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Reflective Journal Writing as an Approach to Enhancing Studentsrsquo
Learning Experience
Florina F Estrada1 Hjh Mariam Abdul Rahman
2
1Quality Assurance Unit
2Graduate Studies and Research
Institut Teknologi Brunei
Tungku Link Gadong BE 1410 Bandar Seri Begawan BS 8675
Negara Brunei Darussalam
Email florinaestradaitbedubn Mariamrahmanitbedu bn
ABSTRACT
Reflective journal writing (RJW) is currently emerging as a common approach to enhancing the
studentsrsquo learning experience in professional courses increasing learnerrsquos motivation and
promoting higher order thinking skills However there is a dearth of literature about reflective
writing in the higher education science and technical disciplines including engineering courses A
qualitative approach was used in this study to describe the various stages of reflection as seen
from the journal reports of forty-four Mechanical Engineering students at the Institut Teknologi
Brunei Using the Gibbs model of reflection as a general guideline the journal reports of the
students were described based on Hatton and Smithrsquos model of the stages of reflection-
descriptive writing descriptive reflection dialogic reflection and critical reflection A 20-item
questionnaire using a 5-point Likert scale was administered in order to describe perceptions of
students about RJW Findings showed that the students found it easy to describe their experience
in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of reflection ie
critical reflection they were less skillful in expressing their ideas The majority of respondents
had positive perceptions as to the extent by which RJW promotes active and personal ownership
of learning critical thinking understanding onersquos own learning facilitation of the learning
experience and the valuing of personal observation and knowledge This research indicates that
RJW has a huge potential as a practical approach to enhancing students learning experience in
general and specifically it may also provide opportunities to link theory and practice in
engineering courses
Key words reflective journal writing dialogic reflection critical reflection
1 INTRODUCTION
Reflective writing is currently emerging as a requirement of higher education courses to promote
learnersrsquo self-reflection critical thinking and other professional skills Literature has emphasized
the importance of reflection in helping students learn from their experience Various studies have
underscored the importance of the role of reflective writing in higher education [1] Lew and
Schmidt pointed out its importance by citing the seminal work of Dewey (1991) Boud (1985)
and Moon (1999) about reflection Dewey has defined reflection as an ldquoactive persistent and
careful consideration of any belief or supposed form of knowledge in the light of the ground that
support it and the further conclusion to which it tendsrdquo Boud has described it as ldquothose
intellectual and affective activities that individuals engage into explore their experience which
leads to new understanding and appreciationsrdquo [2] [3] [4]
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Moon describes reflection as something that is naturally embedded in the learning process She
defines it as a form of mental processing or thinking to fulfil a purpose or anticipated outcome as
applied to relatively complex or unstructured ideas for which there is not an obvious solution [4]
This definition stresses both the critical analysis of knowledge and experience Reflection is a
means to gain an in-depth knowledge and a better understanding of the experience
Reflection has been embedded in standards for Higher Education For example the Qualifications
and Curriculum Authority which has been responsible for setting national Standards for Key
Skills for all university students in UK such as communications information technology
application of numbers working with others problem-solving and improving onersquos learning and
performance require students to critically reflect on their skills to evaluate their overall approach
to work and effectiveness It defines critical reflection as a deliberate process during a course of
work when an individual focuses on hisher performance and assesses what heshe is learning
from that experience in order to guide him in future actions [5]
There has been a dearth of literature about reflective writing for the Higher Education science and
technical disciplines including the Engineering courses The majority of studies in this area has
focused on the pedagogy of medical programmes such as nursing social work and sociology as
well as in the arts and humanities Reflective writing has become a common approach to develop
English writing skills increasing motivation and promoting higher order thinking skills The use
of reflective journals to promote reflection and the learning process has been widely elaborated in
these disciplines [5] Reflection as a learning experience is an essential component for
professional competence [6] [7] [8] In 2006 Russo for example in his research on college
teachers teaching from various disciplines and institutions reported the teachersrsquo account on how
reflection helped them in their interaction with their students as well as in their professional
development The practice of reflection can address learning issues deepen understanding and
create fresh insights [9]
In addition the online learning environment has been particularly useful for enhancing reflection
For example Lew and Schmidt (2007) stressed the significance of the work of OrsquoConnell and
Dyment (2006) Kerka (1996) and Chirema (2007) to underscore the usefulness of lsquolearning
journalsrsquo as a means to promote reflection and gain experience in recording reflection in learning
improving writing skills and enhancing awareness of learning achievements [10] [11] [12] For
example the use of online reflection journals also allows students to think and write reflectively
and thus improves learning Students are likely to use the journals to provide feedback about their
facilitators as well as their peers The use of online reflection journals serves as an assessment
tool that enables facilitators to monitor studentsrsquo learning progress through specific and detailed
feedback on their performance while students reflect on their own learning [13] However
despite all this research to date no study has explored the use of reflective journals with
Engineering undergraduates
This study utilized Hatton and Smithrsquos model that described the levels of reflection as a basis for
describing the stages of the studentsrsquo reflective writing [14] [15] [16] [17] This model
describes the content of the journal writing according to the following levels
Level 1 Descriptive writing This is a description of events or literature reports There is no
discussion beyond description
Level 2 Descriptive reflection There is some evidence of deeper consideration in relatively
descriptive language There is no real evidence of the notion of alternative viewpoints in use
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Level 3 Dialogic reflection There is evidence of a lsquostepping backrsquo from the events There is
consideration of the qualities of judgments and of possible alternatives for explaining and
hypothesizing analytical or integrative linking factors and perspectives
Level 4 Critical reflection Writer is aware that the same actions and events may be seen in
different contexts with different explanations associated with the contexts
The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection served as a general guideline to guide the students in journal
writing Based on this model they wrote their reflection by responding to the following questions
(1) What happened (2) What were your reactions and feelings (3) What was good and bad
about the experience (4) What sense can you make of the situation (5) What else could you have
done (6) If it happens again what would you do The content of the reflective writing was
focused on what the student learned and how that may benefit him or her in the future [14] [15]
11 Statement of the problem
The purpose of this study was to describe the journal reports of students as to the various stages
of reflection and to look into whether there was higher-order thinking or reflective skills in their
writing It also described general perceptions of students about reflective journal writing
12 Research questions
For the purpose of this study the following questions were addressed namely (1) to what extent
do students demonstrate the various stages of reflection (2) what are the perceptions of students
regarding reflective journal writing (3) to what extent does reflective journal writing promote
studentsrsquo critical thinking or understanding onersquos own learning and (4) do students find
reflective journal writing a useful activity to enhance their learning experience
2 LITERATURE REVIEW
The pervasive model for engineering pedagogy emphasises maths and physics delivered in a
traditional manner It consists of largely content-laden units of study that are assessed by quizzes
tests and final examinations As a consequence students exert more effort in memorising facts
This implies that practitioners are less likely to be creative divergent thinkers and problem-
solvers of complex issues Assessment tasks do not take into consideration the constructive
