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1 Translation of " The Pathway to Excellence " A Complementary Requirement for Graduation at Professional Graduate Diploma in Translation Translated by: Reem AbuRezeq Manar Obaid Supervised by: Dr. Alaa al-Ghoul
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Translation of

"The Pathway to Excellence "

A Complementary Requirement for Graduation at Professional

Graduate Diploma in Translation

Translated by:

Reem AbuRezeq

Manar Obaid

Supervised by:

Dr. Alaa al-Ghoul

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:Outline -1

Project Cover Page 1-

Abstract 2-

3-Method of translation

4-Project Justification

Methodology 5-

(Source text (Arabic 6-

Target text (English) 7-

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: Abstract -2

The subject of the project is a basic and real material which is entitled “The Pathway

to Excellence”. The writer and the lecturer Ibrahim Elfiky expresses in his book the

key secrets to the success. Also , he wants to help people by teaching them the top

morals and skills to be distinguished in their life . The subject text is designed into

chapters and the text function as mentor’s guide for the chapters with standard

structure , tips, and recommendations for people . This project is trial and attempt

to perform professional translation.

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ethod of TranslationM -3

“Semantic Approach” is a good method to translate such an educational and moral

text as it requires maintaining the level of clarity and simplicity of thoughts and

expressions. The source text uses a simple and friendly language by using dialogue in

some situations ; it sounds if the writer were talking to the reader, though

maintaining the level of a academic diction in place, so it is better to apply “semantic

approach” where the form and the content of the message are equally important .

The translator try to convey the message clear and meaningful as written in the

source language . Moreover, translator try to maintain the simple sense of the

language.

Justification Project -4

Translation of this project has many goals such as:

.1- To build up the self-confidence of the people

. 2- To enhance and strengthen the side of good manners

. 3- To make clear-cut decision to achieve the goal

4- To be in the safe zone by closing to Allah Almighty.

. 5- To enhance motivation with the person

. 6- To be distinguished in your life

. 7- To put your trust in Allah

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:Methodology -5

Translation of the text was done through methodology outlined hereunder:

.Reading the chapters & review the text to be translated 1-

.2-Decide the method of translation to be applied

.3-Perform Arabic-English draft translation adopting “semantic approach"

.4-Perform proofreading

.5-Receive supervisor’s recommendations

6. Edit the draft translation & perform the final translation.

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Supervised by: Dr. Alaa N. El Ghoul

Translated by: Reem Abu Rezeq & Manar Obied

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Dedication

This book is

dedicated to both my

Mother and my

wife, Amal Al-Fiky

may Allah be Glory

to Him, saves their

souls and accept

their in His heavens

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My thanks go to

8who have

contributed in

accomplishing this

book, either from

near or far, may

Allah grant them all

the best.

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Introduction

Character develops over time. Many think that much of a person's

character is formed early in life. However, we do not know exactly how

much or how early character develops. But, it is safe to claim that

character does not change quickly. A person's observable behavior is an

indication of his/ her character. This behavior can be strong or weak,

good or bad. A person with strong character shows drive, energy,

determination, self-discipline, willpower, and nerve. He sees what he

wants and goes after it. He attracts followers. On the other hand, a

person with weak character shows none of these traits. He does not

know what he wants. His traits are disorganized, he vacillates and is

inconsistent. He will attract no followers

Purpose:

It's noticed that most previous projects which were translated by the

students focused on four main domains: Jerusalem, refugees, siege and

the last war on Gaza. Therefore, we decided to translate this valuable

book " The Pathway to Excellence" written by Abrahim AL-Fiki since we

know that excellence is acquired not born innately. All along, the book

shows the importance of the role of Islamic religion in building up the

personality of the individual that leads to achieve his goals, hopes and

aspirations through quoting some verses from the Qur'an and showing

some steps to follow that Invalidate the claims of the infidels and the

polytheists who accuse Islam as a retroactive religion that reactionary

impair the rights of individuals. On the whole, most of us have done

things we're not proud of; things we hope don't come back to haunt us

later, this may be because of the feeling of quilt, shame, fear and

embarrassment that may consistently interfere with everything we do

and diminish any sense of satisfaction we would have gained from our

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activities, I found that reading this book can create a sense of inner pride

about who we are and what we do. It makes us feel confident, happy,

focused and motivates us higher and higher levels of attainment as well

as provide the determination to attempt bigger projects that we might

have avoided before. In a nutshell, reading the book helps us discover

who we are and learn to be that person as effectively and sincerely as

we can in every moment in our life.

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And say

( Muhammad, peace

be upon Him)" Do

deeds! Allah will see

your deeds, and ( so

will) His messenger

and the believers.

And you will be

brought back to the

All-Knower of the

unseen and the seen.

Then he will inform

you of what you used

to do."

At-Taubah, ( The Repentance ), 105

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Part1:

Translated by: Reem Abu Rezeq

I wonder…. What is the reason

behind making some people

excellent while others are not?!

Some people are successful while

others are not?! Also, you can

find one who lives their life

better, makes their dreams come

true, and gets their goals

achieved while others are not?!

Do not the people who lives their

life in unpreferable way and don't

realise their dreams or goals

come true wouldn't like to be

happy or excellent?! Of course

not… so what is the difference

between them?!

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Since Adam, peace be upon him,

was created, human beings all

over the world are united in the

following four things:

1- The materials: the five

senses.

2- The time: 1440 minute and

34 hours a day.

3- Intellect: All people are

united in thinking; Allah

granted us the brain, and

the ability of thinking and

analyzing.

4- The energy which comes

out as a result of this

thinking, logic, and

analysis.

What is the reason that makes

some people distinct while others

are not as long as they all have

these things?! And as long as they

are effected by the time, place,

material and the energy, why are

there some people who are

excellent while others are not?!

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The reason for these

questions is very simple; the

excellent person makes good

use of his materials, time,

thinking, and energy to be

excellent. But does it mean

that the other person dosen't

like to be excellent?! Of

course not; he doesn't know

that what he is doing can't

make him/her reaches his/her

goals. S/he does only deeds

which can't cause happiness.

It is possible to find a student

who is careless about study or he

may don't go to school at all. On

the other hand, you may also find

a worker who doesn't achieve his

deeds properly in a way that

satisfies Allah.

You will find him complain,

compare himself to others who

have the bliss, or criticize an

excellent person.

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The excellent person is the one

who benefits from materials his

time, thought, abilities and

energy which makes him special.

The excellent person is the one

who thinks immediately when a

problem occurs and always

accepts gifts from Allah" Glory to

Him". But the indistinct person,

on the other hand, is constantly

spiteful, denying everything he

has, and never satisfied with

what Allah has gifted him.

Satisfaction here means that a

person is satisfied with things

gifted to him by Allah "Glory to

Him". Thus, it starts from here till

he makes progress. This reminds

me of a little young man who is

not satisfied about his family, the

quarter where he lives, and life as

a whole.

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His life was a series of troubles

and problems but something

inside him always says," you are a

distinct person". But

unfortunately he doesn't know

where excellence is and how it is

achieved.

Thus, once, he was walking on

the beach where a man stroked

his hand gently on the shoulder

of the young man. The young

man turned himself to The man

who was one of the his family

and said," I'm so upset" the man

replied," we all know that your

life is full of troubles and

worries." The young man said,"

I'm not satisfied with myself and I

don't know what to do. But all I

know is that one day I could be

privileged. Otherwise, why those

people have succeeded in their

social, personal, scientific,

financial and marital life while I

haven't?!

