The Great Adventures Of TwichIssue # 19/26/15

Robert MichaelRobertmichaelzubenegenubi@gmail.com

Title: “THE GAMMA VOID COLLIDER”Written By: Robert MichaelRevised 2/5/15robertmichaelzubenegenubi@gmail.com

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PANEL 1: The title, "The Gamma Void Collider" in the panel either off to the left or transparent behind Drippy. This is a long one inch panel going across the whole top of the page. Drippy the spaceship is cruising through space but no rocket is coming out the back, Drippy is more idling as opposed to flying, and a ring sound effect is coming out of the ship. It is the telecommunication device located above Twich’s head in spaceship Drippy.Caption: Somewhere in space. Sfx from Drippy the spaceship: Riiiiing.

PANEL 2: In this shot you see the control board of the ship straight on, it is lit up and lots of buttons everywhere, a black screen is above the control panels. There is a sound effect of a ringing coming from the ships control board.Sfx from Drippy's control board: Riiiiing.

PANEL 3: Very small panel shot of Twich's finger pressing the big red button to take the call.

PANEL 4: A front view as if sitting in the captain's chair. A screen is on now with an alien being on it. He looks like an octopus head like creature. You see the sound effect of snoring coming from below the screen next to where Twich is sitting, but you can't see Twich, just where he would be in front of the screen where the alien being is appearing.Sfx: ZZZZZ ZZZZZ

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PANEL 5: A bigger shot of the alien being on screen speaking now, he begins with presentation. CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: WE HAVE A JOB FOR YOU.

PANEL 6: Twich sits at the control panel. You can only see from his neck down, he is not wearing his yellow belt across his chest yet, his hand resting on the control panel with his finger above the red button. All the controls are lit up like a Christmas tree. You cannot see his head, only the dialog bubble coming from where his head is. Still you see the sound effect of snoring in the back.Sfx: ZZZZZ ZZZZZTWICH: NOPE, NOT INTERESTED.PAGE 2:

PANEL 1: A big top of the page panel of the screen, Chancellor Chromain is making a smirk like face as he addresses Twich. Then a word bubble coming from the side, Twich responds to the chancellor.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: YOU HAVEN'T EVEN HEARD WHAT IT IS.TWICH: WELL, EXCUSE ME, BUT THAT WASN'T THE WARMEST OF GREETINGS.

PANEL 2: The screen in a panel from a low corner view with the chancellor addressing Twich, you can see Twich's legs as he sits in the captain's chair of the ship. Lights are all over the control panels, lit up and glowing about. Sound of snoring still coming from out of view in the back somewhere.Sfx: ZZZZZ ZZZZZCHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: LET US NOT FORGET TWICH, THE MANY TIMES YOU HAVE VISITED OUR BEAUTIFUL GALAXY AND MANAGED TO DISOBEY NEARLY EVERY LAW WE HAVE PUT IN PLACE TO RUN A CIVIL UNION HERE IN ASKAVELLA 32 A. YOU REFUSE TO REGISTER WHEN ENTERING OUR SECTOR. YOU LAND THAT OLD TIN HEAP OF A SHIP ANYWHERE YOU DESIRE, AND YOU ACT AS IF ROYALTY WHEN INVITED IN AND WELCOMED AS AN EQUAL AMONGST THE THIRTEEN FAMILIES ON TOP OF…

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PANEL 3: A word bubble coming down from the chest of Twich, his hand raised in a stop position.TWICH: WAIT, WAIT, WAIT, SO ABOUT THAT JOB.PAGE 3:

PANEL 1: The screen again with the Chancellor, he looks angry at this point.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: YOU WILL GO TO THE XNAUS GALAXY, PORT ON WARSKIN.

PANEL 2: A shot of Twich's chest again, he leans in with enthusiasm gripping the control panel with the tips of his three fingers. The sound effect of the snoring suddenly stopping and a sound of concern is shown.TWICH: WARSKIN! NO WAY BUSTER! Sfx: ZZZZ Urp?TWICH: THAT IS ONE OF THE MOST DANGEROUS PLANETS IN THE KNOWN UNIVERSE!

PANEL 3: In this panel have Chromain on the screen, fierce at this point, demanding even.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: I WAS KIND OF ENOUGH TO PRETEND TO ASK BECAUSE I KNOW HOW BIG YOUR EGO IS, BUT THIS IS A COMMAND AND IF YOU REFUSE… WE HAVE GIVEN YOU A GREAT DEAL OF FAIR WORK, ENOUGH TO FEED YOU AND THAT FILTHY LITTLE…

PANEL 4: In this panel, Twich relaxes back into the chair now, as if the chancellor had made his point. You still cannot see his head, just the neck down. Zeno is out of sight but you see a dialog coming from the floor of Drippy. TWICH: OK, OK, NO NEED TO INSULT ZENO.ZENO: URP.