alignment between teaching-learning activities and assessment [18] Assessment commonly done
in engineering disciplines is mainly traditional using numbers evidence to demonstrate learning
The use of reflective writing in engineering and other science or math disciplines is largely
regarded as ldquosoftrdquo assessment which implies that it lacks objective or quantitative measurement
criteria [19]
Moreover various studies demonstrate strong evidence that the engineering curriculum
encourages surface rather than a deep approach to learning The deep learners are more disposed
to applying their knowledge ie connect theory and practice to solve problems The traditional
form of instruction (eg conventional lecture and assessment tasks that are mostly of recall type)
reward passivity in students rather than their active involvement in the learning process Teaching
that allows students to participate actively in the learning process encourages deep learning in the
subject matter Likewise if assessment tasks reward memorising and rote memory then the
students are practically rewarded for taking a surface approach to learning the subject matter [20]
In order to promote active learning in engineering teachers should teach the different concepts in
a unified manner
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 25
Goldsmith Willey and Boud (2012) cited in their work major research activities that identified
learning gaps in the development of engineering graduate capabilities namely lack of problem-
solving abilities with real-world issues and lack of written and spoken communication skills
They asserted that gaps occur because most engineering curricula emphasise acquisition of
knowledge theory and practice are not integrated and assessment tasks give more weight on
ldquoatomised pieces of knowledgerdquo Their work investigated the use of discursive writing to
encourage deep learning and improve written communication skills of engineering students
Discursive writing provides the students with a learning environment where they can explore
theories and concepts integrate and link them to practical engineering skills They concluded that
academics must seriously consider writing as part of the curriculum to develop graduate
capabilities of engineering students ie to develop writing tasks determine their effectiveness in
developing writing capabilities and facilitating an integrated engineering curriculum [21]
The use of reflective writing assignments in engineering education has been explored as an
important source of creative activity or critical thinking Formal reflection on learning tasks in
industry-related or project-based learning activities has demonstrated that it encourages students
to examine their practical skills and evaluate the best approach to complete a project [22]
Reflective writing assignment in engineering courses may actually help students develop critical
thinking skills The rationale for the reflective writing assignment is that students are able to build
on prior knowledge and see the connection between theory and practice At the same time they
are able to have a deeper understanding of how they learn in order to integrate old and new
knowledge identify mistakes and avoid repeating them and help them to become lifelong
learners throughout their course and professional life [23]
Statistical evidence shows that reflective writing can enhance learning among engineering
students Burrows (2001) showed statistical data to demonstrate that reflective writing can
improve not only thinking and writing skills but also learning of content at the knowledge level
Nevertheless in order to provide solid proof of improved learning through reflective writing
Burrows pointed out that there is a need to explore attitudes and motivations of students towards
reflective journaling The use of reflective writing as a teaching-learning approach to improve
learning may be useful provided that teachers clarify the intended learning outcomes of the course
and the corresponding assessment tasks provide formative feedback and demonstrate the
relevance between theory and practice in all courses [24]
3 METHOD
The aim of this study was to describe the various stages of reflection based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
model of stages of reflection namely (1) descriptive writing (straightforward account of events)
(2) descriptive reflection (no evidence of alternative viewpoints) (3) dialogic reflection (writer
stands back from the event and analyses it) (4) critical reflection (writer puts hisher account into
a broader perspective) The stages for this model were used as the basis for describing the journal
entries of the students
A 20-item questionnaire developed by M Farrah (2012) [25] using a 5-point Likert was used as
the instrument to describe perceptions of students regarding RJW The relative agreement to the
questionnaire items ranged from 1 (Strongly disagree) to 5 (Strongly agree) Descriptive statistics
were used to interpret the findings on studentsrsquo perceptions on RJW The questionnaire was
administered at the end of the Communication Skills module during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014
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Convenience sampling was done in this study The participants in this study included students
from two groups of Foundation Degree Mechanical Engineering Programme who were enrolled
in a Communication Skills course at the Institut Teknologi Brunei during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014 The total number of participants was forty-four
The students were given instructions to write their reflection regarding their learning experience
at the end of their class The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was used as a guideline in writing their
journal entries This procedure was done throughout the fourteen (14) weeks of the second
semesterrsquos class The last four journal entries were collected for review and description based on
Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection
4 RESULTS
41 DEMOGRAPHIC PROFILE
As indicated in Table 1 the majority of the 44 respondents who were all enrolled in the
Foundational Degree of the Mechanical Engineering programme area were under the age group
20-22 were on their first year of study male-dominated and had given themselves a self-rating
of good to average writing abilities The majority of them about 64 did not have any
experience in writing journals from their previous schools The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was
used as a guideline to help them write their journal entries The guideline proved to be useful not
only for those without experience but also for others who had prior experience in RJW who took
part in this study
Table 1 Demographic profile of respondents (N=44)
Profile Frequency
Gender
Male 27 614
Female 17 386
Age
17-19 10 227
20-22 31 705
22-24 3 68
Year of study
1st Year 42 955
2nd
Year 2 45
Self-rating of overall writing
ability
Poor-very poor 7 159
Good-Average 32 727
Very good- Excellent 5 114
Experience in RJW
No experience in RJW 28 636
With experience in RJW 16 364
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42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
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Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
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[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
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literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
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Moon describes reflection as something that is naturally embedded in the learning process She
defines it as a form of mental processing or thinking to fulfil a purpose or anticipated outcome as
applied to relatively complex or unstructured ideas for which there is not an obvious solution [4]
This definition stresses both the critical analysis of knowledge and experience Reflection is a
means to gain an in-depth knowledge and a better understanding of the experience
Reflection has been embedded in standards for Higher Education For example the Qualifications
and Curriculum Authority which has been responsible for setting national Standards for Key
Skills for all university students in UK such as communications information technology
application of numbers working with others problem-solving and improving onersquos learning and
performance require students to critically reflect on their skills to evaluate their overall approach
to work and effectiveness It defines critical reflection as a deliberate process during a course of
work when an individual focuses on hisher performance and assesses what heshe is learning
from that experience in order to guide him in future actions [5]
There has been a dearth of literature about reflective writing for the Higher Education science and
technical disciplines including the Engineering courses The majority of studies in this area has
focused on the pedagogy of medical programmes such as nursing social work and sociology as
well as in the arts and humanities Reflective writing has become a common approach to develop
English writing skills increasing motivation and promoting higher order thinking skills The use
of reflective journals to promote reflection and the learning process has been widely elaborated in
these disciplines [5] Reflection as a learning experience is an essential component for
professional competence [6] [7] [8] In 2006 Russo for example in his research on college