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Why are opulent men have all

those wealth while I don't?! I

know I could succeed but what I

need is a person to guide me to

excellence."

The man looked at the guy and

said," everyone is distinct

because Allah " Glory to Him"

created us as distinct since He

says in the holy Quran," verily,

We created man in the best

stature ( mould)." At-tin ( The

Fig), verse 4.

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Because of this Allah has subdued

both the sky and the earth and

what found between them to us.

He says," See you not ( O men )

that Allah has subjected for you

whatsoever is in the heavens and

whatsoever is in the earth, and

has completed and perfected His

Graces upon you, ( both)

apparent ( i.e. Islamic

Monotheism, and the lawful

pleasures of this world, including

health, good looks, etc.) and

hidden { i.e. One's Faith in Allah (

of Islamic Monotheism )

knowledge, wisdom, guidance for

doing righteous deeds, and also

the pleasures}? Yet of mankind is

he who disputes about Allah

without knowledge or guidance

or Book giving light!!" Lugman,

verse 20.

But these are forgotten when it

comes to the life struggle.

Although we need to do things,

most of us do nothing to achieve

their desires.

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The man came nearer to the

young man, looking directly in his

eyes and said," Oh, Son, the

pathway to excellence is exist but

we couldn't see it therefore I'll

give you a hand Inshallah. I know

a man who can guide you to the

right way towards excellence and

success called " The Wise Man"

but make sure that you will face

more troubles.

The young man replied at once ,"

I'm ready to do everything that

makes me reach excellence. The

man said," the wise man lives at

the top of a mountain, so you

can't reach there unless you

walk".

The young man said," I'll walk,

climb the mountain and challenge

the difficulties till I reach him".

The man said," he is too far so

you have to travel to him". The

young man said," I'm ready to

travel to him". The man said,"

this will cost you much".

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The young man said," I'll save no

effort to reach the wise man".

The man described the place

where the wise man lives. It was

miles away, need to afford the

hardship that might face him and

the required money and abilities

in order to travel by plane in

addition to planning. " I know it

is not easy but the mission

deserves this hardship in order

to reach the wise man to achieve

excellence" said the young man.

The man realized that the young

man is honest because he saw his

eyes flaming to meet the wise

man. The young man didn't

believe that finally he would find

his way and meet the wise man

who is going to help him reach

the pathway to excellence.

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The young man thanked the man

a lot to give him this precious

opportunity and show him the

way to excellence.

The young man was thinking

nightlong what he should do to

let that happen since he needs a

lot of money.

He decided to meet the wise

man in few months; therefore, he

sent him a letter explaining that

he wanted to meet him, which

was already accepted by the wise

man. The young man spent no

effort to make this come true, so

he worked day and night to get

the money needed for the

journey. He worked as a cleaner

of desks and chairs and as a

guard nightlong too. He didn't

waste time at all. In addition, he

worked hard to get success and

have his certificate.

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When he achieved his work and

got success and had his certificate

in his hand, he got a lot of

money. At this time, he didn't

believe that he had the plane

ticket and would travel to meet

the wise man whom he had ever

dreamed of.

When he boarded the plane, he

shut his eyes, dreamed of being

excellent and felt that he is on his

way to excellece whereupon he

opened his eyes, looked out, saw

clouds, and was absorbed by the

outside scenery then speculated

how Allah glory to Him helped

him to get there. The pilot

announced that the plane arrived

safely. The young man didn't

believe that he reached the place

where he would meet the wise

man who would help him. Hastily,

he got off the plane and got a

taxi, but he didn't have enough

money.

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When he reached the mountain,

he was shocked because it was

very huge and massive which

would take him a day to climb

and reach the top of the

mountain But he didn't waste his

time. He started to climb the

mountain carrying his bag full of

all his belongings and after a hard

day he could get there where he

saw a small house. He ran to the

door at time He quickly didn’t

believe that he reached the wise

man and within few minutes he

would meet him face to face.

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Upon knocking the door, he saw

an eighty-years- old woman. She

looked at him and said," who are

you?! He answered," I have a

former meeting with the wise

man, I am the young man who

sent him a message ask him a

meeting for awhile." She said,"

you are too late, son." he

responded immediately," I'm not

late, I came in time." She said,"

the wise man doesn't stay in the

same place for more than a

month and he had already stayed

with us for a month and a half so

you have to go back and return

after a month from now but

make sure not to be late."

The young man looked at her

with painfully for losing the

opportunity he had waited for

along time. He was so sad and

upset but he had no choice;

therefore, he got down from the

mountain and returned home.

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Now, what should he do he is a

bit broke and has no money?!

He began to lose hope again. But

a voice came out from inside and

said," don't feel despaired, there

is no life with despair and vice

versa." Thence, he started to

convince himself to do it again

and he already did. He worked

day and night, didn't waste his

time till time had come to meet

the wise man.

Consequently, he gathered

money needed for the journey,

got onto the plane, and repeated

the same hardship he faced at

the first trip. He was spurred by

interest and hope and reached

them in time. He started to climb

the mountain again carrying his

bag on his back. He knocked the

door which was opened by the

same old woman who said, " you

are too late.

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The wise man never stay at the

same place more than a month

and he had stayed here for along

time but you are too late."

The young man told her," but I

sent you a message told you

about the exact time of my

arrival." The old woman told

him," but you are too late, and

the wise man never waits. So, you

have to comeback next month."

The young man said," it is

impossible for that man to be

wise; he always breaks the

promise and never sticks to time.

But he neither respects people

nor their time; he goes whenever

he wants while I send him a

message so what shall I do?! And

what am I expected to do?! "

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The young man said that while he

was looking to the old woman

and wondering what he should

do now. Calmly, the old woman

told the young man," you may

get angry, sad, and nervous but

that would never work so you

have to come back and think

about it and come in time." Then

she closed the door and left him.

The young man so angrily

returned, had no money, decided

not to come back again; if he

returns next time, the matter will

be repeated again.

He remained in this situation

suffering psychologically for a

week, didn't talk with anyone and

refused to allow anyone to meet

him regardless whoever he was.

He kept weeping nightlong. After

deeply thinking, he decided to try

the attempt again. He worked

day and night again, never

wasted time till he got a lot of

money, traveled, and climbed the

mountain again.

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He knocked the door again.

Surprisingly, he saw the same

woman who told him that he was

four hours late the matter that

made him unable to meet the

wise man. He said angrily," it's

impossible, this man couldn't

have a bit of wisdom at all."

She said," there is no reason for

cursing." He said," I have to do

that; he hasn't a bit of sensation

for people." She said," you have

no choice but to return and if you

decided to come back make sure

to come before the exact time in

order to wait and meet him." He

noticed that this time the old

woman ordered him to return

but she showed him the way,

guided him, and gave him a ray of

hope.

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The young man returned and

started to work harder night and

day since the first day. He

collected the money, traveled by

the train, climbed the mountain

as usual, knocked the door a

week before the limited time. He

stayed outdoor in the lonely

place for a week.

After a week, the wise man

crossed in front of his eyes so the

young man jogged to talk to him.

He was stopped by the old

woman who said," do you think

that you are the only one who

waits the wise man?!! You have

to take your turn." He stayed in

his place on the mountain for

another four hours.

After waiting him for along time,

the young man shut his eyes and

started crying keenly.

