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Communication As Translation: Analogies in the Basic Course by Lee M. Pierce, PhD University of Georgia Author Note: An audio version of this material is available at: Per the Fair Use Clause of the U.S. Copyright Office this material is available for reproduction in specific circumstances noted below. However, the author would appreciate the following accreditation upon distribution: Materials reproduced and/or adapted from Lee M. Pierce, “Communication as Translation: Analogies in the Basic Course,” Department of Communication Studies, University of Georgia, 2015, (insert document retrieval URL and date of retrieval). 107: Limitations on exclusive rights: Fair Use Notwithstanding the provisions of section 106, the fair use of a copyrighted work, including such use by reproduction in copies or phone records or by any other means specified by that section, for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching (including multiple copies for classroom use), scholarship, or research, is not an infringement of copyright. In determining whether the use made of a work in any particular case is a fair use, the factors to be considered shall include: 1.The purpose and character of the use, including whether such use is of a commercial nature or is for nonprofit educational purposes; 2.the nature of the copyrighted work; 3.the amount and substantiality of the portion used in relation to the copyrighted work as a whole; and 4.the effect of the use upon the potential market for or value of the copyrighted work. (added pub. l 94-553, Title I, 101, Oct 19, 1976, 90 Stat 2546)
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Communication As Translation: Analogies in the Basic Course

by

Lee M. Pierce, PhD

University of Georgia

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Table of Contents  

Part  I:  Preparatory  Materials  ............................................................................................................  1  

Introduction:  Perspectives  not  Information  ..........................................................................................  2  

S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  &  Evidence  ...........................................................................................................................  3  

S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  Quick  Reference  Table  ....................................................................................................  8  

Preparatory  Exercises  ...................................................................................................................................  9  

Part  II:  Classroom  Activities  ...........................................................................................................  11  

Part  III:  Student  Sample  Material  .................................................................................................  15  

 

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Part I: Preparatory Materials

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Introduction: Perspectives not Information Before  you  start  reading,  grab  a  pen  and  at  the  bottom  of  this  page  write  down  the  first  5  words  you  think  of  when  you  hear  the  word  “communication.”  Got  it?  Okay.  Where  does  your  list  fall  in  between  the  two  columns  below?  Does  your  cluster  generally  fall  in  with  Column  A  or  Column  B?  Maybe  a  little  bit  of  both?    

Column  A     Column  B  Objective  Expert      Facts      Useful  Instruction  

Boring  Research    Data  How-­‐To  Evidence  

  Insight  Stories  Perspective  Identification  Understanding  

Analogies  Translation  Enjoyment  Interpretation  

 

 

Hopefully  your  list  has  a  little  bit  of  Column  A  and  a  little  of  Column  B  but  if  you’re  mostly  hanging  out  in  Column  A,  no  worries.  That  impulse  is  understandable—it’s  an  effect  of  how  we  are  conditioned  in  early  education.  When  we  are  little  kids  we  run  around  asking  questions,  shouting  opinions,  and  acting  on  pure  impulse.  Schools  work  hard  to  help  discipline  our  decision  making,  encouraging  us  to  research  and  support  our  opinions  with  something  we  can  measure.  We  generally  call  this  the  “scientific  method.”  Often,  however,  this  correction  becomes  an  over-­‐correction.  Soon,  we  are  obsessed  with  objectivity.  “Opinion”  turns  into  a  dirty  word  and  our  essays  are  filled  with  number  after  number  and  quote  after  quote  from  people  with  PhDs.         What  gets  lost  in  this  way  of  thinking  is  this:  all  information  is  perspective.  Put  differently,  objectivity  is  just  a  kind  of  subjectivity  or  there  are  only  subjectivities.  At  least,  if  you  want  to  say  anything  worth  hearing,  there  are  only  subjectivities.  If  we  are  standing  in  a  room  with  a  red  wall  and  you  say,  “that  wall  is  red”  I’m  not  going  to  argue  with  you.  But  still,  it’s  not  a  factual  statement,  it’s  an  accurate  descriptive  statement  and  descriptions  are  subjective,  though  some  are  further  from  being  empirically  verifiable  (observable)  than  others.  I  could  push  you  on  the  word  “red.”  Maybe  the  wall  is  actually  berry,  crimson,  or  persimmon?  But  in  the  end  it  wouldn’t  much  make  a  difference  to  most  of  us?  If  the  wall  is  red,  if  the  wall  is  crimson…it  doesn’t  matter.  It’s  the  same  thing  with  information,  if  you  are  being  objective,  then  rest  assured,  no  one  cares  about  what  you  are  saying.  What  do  people  care  about?  Perspectives.     Perspectives  are  informed,  researched,  supported,  developed,  experted,  data-­‐filled  claims  that  are  useful,  interesting,  enjoyable,  storied,  analogied,  understandable  translations  about  things  (I  use  that  term  loosely)  in  our  symbolic  reality.  Notice  I  am  not  limiting  us  to  Column  B.  You  need  both  to  produce  a  good  perspective.  Perspectives  aren’t  just  randomly  formed  opinions,  shouted  from  nowhere  with  no  support.  They  are  claims  supported  by  different  subjectivities,  from  scientific  to  emotional,  from  PhD  to  your  next-­‐  door  neighbor.  Therein  lies  the  informative  rub:  offer  only  Column  B,  everyone  wants  to  hear  your  speech  but  no  one  believes  you.  Offer  only  Column  A,  however,  and  everyone  believes  you  but  no  one  cares.  Hence  the  title  of  this  unit  is  not  “Informative  Speaking  with  Cold  Hard  Facts”  or  “You  Don’t  Need  Research.”  It’s,  “Perspectives  not  Information.”  How  are  we  going  to  achieve  this  mythical,  elusive,  well-­‐balanced  mélange  of  Column  A  and  Column  B?  First,  we  will  assess  our  informative  rhetorical  situation  and  think  of  every  speech  or  text  as  the  “working  through  of  a  problem.”  Two,  we  will  stop  pretending  that  language  just  transmits  stuff  like  a  truck  and  start  thinking  about  the  truck,  both  on  a  small  scale  as  style  and  on  a  larger  scale  as  disposition  or  arrangement.  Three,  we  will  treat  experts  and  statistics  like  salt,  needed  in  small  quantities,  and  start  using  our  other  rhetorical  “spices”:  our  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  

