1. Part A Opening Sequence Draft 2 Drama Ina Bayson Ramina
Arlauskaite Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu Everyone- White
2. Part B Raminas Brainstorm A young girl + boyfriend Go to the
same school Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the boys
girlfriend The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend In the end,
girlfriend just lying down with blood on her mouth.
3. Part B Carolles Brainstorms The girl trying to cut herself
in front of a mirror crying *flashback* Girl and boy kissing while
watching TV Her phone rings and boy takes it off her Tries to hit
her *flash forward* Shows her trying to cut herself again
4. Part B Inas Brainstorm Girlfriend+Boyfriend Boy proposes to
the girl after a date (in a cafe) She accepts Then, flash-forward:
of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding hands)
Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl
5. Part B Strongest Idea Strongest Idea Raminas Idea Inas Idea
Not showing all story, just giving pieces of puzzle
6. Part B Final Idea Used Ramina and Inas Idea together:
Girlfriend + Boyfriend Having a date, then he proposes to her Other
girl outside of cafe watching them angrily He putting the ring in
her finger *Flash forward* The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the
other girl holding hands She calls him but he didnt pick up
7. Part C Genre: Drama Dealing with Consists of conflict in
emotional themes some scenes between characters Drama Real life
situations Themes Addiction Poverty Sub genre Violence Romance etc
Tragedy Crime Docudrama (when a character act an event and
exaggerates it a bit)
8. Part C Why did we chose this genre, example Happens in real
life o Shows that not all situations are perfect Affects young
married couples (not all) o Showing that they are still too
young
9. Part C Conventions of Drama Can have violence Love
Conventions Struggling (pain) Emotional scenes Deep emotions
Conflict between characters
10. Part D Inspirational films My Amnesia Girl Genre: Drama,
Romance, and Director: Comedy o Cathy Garcia-Molina Casts: o John
Lloyd Cruz o Tony Gonzaga o Carlos Agassi o Etc. Distributed by: o
Star Cinema Magic Released Date: o 24th November 2010 Language: o
Tagalog o English http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmk YM1gFI
11. Part D Inspirational Scene She and her old Boyfriend When
shes recalling her memory (must be husband) saw each when her
Fiance didnt come to other again their wedding day She acts like
she dont know him (lost her memory) Shocked that Long shot of her
she doesnt Mid shot of her waiting for her heartbroken remember
Groom him She told him that she didnt lost her memory at all She
told him the He is shocked that truth she lied to her
12. Part D I Love You To Death Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is
married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to
extremes when she finds he has been cheating.Scene 3: Rosalee
founds her husband cheatingLong shot of Rosalee Mid shot of her
with Two shot of Rosaleeenter the library books and the librarian
Time- 7:51/8:55 Mid shot of Rosalee point of view
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sees her husband ch?v=4Vp-books to borrow from the kissing another
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13. Part D Character RepresentationGood/happy wifeMid shot of
her smiling Two shot, Serving her Two shot, they areand she seems
very happy husband a drink having conversation
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Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her next to her husband
husband (protection)
14. Part D Character Representation Angry housewife Time-
00:00/00:53 http://www.youtube.com/watch
?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=relat ed Rosalee hatred towards her
husband because he cheated on her, she and her mother planning to
kill her husband by over dose the food with sleeping pills, and
different ingredient.
15. Part D Uslovia Kontrakta This film is a Russian film about
two married couple, she lies to her husband she cant afford having
babies because she has problems ( the truth is she lies to him
because she doesnt wants to ruin her body.) A girl who gets married
her sister accidently falls down on the glass table and has
problems with her brainstorm. She Wants to get money to get the
oppression done by her fianc does not help her so she dumps him.
Goes to another city to get a job she finds a job where she gives
birth a gives away her baby to another people who cant afford them.
So she decided to do it and get the money from the people who wants
the baby. Afterwards the man gets into relationship with the girl
and gets divorced with his wife finding out she was lying.
16. Chosen theme, brainstormPart E for opening Theme: Tragic (a
bit), Romance Close up Flash forwards Showing emotions Clips of
after he of a character/s proposed to her Mid-shot Brainstorm He
took his phone out Boyfriend + to see who called him Girlfriend POV
Other girl seeing them Young and became together + proposing
engaged Cheating in a relationship
17. Part F Research about our theme: Young couples There are
almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which
almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with
their partner. So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when
it comes to relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may
marry prematurely because the need for connection wins out.
Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some
experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity.
In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming
their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing
psychologically. It is best to wait to marry until after about age
27 or so to ensure that this growth curve has begun to slow down.
This reduces the chance that people will later come to realize that
they didnt really know themselves yet when they got married, as
well as feel that they have grown apart from their partner.
18. Who are the Characters & who they representPart H
Ramina: Nevaeh The Boyfriends close friend Clothes: Black clothes
to show jealousy, and darkNeil: John Ina: Lily The Boyfriend/
Fiance of his Johns Fiancegirlfriend Clothes: Semi formal clothes
while hesClothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing proposing to
her Jeans and Hoody when going out with Jogging bottoms and Top
when sheother girlfriend saw them holding hands
19. Part H Characters Clothes Lilys Semi Formal Outfit - For
their Date with John Johns Semi Formal Outfit - For their Date with
Lily Johns Non- Formal Outfit - When he is with Nevaeh Lilys Non-
Formal Outfit - When following John to the Park with Nevaeh Nevaehs
Casual Outfit - When she is standing outside the Caf - When she is
with John in the Park
20. Part H Props The necklace he will The necklace and be using
when hes earring that Lily wearing both semi would be wearing
formal and non- when shes with formal clothes John of their date
The Iphone Lilys The Iphone that going to use for the John will use
for ending the ending The ring that John will give to Lily
21. Part I Location/Setting Cafe: where John proposes to Lily,
while Nevaeh is outside looking at them.