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Suddenly, a hand stroked his

shoulders gently as if it is a hand

full of wisdom. The young man

opened his eyes and looked

around, it was the wise man

himself. All the troubles,

difficulties and worries the guy

faced had gone away once he

saw the wise man in front of

himself which is considered as a

human nature who always says,"

I've got tired in this way, but now

I deserve this success.

Whereupon, the wise man said to

the young man," tell me man..

what do you want? The young

man answered," I've got tired and

afford the toils." The wise man

said," I know that." The young

man said," I want you to teach

me how the way to excellence is."

The wise man said," look around

you, you are in the excellence

pathway but you don't realize

that you are distinct and already

in the excellence pathway."

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Then he told him," at the first

time of your coming her did you

plan?" The young man

answered," yes" then the wise

man said," did you think and

work?" the young man

answered," certainly". The wise

man said," did you collect

money?! He answered," yes" the

wise man asked," do you have a

vision?" he said," yes" the wise

man asked," and you got here by

a plane?" he answered," of

course" the wise man said," and

you came to a country you don't

know about and expecting

something to happen?" the

young man said, "yes" the wise

man said," would you find

another mean if you didn't find a

plane?!" the young man said,"

yes" the wise man said," and if

you didn't find a car to drive you

to here would you come on

foot?!"

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the young man said," yes" then

the wise man asked the young

man," don't you know where to

go when climbing the

mountain?!" the young man

said," absolutely" the wise man

completed and asked the young

man," how was your feeling when

you arrived here and returned ?!"

the young man said," I felt such a

total failure". Then the wise man

told him," did you let yourself be

controlled by your failure" the

young man answered, " of course

not" then the wise man asked

him," so what did you do?!"

the young man replied," at first, I

was so angry but I thought and

calmed down then worked again,

collected money and decided to

see you regardless how much it

cost me".

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The wise man said," when you

came here again , how was your

feeling?!" the young man said," I

was angrier than before, felt sad

and depressed which lasted for a

while that I did nothing. But I

came back to work harder with a

great decision to meet you by all

means. So, I gathered money,

traveled to you. I had rare

possibility to meet you and didn't

meet you. But this time I found

the door of hope opened again in

my face which is to come earlier

than the exact time. When I came

earlier and stayed outdoor for a

week I said to myself, there is no

doubt; I will see you but I'm a

human. Sometimes, I feel

dispirited.

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I was crying bitterly and closing

my eyes when feeling extreme

sadness but I closed my eyes and

went ahead to Allah, Glory to

Him, and said," My God" and

remembered His words when he

says," We shall not make the

reward of anyone who does his (

righteous ) deeds in the most

perfect manner to be lost ". Al-

Kahf, The Cave, verse 30.

I've done a good job since I came

here and finally found your palm

stroking my shoulder gently

which made me notice something

very important that Allah is

around us and nearer to us more

than we imagine. He is the

listener and the Answerer tor the

appeals"

The wise man told the young

man," all what you have

mentioned above is the pathway

to excellence.

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You are as others who are really

in their way to excellence but

they don't realize that. They are

as same as those who live in bliss

but on the other hand they waste

their times in searching

happiness or as who lives in

success and still seek it."

He added," Son, as I told you

before what you have actually

said is the pathway to excellence

but I'm just going to arrange it for

you so that you could move from

one side to another tractability

and easily in order to make

excellence. Because of your

commitment and persistence I

will help you reach the excellence

pathway so let's go."

The wise man looked directly to

the young man and said," reasons

is the first thing to start getting in

the excellence pathway, then

asked him, "what do you want?!"

the young man said, "I want to be

special, distinct and excellent"

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the wise man said," this is a

general message. People all over

the world need to be special but

what is your vision?!" the young

man asked him," what do you

mean by vision?!" the wise man

said," it is the end of your way so

what is your vision and the end of

the road you are treading?!" the

young man answered," I want to

be special." The wise man told

him," I heard this word before

and if it is repeated I will leave

you alone. Now tell me exactly

about your vision, what do you

want to be?!" the young man

replied," I've made up my mind

to found a special firm." The wise

man asked him," which field will

this firm serves?! He answered,"

electronics field".

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The wise man asked, "Why??"

the young man answered,"

because the world is getting

more advanced in the scientific

development, so I want to be a

part of that world, and I want to

be special." The wise man said,"

Ok, Its your vision, but how many

years will it take to come true?"

The young man said," After five

years." The wise man asked,"

What will you do during these 5

years? at the end of these 5

years, your vision should have

been come true."

The wise man started to explain

for the guy the differences

between the vision, goal, and

continuous goal, and said to

him," Listen to me young man to

know what the difference

between the vision and the goal

is; a lot of people think that the

vision and the goal are same, but

the goal is a part of the vision.

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i.e. The vision is the end of the

road whereas most people look

at the end as it is the goal

therefore the young man felt

disappointment when compared

between what he is now and

what he wants to be. He felt

disappointment because the road

is too long , "but it is the right

road I want you to reach now."

said the wise man.

The vision is the end of the goal

which is to have the company you

want but the goal is the first

stage which will lead you to the

second stage.

"The first pathway to excellence

is to know the vision and divide it

to goals , every goal leads to the

next one, and every goal leads

you to the vision. so, What is your

vision again?", said the wise man.

The young man said, "To own one

of Dr. Niabs companies."

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The wise man said, "What is the

first goal?"

The young man replied, "I'm

going to study everything about

computer."

Then the wise man asked him,

"What is the second one?"

The young man answered, "to

learn languages."

The wise man asked," Why

languages?"

The young man said, "because

language worths a man and

makes people closer."

The wise man said, "In this case

you should learn communication

skills." "Now you learned

electronics and languages, What

will you do after that?", the wise

man asked.

The young man said," I will learn

how to communicate with

people."

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The wise man asked," Why?"

The young man replied," To

interact with people and learn

the best ways for selling."

"And after that?", asked the wise

man.

The young man said," I will learn

marketing."

The wise man asked," Why

marketing?"

The young man said, " because I

don’t know how to market these

products to people."

"And what next?", said the wise

man.

The young man said, "I will learn

sales."

"And what next?", asked the wise

man.

The young man said, "Customer

service."

The wise man said," What do you

call all that?"

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The young man said, "Interest."

The wise man said, "So your first

goal according to your vision is to

know everything about

electronics. Isn't it?! The young

man said," yes"

The wise man asked, "Does that

goal serve your vision?"

The young man said, "yes."

The wise man asked, "where will

this goal take you?"

The young man answered, "to

learn languages"

The wise man asked, " Does it

serve your vision?"

The young man answered, "Yes"

As we see, The first goal serves

both the second one and the

vision too, therefore all goals lead

to the vision which consists of

grades and each grade takes you

to the next one.

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This is called the pathway to

excellence but in a developed

way.

It is a developmental process in

which everything leads you to the

next one and serves the basic

vision. This is your pathway to

excellence, so you have to start

from here and when you start

from here send me a message to

reassure me and I will send you a

message telling you what is the

next stage.

Till this moment, the young man

doesn’t believe that he started

the pathway to excellence. Then

he immediately returned to his

homeland and got a pen and

paper and started to set a plan

that after five years, the first

vision will have been achieved so

that he could be the owner of the

biggest electronics company.

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Consequently, the first goal today

is to learn everything about

electronics.

The young man started to learn

everything about electronics, do

researches, and look for existing

electronics companies and their

numbers too. He started visiting

and examining them.