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S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S. & Evidence1 If  style,  the  second  canon  of  disposition,  illustrates  or  reinforces  a  speech’s  main  perspective,  central  idea,  or  thesis  statement  through  the  artful  deviation  of  words  (tropes)  and  arrangement  (schemes)  at  the  sentence-­‐level,  then  evidence  does  the  same  at  the  mid-­‐level  of  the  speech  and  far  more  explicitly.  You  might  also  think  of  it  this  way:  stylistic  devices  are  the  building  block  of  evidence  are  the  building  block  of  main  claims  are  the  building  block  of  a  central  idea.  Often  used  synonymously  with  research,  data,  experts,  or  statistics,  evidence  does  and  should  include  those  things  but  is  not  reducible  to  them.  On  the  contrary,  the  key  to  evidence  is  variety,  assembling  different  types  of  evidence  in  order  to  produce  a  synergistic  effect  by  compensating  for  weaknesses  with  strengths.  This  is  an  extremely  difficult  task,  perhaps  even  more  difficult  than  composing  stylistically  effective  sentences  because  of  evidence’s  visibility.  Whereas  an  audience  usually  can’t  identify  the  stylistic  mis-­‐steps  in  a  speech  they  don’t  like  (though  one  of  the  reasons  they  don’t  like  it  is  because  the  style  was  ineffective),  they  can  probably  point  out  weaknesses  in  the  evidence.  Stylistic  maneuvers,  though  powerful,  often  go  unnoticed  and  are  comprised  of  just  a  few  words.  Evidence,  however,  is  usually  the  most  scrutinized  aspect  of  a  speech  and  usually  exists  in  big  chunks,  sometimes  taking  minutes  to  complete.  In  other  words,  evidence  has  middle  child  syndrome:  the  youngest  (style)  gets  away  with  everything  and  the  oldest  (main  claims)  gets  to  call  the  shots  while  the  middle  child  usually  gets  most  of  the  blame  but  none  of  the  perks.  If  the  situation  isn’t  mitigated  by  a  particular  parenting  style  or  attention  in  school,  middle  children  can  become  indecisive,  disinterested,  and  apathetic.  Don't  let  that  happen  to  your  evidence!  Do  what  most  well  adjusted  middle  children  do:  enjoy  the  flexibility  your  position  allows  and  play  around  with  different  personalities,  behavioral  styles,  and  roles.  That  is  to  say,  variety  is  the  key  to  effectively  leveraging  your  evidence  so  it  is  both  effective  and  affective.  They  say,  “Variety  is  the  spice  of  life,”  so  it  makes  sense  that  variety  is  also  the  spice  of  evidence.  A  speech,  like  any  good  culinary  creation,  needs  a  good  recipe  with  plenty  of  room  for  a  pinch  of  this  and  a  dash  of  this.  Our  evidence  recipe  for  a  great  speech  is  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S:  Stories,  Universals,  Parallels,  Proofs,  Occurrences,  Rebuttals,  Testimony,  and  Statistics.  Independently,  these  aren’t  hard  concepts  to  understand;  the  tricky  part  is  varying  them  strategically  to  produce  a  synergistic  outcome.  For  that,  I  will  provide  a  reference  chart  with  some  general  guidelines  for  use.        