teachers teaching from various disciplines and institutions reported the teachersrsquo account on how
reflection helped them in their interaction with their students as well as in their professional
development The practice of reflection can address learning issues deepen understanding and
create fresh insights [9]
In addition the online learning environment has been particularly useful for enhancing reflection
For example Lew and Schmidt (2007) stressed the significance of the work of OrsquoConnell and
Dyment (2006) Kerka (1996) and Chirema (2007) to underscore the usefulness of lsquolearning
journalsrsquo as a means to promote reflection and gain experience in recording reflection in learning
improving writing skills and enhancing awareness of learning achievements [10] [11] [12] For
example the use of online reflection journals also allows students to think and write reflectively
and thus improves learning Students are likely to use the journals to provide feedback about their
facilitators as well as their peers The use of online reflection journals serves as an assessment
tool that enables facilitators to monitor studentsrsquo learning progress through specific and detailed
feedback on their performance while students reflect on their own learning [13] However
despite all this research to date no study has explored the use of reflective journals with
Engineering undergraduates
This study utilized Hatton and Smithrsquos model that described the levels of reflection as a basis for
describing the stages of the studentsrsquo reflective writing [14] [15] [16] [17] This model
describes the content of the journal writing according to the following levels
Level 1 Descriptive writing This is a description of events or literature reports There is no
discussion beyond description
Level 2 Descriptive reflection There is some evidence of deeper consideration in relatively
descriptive language There is no real evidence of the notion of alternative viewpoints in use
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 24
Level 3 Dialogic reflection There is evidence of a lsquostepping backrsquo from the events There is
consideration of the qualities of judgments and of possible alternatives for explaining and
hypothesizing analytical or integrative linking factors and perspectives
Level 4 Critical reflection Writer is aware that the same actions and events may be seen in
different contexts with different explanations associated with the contexts
The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection served as a general guideline to guide the students in journal
writing Based on this model they wrote their reflection by responding to the following questions
(1) What happened (2) What were your reactions and feelings (3) What was good and bad
about the experience (4) What sense can you make of the situation (5) What else could you have
done (6) If it happens again what would you do The content of the reflective writing was
focused on what the student learned and how that may benefit him or her in the future [14] [15]
11 Statement of the problem
The purpose of this study was to describe the journal reports of students as to the various stages
of reflection and to look into whether there was higher-order thinking or reflective skills in their
writing It also described general perceptions of students about reflective journal writing
12 Research questions
For the purpose of this study the following questions were addressed namely (1) to what extent
do students demonstrate the various stages of reflection (2) what are the perceptions of students
regarding reflective journal writing (3) to what extent does reflective journal writing promote
studentsrsquo critical thinking or understanding onersquos own learning and (4) do students find
reflective journal writing a useful activity to enhance their learning experience
2 LITERATURE REVIEW
The pervasive model for engineering pedagogy emphasises maths and physics delivered in a
traditional manner It consists of largely content-laden units of study that are assessed by quizzes
tests and final examinations As a consequence students exert more effort in memorising facts
This implies that practitioners are less likely to be creative divergent thinkers and problem-
solvers of complex issues Assessment tasks do not take into consideration the constructive
alignment between teaching-learning activities and assessment [18] Assessment commonly done
in engineering disciplines is mainly traditional using numbers evidence to demonstrate learning
The use of reflective writing in engineering and other science or math disciplines is largely
regarded as ldquosoftrdquo assessment which implies that it lacks objective or quantitative measurement
criteria [19]
Moreover various studies demonstrate strong evidence that the engineering curriculum
encourages surface rather than a deep approach to learning The deep learners are more disposed
to applying their knowledge ie connect theory and practice to solve problems The traditional
form of instruction (eg conventional lecture and assessment tasks that are mostly of recall type)
reward passivity in students rather than their active involvement in the learning process Teaching
that allows students to participate actively in the learning process encourages deep learning in the
subject matter Likewise if assessment tasks reward memorising and rote memory then the
students are practically rewarded for taking a surface approach to learning the subject matter [20]
In order to promote active learning in engineering teachers should teach the different concepts in
a unified manner
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 25
Goldsmith Willey and Boud (2012) cited in their work major research activities that identified
learning gaps in the development of engineering graduate capabilities namely lack of problem-
solving abilities with real-world issues and lack of written and spoken communication skills
They asserted that gaps occur because most engineering curricula emphasise acquisition of
knowledge theory and practice are not integrated and assessment tasks give more weight on
ldquoatomised pieces of knowledgerdquo Their work investigated the use of discursive writing to
encourage deep learning and improve written communication skills of engineering students
Discursive writing provides the students with a learning environment where they can explore
theories and concepts integrate and link them to practical engineering skills They concluded that
academics must seriously consider writing as part of the curriculum to develop graduate
capabilities of engineering students ie to develop writing tasks determine their effectiveness in
developing writing capabilities and facilitating an integrated engineering curriculum [21]
The use of reflective writing assignments in engineering education has been explored as an
important source of creative activity or critical thinking Formal reflection on learning tasks in
industry-related or project-based learning activities has demonstrated that it encourages students
to examine their practical skills and evaluate the best approach to complete a project [22]
Reflective writing assignment in engineering courses may actually help students develop critical
thinking skills The rationale for the reflective writing assignment is that students are able to build
on prior knowledge and see the connection between theory and practice At the same time they
are able to have a deeper understanding of how they learn in order to integrate old and new
knowledge identify mistakes and avoid repeating them and help them to become lifelong
learners throughout their course and professional life [23]
Statistical evidence shows that reflective writing can enhance learning among engineering
students Burrows (2001) showed statistical data to demonstrate that reflective writing can
improve not only thinking and writing skills but also learning of content at the knowledge level
Nevertheless in order to provide solid proof of improved learning through reflective writing
Burrows pointed out that there is a need to explore attitudes and motivations of students towards
reflective journaling The use of reflective writing as a teaching-learning approach to improve
learning may be useful provided that teachers clarify the intended learning outcomes of the course
and the corresponding assessment tasks provide formative feedback and demonstrate the
relevance between theory and practice in all courses [24]
3 METHOD
The aim of this study was to describe the various stages of reflection based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
model of stages of reflection namely (1) descriptive writing (straightforward account of events)
(2) descriptive reflection (no evidence of alternative viewpoints) (3) dialogic reflection (writer
stands back from the event and analyses it) (4) critical reflection (writer puts hisher account into
a broader perspective) The stages for this model were used as the basis for describing the journal
entries of the students
A 20-item questionnaire developed by M Farrah (2012) [25] using a 5-point Likert was used as
the instrument to describe perceptions of students regarding RJW The relative agreement to the
questionnaire items ranged from 1 (Strongly disagree) to 5 (Strongly agree) Descriptive statistics
were used to interpret the findings on studentsrsquo perceptions on RJW The questionnaire was