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PANEL 5: Twich leaning in on his captain's chair toward the screen with his three fingered hand to the side of his mouth, you can almost see his face now, but just the mouth, whispering to the chancellor. TWICH: (WHISPERING) HE'S SENSITIVE.

PANEL 6: The screen shot of Chancellor Chromain saying to Twich. CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: TWICH, IF YOU ACCEPT, IT PAYS THIRTY THOUSAND QUINJIS. PAGE 4:

PANEL 1: Twich full shot almost falling out of his seat yelling toward the screen in shock.TWICH: THIRTY THOUSAND! OK! WAIT, WAIT, WHO DO I HAVE TO KILL?

PANEL 2: Screen shot of the Chancellor again as the conversation continues. CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: YOU WILL BE RETRIEVING A CITIZEN OF MY HOME PLANET VESTER. SHE HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED BY OUTLAW RECRUITERS TO SLAVE IN THE RESOURCE MINES ON WARSKIN.

PANEL 3: Twich straightening up in his chair now, you can see him head to control board, he is responding.TWICH: I DON'T UNDERSTAND, WHY PAY ME SO MUCH WHEN THE UNION HAS AN ENDLESS FLEET WHICH CAN PULVERIZE THE ENTIRE PLANET OF WARSKIN IF THE COUNCIL GAVE THE ORDER?

PANEL 4: Another shot of the Chancellor responding to the question on the big screen, please leave enough room for the dialog.

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CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: THE UNION IS CLOSE TO AN AGREEMENT WITH THE THREE FATHER PLANETS IN THE GALAXY OF XNAUS. XNAUS IS SET TO BECOME THE TWENTY THIRD GALAXY IN COORDINATES WITH THE UNION. THE COUNCIL OF THIRTEEN WILL NOT BE PERSUADED TO RESCUE ONE OF OUR OWN, TOO MUCH IS AT RISK.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: HER NAME IS BRUNETTA BRONTILE, I WILL SEND YOU HER EXACT LOCATION. YOU WILL BE ABLE TO LEGALLY CHECK IN AT THE DOCKING STATION A FEW CLICKS FROM WHERE SHE IS BEING HELD, IT SHOULD NOT BE HARD TO LOCATE HER.

PANEL 5: In this panel have a corner ceiling shot from the back right of Twich sitting in his chair talking toward the screen, Zeno is hidden behind him lying on the floor behind the captain's chair, so you cannot see him, maybe just a tail. The Chancellor is in view on the screen. TWICH: WHY IS SHE SO IMPORTANT, WHY PAY SO MUCH FOR THE SAFE RETURN OF ONE CITIZEN OF VESTER? HOW CAN YOU BE SO SURE OF HER LOCATION?CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: BRUNETTA IS UNION AND A BLOOD RELATIVE OF ONE OF THE THIRTEEN WHO SIT ON THE COUNCIL. AS FOR HER EXACT LOCATION, WE TRACK CHIP ALL OUR CITIZENS, FOR INSTANCES SUCH AS THIS ONE.PAGE 5:PANEL 1: Twich is standing out of his captain's chair now looking toward the screen. It is an angle from his right, his fist slightly up and closed. You can still see the Chromain on the screen. Still only Zeno's tail is sticking out from behind the chair. TWICH: WAIT FOR MY CALL CHANCELLOR. I SHALL BRING PRINCESS BRONTILE HOME.

PANEL 2: This panel is a floor angle view looking up toward the screen with the Chancellor on it. You can see part of Twich's body, his arm reaching toward the controls on the panels below the screen. CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: NO ONE SAID SHE WAS…

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PANEL 3: Small panel overlapping panel 3, you see Twich's finger about to press a red button. There is a small word bubble coming from the screen above.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: A PRINCE….

PANEL 4: Just the screen blipping off just like and old television would when you shut it off.Sfx: BloopPAGE 6:

PANEL 1: This is a big panel, like half of the top of the page with smaller panels placed on top it and to the right leading down. But leave about an inch for one last long panel across the whole bottom of the page that will come later. Twich is standing straight up after turning the captain's chair around. You can see his whole body, belt, boots, raywave guns at his side, but no yellow belt across his chest yet. He is speaking loudly as Zeno is also in full view off to his right. Zeno is popping up his head while still lying on the floor of the ship. He is looking to see what all the excitement is about. There are amazing lights everywhere glowing different colors and the chair is behind him. The screen is above and off in the background. Twich has conviction while proclaiming. TWICH: I KNOW OF PRINCESS BRONTILE! SHE'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF ALL THE BRONTILE SISTERS. ZENO OL BOY… ZENO: URP.TWICH: WE GOT A DAMSEL IN DISTRESS AND A PAYING JOB, WHOOP D HOOP D!

