Professional Employment Program
Writing effective resumes and cover letters: telling your story through written applications
Presenter: Olivia Doyle
Career Practitioner,
Centre for Career Development
15 September 2014
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Telling your story through written applications:
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Seminar objectives:
Students will gain an insight into key features of written job applications:
- Resumes
- Cover letters and emails
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Tell your story to stand out from the crowd
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Most jobs require written applications to assist recruiters to identify the candidates to short list for interview
You need to ensure ALL aspects of your written application tell your story in the most effective manner to market you as a qualified, talented individual who matches the employer’s selection criteria (often essential and desirable) required for the vacant job
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A key document for job applications is your resume
What is a resume?
• A marketing/sales tool - a brochure that tells your story
and QUICKLY promotes your skills and achievements
• A document that presents you as a professional
• Maps why you are a match to the job on offer AND to the
organisation
• The key to gaining an interview
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How long does it take for a recruiter to assess a resume?
Often less than 20 seconds
So what makes a good resume?
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Common mistakes in written graduate applications
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- Bland applications - candidate does not stand out from the crowd
- No obvious links to the job – the reader has to join the dots
- Not addressing selection criteria
- Poor written communication skills- - Spelling- - Grammar- - Expression - - Presentation- Expression
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What makes for a winning resume?
Content
- Matches the requirements of the employer
- Uses short, clearly written phrases and paragraphs to demonstrate your skills & experience
Layout
- Clear and easy to scan
- Uncluttered
- Appropriate format
- Adequate margins and whitespace white space
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- Make the résumé as simple and easy to read as possible
- Consider type styles and font size (eg Times New Roman, 12)
- Avoid font mania - use only one plain font – Arial or Times New Roman set at 11 or 12 point in size
- All indents are in alignment (use Tab & indent settings NOT spacebar)
- Use bold / italics / boxes (borders) wisely
- Avoid italics or underline as they don’t fax or scan into a database well
- Don’t OVERCAPITALISE
- Use page breaks so lists and paragraphs are not split
Resume Layout / Presentation
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Vital resume content
• Targeted to the requirements listed in the advertisement
• Use of key words
• Highlights the strengths of your brand
• Tell a positive story
• Achievement focused
• Concise
• Honest
Swinburne It’s a crowded market!
Source: The Recruiters Lounge
The average time a recruiter spends
looking at a resume is 5.7
seconds
On average 250 resumes are
received for each job position
76% of resumes are ignored if your email address is unprofessional
The first applications are
received 200 seconds after a job
is posted
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Recruiters often short list job applications into three categories
Which pile will your story end up in?
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YES MAYBE NO
SwinburneResume Styles- Reverse Chronological
Arranges your experience and education in reverse chronological order (from most recent to least recent)
- FunctionalHeadings relate to your relevant skills and competencies rather than time-line order
- CreativeUsing the resume as a tool to demonstrate your design/creative skills using colour and images etc
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Resume builder & example resumes
- Sam Chronology template
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- Access SwinEmploy at www.swin.edu.au/careers
Resume content – sample headings
Contact Details Education / Qualifications
Associations / Memberships
Professional Development
Extra Curricular Activities
Demonstrated Skills Summary
Employment History
Project Work/Industry
Projects
Referees Hobbies Volunteer WorkCareer
Objective/Career Profile
NOTE: Not all of these headings are required for all resumes.
Resume content – irrelevant information
• Date of birth / age
• Place of birth
• Nationality
• Ethnic origin
• Marital status
• Number of children
• Religion
• Political persuasion
• Health
• Height / weight
• Photograph
WHY?
Contact details
Name (first name and surname)
Address (optional)
Telephone Number
Email Address
Link to your LinkedIn profile
Link to on-line portfolio (Ensure email is professional i.e. [email protected] NOT [email protected] or [email protected])
* Work visa status for international students
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Professional profile / career objective (optional)
EXAMPLE
IT professional with substantial experience in commercial software development
Highly experienced in:
HTML5 CSS3 JavaScript J Query C#.NET
Skilled in translating client requirements into effective end products
Targeting senior development role within a commercial environment
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Professional profile / career objective (optional)
EXAMPLE
Cisco specialist (CCNA) with eight years’ experience, providing:
First-level help desk technical support and troubleshooting on IT network
Installation, configuration and administration of Cisco IT infrastructures: Cisco switches, routers, VOIP telephony, QoS, security applications, firewalls and network protocols.