Stories  (narratives).  Stories  can  be  “real”  (actually  happened),  “hypothetical,”  (could  happen),  or  “allegorical”  (a  resolution  from  one  situation  used  to  illustrate  a  resolution  in  another  situation).  Stories  are  narratives  but  rather  than  taking  up  the  entire  speech,  they  are  just  a  small  part.  That  said,  stories  are  the  longest  piece  of  evidence  because  they  require  all  of  the  parts  of  the  plot  to  be  effective.  If  they  are  adequately  developed,  they  will  reap  all  the  benefits  discussed  previously.  However,  if  they  are  adequately  developed  they  will  also  take  a  lot  of  time,  so  one  story  per  speech  is  all  you  need.  Also,  one  of  the  big  benefits  of  a  story,  its  ability  to  involve  the  audience  in  a  singular  experience,  is  also  its  biggest  weakness.  Stories  are  unrepresentative.  Even  in  a  class  of  just  27  students,  the  experience  of  one  student  can  hardly  be  taken  as  the  norm.  To  avoid  this  weakness,  pair  stories  with  more  representative  options,  such  as  Universals,  or  Statistics.  Finally,  if  you  select  a  narrative  organizational  pattern  for  the  speech,  think  twice  about  (but  still  consider)  including  a  story  as  a  piece  of  evidence.    

                                                                                                               1 S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S. is adapted from the V.A.S.E.S. model presented in Susan Huxman and Karlyn Kohrs Campbell,

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Universals.  Universals  are  well  circulated,  generally  accepted  truths  (bumper  stickers,  aphorisms,  clichés,  catchphrases,  or  slogans)  without  clear  origins  or  authors.  Universals  are  a  form  of  testimony  but  their  credibility  comes  from  their  circulation  rather  than  their  expertise  or  authority.  Examples  include:  “well  behaved  women  rarely  make  history,”  “two  in  the  hand  is  worth  two  in  the  bush,”  and  the  golden  rule.  Universals  gain  quick  agreement  but  rarely  hold  up  to  scrutiny  because  they  oversimplify  and  generalize.  Use  universals  as  points  of  departure  rather  than  absolute  fact  and  pair  with  more  specific,  unrepresentative  or  empirically  verifiable  evidence  including  occurrences  and  stories.      Parallels  (analogies).  You  may  have  noticed  by  now  that  I  am  using  the  word  “translation”  quite  a  bit  in  this  section.  Central  to  this  course  is  the  perspective  that  communication,  teaching,  and  rhetoric  are  all  fundamentally  practices  of  translation.  That  idea  is  analogous  to  the  central  idea  of  the  style  reading:  all  language  is  fundamentally  metaphorical.  Words  do  not  refer  to  things;  they  refer  to  other  words,  which  refer  to  other  words.  So  if  you  want  to  communicate  effectively  and  get  something  close  to  what’s  inside  your  head  inside  your  audience’s  head  then  you  need  to  be  translating,  all  the  time.  One  way  you  translate  is  by  choosing  effective  words,  stylistic  devices,  and  metaphors.  Another  way  you  translate  is  through  analogies,  or  parallels.  Parallels  are  extended  metaphors  that  illustrate  an  unknown  thing/idea  by  transferring  a  tenor  from  a  known  thing/idea.  Metaphors  and  parallels  work  the  same  way,  transferring  tenors,  but  metaphors  do  so  more  quickly  because  they  are  used  often  and  so  the  tenor  is  kind  of  automatic.  For  instance,  if  I  say,  “my  roommate  (unknown  vehicle)  is  a  pig  (known  vehicle)”  you  instantly  know  the  tenor  I  mean:  messy,  sloppy,  etc.  You  know  this  because  that  phrase  is  used  so  often  that  the  transfer  is  nearly  automatic.  Suppose,  however,  that  I  said,  “My  roommate  (unknown  vehicle)  is  so  Real  Housewives  (known  vehicle).”  Now,  the  right  audience  would  instantly  get  the  tenor:  extra,  entitled,  bratty,  diva.  Another  audience  might  get  it  a  little  bit,  but  a  good  portion  of  the  population  wouldn’t  know  what  that  meant.  If  the  tenor  isn’t  clear  almost  immediately  from  the  selection  of  the  unknown  vehicle,  then  the  metaphor  won’t  work.  In  which  case,  you  have  two  options:  pick  another  vehicle  and  keep  the  metaphor,  or,  if  there’s  no  suitable  vehicle  to  produce  the  desired  tenor  (often  the  case  when  the  unknown  vehicle  is  more  complex  than  a  roommate),  develop  a  parallel.  Parallels  work  the  say  way  as  metaphors  except  a  considerable  amount  of  time  (two  sentences,  four  sentences,  a  paragraph)  are  spent  to  describe  the  known  vehicle  so  that  the  tenor  is  crystal  clear  and  the  audience  can  effectively  transfer  it  from  the  translation  to  the  original,  unknown  vehicle.  For  an  example  of  an  effective  parallel,  look  at  the  introduction  to  this  reading  where  I  try  to  describe  a  particular  perspective  on  evidence.  I  was  trying  to  illustrate  evidence’s  “middle-­‐ness.”  Partly,  I  used  personification  to  get  my  point  across  (comparing  evidence  to  a  middle  child)  but  mostly  I  used  a  parallel:  