administered at the end of the Communication Skills module during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 26
Convenience sampling was done in this study The participants in this study included students
from two groups of Foundation Degree Mechanical Engineering Programme who were enrolled
in a Communication Skills course at the Institut Teknologi Brunei during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014 The total number of participants was forty-four
The students were given instructions to write their reflection regarding their learning experience
at the end of their class The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was used as a guideline in writing their
journal entries This procedure was done throughout the fourteen (14) weeks of the second
semesterrsquos class The last four journal entries were collected for review and description based on
Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection
4 RESULTS
41 DEMOGRAPHIC PROFILE
As indicated in Table 1 the majority of the 44 respondents who were all enrolled in the
Foundational Degree of the Mechanical Engineering programme area were under the age group
20-22 were on their first year of study male-dominated and had given themselves a self-rating
of good to average writing abilities The majority of them about 64 did not have any
experience in writing journals from their previous schools The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was
used as a guideline to help them write their journal entries The guideline proved to be useful not
only for those without experience but also for others who had prior experience in RJW who took
part in this study
Table 1 Demographic profile of respondents (N=44)
Profile Frequency
Gender
Male 27 614
Female 17 386
Age
17-19 10 227
20-22 31 705
22-24 3 68
Year of study
1st Year 42 955
2nd
Year 2 45
Self-rating of overall writing
ability
Poor-very poor 7 159
Good-Average 32 727
Very good- Excellent 5 114
Experience in RJW
No experience in RJW 28 636
With experience in RJW 16 364
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 27
42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
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Level 3 Dialogic reflection There is evidence of a lsquostepping backrsquo from the events There is
consideration of the qualities of judgments and of possible alternatives for explaining and
hypothesizing analytical or integrative linking factors and perspectives
Level 4 Critical reflection Writer is aware that the same actions and events may be seen in
different contexts with different explanations associated with the contexts
The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection served as a general guideline to guide the students in journal
writing Based on this model they wrote their reflection by responding to the following questions
(1) What happened (2) What were your reactions and feelings (3) What was good and bad
about the experience (4) What sense can you make of the situation (5) What else could you have
done (6) If it happens again what would you do The content of the reflective writing was
focused on what the student learned and how that may benefit him or her in the future [14] [15]
11 Statement of the problem
The purpose of this study was to describe the journal reports of students as to the various stages
of reflection and to look into whether there was higher-order thinking or reflective skills in their
writing It also described general perceptions of students about reflective journal writing
12 Research questions
For the purpose of this study the following questions were addressed namely (1) to what extent
do students demonstrate the various stages of reflection (2) what are the perceptions of students
regarding reflective journal writing (3) to what extent does reflective journal writing promote
studentsrsquo critical thinking or understanding onersquos own learning and (4) do students find
reflective journal writing a useful activity to enhance their learning experience
2 LITERATURE REVIEW
The pervasive model for engineering pedagogy emphasises maths and physics delivered in a
traditional manner It consists of largely content-laden units of study that are assessed by quizzes
tests and final examinations As a consequence students exert more effort in memorising facts
This implies that practitioners are less likely to be creative divergent thinkers and problem-
solvers of complex issues Assessment tasks do not take into consideration the constructive
alignment between teaching-learning activities and assessment [18] Assessment commonly done
in engineering disciplines is mainly traditional using numbers evidence to demonstrate learning
The use of reflective writing in engineering and other science or math disciplines is largely
regarded as ldquosoftrdquo assessment which implies that it lacks objective or quantitative measurement
criteria [19]
Moreover various studies demonstrate strong evidence that the engineering curriculum
encourages surface rather than a deep approach to learning The deep learners are more disposed
to applying their knowledge ie connect theory and practice to solve problems The traditional
form of instruction (eg conventional lecture and assessment tasks that are mostly of recall type)
reward passivity in students rather than their active involvement in the learning process Teaching
that allows students to participate actively in the learning process encourages deep learning in the
subject matter Likewise if assessment tasks reward memorising and rote memory then the
students are practically rewarded for taking a surface approach to learning the subject matter [20]
In order to promote active learning in engineering teachers should teach the different concepts in
a unified manner
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 25
Goldsmith Willey and Boud (2012) cited in their work major research activities that identified
learning gaps in the development of engineering graduate capabilities namely lack of problem-
solving abilities with real-world issues and lack of written and spoken communication skills
They asserted that gaps occur because most engineering curricula emphasise acquisition of
knowledge theory and practice are not integrated and assessment tasks give more weight on
ldquoatomised pieces of knowledgerdquo Their work investigated the use of discursive writing to
encourage deep learning and improve written communication skills of engineering students
Discursive writing provides the students with a learning environment where they can explore
theories and concepts integrate and link them to practical engineering skills They concluded that
academics must seriously consider writing as part of the curriculum to develop graduate
capabilities of engineering students ie to develop writing tasks determine their effectiveness in
developing writing capabilities and facilitating an integrated engineering curriculum [21]
The use of reflective writing assignments in engineering education has been explored as an
important source of creative activity or critical thinking Formal reflection on learning tasks in
industry-related or project-based learning activities has demonstrated that it encourages students
to examine their practical skills and evaluate the best approach to complete a project [22]
Reflective writing assignment in engineering courses may actually help students develop critical
thinking skills The rationale for the reflective writing assignment is that students are able to build
on prior knowledge and see the connection between theory and practice At the same time they
are able to have a deeper understanding of how they learn in order to integrate old and new
knowledge identify mistakes and avoid repeating them and help them to become lifelong
learners throughout their course and professional life [23]
Statistical evidence shows that reflective writing can enhance learning among engineering
students Burrows (2001) showed statistical data to demonstrate that reflective writing can
improve not only thinking and writing skills but also learning of content at the knowledge level
Nevertheless in order to provide solid proof of improved learning through reflective writing
Burrows pointed out that there is a need to explore attitudes and motivations of students towards
reflective journaling The use of reflective writing as a teaching-learning approach to improve
learning may be useful provided that teachers clarify the intended learning outcomes of the course
and the corresponding assessment tasks provide formative feedback and demonstrate the
relevance between theory and practice in all courses [24]
3 METHOD
The aim of this study was to describe the various stages of reflection based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
model of stages of reflection namely (1) descriptive writing (straightforward account of events)
(2) descriptive reflection (no evidence of alternative viewpoints) (3) dialogic reflection (writer
stands back from the event and analyses it) (4) critical reflection (writer puts hisher account into
a broader perspective) The stages for this model were used as the basis for describing the journal
entries of the students
A 20-item questionnaire developed by M Farrah (2012) [25] using a 5-point Likert was used as
the instrument to describe perceptions of students regarding RJW The relative agreement to the
questionnaire items ranged from 1 (Strongly disagree) to 5 (Strongly agree) Descriptive statistics
were used to interpret the findings on studentsrsquo perceptions on RJW The questionnaire was
