E-mail writingHow to go about it?

Guillermina GrondonaMaría Noel Pellizzon

E-mail writing

Download of file and student’s production

Teacher correction

Improvementof Student’s version

What do I need?

• A computer with Internet access

• An email address

• Concentration

• The error correction code printed to have at hand to correct your work

    

Getting startedWhat to do?

1- Go to ETOOLS4ENGLISH

http://etools4english.wikispaces.com/

Accesshttp://www.losrobles.esc.edu.ar/

Click on “Sede Buenos Aires”

Click on “ETOOLS4ENGLISH”

2- Download the file

Save the file as “Smith 6th Workbook e-mail

writing unit 1”

3- Open the file and start working

In my holidays, I did lots

4- Save changes often

5- Count the words you have written

A- Select the text

Count the words you have written

B- Go to “Herramientas/ Tools” / “Contar palabras/ Count words”

Find the mistake and correct it

Read the tips in the bubble and solve the activities.

6- Once you finish, save your work, open your email address and send

it to your teacher as attachmentAttach the file

Summing upWhat to do?

• Download the file from the 6th form e-mail writing section at “ETOOLS4ENGLISH” and save the file as “your last name + file name”• Open the file and start following the instructions• Save changes often • Count the words you have written • Once you finish, save your work, open your email address and send it to your teacher as attachment

The correction phase

Your teacher starts working

MARKING SCHEME

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On January, first, I went to Mar azul because friends of my father invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche. It was very funny I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. It was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t

fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I am happy

because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I

went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with

my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want wp go there again but in

winter, to skiing vf. Then I went to my weekend building ww in

“San Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends.After

that we went to theatre with my family. Npn Finally, when March

started I must to go wp/vf to school so we came back to Buenos

Aires. I didn´t fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I

am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all

time.

Comment from the teacher

Very nice work on the whole. Please, correct what I ’ve pointed out and resend the fi le to me so that I see the final version. Thanks! Ms. Anne

Improving your versionWhat to do?

• Check email inbox

• Download corrected file to PC

• Save file as “your last name + name of file + 2 (number of version)”

• Start working on the corrections with your correction code at hand

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin pc . It was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. wo

In my holidays, I did lots of things. In J anuary, first, I went to Mar Azul because my father’s friends invited us. Then I went to

Bariloche for 15 days. I t was very funny! I went there with my family and my cousin. Then we went to the wedding of an other cousin. It was beautiful. I did rafting too, it was so cool! I like Bariloche very much

Remember to:

• Respect deadlines• Write the subject and message you send in English• Have a second look at your work before sending it