In  other  words,  evidence  has  middle  child  syndrome:  the  youngest  (style)  gets  away  with  everything  and  the  oldest  (main  claims)  gets  to  call  the  shots  while  the  middle  child  usually  gets  most  of  the  blame  but  none  of  the  perks.  If  the  situation  isn’t  mitigated  by  a  particular  parenting  style  or  attention  in  school,  middle  children  can  become  indecisive,  disinterested,  and  apathetic.  Don't  let  that  happen  to  your  evidence!  Do  what  most  well  adjusted  middle  children  do:  enjoy  the  flexibility  your  position  allows  and  play  around  with  different  personalities,  behavioral  styles,  and  roles.  That  is  to  say,  variety  is  the  key  to  effectively  leveraging  your  evidence  so  it  is  both  effective  and  affective.  

Before  I  began  the  parallel,  I  introduced  and  tried  to  briefly  describe  the  unknown  vehicle:  evidence.  To  begin  the  analogy,  I  made  a  clear  connection  between  “evidence”  and  “middle  child”  (known  vehicle)  by  using  a  combination  of  personification  (the  verb  “has”  gives  physical  agency  to  

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an  inanimate  object)  and  a  signaling  phrase,  “in  other  words.”  Then,  having  made  the  connection,  I  spent  several  sentences  carefully  describing  only  middle  children,  selecting  details  that  directly  supported  my  tenor,  using  synonyms  to  make  my  tenor  clear,  and  pushing  the  details  further  to  make  the  parallel  more  vivid  and  therefore  clearer.  I  kept  the  parallel  alive  by  mentioning  evidence  quickly  (Don’t  let  that  happen  to  your  evidence!)  but  I  stayed  focus  on  developing  the  known  vehicle  so  the  audience  could  really  get  involved  in  the  description.  Then,  after  I  was  satisfied  the  tenor  was  clear,  I  anchored  the  tenor  back  in  the  unknown  vehicle,  evidence,  with  the  last  sentence.  If  done  well,  parallels  are  amazingly  effective,  entertaining,  persuasive,  engaging,  fun  for  the  audience,  and  fun  to  deliver.  However,  because  they  are  intricate,  creative  writing  exercises  they  take  a  lot  of  time  to  develop  and  deliver,  so  treat  them  as  you  word  narratives:  use  sparingly,  develop  thoroughly,  and  pair  with  less  creative  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  such  as  statistics,  occurrences,  testimony  or  rebuttals.  Parallels  are  without  a  doubt  my  favorite  of  all  the  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  (and  often  the  least  utilized  in  speeches)  and  that  is  why  I  am  having  you  practice  them  specifically  in  the  Take  Home  Problems  for  this  reading.    Proofs.  Most  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  have  empirical  variability  –  they  have  referents  in  the  world.  Proofs  do  not.  They  draw  legitimacy  from  their  rhetorical  performance.  Proofs  rhetorically  perform  the  claim  being  made  and,  in  being  performed,  make  the  claim  viable.  Campbell  &  Huxman  explain,  “Strategies  of  proof  resemble  or  mimic  logical  arguments.  Through  the  identification  and  participation  of  the  audience,  they  invite  the  audience  to  provide  material  that  will  justify  a  claim  or  conclusion.”2  Proofs  are  part  style;  part  evidence  and  they  strengthen  the  speech  by  showcasing  a  speaker’s  rhetorical  skill,  making  language  work  in  support  of  a  claim.  Because  proofs  are  self-­‐referential  they  can  sound  preachy  or  old-­‐fashioned  (but  don’t  have  to).  Historically,  proofs  were  widely  accepted  as  evidence.  However,  our  scientific  culture  may  become  suspicious  if  the  linguistic  play  becomes  obvious.  Therefore,  keep  proofs  short  and  pair  with  more  stereotypically  credible  evidence  including  statistics,  occurrences,  and  testimony.  We  will  leave  proofs  for  now  because  they  will  be  discussed  at  length  in  Unit  III.    

