FEEDBACK ON MY MAGAZINE.
I got two if my friends to give me feedback on my finished media product.Joan who is an 18 year old media student in Lewisham college and
Stephen, a 21 year old advertising and broadcasting student in university.
FINAL FRONT PAGE.
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The masthead is looks loud because of the poker dots, therefore anchors the text “aloud”.
By Stephen.
This tell you that it is a music magazine. it is near the masthead as well, so it is one of the things you
see first. By joan.
Most music and fashion magazine has the plus sign to show relation
between the cover story and sub cover story.
By Joan.
The strap line and the cheap price is catchy.
By joan.
-- everything about the front page is good. The best thing
about this page is the masthead the catchy headlines. By Joan.
--the front page is good but can improved if the picture is edited
well. By Stephen.
FINAL CONTENT PAGE.
The masthead is constantly being repeated on all
the pages. By Joan.
The Editors letter makes feel more connected to the
magazine. By Stephen
This was not relevant because it meant that I had to read
about her twice. By Stephen.
--the best thing about this page is the editors note , the credit at
the bottom and the masthead/logo. By Joan.
--the worse thing about this page is the text about the model. I think that there's not point for it. This page can be improved if the text about the model was
deleted and replaced with another picture.
By Stephen.
This was good because it
introduced me to the model before I read about her inside the
magazine.
FINAL DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD.The caption with a
speech mark is convection of most
music magazine.By Joan.
The credits makes it look like it's being done by
professional people. By Joan.
The magazine logo
(masthead)is constantly on the different
pages, it makes the pages similar.
The main picture looks professionally done and the
editing makes it look professional as well. By stephen.
most music and fashion magazine normally have a column that looks like this.
By Joan.
--the page is perfect and I can
see this work getting published. This looks a real
page in magazine. by Joan.
--this page is the best out of the
three. It looks like an actual cut out
from a magazine. I can't fault this
page. By Stephen.