administered at the end of the Communication Skills module during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 26
Convenience sampling was done in this study The participants in this study included students
from two groups of Foundation Degree Mechanical Engineering Programme who were enrolled
in a Communication Skills course at the Institut Teknologi Brunei during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014 The total number of participants was forty-four
The students were given instructions to write their reflection regarding their learning experience
at the end of their class The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was used as a guideline in writing their
journal entries This procedure was done throughout the fourteen (14) weeks of the second
semesterrsquos class The last four journal entries were collected for review and description based on
Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection
4 RESULTS
41 DEMOGRAPHIC PROFILE
As indicated in Table 1 the majority of the 44 respondents who were all enrolled in the
Foundational Degree of the Mechanical Engineering programme area were under the age group
20-22 were on their first year of study male-dominated and had given themselves a self-rating
of good to average writing abilities The majority of them about 64 did not have any
experience in writing journals from their previous schools The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was
used as a guideline to help them write their journal entries The guideline proved to be useful not
only for those without experience but also for others who had prior experience in RJW who took
part in this study
Table 1 Demographic profile of respondents (N=44)
Profile Frequency
Gender
Male 27 614
Female 17 386
Age
17-19 10 227
20-22 31 705
22-24 3 68
Year of study
1st Year 42 955
2nd
Year 2 45
Self-rating of overall writing
ability
Poor-very poor 7 159
Good-Average 32 727
Very good- Excellent 5 114
Experience in RJW
No experience in RJW 28 636
With experience in RJW 16 364
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 27
42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
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[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
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Goldsmith Willey and Boud (2012) cited in their work major research activities that identified
learning gaps in the development of engineering graduate capabilities namely lack of problem-
solving abilities with real-world issues and lack of written and spoken communication skills
They asserted that gaps occur because most engineering curricula emphasise acquisition of
knowledge theory and practice are not integrated and assessment tasks give more weight on
ldquoatomised pieces of knowledgerdquo Their work investigated the use of discursive writing to
encourage deep learning and improve written communication skills of engineering students
Discursive writing provides the students with a learning environment where they can explore
theories and concepts integrate and link them to practical engineering skills They concluded that
academics must seriously consider writing as part of the curriculum to develop graduate
capabilities of engineering students ie to develop writing tasks determine their effectiveness in
developing writing capabilities and facilitating an integrated engineering curriculum [21]
The use of reflective writing assignments in engineering education has been explored as an
important source of creative activity or critical thinking Formal reflection on learning tasks in
industry-related or project-based learning activities has demonstrated that it encourages students
to examine their practical skills and evaluate the best approach to complete a project [22]
Reflective writing assignment in engineering courses may actually help students develop critical
thinking skills The rationale for the reflective writing assignment is that students are able to build
on prior knowledge and see the connection between theory and practice At the same time they
are able to have a deeper understanding of how they learn in order to integrate old and new
knowledge identify mistakes and avoid repeating them and help them to become lifelong
learners throughout their course and professional life [23]
Statistical evidence shows that reflective writing can enhance learning among engineering
students Burrows (2001) showed statistical data to demonstrate that reflective writing can
improve not only thinking and writing skills but also learning of content at the knowledge level
Nevertheless in order to provide solid proof of improved learning through reflective writing
Burrows pointed out that there is a need to explore attitudes and motivations of students towards
reflective journaling The use of reflective writing as a teaching-learning approach to improve
learning may be useful provided that teachers clarify the intended learning outcomes of the course
and the corresponding assessment tasks provide formative feedback and demonstrate the
relevance between theory and practice in all courses [24]
3 METHOD
The aim of this study was to describe the various stages of reflection based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
model of stages of reflection namely (1) descriptive writing (straightforward account of events)
(2) descriptive reflection (no evidence of alternative viewpoints) (3) dialogic reflection (writer
stands back from the event and analyses it) (4) critical reflection (writer puts hisher account into
a broader perspective) The stages for this model were used as the basis for describing the journal
entries of the students
A 20-item questionnaire developed by M Farrah (2012) [25] using a 5-point Likert was used as
the instrument to describe perceptions of students regarding RJW The relative agreement to the
questionnaire items ranged from 1 (Strongly disagree) to 5 (Strongly agree) Descriptive statistics
were used to interpret the findings on studentsrsquo perceptions on RJW The questionnaire was
administered at the end of the Communication Skills module during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 26
Convenience sampling was done in this study The participants in this study included students
from two groups of Foundation Degree Mechanical Engineering Programme who were enrolled
in a Communication Skills course at the Institut Teknologi Brunei during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014 The total number of participants was forty-four
The students were given instructions to write their reflection regarding their learning experience
at the end of their class The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was used as a guideline in writing their
journal entries This procedure was done throughout the fourteen (14) weeks of the second
semesterrsquos class The last four journal entries were collected for review and description based on
Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection
4 RESULTS
41 DEMOGRAPHIC PROFILE
As indicated in Table 1 the majority of the 44 respondents who were all enrolled in the
Foundational Degree of the Mechanical Engineering programme area were under the age group
20-22 were on their first year of study male-dominated and had given themselves a self-rating
of good to average writing abilities The majority of them about 64 did not have any
experience in writing journals from their previous schools The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was
used as a guideline to help them write their journal entries The guideline proved to be useful not
only for those without experience but also for others who had prior experience in RJW who took
part in this study
Table 1 Demographic profile of respondents (N=44)
Profile Frequency
Gender
Male 27 614
Female 17 386
Age
17-19 10 227
20-22 31 705
22-24 3 68
Year of study
1st Year 42 955
2nd
Year 2 45
Self-rating of overall writing
ability
Poor-very poor 7 159
Good-Average 32 727
Very good- Excellent 5 114
Experience in RJW
No experience in RJW 28 636
With experience in RJW 16 364
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 27
42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
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A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
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pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 26
Convenience sampling was done in this study The participants in this study included students
from two groups of Foundation Degree Mechanical Engineering Programme who were enrolled
in a Communication Skills course at the Institut Teknologi Brunei during the second semester of
school year 2013-2014 The total number of participants was forty-four
The students were given instructions to write their reflection regarding their learning experience
at the end of their class The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was used as a guideline in writing their
journal entries This procedure was done throughout the fourteen (14) weeks of the second
semesterrsquos class The last four journal entries were collected for review and description based on
Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection
4 RESULTS
41 DEMOGRAPHIC PROFILE
As indicated in Table 1 the majority of the 44 respondents who were all enrolled in the
Foundational Degree of the Mechanical Engineering programme area were under the age group