Finally he decided to learn in one

of these companies. During this

time he logged in the internet

and got more information. He

started to be efficient to establish

his own company; he acquired

enough knowledge and skill,

therefore he became professional

in electronics domain.

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Then, he started to study foreign

languages. Next, he felt that

there is a hope; the process

became more developed which

takes him from a place to

another. He became able to

accomplish his work. It is already

known that when a person

accomplishes his work s/he feels

a powerful energy which drives

him/ her to accomplish more and

more deeds; when s/he

accomplishes it, his/her self-

esteem will increase and improve

his/her self-image so that he

could accomplish more duties.

The young man started with

electronics, languages, and

communication skills in

succession to be good with

himself and with others. He

found that every goal takes him

to the next one, then he started

to learn self control in order to

face any kind of challenges.

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He did all that as time passes

quickly. The five years passed, the

young man collected the money,

worked hard, and struggled till his

foundation had been established.

He prepared an inauguration for

it, and invite a lot of people to

attend there. But after two

months, the company failed

which off course, was out of his

expectation at all. He has done

everything and adopted every

reason. He felt exhausted. He

planned, executed, tolerated,

abided and determined, and had

skills to do all of these. He

wondered what the reason is

behind that excessive failure

although he did all of necessary

duties.

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He hurried to the plane, returned

back to the wise man and the

same circumstances happened to

him; he reached late and didn't

find the man and the same thing

happen four times till he meet

him finally.

The wise man said : what

happened?

He replied, "what you have said

went in vain "

The wise man asked ," what have

you done?

He said," I identified the vision,

planned the objectives, executed

it, abided by and determined, and

accomplished all the wanted

objectives.

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I started working on the company

and prepared a huge

inauguration for it and designed a

wonderful marketing plan. Also I

expended a lot of money in

advertisement and appointed

people in public relations stuff

and did everything necessary to

success

I adopted all reasons but I didn’t

reach success so I wonder what's

the reason behind it? "

The wise man looked at him in a

quiet smile and said, "Young man,

you took all reasons, was

fascinated to the causers and

didn't go back to the main

causers therefore you were

perished.

The young man looked at him

and said," you didn't told me

about this before".

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The wise man said," you said a

sentence before that I liked it

most which is Allah is the

responder to prayers. So, you

prayed and found me helped you.

But when you went back you

made the same mistake that

general people made. They think

that reasons only benefit them a

lot so you have to know very well

that Allah says," when you have

taken a decision put you trust in

Allah" Al-'Imran ( The Family of

Imran 159)

The man looked at the wise man,

crying and said," I don’t know

how I can apologize to you". The

wise man replied ," don’t do so,

Allah is near and listens to you

and He puts you in this situation

and make sure to remind the

righteous speech of Allah when

he says, " We shall not make the

reward of anyone who does his

(righteous) deeds in the most

perfect manner to be lost". Al-

kahf ( the cave 30)

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The young man said," I'm sorry"

I made a mistake"

The wise man said,"

contrariwise, you didn't fail, but

you lost an important thing and

it's a necessary way that leads

you to success.

The young man said," what are

the roots of success?! And what

are the distinction bases?! How

can I get it?!" The wise man said,"

you fell in the same mistakes

most people make. i.e. You

walked in the excellence pathway

without recognition, asked me for

the excellence pathway and I

already told you about. You

wanted to be a distinguished one

so I asked you what do you

want?! And you said," I'd like to

have a company specialized in

electronic and so you have

learned linguistics and

communication skills. After that,

you realized your objectives and

reached the vision.

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were you self- controlled when

you opened your own company

and failed? The young man said,"

no".

Then, the wise man asked "were

you connected to yourself very

well?"

The young man said," No" .Then

wise man asked him," what about

language you have learned?" He

said" unfavorably"

the wise man said," you used

what you've learned against

yourself. "

Whoever is fascinated to

reasons, perished of the same

thing!

Then he got out to the world

envenoming, comparing,

blaming, doubting

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And forgetting the speech of

Allah when He says, "Allah will

not change the ( good) condition

of a people as long as they do not

change their state ( of goodness)

themselves( by committing sin

and by being ungrateful and

disobedient to Allah" Ar-Ra'd (

The Thunder) 11

we threw ourselves in peril

although you follow the reasons

but most people make the same

mistake. Therefore, you find most

people follow the same way but

forget the reasons' causer."

" Son, let's start from the

beginning and make sure you are

not going to start from the

beginning. You have already

adopted the reasons and they are

still in your mind.

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But unfortunately you forgot an

important thing which is to

obtain success, you have to pass

through obstacles; failure, is the

beginning of success while

troubles are the beginning of

relief simply as the night before

light therefore so you can realize

only the sweetness after bitter

moments and the reverse is

true." Said, the wise man.

"How shall I start? I know how to

execute, plan, be flexible, abide

by and insist on reaching my

object so what shall I do now?"

the young man asked. The wise

man looked at him smiling and

said, "Eventually, you asked the

proper question".

And this is the first step to be a

distinguished one. The first root

among the roots of excellence is

to strengthen yourself in

relevance to Allah.

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Part 2: Translated by: Manar

Obeid

*Connection with Allah::

How great this stability and

tranquillity when connected with

Allah Almighty and feeling free

and no worship but for Allah.

Connection with Allah and

Adherence to His orders and

prohibitions in every movement

makes one a model for the family

and society. Then, he relishes the

true pleasure, that is the relishing

of faith(Iman) as the Messenger

of Allah said, pleased will be the

one who relish the flavour of

faith (Iman), who admits Allah as

Lord, Islam as the code of life

and with Muhammad as the

messenger of Allah .”(Muslim)."

Connection with Allah implies

pillars and the first one to connect

with Allah is :

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Tolerance:

which means to be tolerant with

people, otherwise you carry

malignancy, anger, and suspicion

in your heart. "you will find

yourself having a negative power

without any reason at all. “How

do I forgive?! My father used to

hit me without any reason, my

mother always antagonized and

abandoned me, and my brothers

were laughing at me, how can I

forgive them?!” The young man

said “how do you feel by saying

that?”, The wise man said “I feel

a negative energy “The young

man said . “Is this a way to the

excellence ?!” the wise man said

.The young man kept silence.

“Should I forgive them after all

those things that happened to me

?!” The young man said. Listen

my son! forgiveness is a feature

of the powerful, particularly

Almighty Allah and not only

people. You pray to ask Allah to

forgive you, and you make

mistakes and sins.

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We all make mistakes and sins. In

spite of that, we pray to Allah to

forgive us.

On the authority of Anas Bin

Malik (may Allah be pleased with

him) said, "I heard the Messenger

of Allah (peace be upon him)

Said," Allah the Almighty said, O

son of Adam,so long as call upon

Me and ask of Me, I shall forgive

you for what you have done, and I

shall not mind. O son of Adam

,were your sins to reach the

clouds in the sky and were you

then to ask forgiveness of Me, I

would forgive you. O son of

Adam, were you to come to Me

with sins nearly as great as the

earth and were you then to face

Me, ascribing no partner to Me ,I

would bring you," forgiveness

nearly as great at it”.

Reported by: Tirmidih and

Ahmed

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Now, O the Young man, would

you like to forgive or not?

“I have decided to forgive them “

The young man looked at him and

said .”close your eyes and take a

deep breath; let the exhalation

longer than inhalation; to enter

state of relaxation.", The wise

man said and added," Now, take a

deep breath; let it go out slowly

until you feel the relaxation of all

parts of your body. Now, return to

your memory back and think of

your father and mother and

forgive them now.

