Evaluation Q3: what have you learnt from your audience feedback ?

PosITIVe

Clear sound - all

dialog could be heard

Good use of the heart beat at the

beginning

The effect on the voices to make it

sound like a phone call

Parallel narrative

– cross cutting

works well

We used different title

cards

Our feed back told us that we should make them all the same to keep it consistent

In this clip we didn’t take the original sound off

Someone

suggested that we

get rid of this so

the heart beat

over the top is

clearer and more

dramatic

Another point to

change was out

title card at the

end of the trailer

We needed to invert it so the background would be purple and all the text was white

This makes the brand clearer

The feed back told us that the shot where Dean says “eighty quid” was too long

By cutting this down

it made the edits

quicker and fit better

with the conventions

of a soap trailer

•Camera work•Pre production •Editing – imovie – garageband – key note – photoshop – publisher – •Social media – twitter + facebook + yotube + blog

raw footage – explanation – edited clip