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Write a scene using these three characters. Use the picture to help you create their “voices.” What are they talking about? What might they say? What do the drawing styles suggest about their voice, vocabulary and sentence structure?
VOICE CONTINUED
Persona, Character Voice & Point of View
FIRST SOME FUN STUFF
Let’s look at two versions of the same song. For
some reason I think this illustrates my point about
voice better than most covers.
Pete Yorn – Strange Condition
VS
Morgan Page – Strange Condition
PERSONA
A voice or mask that an author, speaker, or performer
puts on for a particular purpose. It can be a mask adopted by
the author, which may be a public manifestation of the author’s
self, or a distorted or partial version of that self, or a fictional,
historical, or mythological character. The concept of a persona
allows us to acknowledge that, just as no written account can
tell the whole truth about an event, so no “I” of a poem, essay,
or story is exactly the same as the person who writes.
Example: Margaret Atwood Siren’s Song
CHARACTER VOICE
In ways other than ironic, you may also speak in
the persona of a character who is largely or totally unlike
you. A character’s voice is a chosen mimicry and is one of
the most rewarding devices of imaginative writing, a skill to
pursue in order to develop rich characters both in their
narratives and in their dialogue. Your voice will never be
entirely absent from the voice of the characters you create,
but the characters too can be distinct and recognizable
EXAMPLES
“You don’t know about me, without you have read a book by the
name of “The Adventures of Tom Sawyer,” but that ain’t no matter.
That book was made by Mr. Mark Twain, and he told the truth,
mainly. There was things which he stretched, but mainly he told
the truth. That is nothing. I never seen anybody but lied, one time
or another, without it was Aunty Polly—Tom’s Aunt Polly, she is—
and Mary, and the Widow Douglas, is all told about in that book—
which is mostly a true book, with some stretchers, as I said
before.” – Mark Twain, from Huckleberry Finn
ANOTHER EXAMPLE
From Blake Nelson’s Girl
POINT-OF-VIEW
Closely allied to the concept of voice is point of view. Point of view as a
literary technique is a complex and specific concept, dealing with vantage point and
addressing the question: Who is standing whereto watch the scene? The answer
will involve the voice of the teller, the intended listener, and the distance or
closeness of both the action and the diction. An author’s view of the world, as it
is and as it ought to be, will ultimately be revealed by manipulation of the point
of view, but not vice versa.
First Person
Second Person
Third Person
Example of Point of View: Tod
Goldberg “This is What You Left Behind
YOUR ASSIGNMENT
Write a “persona” poem. Choose anyone you want
and write something from their perspective.
OR…
Choose one of the pieces we read today and write
the story from another character’s point of view.
For the Tod Goldberg piece, you could choose the
wife who left or even Shelby the dog. For Siren’s
Song you could choose the sailors.