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    Fade to Black #1

    Created and written Jeff Mariotte, art by Daniele Serra

    Published by Image Comics/Shadowline, available wherever comic

    books are sold.

    2010 Jeff Mariotte

    PAGE ONE

    Splash.

    Lets open with a splash page. Were looking at five young people in a

    remote, hilly desert wilderness. They are:

    TROY. Think a young Brad Pitt. Handsome, born wealthy, he has hadeverything handed to him in life.

    KIRA. She radiates sex appeal. Dark haired, buxom, she gets all the sex

    bomb parts, and the way she flirts with every guy she meets youd think

    shes just as nasty as she looks.

    MARIO. A Hispanic heartthrob, older than he looksat 26, the oldest of

    the group. He has a major crush on Angelique, but has never acted on it

    because she seems too pure for him. Hes the only one of the group who

    was born poor and acted his way out of poverty.

    ANGELIQUE. Just as angelic-looking as her name implies. Blonde, shelooks like the most innocent girl ever to walk the Earth, and with a great

    figure. In fact, she is far more promiscuous than Kirabut because she

    looks so virginal, rumors never spread about her.

    DOUG. Because hes black, he gets all the gangsta parts even though the

    nearest hes ever been to the ghetto is driving his Hummer on the freeway

    past Compton.

    And they are actors, although the reader wont know this yet. At the

    moment, theyre dressed as their characters in a film theyre making, and

    they are playing disaffected, disadvantaged urban youth on a wildernessexpedition. They have on OUTWARD TREK T-shirts and hiking boots, and

    theyre wearing jeans or hiking shorts or whatever you want to put them in.

    Because shes playing the sex goddess, Kira is in tight shorts and she has

    tied her T-shirt up under her breasts, and maybe the front split to show some

    cleavage. Theyre all wearing backpacks, and one of two might have

    walking sticks. Troy is holding a compass (we think) in his hand and

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    looking off into the distance, but his body blocks his hand so we cant really

    see what he has in it. Mario watches him. The others are looking every

    which way, like theyre looking for something.

    The late afternoon sun slants down on the scene, splashing daylight all over

    the place.

    1. Troy: I know this is the way back to camp.

    2. Mario: Yeah, but what if you know wrong, ese? After all

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    PAGE TWO

    Panel One.

    Mario glances back over his shoulder with a terrified expression.

    1. Mario: (a) we dont got time to get lost!

    (b) Run!

    Panel Two.

    A larger panel as the five all take off, scrambling up a rocky slope away

    from whatever Mario saw. Angelique gives her best horror movie scream.

    2. Angelique: Aaaaah!

    3. Doug: Go go go!

    Panel Three.

    Lets leave the camera where it is, looking up the slope as our five heroes

    vanish over the ridge. Maybe we can just see the soles of some shoes as

    they race away. In the foreground now, on the rocky slope, theres ashadow, big and scary with arms outstretched. Some kind of monster?

    4. Monster: Yaaarrrr!

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    PAGE THREE

    Panel One.

    Theyre talking as theyre running. Were on Doug and Troy here, although

    its okay if we can see more of them.

    1. Doug: What if we cant get back, dog? What if thatthat

    thing

    Panel Two.

    Troy answers him. Now we can see Kira running alongside them.

    2. Troy: (a) Well get back to camp, dude! I know things look badnow...

    (b) but just remember what Mr. Hickey taught us about

    not letting the dark days rule your life!

    Panel Three.

    Kira points to the compass in Troys hand, and now for the first time we

    can see that Troy is holding a rock, not a real compass.

    3. Kira: Im more concerned about that compass than the

    monsteror should I say, that rock?

    Panel Four.

    Having stopped running, Troy throws the rock to the dirt.

    4. Troy: Hey, its not my fault the prop crew didnt bring enough

    real compasses on location.

    Panel Five.

    He shoots Kira a dirty look as he lights a cigarette with a disposable lighter.

    5. Troy: Anyway, at least I can stick to the script.

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    6. Kira: You think? Its Mr. Hinckley, not Hickey.

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    PAGE FOUR

    Panel One.

    Mario starts back up the hill, meeting the monster coming downbut the

    monster is really Billy, an overweight assistant director in a ball cap and

    sleeveless sweatshirt, with a whistle around his neck and a walkie-talkie on

    his belt. His hair is long. He is still waving his arms like a monster.

    1. Billy: Raaaa!

    2. Mario: (a) Billy, Im freakin starving. Can we go back to the

    trailers?

