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Summer Week 1
Key Words:
William Shakespeare William Shakespeare (bapt. 26 April 1564 – 23 April 1616) was an English poet, playwright, and actor, widely regarded as the greatest writer in the English language and the world's greatest dramatist.
William Shakespeare
Sonnets
• sonnet• syllable• quatrain• Iambic
Pentameter• rhyme
scheme• rhyming
couplet
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Summer Week 1
Lesson 1 WALT: Read and understand Shakespeare's Sonnet 18
Did you know...Shakespeare wrote 154 sonnets that we know of. He didn't give them titles but scholars have numbered them for ease of reference.
This week we're going to explore one of his most famous...William Shakespeare
William Shakespeare (bapt. 26 April 1564 – 23 April 1616) was an English poet, playwright, and actor, widely regarded as the greatest writer in the English language and the world's greatest dramatist.
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The sonnet is a form of love poetry that has been used for centuries. Sonnets don‛t have to be about love, but they often are.
There are many different forms of sonnet, but for today‛s lesson we are going to be looking at one of the most popular: Shakespearean sonnets.
Sonnet 18 is one of Shakespeare's most famous sonnets.
What is a sonnet?
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
Sonnet 18
Read through this sonnet two or three times...
You can listen to this youtube clip if it helps:
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
• What do you notice?
• How would you describe the poem's rhyme scheme?
Sonnet 18
• Write down any unfamiliar words. You can check the meaning of these using the glossary on the next page...
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Glossary
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
How would you describe the poem's rhyme scheme?
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Lesson 1
WALT: Read and understand Shakespeare's Sonnet 18
1. How many lines does the poem have?
2. What is the poem‛s rhyme scheme? Which lines rhyme with each other?
3. Where is the rhyming word in the sentence?
4. What are the first four lines of the poem about?
5. What are lines 5-8 about?
6. What are lines 9-12 about?
7. What is the message of the last two lines?
8. How are the last two lines different to the rest of the poem?
Challenge Question:
What do you like best about this sonnet and why?
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Lesson 1
WALT: read and analyse Shakespeare's Sonnet 18
1. How many lines does the poem have? 14
2. What is the poem‛s rhyme scheme? Which lines rhyme with each other? Every other line except for the last two which is a rhyming couplet (see previous slide)
3. Where is the rhyming word in the sentence? At the end
4. What are the first four lines of the poem about? Comparing a loved one to a beautiful summer's day
5. What are lines 5-8 about? That the person is even better
6. What are lines 9-12 about? The person's youth/prime will not fade
7. What is the message of the last two lines? As long as the human race exists this memory lives on
8. How are the last two lines different to the rest of the poem? It is a rhyming couplet
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Lesson 2
WALT: Explore the structure and form of Sonnet 18.
Most sonnets are fourteen lines long (although there are exceptions to this rule). Shakespeare‛s sonnets are mostly written in Iambic Pentameter. This means they have ten beats in each line, alternating stressed and unstressed syllables.
Today we are going to explore the structure and form of a sonnet before attempting to write one of our own tomorrow.
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Quatrains1. Introduces the main idea.
2. Develops the main idea.
3. Starts with the volta, or turn, at line 9. This is where Shakespeare changes direction from his original idea.
The poem ends with a rhyming couplet which sums up the ideas in the poem.
Lesson 2
WALT: Explore the structure and form of Sonnet 18.
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
In iambic pentameter, writers use a pattern of quieter and louder syllables. First they use a quiet one, then a loud one, and they repeat that pattern five times in each line of their poem. That means iambic pentameter lines have a singsongy rhythm like this: “daDUM daDUM daDUM daDUM daDUM.”
Read the poem aloud and clap out the syllables in each line...
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
Have another look at the poem's rhyme scheme...
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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
Lesson 2
WALT: Identify the structure and form of Sonnet 18.
1. Copy out the sonnet in your best cursive handwriting.
2. Underline the syllables in each line.
3. Highlight the rhyming words in each quatrain.
Extension:
Decorate the sonnet with a border containing images to illustrate its meaning.
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Lesson 3
WALT: Apply my understanding of structure and form to create my own sonnet.
things that you love...Step 1: Brainstorm
football
music
someone special
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Has 14 lines.
The rhyme scheme is:
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
First quatrain introduces message.
Second quatrain develops message.
Third quatrain includes the volta – a turn or change in the message.
The rhyming couplet summarises the main ideas.
Toolkit
Step 2: Remember the features of a sonnet...
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Shall I com pare thee to a take a way
Thou art more scrumpt ious and full of flav our
Step 3: Have a go at writing the first quatrain of a sonnet using this example to start you off...remember 10
syllables in each line.
• Continue the quatrain by replacing the words in red with your own...
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
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Step 4: Include some of your own ideas and experiment with this model...
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Remember!
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
10 syllables in each line.
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed ;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed ;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
If you're stuck you could use Sonnet 18 as a base and replace the coloured words with your own.
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Has 14 lines.
The rhyme scheme is:
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
First quatrain introduces message.
Second quatrain develops message.
Third quatrain includes the volta – a turn or change in the message.
The rhyming couplet summarises the main ideas.
Toolkit
Lesson 3
WALT: Write a sonnet using a toolkit
Practise: Use at least two features
Stretch: Use at least four features
Challenge: Use all the features!
• Please copy this toolkit into your book before writing your poem
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Lesson 4
WALT: Edit my sonnet by making changes to grammar, vocabulary and punctuation.
• Read through your sonnet and see if you can up-level it by choosing more interesting vocabulary.
• Look at the next page as an example of what you could do to improve yours...
• Have you used correct punctuation at the end of each line?
• Check off your toolkit!
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WALT-Edit my sonnet by making changes to grammar, vocabulary and punctuation.
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Shall I compare you to an autumn day?Thou art more leafy and more beautifulRough winds do shake the orange leaves awayAnd autumn leaves does wait for autumn's coolSometimes ice hearts just need to melt awayWhen eyes do close tightly I think of theeYour fiery heart is here to stayYou are a flower and I am a beeThou are a raven and I am a doveDelicate is our love that shall not fadeDeath shall come and take us to the aboveTogether forever our love was made
As long as I stand I will protect youWe will have very good memories too
Can you replace the words in red with words that sound more Shakespearean?
Challenge: Can you give this sonnet two stars and a wish?
What punctuation should go at the end of each line?
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Lesson 5: Spelling
WALT: To spell words with the 'ough' sound.
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Lesson 5
WALT: Write sentences including 'ough' words
1. Choose one of the words to put into a sentence beginning with a fronted adverbial.
2. Choose another word to put into a sentence containing some direct speech.
3. Choose another word to put into a sentence containing an expanded noun phrase.
4. Choose another word to put into a sentence containing a subordinate clause.
5. Choose another word to put into a sentence including an embedded relative clause e.g. The trough, which was in the pig's sty, was covered in mud.
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