20-22 were on their first year of study male-dominated and had given themselves a self-rating
of good to average writing abilities The majority of them about 64 did not have any
experience in writing journals from their previous schools The Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection was
used as a guideline to help them write their journal entries The guideline proved to be useful not
only for those without experience but also for others who had prior experience in RJW who took
part in this study
Table 1 Demographic profile of respondents (N=44)
Profile Frequency
Gender
Male 27 614
Female 17 386
Age
17-19 10 227
20-22 31 705
22-24 3 68
Year of study
1st Year 42 955
2nd
Year 2 45
Self-rating of overall writing
ability
Poor-very poor 7 159
Good-Average 32 727
Very good- Excellent 5 114
Experience in RJW
No experience in RJW 28 636
With experience in RJW 16 364
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 27
42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 27
42 MAIN FINDINGS
All 44 students who participated in this study showed an overall positive perception towards
reflective journal writing The 20 questions in the questionnaire were designed to look into five
areas of studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to the following namely (1) active
involvement and personal ownership of learning (2) critical thinking (3) understanding of their
own learning (4) facilitation of the learning experience and (5) the valuing of personal
observation and knowledge The following was used as the guide for descriptive interpretation of
the weighted mean
Weighted mean range Interpretation
100-149 SD (Strongly Disagree)
150-249 D (Disagree)
250-349 N (Neutral)
350 449 A (Agree)
450-500 SA (Strongly agree)
Table 2 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to active involvement and personal ownership of learning
through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
talk about my experiences 0 2
(45) 10
(227) 20
(455) 12
(273) 395
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
express my ideas and opinions 0 1
(23) 13
(295) 19
(432) 11
(25) 390
Reflective Journal writing helped me to
respond to my thoughts and feelings 0 0 14
(318) 23
(523) 7
(159) 384
Reflective Journal writing was an
opportunity to gain self-knowledge 0 4
(91) 19
(432) 17
(386) 4
(91) 347
I did NOT have enough time to write in
my journals 5
(114)
14
(318) 18
(409) 7
(159) 0 261
To summarise Table 2 shows that the majority of students had a positive perception towards
reflective journal writing (RJW) in terms of helping them to talk or express their ideas and
opinion about their experience as well as allowing them to respond to their own thoughts and
feelings with means of 395 390 384 respectively However their perceptions in terms of
gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less conclusive About 43 of students had a neutral
response which suggests that these students had no strong feelings or they may have had
insufficient experience to form strong feelings about it These data show that about 40 had a
neutral opinion on the perception that there was not enough time for RJW only 16 agreed that
there was not enough time for journal writing
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 28
Table 3 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to stimulating critical thinking through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing stimulated my
critical thinking skills 0 1
(23) 18
(409) 20
(455) 5
(114) 365
Reflective Journal writing was a way of
thinking to explore my learning 0 1
(23) 23
(523) 15
(341) 5
(114) 354
As shown in Table 3 the majority of students agreed that RJW stimulated their critical thinking
skills as well as it provided a means of or a way of thinking to explore their learning However
while the majority demonstrated a positive perception it is worth mentioning that about 41 and
52 of the respondents took a neutral position as to RJW as a means of stimulating their critical
thinking skills or a way of thinking to explore onersquos learning
Table 4 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to understanding their own learning through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing helped me
understand what I am learning
0 2
(45)
21
(477)
17
(386)
4
(91)
352
Reflective Journal writing allowed me to
describe what I understood
0 2
(45)
12
(273)
26
(591)
4
(91)
372
I did NOT understand what I am supposed
to write in my journal
3
(68)
12
(273)
17
(386)
7
(159)
5
(114)
297
The data in Table 4 suggest an overall positive perception of students towards RJW with means
of 352 and 372 respectively as a means to understand their own learning and to describe what
they actually understood The neutral opinion regarding the understanding of what they were
supposed to write in the journal as shown by the mean of 297 may be attributed to the lack of
experience in RJW by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 5 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to facilitating learning experience through RJW (N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Reflective Journal writing offered me a
chance to develop and reinforce my
writing skills
0 1
(23)
17
(386)
22
(50)
4
(91)
365
Reflective Journal writing enhanced my
communication skills
0 5
(114)
17
(386)
20
(455)
2
(45)
343
Frequent journal writing increased my
creativity
0 3
(68)
22
(50)
16
(364)
3
(68)
343
I find it easy to write in my journal
4
(91)
5
(114)
29
(659)
4
(91)
2
(45)
288
Reflective Journal writing ACTUALLY
improved my writing skills
1
(23)
4
(91)
22
(50)
13
(295)
4
(91)
334
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
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[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
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learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
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regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
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[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
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[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
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Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
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11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
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07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
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guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 29
The data in Table 5 show that majority of students had a positive perception towards RJW as a
means to improve (develop and reinforce) their writing skills While this perception is positive
students took a neutral position as to the belief that RJW actually enhanced their communication
skills increased their creativity or actually improved their writings skills with means of 331
343 and 329 respectively In addition the majority had also a neutral opinion with a mean of
288 as to finding RJW as an easy task This may be attributed to the lack of experience in RJW
by the majority of respondents (Table 1)
Table 6 Studentsrsquo perceptions as to valuing personal observation and knowledge through RJW
(N=44)
Questionnaire Item Frequency () Mean
SD D N A SA
Journal writing motivated me to write
more
1
(23)
12
(273)
23
(523)
8
(182)
0 286
Reflective Journal writing is a waste of
time
9
(205)
15
(341)
16
(364)
4
(91)
0 234
Reflective Journal writing should be
encouragedcontinued
1
(23)
4
(91)
19
(432)
12
(272)
8
(182)
350
I would like to share with the class what I
wrote in my journal
17
(386)
10
(227)
12
(273)
4
(91)
1
(23)
213
Overall Reflective Journal writing was a
worthwhile experience
0
2
(45)
20
(455)
18
(409)
4
(91)
354
The data in Table 6 show that majority perceived RJW as a worthwhile activity and should be
encouraged as shown by means of 354 and 350 respectively Paradoxically they also show that
RJW did not motivate them to write more as the majority of respondents took a neutral position
with a mean of 286 In addition students seemed not to be inclined to share with others what
they had written on their journals as shown by the mean of 213
Table 7 Distribution of studentsrsquo journal writing entries based on stage of reflection
Stage Frequency () Total (N=44)
Male (n=30) Female (n=14)
1 (Descriptive writing) 30 14 44 100
2 (Descriptive reflection) 23 13 36 818
3 (Dialogic reflection) 14 7 21 477
4 (Critical reflection) 3 5 8 182
The data in Table 7 reveal that all students (100) seemed capable and at ease in describing their
experience in their reflective journals but as they went from descriptive to the highest stage of
reflection ie critical reflection they seemed to be less skillful in expressing their thoughts or
ideas The majority seemed capable of both descriptive writing and reflection or the first two
stages of reflection Only 18 of the students were able to write entries that may be described or
categorized under the stage of critical reflection
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 30
Table 8 Illustrative examples of reflective writing by students based on reflection stages 1-4
(Hatton and Smith 1995)
Stage Examples
1
Descriptive
writing
11ldquoFrom morning until this moment I feel sleepy all the way Maybe because of
lack of sleep Irsquove been doing reports amp projects for several weeks amp all I need now