Occurrences.  Also  called  “case  studies”  or  “anecdotes,”  occurrences  should  be  used  when  you  have  an  actual  event  or  example  that  supports  your  claim  but  don’t  want  to  use  a  Story.  Suppose  your  speech  claimed  that  the  founding  fathers  were  all  a  bunch  of  riff-­‐raff.    The  duel  between  Hamilton  and  Burr  would  be  a  great  piece  of  evidence.  A  few  well-­‐written  sentences  with  some  effectively  placed  details  to  communicate  the  riff-­‐raff  tenor  should  be  all  you  need.  If  possible,  it’s  best  to  incorporate  a  statistic,  parallel,  or  testimony  into  your  occurrence  to  give  it  a  little  more  meat.  Because  occurrences  tend  to  be  brief  and  kind  of  self-­‐evident  (the  Hamilton-­‐Burr  duel  is  historically  verified  and  screams  “riff-­‐raffiness”)  speakers  tend  to  use  too  many  occurrences  or  move  through  them  too  quickly,  creating  audience  overload.  So,  choose  quality  over  quantity  and  careful  pairings.  That  said,  sometimes  your  goal  is  to  overwhelm  the  audience  in  order  to  make  them  feel  the  scope  or  the  magnitude  of  an  idea,  problem,  or  issue,  sort  of  like  a  rhetorical  performance  of  a  quantity  rather  than  presenting  a  statistic.  In  that  case,  use  an  extended  occurrence.  Rather  than  rather  than  just  the  Hamilton-­‐Burr  duel,  briefly  list  several  known  instances  of  riff-­‐raffiness.  Used  in  conjunction  with  climax,  this  can  produce  a  strong  result  that  is  both  effective  and  affective.  However,  extended  occurrences  can  be  hard  to  deliver.  The  necessary  density,  description,  parallelism,  and  ordering  can  be  a  lot  for  just  a  writer,  let  alone  a  speaker.  If  the  delivery  is  of  concern  then  it’s  probably  best  to  stick  to  a  single  occurrence  and  use                                                                                                                  2  Karlyn  Kohrs  Campbell  and  Susan  Huxman,  “Resources  of  Argument.”  Your  Rhetorical  Act,  3rd  ed.  (New  York:  Simon  &  Schuster,  2003),  106.  

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enumeration  or  polysyndeton  to  achieve  the  desired  affect.  Otherwise,  use  sparingly  and  select  subject  matter  with  which  you  are  really  familiar  and  very  interested  to  make  delivery  easier.      Rebuttals.  Rebuttals  are  negative  evidence.  Rather  than  supporting  a  claim,  they  pre-­‐empt  common  objections  or  opposing  arguments  and  address  them.  Rebuttals  tend  to  work  best  when  they  are  filled  with  other  types  of  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  such  as  testimony,  proofs,  or  occurrences.    Used  well,  rebuttals  can  strengthen  a  speaker’s  position  but  can  also  threaten  to  introduce  doubts  the  audience  may  not  have  considered  or  make  the  speaker  appear  defensive  or  argumentative.      

Testimony.  Commonly  called  “experts,”  testimonies  depend  on  1)  the  insight  it  adds  to  the  speech  and  2)  credibility.  Expert  credibility  is  only  one  kind  of  credibility,  typically  associated  with  “authority”  power  or  influence  that  comes  from  a  set  of  official  credentials  such  as  a  badge,  a  PhD,  or  a  title.  Often  those  credentials  do  matter.  We  can  be  relatively  sure  that  a  PhD  in  Behavioral  Psychology  knows  a  thing  or  two  about  para-­‐social  behavior.  However,  my  gamer  brother  can  also  speak  extensively  to  that  subject  and  he  doesn’t  have  any  credentials.  He  does,  however,  online  game  about  50  hours  per  week.  He  has  “referent”  or  “peer”  credibility,  earned  by  someone  who  has  thought  deeply  about,  practiced,  experienced,  studied,  or  passionately  pursued  the  subject  at  hand.  Every  speech  should  contain  at  least  one  piece  of  each  type  of  testimony—authority/expert  or  referent/peer—but  beyond  that,  audience  analysis  should  drive  the  proportions.  Let’s  look  at  an  example:     Me:  So  I  assume  you  are  voting  for  Romney  Dad?     Dad:  Sure  am.  Romney  is  a  good  businessman,  just  what  this  country  needs.  

