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The 15th Annual The 15th Annual Henry T. Nomura Henry T. Nomura Creative Essay Creative Essay Competition for ESL Competition for ESL Writers Writers Laney College Laney College
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Page 1: The 15th Annual Henry T. Nomura Creative Essay Competition for ESL Writers Laney College Laney College The 15th Annual Henry T. Nomura Creative Essay.

The 15th Annual The 15th Annual Henry T. NomuraHenry T. Nomura

Creative Essay Competition Creative Essay Competition for ESL Writersfor ESL Writers

Laney CollegeLaney College

The 15th Annual The 15th Annual Henry T. NomuraHenry T. Nomura

Creative Essay Competition Creative Essay Competition for ESL Writersfor ESL Writers

Laney CollegeLaney College

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2009 THEMEThe things we leave behind.

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Write an essay describing Write an essay describing something that you left behind something that you left behind and how your life is now and how your life is now affected without it.affected without it.

Write an essay describing Write an essay describing something that you left behind something that you left behind and how your life is now and how your life is now affected without it.affected without it.

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Class FinalistsClass FinalistsBeginning LevelBeginning LevelClass FinalistsClass FinalistsBeginning LevelBeginning LevelJinwen Chen “What I Left Behind When I Came to the U.S.”

Hataiporn Dawson** “My Mother Who I Left Behind”

Denis Gomez-Calderon “My Aunt’s Breakfast”

Yodem Gyamchho “Difficulties and Happiness”

Kimberly Iwamoto “Why Not to Left Behind?”

Rui Li “The Things I Left in China”

Dieu Hien Nguyen “Leaving Behind My Best Brother”

Mai Nguyen “What the Heart Kissed Goodbye”

Thy Nguyen “What I Will Miss Most”

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Class FinalistsClass FinalistsBeginning LevelBeginning LevelClass FinalistsClass FinalistsBeginning LevelBeginning LevelSofia Perlov “What I Leave Behind”

Prince Tse Tse “The Thing I Left in My Home Country that I

Miss the Most”

Minci Xie “My Happy Life and My Dreams in America”

Frank S.H. Xu “A Formula of Life”

Zhanying (Shirlia) Yang “The Job is Important to My Life”

Yaesol Yoon “My Mountain and My Job”

Kumi Xiao* “Keys”

John Zhu “Jade”

Guang Min Wan “My Favorite Book in China”

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Class FinalistsClass FinalistsIntermediate LevelIntermediate LevelClass FinalistsClass FinalistsIntermediate LevelIntermediate LevelNicha Chaikrissadakorn “I Left Myself Behind”

Su Juan Chen “The Memory of My Mother Left Behind in My Country”

Loc Do “Love”

Tram Cao “My Best Friend, Hien”

Daewon Kim “Two Things That I Did Not Bring to America”

Rachael Lam “Friends I Left Behind in Hong Kong”

Seung Yeop Lee* “My Oasis in the Desert”

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Class FinalistsClass FinalistsIntermediate LevelIntermediate LevelClass FinalistsClass FinalistsIntermediate LevelIntermediate LevelLinfang Li** “A Person Whom I am Missing: My Best

Friend”

Na Lin “Glad to Leave One Feeling Named Stress”

Ri Zhao Lu “A Person Whom I Miss”

Diedjiga Medjoudj “The Life I Left Behind”

Tam Nguyen “My Studying Before and After”

Biruk Retta “My Lovely Church”

Eanly Thong “My Self Confidence”

Hong Yee “Leaving Poverty”

Zuri Zhang “Memories of My Father”

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Class FinalistsClass FinalistsAdvanced LevelAdvanced LevelClass FinalistsClass FinalistsAdvanced LevelAdvanced LevelCheung Hong “National Spirit”

Rezak Hadi “My Diamond”

Nanci Ignacio “A Treasure I Left Behind”

Ke (Sara) Kim “Beyond Yearning”

Min Woo Kong “My Behind Story”

Kieu Lu** “Leaving Me Behind”

Mai Nhu Ly “Is It Still Available?”

Nancy Matzauk “My Cousin”

Jeanne Mulgodi “Something I Left Behind When I Moved to the U.S.”

Baolin Su “Father, Mother, I Love You”

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On a windy evening, my heart is wandering like drifting clouds towards my hometown. As the hazy moon in the spring night becomes pale and the warm wind begins to blow, I recall the smell of my hometown’s ocean. I also recall the fragrance of spring flowers along the wooden fence of my old house. When this spring is over, the flowers will fall in the alley in front of my old house. I also recall the splendor of green hills on Dragonhead Mountain and see many layers of white foam on the long beach in my hometown. (Ke Kim)

Now, I am happy that I left the feeling which made me feel uncomfortable and stressed. I can have a free selective right to live my own life. Here, no one will despise you even though you aren’t rich, or you don’t graduate from a famous university. I can choose what I need, what I like, and what I want. Here I can have the live I really want to have – a stress-free life. (Na Lin)

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Second Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place Winner

Beginning Level

Hataiporn Dawson  

Beginning Level

Hataiporn Dawson  

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Second Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place Winner

Intermediate Level

Linfang Li  

Intermediate Level

Linfang Li  

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Second Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place WinnerSecond Place Winner

Advanced Level

Kieu Lu  

Advanced Level

Kieu Lu  

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I missed the smell of the incense being shaken by a priest all around the church……..I miss the people who were devoted to their faith gathered there for three to four hours to pray…….I miss the way they dressed in white traditional handmade shawls to keep them warm in the morning……. I miss the holy water that we drank and was also sprinkled on our heads. (Biruk Retta)

During the fall, I could collect chestnuts and acorns. During the winter, it was beautiful because of snowfall. After the snowfall, there was snow that looked like flowers on the branches. (Yaesol Yoon)

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

Beginning Level

Kumi Xiao   

Beginning Level

Kumi Xiao   

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

Keys       

I left my important mementos in my country, my old house keys.  They seemed to have magic.  In my opinion, those keys meant that my family always loved me.  I knew that I had to go home when I saw those keys after I finished classes.  I knew that I had arrived home when I took out my keys at the front door of the house.  I used to see my parents’ and my sister's smiles, and they would say, "Welcome home," when I used those keys to open the door.