PANEL 2: In this shot, have a small panel over the page in the upper right corner of the page. In this panel you just see Twich's shoulder to about a foot overhead, he is smiling and saying with his raywave aka gun or blaster toward the ceiling. TWICH: DRIPPY! TO THE, UH…

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PANEL 3: Another small panel under the other going down toward the bottom of the page. Have them in almost in a row but slightly off alignment. Twich looks confused, one big finger scratching his head as if trying to think of the name.

PANEL 4: The next small panel in the line, Twich's head again, he is yelling out the name that just came to mind.TWICH: XNAUS GALAXY! WARSKIN, HERE WE COME!

PANEL 5: Long across the bottom of the whole page, just like panel one page one, the ship is firing up now. Drippy has the stars behind him and his rockets are sending them through space. Page 7:

PANEL 1: A shot of a palace in a futuristic city from a sky view. You can see greenery everywhere around the futuristic structures but the palace is the tallest of all. There are flying ships travelling about in an orderly fashion as if invisible roads in the skies. There a three of four lanes at different heights of different types of ships here, and you can see tiny images of alien life walking about on the ground. There are many types but they all look more upper class, some royal cloaks. Caption: Vester, Askavella 32 A

PANEL 2: Chancellor Chromain walking, his cloak drags long behind him with two servants holding the back up off the floor, they almost look like futuristic maids. This shot is a ceiling shot and the ceilings are high, the three are from a back side view. The palace is shimmering, silver walls climb high with silver pillars with what look like ancient writings inscribed on them. The floor is white and silver checkers and behind the three is a long shiny silver stairway leading up on the left of the panel. There are many windows with alien shrubbery in view. Round lights line the walls about 10 feet apart two feet overhead, they are the size of a garbage can lid.

PANEL 3: Here Chancellor is entering the Council of the Thirteens chambers. The view is from the front center up high looking down.

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There is a huge round table with 13 seats and a 13 pointed star in the center with each tip facing a chair. Twelve of the 13 are sitting around having a discussion as Chromain is walking toward the table, remember one seat is empty, it is his. The empty seat is about three or four seats away from where Chancellor Brontile is seated. They are all royalty so robes of great design with lots of gold linings and such. They have lots of jewelry and some high head dress and face designs. All are different life forms, some big eyes some small. Some four arms some two. A variety of skin colors are seen. Two servants, same outfits from Chromain servants, stand at a distance behind each of the members sitting at the table.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: IF I CAN JUST SPEAK WITH THE REPRESENTATIVES OF XNAUS, I CAN CONVINCE THEM OF HER SAFE RETURN. CHANCELLOR VEIL: WE WILL NOT CHANCE LOSING XNAUS WHEN WE ARE SO CLOSE TO AGREEMENT. THEY ARE TO BECOME THE TWENTY THIRD GALAXY TO JOIN THE UNION REGARDLESS OF YOUR DAUGHTER'S ACTIONS. THAT SYSTEM HAS SO MUCH TO OFFER IN RESOURCES AND FLEET POWER. WE COULD LOSE MORE THAN WE HAVE TO GAIN IF WE INVADE THEIR AIR SPACE.

PANEL 4: In this panel, have a tight shot of Chancellor Brontile sitting in his chair. Hand up as if pleading with the council to rescue his daughter.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: SHE IS MY DAUGHTER! WHAT IF IT WAS ONE OF YOUR OWN?

PANEL 5: This shot is a view of Chancellor Chromain sitting down at his chair. It is set back a few feet from the table so you can see some of the 13 in pretty close in view. They heads are turned toward Chromain as he is in the process of sitting. It can be a front view or off to the side a little bit.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: I HAVE SECURED THE BOUNTY HUNTER. HE WILL BE ARRIVING AT THE XNAUS SYSTEM BY SUNS SLEEP.PAGE 8:

PANEL 1: A close view of two Chancellors we have not heard from yet. They are sitting next to each other one is Chancellor Goddard and Chancellor Buenna.

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CHANCELLOR GODDARD: AND THIS BOUNTY HUNTER KNOWS THERE CAN BE NOTHING OF THIS LEADING BACK TO THE UNION?CHANCELLOR BUENNA: CAN TWICH BE TRUSTED?

PANEL 2: A tight view of Chromain responding to the two Chancellors, he is sitting at his chair.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: THE FOOL KNOWS THE RULES, JUST NOT THE STAKES.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: BESIDES, I HAVE VERY LITTLE HOPE TWICH WILL BE ABLE TO SPEAK A WORD BEFORE HE IS KILLED.