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Education
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Provide a detailed insight into your studies
Don’t just list qualification title and university
Include:
- Key or relevant study areas- Highlight good results- Exchanges / study abroad tours / internships- Awards or scholarships
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EDUCATION
2011 – Present Master of Information Technology
Swinburne University of Technology, Melbourne
Key areas of study:
Network Design and Security
Web Applications Development
Distinction average results achieved to date
2008 – 2010 Bachelor of Information Systems (Software)
Ho Chi Minh University, Vietnam
High Distinction results achieved
** Do not need to include your secondary school education if completed overseas
Education EXAMPLE
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Additional headings
Professional Development - seminars, short courses, conferences RELATED to the position you are seeking
Industry specific headings
Eg Endorsements / Certifications / Software Licences
Industry Projects / Capstone Projects
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Certifications
- 2013 CCNA Cisco Routing & Switching
- 2012 Microsoft Certified Desktop Support Technician
Academic Awards
- 2014 Swinburne University Dean’s Award for Outstanding Results in Networking
Major Academic Projects
- 2013 Networking Design Proposal for Davis Jells Pty Ltd – involving review of
organisational requirements, budget and preparation of detailed design proposal
- 2013 Internet Security Project for Tiger Toy’s Pty Ltd on-line shopping cart –
involving infrastructure and programming in C++
Additonal headings EXAMPLES
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2013 – Current Student Member
Australian Computer Society
2013 – Current Student Member
Australian Institute of Management
(Gym Membership is NOT a professional membership)
Professional memberships
Swinburne Employment history
A chance to demonstrate how your brand differs from others
Present in reverse chronological order
Include dates and duration
Do not include any position beyond 10 years (unless highly relevant)
Document Responsibilities and Achievements
Consider separating relevant employment / experience from other experience (this is especially useful when your most relevant experience is not necessarily your most recent)
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- Promotions
- Increasing sales figures or improving efficiencies - quantify
- Being part of a team that….(what your team did) – implementing or designing systems or processes
- Winning an award or prize – even a trivial one
- Employee of the month / year
- Customer service / quality awards
Use of achievements
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PROFESSIONAL EMPLOYMENT
Jun 2010 – Present Web DesignerColours Media Pty Ltd, St Kilda(Specialist web designers for print media)
Responsibilities:- Liaise with clients to determine design specifications- Design web pages using ASP> NET, MySqul- Intranet development using Java Servlets, JSP, Taglibs
Achievements:- Development of award winning website www.surfshow.com.au- Consistently receive positive feedback from customers
regarding my excellent customer service focus
Dec 2007 – May 2008 Software Programmer / AnalystArayeh-Nullah Co, Tehran, Iran(Largest software developer in Iran)
Responsibilities:
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Employment history EXAMPLE
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Other Employment (or Casual Employment)
June 2008 – Present Crew MemberMcDonalds, St Kilda
Responsibilities:- Customer service- Food preparation- Working in team of approximately 10 people- Handling cash and balancing tills- Following OH&S practices- Training new staff members
Achievements:- Crew Member of the Month on two occasions- Regularly exceeded sales targets
Employment history cont.
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EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
2011 Manigrida ShireNorthern TerritoryTrainee EngineerAs an employee of the council I worked as
part of a design team consisting of three members Mr C. Vill, Mr D. Sign and Ms N. Inear. We developed extensive computer models for local drainage networks which are very important to this part of Northern Australia. I also had the opportunity to analyse the various models and to present recommendations to council. I was also requires to design and prepare costing for various culverts according to Australian Standard Design codes. I had much opportunity to liaise with many people both within and outside teh organisation. I was also very fortunate in being given some on site experience at local construction sites and took part in the management of contractors who worked on the project.