Me:  My  political  rhetoric  professor  Dr.  Panetta  says  that  Romney’s  ability  to  make  America  into  a  business  proposition  is  why  he  won  the  Republican  nomination.    

  Dad:  How  much  are  we  paying  some  fake  Doctor  to  tell  you  the  obvious?  I’ve  made  two  mistakes  with  my  testimony  here  (and  I’m  not  even  trying  to  make  an  argument,  I’m  just  trying  to  make  small  talk).    First,  I  used  bad  audience  analysis  because  my  dad  hates  academics  and  refuses  to  call  anyone  “Doctor”  without  an  M.D.  Rather  than  assuming  that  all  experts  are  created  equal,  I  should  have  used  a  different  expert,  like  Sean  Hannity,  or  a  referent,  like  Ted  Nugent.  If  I  had  said,  “I  heard  Ted  Nugent  say  that  Romney’s  ability  to  make  America…”  my  dad  would  have  said,  “Ted  Nugent.  Now  there’s  an  American.”  Regardless  of  the  type  of  testimony  you  use,  be  sure  that  it  has  something  interesting  to  say.  Don’t  just  cite  testimony  for  the  credibility,  make  it  do  double  duty:  credibility  and  perspective.  Testimony  walks  the  line  between  singular  and  representative,  quantitative  and  qualitative  and  can  therefore  be  paired  with  any  other  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  Testimony  often  needs  to  be  quoted  directly,  which  can  be  a  nightmare,  so  choose  only  eloquently  expressed  testimony,  keep  it  short,  paraphrase  if  necessary,  and  always  translate/interpret  what  was  said  just  as  you  would  a  statistic.    

Statistics.  Statistics  are  accents,  flourishes,  to  be  used  sparingly  and  creatively  to  show  scope  or  magnitude  and  fulfill  your  audience’s  socially  conditioned  demand  for  “hard  facts.”  I  hesitate  to  even  include  statistics  because  of  the  frequency  and  lack  of  creativity  with  which  they  are  used.  If  I  never  taught  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.,  I  bet  79%  of  the  evidence  in  the  informative  speeches  would  be  statistics,  experts,  and  a  few  short,  undeveloped  examples.  So  why  include  it?  Two  reasons:  1)  Statistics,  used  effectively,  are  a  great  way  to  show  the  scope  or  magnitude  of  a  problem.  2)  People  expect  them  so  they  need  to  be  there.  But  remember,  people  do  not  make  decisions  based  on  statistics.  Think  about  your  most  recent  romantic  interest,  not  just  date,  but  flushed-­‐cheeks-­‐sweaty-­‐palms  interest.  Did  you  pick  him  because  you  were  76%  compatible  on  Match.com?  No.  Did  you  pick  her  because  of  the  40  girls  you  saw  walk  by  you  on  campus  she  was  one  of  the  11%  