PANEL 3: A thigh high to head shot of Chancellor Brontile Raised out of his seat pointing his goblin looking finger at Chancellor Chromain, he is pissed.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: YOU ASSURED ME THAT THIS BOUNTY HUNTER WOULD RETURN BRUNETTA TO ME UNSCATHED!

PANEL 4: Chancellor Chromain stands now pointing his finger back at Chancellor Brontile in anger, the other members just watch, you can see the two next to Chancellor Chromain, they look slightly jolted looking up at Chromain. These two are Chancellor Tatay and Chancellor Mogulie. Chancellor Brontile is about three or four seats over from Chromain to his right our left. CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: IT IS YOUR DAUGHTER WHO CONTINUOUSLY SPEAKS OUT AGAINST UNION POLICY! IT IS YOUR DAUGHTER WHO RAN OFF TO WARSKIN! IF SHE DIES, SHE DIES DUE TO HER OWN CHOICES! THE COUNCIL WILL NOT ANSWER YOUR PLEA CHANCELLOR BRONTILE! YOU SHOULD BE GRATEFUL TO STILL SIT AMONGST THE REST OF YOUR BROTHERS AND ENDURE THE LUXURIES OF THE COUNCIL OF THE THIRTEEN. THIS ISN'T THE FIRST TIME WE HAVE HAD TO CLEAN UP YOUR FAMILY'S MESS.PAGE 9:

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PANEL 1: Three more unseen members from a front, they are opposite side of Chromain. They are all sitting so a slightly below chest and up view. These three Chancellors are Chancellor Tatay, Mogulie and Catharian. Each Chancellor represents their dynasty's name. The three are addressing Chromain.CHANCELLOR TATAY: AND WHAT WORD HAVE WE ON CANTUNE?CHANCELLOR MOGULIE: HAS THEIR FATHER PLANET OF DREXUS AGREED TO OUR TERMS?CHANCELLOR CATHARIAN: WE HAVE MUCH TO GAIN FROM THIS SYSTEM, HAVE WE NOT?

PANEL 2: Chromain is sitting back down in his chair. You can see the shoulders, arms and partial side of the faces of the two Chancellors seated next to him.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: I FEAR BROTHERS, THE LEADERS OF DREXUS FAIL TO SEE THE BENEFITS OF OUR GREAT UNION. THEY ARE REFUSING OUR NEW AGREEMENT THE SAME AS THE LAST.PANEL 3: A chancellor not yet spoken to the left of the table, somewhere to the right of Brontile. Front shot mid body up to head sitting in his chair. This Chancellor represents the dynasty Sigturia, one of the oldest families on the council.CHANCELLOR SIGTURIA: THEY LEAVE US NO CHOICE THEN. THE OTHER PLANETS OF CANTUNE WILL FALL IN LINE ONCE DREXUS IS MADE AN EXAMPLE OF FOR THEIR DEFIANCE AGAINST THE UNION.

PANEL 4: Another front view of a new Chancellor, everyone at the table has equal say. This chancellor is Chancellor Akron. Akron is sitting one over from Sigturia. CHANCELLOR AKRON: WELL BROTHERS, LET US BRING IT TO THE TABLE. ALL IN FAVOR OF AGGRESSIVE ACTIONS AGAINST THE PLANET DREXUS HELD IN RESPONSE DUE TO ITS DISOBEDIENCE AGAINST THE UNION?

PANEL 5: Another high up ceiling view, similar to panel 3 page 7 but maybe a little bit closer. The Chancellors come to agreement by naming their dynasties.

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CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: I OF DYNASTY CHROMAIN.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: I OF DYNASTY BRONTILE.CHANCELLOR GODDARD: I OF DYNASTY GODDARD.CHANCELLOR BUENNA: I OF DYNASTY BUENNA.CHANCELLOR VEIL: I OF DYNASTY VEIL.CHANCELLOR TATAY: I OF DYNASTY TATAY.CHANCELLOR MOGULIE: I OF DYNASTY MOGULIECHANCELLOR CATHARIAN: I OF DYNASTY CATHARIAN.CHANCELLOR ZENITH: I OF DYNASTY ZENITH.CHANCELLOR SIGTURIA: I OF DYNASTY SIGTURIA.CHANCELLOR AKRON: I OF DYNASTY AKRON.CHANCELLOR PUNIS: I OF DYNASTY PUNIS.CHANCELLOR LUMAR: I OF DYNASTY LUMAR.