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Engineering Experience
Dec 2010 – Dec 2011
Trainee Civil Engineer
Manigrida Shire Council, NorthernTerritory
Responsibilities :
Team member in design department Designed computer models Prepared detailed costings Supervised project elements Liaised with council staff and clients
Achievements:
• Promoted to Project Supervisor after 12months
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Employment history - layout comparison
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Demonstrate relevant industry projects or case studies you have been involved in:
- Relevant capstone university projects
- Team projects
- Final year projects
Industry engaged learning
Swinburne Industry engaged learning EXAMPLE
2014 Recruitment Campaign for Whizz Telemarketing2nd Year Human Resource Subject
This university project focussed on the development of a recruitment campaign for 20 telemarketers. This involved:
• Development of position descriptions and selection criteria• Identification and costing of appropriate advertising• Writing a job advertisement• Specification of screening and selection criteria• Preparation of behavioural interview questions• Achieved a High Distinction
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Swinburne Skills summary
• Opportunity to match yourself to the job and to convince employer of your potential
• Highlight 4-5 professional skills that you can offer an employer which are relevant to the position you are applying and match the selection criteria
• Give two examples of how you have demonstrated the skills
• Focus on providing strong examples that highlight your capacity and that differentiate you from other applicants
Swinburne Skills summary EXAMPLE
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Information Technology Skills
Databases MS Access, SQL, Oracle
Publishing Adobe Acrobat, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator, MS Publisher
Web HTML, Java Script, Java Beans, Flash, Dream weaver, Fireworks
MS Office Word, PowerPoint, Publisher, Visio, Excel, Outlook, Project, Access
Operating Win 2003 server, XP, UNIX/Solaris, Linux, MAC
Systems Installation, configuration, monitoring and optimisation of the above
Hardware PC Maintenance, troubleshooting and upgrading modems, sound and video cards, digital Cameras, scanners, printers
Network Admin Managing LANs over different platforms, including; Linux, Novell and Windows 2000/XP
Miscellaneous Development, testing, documentation, implementation and training of a number of non-commercial software
Swinburne Skills summary EXAMPLE
Communication Skills
Highly developed interpersonal skills strengthened through four years of customer service experience as a Supervisor at Coles Supermarket.
Excellent written communication skills successfully demonstrated in university assignments and in preparation of position descriptions and training manuals at Blue Chip IT
Swinburne Leadership (Initiative and Enterprise)
- Proactively taken leadership roles during group projects, leading and guiding teams into meeting deadlines and providing effective solutions to problems.
- Actively managed, organised and co-ordinated team workload and tasks, set due-dates and deadlines for components of system design and implementation for university projects and assignments.
- Ensuring involvement and support of team members as a critical part of working as a team to ensure productivity while allowing the expression of individual talents.
- Undertaken leadership camps and teamwork courses provided by the co-op scholarship program with companies such as Operation Challenge and Oxygen Learning.
Planning and Organising (Organisational)
- Prioritised daily, weekly, monthly tasks to meet university deadlines.
- Effective at managing time and balancing full-time study with part-time work, as evidenced by handing in all my assignments on time.
Swinburne Problem Solving
- Undertook and solved many information technology and business-related problems by undertaking real and simulated projects during undergraduate studies at Swinburne University.
- Working as an IT Help Desk Technician, I was required to conduct a thorough analysis of the email software in order to identify potential errors. I was then required to make recommendations to improve the system.
- Projects include systems analysis, design and implementation; evaluating systems results and making appropriate recommendations based on analysis on information technology management issues.
- Transformed and translated organisational processes and procedures into written documents to assist business line competencies in streamlining or automating current processes such as the Business Performance Management process at Microserve.
Swinburne Interests
Employers are always interested in you ‘the person’ and your potential fit to the organisation
They are curious to know about your hidden talents or interests – especially if they relate to the profession you are seeking to enter into the organisation
Make sure you highlight a wide range of interests
Clubbing, swords, surfing the net, Facebook, meeting new people and hunting are NOT appropriate on resumes
Swinburne Referees No matter how good your application and interview were –
if your referees do not give positive feedback – you may not get the job.
