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Effective scientific paper
Dr.-Ing Doty D. Risanti
Pelatihan Penulisan Artikel Jurnal Internasional
Bidang Sains dan Teknik
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Ruang Sidang$ Jurusan Teknik %isika %TI ITS
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Why writing apaper
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The purpose...
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How does it work?
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The Design
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Identify your readers
Construct the
master-plan
Construct the first
draft
Clarity, readability,
style
The visual presentation
The well-written papers
are read,
remembered, cited.
Poorly written papersare not.
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The market: Who are your readers?
)our arket is your readers. Put your sel* intheir shoes+ ,hat i* you ,ere they$ ,ould you
,ish to *ind
A aer is read !y one or ore skilled re*erees$
and i* a//eted$ !y a s/ienti*i/ally-in*ored
audien/e.
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Concept: Making a conceptsheet
1hen you /an2t,rite$ it is
!e/ause you
don2t kno, ,hat
you ,ant to say.
The *irst o! is to
stru/ture your
thinking.
1hat should !e
in the aer1hat else ight
!e relevant
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Embodiment: The first draft
No, the hard ,ork. Break the o! do,n into stages. The usual
stages in ,iriting a aer are set out in the !o5es !elo,.
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Tips
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It is easier to assemble all the data BEF!E
writin" the paper, than durin" the process.
#ssemble draft FI$%!E&and lay them out in order
on a table or des'.
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Tips
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De/ide ,hat are the key /on/lusions o* the aer- the
iortant essage that you ,ant to ut a/ross. Do you
have all the data AND the *igures to rove your oint
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!anning a draftpaper
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Tips
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In "eneral it is easiest to start writin"!E&%(T&and
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them to your collea"ues. (ay out "eneral ar"uments
and then "o into details so that you prepare the
readers for what follows and the lo"ic you are "oin"
to use.
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Detai! ": thegrammar
7raar tells the reader the *un/tion o* ,ords
and their relationshi. 8ess u the graar and
you /on*use the reader.
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Detai! "": #pe!!ing$ unctuation and#ty!e
A good style li*ts ,riting *ro that ,hi/h is dulland ordinary to that ,hi/h is distinguished$
eora!le$ individual.
There is no *orula *or instant style 9 it is artly
a ersonal thing.
Style is aroa/hed through alinness$
sili/ity$ good stru/ture and desire to /onvey
in*oration to the reader in the ost a//essi!le,ay.
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Detai! "": #ty!e
Be /lear+ the essen/e o* te/hni/al ,riting is/ouni/ation. The *irst :uality$ ,ith
re/eden/e over all others$ is /larity.
1rite *ro an aroriate design; oor ,riting
la/ks order.
De*ine everything+ de*ine all sy!ols and
a!!reviations
Avoid ety ,ords+ /li/h
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Detai! "": #ty!e
Do not overstate$ over ehasise or aologise Avoid !eing atronising$ /ondes/ending or
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Detai! "": #ty!e
=se aroriate language+ iniise the use o*a/ronys and a!!reviations
7ood oening >*irst senten/e?
Seek hel*ul e5ales and analogies @inking senten/es+ ea/h senten/e in a
aragrah should lead logi/ally to the ne5t.
!serve good ,riting+ ,hen you read a good
oening$ an at analogy$ an illuinating
e5ale$ or an idea ,ell e5ressed$ re-read it.
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%eference
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aper submission're(iew'acceptance history
Su!it+ you /an do it online and ay attention,hat do/uents you ay need$ e.g. over
letter$ rie novelty stateent$ grahi/al
a!stra/t$ resear/h highlights.
Revie,+ the revie,ers give /oents$ you haveto ans,er the.
Send !a/k the revised version along ,ith the
resonse to the revie,er2s /oents Cditor de/ides
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E&!e response to there(iewer)s comments
1e thank the revie,ers *or their /are*ul read and thought*ul /oents on the anus/rit. 1e have /are*ully
taken their /oents into /onsideration in rearing our revision$ ,hi/h has resulted in a aer that is /learer.
The *ollo,ing suaries ho, ,e resonded to revie,er /oents.
Revie,er #
The #st aragrah in the introdu/tion is ket as suggested !y the editor.
The ,ay to avoid /ross-/ontaination o* the o,der has !een added in the te5t. The hu on the *igure ,as
an arte*a/t during easureent; there*ore$ ,e /hanged the se/tra *ro other se/ien >%ig."?.
The investigated alloy nu!ers have !een given in the /ation. ne /an *ind the /oositions o* the
investigated alloy in Ta!le ".