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with  a  bike  and  of  that  11%  only  one  of  two  to  wore  a  helmet?  NO.  Why?  Because  people  don’t  make  decisions  based  on  statistics.  If  a  little  kid  has  ever  walked  up  and  said,  “I  love  you  this  much”  and  held  their  arms  out  absurdly  wide  (or  in  my  case,  held  their  thumb  and  pointer  finger  absurdly  close  together),  then  you  know  the  impact  of  a  good  quantitative  measurement.  However,  suppose  you  then  posted  to  Facebook,  “my  nephew  loves  me  2  and  a  half  feet”?  It  wouldn’t  make  any  sense.  And  therein  lies  the  statistics  rub:  numbers  only  show  scope  if  they’ve  got  a  translation  to  go  with  them.  Numbers,  like  information,  mean  nothing  by  themselves.  Suppose  a  week  later  you  take  your  nephew  to  the  grocery  store  and,  when  the  clerk  lets  him  scan  his  own  candy  bar,  he  holds  his  arms  out  absurdly  wide  and  tell  the  clerk,  “I  love  you  this  much.”  You  wouldn’t  feel  as  special  because  your  translation  of  the  measurement  has  changed.  His  entire  arm-­‐span  was  significant  vis-­‐a-­‐vis  the  size  of  his  body—the  width  of  his  love  vs.  total  arm  length—but  not  vis-­‐a-­‐vis  his  general  measurement  for  love  with  total  strangers.  Let’s  look  at  a  different  example.  “Your  public  speaking  textbook  costs  $90.”  Okay,  $90.  What  does  that  mean?  Is  that  expensive?  “Your  public  speaking  textbook  has  320  pages  so  that  is  28  cents  per  page.”  Okay,  28  cents,  that’s  pretty  good,  right?  “A  Xerox  Office  supply  store  charges  20  cents  for  full  color  copy  on  glossy  paper,  similar  to  the  one  used  in  your  text.”  What?  That’s  it?  I’m  getting  ripped  off.  “The  average  biology  textbook,  with  420  pages,  costs  $280.”  What?  Seriously?  That’s  nuts.”  And  I  could  go  on  and  on,  changing  the  units  of  comparison  to  change  the  relative  significance  of  $90.  So,  more  important  than  finding  a  representative  quantity  for  your  idea  is  to  translate  that  quantity  in  a  way  that  makes  it  meaningful  for  your  audience  (effectivity)  and  offers  a  perspective  that  enhances  your  central  idea  (affectivity).  I  underlined  “and”  so  you  will  hopefully  NOT  do  what  most  people  do  what  I  say  translate  a  number:  (statistic)  “The  amount  of  rainforest  destroyed  in  Brazil  each  week  is  approximately  20  meters.  (translation)  “That’s  about  the  size  of  Sanford  Stadium.”    Is  the  number  more  familiar  to  the  audience?  Yes.  Is  it  meaningful?  No.  Is  that  a  lot  of  rainforest?  Does  it  grow  back?  How  fast?  How  many  Sanford  Stadiums  make  up  the  Brazilian  rainforest?  You  get  my  point.    

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S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S. Quick Reference Table     Description   Strengths   Weaknesses   Strategies  Stories  a.k.a.  Narratives  

Narratives  that  illustrate  a  resolution  through  plot  structure  

Audience  involvement.  Shows  rather  than  tells.  

Complicated.  Long.  Unrepresentative.  

Only  use  once.  Pair  with  shorter,  representative  evidence.  

Universals  a.k.a.  Bumper  Stickers  

Generally  held  maxims,  proverbs,  slogans,  principles  or  abstract  “truths”  usually  without  author  or  origin.    

Digestible.  Flexible.  Representative.  

Abstract.  Reductive.   Use  as  supplement.  Pair  with  unrepresentative  evidence.  

Parallels  a.k.a.  Analogies  

Makes  an  unknown  vehicle  known  by  transferring  a  specific  tenor  from  a  known  vehicle  

Translation.  Audience  involvement.  Shows  rather  than  tells.  

Reductive  (only  one  tenor).  Abstract.  Complicated.  

Use  metaphors  when  tenor  is  immediately  apparent.  Pair  with  less  complicated  evidence  

Proofs  a.k.a.  Rhetorical  Arguments  

Evidence  that  words  through  style,  performance,  and  linguistic  play  

Shows  rather  than  tells.  (Often)  short.  Stylistic.  

Lack  empirical  reference.  May  be  appear  preachy  or  old-­‐fashioned.  

Keep  short.  Don't  cluster.  Pair  with  empirically  verifiable  evidence.  

Occurrences  a.k.a.  Case  Studies  

Empirically  verifiable  examples  or  incidents  

Empirically  verifiable.  Easy  to  use  

Tell  rather  than  show.  Lack  audience  involvement.  

Cluster  for  stronger  impact  (extended  occurrences).  

Rebuttals  a.k.a.  Refutations  

Acknowledgement  of  and  response  to  competing  points  of  view  that  are  commonly  held  in  order  to  strengthen  a  position  

Enhances  credibility.  Engages  audience.  Melds  easily  with  other  evidence.  Helps  the  speaker  consider  weaknesses  of  position.  

Speaker  may  appear  defensive.  Require  careful  audience  analysis.  May  raise  doubts  that  did  not  exist.  

Only  rebut  objections  that  are  likely  held.  Do  not  rebut  for  show.  Ground  rebuttals:  use  as  form  for  testimony,  occurrences,  and  statistics.    