Keys       

I left my important mementos in my country, my old house keys.  They seemed to have magic.  In my opinion, those keys meant that my family always loved me.  I knew that I had to go home when I saw those keys after I finished classes.  I knew that I had arrived home when I took out my keys at the front door of the house.  I used to see my parents’ and my sister's smiles, and they would say, "Welcome home," when I used those keys to open the door.

Kumi Xiao

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

Intermediate Level

Seung Yeop Lee   

Intermediate Level

Seung Yeop Lee   

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

       After a dull fouteeen hour flight, I finally arrived at the San

Francisco International Airport. The sun was shining as the cool, refreshing breeze brushed against my face. I came to America with the thought that I would be able to start and lead a different life than the one I had before in Korea, my home country. Nevertheless, I was ultimately here in America, and anticipated the freedom of being a college student living in America, "the land of opportunity,” without anyone to tell me what to do, to pressure me on how I should live my life. On the other hand, prior to my arrival, I felt uneasy and unconfident that I would not be able to be responsible for myself without the help of anyone else. Most importantly, before I came here, I left many precious things behind: my family, my friends, and my life back home which brought anxiety and concern, because it finally hit me that living in America meant that no one was going to help me and I was going to have to be more self-reliant than ever before.

       After a dull fouteeen hour flight, I finally arrived at the San

Francisco International Airport. The sun was shining as the cool, refreshing breeze brushed against my face. I came to America with the thought that I would be able to start and lead a different life than the one I had before in Korea, my home country. Nevertheless, I was ultimately here in America, and anticipated the freedom of being a college student living in America, "the land of opportunity,” without anyone to tell me what to do, to pressure me on how I should live my life. On the other hand, prior to my arrival, I felt uneasy and unconfident that I would not be able to be responsible for myself without the help of anyone else. Most importantly, before I came here, I left many precious things behind: my family, my friends, and my life back home which brought anxiety and concern, because it finally hit me that living in America meant that no one was going to help me and I was going to have to be more self-reliant than ever before.

Seung Yeop Lee

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

Advanced Level

Xiali  Liang   

Advanced Level

Xiali  Liang   

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First Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place WinnerFirst Place Winner

Escape from PollutionWhen I was in Guangzhou, the bad air meant endless cleaning, repeating illness

and frequent depression. Whenever I came home from work, I was wrapped up with dust. My hair was oily with dirt, and I had to use shampoo twice to wash it since the first time usually was gray and had no bubbles. My face was even worse. If I used some paper towel to clean it, the paper towel would turn gray.

Since the dirt was all over the environment, the sky was no longer blue. It became an unmovable cloud, which was huge enough to press down the whole city. In the morning, the sun just showed like a halo, and stars were embedded at night. Staying in this blurred dusky city, I always felt lazy, lethargic and blue.

By comparison, without the air pollution, my life in California is totally different. Although California is also a thriving place which has a lot of cars and factories, the government places importance on how to protect our surroundings. Moreover, the sea breeze helps blow out tons of pollutants. My hair is not greasy any more, and it keeps delicate and graceful all day long. When I touch it, it gently slides down from my hand. In addition, the facial tissues remain white after I wipe my face, for there is not much dirt on them.

Everybody is in a cheerful mood, and is full of energy, especially me, for I am able to see light and hope in front.

Escape from PollutionWhen I was in Guangzhou, the bad air meant endless cleaning, repeating illness

and frequent depression. Whenever I came home from work, I was wrapped up with dust. My hair was oily with dirt, and I had to use shampoo twice to wash it since the first time usually was gray and had no bubbles. My face was even worse. If I used some paper towel to clean it, the paper towel would turn gray.

Since the dirt was all over the environment, the sky was no longer blue. It became an unmovable cloud, which was huge enough to press down the whole city. In the morning, the sun just showed like a halo, and stars were embedded at night. Staying in this blurred dusky city, I always felt lazy, lethargic and blue.

By comparison, without the air pollution, my life in California is totally different. Although California is also a thriving place which has a lot of cars and factories, the government places importance on how to protect our surroundings. Moreover, the sea breeze helps blow out tons of pollutants. My hair is not greasy any more, and it keeps delicate and graceful all day long. When I touch it, it gently slides down from my hand. In addition, the facial tissues remain white after I wipe my face, for there is not much dirt on them.

Everybody is in a cheerful mood, and is full of energy, especially me, for I am able to see light and hope in front.

Xiali  Liang  

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Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Dr. Frank Chong, Dr. Frank Chong,

President, Laney CollegePresident, Laney College

Jim Cave, Jim Cave,

Theater DepartmentTheater Department

Nancy Lee, Nancy Lee,

Instructional MediaInstructional Media

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Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…The Associated students of The Associated students of

Laney CollegeLaney College

The Peralta Colleges FoundationThe Peralta Colleges Foundation

The Family of The Family of

Mr. Henry T. NomuraMr. Henry T. Nomura

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Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…Special Thanks To…You!You!

Thank you for joining us today.Thank you for joining us today.


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