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The boy and the teddy bearThe boy and the teddy bearIlia Gisell Resendiz Cruz February 9, 2009 8:35 AM

Once upon a time in an old world called "Star World" there was a boy named Mati playing with a teddy bear.Then the boy threw the teddy bear.He was really mad because the teddy bear couldn't talk.Sadly the boy decided to look for the bear.While he was looking for the bear he ate a cookie.Then he returned to his bedroom and found the teddy without an arm.He hugged the teddy and cried.Hugging the bear, he stopped crying and remembered when his mum gave him the bear.He decided he wanted to fix his teddy.He thought that without help he couldn't fix the teddy.So he asked his mum to help him and together they fixed the teddy bear.

Looking for something?Looking for something?Luis Antonio Aguayo Miranda February 8, 2009 10:42 PM

Long time ago, so far that I can't even remember, the sun filled the room like a glass of water whit little line of light, the hot room started to be disturbed by the sound of horns coming from the street. Marie Lu opened her eyes and looked for her necklace.She looked under the front department's carpet, but she didn't find it.Hopeless she came back to bed and sat on it, she stood up and marked another day in the calendar by the time she look at the traffic jam through the living room window and a single tear came out from her eyes.She got really confused about not finding her necklace so she decided to remember where she putted it.She remembered the last month dinner and a man putting on her neck the necklace.Suddenly she wakes up and stood up.She looked for the necklace and realized that it was on her little table next the bed right next to the clock.She just took it and looked at the window and a little smile came from her face.

JokebookJokebookJosé Ignacio Alpuche Aguilar February 8, 2009 8:56 PM

During an afternoon in the park, my sister was running when suddenly she found a book.She took the book and turned the front page to see if there was the name of the person who the book belongs.My sister got disappointed because there was no name in the book, so she cried.She took the book and she brought it to our home.When she was on the sofa, she started to read the book.She got surprised because she saw that it wasn’t a simple book, it was a jokes book, so she throw it away.At 2:00 am, she went downstairs and she found the jokes book, and she think that maybe she can put it in the recycle bind of the school.So she took it again and put it in her bag pack, so she could show it to her teacher the next day.The next day. When the teacher read the book, she recommended to my sister to pass in front of the classroom, to read some jokes.So my sister started to reflect about the situation and she thought why not? I can pass in front of the class and read some jokes to my friends to have a little fun.When she finished the reading of the book, many of her friends started to laugh, so she deduce that it would be a great idea to donate the jokes book to the library, so any child can enjoy the jokes.

The weird book and the handsome princeThe weird book and the handsome princePilar Thomas Alonso February 8, 2009 6:54 PM

Once upon a time in a land far away lived a handsome prince that was found a big red book. Suddenly the prince opened the big red book. The prince opened his mouth with a weird look in his eyes. He was really confused and promised to find out what the book really meant. The prince went to the castle library and started to search information about the big red book. The prince returned to his room and found that someone has burned the book. He picked up the burned book and saw that in the burned paper suddenly appear letters. He remembered that when he was youngest his mom told him a story about a big red book. He cant talked with his mom about the big red book because she was dead, he will read what the book said. He felt confused because he doesn’t know who burned the big red book. He though about his mom that she told him she will tell him again the story.

Love is endlessLove is endlessHermann Hoppenstedt Pedrero February 8, 2009 6:37 PM

Yesterday Luis was in the park sitting in a bench. Luis wrote in the bench L & M, love is endless, and I hope so.Luis was crying. He was very sad about it.He decided to go to Michelle’s house and fight for her love.He went to Michelle’s house to tell her sorry.He returned to the park, to the same bench, someone has erased the L & F.He got angry, but he saw the phrase" Love is endless"He remembered two hours ago when he sadly was writing it.He decided to write again L & F in the bench.He wrote it again, but now he was full of happiness.He thought “Michelle is my love, love is my life, and today I'm happy because love is endless."

Memories inside a bookMemories inside a bookGledy María Pereyra Esquivar February 8, 2009 6:24 PM

In the prairie there was a little house full of rooms, but only one was opened and a beautiful girl appeared playing with a nice doll.She threw out the doll and began to run.She had a short dress, flip flops, her expression was shocking, and thousands of things passed over her mind.She began to pull down some books of the furniture and only took a book.She decided to return to the big room.She shut the door and sat down.She opened the book and saw a beautiful flower full of life.She realized that the love to her mother will never brake as the flower.She went out from the room and went to the neighbors’ house.An old lady appeared and opened her arms for the little girl.She knew that her mother's love wouldn't be replaced but, the lady was a really important part of her life.

