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ESL VCEJiangyan

October 2010

By Daniel Sammut

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1. Paraphrase =1. write in your own words

2. Use synonyms

2. Condense =1. use acrononyms (eg USA)

2. Change the structure

3. Combination of sentences

3. Topic and Supporting Sentences

4. Reread the text

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If there are two texts or a cartoon try tointegrate into one set of notes

Show how ideas are linked through boxes

Avoid using complete sentences Do not just list unconnected words

Do write phrases

Include only major ideas

Use abbreviations

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1. Paraphrase =1. write in your own words

2. Use synonyms and abbreviations

3. Write Phrases NOT complete sentences

2. Condense =1. use acrononyms (eg USA)

2. Change the structure

3. Combination of sentences

3. Topic and Supporting Sentences4. Reread the text

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& and esp especially w with w/o without decrease, fall rise, increase < less than

> more than

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b/c because e.g. for example

= is the same

not the same X no

yes

therefore

however change

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Incorrect Correct

Many problems withmobile phones in class,including distractingstudents, used for

cheating in exams,expensive to buy anduse

Mobile phonesproblems: Distracting

Cheating

expensive

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Note Form Summary Understanding Contention

Paragraph Structure

Understanding Topic and SupportingSentences

Basic Essay Structure

Persuasive Techniques

Types of Evidence Appeals to Audience

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Introduction to an Issue Why is it an Issue? Who are the stakeholders? What are the key arguments according to

SHERL (Society, Health, Economy &environment, Religion & ethics, Law &government)

Decide your contention Write essay or deliver speech.

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Research the topic Think of the issue from many perspectives

Develop your own opinion

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1. Ban the PhoneThe use of all phones in our school is banned for several goodreasons. Firstly, permitting students to have access to phonesin class will be distracting and will stop students from learning.How will students get the most from a lesson when they aresending messages to their friends in other classes? Secondly,phones are very expensive and may be stolen causing manyparents to pay for them. Last year alone 54 students lost theirphones or had them stolen. Thirdly, students may use theirphones to cheat on exams. Our school wants hardworking,safe and honest students. We will continue to follow thestandards of most schools that have maintained schools freefrom mobile phones. Principal of St Helen Secondary College

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Three Level Guide In groups read the two letters about phones

in the classroom. As you read answer thefollowing questions. Everyone in your groupmust agree. You will then need to be able toexplain your answer.

Level One answers are on the text Level Two answers are implied by the text Level Three-answers from you

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1. Ban the PhoneThe use of all phones in our school is banned for several goodreasons. Firstly, permitting students to have access to phonesin class will be distracting and will stop students from learning.How will students get the most from a lesson when they aresending messages to their friends in other classes? Secondly,phones are very expensive and may be stolen causing manyparents to pay for them. Last year alone 54 students lost theirphones or had them stolen. Thirdly, students may use theirphones to cheat on exams. Our school wants hardworking,safe and honest students. We will continue to follow thestandards of most schools that have maintained schools freefrom mobile phones. Principal of St Helen Secondary College

Inclusive

language

Rhetorical

question

Use ofstatistics

repetition

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1. Ban the PhoneThe use of all phones in our school is banned for several goodreasons. Firstly, permitting students to have access to phonesin class will be distracting and will stop students from learning.How will students get the most from a lesson when they aresending messages to their friends in other classes? Secondly,phones are very expensive and may be stolen causing manyparents to pay for them. Last year alone 54 students lost theirphones or had them stolen. Thirdly, students may use theirphones to cheat on exams. Our school wants hardworking,safe and honest students. We will continue to follow thestandards of most schools that have maintained schools freefrom mobile phones. Principal of St Helen Secondary College

Logic/reason

Self interest

Fear justiceExpert/Authority

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