No one is obliged to give a positive reference – make sure you choose someone with whom you had/have a good rapport
Should be work or study related (i.e. ideally someone you have reported to who can comment on your performance)
Show your referees the courtesy of asking for their permission and notifying them when you apply for jobs
Make sure their details have not changed
Provide at least 2 referees
Always include Full Name, Position, Company, Address, Phone Number and Email Address
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… any questions?
Swinburne Writing effective resumes and cover letters:
Cover Letters
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What is a cover letter?
A formal letter of introduction
States your interest in the position or organisation – why do you want
to work for the organisation and your skill match
Provide an overview of your qualifications
Outline your employment history or relevant experience
Match your skills to those required for the job – technical and generic
Great indication of your communication skills
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Written specifically for each application – refer to criteria outlined in the job advertisement
Shows reference number and position – where you saw the job advertised
Demonstrates your skills and knowledge – provide examples as proof
Tell the employer what you have to offer – not the reasons why they shouldn’t give you the job….
Demonstrates your knowledge of the company
One page
NB: work out if the job is advertised through a recruitment agency, if it is, you will be working for their client, NOT for the recruitment agency!
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Cover letter – useful tips
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Amanda Kaur22 Henderson RdEpping Vic 3071Ph: 9878 4456 Mob: 0432 907 123Email: [email protected]
26th August 2013
Mr Robert BrownGeneral ManagerC & E Pty Ltd26 Smith StreetThomastown Vic 3074
Dear Mr Brown,
Re: Book Keeper and Office Assistant
Please accept my application for the position of Book Keeper and Office Assistant with C & E as advertised on the Seek website on the 5th July 2013. I believe my skills and relevant experience would enable me to make a significant contribution to C&E.
I am undertaking a Bachelor of Business majoring in Accounting at Swinburne University of Technology (TAFE) and am looking forward to utilising the skills I am gaining in my course to join a company devoted to environmentally friendly car care products. This course is providing me with the knowledge and skills to efficiently work in an accounting and office administration role and the assignments have strengthened my ability to process accounts payable and receivable; update customer accounts records; produce a variety of financial records; and enhanced my office administration and keyboard skills. I am a confident internet user and familiar with MYOB and the full MS Office suite. This can be supported by my referees who will also be able to confirm my enthusiasm and ability to problem solve client and financial discrepancies.
Utilising my good organisational skills I have balanced full-time study with part-time employment with Mumbai Property Exchange. My duties include reception and general office administration. As Mumbai Property Exchange is a market leader in the area, I was expected to demonstrate high level communication skills, professional standards and client confidentiality. At times, I am in charge of the office so I am very capable of dealing with high volume customer service and a wide range of client enquiries.
Enclosed is my resume for your consideration. I look forward to discussing the position and my application further and can be contacted on 0432 907 123.
Yours sincerely,
Amanda Kaur
Your name and address
Date
Employer or agency name, title, address
Salutation (eg Dear Mr Brown or Dear Sir / Madam)Reference line
Paragraphs
Yours sincerely / Yours faithfullySign and type your name
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Online applications
- Often used in graduate recruitment and are a vital
component of selection criteria
- Ensure you research the role and company
- Address key selection criteria and provide specific
examples of how you have demonstrated skills
- Follow the instructions
- If possible, type responses in MS Word then copy into
online document
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Cover emails
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Most applications are submitted via email also require a short cover email
Tips
- Mention the job title and reference number
- Express interest in the position highlighting you possess relevant qualifications and experience
- Refer to attached cover letter and resume
- Ensure your written expression, spelling and grammar are perfect – or the attachment will not get opened!
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Selection criteria
- Separate document often used for government and academic positions
- Cut and paste the key criteria and these become your headings
- Demonstrate your skills by providing specific evidence of your past experience in relation to the criteria
- Can use examples from study, part time jobs, extra curricular activities etc
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Additional Swinburne resources to assist you
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Resumes
- Resume builder
- Developing your resume handout
- Resume podcast
-Cover Letters
- Cover letter handouts
- How to write a cover letter podcast
-Selection Criteria
- Online applications and selection criteria handout
-Access at www.swin.edu.au/careers
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References
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Resumes that Get Shortlisted – Jim Bright and Joanne Earl (2008)
Brilliant Graduate CV – Jim Bright, Joanne Earl, David Winter (2013)
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