is a good restrdquo 12ldquoToday has been a good day for me so far I went to a seafood restaurant during
lunch After that we were given a test and then did the Personal Development
Programme (PDP) activity on team workrdquo 2
Descriptive
reflection
21ldquoThe first week was the most difficult we were still new to this nature of
assignment I was having difficulties in trying to comprehend what I was supposed to
do However though the passing weeks it has been betterhelliprdquo 22 I think that I have more work to do because we have made the wrong proposalhellip
We need to re-do the proposal and hope this time is the correct way of doing the
proposal I feel like I wanna cry because of the over-excessive course work that was
given to us and must handle before we have our revision week which is coming
soonrdquo
3
Dialogic
reflection
31ldquoAt first maybe some of the problem(s) originated from myself I wasnrsquot paying
attention and not bothering on the assignment Fortunately I realized that this is
important not only for my grades but for my final year research proposal I have to
know how to do this My ignorance might be caused by my long-term habit in
slacking in doing my workrdquo
32 The good thing about learning about research proposal is that we have the basics
of doing it for the final year project we will not be having a hard time The bad
thing is that we donrsquot have much time to do all the course work We have to
sacrifice our timehellip such as sleep late at night to finish all the workrdquo
4
Critical
reflection
41ldquoIrsquom neutral about this experience because for me all of these are good practice
for my tutorial but Irsquom struggling now amp itrsquos only the 2nd
semester Irsquom sometimes
demotivated because Irsquom just tired because of too much course work but then I think
this is what I wanted to do in the first placehellip giving up is NOT an option amp of
course I will not give uprdquo
42ldquoDuring the activity it helped us to solve our problems in the given situation We
have gone through a discussion amongst our group with an agreement of the possible
solutions at the end of the discussion In that way it creates team work I will try to
conduct the same activity with a different situation in order to solve more problems
hellip try to create a challenging situation where it involves critical thinking and team
work problem solvingrdquo
The illustrative examples (Table 8) of reflective writing by students in this study seemed to
demonstrate that they were confident and competent in expressing their feelings towards learning
They were able to state their frustrations and appreciate what they actually learned in class eg
team work or their fear of not being able to cope with difficult subjects eg writing a research
proposal Despite limited experience in RJW the majority found it a worthwhile learning
experience
As a caveat these illustrative examples were not intended for demonstrating a comprehensive
analysis of the content of the journal entries The purpose was simply to provide evidence on the
extent of the abilities of students in writing about their reflections based on Hatton and Smithrsquos
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 31
model of stages of reflection Repeating a similar study with a broader sample and disciplines as
well as carrying out an in-depth and thematic analysis of content of journal entries may enhance
or promote a better understanding of the usefulness of RJW in enhancing the overall learning
experience of students across disciplines
5 DISCUSSION
The focus of this study was to demonstrate the various stages of reflection based on the journal
reports of students and describe their perceptions as to the extent by which it promotes active
involvement and personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of their own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge
The findings in Table 2 are consistent with literature review that generally students have varying
skills in their abilities to reflect ie even if the majority has a positive overall perception of
RJW not everyone found it easy to talk about ideas and opinion about their experience Since
almost 65 of the students did not have prior experience in RJW the Gibbrsquos Model of Reflection
was used as a guideline in order for them to write down their reflection In a similar study by CY
Shieh (2011) which was done to engage undergraduate students in translation programme half of
the subjects found reflective journal writing difficult and the other half found it easy A small
minority remained undecided ie took a neutral position about their perceptions about RJW
Most of those who stated difficulty in RJW cited their lack of experience and were unsure of what
to write [26]
In general it seems that the studentsrsquo neutral response to RJW as an opportunity to gain self-
knowledge may be due to lack of experience in RJW as part of their learning activity (Table 2)
The majority seemed to agree that not having enough time to write in their journals was not a
limitation in this study They were given thirty minutes at the end of the class to write down their
reflection Most of them were able to finish their entries within this period
The findings (Tables 3 4 and 5) tend to support statistical evidence by Burrows et al(2001) for
enhanced learning through RJW Their study which was carried out among freshman engineering
students in Arizona State University demonstrated that RJW ldquocan measurably improve learning of
content at the knowledge levelrdquo In addition the same study showed that RJW can improve both
thinking and writing skills [24] The use of reflective writing as a learning activity may have
significant implications in the pedagogy or implementation of curriculum in engineering courses
[21] [27] particularly in stimulating critical thinking and exploring onersquos way of thinking about
learning
Furthermore even if the majority of students did not believe that their writing skills improved
through RJW the majority seemed to agree that it offered them an opportunity to develop and
reinforce this skill (Table 5) Likewise the majority believed that it was a worthwhile experience
and must be encouraged or continued (Table 6)
As indicated in Table 8 the illustrative examples of reflective writing show that the students were
able to express their feelings and what they thought about their learning Their major concern was
actually the rigorous requirements of their studies The content of their reflective writing was
mostly about the fulfilment of the requirements of their module or course Furthermore it seemed
that it was not enough to simply provide guidelines to students in order to motivate them to write
in their reflective journals particularly for those who were writing them for the first time
Likewise it was unlikely that they would be able to reflect at a higher level given a limited
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 32
experience in RJW during their previous schooling In all likelihood this could explain why
majority of the journal entries fell under stages 1 and 2 of reflection (Table 7) and only a minority
was able to write entries under stage 4 (critical thinking)
Goldsmith (2012) cited a body of research particularly by Brown Collins and Duguid (1989)
Herrington (1985) and Lea and Street (1998) that suggests that deep approaches to learning can
be achieved through particular kinds of writing that provides an opportunity for learners to link
theory and practice [28] [29] [30] Furthermore while the findings of his study in the University
of Technology in Sydney were not conclusive as to support this body of research he stated that
there is a huge potential for the development of student writing abilities in the engineering
curriculum Engineering students struggle to link theory to practice or to apply what one has
learned to another situation or circumstances [21] In the light of these findings RJW may well be
a practical approach to provide students with writing opportunities which in turn may be able to
help them develop not only the writing skills but also a deeper understanding of their learning in
engineering
51 LIMITATIONS OF THE STUDY AND FUTURE RESEARCH
The limitations of this study include the small sample size of respondents in exploring the
different stages of reflection and perceptions of students towards reflection They were recruited
via convenience sampling A future consideration is to include more students in the sample for
research in order to get more information regarding reflective journal writing and its practical
usefulness as a teaching and learning tool to enhance studentsrsquo learning experience As to the
illustrative examples there was no attempt to analyze the content of the entries in the journals
They were simply categorized based on subjective interpretation of the researchers based on the
Hatton and Smithrsquos stages of reflection Hence a future study with a larger sample randomly
selected across multiple disciplines and a more structured content analysis of the journal reports
would provide a better understanding about reflection as a tool for enhancing studentsrsquo learning
experience
6 CONCLUSIONS
This study described the journal reports of students as to the various stages of reflection based on
the Hatton and Smithrsquos model of stages of reflection Generally students have varying skills in
their abilities to reflect with the majority being more skillful in stages 1 and 2 and only a few