1e ket the *igures 4/ and d as it is$ as suggested !y the editor.
The i/rostru/ture analysis used in this resear/h ,as SC8$ ho,ever$ *or the sae alloy /oosition and the
sae heat treatent$ the TC8 ,orks have !een er*ored. This ,ork has !een u!lished searately in+ P.Hanus, E. Bartsch, M. Palm, R. Krein, K. Bauer-Partenheimer, P. Janschek, Mechanical properties of a forged
Fe-!"l-#a steam tur$in $lade, %ntermetallics &' ()&)* &+-'.The ,ork o* Eanus et al ,as a/tually !ased
on this ,ork.
Tyo has !een /orre/ted. 1e have added the e5lanation in se/tions C5eriental and Results and Dis/ussion >ree?.
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1e have added the sales ,hi/h ,ere not attaining e:uili!riu in Ta!le #$ and !een given arks >G?. The solu!ility variation ,ith teerature has !een /lari*ied in the te5t >Results and Dis/ussions?.
The aearan/e o* the lo,-/ontrast re/iitates ,as une5e/ted. %ro the shae and the /ontrast o* the hase$ this hase is not @aves hase. The shae o*
@aves hase is ostly irregular and it has a high /ontrast >due to high Ta /ontents H"-H3& at.?. The shae o* this lo,-/ontrast hase is soe,hat round
and it should /ontain less Ta /oared ,ith @aves hase. 1e have also /he/ked that these re/iitates ,ere not re/iitates due to /ontaination. Based on
the hase e:uili!ria at 400 $ it ,as only @aves hase aears as the e:uili!riu hase. Although the resen/e o* the unsta!le @"#hase o* %e-Al-N! ,as
kno,n$ !ut the resen/e o* su/h hase in %e-Al-Ta is not kno,n. There*ore$ ,e use the ter KsurrisingL.
The ,ord KeltingL has !een added a*ter levitation. %or detailed o* the ro/ess o* levitation elting one should re*er to the re*eren/e nu!er #'.
%or solu!ility deterination at 400 and #000 $ the as-/ast se/iens ,ere heated at the arti/ular teeratures and then :uen/hed in ,ater. 1hile *or
solu!ility at ##'0 $ the as-/ast se/iens ,ere heated at that teerature and then :uen/hed in i/e !rined. There*ore the solu!ility at one teerature is
deterined *or the se/iens ,hi/h have !een heat treated at that arti/ular teerature. The ter Kslo, /oolingL *or e/hani/al test sales has !een /lari*ied as slo, *urna/e /ooling. The sales ,ere le*t in the turned o** *urna/e.
The di**eren/e !et,een the se/iens *or solu!ility deterination and *or e/hani/al testing lays on the ,ay the se/iens ,ere /ut and /ooled. %or
solu!ility deterination the sale diension ,as a /ylindri/al !utton o* ' height. The sales ,ere heated and /ooled *ast !y :uen/hing in ,aterMi/e-
!rined. 1hile *or e/hani/al testing$ the se/iens ,ere heated *or teerature and tie as *or solu!ility deterination >#000 M"00h?$ !ut they ,ere /ooled
in *urna/e >slo, /ooling? to avoid theral stresses.
The ter o* Kinute solu!ilityL in P3 line '0 has !een rehrased.
The @aves hase ,as !adly /ra/ked due to the /ree tests at ('0 $ *or this$ the e5lanation has !een given in the te5t. Re*eren/e ,as ade to %ig. 'd$ as
,ell as the e5lanation. The e/hani/al testing o* the se/iens o* %ig. (/-d ,as given in %ig. 6/.
Tyo has !een /hanged.
The 7eran la!elling has !een /hanged.
Se/tion 3.3./ has !een /hanged as se/tion 3.3.!
The selling o* re*eren/es has !een /orre/ted.
The senten/e in P6 line ## has !een rehrased in the te5t.
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pub!ished in a +ourna!
It is ossi!le to u!lish a single aer instead inPro/eeding !ut also in a Journal >se/ial Issue?
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Seinar Nasional Besi dan Baa II$ "0-"# kto!er "0##$ Bandung$ Indonesia.
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8enggunakan #hermoelectric Po0erL Seinar 8aterial 8etalurgi$ 3 Nove!er "0##$ Pusat Penelitian 8etalurgi @IPI$
Serong$ Tangerang$ Indonesia.
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3Al-Ta-r Alloys ontaining @aves
Phase K$ Pro/eedings o* 3rdAPTCS International Seinar n Alied Te/hnology$ S/ien/e$ And Art De/e!er (th$ "0##$
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