Reality stars in the mediaby Amy Buchanan
Submission date: 10-Apr-2018 11:03AM (UTC+0100)Submission ID: 86274047File name: VA-P500-20009-35736-18_8550496_9707407_Reality_stars_in_the_media_.docxWord count: 1654Character count: 8893
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FINAL GRADE
65/100
Reality stars in the mediaGRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1
Punctuation! If you are using a f ull stop here then you need to start the next sentence with acapital letter. In that case, deleting the and would make it read better.
Comment 2
lower case
Comment 3
Capital letter on the names of places such as Hollywood.
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Italics
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Italics
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Comment 6
comma
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comma
Comment 8
This word could be deleted.
Comment 9
italics
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italics
Comment 11
This is a long sentence. Read it out loud.
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Comment 12
Italics
Comment 13
Italics.
Comment 14
Italics
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