Strengths from my audience feedback.

This is an example of the comedyscenes that my audience feedback

said they liked in my trailer.

Audience feedback suggestedthat they liked the introduction

of the characters.

Here are examples of the storyline which the audience feedback said were conventional and good

Weaknesses from our audience feedback

From my audience feedback

they said my opening scene

was too long and theysaid I needed to shorten

itdown.

My audience feedback suggestedthat the relationship between

Eddy and Chloe should be shownbefore this scene, to give a contrast

between the party and therelationship before.