PANEL 6: Smaller corner panel off to the right at the end of the page with Chancellor Chromain, maybe a long thin shot with just enough room for his dialogue.CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN: THEN IT IS SETTLED! DREXUS SHALL FEEL THE POWER OF THE, GAMMA VOID COLLIDER!PAGE 10:

PANEL 1: A space view of a red and black planet, looks dark and scary, this is Warskin.Caption: Warskin, Xnaus Galaxy

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PANEL 2: A sky view, it's a daytime but cloudy no suns, looking down on black mountains with ledges lined with slaves and soldiers of the Warskin slave mines. There is a pit of lava in the center as the ledges circle the outside higher up reaching to the peaks of the mountains. There are rows of slaves wearing poncho style rags with hoods and raggedy pants. They are cuffed in their front at the wrists with no chains, rather a straight thick metal piece going to each wrist. The slaves are led up all sides of the black mountains toward the peaks. Their raggedy clothes are all different colors as if just thrown together with whatever they had. There are reptilian type soldiers with long staffs that glow bluish at their tips standing outside the slave lines only one every ten or so slaves. They have long tails and blood red skin. Helmets cover their heads and armor on their backs leading toward their tails but stopping before on their lower backside.

PANEL 3: A side shot of a line of slaves on a path walking in single file. The path is black rock and black mountains are in the distance. Princess Brontile is stepping out of the formation with her hands up and cuffed, pleading with one of the reptilian soldiers. She is facing us as the reptilian stands with his back toward us. You can see his long scaly tail and long staff off to his right. She is in rags with a hood, her identity is not known to them. PRINCESS BRONTILE: YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! I MUST SPEAK WITH YOUR LEADERS ON THE FATHER PLANET OF GALMARIA! REPTILIAN SOLDIER: BACK IN LINE!

PANEL 4: Close shot of Brontile from the waist up, she is sweating and looks stressed. PRINCESS BRONTILE: (THOUGHT BUBBLE) COME ON BRUNETTA, HAVE TO THINK OF SOMETHING.

PANEL 5: A side shot of the slaves in single file including the princess with their heads up toward the sky looking out at a noise echoing in the dark clouds. It is as if something just broke through the atmosphere of the planet. One reptile also is seen looking up in this shot, his back is toward us. There is a rocket light with a sound effect bubble in the sky in the distance. Vroom! Sfx: KA-FWOOOM(echoing the sky)

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PANEL 1: From the ground looking up Twich is seen standing right outside Drippy with Zeno at his side standing to his right sniffing the ground. It is a bit of a distance away so you can wee Drippy in the whole shot, he is smoking as if cooling down and the door with stairs is coming down to the ground, they are right outside the ship as if just walked off. There are black mountains in the distance and black under their feet. Twich has all his gear on at this point, wrist bands which do many tricks, strap across his chest full of surprises, black boots and two raywave blasters at his side secured in his holsters. He is holding his three fingered hand up to his forehead above his eye as if peering off into the distance.TWICH: WELL ZENO, THAT WAS EASY ENOUGH. NO SIGN OF TROUBLE HERE AND PRINCESS BRONTILE'S SIGNAL IS COMING FROM OVER THOSE, OH SHIT, WE GOT…

PANEL 2: A reptilian soldier flying in on a single rider, the vehicle looks like a floating futuristic jet ski. The view is the entire body flying forward and fast. The background is a blur. He has his big ass blaster under his arm aiming forward.REPTILIAN SOLDIER: DOWN NOW!

PANEL 3: A front view of Twich going down, he is on his knees with his hands up. Zeno is hiding his eyes with his paws, his butt in the air tail between his legs.TWICH: DON'T SHOOT! I'M UNARMED!ZENO: URP!PANEL 4: A soldier is standing on his rider to the left with his gun on Twich. Twich is lying on the ground now while another reptilian soldier is kneeling down next to him pulling his raywave blasters from their holster. Twich has his arms covering his head but his face is peeking out from behind his forearms. Zeno is still hiding next to him. The reptile on the rider is addressing Twich.REPTILIAN SOLDIER ON RIDER: THEN WHAT ARE THOSE?

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TWICH: I MEANT I WASN'T HOLDING THEM WITH MY ARMS.

PANEL 5: Twitch brought to his knees now while a reptile is cuffing his arms behind his back. The cuffs are a complete piece of metal, no chains just like the slaves. It is a side view from Twich's left arm, and the reptilian on the rider is facing Twich with his gun on him. REPTILIAN SOLDIER ON RIDER: WHY HAVE YOU LANDED ON THE OUTSKIRTS AND NOT THE CITY PORTS?TWICH: I WAS LOOKING TO PURCHASE SLAVES FOR EYECRONIA.PAGE 12:

PANEL 1: A chest high view now of the reptilian leaning in to look upon Twich, the reptile is still on the rider. Twich is looking back while cuffed.REPTILIAN SOLDIER: FOR PURCHASES YOU LAND AT THE PORTS. WHAT RACE ARE YOU? I HAVE NEVER SEEN YOUR KIND BEFORE.TWICH: I AM EYECRONIAN, AND I PROMISE IF YOU JUST SCAN MY SHIP YOU WILL SEE I'M ALL IN ORDER.