The princess and the magic mirrorThe princess and the magic mirrorSandra María Garza Maya February 8, 2009 4:13 PM

One hundred years ago, in and unknown Kingdom, lived a beautiful princess that had a magic mirror that showed you what you wanted to see.Suddenly, the princess asked the magic mirror to show her the most beautiful prince on Earth.She almost fainted when she saw the prince in the mirror and she felt so in love with him.She wanted to make him her prince and she said she was not going to stop until she found him and made him her husband. She prepared a bag with all her clothes, food and the magic mirror and started to walk toward the prince’s castle.She realized she didn’t know where the prince lived, so she asked the magic mirror to show her where the prince’s castle was.She became sad because she didn’t know where the place that the magic mirror showed her was.She had a flashback and thought that she had seen that place before.She just needed to remember where that place was and she will soon be marriage to the beautiful prince.Suddenly, she remembered. That place was where she used to go when she was a child. She used to play with an ugly prince and she hated him, so she did his life as hell. He was lo in love with her, but she just made laugh about it. Could that ugly prince be that handsome prince? So, the prince would fall into her arms and they would be married in just few hours.She arrived to the castle ready to fall into the prince’s arms, but her lips made an O when she saw that another princess was on his arms. “You could have been mine, but you treated me so bad that you don’t deserve me. I loved you, but now, I love someone else”. The princess cried all day and she returned to her castle, sad and single.

Dried LifeDried LifeAntonio Borges Cuanalo February 9, 2009 10:28 AM

In an old village, a time ago, in a big, green landscape you could see a nice little house, where Jack, a young native American, lived, gifted with a great mind, so superior he could calculate time and predict weather, not superior in math nor physics, but in natural knowledge. One day Jack went out, watered the plants, cleaned the weed and, finally, went to the roses, he checked the leaves, he revealed a great dry coming, he knew his practice and he was never wrong, he was scared now, he checked again, the same results, he thought, at least, if he couldn't stop it or change it, he could suffer the least, what could he do?, get some water, he thought, but, from where?, the only water was from the rains that fell and he stored, but in a dry season there is no rain, after a while of hard thinking, he sat down and wept, all he knew, all his life, was going to be lost, and there was nothing he could do to prevent it.

Catlike SurpriseCatlike SurpriseLaura Ruiz Zavaleta February 9, 2009 10:04 AM

Some years ago, in a silent rainy night, a blue-eyed girl with long black hair named Carrie, was looking for her cat in the middle of the central park in Mainland with her flashlight. She aimed the flashlight to the bushes, trees, behind the benches, everywhere, but Yumi didn't turn up. Desperate, and with her tiny body shaking of fear, she kept looking for Yumi while the rain became stronger. Despite of her confusion by the drops of water falling strongly on her head, she promised herself she would definitely find her cat no matter what. She searched in every corner of the central park, where she last saw Yumi. As she ran, she realized that the flashlight was out of batteries so she dumped it. She didn't care since it was useless anywaysThen, she remembered that the flashlight had a special whistle that every time Carrie made it sound, Yumi came to see what it was. So she decided no t to dump it. Therefore, she thought, she could find Yumi more easily.In the moment she made it sound, she heard a meow. It was Yumi! Carrie went to where the meow came from and she discovered the reason of the disappearance of Yumi: She had had four beautiful puppies.

Worst Day EverWorst Day EverGonzalo Santibáñez García February 9, 2009 12:20 AM

One day, Crecencio Odoniel IV was playing soccer; he scored 2 goals and won the game 3-1. During the game, he was hurt by player #9 Natividad Hipofito. Crecencio went to the Doctor to check his knee, and he bought a special knee pad to protect his knee in future games. The next week, he went to his soccer game and started to play. Suddenly, the ball hit Crecencio's knee and he began to scream. Crecencio didn't know why he felt that he broke his knee without the knee pad (the good knee). Suddenly, he remembered that he had the knee pad on the wrong knee; he had it on the good knee, so he hurt more his knee. He decided to go to ER for a surgery. He was really sad, because now he only has one leg (ha-ha). He talked with his teammates and explained them that he wouldn't play soccer anymore. And Crecencio Odoniel IV lived happily ever after.

THE END

In the BattlefieldIn the BattlefieldGerardo Orantes Jordan February 8, 2009 11:45 PM

In the Civil war, in the middle of Franklin´s battlefield Sgt. Johnson took the gun. It was hot as hell, not the gun but his heart. He was shaking. He knew what he should do, but he did not know if he wanted to do it. He said “I`m sorry but I have to do it”. Then he putted the gun in General Green`s head. But he couldn`t do it, he knew the General was a great man. He thought for a moment what to do. After hours of thinking about General Green`s fate, he decided to let him go and ordered him not to say a word about it. General Green ran some yards in the darkness of the battlefield, when suddenly Sgt. Johnson took his gun and without shaking, shot General Green and killed him. Sgt. Johnson could not kill General Green, but he was certainly able to kill a man running in the battlefield in a night of war.