Testimony  a.k.a.  Experts  (2  Types:  Referent  and  Authority)  

Explanations,  claims,  or  interpretations  from  others  made  legitimate  by  credentials,  experience,  or  quality  of  insight  

Easy  to  use.  Enhance  speaker’s  credibility.  May  add  more  insight  to  the  speech’s  perspective.  Satisfy  audience  expectations  (if  not  desires).  

Complicates  delivery.  May  miss  their  mark.  Often  sacrifice  perspective  for  credentials.  May  be  unrepresentative  

Consider  referential  power  and  authority  power.  Translate.  Quote  directly  only  when  eloquently  expressed.  Look  for  perspective  not  just  credentials.  Include  credibility  statement.  

Statistics  a.k.a.  Quantifiable  Evidence  

Quantifiable  measurements  (numbers,  percentages,  study  results,  etc.)  

Easily  show  scope  or  magnitude.  Satisfy  audience  expectations  (if  not  desires).  Representative.  

  Always  translate  or  interpret.  Never  pile  up.  Incorporate  or  pair  with  stores,  occurrences,  universals  and  analogies.  

 

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Preparatory Exercises 1. Use  the  Square-­‐Triangle-­‐Circle  (STC)  model  to  reflect  on  the  lecture  material-­‐-­‐especially  

regarding  the  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.  as  evidence  and  “parallels”.      

               

           

   

         

   

2. Watch  Sandra  Oh  read  Emma  Goldman’s  speech,  “Patriotism:  A  Menace  to  Liberty”  at  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmUzd1ECLt8.  Can  you  identify  one  of  each  type  of  S.U.P.P.O.R.T.S.?  (First  see  if  you  can  recall  all  of  the  parts  of  a  plot  on  your  own…I’ve  given  you  some  help  by  providing  the  first  letter  of  each).  What  is  Goldman’s  central  idea?  How  does  her  evidence  illustrate  (or  fail  to  illustrate)  that  central  idea?  Do  you  notice  any  aporias?  Does  Goldman  treat  them  as  aporias?      

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What  “squares”  with  your  thinking?  

What’s  rolling  around?    

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3. Prepare  a  30-­‐second  parallel  (analogy)  to  share  with  the  class.  Your  parallel  may  borrow  material  or  be  your  own  composition.  It  may  re-­‐use  material  from  your  previous  assignments  or  try-­‐out  material  planned  for  future  assignments  but  may  NOT  directly  utilize  material  provided  by  the  instructor.  

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Part II: Classroom Activities

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3-Column Chart for Evaluating an Analogy

Student  Name:    Use  the  chart  below  to  map  the  “Fresh  Prince  of  Bel  Air”  analogy  shown  in  class  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqPNu5WsOEs    Step  1)  Leave  the  top  row  blank  Step  2)  As  you  watch  the  clip  list  the  attributes  of  the  “known  vehicle”  (KV)  that  Uncle  Phil  uses  in  the  left  column.  On  the  right,  list  the  correlates  for  those  attributes  in  the  “unknown  vehicle”  (UV).  (Remember  these  won’t  be  actually  spoken  in  the  analogy;  you  have  to  supply  them)  Step  3)  Brainstorm  potential  tenors  with  a  partner    Step  4)  During  class  discussion  we  will  settle  on  the  “best”  words  to  complete  the  top  row  of  the  chart      KV= Tenor= UV=

Brainstorm  potential  tenors  with  a  partner:  

       

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3-Colulumn Chart for Constructing an Analogy of Self-Introduction

Student  Name:    Construct  an  analogy  to  prepare  for  the  upcoming  speech  of  self-­‐introduction  by  completing  the  3  Column  Chart  below  using  any  object,  person,  place,  thing,  experience,  event,  etc.  as  your  KV  and  yourself  (personality,  behavior,  etc.)  as  your  UV.  Try  and  isolate  a  single  tenor  as  you  expand  upon  your  list.      KV= Tenor= UV=

       

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Speaking Outline for Constructing an Analogy of Self-Introduction

 Student  Name:    Construct  an  analogy  to  prepare  for  the  upcoming  speech  of  self-­‐introduction  using  your  primary  KV,  Tenor,  and  UV  from  your  3  Column  Chart.    

Speech Title

Introduction

I. (Warm up)

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II. (Audience Connection/Value Statement)

III. (Central Idea or Thesis)

a. (Analogy)

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IV. (Conclusion)

 

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Part III: Student Sample Material

                                     

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My Meticulous Life Student Sample

 *Excerpts  from  a  student  speech  of  self-­‐introduction  outline  prepared  from  the  “3  Column  Chart  for  Constructing  an  Analogy  of  Self-­‐Introduction”  (pp.  14  &  18  of  this  packet)                                      


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