PANEL 2: Close up of reptilian responding.REPTILIAN SOLDIER: WE WILL SEE, BACK TO THE MINES.

PANEL 3: Bigger panel at bottom of page, a back view, the two riders off in the distance speeding away from drippy toward some tall black mountains, Twich is facing forward cuffed on the back of one of the riders. Out of the lower right corner is a close view of Zeno peaking toward the riders out from under his paws. PAGE 13:

PANEL 1: A tree high view looking down upon the two riders cruising over the rocks with Twich on the back of the trailing rider facing forward cuffed.

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PANEL 2: A tight view of Twich from the side riding on the back of rider, he is attempting a pull his yellow strap around his back with his cuffed hands and teeth so that he can retrieve something from one of his pouches.

PANEL 3: In this view a tight shot of two of Twich's fingers pulling a slick silver pen looking device from out of a pouch. He has managed to get the chest strap around to the right pouch.

PANEL 4: The slick silver pen device is switched on now with a blue beam coming out of its tip. His hand is positioning the beam as it burns through the center of the cuffs to free his hands apart from each other. Leave a little room for a word bubble leading up to Twich.TWICH: OUCH!

PANEL 5: A front view from the shoulders up of the reptilian facing forward but eyes to the side, Twich's head is peaking over his shoulder looking like oops.REPTILIAN SOLDIER: WHAT?TWICH: OH, NOTHING.PAGE 14:

PANEL 1: A tight view of him breaking apart cuffs now they have been burned down the center.SFX: KRAK

PANEL 2: A complete back view of Twich on the rider, his arms behind as his hands are pulling a device out of a pouch on the strap. It is a little silver circle with a green octagon in the center.

PANEL 3: Front view again of reptilian looking surprised because Twich is reaching around sticking the silver disk with green center to his chest.

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REPTILIAN SOLDIER: HUH?

PANEL 4: Side view of Twich's knees bent with his boots on the back of the soldier on the rider. He is about to kick off the back of the reptilian to get off the rider.TWICH: SEE YA DRAGON BREATH!

PANEL 5: Twich is kicking off now flying through the air off the back of the rider as is explodes. Reptilian body parts and rider parts are flying everywhere. Make it gory and the explosion the size of a grenade. SFX: KABOOM!PAGE 15:

PANEL 1: This panel is a tree high view of the other reptilian swinging around. There is rider pieces scattered mixed with guts and Twich is rising to one knee. Black rocks are all around and smoke is coming from the pieces of the rider.

PANEL 2: A front view of the reptile coming full speed toward Twich with his blaster rifle aimed forward.REPTILIAN SOLDIER: EYECRONIAN! YOU'RE GONNA PAY FOR THAT!

PANEL 3: Ground view looking up at Twich on one knee as he notices one of his raywave blasters mixed in the smoking rubble, he is smiling.TWICH: (THOUGHT BUBBLE) THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT.

PANEL 4: The raywave blaster is at the bottom the panel on the ground, in a distance you can see the reptile heading forward toward Twich.

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PANEL 5: A side angle view reptile to the left and Twich to the right. The reptile is firing his blaster at Twich but missing as Twich is diving through the air toward the raywave blaster lying in the debris. I want the effect of his original dive to show him tucking and rolling as he grabs the blaster from the ground. Like a blur effect with three Twichs in the motion of the action. REPTILE SOLDIER: YOU'RE DEAD ALIEN!PAGE 16: PANEL 1(SPLASH PAGE): Splash page of Twich standing now aiming forward but the panel is a little off to the side. He is closing his eye as if concentrating on aiming. Both hands are on the raywave blaster as it is firing. SFX RAYWAVE BLASTER: THWAPTWICH: SUCK ON THESE RAYWAVES, ALIEN! PAGE 17:

PANEL 1: A sky view of a beautiful palace, this is the house of Chancellor Brontile. Greenery all around with waterfalls and exotic birds, statues and a few armed guards standing about. They are all geared up so you can't see their faces, they have helmets and long blasters that they carry on their sides with black straps across their chest, these are the union soldiers called, "Shadow Arms".Caption: Vester, Askavella 32 A

PANEL 2: Chancellor Brontile is entering a room in his palace where his wife is sitting at a table. I want it silvery and futuristic with robot maids flying around cleaning. The wife is reading from a screen at eye level height that is transparent, a future computer.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: MY LOVE!