    (b) I got a mad-on for some of them cookies Julia from craftservices makes.

    Panel Two.

    Now theyre all out of character, and we can see that theyre tired and hot

    and cranky.

    3. Kira: Like thats all you want from Julia.

    4. Mario: Yo, Kira, if I want something from a bitch, I go get it.

    Panel Three.

    Kira gets in his face.

    5. Kira: Dont go getting all street on me, Mario. I know you

    live in, like, Malibu.

    6. Mario: Its Malibu-adjacent. And I didnt start out there, Kira. Igrew up in Echo Park. In a house with my parents,

    grandparents, three cousins and two brothers.

    Panel Four.

    On Doug, getting into the conversation.

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    7. Doug: I hope we aint gonna have the whos-poorer-than-who

    discussion again.

    Panel Five.

    Angelique joins in as they all start back over the hill, the way they came.

    8. Angelique: Why, Doug? You dont like talking about your past?

    9. Doug: No, cause Mario always wins. Hell, my folks lived

    on Beverly Drive. You hadnt gone to school in

    Switzerland, Angelique, youd have been in my class at

    Beverly Hills High.

    Panel Six.

    He waves a hand at his own physique.

    10. Doug: And you coulda had some of this for your first taste of

    man-meat.

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    PAGE FIVE

    Panel One.

    Angelique makes a disgusted face.

    1. Angelique: Ewww, Doug. Show some class!

    Panel Two.

    Mario comes to her defense.

    2. Mario: Yeah, knock that crap off, Doug! Angeliques a lady. Try

    treatin her like one.

    Panel Three.

    Kira and Troy watch the scene. Kira has an unhappy look on her face.

    3. Troy: I thought we were getting dinner, people. Some of us are

    hungry!

    Panel Four.

    They all start walking up the hill again. Mario walks close to Angelique, but

    with his hands in his pockets, oddly shy with her.

    4. Mario: You okay?

    5. Angelique: Im fine. Dougs a jerk sometimes, thats all.

    Panel Five.

    Billy has stopped at the top of the hill, and hes holding the walkie-talkiewith a puzzled look on his face.

    6. Billy: Thats strange. Im trying to call in to tell em were on

    our way back, but nobodys answering.

    Panel Six.

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    Troy and Kira reach him at the top of the hill.

    7. Troy: (a) Lets just go on down. I dont see why we had to do this

    rehearsal out here anyway. Were just faking the

    blockingcamera will either keep up with us tomorrow

    or it wont, and if it cant then well have some of that

    cool Blair Witch shaky-cam action going.

    (b) How come Prestons not with us for this? Hes the

    director, right? Got you doing the hard work.

    8. Billy: Prestons getting a massage.

    9. Kira: Thats one word for it.

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    PAGE SIX

    Panel One.

    A long shot looking down toward a circle of trailers. These are the trailers

    belonging to the film crew, and theyre pretty luxurious. A few of them

    have STAR WHEELS painted on them in huge letters. Some have tables set

    out in front---this is where lunch was served.

    What we cant see from here, yet, is that everyone in the film crew has been

    viciously murdered. We shouldnt see anyone at all. In the foreground,

    heading downhill toward the trailers, we can see our heroes.

    1. Doug: Man, I could eat a horse. I hope they got those little

    quiches again.

    2. Kira: You crack me up, Doug. Youre all, like, macho dude,

    but you want mini quiches for dinner.

    Panel Two.

    A different angle on them as they get closer to the trailers.

    3. Doug: Im a man of many parts, Kira.

    4. Kira: Yeah, but you only think with two of them--your

    stomach and your--

    Panel Three.

    Angelique interrupts them.

    5. Angelique: Please, I dont want to lose my appetite so close to

    dinnertime!

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    PAGE SEVEN

    Panel One.

    Billy has reached the trailers ahead of the others, and he stops in his tracks at

    what he can see (that we still cant see). The useless walkie-talkie is falling

    from his hand.

    No dialogue.

    Panel Two.

    He drops to his knees, vomiting into the dirt (lets see this from behindI

    dont think anybody wants to see the actual vomit).

    1. Billy: Hurrachhh!

    Panel Three.

    The others stand back away from him. Troys cigarette is gone now.

    2. Troy: What the hell? You okay, man?

    3. Angelique: So much for my appetite.

    Panel Four.

    Mario points toward the trailers.

    4. Mario: Dude, if youre sick, you oughta get to the medic.

    Panel Five.

