December 3, 2010Kelly WesenerEdward Heard

Marianne Spring

Dr. Kelly Wesener

Include job history and broad overview of your skills.

Choose font and format that express who you are.

Be consistent – punctuation, tense, indentation, date format.

Match the length to your time in the field.

Use appropriate e-mail address and professional voicemail message.

Include location of institutions listed. Write out acronyms (e.g., bachelor of arts). No degree yet? Use anticipated date. Use present tense for current position. List only most important or relevant

information for past experience.

▶Quantify your experience.

▶Avoid abbreviations, unless it is shared language (e.g., ACPA, NASPA).

▶Be intentional about your headings.

▶Provide your role regarding conference, committee, or organizational participation. (Include dates, and list in chronological order.)

▶ Include your name and page number on each page.

▶Use resume paper – avoid dark colors.

Dr. Edward Heard

An introduction and an invitation Relies on job posting first, experience

second Conveys a sense of professional identity Sincere; believable Avoid appearance of entitlement A writing sample Edit; have reviewed by trusted source

Assistant Director First Year Experience (HigherEdJobs)

Master's degree in student development, higher education, student personnel, advising or related field is required. A minimum of two years full-time related experience on a college campus working with first/second year students is required. Excellent interpersonal and communication skills are also required as is significant knowledge about successful college engagement practices. Demonstrated strategic planning experience and the ability to interact easily with members of the University community is required.

Preferred requirements: Previous experience in residence life; a demonstrated understanding of student development; program coordination; student advising; significant organizational skills; familiarity with career and other assessment tools; desire creative use of technology as well as knowledge and understanding of student learning philosophy.

• I have worked in orientation and admissions offices for the past three years, supplemented by additional past employment in residence life and academic advising.

• In my current role at Northern Illinois University, I am responsible for coordinating programs to transition freshman into new academic expectations and university life.

• My recent experiences in researching first-year programs and student retention initiatives have contributed to the department’s strategic planning.

• I am interested in the challenge to creatively use technology to engage students and to improve assessment procedures.

Paragraph 1 - Position of interest- Name position, where you saw it- Convey energy

Paragraph 2 - Possibility of fit - Address employer’s needs; see job ad- Show you know the organization

Paragraph 3 - Preparation for position- Other qualities you bring- Show you know yourself

Paragraph 4 - Plot anticipation of meeting- Confident clarification; reaffirm interest (invitation)- Point to documents

Preparation, Stage 1 Distinguish from posting: reference list or

letters? Prepare ahead of time: identify 5 references Options: employers/supervisors, professors,

advisors, pastors, volunteer coordinators; never use family

Collect detailed/accurate contact information Networking Relationship Investors

Preparation, Stage 2 Approach your contacts as you approach

employment Preparing documents for your investors Have a sense of the person’s schedule Which reference(s) will I choose for this

application? What can/will this person say about me? (really)

Use discretion – learn from everyone/select your references

The time is here, handling business, Stage 3 Know your deadlines: you are on their time Steer the ship - a checklist; provide easy-to-read

instructions (sealed-signed/direct mailing?) Avoid information overload Provide job vacancy notice, your resume, points to

address Set appropriate deadlines for references: not too

soon; application deadlines are applicant’s responsibility

Have back-up plan if reference doesn’t commit Combine requests if possible (efficiency) Follow-up your requests; don’t be shy

Format Use same color/type of paper/font as your

resume and cover letter All should have your personal letterhead

(name and contact information)Note: Thanks Updates

Marianne Spring

Reading for ◦Content◦Clarity◦Style

Rewriting and revising

It’s a representation of you, your experience, and your professionalism.

It’s a first impression—the first contact with a potential employer.

It’s your writing sample—proof you can communicate clearly and effectively.

It’s your future.

Inside address Recipient’s address Date Formal Salutation Introduction, body, and conclusion

Read the document through without marking it.

Edit it. Reread it. Print it. Proof it.

Missing Transitions—make sure your thoughts flow logically

Choppy Sentences—can you combine sentences?

Rambling Sentences—revise long sentences if they’re confusing; use coordination and subordination

Clutter—get rid of unnecessary adjectives/adverbs and wordy phrases

Imprecision—replace general nouns with concrete, descriptive nouns

Passive Voice—use the active voice (and action verbs) whenever possible

Misused Words—use a dictionary! Repetition—use a thesaurus, but use it

cautiously (be cognizant of connotation) Confusing/Awkward Phrases—make sure

what you wrote is what you mean Errors in Usage—misplaced/dangling

modifiers, unparallel structures, run-ons Slang/Jargon/Idioms/Clichés—avoid them all!

Checking for errors in ◦ Spelling◦ Usage◦ Punctuation

Commonly Confused Words Commonly Misused Words Subject-Verb Agreement Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement (or

ambiguous/missing antecedents) Dangling/Misplaced Modifiers Non-parallel Structure Missing Commas Overused Commas Unnecessary Shifts in Verb Tense Colon Usage Misspelled Names and Places Spelling Errors

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Eye strike a key and type a word And weight four it two say Weather eye am wrong oar write It shows me strait a weigh.

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Questions for the presenters