The young man cried. "why are

you are crying ?", The wise man

said. “because I feel of oppression

towards them; and I put them in

troubles“, the young man said.

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" Go to your brothers and forgive

them” the wise man said. “I have

forgiven them now”, the young

man said.” "Do you know why

you forgave them?” “because you

have begun to forgive and feel

the beauty of forgiveness ;and

while you were crying ,you felt

the negative energy has gone and

the spiritual energy stayed in

stead of it; it was easier to forgive

more and more now.

Now forgive all people, and clean

your energy, then return here ",

the wise man said.

The young man returned smiling

with eyes full of tears . "I have

never felt the beauty of

forgiveness before because in one

time I was very angry and

concentrated on anger” the young

man said . "This is one of

Satan‟s ways because he enters

inside you whenever you feel

angry and make the problem

bigger, and reminds you of bad

things that others have done to

you .

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By this way, he wants you to stay

away from the connection with

Allah, faith in Him and the love

of Him. This is the devil work; he

found a door to get inside you

while you are in the excellence

way, holding this energy and this

heavy load; so you should connect

with Allah Taala and this is the

first base of excellence (Utterly

Forgiveness) , and you have

already begun this.

" what next ?"the young man said.

the wise man replied, “the love of

Allah “

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*Love of Allah:

You have to love Allah and for

Allah ---“what should I do?” the

young man said .”you have to

love people for the sake of Allah

When you say to someone that

you love him for Allah, how

beautiful this sentence is; Allah

promised the lovers of Allah with

his love; Abu Idris al-Khawlani

said, "I entered the mosque of

Damascus and there was a young

man with white teeth, with some

other people. When they

disagreed about something, they

referred it to him and followed his

opinion. I inquired about him and

it was said, 'This is Mu'adh ibn

Jabal.' The following day, I went

early and I found that he had

come earlier than me and I found

him praying. I waited for him

until he finished his prayer and

then I approached him from the

front.

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I greeted him and then said, 'By

Allah, I love you for the sake of

Allah.' He said, 'By Allah?' I said,

'By Allah.' He said, 'By Allah?' I

said, 'By Allah.' He hold the upper

part of my cloak and pulled me to

him. He said, 'Rejoice! I heard the

Messenger of Allah, may Allah

bless him and grant him peace,

say, "Allah Almighty says, 'My

love is mandatory for those who

love one another for Me and sit

together for My sake and who

visit one another for My sake and

who give generously to one

another also for My sake."

[Muwatta']

reported by Malk in mowatek and

Ahmed in his sanad

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When someone says to another

that he loves him more than

others or when the wife says to

her husband that she loves him

more than anything else or when

the husband says to his wife, like

this, thereby, they forget

Almighty Allah and the result will

be that; Allah almighty stay away

from them and a gap and

separation take place between

them; their lives become troubles

because love shall be for Allah

and the sake of him; husband

shall say to his wife that," I love

you for the sake of Allah " and the

same to the wife shall say," I love

you for the sake of Allah and

Allah Taala granted me you so I

thank Allah Taala for this great

granted blessing , then the wise

man turned to the young man and

told him," this is the real love

,young man."

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The young man looked to the

wise man and said, "by the way, I

didn‟t say to you that I love you

for the sake of Allah. The wise

man smiled and said to him , I

love you for the sake of Allah too.

At this moment, the young man

felt the real love, wonderful love

of Allah Taala, warm in all parts

of his body ,internal and external

peace, safety and internal

assurance, and the real love of

Allah Taala .

Then, he looked to the wise man

and told him," how much I thank

you, I couldn‟t fulfil your right

comparing to the quantity of the

information that I learnt today."

He said to him, "you have to save

this energy for Allah Taala as

Allah Taala made me a reson to

let you reach the way of

excellence ,and really this is the

way To Allah Taala, and you

have begun the way to Allah.

"Remember young man, the first

step is the connection with Allah

Taala," the wise man said.

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Hastily, the young man said, "the

first thing that I have learnt at this

stage is the entire forgiveness."

"After that?!" The wise man

asked. The young man replied,"

love of Allah and the sake for

him." The wise man asked," What

next?!" the young man asked. "

the giving" The wise man

answered.

*The Giveness

The third thing that should be

done is to give without

conditions. So, start giving

without conditions, don‟t say I

give that one and another and no

one gives me something or say I

give my friends and no one gives

me or I give my neighbour and no

one gives me or I give my parents

and no one gives me. As long as

you give, Allah Taala receives

from you but if you complained,

the reception from Allah would be

cut and Allah will give them by

another way.

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Therefore, you will never taste the

pleasure of giving if you

complained that you often give

but never receive. This is the third

thing of connection with Allah

Almighty ,which is to give for

Allah, not for human ; and you

should know that Allah Taala

made you one of the sources of

giveness. i.e. Allah Taala made

you generous and charitable and

remember that Allah Taala gave

you one of the wonderful features,

Allah Taala the loves charitable.

Hence, we knew that there are

three main basis to connect with

Allah Taala which are as follows:

the entire forgiveness, love of

Allah and for the sake of Allah,

and the unconditional giving.

Then ,the young man looked to

the wise man's eyes and said to

him," This speech is very

beautiful and now I feel the

enjoyment of this beautiful

speech, the energy which makes

me more closer to Allah Taala,

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and I realized the way of

excellence now, and this is the

way to excellence."

The wise man looked to him with

a nice smile and put his hand on

his shoulder and said," we didn‟t

finish yet", the young man said to

him, "now I am excellent."

The wise man said, "No !!" The

young man asked," what is left

after the entire forgiveness, love

of Allah and for the sake of him

and unconditional giving?" The

wise man said, "The believe in

Allah Taala is left."

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*The faith in Allah: ( Al-

Iman)

The young man said to the wise

man," I believe in Allah the

Almighty." the wise man said,"

But remember that you are a

believer, and one of the faith

features is to feel its enjoyment,

entrust yourself, health and

people as a whole in addition to

their money, honour; believer

neither steal ,lie, nor betray

people. A believer has wonderful

and good manners; Thereby,

connection with Allah Almighty

make you believe and this faith

brings you close to Allah Taala. A

believer is insured for people,

their properties and secrets. Then,

he looked to the young man eyes

and said to him," tell me now, are

you a believer?" He said," I am a

believer but not the same way

that you are talking about”.

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So, it is possible to find people

who believe in Allah Taala but

steal though they pray and fast

and you learnt me very important

thing that in appearance there who

treat people in good way, pray

and fast but he steals and lies to

people or betray their trust. This is

the one of marks of hypocrites .

Allah Taala is The Ever-

Providing and The Forgiving, He

forgives everything except

peoples‟ rights. If you want to

reach the way to excellence, you

have to ask who has the right to

forgive you and to reach to Allah

Taala, you shall be closer to

Allah, The Most Merciful, The

Most Generous.

Allah never accepts inequity as it is

recounted by Imam Muslim On the

authority of Abu Tharr Al-Ghafari,

may Allah be pleased with him, of

the prophet is that among the

sayings he relates from the Lord is

that He said, "O My servants, I have

forbidden oppression for Myself and

have made it forbidden amongst

you, so do not oppress one another."