True Love :)True Love :)Jennifer Winkhardt February 8, 2009 7:58 PM

The pretty red and expensive dress was sold to the woman a windy but sunny day before her wedding on the towns biggest colored dress market.It suited the attractive bride perfectly.On the wedding day all the guests looked at her with open mouth, overwhelmed by her appearance.The cheeks of the woman almost turned as red as her dress.Then she was walking with her future husband toward the altar while little girls, who were cousins of the bridegroom, were holding the bridal veil.Suddenly the long dress dripped the woman.She fell hard on the ground and the people in the church reacted with a look of surprise.Embarrassed she stood up slowly, looked down her dress and saw that it had a long tear.With a disbelieving look in her eyes she turned around to her future husband while everyone in the church held their breath.The man just smiled at her and said that he will love her forever with or without a tear in her dress. So they got married and lived happily until their death!

A Treasure LostA Treasure LostRoberto Martínez Pinto February 8, 2009 7:55 PM

Long time ago, during a rainstorm in the city of Kansas, a man was searching for his missing daughter. The weather was awful so he decided to look in the cabins. Because she (the girl) wasn't anywhere to be found, her father was very worried because no one saw her in the whole day.The man tried to collect as much information of his daughter as he could. He decided that a search party would be a great idea, because they could cover more ground. He then remembered that his daughter liked to watch her deceased mother tombstone, because it was a symbol of calm and peace.The father remembered his wife, all the good times he enjoyed. A tear ran down his cheek as he felt lonely inside.He ran to the graveyard and found her daughter on her knees crying to the top of her lungs. She ran to her daddy and hugged him.Everything was fine.

Treasure MapTreasure MapJosé Enrique Ruiz Correa February 8, 2009 6:13 PM

Yesterday, during the night, Jessica found a treasure behind the old graveyard. She opened it to discover it was empty. Jessica realized that she was wasting her time and she stopped looking for the treasure. She returned home and started looking for a new job. She went to her sister’s home and asked her if she needs some help with the kids. Her sister said she didn't need any help, so Jessica restarted looking that treasure she had seen on the map. Jessica went again to the graveyard and dug deeper into the place where she found the empty treasure. While she was walking to the graveyard, she remembered that the treasure map wasn’t very clear. She thought that maybe she was digging in the wrong place, so she started digging in other place. She felt stupid trying to found treasures instead of working. She thought that maybe his brother needed some help in the work.

Is Love Strong Enough?Is Love Strong Enough?Merit Gutiérrez Vilchis February 8, 2009 4:29 PM

Five years ago, during a stormy cold black night in the middle of a damp pine forest, a pretty 17-year-old lady wore and old jean jacket. The smell of the jacket reminded her of that handsome guy she was in love with. Her eyes were full of tears when she realized that her love was gone away from her without any explanation.She started to run behind him trying to follow his steps, she needed an explanation. Even though the rain had modified the footprints, she followed them all along the dark forest. She was so desperate that she took the jacket away and threw it in the wet soil.Before that night she used to love that old blue-jean jacket, but now it was only making her feel depressed. He had asked her to wait for him till next weekend and maybe he had a good reason. She stopped running and went back to where the jacket was thrown. While she was walking to her home she tried to make up a good excuse for why he had left her. But everything was puzzling; her love for him was strong and real but waiting for the next weekend seemed endless.

Such a lonely day…and it’s Joe’sSuch a lonely day…and it’s Joe’sLuis Fernando Corzo Fonseca February 8, 2009 5:55 PM

During a dark cloud-wrapped afternoon, in the blue house in front of the park, a bored boy played a wine-colored mahogany wood guitar with the name "Epi" engraved in the headstock. The strings buried in his fingers he played high and low notes on the fret board.Joe's body was way to still and there he was, in a boring Friday afternoon waiting for something amazing to happen.The thought of spending a whole day at home made Joe angry. He knew there was something he could do to even in an afternoon that seem to be doomed to boredom; he was decided to find somewhere to go... something to do.The boy put on his coat, his guitar (in order to have at least some psychological company) and walked out his room door to start his absurd journey. And there he was, walking through the now empty streets of his neighborhood with Epi hanging from his shoulder with the aid of a black strap.After an hour of search, Joe sat on a swing in a park near his neighborhood and started playing a melancholic song. Everything he would have liked to shout, he was expressing through Epi.Joe stopped playing and looked to the sky while he was thinking about the mix of sensations he was feeling.If he couldn't find something to do with his friends, at least he could go home and compose a new song using all the sentimental material he had now...Again, sitting at home, playing the guitar, he swore he wouldn't spend another Friday afternoon bored at home. After 10 minutes of playing, he left the guitar on his bed and stared at his neighbors' house, as he saw the house's windows filled with sad-looking silhouettes.