    Troy stops dead just about where Billy did, and sees what made Billy sick.On the ground theres part of a facejut the flesh, eyeholes and a nose and

    part of the mouth and maybe some cheek with whiskers on it. Blood on and

    around it, of course.

    5. Troy: Oh, Christ! Hes not sick

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    PAGES EIGHT AND NINE

    Double-page spread.

    And now we finally see inside the circle of trailers. Everyone who stayed

    behind is dead. Its a horrific scene. Bodies are everywhereripped open,

    cut up, blood pooling beneath them, flies buzzing all over the place. Some

    have intestines pulled out of them. Some, if you look close enough, have

    been partially eaten.

    Show this from across the way from our heroes, so we can see them in the

    background, looking at it with various expressions of horror and dismay.

    Billy is wiping his face with the back of his hand. Whenever we see him

    over the next few pages, he looks kind of shell-shocked.

    You might also want to intersperse some close-up inserts around, so you can

    be wide enough to show the whole scene but then move in here and there on

    the gory parts.

    1. Troy: but this is.

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    PAGE TEN

    Panel One.

    Move in closer to our heroes again. Kira borders on panic, tears spilling

    down her face.

    1. Kira: (a) Whatwho would do this? Where are all theI dont

    see anyone.

    (b) Hello! Whos here?

    Panel Two.

    Troy grabs her shoulders, trying to settle her down before she loses itcompletely.

    2. Troy: Kira, I dont think anyones here. I mean, alive. Look

    around--this looks like pretty much the whole crew to

    me.

    3. Kira: But..but

    Panel Three.

    Mario pushes past them, walking with grim purpose.

    4. Mario: I think hes right, Kira.

    Panel Four.

    Mario pulls open the door to one of the STAR WHEELS trailers, which is

    also one of the trailers with a lunch table in front of it. Hes sticking his

    head inside.

    5. Mario: (a) Julia!

    (b) Anyone?

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    PAGE ELEVEN

    Panel One.

    Then he finds Julia, lying under the lunch table just outside the door, with

    big strips of her face chewed off.

    1. Mario: Oh, Dios mioJulia!

    Panel Two.

    He drops to his knees, kneeling by her.

    2. Mario: Nooo!

    Panel Three.

    Wider shot, still on Mario, kneeling beside the partially eaten Julia. Show

    Troy looking on.

    13. Mario: It looks likeit looks like someone was eating her!

    4. Troy: My agent is so fired.

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    PAGE TWELVE

    Panel One.

    Doug slugs Troys shoulder.

    1. Doug: Screw that! We gotta do something!

    2. Troy: Got any ideas?

    Panel Two.

    Doug holds up a cell phone.

    3. Doug: We should call the cops. 911. Somebody!

    4. Troy: If you have cell service here, you have a better phone

    than me

    Panel Three.

    Troy turns away from Doug, speaks to himself. Mario, still kneeling by

    Julia, looks up at them.

    5. Troy: and thats highly unlikely.

    Panel Four.

    On Angelique, whos had an idea.

    6. Angelique: Doesnt Preston have a satellite phone?

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    PAGE THIRTEEN

    Panel One.

    Kira responds.

    1. Kira: Youre right! He keeps it in his trailer!

    Panel Two.

    They all rush into a trailer that has a sign hanging on the door saying

    DIRECTOR.

    No dialogue.

    Panel Three.

    Inside, we find Preston, the movies director (maybe he looks a little like

    Steven Spielberg, bearded & scruffy). His head is standing upright on a

    table, but his body is sprawled on the floor, legs sticking out from under a

    bed so we cant see anything above mid-torso. Theres also a dead

    masseuse, or hooker, on the bed. Blood everywhere.

    2. Kira: Aggh! Preston!

    3. Troy: (a) This is just like that C.S.I. I did last season.

    (b) Only it smells worse.

    Panel Four.

    Doug opens a closet.

    4. Doug: He keeps the sat phone in here. I used it a couple oftimes.

    Panel Five.

    On Angelique, standing in the doorway, looking out instead of in and trying

    to breathe some fresh air.

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    5. Angelique: Well, find it fast, Doug. Ive had more of this than I can

    take.

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    PAGE FOURTEEN

    Panel One.

    Mario stands close to Angelique, in the doorway. Shes still crying.

    1. Mario: (a) This is hard on everyone, Angelique.

    (b) ItsI dont even know what it is. An atrocity. We were

    only gone, what, a couple hours?