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As long as you are on your way to

excellence, you shall give people

their rights and the. The Giving

and love of and for Allah means

to keep the secrets of the people

and to stay away from backbiting

and gossip, and we are going to

speak about this in the next stage

Inshallah. we are still talking

about connection with Allah

Almighty, the entirely

forgiveness, love of and for Allah,

unconditional giving and faith in

Allah Taala which lead you to

something very important about

the connection with Allah. The

young man looked at the wise

man and said ," What is it ?! at

this moment I felt the enjoyment

that I have never felt before .What

is the reason of that?! I have felt

that is the way to excellence "

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The wise man said," you

depended on the reason as some

people do without noticing that

the basic roots of success come

from Allah Almighty." Then, he

said," I will repeat it again for you

to be memorized and never forget

them in lifelong , say it with me

:which is the first thing ?" "The

entire forgiveness." The young

man said.

"And after that ?" the wise man

asked. "love of and for Allah." He

said. The wise man asked," What

next?" the young man replied,"

unconditional giving. The wise

man clarified," That means you

shouldn‟t complain that you

always give but without taking

from people. Then he asked.

"After that?! The young man

said, "Faith in Allah, whoever

with me, he will be in safe ,I will

protect the properties of people,

their secrets and do my business

as our Messenger of Allah, peace

be upon him, taught us that he is

the truthful and honest.

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And I will be truthful and honest,

Inshallah." The wise man said,"

Now you're on your way to

excellence; then to connect with

Allah Almighty. As long as you

reach faith, you will find yourself

on your way to obedience without

feeling it or doing your efforts.

*Obedience:

At this moment ,the young man

said to the wise man," I obey

Allah Taala " The wise man

asked," what are you doing?", "I

pray, fast and do whatever Allah

orders me to do.", answered the

young man. The wise man said,"

But sometimes you may lie,

suspect, hate or something like

this so you have to learn that

obedience is divided into two

parts:

- First, to-do orders mean to do

whatever Allah Almighty

commands us like praying, fasting

,charity deeds and hajj, etc.

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-

Second, Leaving the forbidden

means to stay away from

whatever Allah Taala has

forbidden like stealing, adultery,

and drinking alcohol. Moreover,

Allah warns us against doing

sins, including smoking so young

man, stay away from smoking as

it causes diseases. Smoking is the

worst thing humans have done ; it

causes diseases. The smoker is

oppressive to himself and around

him. So, stay away from smoking;

it includes punishment in this

world, in grave and in Judgment

day. Allah Taala will inquire you

about every thing of your life,

wealth, and your youth . Abo

Barza Ala'slamy said that the

Messenger, p.b.u.h., said, "A

servant‟s feet will not move on

the Day of Judgment until he is

questioned about four (things):

His youth, how he spent it, his

knowledge, how he acted upon it,

his wealth, how he earned it and

where he spent it and his

bodyhow he used/wsted it."

Reported by (al-Tirmidhi)

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If Allah Taala tells you," you eat

because you are hungry and drink

because you are thirsty. So, why

are you smoking?! will you find

an answer for this question."

"By the way, I am a smoker." the

young man said. Then, The wise

man said." Repeat, I was a smoker

and henceforth I got rid of this

bad habit (Al hamdollah )," The

man repeated. "Now you have

stopped smoking since this

moment, you've quitted smoking

to please Allah Taala; you have

quitted it for the sake of Allah and

he who quit something for His

sake, Allah compensate him

something better than it.

Allah compensated you of

wealth, health, good wife

happiness in life and people love

them and love you for the sake of

Allah. Imagine that you gave and

love for the sake of Allah, Allah

will give you something better

and more than you imagine."

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"Alhamdollah, praise be to Allah,

that I have quitted smoking." the

young man said. "This is

insufficient but you have to help a

big number of people to get rid of

this bad habit." ,the wise man

said.

The young man said," I am going

to help the majority of people to

quit smoking .And they have to

know the vices of this habit to

satisfy Allah Taala so they could

get profits such as health, which

they can neither work nor take a

decision."

"What after that?!" The young

man asked. "pray in time is the

part of the obedience that we

talked about . connection with

Allah Taala shall be existed .

When you say Allah is the

greatest (Allah Akbar), you have

to know that Allah is the biggest

of every thing. Actually, you have

to realize what you shall do

before you pray. You have to pray

truly when you intend to pray.

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when you want to spend apart of

your time, it must be spent in the

right way. when you want to pay

the zakat, it must be true and you

have to help the ignorant, the

stray or make use of him." the

wise man clarified."How can I

make use of him?!" the young

man asked. The wise man

answered," try to help him, touch

him or pat on his shoulder. This

is a charity because you feel

sympathy with him, you have

smiled to him and ask Allah to

help him. Abo Thar may Allah

bless him said that the Messenger

of Allah said," your smile for your

brother is charity ,enjoining good,

forbidding evil, removing harm

from the road, listening to the

deaf, leading the blind, guiding

one to the object of his need,

hurrying with the strength of

one’s legs to one in sorrow who is

asking for help, and supporting

the feeble with the strength of

one’s arms–all of these are

charity prescribed for you."

reported by Termithy

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If you did that, you will have a

great reward of good deed in one

deed ; you get the benefit from

every thing you have done; it

brings you closer to Allah Taala .

"Young man, Repeat again what

we said." The young man said ,"

Entire forgiveness .The wise man

said," What next?!" the young

man said, "Love of Allah and for

the sake of Him, unconditional

giving, and faith in Allah Taala."

The wise man said," I will stop

you here at the faith in Allah. Do

you know what does faith in

Allah mean?" The young man

said," To be a believer in the

existence of Allah. "This is

insufficient." the wise man said.

"What does it mean?!" The young

man asked. "The complement of

faith in Allah is to believe in

whatever had come from Allah

and His Messenger, peace be

upon him.

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Also, to believe in the mentioned

and not mentioned Books and to

believe in all the mentioned and

not mentioned prophets and

messengers. Say with me," I bear

witness there is no God except

Allah, angles who carry Your

throne, Your angels , prophets and

all Your creatures on the Earth

and in the Heavens. You are the

One Who has no partner or

associates. You are The First, The

last, The Manifest, The Hidden,

The Delayer, The Enrich , the

Generous, The Avenger ,The

Compeller and you are The Most

Merciful." The wise man said.

The young man cried because of

the pleasure of this speech. The

wise man continued : I witness

that the Paradise and Hell, the

Day of Judgment, Angles and

whatever came from Allah are

true. By this way, you became a

true believer. "I believe in Allah."

the young man said.

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" I Believe that Mohammad is His

Messenger and Prophet." The

wise man asked the young man to

repeat. Then, the young man

said," I bear witness that

Mohammad is the Messenger and

the Prophet of Allah ,the paradise,

the hell, angles, the day of

Judgment, and all the mentioned

and not mentioned messengers

and prophets are true."

The wise man said to him," Now

you are a believer in Allah Taala.

Now, go to the people with these

wonderful protections from Allah

Taala which are: the entire

forgiveness, love of Allah and for

the sake of Him too,

unconditional giving, and faith in

Allah." Then ,the wise man

quieted and smiled. "It seems that

there are more and more." the

young man said . "yes, all these

are beautiful but insufficient."

The wise man said. "What else

?!", the young man said.