PANEL 3: A tight view of an annoyed expression upon his wife's face, she is facing away so he is entering behind her.

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CHANCELLORS WIFE: WHAT IS IT VALCRO?

PANEL 4: Chancellor Brontile has his hands on her shoulders now. You can see them both from table view up to a little above his head.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: A BOUNTY HUNTER WITH A GREAT RECORD HAS BEEN SENT TO RETRIEVE BRUNETTA AND BRING HER HOME. WE WILL BE SEEING OUR DAUGHTER SOON.CHANCELLORS WIFE: WHAT MAKES YOU THINK SHE WILL BE HAPPY TO BE HOME, OR TO SEE US?

PANEL 5: Shocked expression on the Chancellors face, tight shot but leave room for dialogue. CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: DO YOU NOT WISH FOR HER TO BE RETURNED SAFELY?PAGE 18:

PANEL 1: The Chancellor's wife stands turned now getting loud and pointing her finger as Chancellor Brontile has his hands are up and has backed up a bit. The view is from almost behind Chancellor Brontile, the wife is seen from side from her left. CHANCELLOR'S WIFE: SHE IS BUT A FOOL AND SO ARE YOU IF YOU THINK THAT AFTER TWENTY FIVE CYCLES OF BRUNETTA'S OUTRIGHT DISRESPECT TOWARD US THAT ANYTHING WILL EVER CHANGE!

PANEL 2: Chancellor Brontile tight again.CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: IF THAT IS TRULY HOW YOU FEEL MY LOVE, THE TRUTH IS, SHE MAY NOT BE COMING BACK HOME.

PANEL 3: Chancellor Brontile tight again, but sad face.

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CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: CHANCELLOR CHROMAIN FEARS THE BOUNTY HUNTER STANDS NO CHANCE ON WARSKIN.

PANEL 4: The waist up, the two are hugging now as if they just fell into each other's arms. The wife is facing us so you can see the tears streaming down her face. CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: CHROMAIN SAYS HE IS…PAGE 19:

PANEL 1: An angled view from slightly above of Twich kneeling next to the rider that still floats, the pieces of the destroyed rider are scattered and the reptilian he shot lies dead with his head blown clear off. Twich is looking through the rubble.CAPTION CHANCELLOR BRONTILE: …A FOOL.TWICH: COME ON, COME ON.

PANEL 2: Ground view looking up at Twich, his arm is reaching down out of the shot to the rocky ground.TWICH: YES!

PANEL 3: Have a close up view of his hand removing one of his raywave blasters from under some rubble from the wreckage.

PANEL 4: Ground up view Twich standing and holstering his one raywave blaster, the other one was already on his other side. He is smiling and looking to his right. To his right still floats the rider. A black mountain sits in the background. TWICH: BACK IN THE GAME AND READY TO RESCUE THE PRINCESS AND COLLECT MY THIRTY THOUSAND QUINJIS.

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PANEL 5: Twich leaning in to the controls on the rider, a tight shot of this, he is pressing a button and about to speak. Angle it so we can see the action.PAGE 20:

PANEL 1: A group of reptilian soldiers are standing around while the slaves are walking in single file. There are four or five and they are all receiving a telecommunication message through devices around their wrist.MESSAGE ON TELECOMMUNICATIONS: WE ARE UNDER ATTACK, LOTS AND LOTS OF ATTACKERS, SEND EVERYONE! RIGHT OF THE VALLEY!

PANEL 2: Twich sitting on the rider hunched over eye closed tight coughing.TWICH: HARRUMPH! (KOFF KOFF)

PANEL 3: A view looking up a hill of black stone, a crowd of reptilian soldiers are racing down in full speed on foot. One side of the path is a drop off the other a mountain wall. There is glowing as if lava is below the drop off side, half of their bodies are glowing the other half darker. They are in a hurry and they wear the expression of panic.

PANEL 4: A shot of Twich flying off from the damage around a black mountain left of the valley. He is taking the long way to the slave mines. TWICH: IF MY CALCULATIONS ARE CORRECT.

PANEL 5: A sky view shot from way up high, a big black mountain in the middle going horizontal, a group of like fifty reptilian soldiers are flying on riders full speed on the bottom half, and Twich is going in the opposite direction on his rider on the upper half of the shot. The mountain is separating the two, Twich flies toward the mines while the reptiles are answering his call.PAGE 21:

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PANEL 1: Have a back view of Twich going up the hill the reptiles just ran down, he is on the rider.TWICH: WAHOOOOOOO!

