  second  highest  possible  tornado  strength  on  a  scale  of  1-­‐5,  and  had  wind  speeds  reaching  260  miles  per  hour.  Junior  and  varsity  football  player  Devante  Jones  said  it’s  going  to  be  hard  not  playing  his  senior  year  in  front  of  a  home  crowd.  

“The  stadium  is  unreal,”  Jones  said.  “It  looks  like  nothing  was  ever  there.  I  don’t  know  what  the  district  is  going  to  do,  but  coach  has  assured  us  that  we  will  play  next  year.”  

Despite  a  school  cancellation  yesterday  and  no  bus  transportation  today,  Randy  said  tomorrow,  the  buses  will  roll  out  at  6:45  a.m.  like  they  do  every  day.  

“Several  parents  have  asked  me  about  next  year,  and  I  don’t  have  an  answer  for  them  yet,”  Randy  said.  “It’s  going  to  take  some  time  to  figure  it  all  out.  My  immediate  goal  is  to  finish  this  school  year  and  get  our  92  seniors  graduated.”  

Erin Sheffield, Canyon HS

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6A  NEWS  Devastated  by  a  tornado  which  destroyed  the  school  buses  and  leveled  the  

stadium,  the  school  has  arranged  for  donated  buses  to  run  tomorrow  at  6:45  a.m.,  and  the  school  board  will  meet  next  week  to  devise  a  plan  regarding  the  stadium.  

“We  are  lucky  that  when  the  tornado  came  through,  we  didn’t  have  any  staff  or  students  at  the  stadium  or  in  the  bus  barn,”  superintendent  Rick  Randy  said.  “I  don’t  know  how  they  would  have  survived  it.”  

The  tornado,  an  F-­‐4  with  wind  speeds  up  to  260  miles  per  hour,  injured  a  family  of  four  and  did  about  $3  million  worth  of  damage  to  the  school  property  when  it  struck  at  8:05  p.m.  last  Saturday,  leaving  the  school  without  transportation.  This  damage  led  to  yesterday’s  cancellation  of  school  and  a  lack  of  bus  transportation  today.  

“On  Sunday  the  mayor  called  me  and  asked  what  we  needed  to  finish  the  school  year,”  Randy  said.  “I  told  him  six  buses,  thinking  he  would  just  laugh  at  me.  He  simply  said,  ‘Let  me  see  what  I  can  do.’”  

Following  this  conversation,  the  pastor  at  First  Baptist  called  Randy  and  said,  “We  got  your  bus  problem  covered.”  

“I  was  so  touched  I  almost  cried,”  Randy  said.  “We  had  no  idea  how  we  were  going  to  get  our  students  who  live  on  bus  routes  to  school  until  that  phone  call.”  

Principal  Franklin  Gustner  said  they  expect  a  few  hiccups  on  the  bus  routes  tomorrow,  as  the  buses  are  old  and  the  drivers  are  not  accustomed  to  them.  

“We  are  asking  for  a  little  patience  from  our  students  and  parents,”  he  said.  “By  Friday  we  should  have  everything  running  smoothly.”  

Because  many  students  live  in  rural  parts  of  the  county,  the  district  runs  six  buses  covering  200  square  miles  each  day.  

“Several  parents  have  asked  me  about  next  year,  and  I  don’t  have  an  answer  for  them  yet,”  Randy  said.  “It’s  going  to  take  some  time  to  figure  it  all  out.  My  immediate  goal  is  to  finish  this  school  year  and  get  our  92  seniors  graduated.”  

In  addition  to  transportation,  the  school  district  is  seeking  answers  to  questions  regarding  next  year’s  stadium  arrangements.  

“The  president  of  the  school  board  already  called  and  told  me  not  to  count  on  having  a  stadium  for  the  fall,”  Randy  said.  “I  doubt  we  can  rebuild  one  that  quickly.”  

Junior  Devante  Jones,  a  varsity  football  player,  said  the  stadium  was  his  family’s  home.    

“The  stadium  is  unreal,”  he  said.  “It  looks  like  nothing  was  ever  there.  It’s  going  to  be  hard  not  playing  my  senior  year  in  front  of  a  home  crowd.”  

Athletic  director  Harrison  Hunter  said  the  stadium,  which  is  one  of  the  oldest  in  the  state,  and  has  withstood  many  storms.  

“I  was  shocked  to  see  the  devastation,”  he  said.  “It’s  gone—completely  gone.  I  found  part  of  the  bleachers  about  half  of  a  mile  down  Springdale  Road.”    

Hunter  said  it’s  heart-­‐breaking  not  knowing  what  will  happen  next  year.  “Several  coaches  from  surrounding  schools  have  called  to  say  they  will  

support  us  in  any  way  they  can,”  he  said.  “And  I  know  they  will.”  

Sydney Smith, Mesquite HS


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