22. Part I Location/Setting Round wood Park: When Lily saw John
and Nevaeh holding hands
23. Part J How are we going to create enigma Showing pieces of
the puzzle o Not showing everything o Building suspense Flashes of
clips o There will be a flash forward
24. 5 bullet points of what is goingPart K to happen in the
whole film John and Lily got engage and move in together Lily
becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on
her They always argue on simple things Johns old friend (Nevaeh)
texts him to meet up, and Lily read it and becomes suspicious John
picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesnt know that
Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John
explains that him and Nevaeh are just friends, and everything went
back to normal
25. Part K 5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the
opening sequence John proposes to Lily while theyre on a date.
Nevaeh is watching them angrily from outside the cafe. Then *Flash
Forward* Lily followed John and saw him holding hands with Nevaeh
Lily tries to call John He declined the call
26. Part L Storyboard
27. Part L
28. Part L Shot list Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
Number 1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart
clothes- jeans, the cafe (having a date) polo, trainers, skirt,
top, shoes, coffee 2 Over the John taking out the ring to Ring in
the box Shoulder shot propose to Lily 3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her
looking at Black jacket, jeans, John and Lily angrily white top,
boots, make up black lipstick 4 P.O.V Nevaehs POV of what she is
Table, chairs, coffee, seeing people, ring, clothes 5 Close up
Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring 6 Mid shot Lily shocked and
happy Make up 7 Close up Lilys eyes crying of joy
29. Part L Shot Shot Name Description Props/Costume Number 8
Extreme Close Him putting the ring in her Ring up finger 9 Long
shot John and Nevaeh holding Park, clothes- hands in park trousers,
Hoody, trainers, jeans, jacket, hand bag 10 Mid shot Lily behind
John and Tracksuit trousers, Nevaeh top, jacket, trainers, hair
tied back 11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to phone call John 12
Two shot Nevaeh and John Talking Clothes, phone (Mid shot) *Phone
rings* 13 Extreme close Him declining the call phone up
30. Part M Script 1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Two shot,
of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea. 2.
INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Over the shoulder shot, John taking
out the ring to propose to Lily. 3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW
Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black
jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick. 4. EXT. THE
CAFE SHOP WINDOW Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what
she is seeing. 5. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up shot,
Johns hand opening the ring box
31. Part M 6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Mid-shot, Lily
shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless. 7.
INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up, Lilys face crying as John
propose to her. 8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Extreme Close up,
John putting the ring on Lilys finger. 9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Long
shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. Johns
wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh
wearing jeans, black jacket, and hand bag. 10. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top,
jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.
32. Part M 11. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Close up shot, Lily
dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she
cannot believe what shes seeing. 12. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Two shot
and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings.
13. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Extreme Close up shot, Johns hand and the
phone. He declines the call. BLACKOUT
33. Part N Applying theories of Todorov Opening Sequence o
Everything started good- him proposing o Then, becomes complicated-
she sees John with someone else, suspicion o New equilibrium- for
the audience to watch and find out more Whole Story o He proposes
to Lily, she moved in with John and started to be over protective o
Lily saw Nevaehs text to John and followed him and saw Nevaeh with
him o They broke up because Lily thinks that hes cheating o But
went back together knowing that Nevaeh is only his close
friend
34. Part O Applying theories of Propp Villain- Nevaeh- wearing
black, emo looking, Lily thinks that she is Johns girlfriend Main
Character- John- story revolves around him Second Character- Lily-
Johns girlfriend
35. Part P Applying theories of Strauss We didnt use his theory
of Binary Opposition, because there are no characters that are evil
in our Opening Sequence There are no good and bad All of the
characters are equal (no one is stronger than the other)
36. Part Q Target Audience Age: 15-25 Gender: Both Social
Class: Working class Hobbies: exploring, going out, Lifestyle:
Teenagers, young adults Location: London
37. Part Q Interviews Results 3.5 3 2.5 15-18 years old 2 19-21
years old 1.5 1 0.5 0
38. Part R Film Distributor and why One of the six major movie
studios One of the oldest American movie studios Industry: Film In
the film industry since Founded: 30th April, 1912 1912 o Its
products are motion pictures Headquarters: California, US They also
distribute drama Products: Motion Pictures films Founder: Carl
Laemmle o The Phantom of the Opera (1925) o The Hunchback of Notre
Dame (1923)
39. Part S Age rate of the film BBFC standard 15 for a film
must have an appropriate language and behaviour for the audiences.
There are no strong language There are no sexual activity or nudity
(no strong detail) There can be violence, but not focus on pain and
injury
40. Part T Evidence- Title and credits (fonts) As a group we
decided to use font Time new roman o It will be helpful for our
opening sequence title easy to read and eye catching o To express a
range of voices and emotions . o Versatile and comfortable to work
with, this title are like a favourite pair for our group opening
sequence Draft 2. This is an example of what Font we will be using
for our Opening Sequence.
41. Part U Music/Sound This sound is when Lily is standing
behind John and Nevaeh, looking at them shocked and heartbroken To
show that she may be thinking something bad This can be on the
scene when Nevaeh is standing outside the cafe looking at John and
Lily angrily This will be used when John proposes to Lily. To show
happiness and joy