    (c) But were alive. Just keep that in mind.

    Panel Two.

    Back to Doug, at the closet, looking frantic.

    2. Doug: The phones not here! I know right where he keeps it, but

    its gone!

    Panel Three.

    On Troy, trying to take command., while shaking another cigarette from his

    pack.

    3. Troy: (a) All right, everyone! Lets get outside where we can

    breathe.

    (b) Man, I need a smoke.

    Panel Four.

    Outside the trailer, theyre gathering around Troy. Bodies and flies

    everywhere.

    4. Troy: (a) We have no phones, so well just have to go for help.

    Theres a town, like, 30 miles away, right? Well take

    one of the trucks and just drive there.

    (b) Billy, keys are in the transpo trailer, right?

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    Panel Five.

    Billy is just staring into space. Show Troy in the background, looking at

    him.

    5. Troy: Billy?

    Panel Six.

    Billy turns and looks blankly at Troy.

    6. Billy: Y-yeaht-t-transpo.

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    PAGE FIFTEEN

    Panel One.

    Mario is walking toward one of the trucks. Show him from the knees up, so

    we cant see under the truck yet.

    1. Mario: (a) Uhh, guys

    (b) I wouldnt bother looking for those keys.

    Panel Two.

    Now he bends over and shows what he means. We can see all kinds of wires

    and belts hanging out from under the trucks hood, and parts on the groundbeneath it in a pool of oil and other fluids.

    2. Mario: Somebody done a job on the trucks. Worked em over

    good.

    Panel Three.

    On Doug.

    3. Doug: All of them?

    Panel Four.

    Mario shrugs.

    4. Mario: (a) Looks like. You can check em all if you want, but since

    we dont know who did this

    (b) or how far away they are

    Panel Five.

    On Troy, still trying to look like a leader.

    5. Troy: Marios right. Weve gotta see if there are any weapons

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    around, and figure out our next move. Just standing

    here

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    PAGE SIXTEEN

    Panel One.

    A large panel. Now we cut to up on a rocky hill overlooking the trailers,

    where the Children of the Radiant Night, the cannibal cultists who killed

    everyone on the crew, are watching the young actors.

    There are 25-30 of them, led by Brother Juniper. They might look like 60s-

    style hippies or Charles Manson followers, updated a little for the 21st

    century. They were eating the crew when they heard the actors coming, so

    they still have bloody hands and faces.

    Brother Juniper has long hair and a beard, sort of Christ-like (or Manson-

    like). On a leather thong around his neck he wears a medallion with thesymbol of his cult on it: a sun with large, wavy rays emanating from it, but

    in the center and occupying most of the suns ball is a pure black spot,

    almost like an eclipse.

    One other thing to notethe Children of the Radiant Night dont like

    modern technology. They use it when they have to, but avoid it when they

    can, so try to give them simple, homemade clothing (and remember theyre

    in the desert, where its hot during the day) and no wristwatches or cell

    phones or anything like that.

    One of them, a woman named Elspeth, looks at Brother Juniper.

    1. Troy (VO): were like sitting, whatchacallit, ducks.

    2. Elspeth: (a) Im so full, Brother Juniper. I didnt realize how

    many people were in a film crew.

    (b) I dont think Im ready to eat again.

    Panel Two.

    Brother Juniper turns to her. He has that smooth charm and charisma

    common to cult leaders, and all the Children respect what he says. Elspeth

    is a little in love with him, but thats probably true of them all as well.

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    3. Juniper: (a) We dont need to eat the others, dear Elspeth. Not

    immediately. All we need is the one weve observed.

    (b) Had we known the one was away from camp we could

    have waited. But the waiting is over now.

    (c) The Radiant Night we have long awaited for is nearly

    upon us.

    Panel Three.

    She puts a hand on his knee and gives him an anxious half-smile.

    4. Elspeth: Tell me again, Brother Juniper. Make me understand.

    5. Juniper: Youll understand tonight when we attain

    our goal.

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    PAGE SEVENTEEN

    Panel One.

    A different angle on them. Shes almost pleading.

    1. Elspeth: No, brother. Why we feed. I just like hearing it from

    your lips.

    Panel Two.

    He touches his lips (still some drying blood around his mouth). Big panel,

    plenty of room for Junipers dialogue.

