Feedback on Rough Edits

1) Be sure to addBlack Screen –Credit appears – (Fade in) AKaur Productions (Fades out)(Fade In) presents (Fade Out)(Fade in) A film by Anita Kaur (Fade Out)

2) On the slider footage at the start, there seems to a bit of a shake, please remove this

3) The cutaway footage of Handsworth seems to be pink. I want the colours to be enhanced. For example, make the greens, greener, the reds redder…Make it colourful

See example below

Original Footage

Your Edit

What I am looking for

4) Montage sequence does not work for me…Maybe if we tried something like this….https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zEJB7QgGwug All the pictures on a black background, all black and white, but the picture in focus – in colour and then fades to another one…

5) I will give you the font for unity in the community, once I get it off my graphic designer.I will also give you the music once my composer gets back to me.

6) After the unity in the community title appears on the screen, you were meant to include a shot of the sun beaming over the building which can be found in Folder day 3 – FILE MVI_700 (Add the sound of birds that is also in FOLDER DAY 3 – FILE STE-002

Jump cut in Hectors interview

7 After the above shot add a shot of soho road, cars driving past, people walking past…ADD THE SOUND OF TRAFFIC – Fade out sound where where hectors interview starts

8) Interview is shown at the part where he says…My community work entails

9) Change the shot to camera no 2 – “you know when I saw so many people coming through this door

10) “What kept us together” Pictures of the boats

11) Lower third Lee Blair – Manager of Jellybean nursery

10) My voiceovers seems to be a little quiet - we need to raise this

11) Black sceen lasts longer before my middle voiceover starts

12) Negative comments – More close – zooms out

13) “rich area…the opportunity for business – More of a pause between them sentences

14) Shorter then I expected…maybe add more interviews