Freedom for BothFreedom for BothLuis Raquel Cal y Mayor Sayeg February 8, 2009 2:30 PM

Once upon a time in a country far, far away, there was a boy with a big red ball. The ball was never happy with his master and always attempted to run away. Poor boy felt depressed and full of anguish; his blue eyes always full of tears. He decided to keep his ball always on sight so he´ll never lose it. He closed every door, didn´t aloud the ball to be on its own in any circumstances. The ball, completely trapped and angry with his master, started to shout at him. The boy could never imagine all the pain he was causing to the poor boy, all the suffering he was putting his master into, while he was hearing the yelling. Then, the boy started to understand, after days of thinking, that the ball needed freedom. He opened each door, and stopped watching the ball all the time; the ball ran away. So many days and nights full of tears follow the poor boy´s life but just for a while; then, suddenly, everything started going well. Why hadn't he released the ball before?

Little TemptationLittle TemptationDalia Carolina Martínez Cano February 8, 2009 10:21 AM

Two springs ago with the birds singing around, a little girl found a knife half-buried in the mountains. When she grabbed the cold metal, it froze her fingers. Her heart stopped when she felt the power she had in her hands. Although she was confused and overwhelmed she wanted to make justice. So, she started to run toward the trees looking for the person guilty of her best friend’s accident. After a while her conscience stopped her, she was not a bad girl after all, so she threw the knife away. That knife was made to make people’s life easier, not to hurt them; she thought when she saw it on the floor. For a second, she remembered how useful the knife was on Christmas when she could not open her presents. If she could not harm, she decided to inspire people to become better using kindness as her best weapon. After all, she wondered about the situation and how could anger be more than her values. Finally she realized that those were her instincts acting not her and decided not to be so harsh with herself and continued enjoying the spring walking inside the forest.

The Mysterious TreasureThe Mysterious TreasureDaniela Román Zamudio February 8, 2009 8:29 AM

Long time ago, during the afternoon in the marvelous Tec, five students were in a meeting, to discuss about the mysterious treasure. The clues were very challenging, so they decided to begin as soon as possible. By their appearance any one could tell that they started to feel nervous and worried because no one could se what they were doing. Suddenly one of the five friends "John" wanted to steal the treasure. John planed to distract the rest of his friends, so he could have more advantage toward the treasure. He decided to make a fake clue for his friends and in that way he would win all the treasure. The clues were written by someone who had finished his highschool at TEC. they held no meaning for John, neither his four friends with the fake clue. He pondered and realized the damage it was causing to his friends; in that way John proposed not to be a selfish person and tell the truth to his friends about the tracks. When his friends discovered the truth about the false track, they felt a bit annoyed with John but it spared him and see what he had done was not a thing of true friends. John felt betrayed by himself and vowed never again to do such a thing. After all this happening, the five friends worked together, as a team, and after two long hours and difficult challenges, they finally could discover what the mysterious treasure was. when they could finally reach the last track, it took them a great deception because someone else had already discovered the treasure, and the only note they could see was "while discussing all of you I watched it before and I could get you for this treasure, you have to learn to work together and act as true friends and you will be able to accomplish many things in the future" when the four friends saw this note they could actually learned their lesson from that day, their treasure was to learn haw make things all work together as a very strong team, and Best of all, as true friends.

The Arcane WallThe Arcane WallJorge Erik Montes Rivera February 7, 2009 6:22 PM

During a rainy night while everyone was asleep in the middle of an obscure alley near the cemetery a short and thin man covered with black robes lay unconscious against the wall. Suddenly the wall dematerialized and fell down; he was trapped in the wall. Undead goblins used their arcane magic to dissolve the wall to trap another man that would be their ritual’s victim. The man was conscious again and tried to move, but he couldn’t. The man struggled to get out of the magical trap. The cursed wall was strong but his will was stronger. He knew that he could get out of there. The man kept struggling in vain as his hopes went away from him. He gave up; a miracle was the only thing that could save him. When he realized he was going to die there, a feeling of emptiness invaded his body. Then he thought: "I wish I hadn’t made that pact with the goblins."

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