    2. Juniper: (a) Why we feed? Simple, my child.

    (b) The Children of the Radiant Night ingest the flesh and

    organs of others in order to gain the wisdom and

    knowledge they possess. Every bite of their nerve

    endings makes our senses sharper. Each eyeball we

    swallow shows us what it has seen. Its only through this

    process that weve come to realize our true place in the

    world, and to understand how to achieve the goal to

    which were so close.

    (c) Its through our feeding that weve become spiritually

    and mentally enlightened enough to come to this place, at

    this time. We are superior beings. Were ready for the

    next step.

    Panel Three.

    He turns away from her, looking back down the hill toward the trailers.

    3. Juniper: And now, the time has come to take it.

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    PAGE EIGHTEEN

    Panel One.

    He speaks to some of the other cultists, sitting at the edge and looking down

    toward camp. Some of these carry spears or knives or bows and arrows.

    1. Juniper: Had we realized the one was away from camp when we

    struck, we would have waited and taken them all at once.

    Panel Two.

    He peers down the hillside, studying the situation.

    2. Juniper: These others will be on guard now. It wont be likeearlier when we walked into the middle of camp and took

    them by surprise.

    Panel Three.

    He looks at one of the archers, who nods in agreement.

    3. Juniper: It will be up to you, Jonas, to announce us.

    4. Jonas: An honor, Brother Juniper.

    Panel Four.

    Brother Juniper smiles.

    5. Juniper: On my signal, then.

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    PAGE NINETEEN

    Panel One.

    Back down to our heroes, at the trailers. Theyve spent the last few minutes

    gathering suppliescanteens and water bottles, mainly. They have plenty

    of equipment from the props trailerbackpacks, etc.but they dont

    necessarily know how to use it, or even what they should carry. In this

    establishing shot, Troy is ready to go and hes trying to hurry the others

    along. Billy is still kind of numb, barely functioning. Doug is on the ground

    trying to fit a camp stove into a backpack thats already crammed full of

    stuff.

    1. Troy: Cmon, Doug. What do you need with that?

    2. Doug: Its 30 miles to town, right? We cant cover that in a day.

    Well need to eat.

    Panel Two.

    Kira joins the conversation, unhappy about the 30 miles thing. Shes

    holding a backpack by its straps.

    3. Kira: (a) How long is this gonna take? Ive never walked morethan a couple miles.

    (b) Theres always been, like, a limo around, right?

    Panel Three.

    On Mario and Angelique (no longer crying), standing together, ready to

    hike. Mario has a walking stick in one hand.

    4. Mario: Not this time, Kira.

    Panel Four.

    Mario gestures over his shoulder toward the bodies.

    5. Mario: We either hike out or we stick around here with

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    whatever did this.

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    PAGE TWENTY

    Panel One.

    Kira starts to slip the backpack straps over her shoulders.

    1. Kira: Then I guess we hike.

    Panel Two.

    On Troy, being leader-guy.

    2. Troy: (a) Everybody ready to go? You have what youll need?

    (b) Did you find those topo maps, Billy?

    Panel Three.

    Billy holds out a piece of paper which has been folded many timesbut its

    completely blank.

    3. Billy: Th-this might be a problem. Theyre blank.

    Panel Four.

    Troy slaps the map out of Billys hands.

    4. Troy: (a) Damn prop crew is collectively dumber than a vat of

    spit. Didnt even spring for real maps.

    (b) Itll take longer than going cross-country, but I guess we

    can follow the road we took driving in.

    Panel Five.

    Kira makes a pained face.

    5. Kira: Longer?

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    PAGE TWENTY-ONE

    Panel One.

    And Billy makes a pained face, because suddenly an arrow has struck him

    between the shoulder blades and sticks out of his chest. It should be sticking

    out at a downward angle because it came from up on the hill.

    1. Billy: Urf!

    Panel Two.

    Billy topples forward like a tree falling. The others watch, horrified.

    2. Angelique: Billy!

    Panel Three.

    Move in on her as the tears start to flow again.

    3. Angelique: Oh my god, where did that come from?

    Panel Four.

    Mario points up the hill with his walking stick.

    3. Mario: If I had to guess

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    PAGE TWENTY-TWO

    Splash.

    Now the biggest panel on the page, as we see what they see, looking up the

    hill at the cultists charging down. A couple of them carry bows and arrows,

    others big knivesno guns, though.

    1. Mario: (VO) Id say it came from there!

    Panel Two.

    This can be a small inset into the splashits just a close shot of Troy,

    shouting.

    2. Troy: Run!

    3. Cap: To be continued...


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