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*Sincerity

It is the sincerity. Oh, young man,

if you noticed that faith in Allah

leads you to the obedience which

leads you to the sincerity, you

wouldn‟t obey someone without

your assurance that he has the

power to do something that you

need it Such as : when you retain

lawyer who has the ability to

defend you. Thereby, you obey

him. And the same when you go

to the doctor to give you an

appointment for an operation. He

will do it in the same date and you

will obey him in every thing he

says or when he numbs you by

narcotic and open your heart

without saying anything. You

obey him due to your believe in

his abilities. So, the faith in Allah

reaches you to the obedience and

the last reaches you to the

sincerity. You couldn‟t reach the

faith in Allah unless your entire

obedience destined for Allah.

Sincerity is for Allah and the sake

of Him.

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Allah Taala says,“ Therefore, you

shall devote your worship

absolutely to GOD ALONE, even

if the disbelievers dislike it.”

(Ghãfer, 14 )

and says, " So whoever would

hope for the meeting with his

Lord - let him do the righteous

work and not associate in the

worship of his Lord anyone." (Al

kahef , 110.) The Cave

And says, “ And they were

commanded not, but that they

should worship Allah, and

worship none but Him Alone

(abstaining from ascribing

partners to Him), and perform As-

Salat (Iqamat-as-Salat) and give

Zakat: and that is the right

religion ”. (Bayyinah, 5) ( The

Clear Evidence )

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On the authority of Abu Hafs,

Umar Ibn al-Khattab, who said: „I

heard the Messenger of Allah say,

“The actions are Innama (only,

certainty) tied to the intentions

and every person will earn that

which he intended. Therefore, he

whose migration was for Allah

and His Messenger (sallallahu

alaihi wa-sallam), then his

migration will be for Allah and

His Messenger; and he whose

migration was to achieve some

worldly gain or to take a woman

in marriage, then his migration

will be for that for which he

migrated. “ pre-agreed”

On the authority of Abu Hurairah

,who said," I heard the Messenger

of Allah says: "Verily, Allah

Does Not Look Towards Your

Bodies Nor Towards Your

Appearances. But, He

looksTowards Your Hearts.”

(Reported by Muslim)

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That is the sincerity; when you

are sincere to Allah, you will find

yourself gain this as a feature as

well as Allah will help you. Any

deed without sincerity is as

useless; you will never taste the

delight of your work unless it is

connected with sincerity to Allah.

The delight of obedience is the

connection to Allah. So, the

obedience should be to and for

Allah, Glory to Him.

*Loyalty

“After that”?! The young man

said . " Loyalty", said the wise

man.

Allah says in His Holy Quran,“

And fulfil (every) covenant.

Verily! the covenant, will be

questioned about.” (Al-asra,34) .

And also said : “ O you who have

believed, fulfill [all] contracts.”

(Al-maidah ,1).

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And on the authority of Abdu

Allah ben Amro Ibn Ala'as who

heard the Prophet ,peace be upon

him ,says, “Four are the qualities

which, when found in a person,

make him a sheer hypocrite, and

one who possesses one of them,

possesses one characteristic of

hypocrisy until he abandons it.

These are: When he is entrusted

with something, he betrays trust;

when he speaks, he lies; when he

promises, he acts treacherously;

and when he argues, he behaves

in a very imprudent, insulting

manner.” (Pre-agreed)The wise

man looked to him and said," if a

person makes promise for you

,and breaks it, how would you

feel ?" “I will be so angry.” Then

the wise man asked him," will

you trust him again?” "No, he lied

to me in previous and broke his

promise, how can I trust him?!"

the young man said. Allah is the

best example; you may be

obedient, a believer, and sincere

but you don't keep your

promise with Allah ;

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therefore, you will break your

promise with people which make

you loose every thing .

Your Faith in Allah makes you

feel the enjoyment of obedience.

So, your loyalty to Allah makes

you feel it .To be sincere of this

obedience with Allah Almighty,

you have to be loyal to Allah

Almighty and as long as you are

loyal to Allah Almighty ,so, you

have these advantages.

Allah also says," O you who have

believed, why do you say what

you do not do? Great is hatred in

the sight of Allah that you say

what you do not do.”(Al-Saf ,2,3)

Therefore, loyalty to Allah Taala

is one of the most essential roots

of obedience which is deemed as

one of the roots of faith with

Allah Almighty. As you see, all

this is part of the main road to

excellence

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And forget the causer of the reasons

,so, you might be destroyed by these

reasons . Not only the reason are

behind the success and it is easy to

take the reason but without success

as happened to you ; but when you

take all the reasons with the trust in

Allah Taala , you have to succeed

even in the another field that you

haven‟t chosen it such as : marketing

,administration ,customers services

and public relations . As soon as you

have trust in Allah Taala , He will

give you un acceptable other things

Here the man looked to the young

man and said : what did you learn

till this moment ? “ I have learnt that

the connection with Allah Taala is

one of the most important roots of

success “ the young man said . “how

did you build the connection with

Allah Almighty? The man said . “the

entire forgiveness” The man said .

“why” he said . “to remove the

heavy burden of my shoulder and

get rid of the negative energy which

make me stay away from Allah

Taala .” he said . “after that” He said

to him. “love of Allah and for the

sake of Him ,after that ,un

conditional forgiveness and I don‟t

complain that I give people without

in return .Then ,the faith in Allah”

he said to him . “what does the faith

inAllah mean?”. He said to him. “the

faith in Almighty Allah ,whatever

Almighty Allah has told us ,He is

the first and the last , the manifest

one ,the hidden one,

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The Patron , The Supremely

Exalted , The Good, The

Avenger , The Pardoner, The

Kind, The Exceedingly Merciful ,

The most Bountiful , whatever

Allah Almighty informed us ,all

his commands ,all the mentioned

and not mentioned the messengers

,and the prophets . I witness also

the paradise and the hell are true

.The man looked to him calm

smiley and said :” you have learnt

so much ,young man ”. ” I have

learnt it from you ”He said to him

. ”no, but I am one of the reasons

of your way to exellence ,and

Allah Taala has brought me to

help you , you are going to teach a

big number of people .” He said

to him. ” I promise you ” the

young man said . ”dont count

before you carry out it ,make your

promise in the right time .” The

man said. ” Is this the last thing?”

The young man said . ” no, you

have done every thing ,the first

the entire forgiveness ,love for the

sake of Allah , un conditional

giving , the complete faith in

Allah ,the entire obedience , and

sincerity . Then ,you will find

your self more connected with

Allah Taalla , but other things

have left such as : trust in Allah

Taala .

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Trust in Allah:

”what does the faith in Allah

mean?” the young man said. ”you

have to put your trust in Allah the

Almighty. And to give your

reactions, then put you trust in

Allah, as Allah said Taalla said:

”Then when you have taken a

decision, put your trust in Allah,

certainly, Allah loves those who

put their trust (in Him).” (Al

Amran,195) .

The meaning first is to take the

decision and put your trust in

Allah ;you have to intend

because as soon as you desire ,

the intention generates .When you

take decision to achieve the goal ;

the intend will generate .

So, you have to know the

intention ,young man ; because

the intention is the depth of your

thought ,intention makes your

conscious which makes your

feelings and behaviours .Then you

go outside ; as Allah Taalla look

to your intention in your hearts

and your conscious . So ,you have

to begin your work by saying :

I have intend to give all the

reactions , put my trust in my

Allah , faith in Allah ,entire

obedience , sincerity ,and

loyalty ,give all the reaction ,put

my trust in Allah the Lord of the

World .Then start your way to

excellence .So the intention

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comes before anything.

The wise man looked to the

young man and said to him : “and

now young man, have you

intention ?” “yes ,I have” .The

young man said. “for what your

intention ? he said . I have

intention for the faith in Allah

Almighty . What after that ?