PANEL 2: A front view, Twich is flying into a cave firing forward taking out two reptilian soldiers. One soldier is going down already, one is being blasted on.BLASTER SFX: THWAP THWAP TWICH: OUT OF THE WAY!

PANEL 3: Twich is flying on the rider through the cave. He is looking down at a device he is holding, it is tracking the location of the Princess, beeping. Sfx: Bleep Bleep.TWICH: JUST UP AHEAD.

PANEL 4: A lower ground side and from behind view, Twich taking a corner on the rider blasting another reptilian who is talking into his wrist communicator. REPTILIAN SOLDIER: WE HAVE AN INTRUDER! BACK AT THE AGHHH!Blaster Sfx: THWAPTWICH: WATCH OUT! COMING THROUGH!

PANEL 5: Twich reaching his arm out toward the line of slaves as he is full speed on the rider. TWICH: THERE YOU ARE.PAGE 22:

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PANEL 1: A back view of Twich swinging Brunetta Brontile onto the back of the rider from the line as he is cruising by, he does not stop. Her feet are in midair about to land on the rider.PRINCESS BRONTILE: WHOA!

PANEL 2: A front view of the two speeding out from a cave now, full speed ahead down a hill but different than the first hill he went up. She can barely stay on the rider, he is having a blast.TWICH: I'M TWICH! I'M HERE TO RESCUE YOU.

PANEL 3: A sky view just like before of the horizontal mountain, see page 20 panel 5, except Twich and the reptilian soldiers are flying on the opposite sides of the mountain than before. They are heading in opposite directions, Twich and Brontile toward Drippy now and the soldiers back to the mines.

PANEL 4: Twich and Brunetta from the front lower left of the panel riding full speed toward Drippy. Twich is waving his hand forward.TWICH: ZENO! START THE ENGINES!

PANEL 5: Zeno is lying down in the ship with the door open just like before. It is an outside the ship view where you see Zeno putting his head up looking out toward them approaching.ZENO: URP?PAGE 23:

PANEL 1: Twich and Brunetta flying forward off the rider because they just stopped short right in front of the ship. They are heading toward the door of Drippy.TWICH: AGHHH!BRONTILE: AGHHH!

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PANEL 2: A view from inside the ship looking toward the door as Zeno moves out of the way of Twich and Brunetta as they fall hard into the ship right off the rider.TWICH: UGH! MY ARM!BRONTILE: UGH! OW!

PANEL 3: An angled view of Twich lying on the floor of the ship, he is on his stomach leaning up pointing and yelling.TWICH: DRIPPY! TAKE OFF!

PANEL 4: A sky view of Drippy rising as the door is shutting. Drippy has little rockets that fire out from the bottom to get him off the ground. A slew of reptilians on riders are showing up surrounding the rising ship. They are firing up at Drippy as he rises into the sky. SFX FROM REPTILE BLASTERS: ZAP ZAP ZAP

PANEL 5: Twich and Brunetta are rising from the floor now as Zeno just looks at them.TWICH: WHAT A RIDE! PRINCESS BRONTILE: YOU'RE HERE TO TAKE ME HOME?TWICH: SURE AM BEAUTIFUL. LET US GET THOSE HANDS FREE. DRIPPY, SET COORDINATES FOR ASKAVELLA 32A.

PANEL 6: Small panel at the end of page, Twich's hands from his view using the laser tool again to free her second wrist from restraint. Her first hand is already free. PAGE 24:

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PANEL 1: Princess Brontile throwing herself around Twich, a great big hug. Waist up from the side should work for this. She is on the right of us. The cuffs that were around her wrists are in Twich's hands now. PRINCESS BRONTILE: OH THANK YOU!

PANEL 2: A close up view of Twich's face smiling, his cheeks red. His head on her shoulder while she is hugging him.TWICH: WELL, YOU KNOW…

PANEL 3: A side view of Brontile kneeing Twich while grabbing both of his raywave blasters from their holsters. You can see her other two arms coming out from the ragged poncho now, she has four arms total. TWICH: OOOOFSFX KNEE HIT: WHACK

PANEL 4: Twich on the ground now looking up at her, he is in pain holding his stomach. Zeno can be seen scared in the background. TWICH: OUCH! THAT HURT! WHY WOULD YOU, KOFF KOFF, DO THAT?! I JUST SAVED YOU FROM THOSE SNAKES AND I'M BRINGING YOU BACK HOME! WHOA.

PANEL 5: A shot as if looking up at Brunetta Brontile, she is aiming down at you. You can see she has four arms now coming out of the raggedy poncho. Her hood is down and you can see her whole head now.PRINCESS BRONTILE: I'M NOT GOING HOME!

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The Great Adventures Of Twich, issue 1