were able to reflect at stages 3 and 4 of reflection A possible explanation for these results may be
the lack of prior experience in RJW by the majority of the students Hence the majority was less
skillful in its ability to analyse and critically reflect on the experience and put it into a broader
perspective This study also described the studentsrsquo perceptions towards reflective writing as to
the active as well as personal ownership of learning critical thinking understanding of onersquos own
learning facilitation of the learning experience and the valuing of personal observation and
knowledge The majority of students had positive perceptions towards RJW in all these areas
However while their perceptions in terms of gaining self-knowledge through RJW were less
conclusive they found it as a means to understand their own learning as well as it enabled them
to describe what they actually understood Likewise the majority of students perceived RJW as a
worthwhile activity that should be encouraged Notwithstanding the limitations identified in this
study reflective journal writing has a huge potential for developing it as a practical teaching
strategy for enhancing students learning experience in general and specifically it may also
provide opportunities to explore concepts or ideas that link theory and practice in engineering
courses In terms of good practice it is recommended that students should be given opportunities
to make connections between theory and practice through RJW Finally in terms of directions for
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[28] JS Brown A Collins and P Duguid ldquoSituated cognition and the culture of
learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 33
future research further studies may focus on achieving more reliable and valid measurements of
assessing the various stages of reflection such as performing content analysis of journal entries
through coding categories and using both quantitative and qualitative techniques for interpreting
the coded data
7 REFERENCES
[1] DN Lew and HG Schmidt ldquoSelf-reflection and academic performance Is there
a relationshiprdquo Advances in Health Sciences Education vol16 no4 pp 529- 545
October 2011 httpwwwncbinlmnihgovpmcarticlesPMC3167369 [Accessed
March 27 2014]
[2] J Dewey How we think NYDC Heath and Co Publishers 1910 (Available online
httpsarchiveorgstreamhowwethink000838mbppagen11mode2up)
[3] D Boud R Keogh and D Walker (editors) Reflection turning experience into
learning London Kogan Page 1985
[4] JA Moon A handbook of reflective and experiential learning London
RoutledgeFalmer 2005 (Available online fileFFULLPAPER20FOLDER
a_handbook_of_reflective_and_experiential_learning_-_theory_and_practicepdf)
[5] T King ldquoDevelopment of student skills in reflective writingrdquo [Online] Available
httpnursing-midwiferytcdieassetsdirector-staff-edu-devpdfDevelopment-of-
student-Skills-in-Reflective-Writing-TerryKingpdf [Accessed January 13 2014]
[6] FMuir ldquoThe understanding and experience of students tutors and educators
regarding reflection in medical education a qualitative studyrdquo International Journal of
Medical Education vol1 pp 61-67 2010
[7] SS Zimmerman D JB Hanson JE Stube JS Jedlicka and L Fox ldquoUsing the
power of student reflection to enhance professional development The Internet Journal
of Allied Health Sciences and Practice vol5 no 2 2007 [Online] Available
httpijahspnovaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[8] LL Linsley and V A Burrows lsquoWork in progress-Instructor credibility An analysis of
engineering studentsrsquo reflective writing for evidence of attitude shiftsrdquo 37th
ASEEIEEE
Frontiers in Education Conference 10-13 October 2007 Milwaukee WI
Available IEEE Xplore httpwwwieeeorg [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
[9] T C Russo and D J Ford ldquoTeachersrsquo reflection on reflection practicerdquo
Journal of Cognitive Affective Learning vol2 no2 pp 1-12 2006
[10] T Orsquo Connell and J Dyment ldquoReflections on using journals in higher education
A focus group discussion with facultyrdquo Assessment and Evaluation in Higher
Education Vol31 no6 pp 671-691 2206
[11] S Kerka ldquoJournal writing as an adult learning toolrdquo ERIC Clearing House on Adult
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 34
Career and Vocational Education Practical Application Brief No22 pp 1-4
2002[Online] Available httpfilesericedgovfulltextED470782pdf [Accessed Feb
11 2014]
[12] K D Chirema ldquo The use of reflective journals in the promotion of reflection and
learning in post-registration nursing studentsrdquo Nurse Education Todayrdquo Vol 27
No 3 pp 192-202 2007
[13] MDN Lew and H G Schmidt ldquoOnline reflection journals Learning through
assessmentrsquo in Proceedings ascilite Singapore 2007Concise paperLew and Schmidt
[Online] Available httpwwwasciliteorgauconferencessingapore
07procslewpdf [Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[14] P Watton J Collins and J Moon ldquoReflective writing Guidance Notes for
[Online] Available httpwwwexeteracukfchwork- experiencereflective- writing-
guidancepdf [Accessed Jan 20 2014]
[15] J A Moon ldquoLearning journals and logsrdquo in Good Practice in Teaching and
Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK UCD Dublin 2010 [Online]
Available httpwwwucdiet4cmsUCDTLA0035pdf [Accessed January 18 2014]
[16] J A Moon Reflection in Learning and Professional Development London and New
York Routledge Falmer 1999 pp 66-77
[17] Roberts Andrew Reflection in workplace learning A literature review in HEA Centre
for Education in the Built Environment [Online] Available wwwcebeheacademyacuk
[Accessed Feb 24 2015]
[18] R Goldsmith C Reidsema HBeck and D Campbell Perspectives on teaching and
learning engineering design across four universitiesrdquo in 2nd
International Conference on
Design Education 28 June-1 July 2010 University of New South Wales Sydney
Australia Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[19] C Reidsema and P Mort ldquoAssessing reflective writing Analysis of reflective writing
in an engineering design courserdquo vol3 no2 November 30 2009 [Online]
Available fileCUsersITB-53Downloads97-1059-1-PB20(1) pdf [Accessed
Feb 5 2014]
[20] J Lublin ldquoDeep surface and strategic approaches to learningrdquo in Good Practice in
Teaching and Learning Centre for Teaching and Learning UK University College
Dublin 2003 pp1-11
[21] R Goldsmith K Willey and D Boud ldquoHow can writing develop studentsrsquo deep
approaches to learning in the engineering curriculumrdquo in Proceedings of the 2012
AAEE Conference Melbourne Victoria Available httpwwwaaee comau
conferences 2012documentsabstractsaaee2012-submission-63pdf [Accessed Feb
5 2014]
[22] YAllam Pilot extra Credit-incented Collaborative learning and reflection in an
engineering graphics courserdquo Proceedings in 2013 ASEE Southeast Section
Conference Available httpseaseeorgproceedingsASEE2013Papers2013
181PDF [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
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processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
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translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
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Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
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VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
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learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
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college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998
Brunei Darussalam Journal of Technology and Commerce Volume 8 Number 1 December 2014 35
[23] TM Bayles ldquoA reflective writing assignment to engage students in critical
thinkingrdquo in Proceedings of the 120th ASEE Annual Conference and Exposition
American Society for Engineering Education 2013 Available httpwwwengr uky
Edu~aseechedpapers20136811pdf [Accessed Feb 5 2014]
[24] VA Burrows B Mc Neill N F Hubele and L Bellamy ldquo Statistical evidence for
enhanced learning of content through reflective journal writingrdquoJournal of
Engineering Education vol 90 no 4 pp 661-667 Oct 2001
[25] M Farrah ldquoReflective journal writing as an effective technique in the writing
processrdquo An-Najah University J Res (Humanities) vol26 no4 pp997- 1024
2012 [Online] Available httpswwwacademiaedu [Accessed Jan 23 2014]
[26] C Y Shieh ldquoLearning from writing reflective learning journals in a theory-based
translation modulestudentsrsquo perspectivesrdquo The Interpreter and Translator Trainer
vol5 no 2 pp 309-324 [Online] Available wwwllasacuk[Accessed Feb 11 2014]
[27] C Reidsema RGoldsmith and P Mort ldquoEnabling the reflective practitioner in
Engineering design coursesrdquo 2nd
International Conference on Design Education 28
June-1July2010SydneyAustraliaAvailable
httpwwwresearchgatenetpublication247001017_ON_CREATING_CREATI
VE_ENGINEERS [Accessed Mar 27 2014]
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learning Educational Researcher pp32-42 Jan-Feb 1989
[29] A J HerringtonrdquoWriting in academic settings A study of the contexts for writing in two
college chemical engineering coursesrdquo Research in the Teaching of English vol19 no4
pp 331-361 1985
[30] M R Lea and B V Street ldquoStudent writing in higher education An academic
literacies approach Studies in Higher Education vol 23 no 2 pp 157-172 1998