“entire obedience and loyalty

“.He said . “What else ,then?”He

said. “complete loyalty “ He said .

“now you very good ,but there is

something left .”He said . “What

is it ?” He said . “pessimism…”

He said .

Pessimism:

The wise man looked with bright

eyes of pessimism at the young

man and said to him : “my son ,

the believer couldn‟t be believer

unless he has pessimism ,that

Allah Talla will grant him charity

; because Allah Talaa assure you

that He don‟t waste the good

deeds ;and you work and give all

the reaction and trust in Allah

almighty with entirely obedience

,love Allah and for the sake of

Him ,and to be loyal to Allah

…after that ,do you think that

Allah wouldn‟t give you what you

want ?! “no,He definitely will

give me. He said to him .This

emphasis which is recommended

by the Messenger of Allah (peace

be upon him)

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Which is the accepting an answer

after the prayer;and this is the next

step ,my son ;the prayer and mention

Allah the Almighty .

The prayer and mention

Allah :

After that ,the wise man said :my

son ,as long as you in this world

,you have to pray to Allah Taala

;prayer to Allah is the best worship

which close you to Allah Taala .

On the authority of Alnoaman ben

Basher said that The prophet (peace

be upon him said :the prayer is the

same as the worship ). Repeated by

Dawood and Termithy.

The mention of Allah is the same

thing and the believer‟s food in his

way to Allah Almighty. The best

way to mention Allah is by saying :

“there is no God but Allah”.So,

mention this word in your time as

well as saying: “thank God(al

hamdollah)” in good and bad and

when something happened to you

,by saying this word ,it will save you

from a serious danger and by

saying : “thank Allah”, you will be

the safe and Allah will run your life

and provide you from unknown

source .As long as you are in this life

,you have to say “that no God but

Allah”

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and “thank God” .If you have

time ,you have to mention of

Allah Almighty ,thank ,pray ,and

praise Him a lot .Thereby , your

connection with Allah Taalla will

go on .

“is this the end?” .The young man

said . “no,this is a small part of

what Allah Taala gave us. There

is a lot of things that we are going

to learn it together on our way to

the excellence. This is the first

root for connection with Allah

Taala .” the young man said .

“what is the next roots ,after

that?”the young man said. “it is

the manners .”The wise man said .

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Manners

The morals is the most important

features for believer who

obey,loyal and love Allah Talaa

. You may be good in any job or

in any item but if you have no

good manners ,how you will deal

with yourself and people ?!

You can with manners dominate

and convince people of whatever

you want .So, with the manners

you will look for people‟s interest

before yours.

The Rightness Allah Taala said

to his messenger (peae be upon

him) : “And verily, you (O

Muhammad) are on an exalted

standard of character.

He didn‟t mention just the

manners ,but the great manners

.And His generous messenger

(peace be upon him) confirms that

by his saying : “

1. I have been sent is to perfect

good manners (Morality, Islamic

Behavior). (Repeated by Albo

khary on the authority of Abo

horyra in the single literature .)

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If you look , young man to the

wise words ,you will find that

Allah Taala confirms the

description of His generous

messenger (peace be upon him)

that he has a great manners . This

a generous messenger who told us

that he have been sent to perfect

good manners (Morality, Islamic

Behavior). (Repeated by Albo

khary on the authority of Abo

horyra in the single literature .) .

how a wonderful is it ,young

man !

You have be a ware of your

manners and to your style in

speech with people . And in few

moments ,I will give you a simple

equation each the great manners ;

because without it ,you couldn‟t

communicate with your life .The

young man comment for this

speech and said to him: once I

have read a book says: “one of the

biggest universities in the world

says :the professional skills don‟t

exceed 7%,the manners 93% . at

this moment I couldn‟t

understand this speech until I left

the book because I didn‟t

understand this speech ; I studied

primary school,prep

school,secondary school ,then

high study and obtain the master

degree and doctorate .And after

that , it illustrate only 7%?! Then

I listen to your speech about

morality which considers as

every thing and morality is very

essential to Allah Taala ,and close

you with Almighty Allah

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And with morality ,you can deal with

people and make them love and around

you . However ,how the professional

skills don‟t exceed 7% only?! . He said

to him : “because you can learn any

profession whatever it is difficult as

long as one person learnt it so it is

found in sense and in the books .And it

is possible for any person to learn it in

one day or in month or in a year. In the

end he will learn it . But what is the

reason of successful people and other

are not ;and distinguished people and

other are not ?Though all people have

the same fourth things which we

presented ;all people have the five

senses ,energy ,the way of thinking

,logic ,analysis ,24 hour in a day .So

what is the difference between a

distinguished person from another one

?! We will find the reason lies in all

above mentioned,and we will find the

distinguished person has exalted

morality and if he faced any problem

,he will quickly forgive .The reason is

that he has no thime to waste it here or

there due to his knowing that his time is

limited in the life. And this moment

might be the last in his life .Hence he

think in a good way and the distinct

person always ask himself : is this

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Moment the last in my life?the

answer : yes ,of course .And ask your

self : is whatever you did equal to

this investment ? you will find that if

you have no good manners ,your

nerve and feeling are burned ,and the

emotional mind is burned . In this

case you don‟t achieve any thing ;

the morality is the best saving for

these cases.So we talked about the

faith in Allah ,entirely forgiveness

.so you couldn‟t forgive completely

unless you have faith in Allah Taala ,

obey Allah and to be loyal to Allah

Taala .and when you think a bout it ,

this will reach you to the great

morality .And we see if the person

has a good manners ,the people will

like him and to be always

accompany with him .You find a

successful person but he is a lone

because people don‟t like him due to

his bad manners .So the morality

reach you to a nice thing and

Almighty Allah make us nations and

tribes as Allah said : “ O mankind!

We have created you from a male

and a female, and made you into

nations and tribes, that you may

know one another. Verily, the most

honourable of you with Allah is that

(believer) who has At-Taqwa [i.e.

one of the Muttaqun (pious - see

V.2:2)]. Verily, Allah is All-

Knowing, All-Aware. (sura Al

hujuraat,13) . And we see the people

stay away from severe person.

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as Almighty Allah said: “And had

you been severe and harsh-hearted,

they would have broken away from

about you .” .(Al Amran,159) .

So, because of your morality , love

of Allah,your sweet tuang which

mention Almighty Allah and love

Allah Taala , due to this ,makes

your companies feel of appositive

energy .

Thereby ,the young man replay to

him : “I think this speech is

supported by my reading of Ahmed

Shoqy who said: “ if there is no

morals , there will be no nations .

He said to him definitely as you said

and what Hafez Abrahim said

supported that :

He said to him : think what is a

beautiful young man! And you

comment of a good way to my

speech ,and now you speaks like

this because you love Almighty

Allah ,so Allah make you mention

nice words and make me recall an

Arabic saying :

“Be modest of nobleness, patient

of wisdom, justice of authority ,

forgiver of capacity .”

The young man said to him : this is

a beautiful speech and I feel now

that I am ready to meet a lot of

people because I have love to Allah

,connection ,obedience and loyalty ,

completely intention to Allah ,and

wonderful manners can I

communicate with people .

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:Approval Letter

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References:

1- http://www.encyclopedia.com/

2- Elfiky's , I ,2009: The Pathway to Excellence, Egypt: Al-Raya publishing company.

3- Translation methodology

4- verses translated from Qur'an


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